How To Write Cold Email Subject Lines - Prospecting For Business Development & B2B Sales

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    You can countless hours writing the perfect cold email, but if you don' know how to write a good subject line…
    NOBODY is going to open your email and read it!
    Now when I first started my sales career, I ran to this exact problem.
    Back in the day, I focused a lot of my time and energy on sales prospecting and lead generation. My goal was to figure out how to get new clients.
    I would spend days making a huge list of prospects and sending emails.
    Unfortunately, not many people would even open the email to read what's inside.
    To fix this, I tried an experiment where I tried all types of different email subject lines to figure out what works.
    Thousands of emails later, I found four bulletproof subject lines that get results.
    These cold email strategies will work if you're a sales development representative, business development representative, account executive, or account manager. If you're doing any B2B sales or selling where you have to cold email someone and book a meeting, these are the right sales strategies.
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КОМЕНТАРІ • 148

  • @GonsHair
    @GonsHair 2 роки тому +1

    You're giving me confidence Patrick. Thank you man.

  • @salesdashcrm
    @salesdashcrm Рік тому

    There's a true art to subject lines! Love the different themes you draw out for them Patrick.

  • @lianacastro4595
    @lianacastro4595 2 роки тому +1

    subject line is one thing that I always stuck with after writing emails! thanks for the making this video Patrick, it's really helpful!

  • @terrancekayton007
    @terrancekayton007 3 роки тому +3

    I liked the one where I'm asking the person a question. Also, the one where we are Congratulating the person on achieving something is a great one. You had some oldies but goodies, simple and effective and you also had some fun new ones we can try out too, so this was dope, bro.

  • @patriciaalexis7696
    @patriciaalexis7696 Рік тому

    Your youtube channel brings up so much value! Thank You!

  • @tiffanyngu
    @tiffanyngu Рік тому

    hi patrick, i have been watching some of your content on cold email and closing sales. love the content. keep going!

  • @folrry
    @folrry Рік тому

    Thank you... I definitely used the short subject line and It felt like I was tricking prospects to open. Thank you very much!!!

  • @jackho7891
    @jackho7891 Рік тому

    Really love your specific strategies and lots of examples, which I don't find from other channels.

  • @victorpadilla2893
    @victorpadilla2893 Рік тому

    Great advise! Thank you so much Patrick!

  • @renefebaguio3009
    @renefebaguio3009 3 роки тому +1

    I've learned a lot by watching your vedios. Thanks Patrick Dang

  • @michelletrieu76
    @michelletrieu76 2 роки тому +1

    Thank you Patrick!!! you're awesome

  • @Tglenn_imhim
    @Tglenn_imhim 10 місяців тому

    Thank God for patrick he a game changer out here fr!!!!

  • @MdParvez-ls3co
    @MdParvez-ls3co 2 роки тому

    Hey Patrick,
    Thanks. It helps me a lot.

  • @Bossfightmedia
    @Bossfightmedia 10 місяців тому +1

    So I know this is 2 years old but I just want to say that Short vague subject lines are REALLY good. I know from experience that especially appropriate person and quick question work wonders. Its a bit like a YT Thumbnail. You want them to have Questionmarks over their heads to open it.

  • @JayhawkGuitar
    @JayhawkGuitar 2 роки тому +1

    More quality help! Thanks, Patrick.

  • @edwardokougbo438
    @edwardokougbo438 3 роки тому +1

    Thank you so much Patrick

  • @josephgitahi2090
    @josephgitahi2090 Рік тому

    Great knowledge Pat much appreciated one of the best youtubers on 🌍

  • @williamshewfelt413
    @williamshewfelt413 2 роки тому

    Good job. I enjoy your explanations. Very definitive.

  • @tanmoygamer9720
    @tanmoygamer9720 3 місяці тому

    Learned from it . Think and wrote a subject line .

  • @tiktokvirals7146
    @tiktokvirals7146 2 роки тому +4

    Patrick, thank you. You are the best!

  • @austingilbert545
    @austingilbert545 2 роки тому +1

    I just finished watching your other email video and saw this as a suggestion. I think for what I’m doing the pain point is going to be huge. My clients have been bombarded with calls from multiple companies for two days by the time I’m reaching out. So a subject line like; tired of the nonstop calls? Should go a long way

  • @eamo2k10eamo
    @eamo2k10eamo 3 роки тому +18

    I've just binged watched about twenty of your videos. My brother works for oracle too. I've learned so much from the both of you. Keep the videos coming 🔥

  • @jmb1819
    @jmb1819 3 місяці тому

    I'd say the pain subject line (Need a better way to manage ___?) is the one that I find most applicable.

  • @hetienpackageco.ltd.4402
    @hetienpackageco.ltd.4402 3 роки тому

    Thanks for your sharing, it's useful

  • @kaynesheenan
    @kaynesheenan Рік тому

    this guy is GREAT!

  • @iamnehalibhagat
    @iamnehalibhagat 2 роки тому +25

    I was just about to start emailing and saw your video. I thought let me just see if I can come down with something interesting.... And as you explained I followed your suggestions and came up with 6 subject lines already... This is so helpful 😊😊😊

  • @webrefreshseoagency7619
    @webrefreshseoagency7619 2 роки тому

    Greeeat video! Love the cold email strategy layout at 1:28 - thanks Patrick :)

  • @PsychPatric
    @PsychPatric 2 місяці тому

    Great content!

  • @marwanelesk
    @marwanelesk 2 роки тому +5

    Awesome videos, Patrick! I work in the field of AI in the Middle East and Egypt and having prospects open up emails is super tough. I am thankful you shared this with us, today.

    • @marwanelesk
      @marwanelesk Рік тому

      Watching 9 months later, still awesome.

  • @thamirischagas1322
    @thamirischagas1322 Рік тому

    Hi Patrick! I hope you are well !
    Thanks for sharing your techniques. I'm BDR and I'm writing my emails but the title still makes me confused what to write. What to write? Thanks !

  • @melakugebremariam6618
    @melakugebremariam6618 Рік тому

    Man I found it very helpful to me for an important move, I wish I can get a personal email from you

  • @esatakan3076
    @esatakan3076 2 роки тому

    Great video man thanks! My favorite short subject line is this one: "Patrick?"

  • @lancelipoufski9330
    @lancelipoufski9330 8 місяців тому

    Good info thank you.

  • @paulamatt614
    @paulamatt614 Рік тому

    Hi Patrick , thank you for this excellent video , just subscribed to your channel. I need to send emails to corporate businesses to invite them to look at a travel company that help with their business travel trips. Found your video of subject matter very helpful.

  • @dharmajitextiles7299
    @dharmajitextiles7299 3 роки тому +1

    thank you so much patrick for this information

  • @anthonysaylaheng4659
    @anthonysaylaheng4659 3 роки тому +1

    Patrick, you are awesome. I use all your scripts from all your videos to sell my solar energy nationwide. Thanks

  • @emilianasamangun5910
    @emilianasamangun5910 3 роки тому +4

    I should have watch this before do the cold email subject line! thanks patrick for sharing

  • @hermanpak30
    @hermanpak30 Рік тому

    Great Tips!

  • @TheAnthonyGonzales
    @TheAnthonyGonzales 2 роки тому +1

    Seriously thank you for this!! I have so many issues with cold email

  • @jazmin6031
    @jazmin6031 2 роки тому +1

    Thank you so much! I'll apply all of these at work :)

    • @patrickdang
      @patrickdang  2 роки тому

      Thanks for watching. Best of luck!

  • @mihsathemichael
    @mihsathemichael 2 роки тому +1

    Thank you very much!
    That was extremely helpful

  • @stefhonjean-claude692
    @stefhonjean-claude692 Рік тому

    thanks for the help

  • @terrancekayton007
    @terrancekayton007 3 роки тому +1

    Hey
    Patrick this was really great information. Thanks, man!

  • @fatimahnuralwiyah2238
    @fatimahnuralwiyah2238 3 роки тому +1

    a lot of value! thank you patrick!!!

  • @rublevv
    @rublevv 3 роки тому +4

    The best subject line is something personal and valuable. I do not recommend using generic lines from free UA-cam videos. But it doesn’t mean this videos is useless. It give you an idea how to write subject line and I do agree with Patrick’s suggestions. Good luck everybody.

    • @patrickdang
      @patrickdang  3 роки тому +2

      Glad you found this video useful.

  • @heididutoit8958
    @heididutoit8958 6 місяців тому

    Love your content! I have been finding it really helpful. Just a question - wouldn't a one word subject line like "hey" result in the email going to someone's spam folder?

  • @jasVA
    @jasVA Рік тому

    such wonderful content.

  • @businessmasterytools
    @businessmasterytools Рік тому

    Thank you so much for providing such great insight into writing sales emails that converts! Your tips and advice have been incredibly valuable and I'm so thankful for all that you've done to help me improve my messaging.

  • @videophotography5476
    @videophotography5476 Рік тому

    Nice explanation

  • @hubadabubbada
    @hubadabubbada 3 роки тому +43

    Hey Patrick,
    You're probably noticing me binge watching your videos 😂😂
    This one...was really really good man, I cannot thank you enough. Also its interesting how simple things can be broken down and optimised, even something as simple as an email.
    Thank you!

  • @eugeniamikulan3328
    @eugeniamikulan3328 2 роки тому

    great video!!

  • @rajeshjele3473
    @rajeshjele3473 3 роки тому

    Hey Patrick,
    Thanks for the valuable content.
    Keep uploading & keep sharing.
    Hope we'll meet soon....

  • @Tijmen.07
    @Tijmen.07 3 роки тому

    great great video with a ton of value. thank you and keep it up!

  • @estarconsulting1320
    @estarconsulting1320 Рік тому

    Hey Patrick. How do I personalize using the prospect quote from member of a team

  • @BusinessCoachcomSacramento
    @BusinessCoachcomSacramento 8 місяців тому

    Good stuff!!!

  • @suhailkhan4748
    @suhailkhan4748 2 роки тому

    Hey Patrick,
    Your video is really awsome
    Need some help here like I have an app development company and want to showcase app development services
    So how do I send cold emails?
    What will be the best way to do that?

  • @richardstewart8519
    @richardstewart8519 Рік тому

    Best video ever 🙏🏽😇👍💕

  • @NickPoninski
    @NickPoninski 2 роки тому

    awesome content

  • @filetmignon9978
    @filetmignon9978 Місяць тому

    Should follow-ups be in a thread to the original email, or all separate? (assuming the email is warmed and 90% are landing in inbox)

  • @jahkirajakes
    @jahkirajakes 3 роки тому +1

    Thank you!

  • @ekstrand611
    @ekstrand611 3 роки тому +3

    More of these email outreach tips pls, super valuable.

    • @patrickdang
      @patrickdang  3 роки тому +2

      Alright thanks for the feedback. More outreach videos coming your way

    • @ekstrand611
      @ekstrand611 3 роки тому

      Patrick Dang yes

  • @ranchero643c
    @ranchero643c Рік тому

    I especially liked your pain formula! Where's the pain? Solution Selling.

  • @edwardmartin3229
    @edwardmartin3229 Рік тому

    How do you choose a good target market ?

  • @luxurytaxprep
    @luxurytaxprep 2 роки тому +1

    Going to try this

  • @kosmicheskiprah
    @kosmicheskiprah 2 роки тому

    09:53 - The one definitely works a bit better for me. Great and useful video, btw!

  • @elizabethmiranda2313
    @elizabethmiranda2313 2 роки тому +1

    Excellent info

  • @LuCa-ke4ms
    @LuCa-ke4ms 10 місяців тому

    Great

  • @akeemhimself3742
    @akeemhimself3742 2 роки тому

    Dang Patrick this was good

  • @ChuTheCreator
    @ChuTheCreator 3 роки тому +1

    very valuable channel here 🔥

  • @ridwanibrahilll6170
    @ridwanibrahilll6170 5 місяців тому

    As a data analyst, can i also do code email people

  • @ekstrand611
    @ekstrand611 3 роки тому +2

    Can you do a part 2 of this video? it`s so valuable.

    • @patrickdang
      @patrickdang  3 роки тому +1

      I'll see what I can. Thanks for the suggestion.

  • @ftracyp2023
    @ftracyp2023 9 місяців тому

    what is the ideal size for cold emails? for reference subject line, how can we scale it to 100 - 300 prospects easily?

  • @misshaya
    @misshaya 10 місяців тому

    Do you have a course n cold emailing? or have you already discussed everything in this YT channel of yours?

  • @natalie9884
    @natalie9884 4 місяці тому

    When I was a BDR at a tech startup, we did A/B testing with some bizarre and off the wall subject lines and track the open rates 😂

  • @leonarddebeer
    @leonarddebeer 3 роки тому +1

    Thanks Pat! Exatly what I was after.
    Been struggling to have the open rate that I am after. When sending a cold email, around what is a standard open rate?

  • @kayodejoseph5403
    @kayodejoseph5403 2 роки тому

    The best

  • @lanremadiba
    @lanremadiba Рік тому

    what camera do you film with?

  • @sanjaykiddo3574
    @sanjaykiddo3574 2 роки тому

    Is online training available??

  • @y_1138nA
    @y_1138nA Рік тому

    My subject line was so boring until I came across this video, my contact has already asked for details on LinkedIn sent him an email yesterday I guess I'd do a follow up

  • @karyllejaneboglosa301
    @karyllejaneboglosa301 Рік тому +1

    Hi David! I love your content and right now I am slowly applying them! Thank you so much, I got great ideas from you! Hopefully, I can be as amazing as you are! How about how to sales email template for dental services? I hope you'll notice. Thank you!

    • @mxd8
      @mxd8 Рік тому

      patrick not david

  • @TheJoceyp
    @TheJoceyp 3 роки тому +2

    This video was super imformative! I'm just starting out as a freelancer so I'm pretty new to cold emailing. But this video helped a lot! Thanks!

  • @mimi_elk.7614
    @mimi_elk.7614 3 роки тому +1

    Hi Patrick
    Thank you so much for your help.
    Can you please give us some tips on trying to find new leads once you become business developer?Can you please make a video for that?

    • @patrickdang
      @patrickdang  3 роки тому

      Sure, I got some ideas on how I you can find leads online.

  • @synchroswimma
    @synchroswimma 2 роки тому +1

    I've had success lately with (name) Meeting Request, believe it or not

  • @LB-zz7wy
    @LB-zz7wy 2 роки тому

    Thanks so much for this! I've been having a hard time getting clients to notice my cold mails but this really helped me out! Def. gonna subscribe for more :)

  • @373EDx
    @373EDx 3 місяці тому

    Hello Patrick, thank you very much for the information you provided for us
    my question is, how would approach a website with a cold email, that sells decorative photography in general, and has different niches ( mainly what I do, decorative photos of Rome )
    many of these websites have special portfolios about Rome. so I can reach out to them and offer my photography. but, I don't really know how to approach them exactly. can you be so kind as to give me any advice?
    Mainly I don't know how, because most cold email tutorials I saw, even yours ( great tutorial by the way ) are not from someone like me perhaps, who needs to show something visible to catch any potential client ( or that's what I think...lol ) I don't know if I can catch any clients just with words only in my case... maybe I am wrong, but I think is probably another type of cold email?
    Thank you again, Patrick
    PD sorry for any mistakes in my writing, English is not my first language 😊

  • @youno7
    @youno7 2 роки тому

    Hi thank youvforbthe freshness of your channel perfectly aimed to New SDR. I work for à company that operate in SEM Market, (industry 4.0), I am not sûre but Can you provide tips on how prospecting production responsible or director.
    In linkedin they are very scarce...
    Many thank Patrick
    Younes ++

  • @imrankmujawar
    @imrankmujawar 2 роки тому

    As we do help banks for instant approvals of loans and reduce credit losses, Can you help me with a subject line?

  • @roselineeyo8365
    @roselineeyo8365 Рік тому

    Hi please how do get trained

  • @neferpitou3934
    @neferpitou3934 Рік тому

    'Hey.' is such a funny subject line haha

  • @OmarAhmed-vh8yo
    @OmarAhmed-vh8yo 2 роки тому +3

    I use the a different method which works for me 80% of the time.
    In the subject line I Put “RE: *topic of choice*”
    Reason being is they think they’ve already spoken to me and they open the email assuming they have and they may have forgotten and then it goes from there.

    • @patrickdang
      @patrickdang  2 роки тому +1

      That's an interesting strategy.

    • @OmarAhmed-vh8yo
      @OmarAhmed-vh8yo 2 роки тому

      @@patrickdang Thank you! Please give it a try and you’ll be amazed at the results 😊

  • @ovan5316
    @ovan5316 2 роки тому +1

    Hi Patrick, this video is pretty interesting for me but I have some concerns whether it is appropriate to prospects from Export- Import Industry. Cuz I am a newbie at the Export Sale Executive position

    • @patrickdang
      @patrickdang  2 роки тому +1

      Hi, these strategies are pretty general and can be applicable to any industry. With that said, you have to try it out to see if your specific target respond to them. Thanks for watching.

    • @ovan5316
      @ovan5316 2 роки тому

      @@patrickdang okay, i got it. Thank you very much

  • @jackporter9768
    @jackporter9768 3 місяці тому

    Ultima Insights

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    @patrickdang  3 роки тому +1

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  • @jayduong9838
    @jayduong9838 2 роки тому +1

    Theres one time I forgot to put in a subject line on my email campaign . And had 67% open rate. Showed it to my mentor, he said, how de fk u get 67%, im spending weeks to come up with killer subject lines and losing to no subject lines.
    Moral of the story is, it's viable but don't do it too much. The art of surprise is a viable technique when it comes to this job

    • @patrickdang
      @patrickdang  2 роки тому

      That's an interesting way to stand out from the crowd. Thanks for sharing!

  • @sidocean563
    @sidocean563 3 роки тому

    Hi Patrick I m HVAC Consultant. Can u suggest a good subject line for cold emails .... for Architects

    • @DaveLorenzo
      @DaveLorenzo 3 роки тому +2

      "Save this email for when your AC breaks this summer..."

  • @yadurujaswanth4054
    @yadurujaswanth4054 3 роки тому

    How to avoid email going to spam. I have been sending emails but they are going into spam n no open rates. Please can you say us any tips to avoid spamming.

    • @patrickdang
      @patrickdang  3 роки тому +1

      Hey Yaduru, yeah there is a way to increase the chance your emails don’t go into spam. I’ll make a video about that in the future.

    • @GrowWithWill
      @GrowWithWill 3 роки тому +1

      How many external links are in your e-mail? That can be an easy reason as to why your emails are ending in spam.

    • @YourBFFMegan
      @YourBFFMegan 3 роки тому

      @@GrowWithWill Also, the subject line!

    • @adamchesney6682
      @adamchesney6682 3 роки тому

      @@patrickdang That would be awesome. I have no Idea how to keep my emails from going to spam.

    • @lessdatesmoreonmyplates1457
      @lessdatesmoreonmyplates1457 3 роки тому +1

      @@adamchesney6682 You need to use a mail warmup tool, mymailwarm works great.

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    @psychologymotivation5108 2 роки тому

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  • @SaintSimon111
    @SaintSimon111 3 місяці тому

    Subject Header: How to increase your conversions? I’ll show how!
    Subject Header: How to increase your reach on YT ? I’ll show how!
    Subject Header: (Name) How to increase your reach on YT?
    Subject Header: (Name) How to increase your conversions?
    Subject Header: Looking to increase your reach on YT?
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    what do you think of these possible subject lines?
    Which are good to use?

  • @lars8507
    @lars8507 3 роки тому +3

    Honestly, your subjectlines are very sales related, i did not find any succes using these kind of subjectlines..

    • @patrickdang
      @patrickdang  3 роки тому +3

      Thanks for sharing that. Now to dive deeper to see what's going on, can you tell me your Open Rate % for your emails, how many emails you sent, and can you send me what you actually wrote in the email. You can reply to this comment or email me at patrick@patrickdang.com.
      There could be a number of reasons why you don't get a response. So based on your comment, we don't have enough info to see what the issue is.

  • @udnsmarketingsolutions
    @udnsmarketingsolutions 3 роки тому

    Wow thanks for the information. I also did a video about this. I would love you to check it out and share your feedback about this.