IELTS Academic Writing Task 1 - Multiple Pie Charts
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- Опубліковано 12 вер 2024
- In this video, we are going to examine the best way to analyze and write about questions that include more than two pie charts.
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I learned not only writing but also listening and speaking when I watched this video. Your explanation was so clear as well as how you pronounced every word that you spoke. Thank you for this amazing video! I didn't even realize I had already spent 45 minutes
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just one thing it's an amazing method to describe charts perfectly but in ielts task 01 it would need more than 20 minutes to complete the task if we use that method of writing ideas and then write the paragraph. It is however well structured and easier to procede that way, but still too difficult to be done by everyone. The strategy is really given for students, who have a level of vocabulary above 7.5 in my opinion.
I love your structure and I have been learning on your website for a while, In this essay I just don't understand the last sentence "It will be reduced by almost two thirds (~66%) in Italy" I think it should be "It will be reduced by almost one fourth in Italy" because the value drops from 61% to 46% which is a 15% difference.
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very clear and simple, the way you delivered the steps. Thank you so much!
This is really an effective lesson. I learned to ace multiple pie charts writing. Thank you for the explaination❤️
The first essay is very nice talking about grammar, vocabulary, and structure.
Thank you for those lessons.
However, be careful with the mathematics! Senior citizens are not expected to double, their ratio on the total population is expected to. It is very different since we don't know the absolute number of people.
There are many errors of this type in the second body paragraph, this was just an example.
i have a question , when we say the amount dropped by two thirds in 26:20
does this mean that it was 3 and fell to 2
or that it was 3 and fell to 1
p.s: two thirds is 2 of 3
In the start of the period UK and France were at 35 and 20 percentage respectively,yet France was on 50 percent in rates.
There has been seen a steadily progress in Germany since 2005 to the end of the period. While In Uk from 2007 to year 2009 a permanency has seen. After some time a rapid upward UK has witnessed in regional recycling at the end of the period.
On the other hand, France has showed a perpetuate decline from 50 percentage to 30 in the year of 2013. However, an upward curve has been noticed instantly after to 2013 to the last of the period bringing the rates to 40 percent in UK.
hi friend ...next months i hv my ilts exam i am still suffering with this task 1 can you pls suggest some strategies
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In overview we cant write numbers ,percentage and years right mam ???i am so confused
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why reduced by two thirds? i dont get it
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You should determine each color for any age to can write because not clear.
22:28 is the most important part
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Please teach how did u get 2/3 in the last para😊
Amazing explanation
thanks
In overview you write numerical value,i think that is not band 9 ans
can we use for 0-14 years old synonym as a younger
and for 15-59 adult or youth
and for over 60 as an elder
thanks for the video it was constructive.
It is very helpful for me 🙂
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32:10
Can i send my answer helping me mark it ?
cant we go countrywise?
mam, kindly check and give me band score on the text below related to 6 pie chart example:
The chart represents the water usage of six regions in agricultural, domestic, and industrial sectors.
Overall, the water consumption of every region mentioned was higher in agricultural section, while the industrial and domestic sectors have comparatively greater usage of water in Europe and North America only.
Firstly, the utilization of water for domestic purposes was always below than one forth in every region, specifically having a value of 7 percent in both Central Asia and South East Asia. Africa was just above these two countries representing a mere difference of 2 percent. Although, people used minimum water of about 5 percent in Central Asia for industrial work. In contrast to, Europe and North America have consumed the maximum water, showed as 53 and 48 percent respectively.
Secondly, for agricultural purposes, Central Asia has consumed a significant water of about 90 percent. Similar to that, Africa and South East Asia spent a remarkable quantity of above 80 percent. However, it is showed that the capability of the consumed water in Europe and North America was almost half as compared to other four regions of the list.
Above 8
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I guess, that should be "reduced to two thirds" instead of "reduced by two thirds", as the two third is the final result.
Thanks a lot 😊
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The charts presented compare the populations of two countries, Yemen and Italy, by different age groups in 2000 and forecast for 2050.
Overall, at the beginning of the period, Yemen accounted for a significant proportion of the younger and elderly population, and the projection also shows the same rate. Similarly, in 2000, the middle-aged population was higher in Italy, and by 2050, the percentages of this age group will remain higher compared to others.
With regards to Yemen, the younger age group comprised almost half of the total population in 2000 and is forecasted to increase by 11% in 2050. The proportion of the elderly population stood at around 4% in 2008 and will have a slight increase of 1% at the end of the period. In contrast, it is assumed that the percentage of the middle-aged population will decline by 13% in 2050.
On the other hand, by 2050, the percentages of the younger and middle-aged populations are expected to decrease by 4% and 14%, respectively, compared to 2000, whereas the dependent population is projected to increase by double to around 43% in 2050, which was approximately 24% in 2000.
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Task response not task achievement
can someone explain the "reduced by 2/3"?
2/3 of 60 is 20, 60-20=40
@@nhungoc2897 2/3 của 60 là 40
@@smejacobb okay, my fault
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Overall not writing numbers,years .
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We know that, An overall we should mention highest trends and lowest trends but you didn’t write it
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3/4 = 75 % or for the IELTS exam math is not so important
Tomorrow will be my exam and I have no vocabularies writing 🥀😭
How was your exam? scores?
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