roasting your webtoon cuz its bad
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- Опубліковано 17 жов 2024
- our annual webtoon roast is back again!!!! feel free to submit in the forms again if you would like to be roasted live :o
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oil up soon cuz I'm about to be there
hey I forgot to mention in mine: It was made on paint :DD though I'd really like criticism because I plan on making another one in the future
Heyooo! Creator of Delicts here! And yes, my comic has been in hiatus because I got burnt out and I also have school to attend 😔 But this video inspired me to make another episode! 🤩🤩🤩
ayy goodluck on your comic
I just found this and I love it? Like, your roasting isn't just being like "Oh this sucks" you actually point out improvement points?! This is great?! I usually don't like watching "roasting xxx" because people sometimes just say whatever and don't even tell you how to improve but you are so nice, I loved it
thank you haha i believe in improvement👍
OH MY!!! Thank you so much for reading The Ultimate Fanfic!! I literally screamed seeing the thumbnail! Haha I can see how adding that random guy would be jarring XD. This was so nice to see a legitamate critique. Definitely going to be rethinking the synopsis now lol
haha thank you for submitting and letting me clickbait your beautiful character 💖😂
As someone in the process of making their own comic/webtoon this is great advice, ty! Hopefully I can have my webtoon roasted by you in the future 😭 aaa
if u have a comic in the making, submit for the livestream critic and goodluck on your journey!
@@yuuningty!
But like Yasmin, leave me alone! reminds me so much of Don't Toy With Me, Miss Nagatoro... Like, I know there's probably several manga fitting that stereotype but like... I see so many similarities here please tell me I'm not the only one who notices the similarities the only difference is this involves a band rather than Nagatoro's Senpai and his stories and here it's a Girl x Girl. Who knows maybe they were heavily influenced by Don't Toy With Me, Miss Nagatoro?
I noticed this too! I stopped reading “Don’t toy with me, Miss Nagatoro” though because it just got…weird and gross.. when the characters are minors.. BUT I do see the similarities
@@happy-6o1ucky Yeah exactly and I agree it did get weird and gave me the ick too
IKR!!! It just seems like a yuri version of Nagataro!
YOOOOO Thanks for reading my Comic (Krank im Kopf)
its quite weird hearing someone talking about it!!
and your (and prob your viewers) questions were legitimate XD
The thing on Shilley is her Bellybutton that sticks out because her body has those bubbles on them
and I thought it would make her design stick out more (but dont worry, even my friends thought it looked weird at first XD)
The first Chapter was made when i first started making Comics, like 2 Years ago,
I actually stopped the comic and try different projects for now.
but yeah, the first chapter was realllllly rough
The Art, Panel placement and overall Pacing gets wayyy better on the newer chapters.
But all in all, Thanks for the Critique!
🙏🙏
thanks again for submitting! your comic has potential, it just needed some revamp with the panels 👍
Your comic is really unique and all she said was true but with some improvement, I'm sure many will love it
is ur comic referenced ftom evangelion
@@insanefucker ig a little bit.
I watched evangelion before creating KiK.
But yeah the name of the monsters were a Reference to evangelion
@@insanefucker the name of the monsters are a reference, yes :-)
Nooo I was getting ready to get roasted, even called my sis so we can watch together (we work on comic together) but to be fair I did submit months ago so it probably got lost in the sea of comics xd BUT this was still great and we laughed hard when you said Im more interested in hirarchay than romance cuz same 😅 also the part with creators going on indefinite hiatus cough cough insert sweat emoji
it is unfortunate i can only review 3 comics in a video, but u can try submitting for a livestream critic next round👀
@@yuuningooh yeah that too otherwise the video would be hour+ long 😂 I shall try my luck in the live stream xd
Im in the process of making a webtoon as well, i hope this series is still up once i get around with some chapters and get roasted
ayy goodluckkk
Your art is actually really nice! :)
thank you for the critique! i thought it might have been too out there but hearing you say its fine was a shock but also like a breath of relief! I started my comic after watching a few of your videos and listened to what you said in past videos to refine mine! ill happily keep posting! thank you yuuning!!
you have a great artstyle and great humour, it just needs a lot of promotion!
i didn’t expect to see you here, i really enjoy your videos, art, and humor. honestly one of my top favorite art channels!
@@bratatata8430 I never expected to see YOU here LMAO! i be so shocked when i see my fam pop up out of nowhere >XD THANK YOU BRO!!🥰 I'm always on the lookout for hidden gem creators like Yuuning here cuz i'm a gatekeeper lmao 😭💖 her shit is VIDEO GOLD 💖💖💖
@@OwONekko i recently found her videos about webcomics, wanting to start one myself-and her advice has helped actually me a lot! (i have to redo almost all of my panels now xD)
Ey? I did not expect to see you here :0 you’re a huge inspiration to me! (Even tho I rarely post art on my channel 😭)
GAD DAMN THOUGHS BOOTY PROPORTIONS THOUGH and what even is that thing on that guys belly area !? I think yuuning has to do a follow up video just on that belly thing
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I have been surprised, shocked and entertained but nothing could’ve prepared me for those body proportions. I seriously think there should have been a warning. I was caught wayyy off guard 😅
now i want to make a video about it👀
13:58 that's a really nice thing to say, im an artist and always thinking my artwork are lame and terrible so i don't have much popularity
The one episode thing is actually really important. I feel like a lot of people panic and rush to get their stories out there but it is really important to start with multiple episodes. If there is only one upload, even if the reader enjoys it they will likely forget about it. That’s why so many people give the tip to start off with 3 uploads
ngl this motivating me to try my hand at publishing a webtoon no matter how bad just for the experience
if they can do it! u can do it!
@@yuuning im gonna try over this summer break who knows maybe I'll even submit it (probably not since I'm not comfortable with scroll format)
I’m about to start a webtoon I’ve been wanting to do since I was a small kid. Once the first few chapters are out I can’t wait for you to roast them 🤣
lmao just have fun with your comic dont let me spoil it
at first i didnt get why people would submit their comics to be roasted by you but after seeing the way you delivered the constructive feedback in this video i completely understand now if i were to ever create a webtoon of some sorts i too would submit it to you so i can get your constructive criticism
No way it's me I'm Yasmin
They will eventually become band mates by the way, it's a thing I'm wanting to do soon
thats awesomee look forward to it
Damnnnn are they puttin School Bus Graveyard in "Romance" category??? SRYSLYY??
4:27 omg this caught me off guard i love dear alice sm
LMAOOOOO this is the creator of that webcomic so it makes sense lol
Did you read that insane webcomic called "there are no demons"
Hello yuning! I wanted to ask do you also review webtoons in other languages or do you only review webtoons that are in english? If you review other languages i really want you to review mine. :)
hey unfortunately my subscribers and audience are mostly english speaker, and i only know english/chinese as well
Yessss!!! Another video crushing the soul and dreams of newbies authors ❤
This is my shit
ah yes pure entertainment at the expense of others💅🏻
1:36 Sorry but like… the top of his hair looks like a leaf and stem of a strawberry.
it is here that i find out that school bus graveyard is romance
I not the person who wrote Yasmin leave me alone but I’m so happy you pronounced my name right 🫶🏼
Let me go make one rn so u can roast it queen 🙌
Danggg, these webtoon artists are goooooood
yes sirrr
Watching while editing my webtoon
Can you check out monsters and girls?
Go read The Ultimate Fanfic!🗣️🗣️🗣️ There are currently 15 chapters worth the read.🥺
Plus the LI is so cute.💕
i am thinking of writing a webtoon will y'all support me and read my webtoon?
whats wrong with your boba
Roasting your animation because it's weird
So how is the first webtoon copying true beauty?? because of her glasses falling off?
It’s cus the opening first episode is almost exactly like how the first episode of true beauty starts
hi I was in ur stream yesterday hi
Heyyy
Thumbkneel 😂
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I ruined the 666 likes
First lol
vay oc
this is the first video that i've seen of yours and your shirt confused me a lil HAHA IM NOT SAYING ANYTHING, but then i realized its symbolizing your name. 🥹
I didnt know until i saw your comment 💀 that makes two of us..
@@Craios-mr1fp HAHHAJSNSJA