How to write an effective THESIS STATEMENT for research paper

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КОМЕНТАРІ • 101

  • @pdoffcanadian
    @pdoffcanadian 2 роки тому +16

    I have been out of school for a long time, and your videos and guides are helping me tremendously. I just got 100% on a research paper that is worth 20% of my overall mark!! Wanted to thank you, as I couldn't have done it without you!

  • @Nat-nq9gi
    @Nat-nq9gi 3 роки тому +61

    I so appreciate you for making these videos. I have no idea why I have such a hard time writing thesis statements, you made it look so easy!

    • @smartstudent_official
      @smartstudent_official  3 роки тому +1

      You're welcome! Thank you for watching and supporting this channel. Best of luck to you! :)

    • @luftim
      @luftim 2 роки тому

      if my topic is "byzantine innovations" would "how did the byzantine wall take inspirations from the events in rome 400 bc?" be a thesis statement?

    • @ggsglamourcreationsaka-glo6580
      @ggsglamourcreationsaka-glo6580 Рік тому

      She did, I am struggling too. Critical thesis statement

  • @trinityw3964
    @trinityw3964 Рік тому +1

    I’ve watched heaps on vids on yt on thesis statements and this is by far the best one

  • @ByStephieNics
    @ByStephieNics 3 роки тому +12

    This was an incredibly helpful video, THANK YOU!! I developed my thesis statement while watching and now I'm ready to get writing 😊

  • @tidaceesay3510
    @tidaceesay3510 2 роки тому +4

    Thank you so much for the clear explanation. This really helped me out and now I understand almost everything about thesis statement. Now am ready for my thesis assignment.

  • @leem7794
    @leem7794 2 роки тому +1

    Never wrote any thesis statement and you made it so clear for me to start and engage it tonight. Thank you

  • @jackienuttall4107
    @jackienuttall4107 Рік тому +1

    This video was so helpful. I often struggle with my thesis statements. The helped me to break down my ideas and get concise with my thoughts. I recommend this to anyone! Thank you.

  • @tammywhitis2958
    @tammywhitis2958 Рік тому

    I just started watching you, and you have been a lifesaver thank you so much.

  • @billiecremeens8129
    @billiecremeens8129 2 роки тому +1

    I just wanted to say thank you for making your videos. I am working hard on improving my writing and your teaching is a huge help.

  • @amandayaklin2690
    @amandayaklin2690 7 місяців тому +1

    I'm in college right now, and I am so grateful for your video. Just figured out a tremendous amount for an essay I was dreading. Thank you.

  • @thestrugglingwriter5254
    @thestrugglingwriter5254 2 роки тому +1

    Omg this helped so much. I kept on giving facts as my thesis statement.

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    @gregsoad5031 2 роки тому +1

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  • @mariaemmnauelavcpisquesa4807
    @mariaemmnauelavcpisquesa4807 2 роки тому +1

    Thank you this enlightens me I have something to work on to develop my thesis. The video pretty much help that I should not worry about if there some changes and editions after so many researches. Thanks a lot

  • @anikacarrie
    @anikacarrie 2 роки тому

    Thank you, this was so helpful!

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    @marietoniedelmundo314 2 роки тому +2

    THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!! I'm subscribing

  • @stephanbotes5865
    @stephanbotes5865 Рік тому +4

    I'm Not saying the previous three videos were bad at explaining how to write a thesis statement... But I finally understand how to do this well after yours. Thank you.

  • @andybarrosa1275
    @andybarrosa1275 2 роки тому +1

    Your a life saver. thank you very much

  • @jenhynes414
    @jenhynes414 Рік тому

    This is so helpful thank you!

  • @ccz479
    @ccz479 2 роки тому

    VERY useful to know, thank you!!

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    @jaimegonzalez3830 Рік тому

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    @NessNess72Heeeey Рік тому

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  • @evelynconey9429
    @evelynconey9429 2 роки тому +1

    Great help with a strong thesis statement

  • @Rachel-zj2ef
    @Rachel-zj2ef 3 роки тому +10

    Thank you for this explanation! This was so clear and easy to understand.

    • @smartstudent_official
      @smartstudent_official  3 роки тому

      You're welcome! Thank you for watching and supporting this channel. Best of luck to you! :)

  • @dongacas
    @dongacas 3 роки тому +1

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    @anyalow9855 2 роки тому

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    @monthsbehind9730 3 роки тому +2

    I was just looking up more information on this and you do a great video to help me thank you.

    • @smartstudent_official
      @smartstudent_official  3 роки тому +1

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    @jnfrancoispierre3616 Рік тому

    Thank you!

  • @writebetterwithteachermel
    @writebetterwithteachermel 3 роки тому +2

    Well explained!

  • @ironwilled9471
    @ironwilled9471 3 роки тому +3

    Simple and helpful. Thanks 🇩🇿

  • @allieoopiambumbo
    @allieoopiambumbo 3 роки тому +3

    Great video and tips. It has helped me a lot I was becoming bogged down with so much info on the topic of my essay. Thank you for taking time to do this.

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    @scubagirl2857 2 роки тому

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    @burakdemir711 3 роки тому +4

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    @josiet.2661 2 роки тому +1

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  • @Msthoro1
    @Msthoro1 2 роки тому

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    @azriazhar9159 3 роки тому +9

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  • @petafairbrother4787
    @petafairbrother4787 2 роки тому

    I am finding your videos so useful, thank you! My statement: Risky play is perceived differently in the ECEC sector because of the variation in professional understanding of this topic.

  • @adlan_kacak
    @adlan_kacak 2 роки тому

    seems to be much more complex than what i`v expected ... but yeah thank you for your explanation!

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    @yoongummy1585 3 роки тому +15

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  • @GiveEarthAChance
    @GiveEarthAChance Рік тому

    Hey Chelsea ! Did you possibly create a video on writing an academic research PROPOSAL?

  • @aida087
    @aida087 Рік тому

    Hello Chelsea thank you so much for sharing!! Unfortunately I still struggle with writing research papers after being in college for a few years because of bad short-term memory!!
    Currently, I have a "create an outline" assignment for my psych class for my research paper based on a "movie" about a mental illness topic and I've only created one outline in my entire time in college!! Do you have a video on "creating an outline for your psychology research paper based on a movie review I guess it's called?"

  • @cynthiayankauskas4
    @cynthiayankauskas4 3 роки тому +2

    Helpful videos! Thank you for making these!
    Will there be one on writing better conclusion paragraphs?

    • @smartstudent_official
      @smartstudent_official  3 роки тому +2

      Hi there! That's a great suggestion. I will add it to my list :)

    • @cynthiayankauskas4
      @cynthiayankauskas4 3 роки тому

      Thank you! Many people will benefit from the addition of a conclusion video!
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  • @karambakanyi8438
    @karambakanyi8438 2 роки тому

    Thanks 👍

  • @lorettakrausz
    @lorettakrausz 5 місяців тому

    Hi Chesea you are wonderful and a so much help. I am 63 years old and studing English/ Creative Writing with Concentration of Fiction and Non-fiction, I am taking History this semester and I am writing a paper on Juvenile crime in Baltimore City Md. The crime rate and types of crimes by juveniles is off the charts. The whole Juvenile system needs to be completly changed. I won't bore you but I'm on Social Security and using grants and loans to get through school. I could use that monitor and some scholarships to helpme live. I just want you to know I LOVE not like your videos because you talk the language which makes me understand. 😇🤩🙏God Bless You Sweetie. Grams Loretta Krausz

  • @thatomofolo452
    @thatomofolo452 Рік тому

    Great 👍👍😃

  • @paulbrown9415
    @paulbrown9415 3 роки тому +1

    Good morning Chels, talk to me girl. Love this one. I needed a nudge in this area. I usually come about a thesis and am not all together sure if I am happy with it Lol.

    • @smartstudent_official
      @smartstudent_official  3 роки тому

      Yep! I feel like that's a common feeling among many people when writing their thesis statement.

  • @Sheismeglowing
    @Sheismeglowing Рік тому

    can you do a video on case study & journal analysis papers

  • @rabtechtutorialvideo
    @rabtechtutorialvideo 3 роки тому +2

    *MY Due after 3 days For my summer English class* {2021}
    Who else?

  • @kathy6273
    @kathy6273 Рік тому

    Do you put the problem statement In the Introduction or abstract?

  • @KwinalChaudhari
    @KwinalChaudhari 3 місяці тому

    Please help in how to create thesis statement on effects of social media on mental health. Please try to help me

  • @scubagirl2857
    @scubagirl2857 2 роки тому

    What is the difference between a Statement of the Problem, Research Question, and Thesis Statement? Any help would be highly appreciated.

  • @faresshorts1729
    @faresshorts1729 3 роки тому +1

    Thanks

  • @orengemino7200
    @orengemino7200 2 роки тому +1

    Ms. Smart Student or anyone who reads this
    I have a few questions on how to make a Research Paper,
    First Question:
    you CAN put in graphs, diagrams and etc. right?
    IF so, which place/position is most suitable to put it in... near the beginning, in the middle, or near the end?
    If you are trying to prove a point based on the graph results you have researched/found.
    Second Question:
    In making a Research Paper, WHAT format of/HOW many sentences per paragraph do you use.... 3-5 sentences per paragraph, 5-10 sentences, or more?
    Third Question:
    In making a Thesis Statement, you said it has to be worth 1-2 sentences. So for example:
    Humans are intelligent animals........... and under go evolution. Humans can be bla bla bla.
    ( So here are 2 sentences, can this still be classifies as a Thesis Statement? OR do I need to merge them into 1 sentence, that looks like it has 2 sentences in it?
    I think- that's all the questions I wish to ask- I hope that someone can clarify and answer my questions

  • @maninderkaur8195
    @maninderkaur8195 3 роки тому +1

    good

  • @tonyhall4837
    @tonyhall4837 3 роки тому +2

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  • @jamiej.barker9762
    @jamiej.barker9762 8 місяців тому

    I play this for my students every semester. Thank you!

  • @samuelrodriguez4342
    @samuelrodriguez4342 Рік тому

    Thanks for sharing, I am trying to understand this topic still. Hhehehh! (=.=)

  • @sunfirefire45
    @sunfirefire45 2 роки тому +1

    I am in graduate school and every time I write a paper, I have to go over how to write a thesis statement.

  • @bmkkipgen1849
    @bmkkipgen1849 2 роки тому

    Difference between intro and thesis statement?

  • @valeriacapriotti6437
    @valeriacapriotti6437 2 роки тому

    Hi! I've got a question: should we or should we not use pronouns (I and we) when writing our essay? I cannot find a clear answer to this question. Some websites say we shouldn't and others say it is OK. Could you help me, please?

  • @nia7923
    @nia7923 2 роки тому

    I am pouring all my brain cells here, I was never good at Literature

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  • @kevinhyr5879
    @kevinhyr5879 2 роки тому +1

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    @Greatblakhoosh 3 роки тому

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  • @emilyryall1342
    @emilyryall1342 2 роки тому +1

    this is exactly what scribbler say

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    @radaasadpourpiranfar6370 2 роки тому

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  • @antwaunbrooks3174
    @antwaunbrooks3174 Рік тому +1

    Can you write mine lol

  • @missyanne8728
    @missyanne8728 Рік тому

    I disagree with the final thesis statement being acceptable at the college level. It is too short because it doesn't use specific language and lacks complexity. How does a herding mentality relate to being a good emotional support pet? The word "they" could be confusing; it can be referring to the dogs or the person needing the dog.

    • @smartstudent_official
      @smartstudent_official  Рік тому

      The purpose of this video is to demonstrate the 3 components of thesis statement in applicable manner. The complexity of papers will vary but these key components will not. Students should adjust according to their situation.
      Keep in mind that evidence to support a claim is relative to the research being done. It should reflective what is discussed in the paper. "Herding mentality" is simply an example of the support this student chose to explore.

  • @krystalA5379
    @krystalA5379 2 роки тому

    Incredibly helpful video. My thesis statement is: Cryptocurrency provides a more consumer-friendly alternative to money because it is more convenient to use, and gives the user direct control over their finances.

  • @Markone99
    @Markone99 2 роки тому

    Why the hell are the captions in vietnamese 🤔🤨

  • @hamiltonsnow8232
    @hamiltonsnow8232 2 роки тому

    still don't know what the fuck I'm doing