Reading My Essays that Got Me Into Stanford University (Plus College Essay Writing Tips!)
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- Опубліковано 9 лип 2024
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How I Got Into Stanford: • How I got into Stanfor...
How I Got Into 4/4 (ALL) UCs I Applied To I UCLA, UCSB, UCSD, & UCI: • How I Got Into UCLA, U...
My video on tips + things I wish I had known before applying to college: • 10 Things I Wish I Kne...
HOW I STARTED A NONPROFIT AT 17: • Video
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Hi everyone! Today I read you guys the essays that got me into Stanford! Hopefully this helps some of you as you start writing your essays! Also just a disclaimer, plagiarizing is NOT smart and you will get caught, just don't to it 'kay. I'll have another essay video coming up soon for the essays that got me into UCLA, UCSB, UCSD, and UCI. I'll also have a college Q&A vid as well as a vid on how I started my non-profit up soon. Don't forget to like and subscribe ❤
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Link to my essays: docs.google.com/document/d/1A...
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instagram: @tristyn.thomas
Thanks for watching! My how i got into stanford video (ua-cam.com/video/DZtFEoNdbFc/v-deo.html ) and how i started my non profit video (ua-cam.com/video/qB0Nv-BY3dg/v-deo.html ) are out!
No ones ever told that there were literal books with college essay smh
Ikr I found it so randomly & it helped sm!
@@ohnoirpodcast which College Essay books would you recommend?
@@winter_vibes 50 successful ivy league application essays
"Injustice thrives when good people stay silent" That's my new favorite quote
Uhmmm ….. yeah ….. that’s from Sir Edmund Burke.
@@cici79 I'm glad to know. Do you want a cookie sis?
@@Marie-wb3ec i'll take the cookie.
the middle name essay was such a good essay omg
tysm!
Yeah...that was what caught my attention too I love it so much
stop ur actually the prettiest person i've ever seen
You're too sweet thank you
Oh my god I just wanted to comment to tell you how much I loved your middle name essay. It gave me chills honestly- if I were an admissions officer, that essay alone would've won me over. Congratulations on Stanford! They're so lucky to have you.
Thank you so much !
I am a 25 year old PhD student, and these are phenomenal. Holy shit. No wonder you were accepted! The first one blew me away!
Thank you!
This shows that you don’t need to have to highest greats or test scores. Just have passion and you will succeed ♥️😌
Ok why was this so helpful? A lot of these types of videos are just people making fun of their essays (which are still quite entertaining) but this was genuinely so helpful.
These were SO good!! Stanford got a good one 🥺
Thank you so much!
THANK YOUUUU FOR THIS
Imagine getting your essay in that book.
I hope no one would LOL thats plagiarism that would be too easy to catch 😩
@@ohnoirpodcast I think she means "imagine writing such a good essay it ends up in a book like that," but idk!
I loved your essays !! especially the one about your middle name :)
Thank you
Your whole channel is so inspiring and truly motivates me to work harder! :)
Thank you so much that means a lot, I'm happy to hear that! You got this! Just remember that you'll thrive no matter where you go as long as you work hard
Omggg I love your voice its so cute and soothing :)
Yes Tristyn!!! Such amazing essays❤️❤️
Thank you 🥺
Congratulations for the essay! Amazing writing! Despite the essays I got curious about the sheet music on the background and was wondering what kind of instrument do you play?
Thank you! I play piano :D
This was so helpful thank youuu
No problem, happy to help :D
Ily for this
I'm just in grade - 9. This video gave me an idea of college application essays and also I learned so many vocabulary words because my level of English is very low. 😄
Many many wishes and love from Bangladesh 💞
YOU’RE AMAZING TRISTYN
Im cryin ty youuuuu are amazing bb
Tristyn has such a sweet voicee.
congratulations! thanks for the advice. OMG; you are so pretty.
Thank you so much!!
College essay guy is also a really good resource!
Thank you so much!!! This was so helpful!
No problem, thanks for watching! I'm happy to hear that it helped!
Omg... my sister was diagnosed with MS at 26 (she is now 28). Also, your essay was beautiful!
Ahh I'm sorry to hear that I know it can be so hard! I wish you both the best! Thank you so much I appreciate that
4:17 First Essay reading
OMG is that warcross? I absolutely love Marie Lu.
for the short essays, would you recommend that they relate to your desired major? or can it just, for example, be any situation that exited you to learn?
I think for the short essays you should really stick with something you genuinely feel excited to write about, whether that be your intended major or an extracurricular or a passion of yours :D Don't make it to hard on yourself and write about something that comes naturally!
I’m so confused because I was told not to talk about academic achievements in my common app essay?
Wish I had this when I was in high school 😭😭🤩🤩🤩
Bae you can still transfer :0
i have that same happy birthday mini cupcake balloon
omg haha isnt it cute !
Thanks my dear
Hi! Great video, thanks for sharing plus the tips! Just wondering, did you apply to Stanford early action or regular decision?
I applied Early Restrictive Action :D
What is the difference between early action and regular decision ?
Early restrictive action means that you're applying to Stanford only early, not any other private schools early (by nov 1st), and regular is later on, its a larger applicant pool
Hey, I was wondering what the club red cross was about?!
I'll have a video coming out about my extracurriculars soon, subscribe to stay updated ;D
PLEASE DO A MAKEUP ROUTINE!!!!
Me reading the name after the essay to her roomate: DIVERGENT, TRIS, OH MY GOD WOW I LOVE HER NAME EVEN MORE
Thank you haha
Born a crime and Children of Blood and Bone is so good ahh
YES!!
Hey Tristyn, I want to ask you a question that is it ok to exceed the word limit of 650 in common app to like 700 words
There is a set number of words that you can paste into the text box then you can format it, then send it …… so, no, you can not go over the limit.
FAZIO's QUAKING 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Can you make a video on how u started your nonprofit please? :)
Yes, a video on that is coming soon :D
Hi! How do I defy the Asian stereotype, standing out to Stanford, even though I fit the stereotype almost perfectly :/
I think there isn't exactly a particular "Asian" stereotype (unless maybe you're referring to the model minority concept?), but in general there are a lot of applicants that are similar (in terms of grades, stats, ECs, etc). I'm going to make a video about how to stand out soon :D
bella's lullaby
GIRL YOU GREW UP IN CHULA VISTA?!?! ME TOO!
Hi pls do u know any medical university in los Angeles?
Hi I'm sorry I don't, I'm sure google might have some answers though
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I am currently an international student from Uganda and wanted to apply to stanford for aerospace engineering. Is it possible for me to stand out?
Definitely! Essays are a big part of telling your story and showing admissions officers what makes you stand out!
Thanks Thomas be blessed
YOU ARE SO PRETTY
Thank you so much thats so sweet of you!
How much time do you have to answer these questions
The questions are always available online so however much time you give yourself before the application is due!
Tristyn Thomas oh, ty 💖
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the music is to loud
Damn she’s hella good
Today is my deadline . Wish me luck
How was it?
How much did you get in SAT?
1320
ua-cam.com/video/DZtFEoNdbFc/v-deo.html I talk about that in my stats vid :D
Can I steal this
copy and paste, thanks
I know you’ll probably never see this but how are you so smart? I know that’s a dumb question but I have always felt like I could never be smart enough to be admitted into any college. Any tips you could share? I really want to be more intelligent and well-spoken like you!
beauty and brains
You can turn down the music 🤫🤭
the music has overshadowed your voice in the beginning of your vids
Your face and mannerisms remind of kali uchis
omg.. thank u HAHA she's so beautiful thats really sweet of you to say
such an epic gal! :)
ty king!!!
Playboicarti in the video. You deserve Stanford.
So you put this music over your voice to make it even more difficult to understand what you're saying ?
good but superrr boring essay
Anyone else feel like these essays are really bad lol? Her common app talks about ACADEMICS (overdone), her intellectual vitality essay talks about RESEARCH (overdone). Starting to think this is more a case of affirmative action than anything else.
Well what would you write about
Cmon girl. Spice up your videos 😴
Your essay was lowkey bad. It was just about academic stuff which you’ll talk about in the rest of your application anyways. It had no flow or narrative
I know right
Did you get into stanford? :)