I teared up a bit. Your lyrics are absolutely beautiful. Not 1 to 1, but very much following the spirit of the original. Kinda reminds me of Nier: Automata's Weight of the World with how the english and japanese versions contrast. I love how you render "Kanarazu~" as "Trust me I know". I was just thinking the japanese word was more emotionally impactful for just having more syllables than the "Surely" it translates into. "Trust me I know" manages the same level of energy and emotion. "I won’t forget my _karma_ haunting me forever" I also like how you managed to keep 'karma' as the focal point of the verse, just like in the japanese verse: "sorezore no KARUMA wo utsusu tame no " Also this: We’re both here and alive We’ve been through so much but we’re okay That lonely light of hope reminds us Not to be afraid This hits *hard* . Thank you!
You ruined in. You had it, but then you ruined it. This might have been an actually decent English cover attempt of Karma, an insanely difficult-to-English-cover song, except _YOU ENDED IT WITH "TONIGHT"!_ That ruined the ENTIRE thing. There wasn't even originally a lyric in the spot you put it in!
I think it was good that way because spoilers below: The lyrics for the most part are about Luke and Tear, and Luke returns on the night of his 20th birthday where he reunites with Tear
I know it’s been six years since you posted this, but I hope you still sing. This is my favorite English cover of Karma.
I teared up a bit. Your lyrics are absolutely beautiful. Not 1 to 1, but very much following the spirit of the original. Kinda reminds me of Nier: Automata's Weight of the World with how the english and japanese versions contrast.
I love how you render "Kanarazu~" as "Trust me I know". I was just thinking the japanese word was more emotionally impactful for just having more syllables than the "Surely" it translates into. "Trust me I know" manages the same level of energy and emotion.
"I won’t forget my _karma_ haunting me forever"
I also like how you managed to keep 'karma' as the focal point of the verse, just like in the japanese verse:
"sorezore no KARUMA wo utsusu tame no "
Also this:
We’re both here and alive
We’ve been through so much but we’re okay
That lonely light of hope reminds us
Not to be afraid
This hits *hard* . Thank you!
this is amazing! would i be able to use these lyrics for a cover as well?
^_^ this cover was great!
It's been a while since one of these, but I'm just happy you made something new, and it's very good too!
I LOVE U SIS!! I LOVE THIS COVER XOXO
I really like your cover! Great job!
Haven't heard that song in ages. Nice cover
This so nice good on you!
I love it
Oh, I love these lyrics. They capture the original so well. If you ever get the chance to re-record with better mixing, it’d be perfect
Nice singing voice.
YOu're audio mixing could be better, otherwise fantastic thanks for introducing me to this anime.
Fark Fice it's a game though
@@Lukimator
Technically, it's both.
This cover would be top tier if they had a better microphone. I'm excited to see more from this singer!
lol
The instruments are too loud
You ruined in. You had it, but then you ruined it. This might have been an actually decent English cover attempt of Karma, an insanely difficult-to-English-cover song, except _YOU ENDED IT WITH "TONIGHT"!_ That ruined the ENTIRE thing. There wasn't even originally a lyric in the spot you put it in!
That's pretty mean of you. Just because of one single word to say it's ruined, that's dumb😒
I think it was good that way because spoilers below:
The lyrics for the most part are about Luke and Tear, and Luke returns on the night of his 20th birthday where he reunites with Tear