"Battle of Narendra III" - Old Version
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- Опубліковано 17 жов 2024
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"Battle of Narendra III" - Yesterday's Enterprise.
In 2344, the Enterprise-C receives a distress call from the Klingon outpost on Narendra III and engages four Romulan Warbirds.
Regarding the initial attack on the Enterprise-C by the Romulan:
I intended that the Enterprise had assumed there were no attacking ships present. The distress call did not specify who was attacking, therefore the ship would have ended red alert and dropped shields to transport down and render aid. At this point the Romulan attacked and this attack wrecked the shield system. I would have put this in a title screen but I rendered that scene literally months ago and I did the titles just before uploading it, so by then I had forgot what my thinking was about the scene!
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Based upon the Star Trek: The Next Generation episode, "Yesterday's Enterprise".
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3D Models:
Enterprise-C and Enterprise-D by
Scifi-Art
Vmelak Warbird
Model and textures: LC Amaral
Design: Raven Night
This ship was designed specifically as a pre-TNG / Ambassador-era warbird. It is not a canon class. The ship is conjectured to be 346m long and was the first Romulan ship to be powered by an artificial quantum singularity.
Planet textures:
Source unknown
Explosion footage:
Detonation Films
Music:
Jerry Goldsmith
Danny Pelfrey
Dennis McCarthy
Background info sources:
Ex Astris Scientia
Memory-Alpha
Memory-Beta
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Made purely for non-profit purposes. STAR TREK is a registered trademark of CBS/Paramount Pictures etc. No infringement intended. - Фільми й анімація
I love this! The ships and their lighting are absolutely wonderful. I love the pre-TNG Warbird! Man... I wish this was an actual episode! I also love how faithful you stayed to Captain Garrett's account of the battle. Four warbirds and everything.
Great job!
Can you give us more?
The shape of those warbirds is even more similar to the real world vehicle called "Bird of Prey", originally, "Oiseau de Proie", which is the French name for the 14-bis, the plane made by Santos-Dumont. Its front elevator, and its rear wings made it seems like a bird of prey, like startrek ones. But the original name is not about any military purposes. It's just about the shape. This plane have flown in Paris in 1906, in front of a crown, and cameras, which made photos and VIDEOS. It started from the ground, lift up by itself, and came back later in entirely in safe conditions, just like now-days replica of this plane.
Great Job! I'm 54 yo so I was perfect age to watch original Star Trek when it premiered. Back in the 60's Star Trek was SO FAR AHEAD of its time that many of the serious minded adults just laughed at it or ignored it completely. As a little kid that watched every NASA space mission filled with awe to see Star Trek just fueled my young imagination! When you are 10 years old EVERYTHING seems possible! I'm still addicted to Space Exploration and anything related. Thanks for posting!
This is still one of my favorite interpretations of that famous battle. On a historical note, the space of time between Kirk & Spock and the adventures of Capt. Picard and the Enterprise D, there was great expansion in the Federation and the entire Beta Quadrant was constantly on the brink of war.
What 3D Editing programe do you use? When I try to make a battle im using pictures! LOL. Plez Reply!
How did u make this? Which program?
Rachel Garrett wasn't a very good captain that's for sure
Correct. She should of used photon torpedo's as well
The hell she wasn't >:( her and the crews efforts cemented the treaty between the Federation and the Klingon Empire, plus read the lost era novels that ship under her command for 11 years before Narendra III proves different,
Rachel Garrett was to the Enterprise C what Captain Kathryn Janeway was to Voyager. She was a excellent captain who happened to be at the wrong place at the wrong time. No Captain would have survived that onslaught even if shields would have been up
A Captain is only as good or bad as the crew he or she commands.
She was one of the best that's why she was in command of the flagship
Very, very well made! Did a very good job in filling in the gap in the original episode. A lot of work went into this. Thank's for producing and sharing this talented work.
Great video! That was one of my favorite New Trek episodes. Thanks for all the work!
The Plaque at the end is an excellent touch.
That was wonderful. I loved your take on starship battles, a cross between the 'jet fighter' battles in warp and the 'naval battleship battle' from ST:WoK. It looked terrific, and the narrative text was compelling. Nice work. :)
Wow, That was great! Nice work all around. The editing of the various soundtracks was done well too.
This is one of the best fan made films I've seen.
That is gorgeous!!! Probably one of the best Star Trek Animations out there. One can see the love you put in in this. Thank you!
@captjami
Yes I've been meaning to re-edit and re-upload this. Most of it will only be scaled up to 720HD but it still looks better. Any new shots I add I'll do in HD so they will stand out!
10 years on and this is still brilliant, better than most things on UA-cam these days
I just want to say that I have been watching this video, not to mention all your other work, for days now.
The Romulan Warbirds look outstanding. The black paint over the green is sick.
Oh, and I'm definitely going to watch this in conjunction with "Yesterday's Enterprise". Such a great idea! lol
Awesome work! The effects and cg work were all top notch!
I especially liked the shot with the dedication plaque, very touching.
I really like the design of the Romulan Warbird's. Great job.
51 years is how long it's been since the signing of the Khitomer Accords. 2344-2293=51 if anyone is wondering.
Nice work on the effects! Ship design taste is one thing, quality of work is another, outstanding stuff!
@basherman69 Yes well it's something of an oversight, I had intended that the Enterprise had assumed there were no attacking ships present. The distress call did not specify who was attacking, therefore the ship would have ended red alert and dropped shields to transport down and render aid. At this point the Romulan attacked. The thing is I rendered that scene literally months ago and I did the titles just before uploading it, so by then I had forgot what my thinking was about the scene!
This actually had a rather good set of background music choices. Too often people who make these kinds of videos don't seem to put the thought into the music that you have. Great job.
@adwadle They responded to the distress call of the outpost, which was on the surface. I had intended to show the attack but I gave up because it wasn't convincing. The rest of your comment I dont really understand, the ship was there because they got a distress call and were investigating.
Excellent video, I love the detail of the ships and how you re-created the Ent-C/Ent-D meet. I can't want to see the edited version and I look forward to checking out all your videos.
Why weren't the shields up and operating at maximum capacity? You are entering an unknown situation and responding to a DISTRESS call of an Attack?
Assuming they were, Romulan tech rivals Fed tech.
Baseshocks Why would we Need to ASSume that? They are responding to a distress call from a Klingon outpost that is being Attacked.... Don't get me wrong but the key word: Attack would automatically make me go to battle stations, shields at maximum... ALL Weapons at ready and FULLY activated. Sensor sweep analysis anyone?? Come on man!!
Trent Timoy
They Rival fed tech meaning they can target the Enterprise warp engines right after decloaking. As we have seen in the series time and time again, warp engines can be disabled even with the shields up.
Baseshocks The Enterprise was completely caught off guard to have sustained that much damage during the initial first strike. I would have to assess that as a breach of appropriate protocols when entering a potentially unpredictable situation. If I'm not mistaken, part of battle tactics includes a "first strike" on your opponent to gain a upper hand (the Romulans achieved that). The Enterprise sensors should've anticipated a 'decloaking" ship. This scenario was all set-up for the historical significance it contributed to the stronger ties between the Klingon empire and the Federation. The circumstances that occurred with this Enterprise was meant to be in order to forge the alliance that the Federation and Klingons enjoy today.
Trent Timoy
For the amount of damage given.. This is a fan made cgi scenario. The way i see it war bird declockes and damages engines. The rest is a battle.
@meteorafallen
I have posted in HD for a while now, see any of the newer videos. This was rendered out for 480p but I am working on an HD edit.
Very nice detailing The music score is blended so well into the picture and choosen well to highen the setting. Nicely done.
Great job. I really enjoyed that. The creativity and talent of some people never ceases to amaze me.
Well done! I like how you added momentum to the impacts on the Enterprise, something likely hard to pull off with the models used in the series' fx shots.
A great video man. Especially at the end with the ships plaque, slowly floating through space, was a very nice touch.
Gotta love how the C came back all "you want some hands too? I brought plenty for everybody. Come get it."
@basherman69 Yes but I'm saying at the moment she chose to lower shields, in order to transport down and render aid to the Klingon survivors, that is when the Romulan attacked, having scanned them dropping shields. It would not have been negligent to do this if you thought the attacking ships had left the area. I certainly will take note that in future videos I should put more thought and time into these issues since I want people to fully enjoy the video without nitpicking lol.
@adwadle As said in the vid description, shields were down because at that point they were beaming down to render aid to the suriviors of the outpost, I just did include a title for that.
You're hard work and determination shows! This is incredible
This was a wonderful way to do this episode and it's story justice. Well done.
Im loving how you captured the camera angles from the shows so perfectly....
All I can think of to make it better would be some acting, so that it seems like an actual episode.
That would be pretty cool, if you had good actors and sets.
One of the best made fan videos I have ever seen! Really a amazing job.
Very well done! Whatever minor 'mistakes' are besides the point. The Romulan ships looked amazing, as did the Enterprise C. This is a battle everyone has wanted to see, so thank you for making this for the fans! :D
That was very good! I can imagine the script in my head- Captain Garret and her crew's reaction to the attack, the alert sirens, the consoles exploding. And I can see Castillo and Yar's valiant struggle and final decision to abandon ship. An awesome video!
nice cg. the ships are beautifully rendered and the camera work is quite well done. i'm a bit worried about the enterprise's lack of shields.
I loved the way you slightly modulated the light behind the cloaked ship. Very eerie and subtle. ST could've used the same technique to let the audience in on stuff without letting the crew know. Very cool.
That was amazing! Simply stunning! VSFX, you do simply awsome work.
Thank you so much.
@MajorDiarriah Thanks, yes I am aware it has flaws but it's hard for me (1 person) to think not only about the technical side of making this but also the story side at the same time. I tried to only use text to explain points not obvious in the video itself and in the understanding people who don't know Trek would be watching.
That's a brilliant video! I really enjoyed the C/D encounter and the snippets of TNG "Yesterday's Enterprise" played over the scene - very inspired and an excellent selection of lines. Look forward to your next.
This has all the makings and imagination of Star Trek and all that it stands for, excellent work, to anyone out there, how can u ever make a dislike or negative comment here when this is as close to seeing a new episode of STNG as you will ever get. Makes me realize how much I love Star Trek and how it captures my imagination and makes me long to see more, thank you sooooooo much for sharing!
I like what you've done so far and look forward to seeing a newer version when you have posted it.
You know what VideoSpaceFX, i really thoroughly enjoyed this, very nciely done. I expected exactly what I got anf was entertained. You have talent and I say good job and thank you!
Impressive. I think it was well done. The rendering of Enterprise was phenominal. Good work!
You guys did a bloody excellent job on this, well done
Superbly done!!! Excellent CGI and retelling of the story line.
Very cool and well made video! I really like the design you did for the Romulan ships of that era.
All the ships blown up in seconds are severely outclassed by the other. The video is very well done.
I enjoyed every frame of that. Thank you for posting.
with great detail like that all you need is a couple of bridge scenes and you can make your own great series...awesome videos
LOVE the sound effects. the impacts are much better than anything done in the series. It actually sounds like something hitting, and hitting hard.
@VideoSpaceFX This was fantastic. Not sure what the treky121212 guy was talking about either. The video clearly says the Enterprise dropped shields to help the Klingons and there were definitely 3 Warbirds.
Very nice work on this.
One of my favorite episodes remastered. Very good job.
@holodock Yes, I was not happy with the movements anyway but you can notice that the earlier hits did not react in that way. I think I saw another video on youtube which had the ships doing that so I copied it. Those are actually disruptor hits so its purely an energy impact causing an explosion, which would exert a force on the ship, but probably not that strong.
Thanks for the input because I certainly like to make sure my videos are as accurate and plausible as is possible.
@matvangogh
Fire phasers from its warp nacelles ?? When does that occur? There is a phaser strip on each nacelle pylon and they fire at 5:03 and 5:08 if that's what you mean.
@vjeko1701 Thank you.
I had a quick look, and is this related to the development of a sequel to BOTF? I was a HUGE fan of the game and I played it alot, so taking part in in a project like that would be cool.
Very good fun to watch. I knew that was the enterprise C but did not realize what episode it was from until it went through the space distortion. Thanks!
12:58 admit it, tears fell at that point.
@xsonicsd Yeah I initially wanted to show the orbital bombardment but creating the outpost proved a big challenge. I went out and took some still photos of some woods and composited 3D buildings into the shot but somehow it didn't have the scale and look I wanted so i didn't include it.
Absolutely amazing!!!! I feel like I actually watched Star Trek history and in my head anyway, is now canon. I got the freakin chills on the last title card when it discussed the new Federation/Klingon partnership. Great job!
Yesterdays Enterprise was, and still is one of my favourite episodes. I often wondered how the battle might have gone. Be neat to see some short episodes of the adventures of the Enterprise C, since this era has little write up.
Absoluely fantastic! I loved this ship and it's story when I first saw 'Yesterday's Enterprise' as a kid in 1990, and this is a lovely homage to a 'forgotten' ship. If only you made movies!
@VideoSpaceFX Phenomenal, I noticed few if any incongruities. It explained Tasha Yar in the Episode of STNG, and made the Ambassador Class way more then just a simple afterthought. And the CG was fantastic. Good on ya mate
well made gold. Thank you for bringing this to the people who wish to see it.
A brilliant representation of this great battle. I've always loved the fact that this Enterprise was destroyed, with the crew fighting to protect others.
How the hell did you make this?!? This is top notch a +. Amazing!
Wow - A lot of work went into this! And it looks great! Thanks!
Well actually I'm not locked in a room and I wouldn't mind a better computer. I made this video as I make all my videos as a way of telling a story and being creative, which is nice relief from my day job and the general drudgery of life. Shame you didn't enjoy it but the general view of this video is positive, which is kinda nice.
I liked it. A new, consistent-looking design of Warbird, and it's generally nicely-done. The pacing could be described as a little sedate perhaps, and I can't honestly say that I much cared for the Enterprise-C wobbling on its axis when hit on the saucer, but I can see just how much time, effort and skill went into making this and I'm really impressed.
Nice!!! I've always wondered,as a teenager,what the actual battle itself looked like after "Yesterday's Enterprise" ended.All I had was my imagination to go on. Until now.Great work!!! Thank you!
Incredible program. Thank you very your hard work. Too bad we never saw an actual television episode of the battle. It would have been glorious!
This good stuff here man. I can tell a lot of work went into this. Keep it up.
I can't claim to be much of a fan of these amateur ST efforts, but this one was really rather good. The understated battle scenes are a definite plus, in my opinion.
Great job!
i like that most if not all of the damage is consistent with what we see post-battle in Yesterday's Enterprise
Excellent vid and hard work! I thorougly enjoyed it! I agree with some of the other posters regarding points of the vid to fix in your finalized version, such as the 'rift' appearing after a volley of Photon torpedos. All in all it is an excellent rendition of pieces of the story left out of the series that we would have never seen otherwise, if not for your imagination and hard work... THANKS again! This is my favorite episode of TNG!
Amazing work! This is the first video of yours I have watched. I look forward to watching more!
OUTSTANDING effort!!!! My compliments! A small piece of advice: knock it off with all the fadeouts. That's all. I LOVED IT!!! Super Job! Please bring on more!
History will never forget the name ENTERPRISE. Wonderfully done!
VERY VERY good. I am a Trek Shipper (I love my trek ships). I didn't care so much if you did do the ship wrong. I was too distracted by the excellent cinematography and graphics. You pieced together a story that was wonderfully done and compared to others (except one other trek artist on you tube whom only beat this by graphic quality alone) this is a masterpiece.
This is incredibly well done. Really nerdy, but great to watch. Cheers!
From one "ST nerd" to another, this was well done, I especially liked the cameo from the Enterprise D and the audio from the corresponding episode. Job well done.
I thoroughly enjoyed watching this creation of Narendra III. Well done!
Fantastic, I miss Star Trek on television greatly. I only wish we could have seen the crews, but keep up the good work.
OMFG!!!!!!! THIS is one of the absolute best things I have EVER seen. 'Yesterday's Enterprise' is one of my favorite episodes, and I have always wanted to see the battle at Narendra III both before and after the Enterprise-C's temporal incursion.
The only thing I would like to see corrected is the formation of the temporal rift. It did not just magically appear. Captain Garrett said (and I'm paraphrasing here) was the result of a 'fierce volley of phasers & photon torpedoes'.
I was just saying today we need a new star trek series, and then I find this beautiful gem, i'm in heaven. Pity that theres no cast which would be great, but this is so brilliant. Thanks!
Excellent retelling of the story! This continues to show that the best talent is on UA-cam and not in Hollywood! Very nicely done and great imagination!!!!
Well done, it does fit because eventually tasha's daughter becomes that Romulan leader on a later season. Man its little things like this that makes me like Star Trek even better. Keep up the good work.
@WROrchestra Thanks, yeah I only watched the episode 50 times while making this lol, but I might do a re-edit at some point to correct the inconsistencies.
@EVAUnit4A
Thanks. The warbird model was designed by Raven Night as a game mod for Bridge Commander and fits into this timeframe and the escape pods were made by me, based on other escape pod designs we have seen.
I understand about the music but it was neccesary for timing purposes, I don't have a composer scoring my videos so I have to make do. I think the fastest I sped any piece up by was to 110%. Im suprised anyone noticed.
@VideoSpaceFX You're amazing, not only for your videos but for the fact that you respond to the comments!
That was super fun! Thanks for filling in the details I never understood of how Tasha made that later appearance after her death! You use of music was totally pro. Hope you make more. Thanks.
Very nicely done. Impressive, to say the least. Great to finally see the battle of Narendra III.
@treky121212
Thanks, but "their was suppos to be three romulin warbirds not just 1" - ???
@Silence233
Inoperative - hence they tried to hide above the polar area of the planet to conduct repairs, but were found. I should have put captions up to explain that but I already get moaned out for having to many captions.
@ltflak How would that relate to this video?
@VideoSpaceFX
I was reminded of one time when my dad was playing a cassette tape of the Star Wars Ep.IV soundtrack in the car and didn't notice that it was so old as to be playing too fast. I just know it so well that I could pick it out so easily. ^_^
But, I'm not joking when I say the video quality here was quite good; much better than most amateur CGI I usually see of Star Trek ships. Textures, movement, timing, lighting- everything was spot-on screen-accurate!