That cutscene was great, I love the personality you give to all these alternate versions of our favorite characters. Also Charkis is a dork like usual.
Don't know anything about this project, but there's so many cool details in this: - Riding a carousel(rollercoaster), just like you later do in the secret boss fight - Hexagonal wheels???? - Chara?(frisk) having coloured portraits - Qing displaying tone indicators - Qing(queen)'s trap missing the party - FLIPPIN' "barney" XD - The little side dialogue like in the original - The fact they're called "Qing" xd - (The comments are calling them "Ranger"?)(lancer) being some kind of animal, like the various fanart - Asriel?(ralsei) resembling Toriel in the dark world - Ranger?(lancer) having a lance, like Berdly's hal"berd" - Ranger's bike having a raccoon tail
Every AU has a Big Shot. Most AUs have a World Revolving But I have not seen any other AU with a Smart Race replacement, this is why Chapter Rewritten is special.
Late to say this, but as far as I’m aware, this is currently the first and only AU to make a replacement for _Cool Mixtape_ despite it literally being your _Queen_ replacement with the speed increased and the quality lowered.
It's sort of a carousel, probably to match with the fact that the Junkil Redux fight takes place on a carousel, similar to how Berdly's is on a roller coaster and Spamton Neo's is on a rollercoaster
This guy was not suposed to talk lil bro🙏😭 But I already suspected about something like this before. Asriel still have part of his monster soul. And he's not TOTALLY expressionless like Kris, so... Okay?
@@P3dr0m4n03lkris is not expressionless either tho? we know they talk with the other characters, it's just toby's way of writing them that makes it even better
The same goes with GN!Deltarune Yellow Kanako! She's not TOTALLY expressionless because she still has her monster soul but with Clover's essence still covering it but still!
@@bigshotrobi I talk more about sprites and what The Player can see. I know Kris talk, Kris react, but we never seen this directly. But CR's Asriel is not like this, we can see what he says how he react, he just choose to be quiet in most part of the time. A good example is: Lancer/Nerdly is under King/Kueen menace: Kris: (Holy shit).😑 Asriel: Holy SHIT!.😵💫
*AND Slamed to the ground! *Hah! *Didn't expect that now? toothpaste! *MY NAME IS CHARKIS *YOU OVERGROWN WEASEL! *Oh ok, Chara! *Charkis, not Chara. *Oh ok Kris! *NO! Chaa-kiss! *Ohhh, ok, Frisk! *WHERE DID YOU EVEN GET THAT?
I really like the attention to detail with Qing’s chair. For context, they purposefully made Kueen have the rocket torso since the base game Queen has a rocket chair, so I like how they gave Qing a chair hanging by cords, just like base game King’s… tongue spade thing… Qing got that FOX News chair, truly a pure blooded American…
Just realized they’re on a carousel because in og deltarune both Berdly and spamton Neo take place on a roller coaster, so in this au both lancer and junkil will take place on a carousel
… I have no idea what you just said. Are you talking about how even tho Susie and Noelle have swapped, they are both violent instead of Noelle now being violent and Susie not being violent?
A Bang from nowhere? Wait, Asriel have... dialogues? F- But Man... "barney".... I really happy that Qing don't treat Susie so better than Ranger. I mean, he have favorites, but he don't respect she either. It was always sad see the difference of treatment bettwen ma boi Berdly and ma gal Noelle.
Ranger: Thrashfully silky joker. Attack: 7 Defense: 2 Pacifist: convince (does little to nothing but changes to Swerve.) Swerve: Makes Ranger accidently Crash into an obstacle trying to stay in front of you, damaging his motorbike, due to him not focusing on the path. You must do this 20-24 times. Trying to use the same action twice in a row doesn't do much, as Ranger will dodge the second trick. Instead, you must use distract (this makes Ranger focus even more on the character that used the ACT, causing them to be unable to use Swerve), than you use Swerve. This does make Ranger focus on the entire party, however. Weird/RudeGrave/RedGrave/Gravebuster: You fight like normal, but when you reach him again with Susie, you must have susie use Rude Buster as the final blow. Does anyone else see Ranger's head as a horned hood, or a hooded motorcycle mask/Helm in the dark world, or is it just me? also, the name of the music makes me think that Ranger's the class clown.
In my deltaswap version Susie swaps with Lancer. My former idea is susie and berdly swap. But i realized it bit deltarune chapter rewritten, so i decided to swap Susie with Lancer.
if other puppet spamton can do it, so can he. Edit: what ive noticed about kris replacements in deltarune AUs is that they all have some form of unique way of speaking depending on their label, the original kris, being the quiet kid, barely talks and lets our decisions talk for them. azzy, being a nerd, talks but does so in an incredibly monotone manner, not expressing any of his emotions too much, and for lack of a better word, acting like a robot TOP!Spamton, technically still being spamton, talks like any other character but is constantly interjected by tics from the player.
По сравнению с оригиналом "smart rice" это звучит лучше ведь сравнивать с другими альтернативными вселенными сравнивать не надо ведь там версий этого саундтрека нет так что вы молодцы 👏
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okay i love qing now, he's every steryotypical facebook user turned into one man
he feels like a Redditor-facebook user hybrid
Making lancer a raccoon based lightner is probably one of the best decisions of this au
Who is Lancer? All I see is Ranger and his lance.
@@username5155Lancer in this au is berdly
And this one is called nerdly
rambley goes to the dark side
MO
@@10w0 wooooosh
I like how the cart ride is relapsed with a ring around
So the junkil arena still mimics this part like in regular deltarune
Just with the ducks from JEVIL's carousel,or something similar to that,and Junkils head being on the buildings
Yeah, like how Spamton NEO's arena is just like Berdly's in the cart ride
Yeah, after all, the Secrets Bosses have great elements from others parts of the chapter
like a... well would snowgrave be renamed the buster route? the buster route! wait that would imply that susie is attacking ranger.
@@funny_guy_haha gravebuster,Ranger gets turned to stone
Wait hold on, I just realized the comedic genius of Ranger having a lance. He is Ranger, and he is *A* lancer. Brilliant.
Oh yeah, kinda like berdly but way clearer, berdly is also a lancer
@@minestar2247uh. No, he wields a “halbird” and his name is berdly.
Perfect
@@minestar2247 berdly wields a halbird
@@miniwhiffy3465 which is in a similar ish category to lances
1:03 "I AM NOT A DORK I AM AN INTELLECTUAL"
Top 10 quotes you never thought you'd hear anywhere on twitter or reddit in your life
YOOO ASRIEL CAN TALK!!!!!
As the Asriel voice actor, I too share your excitement.
It's so cool to see the protagonist talking
I like that he's kind of the most down to earth of the group.Fits well with Noelle being anxious and Charkis being passive-aggresive
OMG! azzy got a voice! and it's not us! horaay!!
Wha
That cutscene was great, I love the personality you give to all these alternate versions of our favorite characters. Also Charkis is a dork like usual.
Thanks!!!!
oh this is weird out of context i wrote the script lmao
Don't know anything about this project, but there's so many cool details in this:
- Riding a carousel(rollercoaster), just like you later do in the secret boss fight
- Hexagonal wheels????
- Chara?(frisk) having coloured portraits
- Qing displaying tone indicators
- Qing(queen)'s trap missing the party
- FLIPPIN' "barney" XD
- The little side dialogue like in the original
- The fact they're called "Qing" xd
- (The comments are calling them "Ranger"?)(lancer) being some kind of animal, like the various fanart
- Asriel?(ralsei) resembling Toriel in the dark world
- Ranger?(lancer) having a lance, like Berdly's hal"berd"
- Ranger's bike having a raccoon tail
The Green one is Charkris The Replacement of Ralsei
0:12 QINGAS REFERENCE
SNEAQING AROUND AS USUAL
SNEAQING AS USUAL, I SEE
SnooPINGASusualyisee
who else remembers quingas?
"erm, what the siqma?"
Can tell Ranger's gonna be cool
where does he say that?
LMFAOOOOOOO
I like the idea that Ranger is dressed up as Qing because Ranger looks up to him.
Ranger unironically being the best character with great music
Edit: I’m pretty sure I watch this video like 5 times a day now
Yeah they should give him a plushie
@@tntblast64 i need it
As much as a Ranger plush would be good, he's probably too similar to Lancer for that to happen
@@NotLancer2018 what about a nerdly plushie
@@tntblast64 same issue. Nerdly is similar to Berdly.
And he speaks in lowercase....fucking amazing
What a fun and wacky character. It would be a shame if anything bad were to happen to him
Yeah, like he's going to die for a rude buster for his friend Barney
be a shame if he were to turn into stone
Every AU has a Big Shot.
Most AUs have a World Revolving
But I have not seen any other AU with a Smart Race replacement, this is why Chapter Rewritten is special.
But my Deltaswap have every characters guard their personality dispite the swaps likt TS US .
Late to say this, but as far as I’m aware, this is currently the first and only AU to make a replacement for _Cool Mixtape_ despite it literally being your _Queen_ replacement with the speed increased and the quality lowered.
Umbrashard has a good one
@@username5155 Cool Mixtape is actually AOTKQ but low quality
I'm so happy that the Lancer design turned out well, I was worried about how it would be but now I can rest...
not in that sense
Ouughh, my Prankster is Pursuing...
Wait, 4 days ago?
My bad, Tardis broke.
can't help but notice how jevil-y this arena is
It's sort of a carousel, probably to match with the fact that the Junkil Redux fight takes place on a carousel, similar to how Berdly's is on a roller coaster and Spamton Neo's is on a rollercoaster
@@NotLancer2018 i know
It’s like they’re in some kind of….. World Revolving (The)
As the official voice actor for Asriel, I share excitement in Asriel having proper dialogue.
This guy was not suposed to talk lil bro🙏😭
But I already suspected about something like this before.
Asriel still have part of his monster soul. And he's not TOTALLY expressionless like Kris, so... Okay?
@@P3dr0m4n03lkris is not expressionless either tho? we know they talk with the other characters, it's just toby's way of writing them that makes it even better
The same goes with GN!Deltarune Yellow Kanako! She's not TOTALLY expressionless because she still has her monster soul but with Clover's essence still covering it but still!
@@bigshotrobi I talk more about sprites and what The Player can see. I know Kris talk, Kris react, but we never seen this directly.
But CR's Asriel is not like this, we can see what he says how he react, he just choose to be quiet in most part of the time.
A good example is:
Lancer/Nerdly is under King/Kueen menace:
Kris: (Holy shit).😑
Asriel: Holy SHIT!.😵💫
@@P3dr0m4n03lwhy you bullying asriels voice bro 😭🙏
I love how they turned the carousel into a giant fan
Wait,is this part mean to be like the computer's fan or am i tripping
"They turned the carousel into a fan, fascinating." -Totally real quote from the disembodied head living in the computer's air vents
*AND Slamed to the ground!
*Hah!
*Didn't expect that now? toothpaste!
*MY NAME IS CHARKIS
*YOU OVERGROWN WEASEL!
*Oh ok, Chara!
*Charkis, not Chara.
*Oh ok Kris!
*NO! Chaa-kiss!
*Ohhh, ok, Frisk!
*WHERE DID YOU EVEN GET THAT?
reminds me of Inverted Fate where Papyrus somehow got Flowey's name wrong every single time somehow
@@artistsatyanikhil641 yup.
@@artistsatyanikhil641 papaya and flowy
The Kris mistake is even funnier when you remember that they very much exist in this AU, and Ranger likely knows about them.
0:05 - Intro
2:22 - Pranksters Persuit
I need attack of the chaos qing
Also love how Asriel can actually talk here
I really like the attention to detail with Qing’s chair. For context, they purposefully made Kueen have the rocket torso since the base game Queen has a rocket chair, so I like how they gave Qing a chair hanging by cords, just like base game King’s… tongue spade thing…
Qing got that FOX News chair, truly a pure blooded American…
First CR Lost Girl and now CR Smart Race. All I need now is the new version of BATW and I can cook V3 of the Junkil Deadringer
CR LOST GIRL WHERE?
@@Quackervoltz on the Chapter Rewritten Soundcloud
Wtf would a Junkil deadringer even be called?
Probably the best deltarune au in there
I've always wanted to see what the lancer in this AU could look like, it's good to finally see him!👍
Can't wait for an acid Lake part(it's gonna be called differently) and a burtch fight
Tunnel of lung disease
@@Moldytoast888 Hahaha, i'm not thinking we will get this.
i dont know...
@@netheritum116 no it’s confirmed
@@Moldytoast888 ...
Just realized they’re on a carousel because in og deltarune both Berdly and spamton Neo take place on a roller coaster, so in this au both lancer and junkil will take place on a carousel
Holy hungry hippos I just realized it too
Why was I struggling to comprehend that Charkis is blue because the hat is gone
This is genually incredible!!! Congrats to everyone who worked on this!
I can’t wait to see the weird route where lancer gets turned into literal ashes
Doesnt he get turned into stone?
@@numbskull_justashinyfuecocoyes
Noelle riding that bike ride the same way I would fr
i'd ride it like charkis or asriel tbh
0:51 CR Susie saved her violence, but noelle become also violent, but she scared while riding bike.
… I have no idea what you just said. Are you talking about how even tho Susie and Noelle have swapped, they are both violent instead of Noelle now being violent and Susie not being violent?
Piles of Ranger's dust
THE BACKGROUND IS GOING TO BE USED FOR JUNKIL REDUX'S FIGHT I JUST KNOW IT
This king has a load of buzzsaws hmmmm....
reminds me of a different king...
A Bang from nowhere?
Wait, Asriel have... dialogues? F-
But Man... "barney".... I really happy that Qing don't treat Susie so better than Ranger. I mean, he have favorites, but he don't respect she either. It was always sad see the difference of treatment bettwen ma boi Berdly and ma gal Noelle.
How have all these people saw it early???
their all VIPs!
Some are members of the team, others are VIPs and I got it early by getting 2nd place in an art contest!
cus they're in the discord ( like me )
There was a prediction competition in the chapter rewritten discord server! Those who placed got early access. Hope this helps! :)
i love the touch that lancer is facing the wrong direction the whole time
Love Asriel's 8} face.
I love the spritess
thank you! I worked hard on em
Quing is now my absolute favorite part of this universe
Azriel: don't care
Noelle: Fear
Charkis: joy =)
I would be happy if this game becomes a fan game like undertale yellow
If only, would take lots of time though
when i'm in a being peak contest and i'm up against chapter rewritten:
Man gang, I’ve had enough of this prankster! We better pursue him.
Uh ... i hate you !
Charkis having the smile of Chara is the best thing I ever seen in my whole [[String(ed)]] life!!
I fucking love rangers design
Love how Qing only talks in all lowercase, mirroring Queen capitalizing every word
Ranger's weapon is similar to Ortholance from Minecraft Alex's Caves mod.
Wow this is amazing! Great work as usual!
Ranger: Thrashfully silky joker.
Attack: 7
Defense: 2
Pacifist: convince (does little to nothing but changes to Swerve.)
Swerve: Makes Ranger accidently Crash into an obstacle trying to stay in front of you, damaging his motorbike, due to him not focusing on the path. You must do this 20-24 times. Trying to use the same action twice in a row doesn't do much, as Ranger will dodge the second trick. Instead, you must use distract (this makes Ranger focus even more on the character that used the ACT, causing them to be unable to use Swerve), than you use Swerve. This does make Ranger focus on the entire party, however.
Weird/RudeGrave/RedGrave/Gravebuster: You fight like normal, but when you reach him again with Susie, you must have susie use Rude Buster as the final blow.
Does anyone else see Ranger's head as a horned hood, or a hooded motorcycle mask/Helm in the dark world, or is it just me? also, the name of the music makes me think that Ranger's the class clown.
Asriel on art:LOL MAN I JUST BURN YOU RIGHT NOW!
SPOOPINGAS USUAL I SEE!! 0:10
OMG i love Qing's theme it sounds like a Mario Party Bowser theme
TheRedHatter Approved
どうも日本の民です。このAUは日本でも慕われています。Let’s fight!!
amazing, ya do a wonderful work there! =D
Well, I guess we just have to wait the ranger Pedro Pedro Pedro
Its so sad that lancer has to get this version's version of snowgraved
SOMEONE! MAKE A FANMADE BOSS FIGHT NOW!
It needs to be made
wow this au came back from the dead
They actually turned lancer into a lightner😮
In my deltaswap version Susie swaps with Lancer. My former idea is susie and berdly swap. But i realized it bit deltarune chapter rewritten, so i decided to swap Susie with Lancer.
@@netheritum116 cool cool!
NEW TRACK JUST DROPPED
we need Chapter Rewritten as a real fangame A.S.A.P. or i'mma flip some tables!
Am I the only one that noticed the Everyman face in one of the buildings in the background 0.0?
I too
she pursuits on my prankster till i
Till i ranger
This is so cool.
WAKE UP CHAPTER WRERITTEN CAME BACK
*REWRITTEN
Charkis is so deranged and I love it.
BANGER!
back in my days...
his eyes: 1/99
AYO WHAT THE HECK
Imagine Quing saying to Ranger: "I only play World of Tanks"
(Reference to Queen saying "I only play mobile games" to Berdly)
"I thought you were a REAL grand strategy fan!"
"ranger"
"i only play age of civilizations 2"
"NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!"
@@fravonzonbonn Qing plays only minecraft
Since Qing is a old computer, I think he’d only play boomer-shooters like DOOM or old, uncared for FPS games like TF2.
@@joeypickering5273 What Junkil will say on gravebuster route in qing's mansion, if we will try to enter basement?
@@netheritum116I kinda forgot how junkil talks uahuhuhfytmunghd
Please do more I want to see more!
local alien news report: best deltarune fangame comez back
I just realised, qing here is like, an internet boomer, like, litterally.
Man that's genious
canonically qing is an old computer, so that makes sense
“I SAID I ONLY WANTED THE”
“oops sorry all caps was on”
Am I the only one surprised by the fact that Asriel can speak without the player?
Nope, I'm here with you
yeah i was like "wtf" but like... silently
if other puppet spamton can do it, so can he.
Edit: what ive noticed about kris replacements in deltarune AUs is that they all have some form of unique way of speaking depending on their label,
the original kris, being the quiet kid, barely talks and lets our decisions talk for them.
azzy, being a nerd, talks but does so in an incredibly monotone manner, not expressing any of his emotions too much, and for lack of a better word, acting like a robot
TOP!Spamton, technically still being spamton, talks like any other character but is constantly interjected by tics from the player.
I also am
is it just me or is his outfit and weapon based on hollow knight
Prob just me
Wow, that's. . . Peak tbh.
i need rangers eyes to be vaguely rhombus shaped for some reason
edit: or oval
oh my god he has a coiled nail
I wonder if Sad Bread will make another game.
Nope
@@viput69 Да он сделает игру! Я надеюсь!
"Snooping as usual, i see"
*Bring in barney*
the fucking face tonetags lmao
So Lancer here replaces Birdely is hilarious and makes sense
Love how he speaks in all lowercase
Like a certain skeleton 👁️👄👁️
yeah, probably skeletor
No no, like a certain cool kid
SNEAQING AS USUAL I SEE
По сравнению с оригиналом "smart rice" это звучит лучше ведь сравнивать с другими альтернативными вселенными сравнивать не надо ведь там версий этого саундтрека нет так что вы молодцы 👏
Умный рис?
ASRIEL CAN TALK
GORGEOUS!
I have no clue why I expected them to be on skates
Sly cooper deltarune fr fr
That -Nail- Lance looks familiar…
Lancer appears 1:51
We were robbed not to see the Susie's falling animation referencing the beginning of Chapter 1
Still, this AU is the best Deltarune Au so far
qing is such an icon in this
I find it funny how instead of two damage dealers and one mage we have two mages and one damage dealer
lancer has been turned into rambley