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Additional comments, we can all be clearer on hip movements / timing of hips 0:05 - rai : place hand on head on the second "over" not the first one 0:20 Angela can be more out if possible 0:21 Rai initiate early for the hand up, it's on "baby" not "oh baby" 0:22 - rachel : "getting bored" hand pathway should go straight to face instead of up 0:25 Lauren too early for putting fists down on "losing interest" 0:27 - our friday can collectively b better but rachel l8 (we had a better take for this earlier) 0:37 rai early 4 ripple, u should start on "alone" 0:40 rai early for putting arms down on "seems close" 0:45 angela and rachel prep ur knees up 4 "outta" , rachel don't do the head movement (i think u mightve conditioned urself to do that bc ur part has the same lines 0:49 on the first "much" Angela try not to prep head too much to the left 0:50 on the last "much" Kyla and rachel tilt head more to the right 0:55 on the second pointy extention, ppl remember to look at someone else other than u 1:52 - again everyone remember to look not straight ahead

U guys did great!! Although the way u guys were so far apart of eachother took me out 0:56 😭 I love this dance thooo u guys did amazing :3

0:04 (T) i think the person in the most back can hit that last throw a little faster (stop moving early its still tech on time 0:06 - (M) head should dig down when moving out (reference me kyla and colleen , audrey and li can make it clearer (which might help differentiate the ripple) 0:10 (M) too many ppl looking down / away while travelling 0:13 li head 0:15 : for “villian” keep elbow parallel to floor (ie. me kyla audrey and viv fix) (kt make the move bigger) (li keep ur hand closer to head) 0:18 kyla can move entire forearm instead of just wrist on the up motion (everyone keep right arm 0:19 - audrey can keep head back longer viv head 0:22 everyone look at hand (not side eye but full turn head reference kt) 0:24 “out of my mind” audrey handplacement can be clearer and step with the next move (travel to the right) 0:41 sam bad head iso, vivan hand placement can be higher for “bad attitude” oujtside of mouth 0:50 - kyla head nod off timing, lis arms can be more locked, they move height while ur walking 1:03 ppl waiting for the ripple keep front leg straight (ref colleen and viv) 1:05 - li drop head 1:07 colleen dont drop head that low 1:08 colleen and li look at camera (li late for both looking away and look front 1:09 colleen “best” hand higher 1:12 everyone right hand swipe on “olla” and dont forget the two finger flicks (ppl cutting the second one off we have time) especially front ppl make the moves bigger aNd clearer (ref me for finger flick height and moves) 1:14 kyla late for “widow” (theyre not actually saying widow) which is y late for down, viv u can be a little slower for putting finger to mouth since it shouldn’t fully land until “lain” 1:19 li consistently l8 for going down and up, colleen make the circle hand smaller, kt right hand is not doing the ok sign (the left hand is middle finger with thumb but the other hand is just closed) 1:21 - viv drop ur hand during “out of my mind” head spin 1:24 - everyone look at hand (li colleen and kt too much to the side, has to be up too) Pt 2 not everyone know what we set moves to 1:30 kyla and viv look like more of a jump than right knee up, colleen turn head for left foot but not for the right feet steps, audrey and viv rushing 1:33 viv lift the feet 1:36 kyla start with wrong foot 1:37 colleen and li right arm higher and parallel with floor 1:45 kt and colleen look up 1:48 - kt chest up can be clearer 1:49 - kt and colleen make the look to the left bigger, ref audrey, her left shoulder goes back b4 the walking 1:52 - colleen the right leg swipe is down the leg not up (ref kt) 1:55 kt there are head moves with the pointy (to the left and down reference me) 1:56 kt dont hit the voguing arms too high and too many fans on “bad girl) 2:00 sam and colleen head more tilted to the left 2: 03 viv rush 2:07 we will go over this 2:08 kyla and audrey drop arms bc the pelvic move, kt timing 2:11 viv u can put ur head up more / u dont have to go down as much 2:14 audrey go down lower and faster , li faster, kt match kyla and vivian’s up timing 249 sam sit into moves more 2:52 same thing dont bring elbow down for villain 2:55 audrey missed the last arm cross 2:56 colleen dont do the jump back leg thing u do 3:00 audrey when doing the peace sign move, dont bring it up and down in height, just in front audrey and li (kinda kyla too) match the way everyone else does the head roll on vill lain 3:05 everyonelook at hand 3:07 colleen slightly consistently fast then everyone else on the last “da” final throw up b4 villain

Could benefit from a 1-2 more practices. There seems to be a lot of discrepancies with the head and the ripples are there but not concretely set in place. 0:12: Li's head turn is off 0:15 Vivian landing legs 0:16: On "villain" half of the members keep their head down while half of them put them up to face the front 0:17: Hand placement / head hit with the kick is off 0:17: angle / head 0:18 Li's head comes back quicker + vivian didn't do head back 0:21 with that throw of the arms some people are looking with their heads / some are not 0:22 with that finger point some people are looking with their heads / some are not 1:00 some legs are bent some legs are straight 1:06 ripple timing seems to speed up 1:10 arm when coming back up levels are off 1:12 that mini sequence before going into the chorus drop the arms / hands timing and wrist rolls are off 1:15 timing in which people move their body from the right to left / where they are looking with their heads are off 1:18 speed in which people's body goes down and comes back up is off (li is late + mini timing between everyone else) 2:00 levels of body (some are more bent than others, unclear who's part it is? [seeing that its also kind of like that in the dance practice so maybe can disregard but still would be good to talk about]) 2:10 levels for this chorus / speed in which body is moving / where the head looking is off 2:15 speed in which people's body goes down and comes back up (same as first chorus) 2:52 body orientation / how people do the "villain" part is really different 3:00 the head here was very off overall moves in the last dance break should be reviewed GENERAL: - Energy is a lot better all throughout, but cleanliness and intention are still missing in certain parts (esp during intro, 2nd verse) - Rushing tendencies from some throughout (esp during 2nd verse, dance break) - Overall much cleaner but a few parts stick out 0:05 arm/hand angles & retraction seem to just be a tadge off, unsure if intentional 0:07 Colleen, li, Kyla seem to go out almost simultaneously instead of in canon 0:09 Sammy is the only one accenting the hit out + “out of my mind” neck iso not in sync 0:15 Audrey doesn’t make it to position on time 0:16 how deep everyone goes for “villain” is different, causing head raise timings to be diff too 0:20 [8] arm circle is very diff, Audrey is noticeably the only one with straight arms 1st verse eats Prechorus 1 1:00 spacing & leaning angle very different, gets much more spread out on right side Chorus 1 1:15 timing for going down slightly varied, Kyla + Audrey gets down a bit later than everyone else & Viv is can lower slightly less + rise up more gradually 1:18 kt dives down slightly earlier, Colleen dives down much more spectacularly compared to everyone 1:19 hand circle tracing over face has varied timing (Colleen rushing?) 1:21 [8] Colleen rushes head whip 1:28 [1] Viv hits the “da” early, but also varied timing here 2nd verse Up until 1:35 generally good, 1:35-1:40 footsteps sound rushed & chaotic 1:38-1:40 this groove looks very messy & unset, make sure arms are extended down + upper body opposition from side to side is utilized with each groove (Viv makes it most readable but groove can be smoothed out) 1:52 [5] decide on straight or bent arm extension here 2:06 [5+6+7] this combo is hard to read, moves slightly unclear/energy running low Bridge good Dance break 2:42 [1, 2+3, 4+] footsteps are rushing on “lalalala”, make sure to sit into the groove 2:54 [VILLAIN] head dip is varied 2:55 each arms picture is not cleanly hit, Kyla arms are straight for the 💪💪, Audrey forgot the last arm cross 2:55-2:57 [1, 2, 3, 4+5, 6+7+8+1] significant rushing on the footsteps here, make sure to stick to timing & not anticipate moves 2:58 [2+] body back lag is very varied with Colleen and Audrey’s differences most prominent 3:01 [1] head roll is extremely varied, Afro groove after seems very “stompy”

**counts are highlighted in [x] i.e. [1234] or [LYRIC]** Crits are separated by verses, prechoruses, choruses, bridge, end GENERAL: - overall could be significantly sharper with details and highlight moments really brought out - emphasize dynamic contrasts more & maintain intensity during the chiller parts - energy noticeably dies down halfway thru the song, make sure to *breathe* - grooves need to be drilled 1000% [intro] 0:O3 [5] match arm extension length, looks funky 0:05 timing for the ripple should be more clear 0:07 the stop on [5] right before "out of my mind" can be much sharper to highlight head iso 0:07 slight hesitation on "out of my mind" head isos, make more deliberate 0:07 sammy can lean back more 0:14 audrey and vivian should be meeting the left leg on “villain” instead of right leg 0:15 vivian forgot to kick 0:16 timing and angles for head and arm movement a bit messy 0:29 arm movement before arm throw between kyla and sammy is different [1st verse & prechorus] 0:58 line needs to be cleaned up (i.e. body pose and distance between everyone), the diagonal can be more angled/deeper 1:00 some spacing oddities here but also try to maintain intensity esp during a more "chill" part like here - badvillain is more cunty focused w the hip pops 1:04 Li head down lol 1:07 badvillain fully bends their back to 90deg on 6 - unsure if that's a feasible target but set angles 1:09 [1234] beckoning fingers are beckoning in all different directions [1st chorus] 1:10 [567] everyone should match colleen's intensity & sharpness here, badvillain also does simultaneous chest in & hip out pop with each word (especially emma). Kt's (accidental?) head iso is so cool tho 1:14 [6] right before "lalalala" sit on right & chin slight right down before switching (colleens & li are the only ones that are lightly doing it but should be noticeable weight shift) 1:16 hand movement timing around the face on “villain” looks different between everyone 1:23 everyone make sure to look to the side following your arm 1:23 [1] hold out this full arm extension for just a millisecond longer to emphasize, rn retracts too quickly 1:24 HTH footwork drilled more [2nd verse] 1:28-1:40 there’s a lot going on here lol idk what to say except I think the moves should be set for this and then cleaned in groups 1:25-1:40 footwork quite messy & disorganized between everyone in this entire section; aside from just setting/drilling, the grooves during the phrases aren't readable (tho tbf badvillain are also just stomping through the grooves too TT). Needs most drilling 1:41 unsure if swan arms were purposefully omitted sans audrey - otherwise rise/drop into the milk should be sharp 1:45 ensure to continue milking arms continuously until [8] before the drop & hip groove. Follow kt/viv 1:48 [8] left swing weight change before the next phrase is missed 1:50 set these claw arms here - also try incorporating a slight jack from hip up with each weighted step & arm swing. Ref kt [2nd prechorus] 1:58 [5+6+7+8+SHoulder] almost unreadable/needs a lot of drilling 1:58-2:06 2nd prechorus overall seems very messy/uncleaned, appears that a lot of parts were forgotten so unable to crit besides more drilling/setting. [2nd chorus] 2:06 hair flip should be on “best” 2:08 [567] sim 1st chorus, intensity & sharpness can be much higher before releasing into chorus along w/ pops incorporated 2:12 viv & colleen should spawn from sammy's sides at same time 2:14 same note as for first chorus 2:17 vivian make sure to do a full head whip on “mind” 2:21 [1] again hold out this arm extension for a tinytiny bit longer instead of rushing into the next move overall 2nd chorus died down a lot in energy compared to 1st chorus and was slightly messier [bridge] 2:27 [4567] ppl forgetting parts BUT try slightly slowing down the sway [456] before accelerating into the hand lotus on [7] 2:28 arms should come up on second “bwa” 2:31 li and colleen should do a head roll when coming up (matching vivian and katie) 2:35 [5678] review counts here on arms, should be [triplet on 5 + a 7] right on words. extend arms fully here minus audrey bridge overall needs to be drilled down more, appears to have been brushed through [LaLaLaLa] 2:38 make sure arms come down at the same time for “fire” 2:39-2:53 sleigh girlies sing those lahs 2:42 everyone can bend more for the last “la” 2:52 [bad] can have a slight reverb before stopping into the milked [villain] [Go CRAZY] 2:56 again, set moves for this part and clean in groups; this entire sequence at the end should be super high energy 2:56 energy needs to absolutely EXPLODE during this section or it will come out flat. stay really grounded during [123] almost stomping before the switch on [4+] to light feet & cross steps. hulk arms down needs to be held strongly down and in place while feet goes nuts 3:01 [1, 2+3+4+] i genuinely have no idea what anyone else in BV is doing here groove wise EXCEPT emma - if yall are following her then this vid for the amapiano groove could be helpful but just follow the leg & weight shakes ua-cam.com/video/64iHc91Ho-M/v-deo.html OR actually if you reference One Dance’s badvillain the way Kachi does this (and the next) groove is chefs kiss: ua-cam.com/video/v7csMqra5HI/v-deo.html dance break needs most drilling, set moves to what feels most doable & matchable with everyone 3:03 [5+6+7+8+] Li is doing this groove most correct (unless yall set it to smth else). Arm rows should be coordinated with step[5678] & knee bevel[++++] 3:08 wonky spacing but strong finish

0:09 sam be careful of walking, do correctly 0:13 vivian 'bad' spiderman hand can be higher up 0:14 Vivian and audrey 'villain' bring ur left leg in instead of right, kyla can tuck in chin more for villain 0: 15 vivian kick 0:16 audrey and colleen can be lower 0:17 colleen step with ur right foot 0;20 colleen keep look right until u place ur right foot center 0;35 sam remember toe out in instead of in out 0:38 li throw ur hands on the end of motion or on the snare 0:49 kyla can initiate faster 0:51 kyla spin on girl instead of bad girl, on bad put right foot behind to prep spin 0:58 we should aim to be one step away from line position on spicy, leave faster(?) 1:03 li drop ur head when doing the ripple idk if it's bc u didn't have a lot of space 1:04 viv on pain u can be more up lvl wise 1:05 colleen look to the side when doing the bendy arm thingy 1:06 colleen look to the front for straight arm thingy 1:07 kt and li can go lower lvl wise 1:08 kt and colleen fully extend hand up for 'best' 1:09 everyone can make the right arm swipe on 올라 ' olla' bigger 1:10 the finger flicks viv lvl should be lower than shoulder lvl 1:14 the timing of the chest tap different with the 5 ppl in front 1:15 audrey lvl is good but head can be slightly tilted up 1:16 colleen ur arm circles can touch ur face 1:19 head spin li- it goes too much too the side than around Viv - incomplete head spin Colleen - beginning of head spin should start on the left but u go bottom right and then around Kyla - ur head doesn't go back u cut it off too early Audrey - same as colleen, going g down right instead of left 1:18 audrey left arm is up for a millisecond too long 1:21 li ur arm should be more angled towards ur face 1:23 match kylas head angle or mine, kt(?) And colleen don't look to the right completely, should be angled / eyes looking at hand, everyone else look at hand 1:25 viv ur last arm should hit in front of ur shoulders Li ur arm should be fully extended upwards after hitting down

Notes for armageddon: - me and gen can do more of a head for shoong (0:05) - li and gen can flex ur wrist for armageddon (0:07), aespa doesn't do it but I think it looks cooler - 0:14 gen can be faster with the pointing section (everything else was good) - Sam can do more of a head drag during "true" (match Li and colleen) - colleen u can full extend arm more for done (0:41) - 1:11 Li can get into line faster but I think that was a one time thing? -1 :27 sam higher arms - 1:37 gen I think ur arms can be sharpens for I'm gonna see - 1:42 already mentioned at pracky but colleen ur hands can be lower (cover mouth area) - 1:44 idk if u did this durinf first chorus but gen, u can speed up the hand for imma get and the head tilt should stay tilted (u brought it back to center for "done" ) and then "done" ur arm can go up faster - 2:05 sam what - 2:08 colleen, I can't tell if u did head not bc li covered but just in case u can make it bigger And then try not to forget the stuff we set for part 3!!!

0:15 - joann feet too wide after turn 0:16 - rai l8 for arm up 0:18 - jeydan and rai, extend inner hand b4 turning 0:18 - after turn, every except me and joann, lean out 0:19 - izzy moves 0:21 - first arm is forehead / eyes - rai 0:22 - izzy, the rest of the arms are mouth 0:24 - izzy forgetting the spin around b4 clapping 0:25 - everyone but me l8 to the floor 0:26 rai look at hand 0:30 - rai l8 for down, joann i think is early 0: 32 - 33 - rai lvl change can be bigger and head is facing floor 0:33 - izzy ur body orientation should be matching rai 0:37 - rai hit in 0:42 - izzy separate the hand movement and the down movement, (hands should not be on head when going down) 0:45 - its a lvl change - izzy 0:47 - izzy look forward 0:50 - sam early for jump, everyone else is l8 (its on se) , izzy didnt do jump 0:52 - rai slightly l8, izzy can have faster initiation plus left arm angle too high up , jeydan keep ur right hand on head and commit to the move 0:53 - izzy kick in front of ur body not to the side, and dont put left arm straight up when ur doing (giyeok) 0:54 - izzy ur elbow is slanted the opposite direction, jeydan ur early for this hit ,0:54 - rai stop looking back, u did it two different times in the span of two seconds 0:55 - rai ur hands are too high and jeydan urs are too low (for the helicopter hands) 0:59 - jeydan you didnt do (say my name) hand move, izzy u didnt do urs high enough, for “name” hand should be a fist 1:00 - ik we cant do postitions in this room but i think this one needs to be relooked at 1:01 - jeydan, hand explosion move should be higher up 1:01 - izzy body orientation and arms wrong 1:02 - “neo” hand is on mouth @ izzy and joann 1:03 - everyone should be kicking heels in reference me 1:02 - 1:04 - izzy 1:05 - sam dont do the circle hand thing, izzy late to getting down 1:09 jeydan try not to cover ur face, izzy dont close ur hand 1:11 - everyone can get up faster (was done better in the 2nd chorus) 1:16 - joann and izzy have clearer hands, izzy u skipped a move, jeydan joann rai cut off the circle, should go fully around b4 landing on shoulder 1:18 - rai and joann early for jumping (is on the 2nd bass) and early for the arm swoopy thing 1:21 - jeydan and rai did not complete the third arm hit 1:22 - strong arm pose hit is toward center @ rai and jeydan 1:25 - jeydan u should be 30 degrees out and closer to izzy, everyone look at hand, 1:25 - rai and izzy up faster 1:27 -izzy its not a full body shift to the side, its shoulder move 1:31 - jeydan lunge outwards 1:37 - jeydan head up for clarity, sam dont turn head so fast 1:39 - izzy match me and rais leg positioning, jeydan can be more down, rai upper body should be facing front, sam can be more up Not gonna look at the feet for this next section 1:43 - jeydan nod 1:44 - first punch everyone be faster, match my speed but i can keep it up for longer (placing rather than punching) 1:47 - left side is diff than right side 1:48 - izzy bigger arms Gonna ignore 2nd chorus 2:15 - everyone change positions on “lou” 2:18 - izzy move out, jeydan move in 2:20 - izzy and jeydan upper arm too high, shouldnt be past ur head 2;21 - jeydan left arm should also be on ur face 2:22 - izzy didnt do the move, jeydan didnt any of the moves 2:23 - rai l8 for head over swipe 2:24 - lvl down is not rippling , ur kick can be better 2:26 - ripple up: jeydan, u go after joann and rai, izzy dont do the arm swipe down the first time 2:29 - jeydan didnt do the move, izzy was l8 for the first two moves 2:38 - everyone but me was early for the head turn, what are the lvls 2:42 - jeydan, lower level for deja 2:46 - izzy later for leaning to the other side 2:48 - jeydan 2:50 -izzy 2:54 - jeydan and izzy, the say it louder should be near the mouth 2:55 - jeydan early for turn around

I think kt can lift head up faster 0:07 - we can all try to match tiff with the head turn ( especially for the first turn) 0:15 - tiff make sure ur stepping with the “u stay, u still” to a more 45 degree angle (everyone can kinda work on this too) 0:16 - the arm up pose, the left side can have their other arm more down (ie. match kachi & tiff) 0:20 - “i got push push” taylor and kt decide how high the first push is, and then taylor match kts second push timing b4 te claps 0:21 - taylor dont forget the down down (but i think this only happened for this take so no worries) 0:23 - taylor grab ur right wrist with ur left hand 0:23 - 25 - kt u can lift ur head a little more since it gives a diff feel than the other two 0:25 - “yeah” head roll, kachi try to iso the head more and don’t move ur body with this 0:26 - the two hand placements b4 the mouth covering move is on “eo tteon” (kachi has timing best?) 0:26 - when coming up for mouth, kachi look up but can look back down after the throws 0:28 - u can stay in center longer, niki stays a beat after ggeo jeo (try to make sure ur in line with center (kinda hard with werb floors tho) 0:32 - joanne & kachi, match li and taylors lvl (hunched over) 0:34 - “eobs eo” li, ur arms can be more angled to a 45 036 - will make sure to check positions next pracky 0:38 - tiff l8 to crossing arms, taylor early to crossing arms 0:53 - make sure we start moving on the echo “yeo nae” instead of anticipating 0:54 - sam dont do that pose on cheo 0:56 - we can make the first move of the sequence (the slide be more of a blade 0:59 - tiff u can raise ur fists more 1:01 - kachi u can put fists down as u get up 1:02 - kachi u can take a little bit longer doing the two elbow moves 1:10 - kt & taylor tuck ur head down b4 doing the shouting move (can ref me) 1:15 joanne u can make the two punches (deu reo wa deu reo wa) longer or make sure ur hitting a wall 1:16 joanne the first pass the mic arm can be straighter 1:16 kt body orientation should be 45 by the first pass the mic instead of the second pass the mic 1:24 - kachi can fix arm timing 1:25 - li and joanne ur feet can be together 1;27 - joanne when doing the two finger flicks, try to make the arm lvl consistent at shoulders instead of going up and then down 1:29 - kachi the second pass the mic arm should be 90 degrees instead of straight down Make sure we complete the 4 heel turn move b4 getting into next position 1:42 - kt and kachi be more 30 degrees by “you still” Joanne and taylor dont be 30 degrees until “you still”

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0:14 heads turn differently and at diff times, the hips after are initiated differently by each person 0:18 le sserafim holds onto their forearms for this move - Rai can extend arms more and unbend the knee 0:31 for this move, I think bending more into this move would help the orientation of it. Vivian does a good example 0:37 everyone make sure to kick up at the same angle 0:44 Rai should pivot her foot on her toes to really get that hip moving (reference other members). Also keep the leg in the next move up for the full 2 beats (0:45) 0:51-0:53 Rai can add more hip movement 1:04 I wanna see commitment for this ass shaking move! Don’t end it too early. I wanna see u guys eat this up! also Rai move in closer to Sammy or Vivian move out a bit to make positions even 1:08 Sammy make sure not to rush arms 1:12 I know this move is hard to synchronize, buuuuut I would like to see a bit more. There is a hiccup in the move when some people turn to the other side 1:23 this move should be a swipe across the chest once facing forward 1:26 make sure everyone’s body and feet are oriented in the same direction. When doing the ass and kick up move, both legs should be visible to the audience 1:30 SLAAAAAY! Also Rai should control the shoulder so it only hits forward. There was a bit of reverb 1:33 Sammy did hand and head movement early 1:37 timing of hand coming to the chest and moving down needs work 1:38 all hips should start to the right 1:41 Rai step forward and into the roll on “loser, loser” (will look saucier ) 1:43 sync up those hands ladies 1:45 Rai turned early 1:46 Rai make sure to have front leg out like Kat (mirroring other side) 2:04 because this move is also super simple and just hips, you guys should really feel yourselves during it. Lean into each step a bit more. 2:13-2:15 I know Chaewon adds a texture and hits her hip more towards the front once the hands come in front of your hips. It may help this move sync up a bit, but the group can decide to add it or not. 2:20-2:24 Rai can isolate the move during her part more and draw out the first hip, but I think in this take it was just a mess up 2:27-2:35 the positions here are too spread out. If you reference lsf, they are much closer and pop forward when they sing, while the person who just sang replaces their position in the line. (replacing starts post Kazuha’s rap when chaewon pops up to sing) 2:38 Kat can be closer in; all previous critiques about chorus moves still apply in the 3rd chorus 2:51 Sammy needs to sync the lil steps up even while moving 2:53 Mavi make sure not to kick for this last chorus 2:54 ending pose can be held a little longer before lowering arms All in all I wanna see my cunty queens slay~

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Overall: Work on textures, setting moves, and cleanliness. Referencing the dance practice, Enhypen focuses a lot on the different textures (especially tensing their movements and then releasing). Using the different textures will really help the performance to look a lot bigger and dramatic compared to it being one toned. Focus on setting moves between members as many of the times they are very different, this dance itself is very detailed so make sure to set the different angles and movements (like the one isolation part in the chorus). Use the next couple practices focusing and familiarizing yourselves with the moves as there is a bit to clean. You guys have good energy, so adding everything above and below will really help enhance your result! Good luck :)) 0:04 up is off timing, make sure to make a koooooonngg kind of initiation. Same for hands in a few seconds later 0:07 hands up timing, be more right and controlled to get them synced and powerful 0:09 niki jake jay and heeseung all go down on a specific timing, not just down straight out of the movement. Position can be tighter 0:12 the spread out takes two beats, theres like a prep before they slide and then the actual slide out 0:13 clean arms. When you place them down it should be much sharper 0:14-0:16 fix shoulder angles and positon. First set: Kachi’s chest is more stuck out, sherly’s whole torso is leaned, alex isn’t leaning much. Second set: sherly’s shoulder is more forward, kachi’s booty is out. Izzy follow what jay does, ik it’s your center part but you should do the level changes too. 0:17 clean this section, alyssa and li don’t come up in the same way. Sherly preps with her arm, overall sharpness/timing of everyone coming up is off 0:19 line can be more spread out and even 0:19-0:22 timing is off on turning. It’s step then turn, dont turn immediately out of the line. There’s a head turn all together that you’re missing, its super fast and sharp but make sure you hit it 0:23 lines should be farther out, make sure to hit the lines before you go down for the next move. On the last move on dilemma drag it out slightly, don’t drop the arms early 0:25 everyone move together our of this move, its clear in jungwon and jakes movements 0:26 everyones head should be down until the first hand hit down. Fix angles of elbows and arms when they’re at the top, alex is more hunched and sammy is more up, clean these 0:28 timing going into this move, watch angles and positon. Alyssa and li are bent further than everyone else 0:30 clean arms and body orientation going down, enha all does the same thing 0:31 getting up timing off 0:32 position too wide and deep, enha positions are super close. Everyone can crunch from front to back and kachi and sherly can move in. kachi arms can be higher on “hot” of “like hot summer” Legs are different, everyone should twist like sherly. Alex isnt moving his leg at all. Set head orientation 0:33 on “na na na” the level goes down and head goes out, not very noticeable change in the vid 0:35 sharper arms, set placements 0:37 pretty good but slight placement issues towards the end of this nanana section 0:38-0:41 clean whole section 0:42 again izzy do what jay does 0:43 move at the same time 0:43-0:58 alyssa and sherly’s positions are switched? 0:44 they do a look down and snap up right before the chorus, alex is the only one that kind of does it, can be cleaner tho 0:44-0:46 Steps are not together, some people do extra Arms are not together, placements out and after the circle out Enha’s legs are much higher on the hit Arms out on the hit, izzy has wrong arm out, levels are different 0:46 these moves are much bigger, heads and shoulders and overall levels need to be distinct 0:47-0:50 same as previous critiques 0:51 after the arm spinny thing, the arm across neck should initiate the head turn, niki does it v clearly. 0:52 the slidey leg is off, set timing and distances 0:57 same critiques for the repeating parts 1:09 sherly is too forward and out 1:10 clean whole section arms should be more strong and kind of ricochet off the hits at the mouth Legs aren’t together for the steps Going down legs and arms and overall initiation is off The kick back rearing up thingy should be much more controlled, it doesn’t have to be big but more together. Movement all together makes it look bigger overall Be more confident in the steps out 1:15 hits timing is good but make them muchhhhh sharper 1:19 sammy late, textures on this, li is softer, angles on leaning back and set hands 1:21 this has more of a relaxed back and forth bounce 1:30 overall look of this is good but between each member there are very apparent differences in how they pop. sherly does it most accurately with the heel lifts as well. Hand placements too 1:34 jump hit up is off, alex missed head roll after 1:35 timing for going down should be more together 1:36 kneeling levels on the ground are different 1:37 angles up are off, they turn very sharply 45 to the left 1:38 arms should be cleaned, timing, angles and placement 1:39 arm up and down timing is off. In out head tilt thing is less together in the dance practife but make sure the strength and timing is still together. 1:41 Make the arms for “like a” very obvious and sharp. 1:42-1:48 The level changes and moves have to be a lot bigger for this whole sequence. Set if you’re going to look down or up during this sequence. 1:47 Make sure the last “la” is an even lower level change. (Reference Li) 1:49 Alex 1:51 Head turns are all different timing and the angle of how far people look are different. (Izzy is looking all the way while Alex is looking less) 1:55 Izzy has to get to her formation faster, she should go in front of Alex and when she pops up she can use that to jump back into her position. Also everyone should get up sharper. 1:55-2:17 Reference the critiques from the first chorus. 2:18 Kachi make the throw a lot sharper for your part. (Reference how Sunghoon does it in the dance practice) 2:20 Set timing for when leg comes up. Alex and Alyzzer can move a tiny bit out. Izzy brought her leg up late. 2:21 Izzy is late for the arm out. Kachi does a kick step into the head turn move. Head turn angles are different between Kachi and Sammy. 2:23 Sherly can move up more so that Sammy and Kachi doesn’t have to move back to match her for the shoulder stop. 2:23 Sammy and Kachi need to make the shoulder stop sharper. 2:24 Sammy is early for the up down and she should switch her leg so that it is mirroring what Kachi is doing. 2:25 Alyzzer and Alex should get up faster. 2:31 Everyone should keep their heads down for the formation change and pop up with their hands when Izzy starts singing. 2:32-2:34 Legs need to be a lot more obvious and closer together. (Sherly is the closest) Overall the formation should be really tight. 2:36 Arm angles should be the same for Sherly, Alex, Li, Kachi. And arm angles should be the same for Sammy and Alyzzer. 2:36-2:37 This sequence has to be so much sharper. Set the arm moves, can’t really tell what the moves are. 2:39 Everyone should be in line with their partner. Alex and Sherly should be in the same line. 2:44-2:49 Set and clean this. 2:50 Alex. 2:51-2:55 Timing, moves, angles are different between the majority of members. 2:57 Sherly should move back, match Kachi and Kachi can move in the tiniest bit. 2:57-3:09 Reference critiques from the first chorus. 3:10 Make sure you guys are stepping on the same foot. This whole sequence should also be set again, the moves are not clear so it is hard to tell what is right or wrong. 3:12 Kick forward and level changes have to be so much more obvious. Sherly should bend lower to match everyone's level. 3:14-3:15 The textures going into the “bounce” should be very sharp and then the “bounce” should be a relaxing(?) move. The bounce timing is slightly off between members. Body orientation is different. Elbows should be tucked so that it's not visible. Sammy can spread her legs more. 3:16 The “hits” should be bigger and sharper. 3:19 Getting up is different from how Enhypen does it. They lean their head and body backwards/sideways and bring their arms up to their chest and then bring it down. 3:22 Position is off.

this was such a slay <33 butttt there are a lot of details both big and small that can be looked over again. in general, it would help a lot if positions were looked over again and make sure to clarify pathways because once positions are unclear, then the formations look off and then the following positions would be off and it becomes a chain reaction. overall, it would also help to set and clean the small details to make the dance look cohesive because everyone’s textures, power, energy, and body control is different. embrace the inner girl boss stank and really know when to exaggerate or emphasize certain moves that will bring the energy higher!! critiques start here: 0:00 beginning formation can be tighter and not as deep - sammy and izzy can back up closer to the trio in the middle - lauren, mavi, and kat can be closer together (shoulders should be right next to each other) and can also be in the same line 0:08 izzy make sure your head is down until sammy starts singing then your head looks forward 0:12 timing was off - sammy should get into center faster so that there is a moment where everyone but izzy is in center and then everyone disperses - once the formation becomes closer, it will make it easier for sammy to get into center - pathways wise, sammy can just walk to her right after the starting position 0:14 izzy make sure to execute the solo part with more body control and tension in the moves; be sassy!! 0:16 izzy should be in the front line with mavi 0:18 set pathways for the arms 0:19 this position should be closer together with foot behind the foot of the person in front of you 0:20 - the leg angles are all different, mavi does this move the best but the legs can be higher - it’s more of a leg lift with the leg directed at 45 degrees (think of your legs making a v) - arm pathways are different, lauren does this move the best - the arms should scoop from your hip to your chest, then over your head - mavi scooped the opposite direction 0:22 okkk hair flip <33 0:26 - stance shouldn’t be that wide so that way the leg raises can come up higher (match sammy’s height) - set the hands for this part (e.g. izzy has her hands fisted while mavi has hers flat) - make sure not to throw the arms down, there should be a slight bend in the elbows and hips should sway from left to right - also make sure that the hands make a clear switch from the left to the right side of the body during this part - for the arms, reference mavi 0:30 this formation can be closer depth-wise 0:32 kat can move closer to the rest because she needs to be able to get to the next position by the second skip 0:33 sammy make sure not to step before putting your heads above your head, it should be one move 0:34 this should be a clear diagonal, kat sets the diagonal since she just walks to the right so everyone sets around her 0:35 - everyone match kat and mavi’s legs for this part (width, angle, and height) - sammy don’t make this position change drastic, take baby steps to match mavi’s line 0:36 izzy was early going down 0:37 - set arms - for front line, kat has the most accurate timing for the twerks except don’t lean too far forward - for back line, the booty pops can be emphasized more and make sure that when you squat, that there is a sharp and distinct level change 0:38 - izzy and lauren make sure that after you jump to face forward, that your hands go to your sides (e.g. izzy puts her hands in front of her and lauren alr preps for the next move) - mavi, lauren, izzy, and kat make sure that your arms go right, then left (reference sammy) 0:40 sammy late to getting down 0:42 lauren, kat, izzy, sammy set arm placements and arm pathways for when getting up 0:44-0:45 - everyone make sure to prep by stepping with the right foot, then the left - the head turns should be on “nunape”, on “nu” everyone looks to their left almost looking over the shoulder, on “na” everyone except mavi looks to their right 0:46 everyone’s arm levels and make sure everyone’s hands are hovering the person to your right’s chest 0:50 sammy late to putting arm down 0:52 - make sure that the formation stays in a line for this part - set hands - izzy should move her left arm behind her ear more - mavi does the arms the most accurately while izzy does the legs the best for this part (every time the foot comes down, there should be an apparent hip shake) 0:54 - make sure not to start moving until the arms come up and down - set the arms over the head, everyone has different angles and orientations - also set the speed of the arms - the formation should be a diagonal, izzy can move in front of mavi 0:56 everyone except for mavi, make sure that the shoulder rolls are very distinct 0:57 everyone should get into their position before the arm punches because the two step move has to happen in the position 0:58 - izzy make sure not to cut off this move early - arms should punch down with elbows extended, reference kat - set legs here - add more power to this move 0:59 izzy can move faster into center so that mavi can do her solo moves while walking into position CHORUS 1:01 for the kick at the end of “micheo,” sammy does this move the best except make sure to look forward during the kick; mavi, izzy and lauren can exaggerate the right leg more, kat can lift her leg a little less and not lean forward as much 1:03 make sure to match each other’s arms and textures, some people are very loose with the arm swings and some are really tense with it; also here everyone can exaggerate the body rolls during the kicks 1:04 - match/set the feet for this part bc everyone’s looks different from each other when doing this move - for the arm pathways, make sure that the circles for “c-r-a-z-y” stay around the head and aren’t that big - the main focus point for the chorus should be the legs so make sure to focus on setting the width of the legs, how low everyone leans, and the leg angles - fingers for this should be the index finger and the thumb - the last leg orientation shouldn’t be facing directly 90 degrees, it should end a little less than 90 (60 degrees) 1:06 - on “ttara hae”, on “ttara” there should be a jump into 90 degrees, then hair flip on “hae” - everyone reference mavi and sammy, they do the hair flip the most accurately 1:07 same notes here, emphasize the body rolls, set the arms; kat can also move in 1:10 - make sure that the right leg takes another step when leading into the “c-r-a-z-y” - stance doesn’t have to be wide, reference mavi and lauren - reference kat for body orientation and body rolls - whatever is set for the arm circles for “c-r-a-z-y” should be the same here as well - set how high the legs should be lifted

1:12 make sure to sit on your right hip with both knees bent, looking straight up, fingertips touching and arms almost straight but still has a slight bend in the elbows, kat does this move the most accurately 1:13-1:16 - for this part, make sure that your weight is distributed evenly on both legs once you come up from the previous move. then, shift your weight to the left hip for the bounces. don’t immediately sit into the left hip. - for the arms, set levels for when the arms bounce on the side and for when the arms come up towards the head - also the movement for when the hand is framing the head should be smaller - everyone except sammy can add more energy and tension in their moves, reference kat but less head movements for the bounces - sammy for “michin geoscheoreom” make sure the chest pops are two distinct pops outwards. the first time you did it was correct, but then the moves got mixed up and it started going the opposite way. - note for everyone that eventually does this move too: the move should start by caving in the chest and shoulders, then pop the chest forward on the beats 1:18-1:22 everyone reference sammy’s hands, they should flick up at the end of every “michin geoscheoreom” 1:24-1:34 OKKKK go off rappers :pp overall, the adlib moves/gestures can be clearer (e.g. lauren stacking her hands(?) is a detail that can be cleaned) this part can easily seem messy if there is no body control, especially the end. also the energy died down a lot and the dance felt very weak as izzy and lauren left. make sure to keep the energy up while having fun and being swag!! 1:34 izzy should exit right while lauren exits left 1:35 - mavi match sammy’s hands, palms should be facing more inwards - sammy can lean back more while doing the hops - mavi does the arm pathway the best here (the elbow bend into the “whip” move should not be close to your body, sammy and kat are bending their elbow into their body then punching out while mavi makes the move rounder and punches out with less dramatic movement) 1:36 the trio here can make the cave-in chest pops more apparent 1:37 - timing for the arms here were off, sammy has the best timing and execution of the arm prep - kat and sammy make sure to not jump with legs together after the arm prep move and make sure the legs kick out towards the sides than behind, reference mavi’s legs for this entire part - set the arm throws levels wise and pathways since mavi and sammy do it differently PRE-CHORUS 1:39-1:45 same notes here as before 1:46 izzy should be behind kat more, make sure that there are distinct lines, kat can move closer to center, sammy can move in, match lauren, also set hand and arm placements here 1:48-2:04 same notes here as before 1:54 sammy was a teeny tiny bit late with the legs 2:04 mavi should walk in front of sammy and izzy to get to the next position 2ND CHORUS 2:05-2:16 same notes here as before 2:17 - the only people who should be looking up are kat and lauren in the back - mavi, sammy and izzy don’t look up, just slide into the next position - positions wise, mavi can move up a bit and sammy can move back a bit (meet in the middle as long as mavi and sammy’s line is in front of izzy) 2:18 izzy should start moving up at the first “michin geoscheoreom” and be at the front of the formation by the third “michin geoscheoreom” 2:18-2:20 same critiques here as 1:16-1:22 2:21 izzy should walk back into kat and lauren’s line and mavi can move back a bit to match sammy’s line 2:22-2:24: Sammy mistake on hand move, moved wrong hand first so timing was off. Was late to arm raise on 2:24 because of this 2:28: timing of hands moving up and the flick on “da gachi micheo” and also turning to the front, Sammy turned earlier than the rest to face front 2:33: front line of formation should be in line with each other 2:48: formation, Mavi take a step in, kat + Izzy take a step out. Clean timing on the hip pop moves, make sure you are popping the correct hip on the beat and not on the off beat 2:58 OKAY EATT… overall everyone to the left of Izzy take a slight step out so the formation is even also same as before, set / follow arm positions for “c-r-a-z-y” 3:04: Mavi missed the move on “ttara hae” 3:09 match timing of arms to Izzy so you are hitting the rhythm of the lyrics better, Sammy take a slight step inward OKAYYY SLAY

1:30 - set arm levels 1:30 - alex bring arm higher 1:38 - alex come in more but we should go over the formations anywwys

beginning formation - ton/drea move in more (feet to feet with sammy and angela) we should all be MUCH more condensed 0:22 - turn 3 land + shoot out 4 0:23 - for the shoot out match levels (ton/angela do i the best) (sammy/alex can get a bit lower shooting out) 0:24 - sammy come in just a litttttle bit quicker 0:31 - drea/matt come down a little quicker 0:32 - LOL sammy doesn't need to scurry to position so quickly (we'll go over timing but everyone should get up on 8) 0:34 - the step into this position should be pretty noticeable/big (go over formation for this again) 0:34 - tiff/angela don't do the step early (everyone should step on 1) 0:36 - ton step with the opposite legs 0:38 - matt make the turn bigger 0:41 - honestly just nit picking this but the pop would look evennn better if we put more power into it 0:44 - even though its free, everyone get down low for this (ton milk it out a littttle more maybe) 0:45 - go over what the arm/hand placement should be again 0:46 - positioning : left side out more (feet slightly outside of person in front of you's foot) 0:46 - the arms here r kindaaa free but ton/alex follow generally what everyone else is doing 0:46 - tiff don't come up too early 0:46 - alex arms r first ( go over angle for arm again) 0:47 - go over kick timing/move again 0:48 - alex don't forget to bring arms back and back around 0:50 - matt drop hand first 0:53 - matt don't bring hand up so high (ear level highest) 0:53 - for this part all of our heads should be slightly tilted 0:54 - tiff don't forget to shoot the arm up the second time 1:02 - LOL tiff switch hands 1:02 - alex keep right wrist flexed 1:05 - angela just a taddd late for that sequence CHORUS 1:10 - alex don't rush the hand going out/scooping up sequence 1:10 - tiff for this position just make sure to be out a little (ur kinda covered) 1:11 - matt and tiff don't rush punching out (prep shoulder then punch out) 1:12 - matt look to the side ! 1:14 - tiff for the arm circle wave thing have it be more 90 degrees horizontal/above ur head 1:18 - lets set to hand across forehead actually 1:22 - matt keep the arm thats down behind ur back 1:26 - alex watch the hand pathways for this part

delicious yall slayed here are some tiny critiques: 3:22 timing for three stomps did not match overall 3:29 timing and pathways for putting arm down should be clarified 3:36 izzy and colleen can move in to match katie and dom 3:45 throwing arms around can be cleaner still super yummy though great job there were some parts where it lacked energy and overall, everyone’s textures were different. there were definitely some parts that were cleaned super well :DD but in general i think that a couple more practices would help everyone get on the same page for expressing the vibe of the song, making sure everyone is giving stage presence as if you were filming, clarifying how much energy should be put in or taken away, etc. small mistakes with timing and levels , but overall good and fixable in the short term. some details are lost like hand angles (which seems pretty important in this dance) and some members look unsure of what they are doing You guys definitely improved from the last video sent in however: -many of the fixes written on the critique list were not fixed. -0:46-0:51 Izzy rather messed up did not complete the move. -energy is still visibly lacking. -The main focus of this choreo is the popping moves however those moves were not really shown (especially during the chorus). The way people “popped” were different, some would use their chest (example: Colleen) while some would use their whole body (example: Mavi). -Positions were still off where one side would be close or further out than the other. -Many of the fixes and critiques are more detail/texture oriented so if you guys can get that down, that would be so swag! Yass slayed, only thing to watch out for is make sure the lift at the beginning is super clean + watch timing when everyone sits down on the ground towards the beginning

Overall- The moves can be a lot more exaggerated and bigger. Most of this dance focuses on the hits and popping so making those bigger would be berry good. 0:21- Colleen make sure to do more of a hit than a wave down the body during the three hits in the music. Niki isolates his body more than doing a wave down. 0:24-0:25- the hand sequence that Katie and Mavi does is different from each other. 0:28- Sammy is slightly late to the crawl. 0:29- during the crawl make sure everyone touches the floor during the first slide and for the second slide everyone brushes their hand across their mouth area. 0:30- Izzy turns too early and hits the beats late when getting up. 0:31- overall the body hits can be a lot more dramatic and bigger. 0:34- The left side can match the right side in terms of position. 0:37- There should be a hit to getting up. Refer to Katie. 0:40- Dom can move in. 0:41-0:42- Set and clean this section. Every time theres a hit in the beat, everyone should also match that texture of hitting, 0:43- going down and getting up time is different for everyone. 0:43- Li and Izzy can move out to the left slightly to match the right side. 0:45-0:49- Set hand details and head orientation for this section. 0:47- The elbow hit can be a lot bigger and sharper. 0:49- set how and when heads are going to come up. Izzy brings her head all the way back then props it up while Li doesn’t exaggerate it as much. 0:50- Izzy don’t tilt your head for the hand reach. 0:57- Some people are looking up while some are looking down. 1:02- initiation of getting up is different between members. Some start from their chest while some start from their hip. 1:03- Also set the head after getting up. CHORUS 1 1:16- Positions are uneven, right side can move in. 1:18- Body orientation for the body wave is different, Izzy is faced a lot more inwards than other members. 1:19- The head wave is different. Sammy exaggerates a lot more than others. 1:20- Li and Katie looks forwards while the rest looks to the side. 1:25-1:28- Pops can be a lot bigger. 1:29- Sammy can move in towards center. 1:33-1:35- Set chest roll initiations and angles. 1:36- Sammy can move in. 1:43- Hand flick timing is different. 1:48- Left side can move out less. 1:50-1:54- Colleen and Dom’s timing is a slightly different from other members. 1:55- Mavi can move in a little more. 1:56- Dom can do the arm roll up faster. 2:11-2:13- This sequence slayed. 2:13- Positions are not even. 2:16-2:19- Refer to critiques above. CHORUS 2 Please refer to the comment made in chorus 1 as well 2:23 this position can be a bit tighter, katie and mavi can come closer. For reference katie and mavi’s inside feet should be aligned with sammy and colleen’s outside feet 2:25-the jam shi move can be a bit sharper, since its dom’s part he can look at the camera, everyone else looks at their hands 2:26 during 허락된 everyone should longingly look at your hands 2:29 right reaching over move should begin w elbow at shoulder level, then reach down, work on timing for placement 2:34 mavi and dom can come in closer 2:40 be mindful of head movement, you can add your own style (i referenced the stage cam for the extra pizazz ua-cam.com/video/UI3giAhobRw/v-deo.html 2:25) 2:48 when izzy appears everyone else should look towards her 2:52 kt and li lower your elbows to be below your shoulders, when you straighten the arms mavi make sure to extend 2:56 li look at your hand 3:11 initiate moving in by walking first then duck very low in a U motion 3:16 kt go lower 3:19 KICK, (place kicking foot down), SPIN drop, prep, ARM SWIPE in the prep position dom and sammy make sure to have both balls of your feet on the ground Everyone should start facing back for the prep and reveal head and chest gradually Sammy and colleen keep your pelvis mostly towards the center and keep the the knee angle small 3:23 if theres a level distinction make it more obvious, otherwise set levels for standing back up 3:28 emphasize pelvis/hips for this body roll 3:31 position lines unclear 3:35 set head motion and windmill arm motion 3:38 izzy make sure to stay in line, mavi shoot 3 times before going down 3:40 set timing for coming up, they do a little shrug then place gunpoint 3:43 enha pushes their arms out here 3:48 set timing for arms coming around 3:50 position can be much tighter, shoulder to shoulder sley ate

1:25 jonny when you end up in front of tony, your feet should be facing the back and your whole back should be facing the camera also jonny the head turn should be from facing tony to looking to the right on the beat of the head turn, tony should also be looking at jonny and should be taking a step out while putting his weight onto his left foot 1:28 jonny make sure feet are on the ground (reference sammy) tony can add more swag to his parts dont be shy!! izzy can get closer to the side of tony and the pointing should be coming less from behind and more parallel to tony when looking at each other 1:29 go over timing and clean this sequence 1:33 tony review these moves again izzy, sammy, and jonny set the arm placement, feet orientation, and levels of this sequence (for reference i think sammy does it most accurately to kard) 1:37 tony dont walk away early, match izzy’s timing 1:40 tony make sure to stay out of frame for jonny and sammy’s part until you come back in (reference izzy) 1:43 the timing should be a ripple with sammy turning first, then jonny, izzy, and tony follow after (sammy and jonny does this the most accurately) 1:50 jonny and tony should be taking a step towards the right to be behind izzy and sammy, while izzy and sammy take a step to the left 1:52 sammy and izzy set levels for how low you go 2:00 tony make sure you look left until the second icky, then you face the front (reference sammy) 2:13-2:17 review and clean moves for this duo section 2:21 sammy can move in closer 2:30 izzy is off center 2:32 jonny keep feet together, jonny and sammy match tony’s body orientation for the shoulder hits 2:37 izzy spun too early 2:44 set and clean this sequence, everyone was doing it differently 2:51-2:55 slayyy moves wise, this is good but focus on textures (this entire sequence can be more powerful since it’s towards the end and it’s a completely different choreo than the other choruses), also formations wise, there shouldn’t be four lines (sammy and tony should be in one line and the formation should look like a diamond) 2:56 everyone match jonny’s texture for swinging the arm, it should be more fluid and make sure the shoulder initiates the swing, don't just move the wrist 2:57 sammy can lean back on your back leg more for the two kicks 3:00 izzy come closer to center tony match jonny’s line jonny’s execution of the kicks are the most accurate for this section, everyone reference him (except maybe not as wide of a stance) set arms also don’t rush!! make sure to finish the wrist turns before you go to the next move izzy the arms for when doing the wrist turns dont have to go that high up (the first wrist turn should be at the same level you hit your wrists at, then it goes chest level for the second time) tony make sure your wrists hit together (reference jonny for entire section) 3:02 set hands for everyone only the girls swing their hips left and right, jonny and tony should only isolate the legs left and right 3:07 tony make sure to do the head nod on the beat and move out a little, jonny make sure not drag out the head nod, it should only be an up/down movement

overall, positions can be looked over in more detail and a review of moves in certain sections can help with cohesion. also, make sure to pay attention to textures throughout the dance. textures should be similar among everyone even with this being a co-ed song and each member having their own musicality. you can add much more energy and tension, otherwise the moves look loose and lazy just because of the very chill style of dance. don’t be afraid to give more than kard!!!!!!!!!! critiques start here 0:06 position is off, izzy move out more. Izzy and sammys inside feet should be center Spread legs wider, izzy definitely and i can’t tell with sammy but in dance practice they are super open. Your feet should be facing so outward that your heels almost touch 0:13 Tony late hands up, if anything the guy actually starts slightly before jonny’s guy but it looks like they aim to hit the arms together. Set amongst yourselves but tony def late Izzy lean your hips toward center Izzy and sammy can both have more tension coming up, it feels to fluid and fast. In the dance practice they don’t get all the way up before they move, so really drag it out and focus on keeping the shape of your bodies 0:16 keep moving until you hit this pose, izzy esp you landed in your spot before the pose and it lost some of its impact. Jonny and tony can also move out, no one should be overlapping on the beat of the pose, the movement should be sharp and clear Head look is off. They’re off in the dance practice too but set it for yourselves. Timing should be sharp 0:17 Tony and jonny do less of a choreographed walk, just be casual stinky man. Their feet are on beat but they’re pretty chill in the way they hold themselves Sammy and izzy have more tension, again draw out the move a bunch and focus on really painting a (sexy) picture Fixing the position before this will help since there were collisions, i think izzy and sammy could be closer together in addition to tony and jonny moving out, it’ll help us put our focus on both of u at once 0:20 Jonny and tony legs different Jonny straighten arm Tony lean back into the pose, it looks like youre leaning toward your hand Position is off. Jonny and tony move in, sammy move out a little so u and izzy are splitting center. It’s a little too far out, it’s like jonny and tony should be framing izzy and sammy 0:21 position should be much tighter, izzy should bareeeely be seen Hit on down should be MUCH sharper, enough that theres a reverb/rollback out of it into the next move 0:22 sammy for the big circle with the finger you can do more of a flick rather than keep your wrist bent up like that 0:23 the arm that’s not bent on chest should be completely down to the side 0:24 set hands and arm levels amongst everyone. Bottom hands, the girlies are doing hand flat down like a push, men are doing a crotch grab. Top arms can all be higher, again make it a frame for your head 0:25 positions wise, sammy should be completely in front of izzy until the body roll, then izzy can be seen behind izzy don’t let your arms swing, keep control of them and bring them down 0:26 clean this entire move. Set feet, levels, body rolls. Some people do three nods, it’s only two on the instrumental 0:27 jonny missed the arm thing, tony when you throw make it more purposeful and towards the camera 0:29 timing for the arms is so weird and technically ur doing it like the dance practice but i feel like it’s supposed to be oh my go (1) o (2) od (3)?? Up to you, just set arm heights and make it clean amongst yourselves 0:30 tony don’t circle your arm into this, leave it outside your torso Overall clean this move, timing for hands. Sammy has it closest. With the right hand, it should flick out before it comes to your forehead This is so hard to explain in words but bear with me :)) for the left arm down up and right hand flick out and to forehead, it should be four sharp even beats. Left arm down (1) left arm pull up (2) right hand flick out (3) right hand flick to forehead (4). The two flicks out afterwards should be a nice contrast and soooo smooth and longer than those four beats 0:32 arm angles, everyone straighten your arms. The gun downward should be much stronger and straighter. It’s fast but make sure you hit it 0:33 tony should move up to match jonny’s line the x shape should be completely pointed down. Arms straight and hands should be in front of crotch area 0:34 sammy your roll up should be completely forward, everyone else is on an angle but you arent. 0:35 levels and overall body shape for down. They’re very hunched and stinky man Sammy dont move your feet, keep them planted with your legs straight and move your hips that way 0:37 sammy put your left hand down after that one move (just reference dance practice). Head was off for everyone. Jonny turned early 0:39 Tony and jonny match body shape Position can be much tighter Izzy when you come forward move w ur booty more, also try to step with your feet closer together, it’ll help you move your hips more easily 0:39-0:46 men match your moves for this whole section 0:41 be closer together be sexy together dont be scared raaah 0:43 izzy make your moves bigger/more purposeful in this section 0:45 sammy i dont think you have to clap, it looks like she just did it kind of on instinct. It looks a little out of place honestly so i would take it out, but props to you for learning so accurately :DDDDD 0:46 clean this move, arms are off. Especially set where you’re going to initiate from 0:47 Sammy and izzy arms up should be done by “like” it’s faster than you’re doing it Tony and jonny set arms 0:48 sammy and izzy arm heights and body orientations are off 0:51 tony sammy and jonny should all be in a line behind izzy. Position can be tighter, sammy should be slightly covered 0:52-0:54 everyones arms are off, set specific places and angles and pathways CHORUS 0:55 pathways on “ima get” are different 0:56 arms and hand distances are off. Tony have more claws rather than loose wrists Body orientation really isn’t THAAAT sideways Legs are off too. It’s like a scoop like jonny’s doing, but smaller since their bodies arent very turned. They’re different from each other in the dance practice too but just set something amongst yourselves For the arms, when you open and close your hands the first time only move your wrist. This whole time the arms should be held in that open straight position and ooooonly your wrists should move 0:57 jonny your arms should still be in that position, you opened them to do the wrist thing. Izzy you too, watch your right arm Moving outwards on the first “ay” your arms should stilllll be in a line. Izzy it looks like your right arm is higher than your left 0:59 izzy dont drop the hand on your chest too early. Everyone set arm angles 1:00 timing for hand to throat was off. Tony tilt your head back like everyone else 1:01 jonny your hand clap has the back of your hand facing front, should be flat like a pancake (reference izzy and sammy). Tony too early on separating your hands. Placement of hands (height, distance away from body) is also off 1:02 pathways into this move off time. Set hands. Izzys are in fists while jonnys are very loose and sammy and tony are somewhere in between 1:04 arms all different. Everyone also holds their body different. Izzy should be the only open one, jonny sammy and tony are more hunched and tough looking 1:05-1:06 clean all hands for here 1:06 on the arms out sit down thing, generally pretty good but set height of arms, wrists bent or straight, distance from body, etc. 1:08 izzy be more distinct with this finger point move 1:09 Initiation of this move is all different. Set where your hands start from before going out formation overall can be tighter, jonny’s left shoulder should be completely behind izzy 1:11 jonny should be completely behind izzy after the step to the left and then everyone collectively takes a step back into center sammy there should be a clear change in levels for your flicks (first should be a little above the head and the second should be a little above the shoulders) 1:12 positions should be more like a diamond, tony can move in more and jonny can be more directly behind izzy 1:15 jonny make sure to keep your arms by your sides until the beat, dont prep the move (reference izzy); also when the arms are up, fists should be turned inward (palm of the hand should be facing towards the top of your head) 1:17 everyone except sammy, the impact can be bigger on the first icky and the first push, then the following hits can be softer 1:19 jonny dont make the transition fluid, make sure to get up and land with tension on the beat, then turn to the right to walk to the next position both jonny and tony can add more tension and make sure that when you freeze into the pose, the arms are crossed with your hands clasped together in front (reference izzy) izzy, with this same pose, take a wider stance to emphasize the body angles and lean a bit more towards sammy to help with that jonny, tony, and izzy make sure to look left when you pose tony and izzy should be facing the back but more at a 45 degree angle, while jonny is fully facing the back 1:21 set everyone’s hand placement and legs when you go down tony should take a step out to the left, not the right izzy don’t take too big of a step towards the right, you should end up standing directly behind tony 1:23 tony this move can be hit harder/more powerful; in the dance practice, jseph adds a head move which adds to the impact

August 30, 2023

some members still look uncomfortable with the parts that they have the energy change was very evident compared to the first attempt, and i think it did help with many of those minor timing issues. there was a lot less nitty gritty things, and honestly doing it over and over again will flatten out those minor details. just a few critiques: 1:42 the timing for the step behind the other foot was off 2:04-2:14 (which can apply to the other choruses) zoe: the hip circles with the hand movements are a little earlier than the others 2:50 sammy: putting a little bounce into your strut would give you that perfect sass (reference kyla) great job guys! Overall still lacks a lot of power and girl crush Moves are still messy and unclean throughout members I feel like there was a lot of improvement on timing issues since the first time, also the moves are sharper. There are still some small issues w timing / cleanliness but i think it’s still good to film. there are still a lot of tiny timing issues that just add up and look a little messy. i think one more practice could help if you just focus on running the song and getting comfortable and setting all of the timing can still work on varying the textures of some moves (like when to be softer and flowy or when to be sharp) there’s also still some timing issues

Overall critique: messy, many moves are not clean/set, some moves are different from the original choreo. But energy was not bad and has potential. Critiques for just the beginning to end of first chorus: 0:04- the snap forward each other is not synchronized. 0:07-0:10- Zoe can add more extensions and lean more into other members (be more sassy) 0:10-0:15- this kinda ate 0:16-0:21- Izzy needs to extend and make her moves more clearer, her girl in the practice video really launches herself and commits to her moves. 0:21- leg kick timing is different 0:22- during the steps backwards instead of going back neutrally add a little bit of a shoulder. 0:23- kick and hand over head timing is diff 0:25- during “hey” every should pose dramatically and then during “can you feel me now” you should turn to sammy dramatically as well. 0:26- chest pumps are diff timing. 0:29- head orientation is diff (follow sammy), also while setting back Kyla and Izzy add a little bit of head while stepping back (like sammy) 0:30- initiation for bringing the hand down is diff (sammy is the closest to the right timing) 0:32- timing for turning around is wrong (reference dance practice video) 0:33- Sammy don’t rush the finger pointing. Also set where you guys are pointing. 0:34- Kyla bring your hand up higher. This whole sequence needs to be a lot more clearer its very blended together, separate your moves. 0:36- the cross and open arm moves should be a lot bigger (to the point your hair flips). 0:40- when you guys step up and cross your arms make sure to bring your arms slightly up (follow Kyla). 0:40-0:42- clean the whole “back it up” sequence, everyones legs and arms are diff 0:45- the punch out for “talk that” needs to be a lot bigger and stronger. You should also lift your right leg to help make it bigger (follow Izzy’s leg). Also Kyla is moving the wrong foot. 0:50- clean hands and hip rotation for “on your lips.” 0:53- add more butt LOLZ. When you look at the dance practice they really emphasize when the butt goes out. 0:56- Izzy don’t move your head with your hip, it should only be your hip and your foot moving. The critiques are the same as the one above: add a lot more power to the punch back. 1:02- Izzy don’t look to the side. 1:04- during “baby” everyone should squat to make the up bigger. 1:05-1:12- clean and set this whole sequence. 1:13- timing is off for pointing (Kyla is late). 1:14- make chest pumps a lot bigger. varying energies across members and some members look unsure/not confident in the moves lots of timing issues throughout the entire song There should be more energy and deliberate playfulness Positions can be tighter 1st verse Last chorus can benefit from drilling group interactions can be played with more Chorus punches can be more explosive Could use more ass There are lots of differing head movements (chorus punches, and kicking break...looking forward vs looking to the side) good energy but could be more powerful during solo parts and hip/booty movement in the chorus. timing issues and noticeable differences during the kicking thingy before the bridge but other than that v fun watch. throughout the entire dance, i noticed that everyone's textures were different and didn't match the song's energy/vibe that much. the dance has a lot of fluid movements, body angles, and OMG THE ASS i think that a couple more practices to match moves and timing would def help but otherwise the sass and the attitude are sooo amazing!! the number one trouble spot is early/late timing, affecting body placements (arms, legs, etc.) and sharpness. being sharper and going through with full extensions when necessary will definitely help. this song and choreo are so energetic, so be sure to keep up that energy even when you're not center to prevent messy execution. spending more time on the minor details will make this cover more amazing than it already is, and that's what you should aim for! as a final thought, pop that bootay in all choruses ladies !!! there’s still some timing issues and cleaning that can be done- there also needs to be more energy and they can still be more flexible with textures (where to be sharp and where to be soft) arms are not always extended which leads to timing issues, some other slight timing issues as well. power and sharpness varies between members. maybe one or two more practices to drill everything and get stamina up :)) Overall this is really good!! I love the energy and vibes and the choreo looks great overall. I think overall they need to clean a little bit more, specifically making sure that angles and timing are the same. The formations also looked good overall but I would run them a few more times to make sure you can get in and out of them seamlessly. - watch timing and angles at 1:27 - 1:40 watch timing on for arm move and feet - For formation change near ~1:33-1:35, run a few times/ make sure ur comfortable with it. Moving backwards is tricky but you shouldn’t be looking backwards / towards ur next spot

general: the energy in this choreo is intense, they’re always moving, hopping, shaking ass, etc. with a good amount of timing errors, the energy falters slightly, but with cleaning you shouldn’t have to worry. be sure to accentuate, whether it be sharper arms, really planting those feet on the ground, or quick head turns, so you can create similar textures and an extra slay performance. i have never seen a choreo with so much ass, so really get into it in those specific moments. critiques start here :) 0:05 izzy is a little late for the turn and lifting arm up 0:06 timing for pointing and leaning in is off 0:08 kyla and sammy - should have a little head tilt moment on the drum beats 0:09 kyla and sammy - should be looking back after the turn 0:11 kyla - should have a head nod (reference sammy) 0:12 hip pop/head turn timing is off, the popping can also be sharper 0:15 zoe and izzy - this move can be sharper, especially the head turn (reference sammy) 0:23 the steps can be a little lighter and bouncy 0:24 sammy - a little late on the kick and kicks higher than everyone else for “too slowly” set the timing for lifting arms up 0:30 the body orientation and hands for the pose on “special” is a little off (reference sammy) 0:30 - 0:32 everyone - shoulders should be moving up and down instead of front and back, also there should be some more hip movement 0:32 - 0:33 the timing for the two turns are different (izzy’s timing is most accurate) 0:33 arm angle for this should be as square as possible (reference zoe) 0:34 kyla and izzy - don’t forget the second point 0:35 set the way you flap you hands and the timing is a little off, there’s also a level change on the second flap (you should be squatting a little) 0:42 - 0:43 izzy - footwork is off 0:42 set the pathway for right arm (reference kyla) 0:44 the timing for “and we go up” is off (reference sammy) CHORUS 0:47 zoe - make sure your left arm is 45 degrees (reference kyla and sammy) 0:49 kyla - make sure right arm is 45 degrees 0:51 kyla and izzy - a little late for lifting up your arm (reference zoe and sammy) 0:52 for “look so sweet” you should be touching your thumb to your ring finger 0:54 pop that bootayyy 0:55 the two points up should be sharper 0:57 same thing as above, make sure your left arm is 45 degrees 1:00 zoe - match kyla and sammy in terms of head and hip spin for “lips” 1:01 the timing for “groove like this” sequence is off, zoe does it most accurately 1:03 set how high you kick up your right leg (should be close to 90 degrees) 1:07 kyla - a little late for “yeah i really want” set the moves for this sequence, kyla does it most accurately 1:10 timing for bringing arms together is off (reference kyla) 1:25 - 1:28 the timing for jump/hops are off (kyla and izzy do it most accurately), you can also jump higher and kick leg up higher 1:35 izzy - a little late for head move 1:36 there should be another head bobble (?) move on “so special” (reference sammy) 1:37 izzy - late lifting left leg 1:38 kyla - a little early 1:39 timing for the two kicks are off, you should also touch your right foot when you kick it (reference sammy) 1:40 - 2:00 same thing as mentioned above SECOND CHORUS same critiques as first chorus 2:00 izzy - instead of lifting leg on the clap, lift on “that’s” to make it a bit earlier & for all - “that’s so sweet” should be ring finger to thumb instead of pointer to thumb 2:01 izzy - right hand should be under left elbow 2:02 shake it like you mean in !!!!!! should also be lifting heels off ground for that one extra booty pop 2:03 zoe - point up twice 2:04 look to left before pulling right arm out & should be leaning on right leg and moving left foot heel (reference zoe) 2:05 swing those heads clockwiseee 2:06 izzy - look to right before pulling left arm out 2:07 for the hips on “lips” it should be counterclockwise with no head roll (reference sammy) 2:09 sammy - late lifting left arm 2:11 when heads land on “like this” there should be a head bobble/shake (reference dance practice) 2:12 if freestyling until in line position, should be freestyling until “baby” to make it look more full 2:14 hands positions, this is so nitty gritty and confusing but hopefully it’ll feel more comfortable: kyla - left hand should be on zoe’s right shoulder zoe - left arm should be behind izzy’s right arm izzy - right arm in front of zoe’s left arm sammy - right hand should be on izzy’s left shoulder generally - huddle together like you’re penguins in antartica 2:14 - 2:18 the bottom of your shoes on right foot should be visible to camera when kicking 2:16 on “uh huh” right leg should go up to about a 90 degree angle (reference izzy) 2:19 right foot should land on floor on “like” and then swing left foot back 2:20 look front when hopping backwards 2:21 sammy - after kicking left leg up, plant it and spin clockwise, then plant right foot 2:22 izzy - arms going up should have elbows bent (reference sammy) 2:23 sammy - on “Nega neukkineun” turn head on “neu” (keep right foot planted in front) and don’t start walking back until “gamjeong” 2:27 sammy - on “Jayeonseure neoreul” start walking forward on “neo” 2:38 kyla and sammy - when you two turn opposite ways, the turn should be sharp, prep right shoulder on the first “back” then really drive your right shoulder back on the second “just” 2:39 first step of traveling should start on second “just” 2:40 kyla - don’t have to travel so far to the left 2:43 sammy, zoe, kyla - plant right foot down on the “just” 2:43 izzy - plant left foot down on the “just” 2:43 fingers should be together, and hand placement should be shaping your face instead of mouth, don’t cover your faces we want to see your beautiful selves !! LAST CHORUS 2:45 kyla - should be upright and facing front when you, sammy, and izzy go down (reference dance practice) 2:46 kyla - left arm should pop out instead of right 2:46 zoe - your girl does something funky with her right leg (reference dance practice LOL) & look to left on “like” and look back front on “this” 2:47 lifting arms up timing is off (izzy is closest) 2:48 set arm placement and circle movement for “gotta move like this” 2:49 members in dance practice are pointing their fingers either front or 45 degrees down but yall gotta get DOWNNN on “this” 2:50 izzy - hands to side before right hand goes up 2:50 zoe - right hand should be closer to face before pushing head to left 2:50 set hand placement and middle&ring finger movement 2:54 set how far crossed arms are going up on each hit (izzy and sammy matched well) 3:00 sammy - right hand movement should make smaller circles 3:02 sammy - a little late getting left leg off floor 3:02 set timing on stepping left and right 3:04 head up chest out (slight lean to the front) twice on syllables “ba-by” 3:05 set head circle & pointer finger timing 3:05 sammy - can move out a bit to keep kyla visible