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  • Опубліковано 21 жов 2024

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    @NAMNAMDANCE  4 місяці тому

    0:15 - joann feet too wide after turn
    0:16 - rai l8 for arm up
    0:18 - jeydan and rai, extend inner hand b4 turning
    0:18 - after turn, every except me and joann, lean out
    0:19 - izzy moves
    0:21 - first arm is forehead / eyes - rai
    0:22 - izzy, the rest of the arms are mouth
    0:24 - izzy forgetting the spin around b4 clapping
    0:25 - everyone but me l8 to the floor
    0:26 rai look at hand
    0:30 - rai l8 for down, joann i think is early
    0: 32 - 33 - rai lvl change can be bigger and head is facing floor
    0:33 - izzy ur body orientation should be matching rai
    0:37 - rai hit in
    0:42 - izzy separate the hand movement and the down movement, (hands should not be on head when going down)
    0:45 - its a lvl change - izzy
    0:47 - izzy look forward
    0:50 - sam early for jump, everyone else is l8 (its on se) , izzy didnt do jump
    0:52 - rai slightly l8, izzy can have faster initiation plus left arm angle too high up , jeydan keep ur right hand on head and commit to the move
    0:53 - izzy kick in front of ur body not to the side, and dont put left arm straight up when ur doing (giyeok)
    0:54 - izzy ur elbow is slanted the opposite direction, jeydan ur early for this hit
    ,0:54 - rai stop looking back, u did it two different times in the span of two seconds
    0:55 - rai ur hands are too high and jeydan urs are too low (for the helicopter hands)
    0:59 - jeydan you didnt do (say my name) hand move, izzy u didnt do urs high enough, for “name” hand should be a fist
    1:00 - ik we cant do postitions in this room but i think this one needs to be relooked at
    1:01 - jeydan, hand explosion move should be higher up
    1:01 - izzy body orientation and arms wrong
    1:02 - “neo” hand is on mouth @ izzy and joann
    1:03 - everyone should be kicking heels in reference me
    1:02 - 1:04 - izzy
    1:05 - sam dont do the circle hand thing, izzy late to getting down
    1:09 jeydan try not to cover ur face, izzy dont close ur hand
    1:11 - everyone can get up faster (was done better in the 2nd chorus)
    1:16 - joann and izzy have clearer hands, izzy u skipped a move, jeydan joann rai cut off the circle, should go fully around b4 landing on shoulder
    1:18 - rai and joann early for jumping (is on the 2nd bass) and early for the arm swoopy thing
    1:21 - jeydan and rai did not complete the third arm hit
    1:22 - strong arm pose hit is toward center @ rai and jeydan
    1:25 - jeydan u should be 30 degrees out and closer to izzy, everyone look at hand,
    1:25 - rai and izzy up faster
    1:27 -izzy its not a full body shift to the side, its shoulder move
    1:31 - jeydan lunge outwards
    1:37 - jeydan head up for clarity, sam dont turn head so fast
    1:39 - izzy match me and rais leg positioning, jeydan can be more down, rai upper body should be facing front, sam can be more up
    Not gonna look at the feet for this next section
    1:43 - jeydan nod
    1:44 - first punch everyone be faster, match my speed but i can keep it up for longer (placing rather than punching)
    1:47 - left side is diff than right side
    1:48 - izzy bigger arms
    Gonna ignore 2nd chorus
    2:15 - everyone change positions on “lou”
    2:18 - izzy move out, jeydan move in
    2:20 - izzy and jeydan upper arm too high, shouldnt be past ur head
    2;21 - jeydan left arm should also be on ur face
    2:22 - izzy didnt do the move, jeydan didnt any of the moves
    2:23 - rai l8 for head over swipe
    2:24 - lvl down is not rippling , ur kick can be better
    2:26 - ripple up: jeydan, u go after joann and rai, izzy dont do the arm swipe down the first time
    2:29 - jeydan didnt do the move, izzy was l8 for the first two moves
    2:38 - everyone but me was early for the head turn, what are the lvls
    2:42 - jeydan, lower level for deja
    2:46 - izzy later for leaning to the other side
    2:48 - jeydan
    2:50 -izzy
    2:54 - jeydan and izzy, the say it louder should be near the mouth
    2:55 - jeydan early for turn around