@@capthavic I thought the young man killed the old lady's husband and the killer was the murdered old man. And what did her deadbeat dad have to do with it..?
@@alexyoungberg5232 if you recall at the beginning it said that she really didn't like leaving her house in the night so they needed a good reason to get her to leave and that's all the father was used for was to get her out at night so that the rest of the story could proceed!
I kind of disagree, I get what you mean, but I think if the author had made the story any longer it would have dragged on. The total feeling of hopelessness and the will to survive only feeding that feeling was “executed” 😉quite well in the end I thought!
I was thinking this from ever since the gas station, honestly. She also could’ve asked one of the cars going towards where she came from for directions.
That's why women get a bad rap as drivers/navigators! You can plop me down blindfolded in the middle of BFE and I'll no which direction is which, and I'd never continue to drive blindly in the "wrong" direction. Funny thing...some people actually have an innate compass and can instinctually find NSEW. We did an experiment in grade school. Only three of us could get it right every time blindfolded. It's kind of a fun thing to try with friends!
That sounds so nightmarish. Not only are you trapped there, but you feel whatever pain it is you felt at the moment of your death, over and over. Truly terrifying. Awesome work good sir!
I heard this several years ago but could not remember the title. Over the years I had searched but could never come across the story. Today it popped up after listening to another creepypasta and I must say that I am very happy to hear it again. It still annoys me hearing that Melinda did not listen after all of the proof.
I would prefer a different ending like somehow she goes back into her room and waits till the morning. Then when she get out, the house was empty and abandoned but there are still the tea cup on the table as a sign of something that had happened last night, she's now returns to the normal world and her car is also completely fine. It's probably another overused ending but I would prefer than the actual ending that she just stupidly run out and got killed.
Heard this a long time ago and it's still one of my favourite! Although no matter how little I believed them, I would not have ran outside after seeing a knife welding maniac outside 😅
I agree w/everyone...Melinda sounded like the youngsters in horror films! You tell them to dont open the door and what do they do? Open it! You tell them dont run....and what do they do? RUN! So the restless spirits tried to save her from bcoming one of them by showing her proof and telling her the truth....but does she take them seriously? NO, which explains y she literally ran into the arms of the devil himself! Awesome story!
Would’ve been a good twist if the killers face that she saw in the end was her father all along. She did say she hasn’t seen him for a while and that’s plenty of time for extracurricular activities 😉
I'm finding the sound of your narrations and that song gently tingling away in the background very relaxing. Thanks you really help my sanity so much at time
Honestly speaking, I think I'd probably just drink myself to sleep like yeah no, y'all just wake me at dawn 🤣 the baby got me, if nothing else that would be my NOPE not going outside moment
I'm obsessed with this story. So happy to see so many new readings of it recently! I wrote a prequel to this one. I tried to expand the lore about "him" and also explain Melinda's father's call. I read it on my channel if anyone is interested! Hopefully it's okay 😅
My twin brother recommend your channel and I must say he was not exaggerating. Your narrations are phenomenal ❤️ Like Dr C, There's an apparent love for what you do and it completely shows. I can't wait to hear your other videos and since I'm on a covid 2 week isolation, I know what I'll be doing lol
Cool story but the ending was like the author had 30 seconds to finish his homework and just wrapped it up in the laziest way possible. I can't imagine why they would end it like that. Narration was great tho
Good stuff You record the BEST stories. Nothing cheese and lame like other narrators. Most of the other do middleschool level stories that have no depth. Love your work! Keep it up man!
I really appreciate that Fire! I really try to avoid those middle school type of stories (a little part of me dies inside everytime I do one lol). I've been so happy to have such a great audience for more intelligent stories. It's so fulfilling and exciting, and it lets me put my whole heart into the presentation. Not just trying to "get through it" you know. I really appreciate your comment and support! -Stephen
You are at the same level of RomNex, Dark Somnium and MrCreepyPasta for me. You make my nights somehow warmer when I listen to you either between my workshifts, or when I head off into sleep. 😊
Do people not realise a car can still drive with flat tyres? Sure it's not safe to go at speed, but if it's between that and staying around where a murderer can get you, it's not a tough decision.
She was one of those fools who are full of themselves and thinks they are in control of everything. Thinking things have to operate a certain way because they say so....welp she done learned today...
Lighthouse my name is Queen. I’m your most avid fan (Hannibal Lector voice)Lol I’m listening to your long stories playlist since last night and I’m loving the vibes. I’m a few minutes into this one and I’m grateful to you. You have no idea how much you help me deal with my anxiety and depression. These narrations make me feel happy. I thank you kindly sir ❤
I just KNEW the psycho outside was gonna be her Dad!! And she was gonna be the only one who could defeat him somehow and save herself and the others. That would have been a WAY better ending to this story!
@@abhishekbhandari8270 IKR What dedication and integrity the Master Narrator has to take Time to Read, comment, and Answer fans comment. Rare and good quality standards in this Wicked world 🌎.
The thumbnail title had me expecting something regarding the old "The House of the Dead" games. Ngl, I feel a bit catfished. Still a good story, though.
Thanks Wandering! It's always an odd balance trying to find a scary thumbnail that is also relevant to the story. It's probably the hardest part frankly of having a youtube channel (in my opinion).
I was so into this story...and then it just ...ended. I know we don't always get to know where the monsters come from but what part does her father play in this? I need answers 😞
I must have heard this one in a compilation... See, this is why I leave comments, so I know which ones I've listened to already. Anyway, fun fact, the name Melinda is Greek in origin and means 'like honey'. Melinda, Melinoia, and Melindia were epithets sometimes used to refer to Persephone, as the name Persephone was taboo to speak. By using a softer name, it was hoped they could invoke her sweeter side. All that to say... Good name choice for a gal who ends up in perpetual limbo. Reminds me a little of another Greek myth, where Thanatos gets caught in his own chains by Sisyphus, causing the halt of mortal deaths. Look, I have no idea if the author of this one put half as much thought into the premise or if I'm overanalysing, but I'm tired and will tie any and everything into mythology given the chance. I'ma go highfive Hypnos now, good night~
Spoilers Below. Don't read until after listening to the whole story. The deadbeat dad was definitely a Hitchcock red herring. Basically his only purpose was to begin the story. But was he real? Was that really him who called or was it a trick, a lure? I wish he had been more involved, perhaps staying at the roadhouse as well. Clearly the cloaked figure was Death, but why torture these people? And I would have loved for Melinda to have been clever enough to somehow trick Death in the end and escape as well as free the others.
Melinda you silly goose listen to the dead people next time... oh wait I am curious about the whole father situation though, like was the robed figure controlling all of that?
I need a sequel to thiiiiis. What does it mean when Granny said she still has a chance and that she just need to wait until morning? Is there a possibility that she could escape the hooded creature? Is the eternity magic affecting only the house? If Granny intends no harm, why did she invite her to stay the night even if she knew the fates of those who did? Granny could have just told her to drive in the direction where she came from as fast as she can and don't look back and she didn't have to encounter that creature. That house is basically hell. I just kinda wish Melinda fainted after hearing Calvin's story and everything was just a dream though, if the author would make a sequel to it.
She had already seen the thing when she was going into the house. Chances are good that she would not have been able to make it back to her car. So she was doomed from the moment she saw it and stopped. It would have been nice if she could have used the daylight to her advantage.
Normally I don't get angry at protagonists of these stories. But Melinda literally did everything she could to die and get trapped. What was her plan once she got outside anyway with no car? My gosh. Great narration though.
I wonder what will happen if a missing person report is filed and the police show up. Will they be stuck too? Will they even get in before being murdered?
I laughed at Melinda's death, but mostly out of gallows humor and sympathy. I have MS and one of my symptoms is a sharp, constant pain in my right eye. While I didn't have to wait until death for my suffering to start, in the first few years I too yearned for relief from my living misery. (Good meds and Drs got me through the darkness, but it remains in my sense of humor)
This was a good story and I feel if most of us ended up in a house like this with guests telling us stories of unable to die and showing grotesque wounds we'd probably think it was all just make up but I would of listened and really examined everything, since they all died they didn't need food but Malinda wasn't dead so if she didn't go outside would she still need food? And where did the food and tea come from? Little things my mind think's about but it is just a story and it was made to enjoy not think about the little things
As a victim of eye laceration, The last part got me. But when the eye gets punctured, it doesnt go black right away, theres a light starburst then immediately black, then the pain. Horrible fuckin pain, But the bright starburst is certainly memorable
I know im 3 years late here but the clue is in the being itself, this is either death, fey, or something ancient with a curse attached to it. Either way, there were soooo many ways to go with this story that could of led to a better outcome, possibly, for the protagonist. This is why as a writer myself, i will sit with a story for a long time working out the plot before i even begin to write. Good story and narration overall either way.
I really loved this story, despite the main character being a total dumbass. I'd love to hear more stories about these characters and the demon guy who keeps them there!
Dammit Melinda, you should have just listened
Lol that made me laugh : ) Yes... Damnit Melinda!!
ennit
ALL SHE HAD TO DO WAS STAY IN THE GODDAMN HOUSE!
S t u p i d w e n c h
I have not listened yet, but for some reason I believe this statement.
Melinda's actions at the end are sending strong vibes that the author got tired of the story and just wanted to end it.
happen in alot of stories sadly
Or they only had an idea for the setup but nowhere to go with it. Kinda like if after all the setup Neo chose the blue pill and ended the story there.
@@capthavic I thought the young man killed the old lady's husband and the killer was the murdered old man. And what did her deadbeat dad have to do with it..?
@@alexyoungberg5232 if you recall at the beginning it said that she really didn't like leaving her house in the night so they needed a good reason to get her to leave and that's all the father was used for was to get her out at night so that the rest of the story could proceed!
I kind of disagree, I get what you mean, but I think if the author had made the story any longer it would have dragged on. The total feeling of hopelessness and the will to survive only feeding that feeling was “executed” 😉quite well in the end I thought!
First prize winner - Melinda, in the "do stupid things win stupid prizes" contest. Thanks for more entertaining content.
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Level stupidity on Linda's part, she saw everything and still doubt.
She should've listened ; (
@makeanewchronoplz do it
One hunnit
Melinda is literally the definition of horror movie side character
So, Melinda took a wrong turn and just kept driving... how many hours? Instead of taking a U turn and taking the right turn? Lol
Lol good point
I was thinking this from ever since the gas station, honestly. She also could’ve asked one of the cars going towards where she came from for directions.
No wonder her dad abandoned her lol
My FIRST Thought!🤣
That's why women get a bad rap as drivers/navigators! You can plop me down blindfolded in the middle of BFE and I'll no which direction is which, and I'd never continue to drive blindly in the "wrong" direction.
Funny thing...some people actually have an innate compass and can instinctually find NSEW. We did an experiment in grade school. Only three of us could get it right every time blindfolded. It's kind of a fun thing to try with friends!
You can always tell when the protagonist is gonna die, when it's written in the third person
^ this
That sounds so nightmarish. Not only are you trapped there, but you feel whatever pain it is you felt at the moment of your death, over and over. Truly terrifying. Awesome work good sir!
Thanks my friend!
It's called Hell
I have heard this story from several narrators, you did a WONDERFUL job yet again. You are quickly becoming one of my very favorite narrators!!!
Thank you so much Maggie!
I came to say the same, you have crept to my first choice
This is one of those stories you hear and NEVER forget. A true creepypasta classic
Agreed 100!
That comment made me want to hear it.
Im watching it again because I forgot, so i guess that's out of the window
It was fine until the abrupt and dumb ending.
I heard this several years ago but could not remember the title. Over the years I had searched but could never come across the story. Today it popped up after listening to another creepypasta and I must say that I am very happy to hear it again. It still annoys me hearing that Melinda did not listen after all of the proof.
The baby peeking out the the mothers womb was a thought I could have done without!
I turn the ringer off my phone at night. It protects me from possibly wandering into places death forgot. 👻☠
I like that comment : )
@@LighthouseHorror And we Love your narrations! Bravo 👏. Keep up the Awesome job 😇🥰
I would prefer a different ending like somehow she goes back into her room and waits till the morning. Then when she get out, the house was empty and abandoned but there are still the tea cup on the table as a sign of something that had happened last night, she's now returns to the normal world and her car is also completely fine. It's probably another overused ending but I would prefer than the actual ending that she just stupidly run out and got killed.
Heard this a long time ago and it's still one of my favourite! Although no matter how little I believed them, I would not have ran outside after seeing a knife welding maniac outside 😅
Better than a crazy person wielding a pistol,I suppose.
@@FloridaMan0561 forget that, I'd rather be shot than stabbed.
I agree w/everyone...Melinda sounded like the youngsters in horror films! You tell them to dont open the door and what do they do? Open it! You tell them dont run....and what do they do? RUN! So the restless spirits tried to save her from bcoming one of them by showing her proof and telling her the truth....but does she take them seriously? NO, which explains y she literally ran into the arms of the devil himself! Awesome story!
Would’ve been a good twist if the killers face that she saw in the end was her father all along. She did say she hasn’t seen him for a while and that’s plenty of time for extracurricular activities 😉
That's what I was expecting. Just kept waiting for it - then ... nope, guess not
Enjoyed the story none the less :)
I'm finding the sound of your narrations and that song gently tingling away in the background very relaxing.
Thanks you really help my sanity so much at time
Honestly speaking, I think I'd probably just drink myself to sleep like yeah no, y'all just wake me at dawn 🤣 the baby got me, if nothing else that would be my NOPE not going outside moment
No idea if it was intentional but i love that they used the name Melinda for someone talking to ghosts. Was like an episode of ghost whisperer haha
I'm obsessed with this story. So happy to see so many new readings of it recently! I wrote a prequel to this one. I tried to expand the lore about "him" and also explain Melinda's father's call. I read it on my channel if anyone is interested! Hopefully it's okay 😅
I'll have to check it out for sure! Thanks for watching Assorted!
@Taps fan that isn’t me. I wrote an unofficial prequel to this story without Josh Parker’s involvement (though I respect him greatly)
That sounds great thanks.
Let me tell you something, that car will still roll on 4 flat tires and you had better bet your ass that i am going to give it a hell of a shot!
Some people just don't listen. I think that after seeing everything and hearing what they had to say, that may have been enough for me!! Great story!
My twin brother recommend your channel and I must say he was not exaggerating. Your narrations are phenomenal ❤️ Like Dr C, There's an apparent love for what you do and it completely shows. I can't wait to hear your other videos and since I'm on a covid 2 week isolation, I know what I'll be doing lol
Aww thank you so much Merlin! Welcome to the channel and please tell your twin brother thank you for me
‘She picked up the phone and gave it a shake.’ I thought she’d have to pick up a bell to summon granny, not a phone.
I am so glad you said this... I thought I was going a little loopy. I couldn't rewind, I was in the middle of something. 😂
You have no idea how many hours this channel helps fly by. Another good one!
Cool story but the ending was like the author had 30 seconds to finish his homework and just wrapped it up in the laziest way possible. I can't imagine why they would end it like that. Narration was great tho
Thanks Brion!
Good stuff
You record the BEST stories. Nothing cheese and lame like other narrators. Most of the other do middleschool level stories that have no depth.
Love your work! Keep it up man!
I really appreciate that Fire! I really try to avoid those middle school type of stories (a little part of me dies inside everytime I do one lol). I've been so happy to have such a great audience for more intelligent stories. It's so fulfilling and exciting, and it lets me put my whole heart into the presentation. Not just trying to "get through it" you know.
I really appreciate your comment and support!
-Stephen
@@LighthouseHorror
Heck yeah! You'll always have a fan here!
Thanks for responding and Marry Christmas
I've heard this story before but your narration of it is SO much better than any other! You are amazingly talented, LH. 🙂✌👍
This needs a part II!
You are at the same level of RomNex, Dark Somnium and MrCreepyPasta for me. You make my nights somehow warmer when I listen to you either between my workshifts, or when I head off into sleep. 😊
Do people not realise a car can still drive with flat tyres? Sure it's not safe to go at speed, but if it's between that and staying around where a murderer can get you, it's not a tough decision.
Right, I'll drive this piece til it stops running.
Omgeee what a house 😱😱
Love the picture of the video and excellent narration and story!!! 💯😊
Thanks my friend!
@@LighthouseHorror
You're very welcome and Happy Halloween🎃👻🍬 😁
She was one of those fools who are full of themselves and thinks they are in control of everything. Thinking things have to operate a certain way because they say so....welp she done learned today...
Lol,right. I guess it’s a human condition to want to be in control. When really,wtf do any of us really have any control of?
I feel this needs an alternate ending if not at least a part 2
I love this story. I first heard it on Nosleep podcast 2yrs ago. It was great and I'm glad you're telling it..great to hear your version 😀.
Melinda, you fool. How frustrating.
Lol yeah Melinda!
Another high quality story as always! We gotta get you more subs!
Hah sounds good Frankfurt!!
This was simply awesome.. I love the long stories..
Thanks Mad! I do too
I knew I recognized this one.
Nice to hear it again.
Welcome back Calvin
Awesome story and narration.. Perfect ending for this story
Lighthouse my name is Queen. I’m your most avid fan (Hannibal Lector voice)Lol I’m listening to your long stories playlist since last night and I’m loving the vibes. I’m a few minutes into this one and I’m grateful to you. You have no idea how much you help me deal with my anxiety and depression. These narrations make me feel happy. I thank you kindly sir ❤
Just AWESOME video & everything!
You're the best!
I just KNEW the psycho outside was gonna be her Dad!! And she was gonna be the only one who could defeat him somehow and save herself and the others. That would have been a WAY better ending to this story!
Super scary & ending was superb. Someone should make a movie out of it 😁😁
Glad you liked it!
Wow 🙏🙏, thanks for the reply.👍👍😁😁
@@abhishekbhandari8270 IKR
What dedication and integrity the Master Narrator has to take Time to Read, comment, and Answer fans comment. Rare and good quality standards in this Wicked world 🌎.
@@rosetanner9817 Indeed, thanks for the reply ; wasn't expecting it. I'm a big fan of his stories.
The thumbnail title had me expecting something regarding the old "The House of the Dead" games.
Ngl, I feel a bit catfished.
Still a good story, though.
Thanks Wandering! It's always an odd balance trying to find a scary thumbnail that is also relevant to the story. It's probably the hardest part frankly of having a youtube channel (in my opinion).
@@LighthouseHorror Your doing an Exceptional job, doll. 😇
@@rosetanner9817 Thanks Rose!
This one makes me sad idk why but I've never forgotten this one. Heard if Long ago before light house but it's a classic
I was so into this story...and then it just ...ended. I know we don't always get to know where the monsters come from but what part does her father play in this? I need answers 😞
Great story and great reading.
Thank you!
Love this one. Personally one of my favorites.
Great narration. Smooth voice. Happy Halloween 👻💀😈
Thank you Carol and Happy Halloween!
I must have heard this one in a compilation... See, this is why I leave comments, so I know which ones I've listened to already.
Anyway, fun fact, the name Melinda is Greek in origin and means 'like honey'. Melinda, Melinoia, and Melindia were epithets sometimes used to refer to Persephone, as the name Persephone was taboo to speak. By using a softer name, it was hoped they could invoke her sweeter side.
All that to say... Good name choice for a gal who ends up in perpetual limbo. Reminds me a little of another Greek myth, where Thanatos gets caught in his own chains by Sisyphus, causing the halt of mortal deaths. Look, I have no idea if the author of this one put half as much thought into the premise or if I'm overanalysing, but I'm tired and will tie any and everything into mythology given the chance. I'ma go highfive Hypnos now, good night~
Wow not suspicous that granny was trying to get her to stay and then her tires get slashed
Ay yo thanks for the like appreciate it
Granny did not want her to go back outside into the night because of the danger.
This was deliciously spooky and good. The narrator is good also.
One of the best stories I've heard in a while.
"It was the House."🙀
Ahhh!
Its a Halloween miracle!
A new lighthouse horror.
A Halloween miracle! : )
Some people believe in Christmas miracles...
I prefer Halloween miracles
Wow!!! Deep, but an incomplete story... Or did I miss it? Where is her dad? Still sitting at the edge of my stool enjoying this .... Thank you!
Spoilers Below. Don't read until after listening to the whole story.
The deadbeat dad was definitely a Hitchcock red herring. Basically his only purpose was to begin the story. But was he real? Was that really him who called or was it a trick, a lure? I wish he had been more involved, perhaps staying at the roadhouse as well. Clearly the cloaked figure was Death, but why torture these people? And I would have loved for Melinda to have been clever enough to somehow trick Death in the end and escape as well as free the others.
I’ve heard this before but I like your version better!
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Aww thank you Jacqueline!
I just now got notified of this, and I am super excited!
Hey my friend! Hope you liked that one
Melinda you silly goose listen to the dead people next time... oh wait
I am curious about the whole father situation though, like was the robed figure controlling all of that?
Hey Madison! yeah I'm curious on that too
I need a sequel to thiiiiis. What does it mean when Granny said she still has a chance and that she just need to wait until morning? Is there a possibility that she could escape the hooded creature? Is the eternity magic affecting only the house? If Granny intends no harm, why did she invite her to stay the night even if she knew the fates of those who did? Granny could have just told her to drive in the direction where she came from as fast as she can and don't look back and she didn't have to encounter that creature. That house is basically hell. I just kinda wish Melinda fainted after hearing Calvin's story and everything was just a dream though, if the author would make a sequel to it.
She had already seen the thing when she was going into the house. Chances are good that she would not have been able to make it back to her car. So she was doomed from the moment she saw it and stopped. It would have been nice if she could have used the daylight to her advantage.
When she realised she was lost why didn't she just turn around and go back the way she came
Normally I don't get angry at protagonists of these stories. But Melinda literally did everything she could to die and get trapped. What was her plan once she got outside anyway with no car? My gosh. Great narration though.
Was the phone call from “her dad” (who they assumed been crying) the crying man at the roadhouse? 🤔
Hmm could have been
Tho there is no phone at the roadhouse.
That is a really good question!
I loved it!!! Great story!!!
It's so appropriate she got stabbed in the eye. She couldn't see what was right in front of her the whole story.
I wonder what will happen if a missing person report is filed and the police show up. Will they be stuck too? Will they even get in before being murdered?
They should do a part 2 to this story!
I laughed at Melinda's death, but mostly out of gallows humor and sympathy. I have MS and one of my symptoms is a sharp, constant pain in my right eye. While I didn't have to wait until death for my suffering to start, in the first few years I too yearned for relief from my living misery. (Good meds and Drs got me through the darkness, but it remains in my sense of humor)
Iv listened to this by like 4 diffrent people. It's such a good story it's one of the few I'm willing to register to
Hello, I really enjoy your long videos :) take care !
I'm so glad you enjoy them Mei! Got some really long ones coming out soon : )
@@LighthouseHorror Yay I'll keep an eye out then ! Having a hard time to go through my day lately so they help x3
her constantly trying to reason everything is just a recipe for failure
Damn Melinda where were you even gonna go when you flew open the door💀
Why the hell would she just run at him??
I think she ran mindlessly without noticing the creature and the knife, because she wasn't expecting it to be outside that fast.
You sir have yourself a new sub ❤❤❤ love from trinidad
Thanks for the support Oscar! Love right back at ya from the midwest
Reminds me of the song hotel California
The original title is so perfect, creepy, mysterious and ominous, why mess with perfection??
This was a good story and I feel if most of us ended up in a house like this with guests telling us stories of unable to die and showing grotesque wounds we'd probably think it was all just make up but I would of listened and really examined everything, since they all died they didn't need food but Malinda wasn't dead so if she didn't go outside would she still need food? And where did the food and tea come from? Little things my mind think's about but it is just a story and it was made to enjoy not think about the little things
I'm early!! Hello from Denmark and thank you for all the amazing stories! ❤️
Hey Denmark! Very cool. Hello from The U.S, and my pleasure!
As a victim of eye laceration,
The last part got me.
But when the eye gets punctured, it doesnt go black right away, theres a light starburst then immediately black, then the pain.
Horrible fuckin pain,
But the bright starburst is certainly memorable
Thank you 😊
You're welcome 😊
I know im 3 years late here but the clue is in the being itself, this is either death, fey, or something ancient with a curse attached to it. Either way, there were soooo many ways to go with this story that could of led to a better outcome, possibly, for the protagonist. This is why as a writer myself, i will sit with a story for a long time working out the plot before i even begin to write. Good story and narration overall either way.
Dang it Melinda, I knew you'd do this
lol
She should of kept drive and never stopped.
Dumb character surely pissed me off. Why did she run into him though? Pretty much suicide 🙁
Yeah she didn't make the best decision lol
If it was standing on the porch then she would not have known nor been able to stop in time.
Melinda just did not want someone telling her what to do. She just had a fowl attitude
Lol its foul not fowl hun. The way you spelled fowl has a different meaning then how u meant to use it. Sorry Im a grammar freak.
Great story, wish there was more.
I really loved this story, despite the main character being a total dumbass. I'd love to hear more stories about these characters and the demon guy who keeps them there!
This has “Hotel California” vibes.
I have now decided, of today (12/28/2020) that I am commenting done after every watched vid.
Ahahah I love it Ashton! This is a day to be remembered! : )
We need a part 2
Hotel California vibes, awesome job my good sir
Thanks again 😊
This title sounds great, super excited😀
I hope you enjoy it!
@@LighthouseHorror I did🙂 thank you
On a dark desert highway....
The author said "I'm done with this story, Melindas gonna take all this info and just walk into the guys knife"
"Welcome to The Hotel California...
You can check out any time you like, but you can never leave..."
BRUUUHHH! If "you cant tell me NUTHIN!" was a person. Couldn't just listen HUH Melinda... Smh
For God's sake Melinda!! Lol
@@LighthouseHorror hahaha 😂😂😂