IELTS Writing task 1: Bar chart lesson
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- Опубліковано 7 лип 2024
- Learn how to describe bar charts in IELTS Writing task 1 to get a band 9 for your writing! In this tutorial you will see a sample bar chart question + useful tips and vocabulary + step-by-step guide to write a band 9 answer.
You can find a text version of this lesson (with exercise) here: ielts-up.com/writing/bar-chart...
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0:30 Describing a bar chart
1:46 Band 9 answer structure
- Introduction (Introduce your chart in 1-2 sentences)
- Overview (Describe general trends)
- Feature 1
- Feature 2
2:50 Introduction (1-2 sentences)
- Paraphrase given information
- Write 2 things:
1. What your graph shows
2. For what period of time
- Synonyms:
+ Shows = provide information about = represents = illustrates
+ Divorce rate = percentages of divorces
+ From 2011 to 2015 = Between 2011 and 2015
5:27 Overview
- Describes trends ( should have 2-4 key features )
- NEVER write numbers, percentages or dates in overview
- Compare beginning and the end
- Always start overview with ‘overall’
- Describing: + Experienced a downward trend. + Showed an upward trend
+ Initially had a lower rate
- Linking words: While
9:15 Specific details
- Group specific features into separate paragraphs
- Write 2-3 separate paragraphs
9:50 Paragraph 1 (Details about Sweden)
- Write numbers ,percentages and include useful details as much as you can
- Describing: + Was about 45%(use ‘about’ when you’re not sure the exact percentage)
+ Being higher than ..... by approximately 8%
+ Rose to almost 50%. + Showed a gradual decrease
+ Hitting a low point
- Linking word: However (To show that Sweden’s rate changed)
- All percentages are not exact ( used ‘around’ and ‘about’ )
14:49 Paragraph 2 (Details about Finland)
- Describing: + Was less than 40%. + Decreased in 2012, when about one third
+ Experienced a steady growth. + Rose to approximately 39%. + Increased by around 3%
+ Remained steady for the next year, outracing...
Linking word: However
16:57 Full Paragraph
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In pie chart, overview is shorter. Here, it is longer. What should we choose?
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That tutorial is very helpful, but I have an ADVICE for Ielts task 1 writers, since she didn’t mention it. Better use numbers in fractions not percentage, ex: 50% one half, 20% one fifth, 25% quarter and so on. Because examiners check your capability of using the language.
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8:27 why did he said "had some fluctations" cant we just use the past simple and say "fluctuated"??
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I am IELTS trainer registered with British Council. In my opinion, the lady explains most of the features in understandable and explainatory manner. However, you need to remember that the significance of lexical resources counts for 25% of the overall elaboration. Regards
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