"Something is Watching us from The Corner of The Room" Scary Stories from The Internet
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- Опубліковано 2 сер 2024
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"There Is Something Watching us from The Corner of The Room"
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Hey everyone! i have been sick for a little while, but im feeling better and working on some new videos for you all! How have you been? whats been new in the last few weeks?
Been good and happy for the new vid and happy ur feeling better
Good to hear you feel better🫶
Glad you're feeling better! Being sick sucks
A newfound love for re-listening to you old stories
You rest king
The author really managed to give me that horrifying sinking feeling when you realize his grandmother was already dead and he took care of her rotting body.
Amazing story and amazing narration as always. This was one of my absolute favorites!
I was wondering the same thing if she had been gone way before
@@madelinewhite813 I think she died that night he was in his room gaming and she got attacked by the dark entity. Because the morning after he couldn't wake her up at first and her diaper was insanely full (like when a body dies it releases everything) and after that she couldn't eat, drink or help moving when he dressed her.
It was an incredibly unsettling way to hint at that
Don't write this shit in the comments and do not vote this to be the first comment jfc
@@AKKK1182 You mad, bro? Reading the comments to spoil the story for yourself and blaming people just talking about the story?
@@Batmann_ you can see the top comment(s), dummy.
Now this is utterly horrifying, a book of true horror, despair and sadness. You never fail to show off Somnium.
glad you enjoyed it!
I don't think you understand what "You never fail to disappoint" means 😶
@@user-gj5ey9bg7p I had an idiot moment and stuck 2 phrases together, I corrected myself
I got what you meant💕 you're not an idiot. Don't say that!
He's the GOAT.
This story really pulled me in. I think Evelyn passed the night she woke up at midnight and he couldn’t wake her up the following morning.
And sadly yes, very relatable. I understand Evelyn wanting to choose where she died. I understand the despair that swallows Tommy. This story conjures a deep, twisted, and beautiful sorrow. There was so much sadness, release, and almost joy when Tommy died. Interesting how the author conveyed Tommy’s confusion upon seeing his grandmother was already there. This is a work of art- thank you!
I was searching to see if someone else thought Evelyn had passed, and everything after that was Tommy’s imagination. Which would also explain why the cops couldn’t hear her
This is by far the best horror story I've ever read, they (the writer) somehow managed to depict death as disgusting, beautiful, scary, peaceful, and all other contradicting words in this cohesive narrative. Especially with the denial of death, I caught on almost immediately that Tommy was caring for his grandmother's corpse, and the portrayal of the delusion was done perfectly without being too obvious or sudden.
Evelyn's care is all too familiar to me, as a child my mother had to help my great-grandfather during the final years of his life after a long battle against Alzheimer's disease. I dont remember much as that period of my life was one of the hardest, but this story perfectly encapsulates the feeling of helplessness, anger, sadness, and loneliness when watching a loved one slowly pass away.
Wow, that is so sad. His selfish grandmother failed Tommy so badly. And the fact that his hallucination of her treated him so badly shows how awful of a mother figure she was to him in life.
Wait, what? His hallucination of her? When did he hallucinate her? Did I just completely miss that part? Lol EDIT: nvm I just listened to his theory at the very end about her being dead.
@@GlitterGumI was about to skip that part, but I was thinking that when he shook her and her neck was loose that was her end. Listening to Ronnie’s theory now thx
@@johnro8otshe died when he left to play on his computer. The bigger mess she did was when your bowel empty itself when you die
*Sabotage. Trying to do everything right but Failing is… well.. failing. Doing everything wrong on purpose isn’t failure
@@GlitterGumshe died halfway through. You can tell because she had more feces than usual.
Halfway through this story all I could think about is how horrible of a Grandmother she was. Because of her fear she crippled her grandson socially and mentally which led to the way this story played out 😢
I think the point of the story is that Granny and Grandson were both just victims of life circumstance and the inherent indifference of death and truama, and were doing the best with what they had. People always want stories to have a villain or "bad guy" to blame EVERYTHING on but the fact is, life is much more complicated than that. And it's easy to judge when you're an outsider looking in, safe from the same unfair circumstances that turn people "horrible".
@@BOFAMETsounds like you're trying to justify her horrible actions. People are complicated. But what's unforgivable about her is that she had her moment of clarity. She realized how she had failed her grandson so spectacularly. And instead of changing her ways last-minute, and having a heart-to-heart with him about how he's going to have to grow up without her, she sends him to his grave. Over her own vanity. She didn't ask for the gun or for medically assisted suicide, she sent him armed against the police.
That is unforgivable.
He on the other hand, the man who attempted murder against officers of the law, is much more understandable as a victim. And ultimately, is forgivable.
@@Mygg_JeagerI’m confused, I thought at that point she was dead and he was just Hallucinating her asking him to protect her
@@Mygg_Jeager I think you might want to listen to the story again my dude lol, you seem to have missed a crucial factor in "granny" supposedly sending her grandson to his death.
Even still, not wanting to die in a facility as an old person isn't "vanity" exactly. It's more about being literally at the end of your life and wanting to pass on surrounded by a familiar environment and people you're comfortable with.
This generation's media literacy is astounding pfff
@@BOFAMETnah, she was the bad guy. A shit life is no excuse for traumatizing the next two generations, which she did.
I took care of my aging mother before she died at 91. WOWSERS the description of Tommy taking care of his grandmother is pretty accurate. WHEW what a creepy story!
Yeah you are one of hundreds of thousands who do this a year. 😌
@@dashthomas5174do YOU do it? If you don’t, maybe stop being a terrible bait troll and leave this caring lady alone.
@@Spooky_Platypus I'm not sure you're adding anything positive here, maybe you're the one who should leave people alone.
@@Mafyeuxbruh stfu. standing up to an idiot troll is leagues above putting someone down OR putting someone down FOR standing up to the idiot troll. you added nothing of substance either. projection.
@@Spooky_Platypuswait I’m confused, maybe it’s because I’m tired but can you explain why that comment was wrong
This story was brilliant. You are 100 percent correct with your theory. That particularly bad accident she had, the bowels releasing everything after death. Then she couldn’t move her arms anymore, rigor mortis setting in making it harder to pour water and food into the mouth. Then she got “better”, the stiffness dispersing. The cherry on top was her favorite thing to watch, Hitchcock. The main character was essentially pulling a Norman Bates
I think when she started eating and drinking again and getting better, after Tommy briefly sees a corpse staring at the cieling, that's when he fully switches to the illusion and delusion.
There is a difference between reading a story and bringing a story to life, you my friend have a good talent of making the story come to life.
I think this is probably one of the best horror pieces I've ever heard. It being so firmly planted in reality hits really different. My dad took care of my bio mom for a couple years while she slowly lost her battle to cancer. So while I can't relate directly, I did have to watch it as a small child. A truly painful and tragic thing, watching someone you love so deeply just waste away. And I don't know how to describe, but the way you narrate really captures the feeling of dispair. Feels so weird to sit and praise a piece that has me feeling all kinds of uncomfortable and sad lol. Well done, you really know what stories to pick and and how to really make them cone to life.
you’re a kind soul for donating
This was an amazing story. I think the author managed not only to write an amazing creepypasta, but also to capture the struggle and stress of caring for someone, having them completely depend on you and the horror of seeing a loved one slowly withering away.
P.S. Glad you're feeling a bit better!
Not to mention the codependency of Tommy's total dependence on his gma as well, providing for all his financial as well as emotional needs. Altogether, it's quite sad. The author did an excellent job creating sympathy & making both characters relatable.
Nothing really sad about it if you look at it logically. That's just life. Some people get dealt difficult cards. Play em and don't show any weakness, and don't be a neckbeard like Tommy.
This one was both very horrifying and sad. Also another case of how horrible the HoA is.
HoA? What is that? Just curious.
@@dexteradams248homeowners association.. when you live in a decent neighborhood in the city there’s abunch of assholes that control what and when you do everything.. like mow lawn, trim hedges & trees, trash and so forth..
@@dexteradams248 Jerkasses, also know as the homeowner association, who are the most power mad assholes around that will make sure you cut your lawn every week and not have your house stand out in anyway whatso ever. flat out some of the worst people on earth.
@@chainbenwa2713an HOA mowed over some guy’s garden because he was trying to give the bees and other pollinators a place to live and it makes me so sad. Bees are VITAL to farming and people just don’t care. They want “perfect” lawns (which IMO look ugly. The slight variations in the grass textures look MUCH better than one smooth color) they don’t care about the fact that these “perfect” lawns will hurt the environment.
@@Glaycier ya I told them next time they come to my house about my palm trees not being trimmed I’m going to file a harassment lawsuit because there’s some endangered type of bat living in them.. my dad knew what they were called. Mexican something bats if I remember right.. lol I live near Houston tx.
I feel like this was one of the scarier stories you've read. And it has almost no paranormal activity.
I sometimes wonder if you've acknowledged the fact that you're the best story teller we've ever tuned in for. The combination of your almost monotone voice and depth of horrifying stories creates such incredible content that always makes me come back to get my fix. Without a doubt, you're the best at this.
Not to discredit other creators, they're still amazing...but you're on a completely different level.
This shit gets me through many many overnight shifts 🤣
@@myfightlogic6027Right!
@@myfightlogic6027 what job you do overnight..? I often work 12 hour overnights as a nurse…just curious..
@@danielmarshall8675 I work at Walmart, hopefully I can get out soon
This was an interesting story with many relatable aspects.
My husband and I took care of his mother. Watching her decline was heartbreaking and a reminder of what may await us.
What *does* await us 😑
@@CreepyCat. doesnt need to be, if we stop seeing death as inevitable and instead as a disease to cure we can prevent this pain from ever needing to be a thing.
@@CreepyCat. If we are 'lucky' growing old. May be scarier than death
@@TASmith-ou3is I’m not following
@@CreepyCat. I should have said "If we are 'lucky' enough to grow old."
I put quotes around lucky because unless I can maintain good health, I don't necessarily want to live to an old age.
Becoming elderly, having health problems, & not being able to take care of myself would be worse than death. Does that make sense?
Awesome story. The way it was written was crazy. I was def on the fence about her already being dead but the little clues were just put perfectly to keep you wondering
When he noticed she had more feces than usual, especially when he said it was leaking out onto the floor, that was when she was dead.
This may not have been the story to listen to while coming to terms with the fact that my grandparents don’t have much time left 😅
Acceptance, and saying "it is what it is" is the best way to deal with difficult situations. Anything that does not produce results is weakness.
Definitely something I think about a lot too. It'll be hard but we must move on. Grief can make us stagnant in life, its important to remember and love, but also to move on with our own lives. We cannot become shrines of those we have lost.
I agree with your thought process. That's how I took the story too. She was alive during the first half of the story but, he kept her alive in his mind after she died cause
he couldn't let go of her. When you live with and take of someone for so long and they become the world to you you pick up on all of their habits, mannerisms, speech,
and other quirks that when you suffer a loss that great sometimes it can break people to the point that they become delusional and carry on as if nothing has changed.
It's sad and scary at the same time.
I've been going through your videos from oldest to newest and watch one every night after work, thank you for what would be 100's of dollars of entertainment for free! this is honestly professional audiobook levels of narration and I hope your able to make a good deserved living off of this.
wow thank you so much! and yeah making the videos provides me with an income im very happy with :) i feel honored to be in this position
@@Darksomniumhow do we support your channel? I really appreciate your "free" entertainment 😅
@@DarksomniumI am so glad to know that- your work is just brilliant. Your voice, your inflections- perfect!
Hah. Free. Mmhmm. I’m not sure we need to feel guilty.
im glad to see you have made a recovery! bieng sick is NO FUN. im glad that we get to be graced by your top quality content once again. truly appreciate you lad, god bless.
I appreciate that!
This one was sad. Makes me miss my grandma. The worst part is that she's still alive, she just can't speak or move so I have no idea if she even knows I'm there when I visit. Makes going there hard. Anyways I'm rambling, great narration as always, take care ♡♡
Dude! You're killing it with all these new stories! You see the subscriber base growing?! I've been a fan for years and I'll still say that you're my favorite narrator. Much love ❤️
my favorite types of stories are 1) long, 2) about weird things in houses/rooms, and 3) involve strange family elements or childhood memories. this is such a gift
Saddest horror story I've heard in a while. But I actually leap frogged between the grandma being alive or dead the whole time up til the end. I re-listened to it, and it is very obvious when Tommy tries to change her a second time and Evelyn can't lift her arm for him. Clearly he is trying to care for a corpse, of course Evelyn can't move.
I was going too say I feel like the grandmother had been dead already, probably since his waking dream, with a really bad diaper, and the day she didn’t eat or drink. Extremely real story, I’d say most of us could picture ourselves in this story. Amazing job
That’s actually what I thought at first, when you die all of your bodily fluids release. I was really surprised when she woke up but it looks like she didn’t. Honestly I could see grief getting you to genuinely think someone is still there, I convinced myself reincarnation is real and I have my cat back.
@@justkittensbeingkittens5892 ive always liked cats
This story had me from the start. I kinda suspected that she did die about halfway myself and I needed to see the conclusion. It was an awesome story.
Yes- I think she passed that morning he couldn’t wake her up. Everything seemed to go downhill from there. It’s so sad- because I know real people experience versions of this everyday.
@@yesterdayitrainedyup, when he noticed she had so much more feces to where it was even leaking out. That was when she had been dead.
This was an excellent story; held my interest all the way through. And yes, I definitely got the impression that Grandma died long before the end of the story.
i love how well you play the characters. The emotion you play is how i would imagine it, it gives me chills
Thank you so much for consistently uploading longer stories! I find it so difficult to get into 20 minute stories these days because I need something for my mind to focus on for longer than that, or I'll go crazy.
20 minutes just isn’t enough to get into anything. Unless it’s a true banger, but that’s rare.
Yes, Dark S, I agree she had already passed away, and yes your right about it being relatable- it definitely hit close to home for me! And it took some tears from me! Thanx for the great narration! I'm a big fan!
Loved the store and the way you presented it. I figured she was gone already when the HOA guy became suspicious.
Being someone's caretaker is no joke, the writer hit the nail on the head. Excellent Narration glad ur feeling better I'm sick as well 😢
your narrations, sound design, and music are wonderful, as always. thank you for all that you do. your videos keep me sane during the 9 to 5. wishing you continued success and growth
Wow thank you so much
A "Do not go gentle into that good night" reference in the first minute of the video? Hell yeah.
I’ve witnessed the codependent consequences of the devouring mother figure. This story’s undercurrent touches on something very true.
If only that boy survived the crash in the first place. It would've saved everyone so much suffering.
I'm sorry...I just can't bear this one right now. My 75 yr old dad has Parkinsons and liver failure. I'm not well myself and the rest of the family has pushed us away the last few years. I have him, our four cats, and my bff of over 25 yrs and her girls. Once Dad is gone I'll be alone. Why hear it when you already live it? Not scared except for my own uncertain future.
This was such a visceral and immersive experience!! The storytelling and world building were done with such attention to detail and the relationship felt organic!
All the minor roles were played to perfection; the male officer sounds authoritative and officer Pam sounds hawt! 😜
ROMNEX!!! That aged southern drawl was FLAWLESS through the entire range of emotion, hitting all the markers for intensity; your performance was Oscar worthy as always!!!
Ronnie!!!! I hate third person stories, but your incredible talent shone BRILLIANTLY here, going between Tommy and the narrator seamlessly and switching personas with such consistently effortless ease!! Your trademark flawless performance was flawlessER!!
So well written and performed with the Pinnacle of horror narrative excellence, this was AMAZING!!
LONGGG time listener... First time commenter...
This horrificly amazing story made me cry at 2 different points.. a cry that i am man enough to say, that, i needed... And im sure you could guess why...
Now i just want to say, thank you... Thank you for the countless hours of entertainment, and also the needed release and relief
I rarely complement the writer. But this is poignant and horrific. Kudos.
What I like about this is that this is Adult horror - something that every adult fears: having to let go of their aging, manipulative and sometimes spiteful parents piece by piece.
This is not the usual dumb Something-the-killer, or a recycled ghost story... this is something that can be very real.
What I think: Yes, the grandmother obviously died earlier. And her last fear was regarding her grandson because she knows how much she screwed him up. The grandson's world was only his grandmother. He had nothing outside of her (both due to him not rebelling and due to her manipulations), and he obviously had a mental breakdown when she passed. Obviously the cops handled a mental breakdown as they usually do in public imagination - while in reality they would have called EMS to talk with the grandson and just hangout in the background if the thing starts going wilde... oh, wait... this is set in the US. nevermind.
I agree with every word you wrote. And yes, I live in the U.S.- those that have non-violent breakdowns often get killed instead of help. The neighbor was beyond cruel- his motives were never well-intentioned. Why is it human nature, it seems, to look down, to push down, those who are already suffering so much?
@@yesterdayitrained I am confused because I thought he had a gun though?
@@kellykade Yeah he was armed and dangerous.
This story is what we in the manga reading commu like to call misery-p*rn. Good story, very realistic take on the care of aging people and the narration was top tier like always. 👏
Talk about well written, superbly narrated, and timely. I REALLY needed to hear this and right now. I dunno how you manage to do it, Somnium, but your narrations and story choices manage to be what I need to hear and when I need to hear it. They always ring a bell for me, in some way. Which is a tribute not only to your excellent narrations but your sensibility in choosing stories to tell that effect you, and draw out real feelings that cannot be faked no matter how good the narrator. It always FEELS as if you put yourself into your narrations just enough to breathe unique life into them, without altering the author's intentions or vision. So, in short, you are magical. Keep spreading that magic hither and yon on these Internet streets. Labors of love, skill, and talent like your work are all-too-rare to find. Even on a planet with billions of sentient people. Thank you for your spectacular work and dedication
This really tugged my heart strings it brought up fears that I have of my parents suffering and my Nana twords her end me and my mom took care of her till her last breath in her kitchen a year ago thank you somnium for the awesome story I just hope I'm strong enough like Tommy to be able to help my parents stay safe everyone
im glad you enjoyed the story, thank you for sharing your thoughts! :)
Yes it's a very hard thing to go through my thoughts are with you peace to you and yours
Yes it's a very hard thing to go through my thoughts are with you peace to you and yours
@@jamespope2840 thank you same to you
Well, maybe not *quite* as strong as Tommy… I can allow myself that much..
This is beautifully written and intriguing. Great choice as usual, Ronnie ❤
Thank you so much!
Pretty sure your right about grandma passing away mid way through the story. It’s a scene that happens all too frequently with older people with dementia. This is why it’s important to check on older folk.
This is one of those stories that genuinely made me feel dread and despair, perhaps because of how relatable it is to aspects of my own family. The way you two represented the characters was perfect. SpiritVoices did an amazing job showing the frailty of the grandmother, and you did just as good of a job showing the uncertainty and dependence of the grandson. Another amazing video, as always!
I'm so happy to see you back and uploading! I've missed you! Saving this story so I can listen tonight in the dark with no distractions. I hope you have recovered fully and have a fantastic day!🤗💜🕷
Ronnie my man, you've gone and done it again!
I absolutely love stories, and this here is one of the best ones ive heard, its filled with dread and despair in a very raw way.
Also, im really glad to see you've recovered from your ilness! Keep winning man
This one was scary. I've never really had to take care of anyone to this extent (thankfully), although when my parents are sick I'm obviously there to help, they're just pretty stubborn and my mom will take care of my dad and I, even if she has to CRAWL to do so lmao.
I definitely believe the grandmother died in that moment when death overtook her. The paralysis, the... copious... amount of feces (when you die, you body lets go of everything), the inability to eat or drink. I think her "getting better" was his mind breaking more, imagining her getting better. It's made pretty clear when the cops come and the narrator claims they've smelled that smell a lot, unfortunately cops deal with death a lot. It also explains her getting more unlike herself, and the increasing compliments towards the end.
Brilliant, as always, Somnium!
I really enjoyed this story. Thanks for picking this one. A good emotional and detailed description of the process of dying in this one. Also the denial Tommy is facing here is very human. Well written and of course can't go wrong with your narration. Great job!
I can't wait for you to hit 1M Dark. Truly phenomenal content. 10/10.
I really like the creepiness of the relationship these two had, I'm hoping to hear more of them. Very unsettling. Keep up the good work ❤
Hear more of them? Like before their end? Figure it'd just be more sad than creepy or horrifying.
I agree with your take on the story. I have been a geriatric, psych and wound nurse for 30 years and this story hits close to home. Something else I take from the story is how some children seem to stay in denial when their parents or grandparents are at the.end.of their lives. I have also seen children that have been manipulated by their parents into taking care of them when it is clear that a nursing home would be the best option. Then there are the parents that are dropped off at the facility and never have a visitor. I have to admit I started crying when she started giving him extra deserts and stopped reminding him to shower.
“Don’t let me be a bother” - the grandma who literally prevented anyone from loving him. Lol
Dude don’t apologize I am actually so happy you got a break you’ve been doing INSANE work and it’s always top quality too. You really are THE English reading UA-cam channel and I’m yet to find a Chanel that comes close to your quality. TAKE BREAKS!!
As for the story, I for some reason love the trope of someone dying and OP not acknowledging it to a point of becoming deluded, it’s scratches my brain. I think she definitely died during the night where she described being consumed by a void, the massive amount of feces (which usually happens shortly after death because of reflexes shutting off), the sudden change in tone, the lack of food or WATER and most importantly, this being the last moment in the story which we get from her POV are such big indicators.
I think it’s so interesting how seemingly the hallucination of his grandmother were harsh and cold in the beginning but increasingly overly sweet and ego stroking. I think the delusions came from a place of defence where his mind didn’t want to acknowledge she died and more so all alone when he promised to be by her side, and schizophrenic hallucinations were easier to process. That line about him seeing her corpse for a split second despite hearing her voice UGH that was SO good, I was sure that’d be his breaking point where he realizes what’s actually happening but it just kept going! I am kind of wondering about the description of death in this and if it’s real seeing as they both experienced it and in that case why death was after him.
Either way this was SUCH a good story and you guys killed it as always ❤️❤️❤️
Thank you for another phenomenal narration🥳🎉✌🏻I appreciate you!!
your stories are always so awesome! thank you!
I agree, I was thinking she died halfway through when death came down on her and he was so messed up mentally that he was taking care of her dead body as if she was alive. I kind of expected the police to discover her decomposing body after Tommy was shot but I guess the author wanted to leave us with our imagination to come up with our own ending. I really liked this one though! The style of the story was my favorite type. Easy to follow and understand unlike some where I’m totally confused about what is happening. Sorry you got sick man and I’m glad you are feeling better now!
This reminded me of Mariah on the moon, just more sad and depressing lol. I never really considered the idea that the grandma was dead but your theory makes a lot of sense and makes the story far more interesting. Great narration as always!
That last line gave me goosebumps! It was a very different setting from your usual narrations but man, was it still super immersive
This story is extremely interesting and well written. Easily on par with any famous writer I could name. That being said, I'm most troubled by how badly Tommy suffers when he hasn't done anything wrong... And of course, trying to decide when during the story his grandmother dies.
This one really hit home for me. My older sister and I stayed with our grandmother while she was on hospice care back in 2016. One of the hardest things ive ever had to do. And i dont know how my sister managed to do it cause that was only about 2 years after she had done the same thing for her mother in law. I cooked the last meal my grandmother ate before she passed. And some people might take comfort in that thought with their loved ones, for me I wish i couldve made her something special instead of hamburger helper.
I completely agree with your theory though. As soon as Jason came to their door and the story mentioned the horrible smell I was like yeah shes gotta be dead. I thought maybe she was dead the entire time at first but idk i think youre right about her dying part way through the story. Cause as the story progressed his grandmother would call him a “good boy” and give him more admiration. Which is the one thing that he seemingly thrived on.
Once i came to the conclusion that she was dead thats when the little “hitchcock” reference clicked for me.
Im still not sure when she died for sure but my guess is that she either died during the night when she woke up and Tommy wasnt there OR Tommy accidentally killed her when he fired his gun 3 times. Even if he didnt kill her at that point i believe she was definitely dead. Besides the fact that he shot his own foot i think when he went to change evelyn after he bandaged his foot up, he struggled so much because she was dead. He couldnt lift her out of the bed so easily because of her dead weight and/or possibly rigor-mortis may have already set in at that point which would make changing her/lifting her/etc. extremely tiring and difficult for anyone let alone someone with a bullet wound in their foot.
I think the night she woke up at midnight- because he couldn’t wake her up the following morning. Which would mean she died alone. The one thing neither of them wanted.
When he noticed she had more feces than usual to where it was leaking onto the floor, that was when she was dead.
@@youwatch2muchtv Yes- agree with that too. And the mentions of how nothing would ever make her smell better. I was wondering how she could be alive at that point.
Glad that all is well. And k loves this story. I also agreed with what you said at the end about the grandmother dying halfway through
I came to pretty much the same conclusion as you. Her subtle personality change, suddenly starting to get better, not really reacting that much to him wounding himself, and the horrible "familiar" stench tells me that the theory is true.
What an incredible story, and a beautiful adaption to boot. The descriptions in this were so vivid and real, as someone who took care of both my grandparents during their last days with dementia. Thank you for the work that you do, and we're all glad you've recovered
Wow what an narration and story. Caretaker stuff like this was a very interesting and unique perspective. Your take about the grandma dying half way through seems to ring true to me.
I’ve just finished listening to this and I felt like I was watching it also. What a masterpiece of work
Listened to this once it came out but needed to wrap my head around this sad sad story. I figured the grandma died when death first got her. When tommy was like moving her head she was basically dead but reanimated back to her “prime” meant it was just him imagining. But near the end when she suggested getting the nurse for a brief moment I thought it was the one who insist but he wasn’t. The moment the smell came I knew she was indeed dead and the ending.
This poor boy had nothing basically. The grandma intentionally kept him dependent because of her grief and he had no real life it was just waisted and squandered
Listening to this while sick thanks for your hard work it helps to block out the pain
I discovered your channel a month ago and I'm so happy I did! I'm addicted. Your narration and choice of stories are top notch. Thank you for your amazing work 🙏
Ronnie you have turned this great story into a masterpiece! Fantastic job. Both of you! I am guessing that the voice of grandma is ROM? Am I correct?😂❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Was starting to think this story wasn't going to get scary, but then you brought in the HOA and I jumped out of my skin
Yeah those HOAs are scary!
Im loving it as usual and its great you are making use to Rom and Spirit voices and I'm thrilled Rom starting putting put new content on Her on channel too im a huge fan I Love Spirit too id love to see Her channel pick up again too I have yet to listen in full to the last two hour video with the huge cast ill be doing that next hopefully. This is an amazing channel as i always say.
The grind continues! Gotta feel good to be able to finally get a narration out! (I'll be listening and relaxing, I took a day off today for birthday reasons 😂)
oooo happy birthday!
Yoooo🎉🎉🎉🎉 Happy birthday 🥳
🎉🎉 thanks Ronnie! Omg shout-out when 😂😂😂
@@veggiechipthanks veggie! Birthdays in a foreign country can be lonely sometimes 😂 I appreciate it!!
Happy birthday!
Been listening for years now, just wanted to say thank you for doing what you do. I’ve especially been liking the ones where you incorporate other creepy pasta UA-camrs as characters. It helps to differentiate the characters and keep track of the plot. Keep up the good work and remember that you are deeply appreciated.
Okay, this is a really interesting way of telling a story. Like with the narrator being literally all knowing. I like it 👌🏼
OMG! Felt like this one lasted literally 5 minutes! Never been so drawn into a story where I felt like I was living there w them and could even smell the decay 🥰🥰🥰 GOD has certainly given u a talent.
thank you, glad you liked it!
Hey Ronnie, it’s good to see that you’re feeling better ❤… thanks for the story 😊
I think this is one of the best short stories I’ve ever read. This transcends creepy pastas
Great story and relatable. Took care of mom for a while until Dementia made it impossible. I will miss your stories since I am quite lonely of late. The emotion and visionary storytelling always grips me in ways that keep me glued to your voice. Thank you.
Yup, when he changed her diaper the first time, that's when you know she died. You could tell that wasn't just an accident. Great but sad story. 👍
glad you enjoyed it!
Good to have you back 😊 I agree with your theory. I love stories that doesn't tell you upright what is going on!
Totally agree with your thoughts on the story at the end, explains it all. Glad your feelin better !😊
I was hoping for his thoughts to confirm this as well 👍
Great to have you back! Keep up the great work ✨
And I have said it before but my god the voice, the stories, and vibe, everything is on point.
Hope you’re feeling better man. Your stories are a pleasure to listen to. I really enjoyed the recent swat officer one as it had me on the edge of my seat the entire time. Keep up the good work man i cant wait to listen to this.
i am! thank you :) glad you enjoyed it!
Incredible narration, Incredible story, hope you had a good weekend and I hope you get better soon!
My goodness i just found you.. I normally listen to Lighthouse and Mr.CreepyPasta I'm so glad i found another great narrator to keep my mind occupied while im at work. Love the content
im so glad you're enjoying the channel!
@@Darksomnium I really love the swat officer story that you just did! I think I'm going to listen to every story you have until I'm caught up!
Glad you're feeling better! There are no other substitutes for your narrations. I've been listening for 5 years now. I started with "The Part of the Deep Web We Aren't Supposed To See". I knew nothing about CreepyPastas or Reddit Nosleep back then. I was actually trying to research the deep web and one of the search results was that story. I have been hooked ever since. You have an outstanding talent for storytelling. I hope your health continues to improve and thank you for all that you do! -Mark
hell yeaaaaaaah you back my guy, it's been a while, glad to see you back and on the grind...... bless us with them amazing narrations man..... you the goat
tyty :)
Your sound design is always supreme 🎉🎉🎉 love your work!
This such an awesomely written, narrated story that swept me away with its deoth and descriotion. My own mother refuses to accept she has dementia and the court process was awful in both its duration and required paperwork. It was a very trying time for all involved, in reality it will continue until my mum passes which is a pretty horrific thing to wait for a situation to be over She had an awful childhood, lost her husband, my Dad, and her daughter in a car accident that very nearly took her own life. Just when she should have been able to enjoy the rest of her life dementia came and stole that from her too. My mum is the strongest person i have ever known and to see her slowly stolen from the world ,day by day is heartbreaking. Her brief periods of lucidity which come less and less are the most awful things to experience. Seeing understanding light up in her eyes and the realization that she is legalky detained in a medical facility is heartbreaking in a manner i cannot explain . Sorry for blabbing all that out but sometimes ive just got to vent. Cheers.Lee.
The fact your stories and your channel are still alfoat is just fking great. Like i havent watched in such a long time (life started getting negative and these videos started giivng me nightmares lmaoo). Now im good and i just miss the vibes of ur stories and the vibes you create. Its feels like your watching a movie. Like i actually watched a 10/10 movie then i remember its all in my head.
Hey Ronnie, hope your feeling better man. Thanks for the hour long story drop. Prefect timing to. I'll leave my review attached to this comment once the story is over. Have a good one
i am! thank you so much :) im excited to see what you think!
I agree with Dark Somnium's opinion of the story. Tommy snapped. His grandmother's fear was correct. He couldn't handle being on his own.
Yep. Add to the fact that she intentionally screwed him up throughout his childhood to make sure he'd never leave her, it becomes beyond tragic.
I got the feeling it was Tommy’s time throughout the story and I like how it built up until that moment. Wonderful narrations from you all as always! 😁
Ya know, I thought the ending was gonna be something like "cops come back with the warrant, enter the house to find gammy actually already been dead for some time and tommy was in denial and imagining everything with her"
Your back! Congrats!
yep! more videos on the way!
Glad you're feeling better dude!
I appreciate it!
Congrats on the recovery:) thanks for blessing us with another story
This brought so many flashbacks to me. I was the main caretaker for my great grandma, my parents and grandma doing their share when they could.
The author really perfectly pictured the struggles we went through. The changing, the routines, the struggle to keep our loved one clean, the fear of watching them slowly decline and revert to what I can only equal to a talking infant. Only able to talk and maybe move their hands somewhat but rather helpless in any other aspect.
And the codependency between the two... It's something I've witnessed so many times...