A couple of logic errors. They had possession of planets they could not visit? Are environmental suits not a thing? And preparing for war by buildings ships AFTER declaring war is the wrong order of operations. Quit using the word determination, the phrase 'the galaxy watched in silence' and overall the flourishes that unnecessarily redescribe everything over and over.
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A couple of logic errors.
They had possession of planets they could not visit? Are environmental suits not a thing?
And preparing for war by buildings ships AFTER declaring war is the wrong order of operations.
Quit using the word determination, the phrase 'the galaxy watched in silence' and overall the flourishes that unnecessarily redescribe everything over and over.