English Language Paper 1, GCSE 2024: Grade 9 For Question 5!
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Like if ur here the night before the exam 😂😂😂.
fr I'm sweating rn haven't revised lang for like 3 months 💀
@@sneaky8219 inni
@sneaky8219 what grade u got In last mock?
@@papapadododo i got 7
@@papapadododo looking for higher
what u get?
This guy is carrying all of our GCSE’s not going to lie 😂
this guy is not carrying my RS
who's here morning of the exam
😢😂😂😂
Yep!
Me 😂😂😂2024
meeee
I’m cooked 😂😂😂
Every GCSE student needs to see this video - this man has saved literally my gcse language exams single-handedly in under 30 minutes.
its so frightening to know how thousands of students will go into that exam without understand what the markscheme is asking for
If every GCSE student saw this video, the grade boundaries would be extortionately high.
I see you everywhere bro
bruh i swear i have been seeing u in every mreverything and salles videos
on that revision grindset, i see. respect bro respect.
@@lunalingo4461that means u are too👍
Dhar Mann doesn't change lives... he does
“dont want no cuzzies dont want no bros” LMFAO 😂
It’s not that funny
@@yukimodz9127 shut up your life is without whimsy
@@yukimodz9127 its funny when ur revising shit like english, learn perspective
@@yukimodz9127 im seeing bro on every video fam stop being negative gettin mad in chat wont help noone. Hope u do well.
@@mr0ne697 hes failing
now i see why aqa tell schools to avoid this man hes an absolute goat
who else is here the night before the exam!😭
Me I’m finished😂😂😂
🙌
Literally watching this right now I'm predicted a 5 😭
Meee
morning before LOL🤣🤣🤣
Who is watching this on the exam day?
were finished
We're not finished
Me rn 😭
@@tanwirnory1468 fr
6:37 "Thank you guys my maths is amazing"😅😅😅 it was quite funny for me😂
True
fair enough to mr everything english,went from teaching macbeth in scotland to teaching students all around the country.
Thank you Mr everything english, I came here 4 yrs ago from Italy , I really struggled with english, but with your videos i improved a lot I will be forever grateful to you .
YR 11 good luck to everyone tomorrow hopefully we all pass
babe, you atleast had 4 years, i started school here 2 months ago and he helps alot , best of luck for tom
@@malaikajawad-wn7kr you too bro
How ur exam went?
The number 1 tip from my teachers is that if you're doing story, write about the most mundane of settings - the most ordinary of occurances. A good example was that one time a student who got grade 9, top marks, simply wrote about getting milk from the fridge in the morning. Write a lot about a little
no joking?????
Good luck to you all doing your exams!
Like if ur here the morning of the exam 😂😂
Doing this story in 45 min is mad
Like if ur here in the morning before the exam 😂
Cramming with one hour till exam, im so cooked😭😭
Same
40 mins for me 😢
SAME😭
How did it go?
@@cherryslushieonly6382 eh it was alright ig, question 5 defo carried me😭😭, hby
Sir I thought you were wearing your Eid clothes or something in the thumbnail 💀
Sameee!
my ignorant ass was abt to comment
that ur stupid for saying its eid now 🤦♂
how to get humbled 101
Tip : incase you want to get through the vid quicker put it on 1.5x
That’s what I did 😂
GL for everyone tomorrow
Like if you bought to pull an all nighter💀💀💀
That will just make you sleepy
It's the morning of bro, good luck all of you😨
Edit: how'd everyone's exams go??
15:59 my dumbahh thinking about malevolent shrine in jjk
was thinking malevolent kitchen ngl
literally same i’m so cooked
I was thinking that too lol
😂fr
😭😭
"if your dog or if your pet tells you that this is a creative writing question, guys its not"bahahahha this guys such a W
Q1-4 is cooking me but Q5, I am cooking it
Thank you!
2 hours left!!
It’s tomorrow guys good luck 😢
You are awesome, sir. i hope i pass my gcse language
Inshalah we all pass 🎉🎉
@@farhanyaqoob9507Inshallah
this guy is the only reason i’m passing english because my teacher cannot teach to save her life 😭😭
I like this man, he teaches so good 🎉🎉🎉🎉
sir your the best no other words
Your videos were so helpful today. God bless you.
Morning before exam :)
Mr Everything English's mathematics is amazing ➕➕➕
Thank you
whos here at 1:45am?
Language Paper 1 was AMAZING, I had so much fun😁😁😁
BRO I SAT PAPER 1 LANG TODAY AND LITERALLY TYSM YOU SINGLE-HANDEDLY HELPED ME STRUCTURE MY POINTS AND MANAGE MY TIME CORRECTLY
THANK YOU!!
never fails to make me laugh ahahah he said "this student got a grade 9!, im joking guys they got a -5" lloooooooooooollll
Bro is saving lives differently
genuinely saved my English gcses
Thank u thank u thank u ,
We needed this!
im acc so cooked
Nah just write
thank you it's so helpful👍
GERAFF HAS ME CACKLING
Sir you are honestly the best
only useful english teacher on this app
Who’s here at 07:50 am
I’m here at 8:30
This guy is amazing
good luck hsnr
Mr everything can I use this in picture for gcse equivalency exam????????
HEY GUYS! If anyone's up for it, here's a practice Q5 I did for you guys to mark. Marking always helps you improve! :)
The rickety frames of the old house looked as though they were about to fall. There was not a single plank of wood on that unimpressive roof without some type of damage. Tapping my wet boots on the dry concrete path, I made my way towards the shed. The lacklustre appearance of the shed contrasted with the sprawling fields in every direction. The lackadaisical lump of dirt, directly next to the house, lay carelessly as the gentle wind breathed through it. The rain had stopped for the last few days allowing the sparse sunshine to illuminate the prairie. Every flower, which was once gulping for breath under the merciless onslaughts of constant rain, had now blossomed. The mountains were as colossal as ever, like snow-capped guardians watching over the peaceful prairie. Every object in view seemed at harmony - except the house.
The wooden structure, which showed signs of once being an ornate and well-decorated building, looked empty. It seemed as if the previous owners had taken away every item alongside the memories and moments shared inside it; leaving it barren. Frighteningly, the two large windows on each end coupled with the wide, steel door in the centre made the house seem like an indignant creature. A creature who had been abandoned and forgotten. The long forgotten house was covered in years and years of 'art' left by reckless teenagers but the steel door looked impeccable (as if it had just been installed). Carefully prising the door open, I stepped in.
After taking some seconds to register my surroundings, I began walking to the centre of the room like a moth to the flame. The insipid features of the empty room contrasted heavily with the masterpiece lying directly in the centre.
It was a piece of art like no other.
Its ornate framing glinted in the few rays of light which shone upon it. The vibrancy of the paint, the detail of the shapes and the flawless composition left me absolutely dumbfounded. Carefully, I used the tips of my fingers to feel the frame which was engrained with floral patterns and encrusted with what seemed to be gold. It was gold. Possibly the purest gold I had ever seen. This gold was not just on the frame but every little detail on the luscious painting was made with gold.
I took five steps backwards and stared at the painting in awe. It was an angel, bright with the light of its candour, surrounded by a blissful darkness.
It truly was a masterpiece.
i aint reading allat
@@spookah_hhhh that’s calm bro 👊
well done bro inshallah u do good tomorrow
@@user-yx7le2pm7j inshallah bro
I read it and it's fantastic!! Your style of writing is so beautiful
Like snow capped guardians!! Aaaaa what a beautiful simile I wish I could think of things like that
Also the paragraph and sentence length variation is ON POINT!! Well doneeee
I think you will be COMPPLLLLEEEEtely fine 🎉❤
Thank you mr everything l hope am gonna pass my exam
absolute legend
do i annotate the entire extract within the first 15-20 minutes?
I will use this plot
What about if your doing a description of the picture? Is it the same?
its better if you dont write about the picture because it might limit your ideas. instead use it for inspiration for the actual question as the picture is usually linked to the question anyway.
@@sketion5188imma just merge them
@@sketion5188 tbf can't you just make up random things in the picture cause that's what my teachers tell me, and focus it?
@@steppingstones3114yh you dont need to be limited by the picture you can imagine what goes around the picture
@steppingstones3114 you can. If the picture is just a forest for example, later after describing the forest all u can, you can say "bewildered, he layed eyes upon a great piece of architecture and fortitude, as the serenity of the tree house, left suspended in the air, stood proud, with immaculate stature." And then keep describing
hello sir
i just wanted to ask you if you would recommend the photocard description or the story
depends on if on the day the image is more appealing to you but generally go with the narrative/story one since it’s easier to do your own ideas and you can apply the paragraph plans to whatever question they give for the narrative one
Gl yall
sir you are so funny you make me love english
without bro idk what id be doing helped me a lot it lit
Sorry but how do u pre plan question 5? Like if it just with the plan u showed or do people have there on storys and just adjust it to what the question is asking
Second
Do you do the story in third person or first person?
east and west mr everything is the best
Don’t know how I ended up in top set but watching this to stay .😅
sir if i write a story VERY similar to the example one, is that plagiarism?
because i really want to write one about waiting for something or someone.
have you not watched the video hes repeated 10 times its not plagiarism
I planned the first story the netflix kill and what if the story is on you being in a street or in the beach you see soemthing in the water how do you link them?
For the street u could say that u go out into the street at the end of the story
And also for the beach u could say that u live near the beach at the end and u go out and there was something on the beach
Thank you sir please I have question about content is it true should we write about 700 words in content?
How are you meant to pre plan it if you have to write about certain thing in the exam. You can’t just write about anything
You can add staff like the netflix and kill pre planned story . Last yr it as encounter with an animal you could say she saw a rat making all of that noise , something supernatural could be that she heard those noise but there is no one in the house
Hope it helped
One second so the story they tell us in the exam don’t we have to write related to the picture. My whole life was a lie. Please someone clear me with this doubt please
no, only the description has to be related to the image
You can chose the picture or the description at the bottom usually they link
I have a question what’s easier to do write about or describe the image or write about a story
describe image only do story if the image is really bad and u dont know what to say for it
what about for descriptive writing
Yes sir, English Language paper1 done 🎉
what r u tapped we aint done it yet
What are you on
What was it abt
for the mocks we didn't write a story for paper 1, is it definitely going to be a story because i don't want to practice the wrong thing
??????
Is a choice between a story or a description
Aqa has a big opp
💀
Who else is leaving school tomorrow??
I’m leaving on Friday
@mlin3622 after all them years good luck mate
good luck
hoping for a grade 5 minimum to get into the english language course, wish me luck
im begging for a 5 lol, best of luck
Thank you. I also struggle coming up with an idea for a simile for some reason
Does this still count if mine is edexcel
yo i swr this is gonna come up tmrw????
Hey, i had a pre planned story of two people in a baron desert where they argue because it was one persons idea to go on an adventure there. Then the other has all their water and supplies despite agreeing to ration. They then argue and one falls unconscious, followed by the other after feeling guilt.
However, todays extract was similar in that they argued over water in a hot environment where rain was yearned for but this was the only parallel. I only saw this after i did my story first.
Will i be penalised for plagiarism and to what extent?
He talked about it at 21:53
@Abdul-oe5kc thanks, didnt see that bit, makes me feel a lot better but im still a little uncertain because plot has some parallels but almost everything else is different, should be ok
Aqa is not going to knock on your door and ask did you pre plan this, it’s fine
@IbrahimaKonate5 ik, its just that it was a lttle similar to the extract somehow
Does anybody have an idea as to how to link the Netflix story with the ‘new beginning’ theme??
7:15 is rizz
nice im witing my story about going to a toilet, thats gonna get me a 9 watch and see
good luck on that
Okay………tell me how it goes.
I'll keep my eyes peeled for your message.
it better be an explosive story
😂😂
Good luck everyone for today exam english language paper 1 🎉
Please post videos for paper 2 🙏
How to answer the question of picture ?
This is the one about photo
my exam was so good
25:25
16:50 lol
10:09 lmaooo
11:38 , 16:34 (my own timestamps)
can someone summarise what the markscheme is saying?
one hour before cmon
LETS GOO BIG BOYY
I hope I js pass this thing man………it’s pissing me