My UofT Daniels Architecture One Idea Entrance ESSAY | EXACTLY What I wrote + TIPS **ACCEPTED**

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  • @RayaKee
    @RayaKee  4 роки тому +4

    Let me know any questions you have here!

    • @MrPoopst
      @MrPoopst 4 роки тому +2

      Since option to submit a portfolio was optional for architectural studies. If i choose not to submit one, would that affect my submission?

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  4 роки тому +1

      @@MrPoopst hey there! I personally submitted a portfolio because I had a really strong body of work. But since UofT says that it's optional, if you don't think it makes your application better/you don't have good pieces to show for, then don't include them. With that said, it's ultimately up to your discretion. Hope that helped :)

    • @MrPoopst
      @MrPoopst 4 роки тому +1

      @@RayaKee ohh alright thank you!

    • @s.a.1083
      @s.a.1083 4 роки тому +1

      Hello. What type of works did you submit for your portfolio?

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  4 роки тому +2

      @@s.a.1083 hi! I actually made a video on this. Here's the link to it: ua-cam.com/video/tucwlMsBbiI/v-deo.html
      🤗

  • @thequeenofboba6583
    @thequeenofboba6583 4 роки тому +3

    Thank you sooooooo much for making these videos. It really helps!

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  4 роки тому +2

      Hehe you’re welcome!! Really glad that you found these videos helpful :)

  • @ananyamahehe9524
    @ananyamahehe9524 3 роки тому +9

    Hey!! I’m applying for the fall 2022 admission and I really liked some of the sentences you used. Do you think it would be okay to use some of them or would that be counted as plagiarism entirely?? My story is completely different but some lines just fit with my ideas as well.

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  3 роки тому +3

      Ideally don't copy word for word, but feel free to take inspiration and change up the wording.
      Hope this helps and good luck with uni apps!

  • @elisabethwong3388
    @elisabethwong3388 3 роки тому +1

    thank you so much this helped IMMENSELY

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  3 роки тому +1

      Glad it helped Elisabeth! :)

  • @mozie4320
    @mozie4320 4 роки тому +4

    Your videos are so helpful! What programs do you use to edit your videos? And is there any way you could make a short "editing for beginners" video?

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  4 роки тому +1

      Thanks Mozie! Really happy you find these videos helpful. I'm using final cut pro btw, but if you're a beginner there are a lot of great (aka. free) alternatives out there like iMovie.
      That's actually a great video idea! I'll see what I can do :)

  • @nicolediaries.
    @nicolediaries. 3 роки тому +3

    hi! i was thinking of choosing prompt 4. should i be talking about one story/experience specifically or give multiple examples of how i expressed my creative side? thanks!

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  3 роки тому +3

      Whatever you think encapsulates you best as a person and creative! Also keep in mind how many stories/examples you can go in depth with (could be 1, 2, etc.) given the word count.

  • @luxing8425
    @luxing8425 3 роки тому +3

    Hey, I'm applying for the 2022 season, and I've submitted my application to the school, however, is the one idea supplementary application, supposed to go along with my application or afterwards?

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  3 роки тому +1

      If I remember correctly, you submit the supplementary application (portfolio/essay) around end of January after you apply to the school in November/December.

  • @areeba6978
    @areeba6978 4 роки тому +3

    Hey! amazing video but the link to the essay seems to be broken, is there any other way I can view it? thanks!

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  4 роки тому +2

      Glad you like the video Areeba!
      Here's an alternate link: drive.google.com/file/d/1TFqexo-TOde1tFR4ykATxOWPlMHe8ynF/view?usp=sharing
      Lmk if you can access it :)

  • @eslanta7343
    @eslanta7343 Рік тому

    Hi Raya!
    I found your content extremely helpful (thank you!!!). I just have a question about the portfolio:
    I have a portfolio similar to the one you submitted for Ryerson (mine was accepted into Pratt Institute), and I didn't realize that you can submit images that are formatted like such. According to the requirements on the One Idea website, it says to submit single images and should not include text descriptions. I'm wondering if we had different requirements, but if not, can I really submit selected pages from my Pratt portfolio (because all the text inside are rly just a title, the size, and the medium)?
    A reply would be so helpful, thank you!

    • @Strawberti
      @Strawberti 11 місяців тому

      Well this video was 3 years ago so they changed it from that time

  • @cocochen5404
    @cocochen5404 3 роки тому +2

    Hi, Im wondering when you submit your essay and portfolio, btw love ur video!!

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  3 роки тому +2

      I submitted my uoft archi essay and portfolio around early December.
      Good luck on your applications Coco!

    • @cocochen5404
      @cocochen5404 3 роки тому +2

      @@RayaKee Thank you, Raya:)))

  • @thequeenofboba6583
    @thequeenofboba6583 4 роки тому +2

    Hey Raya, it's me again lol. I was wondering if you recommend using the word "you" in our One Idea essay? I'm thinking of just using the word once or twice. Thank you!! :)))

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  4 роки тому +3

      Using "you" and first person pronouns should be ok, bc the one idea questions are asking about YOUR experience/background/goals after all.
      Good luck on your applications Emily!

    • @thequeenofboba6583
      @thequeenofboba6583 4 роки тому +2

      @@RayaKee Thank you so much!!! ❤️❤️❤️

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  4 роки тому +2

      @@thequeenofboba6583 anytime!! 🤗🤗

  • @goodbye3468
    @goodbye3468 3 роки тому +2

    Hello, Raya, this question is not about essay but for the image do you think it is okay to convert the photo that I took on my phone to picture by using app?

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  3 роки тому +1

      Yes, that should be ok!

  • @lala-kq8gv
    @lala-kq8gv 2 роки тому +1

    Hey Raya! How did you submit your portfolio pieces for UofT? Did you submit single images of your pieces or did you include your table of contents and title page?

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  2 роки тому +2

      Hello! So for UofT I chose to upload my top 6 favourite pieces from my Ryerson architecture portfolio (that video is somewhere on my channel) and no, I didn't include the table of contents or title page.
      Hope that helps and good luck with your portfolio!

  • @charleneestabaya
    @charleneestabaya 3 роки тому +2

    I'm also considering UofT to study for my master's and it's great I came across your channel! That "pwedeng magbola" got me ! are you also a Filipino? 😊

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  3 роки тому +3

      HAHA I was waiting for someone to notice that LOL - yes, I am Filipino 🥰
      (Well, Filipino-Chinese-Canadian to be exact)

    • @charleneestabaya
      @charleneestabaya 3 роки тому +2

      @@RayaKee OMG!!! that made me just excited! finally found a Filipino who's also taking Masters of Architecture - I'd love to connect with you If you don't mind! ♥

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  3 роки тому +2

      Erm actually I'm in undergrad rn and the program I'm in is Ryerson business tech management - I got accepted to UofT archi but didn't actually go through with it hahaa

    • @charleneestabaya
      @charleneestabaya 3 роки тому +2

      @@RayaKee Ohh I see - yeah saw that video too that you discussed a different program and I was like I thought its Architecture. Anywho, still a good program and good luck to your University Journey ! :)

  • @marklening4905
    @marklening4905 2 роки тому +1

    Hiii, thanks for ur generous sharing! I really want to book an one to one appointment with u to discuss my specific questions towards my application as I'm transferring and I have my ambition towards animation industry. But the link doesn't work, is there any other ways?

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  2 роки тому +1

      Hi Markle!
      Try this link - rayakee.setmore.com/rayakee/
      Or you can DM me on Instagram - @raya.kee

  • @deema1737
    @deema1737 3 роки тому +4

    hey raya :) my average is about 86-87. I know that just hits the requirement of high 80s, do you think I still have a chance of getting accepted?

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  3 роки тому +3

      Yeah I think you do! My average was around 89 and I was accepted fairly early. But I did also submit a portfolio - so that likely influenced my acceptance as well.
      Good luck on your application!

    • @deema1737
      @deema1737 3 роки тому +1

      @@RayaKee oh okay!! thank you so much :))

  • @Rand-i9e
    @Rand-i9e Рік тому

    Hey I have a question about the application, I applied with my grade 11 report card I’m currently in grade 12 do I send them my final report card or my first term?

  • @keilyrz1838
    @keilyrz1838 4 роки тому +3

    Hello it'sme again hehe, it's true that to work as an architect in Canada it's necessary to have a master's degree in order to have an architect license?

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  4 роки тому +3

      Hehe glad to see you again :)
      Yes, to be an architect in Canada you need to have a master's degree. This is why (if you're dead set on being an architect) your undergrad will be super, super crucial to build your portfolio/skills for masters!

    • @keilyrz1838
      @keilyrz1838 4 роки тому +2

      @@RayaKee Ohh, I see.. Thank you :)

  • @yehyajama3758
    @yehyajama3758 3 роки тому +1

    Is there any specific word count to this essay or do I just write until I have delivered my points?

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  2 роки тому +1

      I think the word count should be on the website as part of the instructions - I forget what it is exactly tho

  • @alisimk
    @alisimk Рік тому +1

    Hi! I'm not sure if you are still active on this account, but I was thinking of applying to the program this year. Was wondering on how you paid the fee for the One Idea Essay?

    • @Strawberti
      @Strawberti 11 місяців тому

      On OUAC website.

  • @sheetmanholy2316
    @sheetmanholy2316 3 роки тому +2

    Hey Raya, which format should I use for the essay and the date should be the date that I completed the essay or the date I submit the essay?

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  3 роки тому +1

      Not sure what you meant for the first question., but my essay was fine, so just copy that.
      For second question, I just wrote the date I completed the essay.
      Good luck on applications!

    • @sheetmanholy2316
      @sheetmanholy2316 3 роки тому +1

      @@RayaKee Thank you so much Raya. Your videos helped me a lot

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  3 роки тому +2

      @@sheetmanholy2316 ahaha welcome! really appreciate it :)

  • @hunsonorg6059
    @hunsonorg6059 2 роки тому

    Hey Reya. I want to write about the content of me doing a specific thing in the One Idea Essay, however the specific thing is already mentioned in my application essay. Would it be a bad idea if i talk about the same content again but in One Idea essay.
    p.s. Im choosing the "express creativity" question and Im talking about designing a bulletin board with an unorthodox design

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  2 роки тому

      Hmm yes ideally pick something that's different, but as long as you write about something that's really thought provoking and "unorthodox" then you should be good.
      Hope that helps and good luck with your application!

    • @hunsonorg6059
      @hunsonorg6059 2 роки тому

      @@RayaKee thanks!

  • @_yeehaww
    @_yeehaww Рік тому

    Hey Raya! I'm currently in 9th grade and am looking to apply to this program, any tips?

  • @nhi3844
    @nhi3844 3 роки тому +2

    Hi Raya, do we need an “essay title” - like “The failure that shaped me” for example - at the beginning or we just write an essay? Btw, what a sweet and helpful video! Many thanks

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  3 роки тому

      Hmm while the prompt from UofT doesn't explicitly say that you need to write a title, I'd say to put one in anyway just because it'll give the admission officers more context and (hopefully) give them an easier time understanding the topic and purpose of your essay.
      Hope this helped and good luck with applications!

  • @keilyrz1838
    @keilyrz1838 4 роки тому +5

    You didn't have to take an exam? Btw great video! Thank you so much!

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  4 роки тому +3

      Really happy you liked the video Keily!
      No I didn't have to take an exam. I only did the optional online portfolio submissions and mandatory one idea essay.

    • @keilyrz1838
      @keilyrz1838 4 роки тому +2

      @@RayaKee Thank you! Hope to see you next year :)

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  4 роки тому +3

      @@keilyrz1838 oh I'm in Ryerson BTM hehe

  • @awstephen1977
    @awstephen1977 3 роки тому +2

    Hi Raya, when did you start writing this essay?

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  3 роки тому +2

      Not sure, but I think I started writing it over the winter break and submitted it mid January.

  • @pujathaker717
    @pujathaker717 2 роки тому

    Submitted my UofT archi portfolio and essay on Jan 3...been a month and now I'm waiting for an offer. What time of the month did you get an offer for UofT archi?

    • @naim7393
      @naim7393 2 роки тому +1

      It usually takes up to 6 weeks .still waiting for mine:)

  • @chillythesnowman2032
    @chillythesnowman2032 2 роки тому

    Does anyone know do we pay the $45 ahead of time or when we submit it asks us?

  • @evanbushell6473
    @evanbushell6473 4 роки тому +2

    Hey Raya, wondering what your grade 12 marks were like? Hope you don't mind sharing:)

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  4 роки тому +2

      Yeah no problem - the average for my top 6 courses was around 88!

  • @exploringthedepths74
    @exploringthedepths74 2 роки тому

    I worked for 4 hours straight on feb 1st. I literally submitted it at 11:37pm lmao.

  • @mariak1153
    @mariak1153 2 роки тому +1

    So I’m not sure if you will be able to answer this question, but I had to ask:
    1) what exactly are the requirements for the portfolio? I couldn’t find anything specific on the website
    2) I haven’t taken art in my A levels ( 12th grade) but I did take art in my GCSES (11th grade) where I scored a B.does that put me at a disadvantage? The British education system is quite different to Canadian/American so no worries if you can’t answer it!
    Thank you 💗

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  2 роки тому +1

      Hi Maria! So for the UofT portfolio, it's optional, so that might be why you haven't been able to find specifics on the website.
      Also, as for grades I believe UofT only looks at the average of your top 6 grade 12 marks, so as long as those top marks are good then you shouldn't need to worry about your lower grades.
      Hope that helps and good luck with uni applications :)

  • @sakshmjotsingh840
    @sakshmjotsingh840 3 роки тому +2

    Hey,
    That Was A Really Great Video.
    Im An Architecture Student (India) n want to pursue my Masters Degree From UofT, Canada.
    Can you Please Help me know about whole Admission Process At This Is My Final Semester.
    Thank You.
    Waiting For Your Reply.

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  3 роки тому +1

      Hey there! Unfortunately I’m not sure how the Masters application works, but you can try to find the email of the program on UofT’s website and ask there :)

  • @toleenmalkawi9692
    @toleenmalkawi9692 4 роки тому +2

    Did you submit 5 pieces?

    • @RayaKee
      @RayaKee  4 роки тому +2

      Yup! I took my 5 best pieces from my Ryerson portfolio. I actually made a video on that earlier. You can check that video out if you were curious on what those 5 pieces were!

    • @HannaGuerra555
      @HannaGuerra555 2 роки тому

      @@RayaKee hey Raya thank you for documenting your journey! It's helping us a lot as our daughter is in the processing of creating her arch portfolio... we could not find the video re the 5 pieces you submitted to U of T... could you advise? thank you

  • @ilonarytova9626
    @ilonarytova9626 2 роки тому

    Heeyy, i am applying to universities for fall 2022. And right now writing the One idea essay. If it is not hard for you, or someone here, to just summarize the important questions i should ask myself and add to my essay. :)
    Thanks