Writing Dialogue: 20 Smart Tips

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  • Опубліковано 16 лис 2024

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  • @whytmangatv
    @whytmangatv  7 років тому +203

    "I am your father."

  • @whytmangatv
    @whytmangatv  7 років тому +15

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    • @nanyummyify
      @nanyummyify 7 років тому +1

      Whyt Manga Great tips man you are so skilled and i know you've worked hard to get where you are now. There's no where else to go but up. Keep going :)

  • @ChaosTool93
    @ChaosTool93 6 років тому +31

    I love movies that explain a plan exactly , but tben everything goes to shit, nothing works as indent but by chance all the steps that were planed still happen for a different reason or by accident, so at the end it leaves people wondering if the person who's plan it was, has alot of pure luck, is awesome at spontaneously adjusting the the current situation or has planned everything all along.
    Best thing is if the person telling this plan is in prison talking to a guard or surrounded by enemies, talking directly at them.
    That moment when you are told what is going to happen, and even if you do anything to stop it, you are forced to watch the plan played out as if you are just a chess figure being played without any control over to situation, is one of the most basass scenes for me to watch

    • @notcringeenough5158
      @notcringeenough5158 Рік тому

      watch reservoir dogs, if you like heist movies, this is gonna surprise you!

  • @arinamday5917
    @arinamday5917 7 років тому +7

    I could watch your inking for hours, love those clean lines god bless

  • @peco3806
    @peco3806 7 років тому +86

    Whyt you gotta watch Hunter X Hunter (2011), then watch Aleczandxr's videos analysing it. Trust me watching HxH and those videos will improve your story writing, I feel like it's a necessity for anyone trying to make a shounen battle story.

    • @MrLukabot
      @MrLukabot 7 років тому +5

      Weeb Indeed, right now, in my opinion, I find his story very boring and his characters also.

    • @peco3806
      @peco3806 7 років тому +6

      Honestly (just from the first 4 chapters since I'm poor) I agree sorta. I feel like there's just so much that can make this story *A LOT* better. From what he's said and the fact that it's been over a year I feel like volume 2 will be a lot better.

    • @peco3806
      @peco3806 7 років тому +3

      Oh yeah and read *BERSERK!*
      Or watch the 1997 anime or Golden Age movies.

    • @MrLukabot
      @MrLukabot 7 років тому

      Weeb I'm at chapter 147 already in Berserk. Love it and all. But I find the art style stiff a lot. In my opinion I prefer HxH's art style over Berserk.

    • @MrLukabot
      @MrLukabot 7 років тому +4

      Let's hope Whyt doesn't plan to create a typical shounen that doesn't change anything.

  • @sasuke09871
    @sasuke09871 7 років тому +90

    :O just realized you were at 125k subs, thats awesome!
    Ive been here since 3k.

    • @noahsd
      @noahsd 3 роки тому

      almost to 500k

  • @TheToonTwinzShow
    @TheToonTwinzShow 7 років тому +26

    We're really in awe of Saturday AM and how dedicated you all are. We're pushing hard with our animations and big goals that we have and hey who knows our creativity might cross paths in the future ✌😉😊

  • @allaccordingtoplan5560
    @allaccordingtoplan5560 7 років тому +11

    Thanks this will definitely assist me with writing the dialogue for my manga

  • @brandonjohnson9832
    @brandonjohnson9832 7 років тому +25

    with me being a writer this video is exactly what I needed. you should do more videos for writers, specifically how to overcome writers block.

    • @galacticbambi949
      @galacticbambi949 7 років тому +4

      im not a pro writer in the least but latching onto characters you develope in a story help when you can flesh them out more. Thats just me maybe. I also take experiences that i do everyday. There was one day o had writers block and while i was making tea in the morning i was thinking how cool it'd be if someone had some capability that was comparable to a kettle. Like if there blood boiled and there bones whistled, or if they had some ability to boil there blood and like have excessive scebts within it to captivate people or maybe poison people. I linda scrapped the idea, but point being Life is a great writers block block xD. Thats just me maybe

  • @cabbage790
    @cabbage790 5 років тому +15

    Bro I'm litterly write all this down. Seriously ' xd

  • @duskyer2391
    @duskyer2391 4 роки тому +4

    11:50 This can be seen as far as Scooby Doo. Whenever Fred explains the trap they make it rarely works vs when he doesn't explain the trap to the audience.

  • @knightofthewind1000
    @knightofthewind1000 7 років тому +4

    How did you know? I was just struggling over this issue when you posted this, you mad man!

  • @MicahBuzanANIMATION
    @MicahBuzanANIMATION 6 років тому +1

    Your advice is spot on. I've been itching to try comics for awhile, and these videos are super inspiring.

  • @cosmicroar1277
    @cosmicroar1277 4 роки тому +1

    Thanks for the tips, WhytManga.

  • @ignaciocardoza307
    @ignaciocardoza307 2 роки тому

    I'm sketching as a watch this. When he said Sometimes silence can be the best response... that hit hard for me lol

  • @king.2597
    @king.2597 3 роки тому +3

    I think Isayama is the master of dialogue, worldbuilding, character development, and especially foreshadowing
    The guy is 20 steps ahead of most mangakas

  • @freeyahmean
    @freeyahmean 7 років тому +4

    Nice tips .... really helpful

  • @theultimatenarutofanboy2345
    @theultimatenarutofanboy2345 7 років тому +1

    I love your work! Keep it up!

  • @harrythecat8198
    @harrythecat8198 6 років тому +1

    You have talent bro !!

  • @Jack-xf3ge
    @Jack-xf3ge 7 років тому +27

    What type of paper do you use for your comics? I'm new to this

  • @heliosrevenant6599
    @heliosrevenant6599 7 років тому +3

    Awesome vid. The Tipps are really helpfull

  • @artknight9921
    @artknight9921 7 років тому +2

    Thanks for the tips!!!

  • @spiritlesswolf2029
    @spiritlesswolf2029 7 років тому +6

    Do you have a video on planning out a script for a manga book?

  • @drawingstuff6660
    @drawingstuff6660 7 років тому +4

    I Love your channel

  • @blobmaster118
    @blobmaster118 7 років тому +24

    bruh im early as shit, also cant wait for Vol.2

  • @joshualadner6096
    @joshualadner6096 7 років тому

    The plan part about making the audience think it didn't go to plan when it did is like in Now You See Me 2 with the plane and it was all set up!

  • @curtisdrago
    @curtisdrago 7 років тому

    You have a nice voice. I'm not a mangaka, but definitely a writer. Everything you talked about got me excited to write, but sadly, it's late and I'm tired.

  • @tristanclendenen6621
    @tristanclendenen6621 2 роки тому

    Really helped me out but slow down a lil dawg lol u jus rattle off like 16 things at once but when I got use to that u really helped me out

  • @anirudhshokhanda863
    @anirudhshokhanda863 7 років тому +1

    Hi I run a manga myself and I want to thank you whyte manga as I didn't know how to do it you helped me to make the manga in which I am the typesetter and it helped me very much thank you whyte manga

    • @eri-hn2er
      @eri-hn2er 4 роки тому

      I know I'm like really late but can you tell me the name of your manga I would like to read it 😁🙃

  • @elo6126
    @elo6126 7 років тому

    here since 34k keep growing bro! make your comics to a show!

  • @laurafaes9014
    @laurafaes9014 7 років тому

    Thank you so much! you got the best manga-making tips :D

  • @joshualadner6096
    @joshualadner6096 7 років тому

    I can't wait for volume 2

  • @harshalkolase9249
    @harshalkolase9249 2 роки тому

    Dude, thanks a lot

  • @VRXconnect
    @VRXconnect 5 років тому

    Great video bro, these tips helped me make a scene waay better

  • @TheHaakii
    @TheHaakii 7 років тому

    Just ordered a copy of vol 1

  • @arc3243
    @arc3243 7 років тому

    this helped a bunch, thanks for the info

    • @arc3243
      @arc3243 7 років тому

      subscribed lol

  • @Creeperboy099
    @Creeperboy099 4 роки тому +3

    I keep feeling like my story has some holes in it

  • @shilforiakaptaper2088
    @shilforiakaptaper2088 7 років тому +8

    im crying i love your vids

  • @Unsung_Tide
    @Unsung_Tide 7 років тому

    Hey Whyt Manga can you do a tutorial on how to draw different body types?

  • @lovinalili21
    @lovinalili21 7 років тому

    When is the exact date when Vol. 2 is coming out!? T^T (Can't wait)

  • @leenewey4683
    @leenewey4683 6 років тому +4

    So the speech bubbles are drawn and the text is done on the computer ? what program is it you use ?

  • @galacticbambi949
    @galacticbambi949 7 років тому

    thanks for the tips :D

  • @phapmai7294
    @phapmai7294 7 років тому

    thank you whyt maga .I drawre you

  • @io-qg8ur
    @io-qg8ur 5 років тому

    *foreshadow with swag*

  • @randoqiqks
    @randoqiqks 7 років тому

    Noti squad💯💯

  • @something298
    @something298 7 років тому

    Thanks!

  • @KatarRawr
    @KatarRawr 3 роки тому

    Grimmjow!!

  • @tarunryadav5471
    @tarunryadav5471 6 років тому +1

    Whyt Manga akibento is not available for India and I'm from India

  • @nazgul4228
    @nazgul4228 7 років тому

    OMG my charachter is soo similar!

  • @wehateven
    @wehateven 7 років тому +1

    Hi guys

  • @jloveseveryone2253
    @jloveseveryone2253 7 років тому

    Whyt manga can do a video how to draw a manga cover plz

  • @fennecfox7172
    @fennecfox7172 7 років тому

    can you make manga hairstyles that are close to the present one?
    like 2017 hairstyles

  • @joiizzal
    @joiizzal 7 років тому

    did you suspend the drawing of original characters

  • @igrgic1
    @igrgic1 6 років тому

    do you use any specific font of some kind or do you to the writing yourself?

  • @taozuki
    @taozuki 4 роки тому

    Oh

  • @jdhdragon12
    @jdhdragon12 7 років тому +1

    can you push for a SAHD:AM app?

  • @rocketmanart7964
    @rocketmanart7964 6 років тому +4

    When I come up with characters I put myself into the character

  • @itzjdn8048
    @itzjdn8048 7 років тому

    When the hell do we get a paperback volume 2 on Apple black

  • @jloveseveryone2253
    @jloveseveryone2253 7 років тому

    Shoutout to the early squad

  • @michellenguyen7152
    @michellenguyen7152 7 років тому

    May I ask what kind of paper is best for line art?

  • @theinsanebeam2097
    @theinsanebeam2097 6 років тому

    How many pages do you prefer for a chapter

  • @wiggie666
    @wiggie666 6 років тому

    im guessing thats the interface of manga studio 5 . yes i think I got this stuff down , thx. do you go to comic con at all ?

  • @Idan_denisov
    @Idan_denisov 5 років тому

    Which kind of program do you use in this video

  • @talimediaart
    @talimediaart 7 років тому +2

    If you can make a video of why do mangaka in Japan have phrases on their covers like in Bleach volume 1 it's titled Death and the Strawberry. Is there a reason for that?

    • @alexark4893
      @alexark4893 7 років тому

      Nephtalie Albert it's the name of the volume

    • @talimediaart
      @talimediaart 7 років тому

      Crimson Creeper oh okay. Is it necessary to have it? Is what I'm asking.

    • @alexark4893
      @alexark4893 7 років тому

      Nephtalie Albert Not Really, seeing as the volume name is actually in the book, but I can guess it can be nice for decoration

  • @saisumitpatnaik7886
    @saisumitpatnaik7886 5 років тому

    Which application is that

  • @blobmaster118
    @blobmaster118 7 років тому

    i did the survey and i love the poster man! Also i hope i win a subscription, goodluck to everyone else who entered. :)

  • @PyrexNemobeats
    @PyrexNemobeats 3 місяці тому

    SPOILER ALERT
    JKK SPOILERS ALERT DONT READ THIS COMMENT IF YOU DONT WANT TO BE SPOILED
    At the 12:38 You just basically explained the sukuna gojo fight ending lol

  • @redpanda8814
    @redpanda8814 2 роки тому

    Who's deku?

  • @Kyo_Ara_0
    @Kyo_Ara_0 3 роки тому

    Rethorical questions...

  • @sticki8862
    @sticki8862 7 років тому +1

    800th Like

  • @harrythecat8198
    @harrythecat8198 6 років тому

    Its you draw this pages of manga ???

  • @BigBoyNoel01
    @BigBoyNoel01 7 років тому

    FIRST boi

  • @archangelwing
    @archangelwing 7 років тому +4

    I've been wondering how to pronouce Fattimunga's name for the longest time lol. I've been pronouncing it in my head "Fatty munga" lol i'm so sorry
    Wait, SANO'S A GIRL????

  • @alejandrazendejas5409
    @alejandrazendejas5409 7 років тому

    second

  • @brianlarosiliere1329
    @brianlarosiliere1329 7 років тому +1

    y dont u just use a screentone

  • @kydd1304
    @kydd1304 7 років тому

    Blah lala

  • @quilitybmg1398
    @quilitybmg1398 7 років тому

    wow 1 like 0 views when i opened the video fuck yea

  • @iTheNem3sis
    @iTheNem3sis 7 років тому +1

    wtf the spoiler though. You didn't give me time to stop. Disliked.

    • @ilikeburgers
      @ilikeburgers 6 років тому

      ★_Vizualize_★ gay

    • @jaywells5857
      @jaywells5857 5 років тому

      ★_Vizualize_★ he gave you plenty of time shitstick

  • @notgivingoutmyname9557
    @notgivingoutmyname9557 7 років тому

    Why does he give away so many spoilers about the future of Apple black in his vids