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  • @fantasyworld2904
    @fantasyworld2904  Рік тому +42

    Again thank you for 4k everyone.. I hope you will like this story... Cause I wrote whatever came in my mind...!!! Just bare with it 😩 and yes gonna UPLAOD 50 shades of evil soon...!!! ✨

    • @hoorainshujaat984
      @hoorainshujaat984 Рік тому

      You’re stories are good enough for Wattpad fr

    • @gopaghosh9932
      @gopaghosh9932 Рік тому +1

      Don't mind I am just saying but Namjoon has Dimple Smile and Hobi has Sunshine Smile. Hope you don't mind cuz I corrected you. Love you

    • @apotato9262
      @apotato9262 Рік тому

      Pls upload 50 shades of evil!!!!.... I'm really impatient 🤧✨

    • @Armyblink-i9g
      @Armyblink-i9g Рік тому

      You write the best ff i read many but you write the best i really like it keep going 💘

    • @Emraanbhakt-972
      @Emraanbhakt-972 Рік тому

      😊

  • @ot7stan.love7
    @ot7stan.love7 Рік тому +46

    Okay but yoongi's face at last melted my heart 😭❤️

  • @kipspreparations7864
    @kipspreparations7864 Рік тому +12

    The only ff without taekook 😅

  • @BTSARMY-dc5th
    @BTSARMY-dc5th Рік тому +29

    U-unnie *sob * t-this was *sob * amaJIN *burst in potato tears * HOW TF YOU GET SO JINeus IDEAS???? *crying ugly potato tears *

  • @Anonymous-dh3fn
    @Anonymous-dh3fn Рік тому +46

    at the end i remembered hobi's military enlistment. by the way your story is so beauiful.🥰❤ although at first i felt jimin should not forget the toture easily, but after jimin's explanation about his perceptive i felt like, 'everything is fair in love and war'😇

    • @fantasyworld2904
      @fantasyworld2904  Рік тому +22

      You are the first one who talked about hobi's scene.. I potryaed it intentionally ❤️

    • @Anonymous-dh3fn
      @Anonymous-dh3fn Рік тому +2

      @@fantasyworld2904 i kinda guessed it 😊❤️

    • @gzlpreet_rai
      @gzlpreet_rai Рік тому +6

      ​@@fantasyworld2904 i too noticed this ....nd it was amazing...i just thought that it's like the real conversation of hobi and army ..in which he is saying that he will comeback with his dimple smile....😍💜it brought tears to my eyes🤧🥺💜

  • @Beyourself1__l
    @Beyourself1__l Рік тому +79

    I'm not offending you or something but still jimin shouldn't have forgive yoongi just like that I know yoongi was blinded for his brother so to take revenge he tortured but what about jimin How can he accept abuse just like that only bez he knows yoongi's past . I guess he didn't get any justice yoongi only showed small amount of softness to him but I does not compensate for his deathly torture . Jimin's cahracter should have been much stronger than this . I know its your perspective but I'm just sharing my opinion I hope you won't take this negatively👍

    • @yoonkipark4457
      @yoonkipark4457 Рік тому +9

      I agree with you i understood what author wanted to say but in my personal opinion i think it's not fair for jimin maybe if jimin would stay away from yoongi for little time and then fell in love with him because ever since jimin know yoongi he only abused jimin even he showed little bit of concern that's really not sufficient. I think a little time gap would have been more appropriate for everyone.

    • @Beyourself1__l
      @Beyourself1__l Рік тому +4

      @@yoonkipark4457 Yea I also thought same may be jimin should have made yoongi to realize what he have done to him before uniting with him.Little time gap and some struggling from yoongi to win jimin back would have been better but nevertheless its good story

    • @bablipandey8566
      @bablipandey8566 Рік тому +5

      @@yoonkipark4457 When distance increases, misunderstandings increase and when people are not together, what will we do about their mistakes?! To walk away from the person we love just to prove him wrong is to hurt ourselves...Where there is love, there must also be resilience..Where we humans can accept his/her love, we must also be able to accept his/her hurt and pain...So I don't think the person who wrote the beautiful story has any mistake in her work..She only wants us to understand that people do wrong to us, but when he/ She asks for forgiveness, he/She should be forgiven.It doesn't matter how you apologize ,what matters is that you apologized. And learning to forgive people and move on will keep your life healthy and beautiful.

    • @yoonkipark4457
      @yoonkipark4457 Рік тому +4

      @@bablipandey8566 no I never said that jimin should not forgive yoongi. I think the story was beautiful I've been following her ever since she started her channel so I know how matured her stories are. I'm just saying in this situation where even it was a misunderstanding yoongi was wrong to torture jimin and I don't think there was enough time for jimin to fell in love with everything going on and even if he did we cannot make a blind eye that he was abused. With the fu*ked up situation it would have been better for both of them to have a little break from each other i wasn't saying that jimin should just leave him I was saying he should stay away from yoongi and have a personal space for some time and to be honest he can do that while living in the same house. It would have been better for him.

    • @anamta_78132
      @anamta_78132 Рік тому +1

      i dont think so and did you forget jimin is an angel💜no hate

  • @aishwaryaroy8255
    @aishwaryaroy8255 Рік тому +6

    I expected a strong comeback from jimin's character though. I was looking for a strong step from Jimin.

    • @Photocopy-sv1pj
      @Photocopy-sv1pj Рік тому

      but she made it h
      just the way jimin actually is ... there's nothing that we can doubt on her beautiful story and storyline 💜😌✨

  • @Kashishkashish-uc1vd
    @Kashishkashish-uc1vd Рік тому +3

    it was really amazing to watch but Joon side was also right since he didn"t R@pe and do anything wrong.He also have Chim"s resoonsibility,His parents death,Death threath,having little brother and raise him alone when you live far away from him,leaving best friends,news that his own baby is not in this world,friends thinks all mistake his all this is too much.He didn"t do anything wrong.BUT since this is fiction and was really amazing and I love Chim and all members.Author-nim you are such really amazing writer.

  • @Jung_kookies_7
    @Jung_kookies_7 Рік тому +9

    When yn said "even if you went on mission" I just remembered hobi is the next one to go military.😔
    Btw this is beautiful story i really loved it🥰☺️💜

  • @sadhanasaraswathi706
    @sadhanasaraswathi706 Рік тому +7

    This is really nice ☺️
    I really felt bad how the misunderstanding ruined soo many lives

  • @armyengene9685
    @armyengene9685 Рік тому +3

    The end I made me emotional . U kept that as hobi is going to military didn't u . Aghhh I am crying 🥺🥺🥺

  • @rossatan8712
    @rossatan8712 Рік тому +1

    The best result you produced, I really like it, congratulations to you😘😘

  • @Its_Kitty0
    @Its_Kitty0 Рік тому +3

    We need part 5 of ‘AM INLOVE WITH A CRIMINAL’ 😭

  • @_taekook
    @_taekook 6 місяців тому +2

    "you think Yoongi r@ped me? No, even if he do that.... He have right on me" wtf author marital r@pe is not romantic or any husband's right, please educate yourself

  • @samirayk7727
    @samirayk7727 Рік тому +5

    Ani it's good how u connected every scene I liked it a lot tysm😆😆😁 Hope u also update on 'inlove with criminal' soon🙃

  • @sanishapeiris6313
    @sanishapeiris6313 Рік тому +3

    It's beautiful author 💕 I love their emotional side in this story, unique and special ff, ❤️❤️❤️

  • @anushkasingh4191
    @anushkasingh4191 Рік тому +9

    I'm not satisfied with jimin forgiving him so easily 😶just my opinion but rest was masterpiece 💜💜 I Purple You

  • @starenmo_armyengenestaymoa
    @starenmo_armyengenestaymoa Рік тому +9

    Awe that was so emotional and cute story I lovedd itt!!!!! ❤❤ and at the last seen I was blushing like hell 🙈❤ and yoongi's face in the end wass sooooo cuteeeeee!!🤭❤ it was soo amazing story unnie keep it up stay safe and happy!! love you!!💕

  • @sayedsoddin9157
    @sayedsoddin9157 Рік тому +1

    Of course the story ended perfectly I love it author wow u just amazin

  • @Kvshauoi
    @Kvshauoi Рік тому +1

    JUST PERFECT .....🥺 SOOO EMOTIONAL 💗

  • @charumathi3780
    @charumathi3780 Рік тому +3

    It's a masterpiece ❤️💫 no any other words to describe this ❤️

  • @ranirudramadevi4234
    @ranirudramadevi4234 Рік тому +3

    Of course, hobi will get back to us

  • @bindaasbts9539
    @bindaasbts9539 Рік тому +1

    It's so good and amazing story and at last hobi on mission 😢

  • @YoonMin_love69
    @YoonMin_love69 3 місяці тому

    story was Amazing ❤🥀❤ Loved it 😍💜💖

  • @shortyoonie
    @shortyoonie Рік тому +5

    What an amazing story all the time when yoongi try to force jimin I know it he won’t rzpe him otherwise he will become like the one who did it with Jin😮‍💨😮‍💨 Namjoon has a strong reason to leave…Parents are important especially if they give you everything

  • @fab4659
    @fab4659 Рік тому +7

    All the thing suga did is justified just with the pain he felt. No punishment nothing, how is this a justice, I mean in every movie villain go through many pain and then become villain but at last they have to pay for there deeds, I know he needed love but also a punishment for his deed. What happened with his brother is wrong and he wanted revenge then what he did with someone else brother is justified because he was in pain then namjoon was also in pain. This is not done, what would have happened if jimin would have died falling from stair, or standing in shower for too long would it have been justified because he was in pain. After doing soo wrong one can not forgive one just because he showed some softness in the end. I just wanted yoongi to feel the pain he gave to jimin. How can a person hurt soo much to the person he love the most, it is said if we love someone we cannot see him hurt even if he hate him the most.

    • @fantasyworld2904
      @fantasyworld2904  Рік тому +5

      I got your point but hope you will get my point too...
      First of all take yoongi's point of view. Watching his brother lying lifeless in front of media, police after being r@ped, then getting the news like his baby died after that he slept in coma for 3 years... Can you imagine how much pain he felt...??? The pain of watching his brother in ICU was enough suffering for him. And the pain of namjoon - he never know what happened with jin after break up. He thaught it was just mental pain he gave to him but that was more than that.
      About Jimin - I agree Jimin was tortured. But when Yoongi. Wasn't it him who cured the Jimin....!?? It was Jimin who triggered Yoongi by calling him sl*t. Tell me whose brother will take that...??? I agree that Yoongi doubted him first but did he cursed... No...??? It was Jimin. When you don't know anything it's wrong to give your opinion about others. I hope you can feel yoongi's pain.

  • @bsbh5650
    @bsbh5650 Рік тому

    Wow😲 this is masterpiece I love that story author 💞

  • @sugandhasingh9425
    @sugandhasingh9425 Рік тому +2

    I feel like I have read this story "jk' s property" it's very similar just only that story is between y/n and jk. Namjoon being the same like this..but y/n doesn't forgive jk easily. The plot is same, everything is quite similar

    • @snehaj9040
      @snehaj9040 Рік тому +1

      I have read that story and i too felt the same

  • @abdulnasirnasir6017
    @abdulnasirnasir6017 Рік тому

    This story was so emotional and interesting at the same time ❤your effort clearly shows in it 👏👏lots of love

  • @BTSARMY-pl4lk
    @BTSARMY-pl4lk Рік тому

    It's really great. Keep going author😊😊😊

  • @vishalvishwakarma8372
    @vishalvishwakarma8372 Рік тому +2

    MASTERPIECE 🥰 I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH 💜💕

  • @JeonAera-w5y
    @JeonAera-w5y 9 місяців тому +1

    Hey I miss your videos and all so you it's been 1year😢and I'm waiting for your came back 😊for another masterpiece love you honey boo💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

  • @sandramacon7113
    @sandramacon7113 Рік тому

    Wow this was fantastic. You put ever feelings one can feel into this n still had happy ending. You really showed yoongi very heartless. Loved it

  • @renarosesangcala1579
    @renarosesangcala1579 Рік тому

    What a great story.. Will done author. 🎉❤

  • @dhoommachaledance4670
    @dhoommachaledance4670 Рік тому +3

    THE BEST THING THAT I HAVE EVER SEEN IN MY LIFE IS "THIS FF"
    CAN'T DESCRIBE THIS MASTER PIECE IN WORD VEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD
    I LITERALLY CRIED WHILE WATCHING THIS FF BRILLIANT 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
    PURPLE HEART 💜💜💜💜 INFINITE
    BEST THING EVER SEEN

  • @anilagee2045
    @anilagee2045 Рік тому

    And you done wonderfuly 💜😘🤗

  • @btsarmytanya3341
    @btsarmytanya3341 Рік тому

    You are the best l love you & your storys💕💕💕💜💜

  • @IkaKristina
    @IkaKristina Рік тому +1

    Thanks for the captivating story. Yoongi's conflicted heart finally found peace in Jimin sincerity 🐱❤🐥

  • @corettadaka1161
    @corettadaka1161 Рік тому

    No kidding this story began intriguingly and ended amazingly

  • @army.......7080
    @army.......7080 Рік тому

    Heart touching 💜💜💜💜💜 I purple you 💜💜

  • @Photocopy-sv1pj
    @Photocopy-sv1pj Рік тому

    after a loooong time , a ff made my heart flutter like this ❤.....it was beautiful ~🥺 and i love it for sure please keep going on ...and appreciate you hard work✨ authornim ,💜💜💜

  • @Verified_idiot
    @Verified_idiot Рік тому

    I literally cried😩
    Amazing story!💥🌟

  • @kateashleypilar102
    @kateashleypilar102 Рік тому +1

    that was amazing and great story 🖤
    and waiting for the next part of your yoonmin and namji series
    hope to see it soon ❤️

  • @sharmasubha8566
    @sharmasubha8566 Рік тому +1

    Nice now I am wating for next part or special part

  • @Zalimdarindayt77
    @Zalimdarindayt77 Рік тому

    Author it's amaJin 💜 You should definitely make a special part ☺️❤️

  • @TK____gloss
    @TK____gloss Рік тому +1

    Another awesome story ❤️✨

  • @krishnasatpute3120
    @krishnasatpute3120 Рік тому +1

    How can a guy have child 😂

  • @Girl_Gaming_30710
    @Girl_Gaming_30710 9 місяців тому +1

    What do you mean *(Channel closed)*??? 😭 I want you to come back!!! You're one of my favorite author. Please come back. I don't know if you're reading this or not but all I wanna say is, I love you 🥺 I just came here to check if another part of '50 shades of evil' was updated or not. And now I see (channel closed)??? Why!?! 😭 It's been 1 year!! I can't sleep until I know the ending of '50 shades of evil' 😭 I hope you're ok 🥺

  • @ethical.path1
    @ethical.path1 Рік тому

    It's really really good man!! 🤏👀
    I have never commented on any FF so seriously-- ❣️✨
    I literally enjoyed it,, 😭😩

  • @farhatkhaj4412
    @farhatkhaj4412 Рік тому +3

    I am so excited to read this ff thanks unniee 🥰🥰🥰🥰

  • @annyeong_bts
    @annyeong_bts Рік тому

    Amazing I love it ❤❤

  • @nasruddinkhalifa9814
    @nasruddinkhalifa9814 Рік тому

    This made me cry. Amazing story

  • @Avairaxo
    @Avairaxo Рік тому +2

    Yoonmin forever 💜😍

  • @yashaswi-9514
    @yashaswi-9514 Рік тому

    Besttttttt yoonmin ff unnie make more we want more 🎉❤❤❤❤

  • @snookiwerewolf18
    @snookiwerewolf18 Рік тому

    A very good story can’t wait for more

  • @floraleden213
    @floraleden213 Рік тому

    This was soo good! Them for your efforts in making such good fanfics! I'm looking forward to continue 50 shades of evil... I'M SO EXCITED 😁

  • @BT7GIRL
    @BT7GIRL Рік тому

    This was masterpiece 😩❤🥀

  • @fairdairy7921
    @fairdairy7921 Рік тому +1

    Final part is full of satisfied😌😏💜i don't saw any unwanted part this ff revenge is revenge its has to be like this if its revenge and love is love no matter what happened love is love🌻

  • @amaraakbar3257
    @amaraakbar3257 Рік тому +2

    Uffffffff this story is something that I can't imagine to read...BUT your imagination fantasy make it happened....
    Really well explained and good written..👍
    Hat's off to you Author 💐
    Now I my sensitive heartuuu want my YOONMIN love moments.... please recover my heartuuuuuu❤️‍🩹🥺🤌

  • @mirarupnar-ey1ho
    @mirarupnar-ey1ho Рік тому

    Seriously, are you script writer or something. Your story was amazing.
    Not only this but others too.
    You nice keep going. 😉
    I purple you

  • @mochislove1542
    @mochislove1542 Рік тому

    speechless 🥺😍💜💜💜💜💜💜

  • @prietydiy2392
    @prietydiy2392 Рік тому

    It's really nice ❤ ff , you are a great writer 😊. I just love it 😍.

  • @PomsomiTerang
    @PomsomiTerang 7 місяців тому

    Sorry unnie.... I'm late, but your story,your concept is very good👍... 💜💜💜I love it..... I wish I could see yoonmin together like we do see in ff.

  • @Leo-o6o5q
    @Leo-o6o5q 5 місяців тому

    After what's happening in India I can't even take ff as a frictional story just feeling the disguise

  • @YonnielynNaiga
    @YonnielynNaiga Рік тому

    So awesome story thank you..

  • @zahrarezaie8076
    @zahrarezaie8076 Рік тому

    It was lovely❤️😍

  • @fab4659
    @fab4659 Рік тому +4

    Jimin is being to forgiving I mean how can a person just forgive some one who almost killed him and his brother. I mean he was a mafia then also he cannot clear his misunderstanding.

    • @fantasyworld2904
      @fantasyworld2904  Рік тому

      Did I mention that he was mafia at that time...??? No.. He built himslef after that... The thing he misunderstood was before making himself mafia.... And when you once decide the target... It becomes the first priority no matter which way to take to reach it.
      Same goes to Yoongi, he targeted namjoon when he found Jin in that condition. Once Jin took Namjoon's name. He fir got the world and he made namjoon his target. And why would he start investing when his brother himslef took name...???

    • @fab4659
      @fab4659 Рік тому +1

      @@fantasyworld2904 I m sorry if I offended u I didn't mean it in that way. It was like after reading this I felt many emotions building in me. But in short I m sry. And I really liked your hardwork

    • @fantasyworld2904
      @fantasyworld2904  Рік тому +1

      @@fab4659 no no... I didn't get offended... It's just I wanted to clear my point so that reader won't get misunderstood 😊❤️ you are free to comment anything you want... I am here reading all this and claer each and everyone of you 😌

  • @RaviRavi-ko5zp
    @RaviRavi-ko5zp Рік тому

    It's amazing 🤩

  • @myhappyplace07
    @myhappyplace07 Рік тому

    It's was so so good 👍🏻😊

  • @apotato9262
    @apotato9262 Рік тому +1

    Hii author... Pls upload 50 Shades of evil Pls!!!!!!

  • @ShrushtiARMY
    @ShrushtiARMY Рік тому

    I love that ff..... Very much.....when I start to read this ff it was like angry and sad ....then sweet and forever 🤞💜💜🤗🤗😘

  • @nandinireddy5768
    @nandinireddy5768 Рік тому

    Can we get spl epi pls 😂❤❤❤❤

  • @thecraftygirl4640
    @thecraftygirl4640 Рік тому

    Please make video like this
    I love it ❤

  • @Photocopy-sv1pj
    @Photocopy-sv1pj Рік тому

    i wish you could also make taekook ffs 🥺🥺...pretty please 💜🙏💜

  • @Sprk2409
    @Sprk2409 Рік тому

    For god sake make a bonus part.. I never asked for a bonus but pls this need a bonus.. Plsss🙏🙏

  • @ayeshashaikh5599
    @ayeshashaikh5599 Рік тому

    Amazing story. 🥰

  • @fbm1970
    @fbm1970 Місяць тому

    Although married sexual relationship must be consensual ... which means agreed to by both persons in the marriage. Forcing oneself on others though married is rape.
    Revenge by hurting an innocent person related to the person who hirt you is wrong. Seek justice or revenge on the person who hurt you only

  • @ANWARKHAN-fz6ku
    @ANWARKHAN-fz6ku Рік тому

    Special episode please author tbh it was lit like I have never saw a story like this it was great and full of twists 👀🫶🏻🫶🏻

  • @bts77135
    @bts77135 Рік тому

    Great job 👌

  • @dittyverburgh4302
    @dittyverburgh4302 Рік тому

    Amazing story 💜💜💜💜

  • @THAT_kpop-addict007
    @THAT_kpop-addict007 3 місяці тому +1

    32:00 umm so if someone kills you and holds your funeral then they are a green flag and always there for you?TT

  • @farwahsattar2248
    @farwahsattar2248 Рік тому +3

    Just for the sake of happy ending you ruined the whole story by letting jimin forgive yoongi and even added the lovey dovey moments tsk tsk tsk

  • @sagarikasahoo3982
    @sagarikasahoo3982 Рік тому

    I literally cried the whole video except the ending parts . It's really a good story . But there are some spelling mistakes or wrong typing. You should have to carefull while typing. I luv this story . 😊😉🙂😌

  • @theklambi
    @theklambi Рік тому

    need special episode for this

  • @Armyblink-i9g
    @Armyblink-i9g Рік тому

    I love your ff very much i read many but you write the best in your ff we can love , pain etc 😍 best ff maker every doing good 💯 when do you upload next please upload fast 🙂
    Really nice

  • @JeonAera-w5y
    @JeonAera-w5y 7 місяців тому

    Hey i Missing you 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

  • @Naluv1133
    @Naluv1133 Рік тому +1

    31:31 my heartu

  • @rinakurnia3128
    @rinakurnia3128 Рік тому

    and than both namjin and yoonmin has a baby ,, with namjin`s baby is taehyung ,, as for yoonmin they named their baby is jungkook. and than their life is forever happy 💜💜

  • @niroshimannapperuma6318
    @niroshimannapperuma6318 Рік тому

    Really nice story 💕🥰

  • @ikaraaa3791
    @ikaraaa3791 Рік тому

    Can you make special part of this ff with yoonmin marriage with +18

  • @agnieszkagorska4890
    @agnieszkagorska4890 Рік тому

    Beautiful story

  • @prathanajandel772
    @prathanajandel772 Рік тому

    Author please upload 50 shades of Evil please please please please please please please please please 🥺🥺💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜☹️☹️

  • @queen_of_sope3680
    @queen_of_sope3680 Рік тому

    Aj apne ro laya he muje

  • @dakshinakashi6480
    @dakshinakashi6480 Рік тому

    Pls author can I expect a special episode plssssssssssssss 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😅😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 pls. I love ur ff so much can I expect one pls

  • @bts77135
    @bts77135 Рік тому

    Why are you not upload any video on these channel are you going to exit these fictional world 🌍😢

  • @shambhavirai2235
    @shambhavirai2235 Рік тому

    I think what yoongi did was wrong to jimin but still Yoongi needs some love care and after what happened with jin he was alone no one was there for him to care or understand him but still in end he got he wants most " Jimins Love ❤" and care .
    It was amazing story i like it please upload more stories of yoonmin 😊

  • @muskankatiyar9103
    @muskankatiyar9103 Рік тому

    I so excited read this ff 🥰🥰🥰🥰

  • @imursafia
    @imursafia Рік тому

    author we miss you please upload soon

  • @sunflower_auroras
    @sunflower_auroras Рік тому +1

    Your story was good but onething that is bothering ...u should have kept the antagonist name as some other(common names)...i think most of us know who suho is(good person) and as the terms like r@pe being used..so kindly be conscious in future writings

  • @Red-op1ng
    @Red-op1ng 8 місяців тому

    New story please😢😢😢😢😢😢😢