Write an IELTS Band 9 Writing Task 2 Essay with an ex-examiner!
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In this video, ex-IELTS examiner and E2Language Teacher Alex will teach you how to write a high scoring IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay. Watch this video to learn how to plan and structure your essay, practice reviewing your essay and much more! If you want to score a Band 7, Band 8 or Band 9 in IELTS Writing, this video is for you.
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KEY MOMENTS:
Intro 00:00
Analyse and Plan 02:14
The Structure 11:44
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Essay Introduction 15:09
Essay Body Paragraph 1 23:07
Essay Body Paragraph 2 33:27
Essay Conclusion 43:52
Checking Your Work 50:22
Conclusion 55:37
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Is this for free?
We have a few classes available for free each week, but most of them are for our paid members (and it’s cheap to sign up!) 👍
I have tried to sign up and pay but it keeps telling me I ain't got funds in my account but I do . Is there a way I can pay through direct transfer?
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Can we use our own life examples like
The incident happened during my school time like a real-life example
I just want to thank you: I prepared Ielts by watching your videos for some days and I obtained the grades (7 in writing) I need to attend a new university. Thank you so much!!
This video was so helpful on my final preparation day. I had just submitted a task on E2 and got a 6.5 score, a score I didn't want and had a panic attack. This video helped getting me a 7.5 on exam day and an overall score of 8.5. Alex, you rock!
Can u help me little i have exam on 7nov
@@chahat...843 no one can really help you, you just need to practice your vocabulary and the mastery of writing. You might need to develop your thoughts and organizational as it will help you formulate your essay arguments. Read a alot and listen to veidos and podcasts. Cheers
Is submitting ur writing free?
ua-cam.com/video/tUNBWm5ccl0/v-deo.html
Bahi structure batao ek bar 8 band ka
Watched this video days to my exam while still confused on how to organise my essay. It was super helpful. Thanks for doing a great job Alex.
Hi
Thank you Alex and the E2language team. You guys are doing a great job.
My scores were
Listening 9
Reading 8
Writing 7
Speaking 7
Overall band 8.0
Always told myself I was going to put my result on here. This channel was very helpful in my journey!
Thanks E2!!
congratsssss can u send me the materials u used ???///i need them now thanks in advance
Alex is an angel. I’m now far better in my writing skills, thank you.
1. Remove comma in the second paragraph (In addition).
2.Use the word *that* in place of what are far healthier.
3. Conclusion: Use the word although in place of despite.
4. Spellling of strongthen to be corrected as strengthen.
This really helped me improve my English writing, which I have started this month to appear in an IELTS exam.
How was your test??
Thanks Alex & Jay, You guys are doing an amazing job! I always recommend your channel to my friends. Stay safe!
This video helps me to get an 8 in writing (L9, R9, W8, S8.5). A big thank-you to the E2 IELTS team.
Really 🙀
Just one video and you did wonders
Wow
A threat for E 2
How ??
By watching only one video nd what about reading
Can u help me!😔😔
I have the exam today and just saw this video now. I feel more confident. Wish me luck!
Update 10/26/2020
Overall: 8.5
Reading: 9
Listening: 8.5
Speaking: 8
Writing: 8
Thank you so much! This was the first video of the only 2 videos I watched on writing before the test and I was able to get a good score( I only had 7 days to prepare from the day I decided and registered to do the test)
Good luck!
@@E2IELTS Thank you! It went well, I think. Will update you in 5 days on what I scored.
what was your speaking topic on 2 mints
in the test of speaking ielts
@@informativechannel2928 Talk about a sporting activity I would like to do , what I need to do to be good at it etc.
I have analyzed the essay grammatically. The essay consists of 16 sentences ( 4 Simple - 5 complex - 7 compound). The present simple was used once; however, modal verbs and present tense were used overwhelmingly.
Thank you so much Jay and Alex. You guys are amazing. I have watched all your videos and cleared IELTS GT in the first attempt (L8, R8, S7.5 and W7). God bless you both.
Remember.. Mart is ''DUMB''
How
Thank you so much for your efforts and informations you provided. I just got my results, which are quite sufficient to apply to graduate programs. The E2 family (especially Jay and Alex) provided the basics but the rest is about practice.
I like Alex and Jay classes! Please keep on sharing to us!
This is the method I followed for my exam and got 7 in writing!I cannot thank this channel enough.I watched all of your videos and got my desired score today with overall band 8,in my very first attempt!❤️
How much time it would take to get such results
Thank you, Alex, for this video. Coupled with others about structuring my essay, I was prepared for my exam last month. I certainly used the PEEL method for writing task 2. I got my results an hour ago: 8.5 overall. My heartfelt thanks go out to you and entire E2 crew!
Congratulations dear. May I tell a similar story in two weeks.
@@anobtakon5981 Thanks. I'm rooting for you!
Beauty with brain!!! Thank you for teaching with the right way xxxx
This is on another level. Fascinating. Thank you!
Hi Jay and Alex! I would like to thank you for the amazing tricks and techniques! I have scored an overall 8.0 by following your suggestions!
Thanks again! :)
Dear Tamanna,
Raghav from this side.
Could you please share a sample essay written by you ,i would be thankful to you.
Best Regards,
Raghav
email:raghavjaitra93@gmail.com
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Kindly do share
I thoroughly followed your video and wrote the essay. Your essay is beyond 9 band. Thank you for your support
I love the way you make it clear paragraphs
Thank you for teaching us the keys to writing our essays. I'm pretty sure that I'm going to succeed in my writing part thanks to you.
You guys are amazing! I prepared for 4 days and i got an overall 8!! All the videos are so useful and clear. And your website is amazing as well
Woow...amazing..
4 days only???
Well done!!
I can't believe
Which videos would you suggest most??
Seriously you are the best teacher on the earth 🌍🌍. God bless you and May God Fulfill your all dreams 🙏🙏Love from Punjab ❤ ❤
Thanks for your video. I got answer to my question by watching it. You are erudite teachers! Hope you will upload more and more effective videos soon!😍😍😍❤❤❤
hi God bless you and Jay. your lessons in all sections of the ielts really helped me. i am much grateful.
hey, just wanted to say that I found your videos and lessons on the site extremely helpful!! I started preparing only a few days before my exam and scored a band 8 overall! (L 8.5 R 9.0 S 7.5 W 7.5) I was really nervous about writing and speaking and that’s mostly what I was preparing for and thanks to you I’m really happy with my score!!
Amazing!! Well done, Julia 👍🏆🥳
Can you please tell me how you managed to get 9 bands in reading
hey, can you kindly tell if we can use the words I, we or you in essays, and brackets or slashes in reading ?????
Thank you for all your content
I scored band 8 in IELTS
congratsss can u send me the materials u used ??? i need
Thanks for this amazing video Alex!
Thanks so much, Alex. I really appreciate it. This video is improving my skills in IELTS writing.
This video really helped me . Got 6.5 in writing. Total band score 7 ❤️❤️❤️
I couldn't write such a well developed essay in my native language!! amazing class, thank you
Thank you so much. This is an amazingly useful video. I can't thank you enough Alex.
Thnk you so much you are the great team, I know how much I have struggled to understand ielts writing to get 8 bands.
This one is really excellent example for IELTS learners. Thank you mem.
This video is really helpful. I'm motivated to write the whole essay from start to end. Thank you Alex
Thanks, Alex. This video was a great help. Succeeded.
The best teacher ever! Thank You.
Dear Alex, thank you for all the help, just got my results and finally achieved a 7 in writing!
Congratulations sara
Did u join some writing intensive of e2 language..plz let me knw bcz I'm stuck in writing part
@@samadfarooqui243 No, I only watched her videos on UA-cam
You people are amazing.i found the videos very helpful.i prepared for 7 days and got 7.5 overall.thanks for henerating awesome content.
how you did your preparation please please help mee too one month time is there for my test but am not getting any idea how to prepare 😑😑 @GulrukhArif
Ivana Aashi try watching different UA-cam videos and there are books available for IELTS on IDP website or the British council website ...so please do check on their platforms and all the bets for your exam
Vijaykumar Babaiha Hey... Your right..! but now am having only 8 days so.. suggest me how to maintain my time on 4 modules please yaar but reply me fast and give me your own opinion how to preapre
Thank you E2 Language teachers. Your videos are extremely informative and helpful.
Wow , It was really magnificent, thank you so much for publishing such great tips .
You are always awesome... Love you E2
This is really useful on how to extend our ideas.
Hi, do you have interest in practice together? Becoz i need someone
Yes..
This was the first time that I could write sooooo fast and in short time!! Wow. I will use this method on my test which is on next thursday.😍
minoo karandish let us know how it goes
Hey how did u do?
@@mohannad9400 Hi I think it was good
Reading and listening were pretty good. Writing was challenging but acceptable. The results will be announced in 10 days I think.
@@i27m4di5 hi tnx for asking. It was ok in general I hope I could get great results. I should wait for the results in 10 days.
minoo karandish I had mine too on Saturday! Listening was the hardest omg never expected that. I’ll post my results when I get them, you too
I love all of your videos but this is mind-blowingly helpful!!!
All over the world, almost everyone have access to mobile phones including the students. In as much as these devices are undoubtedly essential for communication, learning and safety, many schools have refused their students from its use within the school premises. In my opinion, this is a positive milestone which can be beneficial not only academically, but mentally and otherwise
Your videos have helped me to realize where I stand on the band spectrum.
I find myself still stuck to about 6 to 7 bands.
corrections for BP-2
1. in addition(no comma)
2. replace what with that
3. benefits is ---benefits are
conclusion:
4. replace despite with though or although
5. spelling correct its not strengthen its strengthen
Not Stro*ngthen its strengthen
Are bhai up you go!!
In recent times most students have their own mobile phones. And although it promotes connectivity most schools restricts the use of mobile phones by students and I think it’s a positive approach both academically, physically and socially
Such a useful lesson, thank you endlessly
Thanks Alex. This lesson is very resourceful
Restricting phone use in the classroom itself can improve learning. This is because it avoids students being distracted or not paying attention the the teacher or lecturer. An example is when a teacher is trying to explain a point and different mobile phones are ringing or vibrating or students keep texting each other thus causing distraction to the entire classroom
Yes it avoids them from being distracted
Thank You so much Alex, this video has helped me to score 7.5 in writing :) Thanks a lot.
Awsome video👏Avid fan of your UA-cam english lessons. I have improve my english skills while watching your lessons. Thank you for helping!
Thanks for the session!!
I had my exam yesterday and this was the topic of m essay!!! I will update you all on my results
How much did you get?
@@MahendraSharma-zy2bb I got an 8.0!
. . . 7.5 in writing
@@AlekieTush congratulations Alex!
This has been immensely useful. Just at the start of the video, I was in a total panic mode... and 60 minutes later, i'm glad to regain my mental health! Lol. Thank you for your brilliant teaching. My exam is tomorrow and please wish me luck! :))
really, even she is wrong. She wrote when a student has their phone in their lap. Shouldn't be it when students have their phones in their laps
You are amazing Alex. Thank you E2 Language.
I took my IELTS test on July 24 and scored L: 9; R: 8.5; W: 7.5; S: 7.0. Your videos are very helpful and helped me achieve this result. Thank you
Any tips bro please t
Please
Am not able to speak properly moreover mcq problem in listening further more reading I always score 26 and 27
Please help me by sharing ur experience
Is this ur first attempt
My introduction: In most schools around the world, students have their own mobile phones. While these devices can undoubtedly play a role in security, safety and connectedness, some schools have restricted the use of phones within the school premises. This is a positive step that in my view can bring physical and emotional benefits to students as well as academic gains.
I cant even describe how useful this video is to me, as a guy who constantly struggles with writing. Your video has enlightened me not just on Ielts writing but on logical reasoning too! Well done❤
I am taking my exams next month and this is my stress buster now. This is so much helpful. Thank you guys. ❤️ Seriously
Introduction:
Mobile phones became part of our daily lives as adults or teens. While those devises play an important role, their use can be sometimes with adverse effects. For such reason, some schools restricted the use of mobile phones within their premises which is a decision I support for various reasons.
What do you think?
Thank you.
The advent of this new age of technology implies that almost everyone has access to smart devices and this includes students. While these devices have obvious positive impacts on the education and development of students, some schools have made efforts to restrict its students from using these devices. Personally, I believe that such restrictions have positive impacts, not only on the academics of these students but also on their physical and social well being and I will support these opinions in the following paragraphs with valid points and examples.
Restrictions on phone use during class can improve the learning rates of the students. Phone use during class can result in distractions and loss of focus during a teaching session. Such can be seen in a classroom where students are constantly checking their phones for texts and surfing the internet while classes are ongoing. Not only this, the noise from these alerts can reduce the attention of the teachers as well as the students when class is in session. This might result in wasted time and effort as the students may leave the class without making any significant gain. Restrictions of mobile devices will eliminate the possibilities of this.
Furthermore, restrictions on mobile phones during school hours can lead to improvements in traditional social skills among students. Excessive use of mobile devices during school hours means that students will most likely spend a chunk of their time scrolling on social media apps and playing mobile games instead of engaging in healthy social interactions with their peers. This can be seen in schools where the common areas are filled with students with their faces glued to their phone screens instead of building social connections through discussions and simple conversations. Such trends can lead to stunted social and physical development in these students; resulting in social disabilities like depression, social awkwardness, and the likes. A ban on the use of phones during such times can eliminate the chances of these.
In conclusion, though the use of smart devices have their positive effects in academic environments, I believe putting certain restrictions in place to reduce or regulate their use during school hours will prove more beneficial to the students, resulting in students with better chances of achieving their academic goals and at the same time maintaining healthy social skills.
Nice one, but try to use different words, you have repeated many words there such as "restrictions" you can use instead limitations or implementing rules instead, and also your conclusion doesn't align your Introduction,. You are talking "the use of mobile phones have positive impact on students learning, stick to your argument that phone and gadgets may cause distraction therefore it would give good outcome for their learning. Conclusions and introduction should have similar content.
Cheers
Thanks Alexxxxxx. Your videos have helped me a lot. You and Jae are the true MVP. I really pray and hope to you you all at E2 one day. Also, I'd like to help and join you all at E2 to help people in any way I can. Cheers Lex!
I just started to learn IELTS, but I don't know how to start for writing. So difficult. I found yourChanel. So I will follow it...and learn through your videos. Hopefully I will get success. Thank you so much!!!!
My results came in : L:8.5, R:9, W:7.5 and S:7.5. Thanks to you guys!
how did u get band 9 in Reading 🥺🥺
@@yousradiab478 I read books and followed some of the strategies in this channel :)
@@dralism123 thank u🥺
Congratulations Ali..well done.
How long did it take you to prepare?
@@iamflavoured8557 thanks, I took a month
my introduction:Nowadays, more children are allowed to have a mobile phone at all time, including at school. However, some schools think about instituting rules in order to restrict mobile phones uses. In this essay, we will discuss about the positive impact on learning and social life that this development could have if it was implemented.
"if it is implemented" would be more apt.
I think the use of we is not formal
Instead of using
"In this essay,.... "
you can write like
"This essay discusses the positive impact..... "
This was so helpful thank you so much
Thank you so muchhhh! Your videos had helped me get a 7 in writing. Thank you so much, i am so satisfied with this result
Just a quick question, while writing the examples in body paragraphs should the examples be like specific ( with percentages or ratios) or we can write informal examples without any specific details
Thanks
Thank you so much @E2 IELTS, I got a L:9, W:8.5, S:8.5, R:8, and i learnt everything there was from your channel!! Thank you so so much!
Hi, how did you get your feedback?
Hi did u join the e2 course?can u guide a bit
so helpful am sitting for my exam in 3 days 25/3/2023 i feel confident,, thanks
Thanks a lot))) I feel that it was helpful for me today, and believe that can improve my score in real exam)))
I just want to thank Alex and Jay for all the lessons they gave concerning writing, reading and speaking. I wrote my exam on Saturday and my result came back yesterday. L8, R8.5, W7, S7.5.
Very many thanks o the entire E2 language team. It has been a pleasure.
You didn't write the exam. Cambridge University wrote the exam- you took the exam.
I asked this question to my 8 year old daughter and she said that schools should not allow mobile phone because it has harmful radiation, children will get addicted and if the teacher gets a call , the class will get distract by it :) :)
Great..
Calling 🧢
The electromagnetic spectrum is everywhere, tell her not to worry and do not listen to the jargon that her school teacher is teaching.
Thank you for reminding us to stay on topic 🥲
Thanks. it was a great lesson. Good luck to u guys in E2.
I used to think of myself as a super good IELTS teacher. However, after watching this video i got humbled😂
Thank you Alex😘
😄😄😄
Haha as teachers, we are always learning too 👍
Thank you madam for you session. I have one concern regarding the word limit. Even though minimum word limit is 250 for part 2 writing, can we go beyond 350 words or is it better to stick with maximum of 260- 265 words.
If u want to write more than make a maximum limit of 300 words not more than that.more u write more u likely to make mistakes
Thank you Alex I listened to ur videos and got S-8.5, L-8. 5, W-7, R-8. 5 in 3 days
Thanks Alex. it was amazing.
After 2 days have my first IELTS exam, so these recommendations helped me a lot. Thanks for your aid, in advance.
my exam is on 31st
all the best :)
btw which country do you plan to go?
@@hmm2928 good luck to you, You know, havent decided yet but Norway, Germany are options.
Got my results todayy Overall 8.0 🤓🤓
@@samireezizova8013 hey awesome, me to deciding Norway. Which field you form?
and congrats! on the marks! I have my exam in 9 hours now!
@@hmm2928 thanks a lot, good luck İ m going to choose Norway or Sweden
Thanks a lot , I got 7 overall ( L 8, R 6.5, WRITING 5.5 , SPEAKING 7) 😍
Give me tips for speaking dear
Plz help me dear
@@ieltstricks4237 hey, Focus and take your time, think carefully before you answer . Don't try to use idioms in part 1 , be simple. But in part 3 show all your vocabulary.
@@makhdisobirov4759 can you help me in speaking
@@ieltstricks4237 okay , you mean real practice through zoom?
thanku so much alex its really helpful
thanks a lot very good step by step instruction.
I’m stuck on 7 in writing I need a 7.5. I’ll post an update if I get it 🤞🏼
Ielts academic .. 7.5 in writing, 9 speaking, 9 reading and 8.5 in listening
Please give me some tips to score 7.5 in writing
Faryal Himayat can you guide me?
This is what my first paragraph looks like
Currently, a number of schools have restricted the utilization of cellular devices in the premises. This measure needs to be taken by schools in order to enforce discipline, as children these days use them for unproductive activities rather than using them for the core purpose, that is calling in case of an emergency.
Please let me know if I am on the correct path as I am struggling for 7 in writing as I received a 6.5 in my previous exam, all the other sections went well for me .
That's 7.5
I would suggest be specific while presenting you opinion. For instance... This is a positive step that is likely to help in establishing discipline among pupils and making productive use of their time.....
In this way, you are giving clear indication to the examiner about what he should expect....
Now explain how mobile disturbs discipline and then support how a ban on it would enforce discipline...
Secondly, explain how children engross in unproductive things because of mobile, and then elaborate how the prohibition would help them in being productive...
Hope it helps....
The teaching way of tutor is beautiful as she is❤️
Excellent way of teaching.
Mine exam was in sep 2020
Topic was
Some peaple say politicians have great influence on world then scientists.what do you think ..? support your idea with eg.
Good luck to everyone for Ielts.
Result???
@@Jasbhinder471 it was good.
"There is no doubt that the mobile phones have played a crucial role in safety, entertainment, and even learning. However, few schools have prohibited the usage of these devices on campus. I strongly believe that it will lead to a positive impact and this essay will explore the reasons associated with it." Is this Introduction correct? Or am I missing something?
I think it will be better if you try to include the key words (schools and mobile phones) in your first sentence.
@@nitingolani3244 thank you Nitin for your feedback. :)
Best teacher of all
I want to thank E2 ielts for their amazing vidoes. I never thought I could get 7 in writing as I was struggling with it. Followed their videos for last 10 days before my exam and I got it. ❤️ Thankyou so much E2 ielts❤️
Many colleges allow to their students to use their own cell phones while in campus. Some other schools, however, ban using mobile phones in the class arguing that this action improves the learning process greatly, and prevents many physical and social problems, and in my opinion, I believe this is completely true.
Most students in various schools around the world have their own mobile phones. However, while the use of these mobile devices is good for social interactions as well as learning, several schools have limited their use within the school campus. I believe that this is a positive development, as it can help the students both academically and socially.
Are these 250 words?
This channel is the best channel for IELTS . 😘😘😘😘😘
really amazing discussion..........thanks alot
Alex, If I had you as my teacher, I would never use my mobile phone in the class and admire you all the time
Creepy af