3. How to Write an Introduction Paragraph with Thesis Statement

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  • @WritingBetter
    @WritingBetter  2 роки тому +4

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    • @sohailafridi66
      @sohailafridi66 2 роки тому

      Ma'am, I'm your online essay student. Can you share your email address, so that I can send my essay introduction paragraph for your insightful evaluation?
      Thanks in advance.

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    • @WritingBetter
      @WritingBetter  5 місяців тому +1

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    • @WritingBetter
      @WritingBetter  2 роки тому

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      @WritingBetter  19 днів тому

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  • @ShofiqulIslam-f9n
    @ShofiqulIslam-f9n 3 місяці тому

    Thank you so much, Ma'am. It’s a very clear and effective explanation about an introductory paragraph.

    • @WritingBetter
      @WritingBetter  3 місяці тому

      I’m so happy to hear that you found it helpful.

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      @WritingBetter  2 роки тому +1

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    • @WritingBetter
      @WritingBetter  3 роки тому

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    @bellaguifarro635 3 роки тому +3

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    @souheirkhreiss 2 роки тому +1

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      @WritingBetter  2 роки тому

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    • @WritingBetter
      @WritingBetter  6 місяців тому

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  • @ashiquearain125
    @ashiquearain125 5 місяців тому +1

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    • @WritingBetter
      @WritingBetter  5 місяців тому

      I’m glad you found the video helpful.

  • @chathurikagamage7682
    @chathurikagamage7682 3 роки тому +1

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    • @WritingBetter
      @WritingBetter  3 роки тому

      Great! I am glad that you found it helpful.

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    @haremknight2395 4 роки тому

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    • @WritingBetter
      @WritingBetter  4 роки тому

      You're welcome! I hope you found it helpful.

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    @Poison_root Рік тому +1

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    • @WritingBetter
      @WritingBetter  Рік тому +1

      I’m glad you found it helpful.

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      @WritingBetter  Рік тому

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    @sohailafridi66 2 роки тому +1

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    • @WritingBetter
      @WritingBetter  2 роки тому +1

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    @parsanasirzadeh2733 4 роки тому +1

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  • @alphamega3822
    @alphamega3822 3 роки тому +2

    Hi, how would you write an introduction with multiple questions please?

    • @WritingBetter
      @WritingBetter  3 роки тому +2

      Your thesis statement will need to be broader so that you can answer each question in your body paragraphs. For example: Discuss wheat farming as a successful business model. In your discussion, make sure you address farm management, sales of wheat products, and the environmental impact of wheat farming,"
      Your thesis statement could be something like this: “Wheat farming can be a profitable business as well as providing a greener environment for the future."

    • @alphamega3822
      @alphamega3822 3 роки тому +1

      @@WritingBetter Thank you so much for being so helpful.

  • @robertmax1604
    @robertmax1604 4 роки тому

    Thanks, for making it easy to understand!

  • @sohailafridi66
    @sohailafridi66 2 роки тому +1

    Ma’am,kindly give numbering to the videos for better sequence.

    • @WritingBetter
      @WritingBetter  2 роки тому

      Thank you for the suggestion. I will work on doing that!

  • @ashiquearain125
    @ashiquearain125 5 місяців тому

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    • @WritingBetter
      @WritingBetter  5 місяців тому +1

      I hope you find some of my other videos helpful as well.

  • @noobwolvi1004
    @noobwolvi1004 Рік тому

    That's amazing but I have an issue with writing

    • @WritingBetter
      @WritingBetter  Рік тому

      I hope you will check out some of my other videos, and that they can help you to have more confidence in your writing skills.

    • @noobwolvi1004
      @noobwolvi1004 Рік тому

      @@WritingBetter ma'am I don't know how to write heading for

    • @WritingBetter
      @WritingBetter  Рік тому

      What kind of essay are you writing?

    • @noobwolvi1004
      @noobwolvi1004 Рік тому

      @@WritingBetterI don't know how to brainstorm for an essay and there are two types of essays argumentative and expository

    • @WritingBetter
      @WritingBetter  Рік тому

      Try watching these videos to see if they might give you some ideas:
      ua-cam.com/video/TS7M7ebFLBc/v-deo.html
      ua-cam.com/video/v_D6K42DTSA/v-deo.html

  • @sazanagha4677
    @sazanagha4677 3 роки тому

    Hi
    I need help
    How to write funnel and get attention introduction of an essay ????please help

    • @WritingBetter
      @WritingBetter  3 роки тому

      I don't help individuals at the moment, but you could watch a few more of my essay example videos to see how I write different introduction paragraphs. You might find them helpful.

  • @Ubi9090
    @Ubi9090 2 місяці тому

    Dear ma'am can you please clarify the position of THESIS STATEMENT in introductory para of types of essay. For example, Expository essay and abstract essay.
    Expository: Don't waste water even if you're at running stream.
    Abstract: Better to rein in hell then to serve in heaven.

    • @WritingBetter
      @WritingBetter  2 місяці тому +1

      In most essays (expository, argumentative, persuasive, etc), the thesis statement will come at the end of the introduction paragraph. The topic may be expository or abstract as in your examples.
      However, if you are asking about this:
      In an abstract (a short summary of a longer research essay), you will include the thesis (or topic) but not a thesis statement in the abstract.
      I hope this answers your question.

    • @Ubi9090
      @Ubi9090 2 місяці тому +1

      @WritingBetter You're so kind. ❤ Thank you ma'am.

  • @Footballheritage-p6m
    @Footballheritage-p6m 2 роки тому

    I have a writing sol tomorrow

  • @sanaullah9967
    @sanaullah9967 3 роки тому

    Will three or four sentences constitute one paragraph consisting of 200 words?

    • @WritingBetter
      @WritingBetter  3 роки тому +1

      Usually there are at least 4 or 5 sentences in a typical body paragraph. An introduction paragraph may sometimes only have 3 or 4 sentences. Also most sentences should only have between 10-25 words, so 4 sentences consisting of 200 words would mean about 50 words for each sentence. That would be too long. I hope that helps.

    • @sanaullah9967
      @sanaullah9967 3 роки тому

      @@WritingBetter You're talking about college essay which consists of 1000-1200 words. Whereas I am talking about long essays of 2500-3000 words.

    • @WritingBetter
      @WritingBetter  3 роки тому

      I see. I still think that 3 or 4 sentences for one paragraph consisting of 200 words might be difficult to write. When sentences get too long, they tend to have grammatical errors.

  • @shahzadbashirahmed2103
    @shahzadbashirahmed2103 3 роки тому

    Can you please confirm if this about the introduction chapter of a thesis?

    • @WritingBetter
      @WritingBetter  3 роки тому

      This is the basic structure for a 5 paragraph essay. A research paper will include similar things but be more detailed. It would be good to check for information on dissertation introductions if that is what you are looking for.

    • @shahzadbashirahmed2103
      @shahzadbashirahmed2103 3 роки тому +1

      @@WritingBetter Yes i am looking for introduction for my thesis. Thank you for clarifying and replying. I appreciate your time.