IELTS Writing task 1: describing a diagram

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  • @blumoon4228
    @blumoon4228 4 роки тому +209

    0:45
    2:03 Questions you need to ask yourself about the diagram
    2:24 Band 9 answer structure
    3:21 Introduction
    5:09 Overview
    7:21 Specific Features
    12:02 Second paragraph(Features)
    12:50 Third paragraph(Features)
    13:19 Full paragraph

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    @SumitKumar-kg3ho 5 років тому +62

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    @ryanabanto5335 4 роки тому +240

    The diagram depicts information about steel rods production in the furniture industry. Overall, it is clear that the method of manufacturing consists of eleven stages, beginning with the collection of raw materials and ending up with the inspection.
    Firstly, the raw materials, which are iron ore, yellow ore, or carbon, are gathered and handed over to the processing area. Collected materials are then melted through a slit, heated to a temperature of 1300 to 1500 degrees Celsius. Next, this is transferred to a smelting cabin to undergo refinement before it is placed in a pouring machine to produce candescent metal and poured into ingots.
    In the subsequent stage, ingots are then connected to a cooling reservoir at a temperature of 60 to 100 degrees Celsius. The next step is the strand casting in which metal goes through nozzles and the strands of cooled metal are made. Following this, metal passed through rollers and a machine for the heat treatment. The surface is then checked through a measuring automaton and a cutter is used in a sizing process. Finally, steel rods are stamped and ready to undergo inspection.

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    @tgtitanium8085 Рік тому +1

    🎯 Key Takeaways for quick navigation:
    00:00 🎯 Diagrams are part of IELTS Academic Writing Task 1, and you should know how to describe them effectively.
    01:09 📋 A diagram question will provide basic information about the diagram's topic that you need to describe.
    01:36 🔄 Before writing, understand the process depicted in the diagram and identify the starting and ending points.
    03:26 📝 To introduce the diagram, paraphrase the topic in your own words and use appropriate verbs.
    05:14 🔍 In the overview paragraph, mention the number of stages and how the process begins and ends.
    08:47 🧩 When describing specific features, group data into paragraphs logically and describe the stages sequentially.
    10:21 📝 Use appropriate verbs like "undergo" to explain stages with limited information.
    11:26 🕰️ Use time connectors ("first of all," "after that," "finally," etc.) to create a coherent and time-based description of the process.
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  • @eagleeye7134
    @eagleeye7134 4 роки тому

    Wish i met your channel earlier, the best channel exist on youtube for ielts writing

  • @rayhanredefined2504
    @rayhanredefined2504 5 років тому +7

    Really help me to gets good score, appreciate to you

  • @redwanahmed1850
    @redwanahmed1850 2 роки тому

    7:15 begging with somesing and ending with somesing, this pronunciation is really unique 😍

  • @harit9380
    @harit9380 7 років тому +4

    It was a great video and great explanation.Thank you so much!! all your videos are great. . !
    Can you please upload a video relating to a table. if you have already uploaded could you please provide the link. I am finding it difficult to group data when it comes to table data. Thanks in advance.!

  • @michisato9653
    @michisato9653 2 роки тому

    I watch this two hours before the exam! Thanks!

  • @kilik32121
    @kilik32121 7 років тому +3

    Thank you for this helpful material; really enjoyable and useful
    You are doing a great work Keep it up!

  • @sandiyamohan9215
    @sandiyamohan9215 3 роки тому

    The best channel for ielts.

  • @sofiasofu7001
    @sofiasofu7001 7 років тому +7

    Would u plzz make videos on other three charts and other modules.....Ur videos r tooo nic ...Moreover plz do it this month bcz there is my ilets exam in next 20 days....Thanx for this help 😀😀

  • @harshbindora6056
    @harshbindora6056 2 роки тому

    Best channel for ielts writing thanks for providing such a good material