HOLIDAY SPECIALS - Terrible Writing Advice

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  • @sori_osori_
    @sori_osori_ 6 років тому +3494

    Three ghosts? Love triangle? Hmmmmm?

    • @matteussilvestre8583
      @matteussilvestre8583 6 років тому +355

      Flying Dutchman ain't got nothing on this Ghost Ship.

    • @SuperBartman2000
      @SuperBartman2000 6 років тому +57

      gigity

    • @gystes_
      @gystes_ 6 років тому +66

      Oh god! This comment broke me!!

    • @No-XIV-Xion
      @No-XIV-Xion 6 років тому +57

      @@matteussilvestre8583 fucking dead. Take my like

    • @MysticKenji2
      @MysticKenji2 6 років тому +11

      I wanted to like this, but it's at 666 likes

  • @rentropy6199
    @rentropy6199 6 років тому +2153

    Biggest Christmas Special Cliché: Something happens to Santa and the main protagonists must “save Christmas.”

    • @owlnemo
      @owlnemo 6 років тому +71

      It does work when Death and Susan need to save Christmas. Best Christmas movie ever.

    • @lostwizard
      @lostwizard 6 років тому +69

      The latest version of that is: Santa arranges for something to happen to Santa and the protagonists must "save" Christmas. With a blatant Æseop or twenty thrown in.

    • @rentropy6199
      @rentropy6199 6 років тому +3

      owlnemo I concur! 🎶

    • @rentropy6199
      @rentropy6199 6 років тому +1

      William Astle YES!

    • @goldenfiberwheat238
      @goldenfiberwheat238 4 роки тому +4

      Bitrate; Xero! Minecraft Roleplay it’s funny because family made fun of that with an episode where “kiss saves Christmas” was a running gag in the episode but they later did that exact thing

  • @DragonfameDracas
    @DragonfameDracas 6 років тому +2398

    "Everything changed when Black Friday attacked."
    It was horrid, we were hopeless outnumbered and overworked, surrounded on all sides, we'd do our best to stem the tides and reinforce the lines. It seemed a lost cause, as we waded through isles choked with bodies, sometimes finding ourselves surrounded on all sides outnumbered twelve to one by soulless abominations that screamed demands at us. We were not people to these ravenous hordes without empathy or kindness, were we simply objects to give what they desired when they desired it.
    Yet eventually that horrid day ended and those green to this war believed that it was over. But those who had seen this horror before, this never ending tide of greed and desire knew better and did not tell these green workers who had sought only easy work and a quick buck. This was but the first day of the Black Tide, it would return tomorrow, perhaps not as fierce as it had today, but it would return, stronger everyday until finally the day of the Savior would arrive and those of us who survived would look around at others reduced to vacant stares and hollow eyes.
    I do not believe I will survive this year's Black Tide, I only hope to take some of that endless terrible mass with me as I die.

    • @eruyommo
      @eruyommo 6 років тому +91

      Why isn't this the top comment?

    • @pussinboots838
      @pussinboots838 6 років тому +82

      @@eruyommo because some guy with a mustache took that spot.

    • @nightcollapse
      @nightcollapse 6 років тому +43

      @@pussinboots838 its always the rando with the mustache >:(

    • @RWAsur
      @RWAsur 6 років тому +80

      You clearly actually work retail to know it's a Black Tide and not a Singular Day Event lmao hmu when you write this book, or at least put this in your eulogy

    • @basilumeh2458
      @basilumeh2458 6 років тому +27

      I paused the video to read this

  • @AnythingMachine
    @AnythingMachine 6 років тому +934

    The target audience for holiday specials is drunk and half asleep, which explains much about their plot

    • @utubrGaming
      @utubrGaming 6 років тому +82

      Or 5 years old.

    • @tahunuva4254
      @tahunuva4254 6 років тому +9

      Or depressed.

    • @fionafiona1146
      @fionafiona1146 6 років тому +4

      @alexandra galici and scare away winter or spirrets

    • @fionafiona1146
      @fionafiona1146 6 років тому +7

      @alexandra galici until madigra pretty much all Germanic holidays (integrated into Christian tradition) are about some combination of those and keeping the ancestors happy

    • @fionafiona1146
      @fionafiona1146 6 років тому

      @alexandra galici no, 200 years ago sex and booze weren't any more common than now, people hung trees from their ceilings and eat gees on St Martins day.
      1500 years ago many (but our local roman garrison also celebrated saturnalia and sacrificed as many animals as any pagan tribe)

  • @Just_Some_Guy_with_a_Mustache
    @Just_Some_Guy_with_a_Mustache 6 років тому +2129

    This year, please remember. Put the "Terrible Writing Advice" back in "Christmas".

    • @woodlefoof2
      @woodlefoof2 6 років тому +16

      Just Some Guy with a Mustache oh shit I’m the first reply!!

    • @nightcollapse
      @nightcollapse 6 років тому +7

      And I'm the second whoa

    • @artoruvidal2793
      @artoruvidal2793 6 років тому +2

      Jelal is that you ?

    • @LeynaSept
      @LeynaSept 6 років тому +12

      Just Some Guy with a Mustache You are just in every genre aren't you? I rarely see you outside of anime anymore...

    • @chimaeraarts
      @chimaeraarts 6 років тому +1

      @@artoruvidal2793 hes Jelal with a mustache

  • @thenarrator8781
    @thenarrator8781 6 років тому +1649

    Oh! Here's a Christmas cliche I hate! The fact that Santa not being able to deliver presents means that Christmas is cancelled!
    You know, because human being are physically incapable of having Christmas on their own and the centuries old celebration of birth of Christ will suddenly just disappear from the calendar and unless a far old guy breaks into their house and gives them a present.

    • @TiffanyRay
      @TiffanyRay 6 років тому +185

      yeah isnt the point of christmas is spending time with friends and family and not over obsessing or worrying over which presents you get materialism is evil.

    • @NiaNook
      @NiaNook 6 років тому +43

      ^^THAT RIGHT THERE. Always bugged me :|

    • @sleepysera
      @sleepysera 6 років тому +78

      Santa has no place in Christmas history anyway, Christmas was about the birth of Christ and not some magical gift-giver xD
      Of course, for most children, Christmas would be ruined if the gift-giving part vanished one year, and I don't think screaming "evil materialism" at it makes sense - it's natural to look forward to getting things you want or need. We literally can't live without having stuff, so there is nothing wrong with wanting to have things. In overly rich societies, families, and so on it's good to question HOW much you actually need, but it seems kinda ridiculous to me to hate on the urge to have things in general.
      Extra food, new clothes, a new toy - that's always been part of Christmas, because people NEED stuff to live (and traditionally presents were given from the ruling class to their servants, not between families and friends, so it was basically an early form of charity).

    • @TiffanyRay
      @TiffanyRay 6 років тому +28

      @@sleepysera COUGH
      materialism in case you didnt know the literal definition
      a tendency to consider material possessions and physical comfort as more important than spiritual values.

    • @sleepysera
      @sleepysera 6 років тому +14

      @@TiffanyRay I'm not seeing your point? My entire comment aside from the first sentence explained why I think there is nothing wrong with the concept unless you take it to an extreme (in particular, to an extreme that is harming others). Physical comfort logically always comes (and in my opinion should! always come) first - no merry Christmas spirit of love and family is gonna help you when you are freezing to death and your children are starving.
      Expecting out of children in particular (who, by nature, are greedy and selfish because that's a necessary trait to survive while they are dependent on others for survival) to not consider a Christmas without presents as ruined, just seems ridiculous to me.

  • @jordanloux3883
    @jordanloux3883 6 років тому +903

    Holy crap, your stock characters are becoming self aware. Is there an episode on meta-humor coming?

    • @ineednochannelyoutube5384
      @ineednochannelyoutube5384 6 років тому +85

      Please let it be so.
      Lazy meta humor is the bane of modern writing.

    • @ineednochannelyoutube5384
      @ineednochannelyoutube5384 5 років тому +16

      @A Person Humor that plays on the conventions of the genre or medium.

    • @a.person1805
      @a.person1805 4 роки тому +12

      @@ineednochannelyoutube5384 Oh god I saw my username and was scared that I was a dumbass 1 year ago.

    • @ineednochannelyoutube5384
      @ineednochannelyoutube5384 4 роки тому +8

      @@a.person1805 Who knows. I certainly dont remember. It shal forever remain a mistery!

    • @aturchomicz821
      @aturchomicz821 Рік тому +1

      @@a.person1805 Weren't we all?🗿🗿

  • @kimifw58
    @kimifw58 6 років тому +2521

    And if anyone refuses to celebrate Christmas for _any reason_ (besides religion), the other characters must treat it like a serious problem and put their energy into changing that person's mind. Even in a show that's all about tolerance and individuality, the one holiday *_absolutely everyone must take part in_* is Christmas, because nothing says "good will to men" like forcing conformity!

    • @bookl0ver
      @bookl0ver 6 років тому +94

      Kimi FW been watching Christmas with the Cranks too buddy? Ah

    • @DrawciaGleam02
      @DrawciaGleam02 6 років тому +127

      But some people have good reasons for disliking Christmas (i.e. a loved one tragically died around that time).

    • @JPduprat
      @JPduprat 6 років тому +53

      @@DrawciaGleam02 wooosh

    • @DarthTalon5
      @DarthTalon5 6 років тому +129

      @@JPduprat It may not be a woosh, that is also a very common plot point in holiday movies. That or you are 100% correct and they just don't get it.

    • @gandalftheantlion
      @gandalftheantlion 6 років тому +42

      @@DarthTalon5 Its a woosh because the op "if anyone refuses to celebrate Christmas for any reason (besides religion), the other characters must treat it like a serious problem and put their energy into changing that person's mind." if you don't get why its a woosh then... I don't know what to tell you.

  • @bretsheeley4034
    @bretsheeley4034 6 років тому +420

    "I see you have the 'Curmudgeon who wishes to destroy Christmas for no good reason' trope-"
    "I worked retail."
    "... Touché, this time."

    • @illuminaticake4528
      @illuminaticake4528 4 роки тому +15

      How does one guy destroy or cancel Christmas anyways?

    • @MidnightWalker6030P
      @MidnightWalker6030P Рік тому +4

      @@illuminaticake4528 you cancel Black Friday
      Good luck with pulling that off

  • @drakeredwingofficial
    @drakeredwingofficial 6 років тому +647

    Apparently Hallmark wasn't aware this was a sarcastic video

    • @deltoroperdedor3166
      @deltoroperdedor3166 6 років тому +49

      Nah, Hallmark is the r/woosh of tv producers

    • @BlueDragonknight375
      @BlueDragonknight375 6 років тому +35

      Was looking for someone like you. I can't stand Hallmark Christmas movies! They're all the same!

    • @alphavasson5387
      @alphavasson5387 6 років тому +4

      DrakeRedwingOfficial OOoOoooOOoOf

    • @magicalmelancholy970
      @magicalmelancholy970 5 років тому +38

      @@BlueDragonknight375 Single mother meets the new guy in her small town and for some reason and we have to spend 10 minutes watching her kid do one of those bad school performances, as the producers pretend we'd ever want to watch one of those for anything other than a relative (this is based off of the two Hallmark Christmas Movies I've seen). Also the single mom lives with her Grandmother who doesn't do anything of note.

    • @BlueDragonknight375
      @BlueDragonknight375 5 років тому +20

      Or guy meets girl who has a boyfriend who doesn't really love her so she falls in love with the male protagonist. Or vice versa.

  • @johndoe-hr6vp
    @johndoe-hr6vp 6 років тому +497

    Holy crap. Ultra thin plot that serves as an excuse for various song and dance numbers, check. Hated by its creator who saw it as something he wrote for his pay cheque, check. Makes an appearance every year anyway, check. Any flaws are ignored because its Christmas, check. Tchaikovsky's *The Nutcracker* was the first Holiday Special.

    • @101jir
      @101jir 6 років тому +47

      I had no idea Tchaikovsky hated writing The Nutcracker.

    • @justinokraski3796
      @justinokraski3796 5 років тому +22

      he sure put in a lot of work for his monthly tugboat

    • @alexanderchristopher6237
      @alexanderchristopher6237 5 років тому +58

      @@justinokraski3796 because it's Tchaikovsky. This is the same dude who thought cannons should be a musical instrument.

    • @seabassthegamer6644
      @seabassthegamer6644 4 роки тому +21

      @@alexanderchristopher6237 And then he hated the song he did it in because it was too focused on spectacle as opposed to artistry or whatever.
      This is starting to look like a consistent problem.

    • @thewanderingmistnull2451
      @thewanderingmistnull2451 2 роки тому +11

      @@seabassthegamer6644 Problem with artists in general, really. The stuff they like is never the stuff that ends up popular.

  • @jewellefay7206
    @jewellefay7206 6 років тому +759

    A Christmas Carol Story?

    Check.
    A Grinch who can’t accept the constant marketing of the Holidays?

    Check.
    Santa interacting with the cast.

    Checkity, Check, Check.
    Pointless plotting about trying to get a kiss under the mistletoe to fuel the shippers?

    Knew we forgot something.

    • @ahniandfriends123
      @ahniandfriends123 6 років тому +60

      To be fair, he would have to leave a large portion of the video to that pointless "kissing under the mistletoe plot" so that the love hyper-rhombisodecahedron can present itself and get the plot going.

    • @suezuccati304
      @suezuccati304 4 роки тому +36

      It wouldn't be pointless if it was to advance the love triangle

    • @itsdripnovababy
      @itsdripnovababy 4 місяці тому +2

      Ya made the list, and checked it twice!

  • @aaronTGP_3756
    @aaronTGP_3756 2 роки тому +86

    The greatest holiday (Christmas) special was A Charlie Brown Christmas.
    1. Actually "gets" Christmas.
    2. Calls out the commercialization of Christmas.
    3. It feels like this could happen in real life.
    4. Snoopy is in there.

    • @ChasePhifer-hj3wl
      @ChasePhifer-hj3wl Рік тому +1

      No, The best was actually the Star Wars Holiday Special 🤣

    • @dollarsignmexican
      @dollarsignmexican 6 місяців тому +2

      But were they in a love triangle tho?

    • @AidanDaGreat
      @AidanDaGreat 4 місяці тому

      @@dollarsignmexican oh dear gosh i hope not

  • @firockfinion3326
    @firockfinion3326 6 років тому +294

    "Several international treaties prohibit me from singing."
    XD

  • @biblicallyaccuratecockroach
    @biblicallyaccuratecockroach 5 років тому +140

    _And what happened then? Well, in UA-cam comments they say,_
    _That JP's small heart grew three sizes that day._
    _Then he seized his chest, his pain flowing readily,_
    _And then dropped dead of cardiomegaly._
    I shall write this down and pin it on the wall, this is high quality poetry, mate.

  • @mahlismith8303
    @mahlismith8303 6 років тому +2155

    Please can we have a terrible writing advice for spy novels

    • @kayseek1248
      @kayseek1248 6 років тому +11

      mahli smith perfect

    • @chesterstevens8870
      @chesterstevens8870 6 років тому +25

      That's easy, just take all the tropes Clive Cussler uses and copy them shamelessly.

    • @bloodstoneore4630
      @bloodstoneore4630 6 років тому +53

      what's the most important? the reasons? the espionage? the stakes? no! the love triangle!

    • @alduinfeetpic9250
      @alduinfeetpic9250 6 років тому +40

      obligatory onedimensional bond-clone/ self-insert, obligatory love interest that works for the bad guy but only initially, obligatory replacement of stealth sections (you know, the thing spies are said to be good at) with full-on action scenes, obligatory chase scene ( 2 at minimum, but the more the merrier), obligatory disabling of the laws of physics for the sake of looking cool even when whatever is attempted would be nothing short of suicidal in our world, obligatory confusion between the goals of destroying and dominating the world on the villains end, obligatory detonation of the villains lair as opposed to a sneaky n clean operation (+hope the villain has no copies of the plans for the doomsday device saved literally ANYEHERE ELSE on the planet), obligatory kiss scene in the end

    • @merrittanimation7721
      @merrittanimation7721 6 років тому +8

      @@chesterstevens8870 But make them botanists or something instead of oceanographers

  • @randomelk9801
    @randomelk9801 6 років тому +1236

    Holiday specials are the best.
    like the star wars holiday special, so good the creator didn't even think we deserved it on the planet, so he wanted all the copies destroyed.

    • @MasticinaAkicta
      @MasticinaAkicta 6 років тому +62

      Yes, that is one of the most beautiful specials. Heartwarming and one has to make sure one sees it every year. I wonder how we can get it back on television again. Now that would be something.

    • @IAmTheStig32
      @IAmTheStig32 6 років тому +45

      Isn't that the one with Chewbacca's grandpa fapping? Lmfao

    • @johannageisel5390
      @johannageisel5390 6 років тому +32

      They should just have destroyed the entire planet. Solves all problems with holiday special copies.

    • @newdivide9882
      @newdivide9882 6 років тому +5

      RandomElk That exists? I’ve never heard of it before

    • @Mikewee777
      @Mikewee777 6 років тому +8

      RandomElk , the cantina scene and the animated segment was a cool.

  • @greenrockgirl5150
    @greenrockgirl5150 4 роки тому +54

    Also remember that no matter what, the Christmas special can only have one of three plot lines, either it’s the plot of The Grinch with different characters, the plot of A Christmas Carol with different characters, or something happens to Santa and the main characters need to save Christmas

    • @Wildwildwild22
      @Wildwildwild22 4 роки тому +3

      Lol the only one I can think of that's not like that is abeds uncontrollable christmas from community

  • @LibertyLocalizer
    @LibertyLocalizer 6 років тому +1445

    Please do a video on crossovers with overly sarcastic productions.
    Also, a video on love triangles with overly sarcastic productions and hello future me.

    • @festethephule7553
      @festethephule7553 6 років тому +32

      Yes!

    • @generalmclovin7104
      @generalmclovin7104 6 років тому +61

      That would be awesome she already has done one crossover before
      Maybe they could do an episode on crime thrillers

    • @CaptainRiterraSmith
      @CaptainRiterraSmith 6 років тому +45

      Dear God YES! TWA and OSP in the same video would win the internet for all eternity!

    • @anthonynorman7545
      @anthonynorman7545 6 років тому +5

      +

    • @cassie5248
      @cassie5248 6 років тому +7

      That would be amazing, I'd love that

  • @aeris5142
    @aeris5142 3 роки тому +29

    "His heart grew three sizes that day, then immediately shrank six imploding into a black hole from which no love could escape."

  • @kaminari4928
    @kaminari4928 4 роки тому +34

    The 3 possible endings of a holiday special:
    1. Generic, formulaic Christmas song that every main character sings along with at the end, disregarding any previous character arcs involving music or singing. The song will be about 1 to 2 minutes long and will probably have a lyric video on the series UA-cam channel.
    2. The characters all learn the true meaning of Christmas. Never explain how they haven’t learned about what Christmas is about after living an almost full life, because then we wouldn’t have an ending. And always have the meaning be something mushy and generic, like spending time with family and friends and having a grand old time. Make sure to never actually bring up the hyper commercialism of Christmas however, because that would draw attention to the commercialism in our own Christmas special, and if you do, make sure to dumb it down to the extent that even infants will be able to understand it.
    3. “We saved Christmas” stock ending. Usually saving Christmas involves rescuing Santa, or even full-on taking his place in his absence. If you want to be really lazy, just say something along the lines of “There’s not enough Christmas spirit!” And obviously Santa will choose our plucky main characters to save Christmas, instead of the literally millions of elves who all work for him, obey his every command, and probably have more Christmas spirit combined than anyone. Oh, and make sure that in our universe, literally everyone believes In Santa Claus, so that he can appear at the end in front of everyone in (insert stock village or city here).

  • @cosmicredpanda2420
    @cosmicredpanda2420 6 років тому +100

    How to make a Christmas special!
    Step 1: Find a Christmas classic
    Step 2: if it isn’t in the public domain, but the rights to said property.
    Step 3: Put a new coat of paint on it.
    Done.

  • @Gilhelmi
    @Gilhelmi 6 років тому +236

    They use magic and are skeptical of the supernatural.
    Yeah that is the stupidest trope that always bugs me.

    • @rainynight02
      @rainynight02 6 років тому +40

      Well, not necessarily.
      For example, we use science and the supernatural could simply be things that we have yet to understand with our tools (aka, science/technology.)
      In a world with magic, there could still be things they don't understand with their tools, aka magic, that they are thus wary of or dismiss.
      Say, with magic germ theory never develops so they don't actually understand disease,
      So people who do things such as bathe regularly, may be seen as partaking in foolish superstition.
      Basically, "what we are currently incapable of understanding is "supernatural"

    • @tintenfisch3421
      @tintenfisch3421 6 років тому +34

      Depends on how defined the magic system is. If you can summon fire with that system and can't do anything else, the ability to fly would for example still be considered a myth.

    • @damiannagel963
      @damiannagel963 6 років тому +26

      We erradicated diseases through vaccination and some people still believe that they don't work

    • @luizfelipevbf5567
      @luizfelipevbf5567 6 років тому +8

      To aru majutsu no index. The supernatural exists but no one believes in magic because tje supernatural can be explained through science.

    • @ginogatash4030
      @ginogatash4030 5 років тому +3

      @@damiannagel963Nagel, though anti-Santa people in Christmas specials don't believe Santa will make their kids autistic.

  • @blueteller
    @blueteller 6 років тому +101

    These days, christmas specials are based on either 1) the Grinch, 2) Christmas Carol, or 3) both. Plus at least one obligatory out-of-place musical number like you mentioned. It's SO rare to find a christmas episode that DOESN'T revolve around the idea of someone not liking Christmas I can hardly think of any - except a typical family-fighting-then-getting-back-together plot.

    • @sleepysera
      @sleepysera 6 років тому +7

      Most Christmas Specials I remember are about aliens. Maaaybe someone also doesn't like Christmas, but most importantly, aliens x)

    • @bloodstoneore4630
      @bloodstoneore4630 6 років тому +3

      Or a wonderful life

    • @zmzna
      @zmzna 6 років тому +7

      Adventure time have an good Christmas episode that doesn't do anything that this video said

    • @kevinblount7142
      @kevinblount7142 2 роки тому

      This is why the first Married with Children Christmas episode is such a classic.

    • @thewanderingmistnull2451
      @thewanderingmistnull2451 2 роки тому

      A Charlie Brown Christmas

  • @MirunaNero
    @MirunaNero 4 роки тому +38

    "How do I know there's a war on Christmas? Because I'm the one waging it!"
    This has got to be the single best lines I've heard from TWA and that's saying a lot in the midst the many great lines

  • @lorddevilfish5868
    @lorddevilfish5868 6 років тому +481

    Do a terrible Writing Advice on Multiverses! The concept of alternate universes have lots of potential for science Fiction and to examine the general themes of the characters and world, but are often ruined by having the alternative universe just be a watered down version of the main setting and character just with new paint (Every Undertale Au ever). Or have it just as an easy plot device (clover field paradox). Don’t forget to have the au disregard all the rules and limits of the characters for no reason (Galactus in Marvel zombies). Also have all alternate universes just be the same as the main universes and never experiment or use your imagination to create truly Alien fantasy settings. If you want to do something different just have the alternate universe be a generic version of hell. You can also call them dimensions even though real dimensions don’t act like at all like how they are portrayed in pop culture.

    • @duncanm4061
      @duncanm4061 6 років тому +16

      Lord Devil fish *cough* Reverse Falls

    • @jaredbumblecrum
      @jaredbumblecrum 6 років тому +17

      This is a kinda dumb nitpick, but some undertale aus are pretty good. If you want a uniquley messed up one, look up the sprite comic helptale. (That might fall under "generic hell world" I guess.)

    • @lorddevilfish5868
      @lorddevilfish5868 6 років тому +18

      I have nothing against Undertale AUs by the way, or the sprit work and music. I just feel like that they often lack in Story which Is something I would like to see more of. I guess what I said was a bit of a blanket statement. I know that they are just for fun in most people’s eyes.

    • @lorddevilfish5868
      @lorddevilfish5868 6 років тому +13

      Helptale is awesome by the way. When I said Generic hell world I would was saying more just fire and brimstone every where and one dimensional generic Monsters. I’m not referring to having the creatures being portrayed like animals such as the Demogorgon in stranger things, I’m referring to them being “ Roar Evil, I do everything because....Evil!!!”
      Cough Dungeons and Dragons cough.

    • @VcarGekko
      @VcarGekko 6 років тому +11

      lest we forget that there should always be a Nazi alternate timeline no matter how difficult it would be to maintain in the long run. While we're at it lets go to the alt.universe section at the stock setting department. I'm sure simply copy and pasting our characters into these new and wondrous settings will just be fine, it's not like a new context and history will alter them in anyway.
      A good multiverse is the one found in Magic the Gathering in my opinion. Each plane is a unique setting that I would love to visit.

  • @mixedmango2870
    @mixedmango2870 6 років тому +126

    Rule one of Holiday Specials:
    Don't actually talk about other holidays outside if America. Always talk about Christmas and Thanksgiving and Halloween and all that and never talk about any holidays from "outside"

    • @ahniandfriends123
      @ahniandfriends123 6 років тому +25

      They don't even talk about Thanksgiving anymore so the specials are all about Christmas.

    • @EvilBertieChap
      @EvilBertieChap 6 років тому +3

      WHERE'S MY NOWRUZ SPECIAL DAMMIT

    • @mixedmango2870
      @mixedmango2870 6 років тому +2

      @@ahniandfriends123 Ikr where'd all the Thanksgiving specials go-

    • @ginogatash4030
      @ginogatash4030 5 років тому +5

      Christmas and Halloween aren't American holidays though...

    • @ginogatash4030
      @ginogatash4030 5 років тому +5

      also, they tried a Hanukkah special, but unfortunately it ended up being 8 crazy nights.

  • @greenrockgirl5150
    @greenrockgirl5150 4 роки тому +35

    “I need to brutally murder a child tree and decorate it’s corpse”
    -JP “TWA” “Love Triangle man” Beubian 2018

  • @Elkator955
    @Elkator955 6 років тому +88

    JP's small heart grew three sizes that day! Then he seized his chest pain flowing readily. And then dropped dead of Cardiomegaly.

    • @alexv3375
      @alexv3375 3 роки тому +8

      And his pallbearers found the strength of ten Grinches, plus two!

  • @alanbear6505
    @alanbear6505 6 років тому +293

    I totally identify with the comment about music at work. I still can't stand Jingle Bells because it was so overplayed during my high school job...40 years ago.

    • @nightcollapse
      @nightcollapse 6 років тому +23

      (this is all from memory)
      *JINGLE BELLS*
      *JINGLE BELLS*
      *JINGLE ALL THE WAY*
      *OH WHAT FUN IT IS TO RIDE IN A ONE HORSE OPEN SLEIGH (HEY)*
      (chorus repeats)
      *UP THE FIELDS WE GO*
      *IN A ONE HORSE OPEN SLEIGH*
      *OVER THE FIELDS WE GO (?)*
      *LAUGHING ALL THE WAY (HEY!)*
      *SOMETHING SOMETHING SOMETHING*
      *MAKING SPIRITS BRIGHT*
      *OH WHAT FUN IT IS TO SING A SLEIGHING SONG TONIGHT*
      (chorus repeats)

    • @floydlooney6837
      @floydlooney6837 6 років тому +4

      Alan Bear not even the Trans-Siberian Orchestra version?

    • @alanbear6505
      @alanbear6505 6 років тому +6

      @@nightcollapse You fiend! (LOL)

    • @alanbear6505
      @alanbear6505 6 років тому +5

      @@floydlooney6837 TSO is undeniably awesome. I love their stuff...except that one. :)

    • @Pigen_
      @Pigen_ 6 років тому +2

      Well... u r fuckin old 👌

  • @mjr_schneider
    @mjr_schneider 6 років тому +81

    One day in the future, when no one cares what Christmas was ever about, we'll have Black Friday specials about the importance of low prices and consumption.

    • @zachmanf.7479
      @zachmanf.7479 5 років тому +13

      Teen Titans Go had a Black Friday special. I wish I was joking.

    • @goldenfiberwheat238
      @goldenfiberwheat238 4 роки тому

      Stuff like that is gonna turn me into an ancom

    • @canaisyoung3601
      @canaisyoung3601 4 роки тому +1

      @@zachmanf.7479 I remember seeibg that. Even though I don't care much for TTG (because it's a kid's show and I'm only interested in adult cartoons or those really old cartoons that a lot of people these days would consider racist), that episode was actually funny.

    • @EnriqueLaberintico
      @EnriqueLaberintico 6 місяців тому +1

      ​@@zachmanf.7479I remember that special made me want to buy a computer as a kid. I never did.

  • @isaacsmith3575
    @isaacsmith3575 6 років тому +147

    Literally an hour before this popped up I was thinking, "You know, a Terrible Writing Advice on holiday specials would be amazing." Looks like my Christmas wish came true!

    • @Mae_Dastardly
      @Mae_Dastardly 6 років тому +7

      Wasted your wish tbh
      I woulda wished for booze

  • @ahlyae
    @ahlyae 6 років тому +36

    “Everything changed when blackfriday attacked.” Nice TLA reference there.

  • @kolonarulez5222
    @kolonarulez5222 6 років тому +106

    I'd love to write or at least own the rights to a famous Christmas special or song. Imagine just sitting back and watching the royalties flow in every year.

    • @rogermorris9696
      @rogermorris9696 6 років тому +8

      In the UK this is called the Slade effect.

    • @rogermorris9696
      @rogermorris9696 6 років тому +3

      @PokeEmblem 692 A 1070's Glam Rock band who had a hit with "Merry Xmas Everybody". This song is one of most played during Christmas in the UK, and the lead singer Noddy Holder has called it his retirement plan. They also had hits "Come on feel the nozie" and "Mama were all crazy now" that were covered by Quiet Riot.

    • @magicalmelancholy970
      @magicalmelancholy970 5 років тому +4

      @@rogermorris9696 Wow, it must be nice to live for hundreds of years and still manage to keep your copyright claims (must be easier than the plan I had, which involved faking my death, collecting my own insurance, moving to a different place, then going back into society once the statutes of limitations for insurance fraud runs out, rinse and repeat).

  • @thelakai7960
    @thelakai7960 2 роки тому +16

    My idea for a Christmas special: the "good guy" tries too force a "grinch" to like the holidays. In the end the good guy realises he was in the wrong and learns it is okay that some people don't celebrate Christmas

  • @jamiesnack
    @jamiesnack 6 років тому +28

    never heard "getting a Christmas tree" explained as "brutally murdering a child tree"

  • @segenshin1894
    @segenshin1894 4 роки тому +22

    Most Christmas stories are just "Save Christmas with Santa!", or "Grumpy guy learns the importance of Christmas."

  • @josephroberts7167
    @josephroberts7167 5 років тому +20

    "Several international treaties prohibit me from singing."
    Same, I also lie about my reasons for hiding my terrible singing voice.

  • @asalways1504
    @asalways1504 6 років тому +273

    Tis the season for saccharine cliches and thinly veiled advertisements! 🎄⛄

  • @winter1235
    @winter1235 6 років тому +85

    I want to see the Christmas in Mordor musical. With catchy tunes like Do Orcs Know It's Christmas, or Slay Ride, or Elf Nuts Roasting on an Open Fire...

    • @jonsnor4313
      @jonsnor4313 6 років тому +5

      Like the south park song, or hishes 12 days of christmas with villains. Or the Ylvis christmas song.
      "Santa slays" would be a great song. or "Saurons hells"

    • @AnimeboyIanpower
      @AnimeboyIanpower 4 роки тому +4

      Or how about that all-time classic "Sauron got Run Over by a Dragon"?

    • @catbatrat1760
      @catbatrat1760 3 роки тому +1

      All of them except for that last one

    • @ConnanTheCivilized
      @ConnanTheCivilized 2 роки тому +2

      @@AnimeboyIanpower I do miss Grandma Sauron. Thankfully Grandpa Gandalf has been taking it so well.

  • @NukeOTron
    @NukeOTron 6 років тому +29

    How to make a standard Christmas special:
    1. Keep it perpetually trapped in the Sixties, or just add cheese; lots and lots of cheese.
    2. NO EPICNESS ALLOWED.
    3. Copy-paste any story that came around the Sixies and before. (...besides The Life and Adventures of Santa Claus, because NO EPICNESS ALLOWED)
    4. Take jabs at commercialism.
    5. Have ABC cut out scenes to fit more commercials into it, unaware that "hoss" doesn't rhyme with "stunk", and nerfing all jabs at commercialism.

  • @AjPuj
    @AjPuj 6 років тому +477

    Can you do a terrible writing advice for cults?

    • @NikGushue
      @NikGushue 6 років тому +45

      Check out Intrigue Plots and Cosmic Horror for more info

    • @merrittanimation7721
      @merrittanimation7721 6 років тому +70

      Whatever your plot is, it needs more human sacrifice.

    • @deltoroperdedor3166
      @deltoroperdedor3166 6 років тому +9

      When you say more, are you referring to greater numbers or a larger proportion of cult members?

    • @patrickbuckley7259
      @patrickbuckley7259 6 років тому +13

      He has touched on it, but if he never did any subject he has touched on in the past, eventually, he won't be able to do any new episodes. Besides I would love to see how he'd deal with cults.

    • @merrittanimation7721
      @merrittanimation7721 6 років тому +6

      @@deltoroperdedor3166 Greater numbers of sacrifices. The number of cultists should be large enough to handle the amount.

  • @sotakovatereza352
    @sotakovatereza352 4 роки тому +34

    How to write a holiday special? Make the story take place on Christmas even if the plot has nothing to do with Christmas, easy.

    • @ConnanTheCivilized
      @ConnanTheCivilized 2 роки тому +5

      You really are a “Diehard” fan of this idea aren’t you.

    • @MidnightWalker6030P
      @MidnightWalker6030P Рік тому +2

      I know this is sarcastic, but it needs to be said, “Die Hard” is not a Christmas movie

  • @TheRezro
    @TheRezro 6 років тому +16

    I love how they make My Little Pony holiday episodes. Because they have own reasons to celebrate (as either reminder of end of demonic invasion, collapse of the kingdom or falling of they leaders.. and that isn't even a joke) they can reach deep meaning behind common holidays instead just repeating cliches.

  • @charlesmelenyzer8919
    @charlesmelenyzer8919 6 років тому +36

    I am overjoyed because 'Cardiomegaly' was put in rhyme. Now I just need a valentine with Takotsubo's Cardiomyopathy.

  • @ryopoto55
    @ryopoto55 5 років тому +16

    "Your world is stupid! I'm going to play Skyrim"
    My thought every time I go outside.

    • @cactusadams7752
      @cactusadams7752 Рік тому

      I was about to say. That was way too relatable 😂

  • @r3negadex
    @r3negadex 6 років тому +18

    I love it when he brings in the characters he's created, and has them interact with each other in all their deliberately cliched glory! Seriously, dude, you need to make a slice of life comedy skit of these guys, or maybe a webcomic. I would totally read it!

  • @k9builder
    @k9builder 3 роки тому +22

    I have worked retail, I can empathize. Also, nice catch about the love triangle in "The Grinch". Probably the single lamest thing ever.

  • @walkinsprout8046
    @walkinsprout8046 4 роки тому +17

    You forgot the "It's wonderful life" cliche where the main character tries to commit suicide or what the world looks like without because main character life sucks and a ghost shows what happend.

  • @sianais
    @sianais 3 роки тому +12

    Hearing "I don't want a lot for Christmas…" is enough to send me murderous rage.

    • @Xehanort10
      @Xehanort10 Рік тому +1

      That's become my most hated Christmas song because of how overplayed it is.

  • @sord3377
    @sord3377 6 років тому +307

    Dark Lord: Then, every year on the month before Christmas, I shall set aside a day where I separate workers from their families and force them to brave angry mobs of ravenous creatures. I shall call it Black Friday!
    JP: Um. We already do that.
    EDIT1:1 day and a hundred likes.

  • @lennypayne4241
    @lennypayne4241 4 роки тому +20

    I think there's been more movies/episodes/books/etc. about someone having to save Christmas then there's been actual Christmases in the real world.

    • @neontangle11
      @neontangle11 Рік тому +4

      You're probably right, since hundreds of Christmas specials are released each year

  • @DoriZuza
    @DoriZuza 3 роки тому +12

    The cardiomegaly bit had me laughing out loud. As a doctor, I have the same thought when I hear that “heart grew three sizes” line. The only thing that bothers me is that the script sort of conflates cardiomegaly with a myocardial infarction, but it still works as an underlying cause of death, so thumbs up :)

  • @toongrowner1
    @toongrowner1 6 років тому +11

    You forgot the for cartoons typical "Oh no, something happened to santa or one of his thingy-does, and it's up to the main characters to save christmas for some reason" trope, sometimes followed by "santa just pretented he couldn't do it"

  • @jerri1918
    @jerri1918 6 років тому +15

    theres a parallel universe where trees come and kidnap our babies, and decorate them until they're colorfu and flashy

    • @ginogatash4030
      @ginogatash4030 5 років тому

      wouldn't their corpses be already "flashy"?

    • @canaisyoung3601
      @canaisyoung3601 4 роки тому

      Can I steal this idea from you? Please?

  • @firesparkling9370
    @firesparkling9370 6 років тому +33

    My favorite Christmas special was from SAO Abridged.
    “And so they say, that Kirito’s heart grew 3 sizes that day then immediately shrank 6, imploding into a black hole from which no love could escape.”

    • @vibevizier6512
      @vibevizier6512 6 років тому +7

      SAO Abridged is a fucking treasure in general.

    • @KazuhaEien
      @KazuhaEien 5 років тому +2

      I laughed

  • @sweatyskeleton7390
    @sweatyskeleton7390 6 років тому +118

    Mitochondria is the powerhouse of the cell

    • @Debicus
      @Debicus 6 років тому +28

      I thought midichlorians were the powerhouse of the cell.

    • @squeakboy3666
      @squeakboy3666 6 років тому +17

      Mitochondria is the powercell of the house

    • @benjaminrogers8875
      @benjaminrogers8875 6 років тому +5

      Excellent anime taste.

    • @firewall5189
      @firewall5189 6 років тому +4

      hey thanks man i completely forgot

    • @Debicus
      @Debicus 6 років тому +3

      @@squeakboy3666 of course! I got it mixed up. Sorry for the hassle

  • @mrman5517
    @mrman5517 6 років тому +188

    we need a "terrible youtube comment writing advice" :)

    • @LibertyLocalizer
      @LibertyLocalizer 6 років тому +11

      Holy f*ck, yes!

    • @pussinboots838
      @pussinboots838 6 років тому +4

      Weird flex but ok

    • @everlast282
      @everlast282 6 років тому +2

      Josh M1911 u gay nigga

    • @pussinboots838
      @pussinboots838 6 років тому +2

      @@everlast282 no u

    • @calswartz615
      @calswartz615 6 років тому +25

      How to write a GREAT youtube comment:
      -death threats
      -improper grammering
      -bold text for attention
      -saying the creator sucks
      -mentioning polotics
      -love triangle

  • @MisterTutor2010
    @MisterTutor2010 6 років тому +44

    The true meaning of Christmas is consumerism and annoying relatives :)

    • @daraghokane4236
      @daraghokane4236 6 років тому +3

      It's spending money on things nobody wants just so you have something to complain about. At least in my house

    • @namesurname8474
      @namesurname8474 6 років тому +2

      The true meaning of Christmas is celebrating the birthday of Jesus and the start of our salvation and a chance to redeem our sins on Earth: It means mercy in a world that desperately needed it and the representation of a God that, instead of sending people to die for him, he sends himself to die for the people. It's a heartwarming moment in history that truly deserves to be celebrated.
      However, since now arts and media are controlled by huge companies that only care about promoting consumerism, what we have is this.

    • @MisterTutor2010
      @MisterTutor2010 6 років тому +3

      @@namesurname8474 Thanks Linus :)

    • @suezuccati304
      @suezuccati304 4 роки тому +1

      @@namesurname8474 well, the true shit about dying is that its irreversible, if you "died" for someone but was ressurrected right afterwards, than dying was of no consequence to you at all.

    • @blackking1307
      @blackking1307 4 роки тому

      @@suezuccati304 Jesus not only died, he was also betrayed, tortured for several hours and then crucified. This is probably one of the most painful deaths ever.

  • @louisduarte8763
    @louisduarte8763 4 роки тому +6

    "I will establish a holiday all about binge drinking and alcohol-fueled mayhem!"
    "I don't see the downside to that. Besides, we have a lot of those already: Mardi Gras, St. Patrick's Day, Cinco de Mayo, and New Year's Eve. That's why we call Jan. 1st 'National Hangover Day'."

  • @naooho9392
    @naooho9392 6 років тому +80

    So since TWA guy is dead, and inner critic is alive, is the next video going to be done by inner critic?

    • @grand-dadmiral
      @grand-dadmiral 6 років тому +22

      Nah, that means there will be continuity, whatever that means.

    • @FantasyAngel-zj7bw
      @FantasyAngel-zj7bw 6 років тому +12

      Well, unless there's a plot hole.

  • @bizarredoll1760
    @bizarredoll1760 6 років тому +41

    That retail worker bit is too real, I'm still haunted by that Mariah Carey song repeating over and over and over...

    • @Newfiecat
      @Newfiecat 6 років тому +4

      I HATE THAT MARIAH CAREY SONG

    • @matthewpatrick7263
      @matthewpatrick7263 4 роки тому

      Personally, I think about working until midnight and coming in early the next morning, hearing someone singing 'sleep in heavenly peace.' That's all I wanted to do.

    • @benjamintin136
      @benjamintin136 4 роки тому

      Even I, who has never worked in retail, really dislike the song.

    • @Xehanort10
      @Xehanort10 3 роки тому

      All I want for Christmas is for everywhere to stop playing that song.

  • @stephenskinner7207
    @stephenskinner7207 6 років тому +12

    Simple Christmas celebrations are always the best in my mind. Ignore Black Friday, ignore the pessimists, get together with your family, sing, eat, laugh, tell stories, read the Christmas story from Matthew and Luke, and then, for some reason, always have biscuits and gravy for breakfast. Hey, every family has traditions.

  • @akromakroma
    @akromakroma 6 років тому +7

    "Your world is stupid. I'm going play Skyrim."
    Me: Yeah same

  • @cloverdoesart4845
    @cloverdoesart4845 6 років тому +40

    A terrible writing advice for Animal Companions. Or assassin kt perhaps crazy doll makers?

    • @dp-2835
      @dp-2835 6 років тому +6

      Just use the "I'm attached to my master" trope or the "I may find my master annoying, but I still consider him/her my best friend" trope, because surely we have not seen that in companions in stories like a million times.

  • @yeethittter1285
    @yeethittter1285 4 роки тому +8

    I hate how in every Christmas movie Santa not delivering gifts means Christmas is ruined. I thought the point of The Grinch was that presents aren't the point? And if two 8 year olds can do it for him then why's it such a big deal?

  • @wjzav1971
    @wjzav1971 4 роки тому +4

    Oh, don't forget that all the adults don't believe in Santa Claus, despite the fact that he exists in-universe and the adults never question where the presents under the tree, they didn't buy, came from.

  • @FlyingAlfredoSaucer
    @FlyingAlfredoSaucer 6 років тому +18

    This is the best Christmas special I have ever seen.

  • @Attaxalotl
    @Attaxalotl 4 роки тому +7

    *"Your world is stupid i'm going to go play skyrim"*

  • @ahooman6690
    @ahooman6690 4 роки тому +10

    0:45 - then everything changed when the fir- what wrong script
    then everything changed when black Friday attacked

  • @80ki68
    @80ki68 6 років тому +33

    Just as I'm not at all addressing my Worldbuilder's Disease, look who shows up!

  • @benfarrar741
    @benfarrar741 4 роки тому +6

    The Evil Emperor was destroyed by an entire planet. Perfect.

  • @screech5325
    @screech5325 6 років тому +6

    "Here's a christmas special, because my inspiration and motivation are lost, please if you find them get them back for me."

  • @didnttrywoththisname3315
    @didnttrywoththisname3315 6 років тому +15

    These episodes are getting very hilarious because of the good world building. The hologram part was pretty clever... 😂

  • @Xehanort10
    @Xehanort10 3 роки тому +6

    The "Santa is injured and the main character has to replace him" is another one.

  • @JimmehRulez
    @JimmehRulez 6 років тому +45

    Not only are the pencils on fire, the books, the plot, the characters, the whole story.... BUT THE CHRISTMAS TREE IS ON FIRE.

    • @theodorepinnock1517
      @theodorepinnock1517 6 років тому +9

      This reminds me of a yearbook quote meme I once saw:
      "High school is just like riding a bike. Except the bike is on fire and the ground is on fire and everything is on fire BECAUSE IT'S HELL!!!"

    • @JimmehRulez
      @JimmehRulez 6 років тому +2

      @@theodorepinnock1517 lol

  • @kennethfajardo9102
    @kennethfajardo9102 4 роки тому +8

    9:24
    Huh, you know, I guess your heart suddenly growing three sizes isn't very good for your body.

  • @andreworders7305
    @andreworders7305 3 роки тому +7

    Have your characters meet Santa. That’s all, you’re done.

  • @ichbinben.
    @ichbinben. 6 років тому +11

    "Everything is blanketed in falling snow"??? I can't see any. Strange, when I was a kid, we had snow in december almost every year, but for several years now, there has been next to no snow all winter. It's almost like global warming is really a thing... But that can't be right! That would mean we need to do something to stop it, and I'm lazy! I'm also too lazy to write the next chapter of my book, which is why I procrastinate by watching UA-cam videos. What was I talking about again? Ah never mind, cool video as always.

  • @jacques4703
    @jacques4703 6 років тому +55

    Merry Christmas
    Even to you, retail workers, you shall overcome the struggle

  • @tomwright1564
    @tomwright1564 6 років тому +8

    These are so worth the wait. Your standards are really high. Well done

  • @Dani-vb1eh
    @Dani-vb1eh 6 років тому +10

    3:03 “holiday specials are the ?????? of most writer’s careers”

    • @livvylowe8066
      @livvylowe8066 6 років тому +13

      nadir - noun - the lowest point in the fortunes of a person or organization.

    • @Dani-vb1eh
      @Dani-vb1eh 6 років тому +5

      pulsar_ blah blah blah English major stuff

  • @Vyansya
    @Vyansya 6 років тому +22

    I really want you to purposely make a bad story (include mary sue, love triangle, horrible cliche etc) i would totally buy it

    • @TiffanyRay
      @TiffanyRay 6 років тому

      i hate christmas specials that do the same thing over again stories that copy the grinch, christmas carol, nightmare before christmas etc.

    • @daraghokane4236
      @daraghokane4236 6 років тому

      @@TiffanyRay how about we replace the three ghosts with time travellers now it's a completely different story

    • @briangerloff5794
      @briangerloff5794 6 років тому +1

      What do you mean by, 'bad story'. That sounds amzing!

    • @EnriqueLaberintico
      @EnriqueLaberintico 6 місяців тому +2

      The story equivalent of Kay(f)bop(t).

  • @seandewar47
    @seandewar47 6 років тому +83

    Can you do a Terrible Writing Advice Video for how to portray Dinosaurs in movies?

    • @globin3477
      @globin3477 6 років тому +23

      Oh, that's easy. Just plop in some Vaguely lizard like overweight monsters that all eat meat regardless of their body plan, that all have an insatiable drive to consume humans regardless of any potential risks, costs, or easier meals available, that are all cold blooded, and that absolutely positively have nothing even resembling feathers.

    • @seandewar47
      @seandewar47 6 років тому +16

      @@globin3477 Perfect, but let's not forget about Hammering the moral about the dangers of Cloning dinosaurs even though the likelihood of that happening are slim to none

    • @merrittanimation7721
      @merrittanimation7721 6 років тому +16

      And if you run out of ideas, add more raptors. Everybody loves raptors.

    • @globin3477
      @globin3477 6 років тому +9

      @@merrittanimation7721 And make sure the raptors always hunt in packs, despite the fact that most scientists agree they generally lived alone.

    • @seandewar47
      @seandewar47 6 років тому +10

      @@merrittanimation7721 and just call it Velociraptor, no Matter different it looks from the actual animal
      OH YEAH! Also no matter what, always make these creatures make loud noises whenever hunting our protagonists(Unless it'smeant as a way to scare said protagonists into an ambush, because that actually makes too too much sense). Because it doesn't matter that t would give away your position, it makes for good action.
      And no matter what, make sure the Sounds that the Dinosaurs make are from Mammals, Specifically Big cats, Gorillas, Bears and elephants

  • @patrickbuckley7259
    @patrickbuckley7259 6 років тому +11

    I was going to do a christamass shortstory with charecters from one of my books. Where I set it up that the big reveal was that Santa was in fact a small but well organized society of wizards all devoted to making sure children could enjoy christmass, and learn to believe in magic.
    Then I realized that people aren't smart enough to realize that a story about people working together to brighten up other peoples lives is what the holiday is all about. Good will towards men and all that. SO I just wrote a emotionally manipulative christmass story about shoes or something like that written from the perspective of an insanely self absorbed sociopath and sold the rights to some band. I doupt they made much money on it, it was utter dreck.
    That being said I did enjoy the Librarians Christmas special, it was charming.

    • @ahniandfriends123
      @ahniandfriends123 6 років тому +2

      Did that story involve an old woman getting ran over by a reindeer?

    • @patrickbuckley7259
      @patrickbuckley7259 6 років тому +2

      @@ahniandfriends123 I wish! I heard that guy made a ton of money....
      Not like me, spent everything I earned on spiked egg nog. I knew adding that bit about the mother with cancer in there was just too much.

    • @ahniandfriends123
      @ahniandfriends123 6 років тому

      @@patrickbuckley7259 I might also bet that the part where the main character had to fight off a drug dealer who held a boy at gunpoint over unpaid drugs was a bit too extreme, especially since that scene took place on a rooftop.

    • @patrickbuckley7259
      @patrickbuckley7259 6 років тому

      @@ahniandfriends123 I don't remember writing THAT... but I was slightly stoned at the time.

    • @patrickbuckley7259
      @patrickbuckley7259 6 років тому +1

      @PokeEmblem 692 If your asking what I was referencing in the first bit, it actually is an original idea I seriously considered writing. The second part was me poking fun at "The Christmas Shoes."
      Um, thank you, I think.

  • @ChaosRayZero
    @ChaosRayZero 6 років тому +9

    7:34 is also pretty close to Japanese Christmas specials.
    Also, I was waiting the entire time for the "It's a wonderful life" cliche to come up, but somehow you didn't even mention it. Do shows still do the "Gift of the Magi" ripoff plot too, or has that one gotten outdated?
    TV Tropes has pages for each, if you want more info for what I'm talking about.

  • @RedQuill13
    @RedQuill13 3 роки тому +3

    Xmas cliche: insert character finding the perfect gift for insert other character, usually family or significant other.

  • @maverickREAL
    @maverickREAL 3 роки тому +3

    My favorite subversion of the usual Christmas tropes is Regular Show's "The Christmas Special."
    Not only is Santa perfectly fine (as opposed to the "we gotta save Santa" trope) and the cast actually help him with keeping the balance of Christmas alive, the special actually does have consequences later down the line; leaving Thomas/Nikolai "stuck in the banister" allowed him to shimmy out and sabotage the park for Russia.

  • @DarkArtistKaiser
    @DarkArtistKaiser 6 років тому +16

    "Your people use magic but question the super natural?"
    GODS, that always bothered me! Its always weird when the biggest skeptics in a fantasy setting are the magic users, it never made that much sense.
    Also, "Oh look its a Christmas miracle, I came back to life so I can get out of here!" made me laugh more than I probably should have. I think the tone is what did it for me.

    • @daraghokane4236
      @daraghokane4236 6 років тому +1

      In my little pony a unicorn said physics are unscientific because at least her magic is testable. ua-cam.com/video/6hc9KYr2-IA/v-deo.html

    • @DarkArtistKaiser
      @DarkArtistKaiser 3 роки тому

      @Gaming Miser
      Perhaps, but that assumes arrogance then and usually thats not the implication. As if a handful of magic users can somehow know the universe inward and outward in its entirety.

  • @robertcooper4th259
    @robertcooper4th259 Рік тому +2

    4:38 that’s the plot of an angel for Christmas.

  • @5xg378
    @5xg378 6 років тому +53

    I bet re-telling a christmas story with the character from yours is gonna appear

    • @MegaToonzNetwork
      @MegaToonzNetwork 6 років тому +7

      The Grinch is a science fiction/war film directed by Tim
      Burton and Michael Bay. PROVE ME WRONG!!!

    • @festethephule7553
      @festethephule7553 6 років тому +2

      @@MegaToonzNetwork
      No one dies.

    • @5xg378
      @5xg378 6 років тому +4

      @@MegaToonzNetwork There are no explosions
      So no Michael bay

    • @deltoroperdedor3166
      @deltoroperdedor3166 6 років тому +1

      The giant robots don't engage in necrophilia

    • @AnimeboyIanpower
      @AnimeboyIanpower 4 роки тому

      @@deltoroperdedor3166 I wish I didn't have to read that sentence...

  • @jobisTheWorst
    @jobisTheWorst 6 років тому +6

    *When every holiday is special None of them will be*
    I was not expecting that reference

  • @timesnewlogan2032
    @timesnewlogan2032 2 роки тому +3

    One thing I can't stand, is when a holiday episode contains essential plot points or developments, forcing subsequent viewers to watch them out-of-season.

  • @BobLogical
    @BobLogical 6 років тому +16

    Remember to never make a holiday special about any holiday besides Christmas. Those aren't nearly as marketable.

    • @sleepysera
      @sleepysera 6 років тому

      Valentine's Day works great, Easter is pretty amazing too if you are writing for kids (of course sticking to the bunny thing, not any of the real Easter celebration). Children love seeing the tired Christmas story cliché of "Something happened to Santa and now the protagonist has to save Christmas!" play out with bunnies instead.
      And adults love seeing ridiculous dumb love story fights over some forgotten flowers and the like that lead to sexy strangers and love triangles and whatnot, and Valentine's Day is a good opportunity as any to force your SO into it alongside you.

    • @101jir
      @101jir 6 років тому

      @@sleepysera "Valentine's Day is a good opportunity as any to force your SO into it alongside you." Or maybe _into_ you :}

    • @sleepysera
      @sleepysera 6 років тому +2

      @@101jir I think that's called rape xD

    • @andreyv.vieira521
      @andreyv.vieira521 6 років тому +3

      @@sleepysera I hate how everyone forgets Halloween, I always thougt it was a celebration with a lot of potential...

    • @canaisyoung3601
      @canaisyoung3601 4 роки тому +1

      @@andreyv.vieira521 Usually, Halloween specials are parodies of horror movies. Blame "The Simpsons" for that.

  • @BovineDesigns
    @BovineDesigns 6 років тому +10

    Holiday Specials and Bad Writing? I haven't seen such a common combination since PB and J!

    • @briangerloff5794
      @briangerloff5794 6 років тому +1

      I think you mean JP and B. Don't ask what B is. Even I don't know.

    • @t3chkn1ght
      @t3chkn1ght 5 років тому

      @@briangerloff5794 The B stands for Bees!

  • @lauries3961
    @lauries3961 6 років тому +11

    Lol, I love the Christmas Carol layout of this.

  • @bronwyngibson4925
    @bronwyngibson4925 4 роки тому +3

    "your world is stupid, I'm going to go play skyrim" i have never related to anything more in my entire life

  • @nerd_mus
    @nerd_mus 6 років тому +13

    The evil emperor is real af about christmas

  • @evanredacted7977
    @evanredacted7977 6 років тому +67

    It was funny but not really Terrible Writing Advice. More just a parody on Christmas tropes.

    • @TressonKaru
      @TressonKaru 6 років тому +14

      Or how to plagiarize a Christmas special. XD

    • @101jir
      @101jir 6 років тому +13

      Then again, that could be seen as exactly it: most Christmas specials can be summed up the same way, just replace "Terrible Writing Advice" with [name of franchise].
      Like this episode, you get maybe a hint of what the franchise is about, but not much.

  • @DrawciaGleam02
    @DrawciaGleam02 6 років тому +4

    Did they ever play "Grandma got run over by a reindeer" on the radio while you worked in retail? That one is a tad different from other Christmas melodies.