Well shot, very well lit, acting decent, love the mystery of why the CIA is after him, but...not to sound mean, purely for storytelling purposes, and I really mean that...why should I care if he lives? I don't experience the context of what happened, framed for what? I don't experience how bad the framing was, framing for what? how severe was it? what did it look and feel like for him? I can't get fully invested if I'm quickly told in a vague way what happened. This story would work better in a longer form, where we can understand and experience the essential context that's missing, in order to get fully invested. Why does it matter so much, to this character, that he survive? what does he ultimately want? To prove he's innocent? Great, I love that. If I experienced that, i'd be so much more invested in the outcome. There is no payoff to the question of why he is so valuable to the government, again, possibly reinforcing my thoughts on the fact this would serve better in a longer form story. Also, why is it necessary that the year is 2063? why 2063 and not present day? LOVE the idea, just need all the context to care about all this.
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Well shot, very well lit, acting decent, love the mystery of why the CIA is after him, but...not to sound mean, purely for storytelling purposes, and I really mean that...why should I care if he lives? I don't experience the context of what happened, framed for what? I don't experience how bad the framing was, framing for what? how severe was it? what did it look and feel like for him? I can't get fully invested if I'm quickly told in a vague way what happened.
This story would work better in a longer form, where we can understand and experience the essential context that's missing, in order to get fully invested. Why does it matter so much, to this character, that he survive? what does he ultimately want? To prove he's innocent? Great, I love that. If I experienced that, i'd be so much more invested in the outcome.
There is no payoff to the question of why he is so valuable to the government, again, possibly reinforcing my thoughts on the fact this would serve better in a longer form story.
Also, why is it necessary that the year is 2063? why 2063 and not present day?
LOVE the idea, just need all the context to care about all this.