"Forgotten Valentine" Creepypasta│By Michael Whitehouse

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  • @CreepyPastaJr
    @CreepyPastaJr  8 років тому +99

    HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY! Thank you all so much for watching and I love you all! :D

    • @haydenettner328
      @haydenettner328 8 років тому

      CreepyPastaJr luv you my meme jesus

    • @antoniothekid2g821
      @antoniothekid2g821 8 років тому

      CreepyPastaJr bet it u won't pin this

    • @wolfpranks1019
      @wolfpranks1019 8 років тому

      CreepyPastaJr are these story's real?

    • @cadillacdeville5828
      @cadillacdeville5828 8 років тому +1

      CreepyPastaJr Awesome and we love you. Happy Valentine's Day.

    • @cadillacdeville5828
      @cadillacdeville5828 8 років тому +4

      WolfPranks 101 It'll say if they are, but his are usually fictional.

  • @awesomemantm2000
    @awesomemantm2000 8 років тому +66

    this was beautiful. the ending just gave me a really warm fuzzy feeling.

  • @Ichigo5477_
    @Ichigo5477_ 8 років тому +13

    Wow, that ending was more like a Feelspasta. An incredible story!

  • @alexharrison153
    @alexharrison153 8 років тому +29

    Y'all done got me with the feels up in here!

  • @champyheteromer9946
    @champyheteromer9946 8 років тому +21

    omg that ending is beautiful

  • @Suguri
    @Suguri 8 років тому +33

    Word of warning, chill'uns: People who fancy themselves too logical for emotion make for lousy partners. Empathy is indeed a cool and intelligent thing to have.

    • @Suguri
      @Suguri 3 роки тому

      @Radical Thunder no u

    • @ravenaussie3760
      @ravenaussie3760 2 роки тому

      @@Suguri Greetings.

    • @equinoxGU
      @equinoxGU Рік тому +2

      I agree with this

    • @queeng5925
      @queeng5925 5 місяців тому +1

      no shit.... i dont have emotion n i dont WANT any partner .... i have my furbabies n thats all i need xxx

  • @jayb530
    @jayb530 8 років тому +46

    35 min creepypast. Let me go get me some snacks.

  • @dreamerjen69
    @dreamerjen69 8 років тому +44

    I'm not crying, you're crying. *Sigh.*

  • @Corrector1
    @Corrector1 8 років тому +14

    I think I may have heard this one before. I like the route he took with this one. It's nice to have a story about a character confronting and overcoming their trauma.

    • @lazyanon8267
      @lazyanon8267 8 років тому +1

      you might have heard mrcreepypasta (i think it was him) read this a few years back.

    • @Corrector1
      @Corrector1 8 років тому +1

      Probably. It didn't seem familiar to me until I got near the end, since I had a vague recollection of a story that ended this way.

  • @TheBiggerGG
    @TheBiggerGG 8 років тому +4

    The part with the dad was pretty creepy but the saddness yet hint of happiness at the end really overpowers it, in the end it made me feel more hopeful then scared.

  • @ShigaDabii
    @ShigaDabii 8 років тому +92

    "here lies the author's hopes and dreams"
    what a baby

  • @DragonK8
    @DragonK8 8 років тому +23

    damn onion cutting ninjas!

  • @alneurigel
    @alneurigel 8 років тому +6

    Story about a Lisa, with Silent Hill's "Not Tomorrow(Lisa's Death)" as the background music at the end.. Beautiful.

  • @connorperry7067
    @connorperry7067 7 років тому +5

    This story, especially around the 26:00 area and beyond, is so depressing. It made me feel sad.

  • @steak9561
    @steak9561 8 років тому +3

    i came for spooks.
    i was not prepared for such feels man.
    mah heart..

  • @smiler2309
    @smiler2309 8 років тому +3

    wow... This was not a creepypasta...This was a...Heart breaking story. I love it! Plz make more amazing storys put on some more scary ones

  • @TheAlystraStardust
    @TheAlystraStardust 8 років тому +2

    That ending was beautiful, I really thought I was going to cry.

  • @ajkpolaris28
    @ajkpolaris28 8 років тому +3

    Hey man I just discovered your channel, and in my opinion your the best creepy pasta reader on youtube hands down, I wish you did as much as the other big ones, but your quality is at least 4 notches above the rest, and I subscribed immediately.

  • @jcmcgee2169
    @jcmcgee2169 8 років тому +15

    You and CreepsMcPasta have like the exact same photo for your Valentine's Day vid

  • @ainsleigh351
    @ainsleigh351 8 років тому +7

    Sees 35min video...k Lemmie get my whole pantry over here

  • @cadillacdeville5828
    @cadillacdeville5828 8 років тому +26

    I clicked on this so damn fast when I got the notification ....how about you?

  • @thedarklorddarthabyss859
    @thedarklorddarthabyss859 7 років тому +1

    Wtf man I came here to be scared not to have my heart shattered into a million pieces.

  • @hollyatherton3165
    @hollyatherton3165 6 років тому

    Whoa! If that didn't give you chills... Great story Micheal! And great narration CreepyPastaJr.!

  • @Phillipzu
    @Phillipzu 8 років тому +4

    YOU'RE TEARING ME APART, LISA!!

    • @ProfessorHubertFarnsworth
      @ProfessorHubertFarnsworth 6 років тому +1

      Johnny: Hi
      Florist: Can I help you?
      Johnny: Can I have a dozen red roses please
      Florist: Oh, hi Johnny I didn't know that was you.
      (Florist hands Johnny roses)
      Florist: Here you go.
      Johnny: That's me, how much is it?
      Florist: It'll be $18.
      (Johnny hands florist money)
      Johnny: Here you go, keep the change.
      (Johnny sees a pug sitting on the counter, begins to pet it)
      Johnny: Hi, doggy.
      (As Johnny leaves the florist)
      Florist: You're my favorite customer
      And..........................................................
      SCENE!!!

  • @Kainlarsen
    @Kainlarsen 8 років тому +2

    You could trap insects in that sap.

  • @energygap6442
    @energygap6442 5 років тому +2

    4:48
    I'm sorry but,
    inhales
    PARDON ME, ARE YOU AARON BURR, SIR?!

    • @lyricraine2246
      @lyricraine2246 5 років тому

      Gianna Beatriz i was searching for this comment so long 😭❤️

  • @mendimorton2515
    @mendimorton2515 8 років тому +11

    Welp... Loneliness, depression, guilt and all those feelings can do this to ya. Hopefully there's medication for that. :)

  • @kennethsuggs4259
    @kennethsuggs4259 8 років тому

    This was beautiful, the most heartwarming one I've ever seen.

  • @justturner9702
    @justturner9702 6 років тому +1

    I came across this a few days to Valentine
    You're just the best❤

  • @laurasohn8332
    @laurasohn8332 8 років тому +5

    Come up to meet you, tell you I'm sorry
    You don't know how lovely you are
    I had to find you
    Tell you I need you
    Tell you I set you apart
    Tell me your secrets
    And ask me your questions
    Oh, let's go back to the start
    Running in circles
    Coming up tails
    Heads on a science apart
    Nobody said it was easy
    It's such a shame for us to part
    Nobody said it was easy
    No one ever said it would be this hard
    Oh, take me back to the start
    I was just guessing
    At numbers and figures
    Pulling the puzzles apart
    Questions of science
    Science and progress
    Do not speak as loud as my heart
    Tell me you love me
    Come back and haunt me
    Oh, and I rush to the start
    Running in circles
    Chasing our tails
    Coming back as we are
    Nobody said it was easy
    Oh, it's such a shame for us to part
    Nobody said…

  • @angeldollyie
    @angeldollyie 7 років тому +1

    that ending was fucking adorable oh my fucking god i love it

  • @DrJackyll
    @DrJackyll 8 років тому

    Such an amazing story, great job!

  • @adamsiveri7353
    @adamsiveri7353 8 років тому +1

    That was amazing

  • @WayaZarus216
    @WayaZarus216 8 років тому +2

    happy valentines day

  • @futabanarugonzalez3399
    @futabanarugonzalez3399 8 років тому

    Happy Valentine's Day

  • @CWorld383
    @CWorld383 8 років тому +1

    that was actually more sad than scary it was really good!

  • @Lovuschka
    @Lovuschka 6 років тому +1

    That's the kind of story that punches you in the stomach.

  • @paperslayer5888
    @paperslayer5888 8 років тому

    it was no doubt a. completely awesm story

  • @Polaris-sama
    @Polaris-sama 8 років тому

    Really beautiful. All there is to say

  • @CrystalNibarger
    @CrystalNibarger 8 років тому

    very touching story.....so sad too

  • @laurahenriksen19
    @laurahenriksen19 7 років тому

    Wow. I never expected the story to go that way. It was beautiful. Well done everyone involved. Heartbreaking :)

  • @GiveMeGhosts
    @GiveMeGhosts 7 років тому +1

    So sweet.

  • @gageman5703
    @gageman5703 6 років тому +1

    I once had a dream that a girl I loved died and I felt horribly sad Dread it felt so real I felt like she was not there anymore I had so many feelings that I can't describe I felt like crying this reminded me of that dream but this story was a Hart warming story

  • @bluewolfminecraftandmore7449
    @bluewolfminecraftandmore7449 8 років тому

    Why am i watching this at night huh?? No sleep

  • @wrongsalvation8904
    @wrongsalvation8904 8 років тому

    I ain't going to like that did choked me up a little bit.

  • @sharkquesha746
    @sharkquesha746 8 років тому

    BEST STORY EVER

  • @carriecollins2782
    @carriecollins2782 4 роки тому

    So beautiful! My favorite this far!

  • @ender61377
    @ender61377 8 років тому

    That was so good

  • @azidoe
    @azidoe 8 років тому

    When the unexpected feelspasta hits you

  • @lenacoronado2172
    @lenacoronado2172 7 років тому

    That was so beautiful...and now I’m crying, er, sweating out of my eyes😭😭

  • @tippyburrito7578
    @tippyburrito7578 4 роки тому +1

    I almost cried from hearing this

  • @driftmaster1628
    @driftmaster1628 8 років тому

    incredible

  • @reinhard4348
    @reinhard4348 8 років тому +1

    So beautiful

  • @garythesnake667
    @garythesnake667 4 роки тому

    This always makes me cry

  • @bwy553
    @bwy553 5 років тому

    Ah. A story that scared me and made me happy cry.

  • @aurobhatta
    @aurobhatta 6 років тому

    Beautiful story

  • @blackrosebud136
    @blackrosebud136 8 років тому +1

    I love this story

  • @theopaul931
    @theopaul931 6 років тому

    This was sad and beautiful

  • @tammysublett4432
    @tammysublett4432 8 років тому

    Love your creepy stories.

  • @TheRiot406
    @TheRiot406 6 років тому

    That one was a bit of a punch in the feels

  • @La-Toya0488
    @La-Toya0488 6 років тому

    Beautiful story 👏🏿

  • @darklawtivity6831
    @darklawtivity6831 7 років тому

    This story is so depressing that after hours of listening to it I feel sad still thinking about it. Its so bad you should probably have a depression warning at the start like other youtubers do with some of their videos.

  • @Izzyspeeds
    @Izzyspeeds 7 років тому +1

    This is by far the most beautiful story I have ever heard

  • @Lectureinfernale
    @Lectureinfernale 7 років тому

    I came here seeking fear now im just crying.....

  • @cultureandhistorynerd6739
    @cultureandhistorynerd6739 7 років тому +1

    Christ, I think I'm crying... DAMN THIS. *cries*

  • @Pinklola911
    @Pinklola911 6 років тому

    Though this is a Creepypasta this should be considered a FeelsPasta bc MY HEART 💔

  • @elijahdewar1584
    @elijahdewar1584 4 роки тому

    god this one got me in my feels

  • @Khachidze01
    @Khachidze01 8 років тому

    the feels...

  • @naomivega4439
    @naomivega4439 4 роки тому

    this was beautiful ;)

  • @massiveidiot77
    @massiveidiot77 8 років тому

    Man I was hoping for a plot twist that changed everything at the end

  • @simiaki12
    @simiaki12 6 років тому +1

    r/wholesomehaunting

  • @lean2357
    @lean2357 7 років тому

    This makes me feel even more depressed......................

  • @rjgr01
    @rjgr01 6 років тому

    Best non horror story of your channel💔💔

  • @hashmakesvideos200
    @hashmakesvideos200 7 років тому +1

    all of this explains me

  • @telepathy.294
    @telepathy.294 8 років тому +2

    I am not sweating I just washed my face or did I AHHhH mama helppppp I am sccaredddddddd

  • @alexross1622
    @alexross1622 6 років тому +1

    This was so sad 😔

  • @sexygrandmadarkness8485
    @sexygrandmadarkness8485 8 років тому +8

    hey creepy I enjoyed listening to this story bravo more yes more video was cool and let's not forget about that voice slurry smooth and twistly sweet oh yeah baby much love Karen 😓😰😨😵😉😘😳❤😳❤❤❤❤❤

  • @kanna-san.
    @kanna-san. 8 років тому +2

    RIGHT IN THE FUCKING HEART

  • @Corrupthero
    @Corrupthero 8 років тому +1

    I wish there was a yandere one on Table for One day.

  • @206_tonks5
    @206_tonks5 8 років тому +25

    NOTIFICATION SQUAD WHERE YOU AT IF YOU THERE CASH ME OUTSIDE

    • @harleydavidson4063
      @harleydavidson4063 8 років тому

      the Singing/Vlogs Warrior how bow no

    • @tammysublett4432
      @tammysublett4432 8 років тому

      the Singing/Vlogs Warrior lol

    • @shadowxmc7454
      @shadowxmc7454 8 років тому

      the Singing/Vlogs Warrior you cash me outside

    • @wolfpranks1019
      @wolfpranks1019 8 років тому

      the Singing/Vlogs Warrior AYYYE

    • @cadillacdeville5828
      @cadillacdeville5828 8 років тому +2

      the Singing/Vlogs Warrior lmao....that damn tagline from that girl off of Dr. Phil.

  • @User_1767
    @User_1767 8 років тому +3

    But what was in the card?
    What if he caused the deaths?

  • @milkTVtube
    @milkTVtube 7 років тому +1

    Wonderful video! I subscribed to your channel! Like!

  • @tannerbruning868
    @tannerbruning868 8 років тому +1

    3:30 More colder

  • @Mycupofjoe91
    @Mycupofjoe91 7 років тому +1

    bravo bravo 👏👏👏

  • @colinlaau9706
    @colinlaau9706 5 років тому

    This is sad. I knoe this has actually happened to many ppl. Love is beautiful but , also tragic

  • @laurahenriksen19
    @laurahenriksen19 7 років тому

    Haha ahhh Michael... I should have known. Well that answers why this is so damn good then...

  • @CalsGirl97
    @CalsGirl97 8 років тому +1

    dude that ending ;-;

  • @hi-t6635
    @hi-t6635 8 років тому

    do more videos please

  • @FuzzyPuppetFactory
    @FuzzyPuppetFactory 2 роки тому +1

    Unnecessary monster scene that has nothing to do with plot.
    Plot that is otherwise unexciting
    Shallow narrator character written by someone with no life experiences
    Hits all the checkboxes of a mediocre creepypasta. This one stands out in that it wastes 35 minutes of your time instead of 10, and at some points has you thinking the story will actually be good. It never gets there.

  • @ArbitraryGravity
    @ArbitraryGravity 8 років тому

    Fuck me that was beautiful. Was not expecting that from a creepypasta

  • @ColorfullCute
    @ColorfullCute 8 років тому +4

    same icon as the mr creepypasta lol

  • @pupu8119
    @pupu8119 8 років тому +1

    This is damn so scaryyyy...!!!

  • @onii_2350
    @onii_2350 6 років тому

    I thought this took place around valentines day but he mentions January air even the valentines day is in February

  • @SpecialFX83
    @SpecialFX83 8 років тому

    sad story...

  • @hiidenkiuas
    @hiidenkiuas Рік тому +1

    The protagonist is extremely cringy

  • @Tetherit
    @Tetherit 8 років тому

    More sleep medicine please!

  • @wizzlibizzli
    @wizzlibizzli 8 років тому

    So sad...

  • @tricolourbearer2435
    @tricolourbearer2435 6 років тому

    Poor guy.

  • @kittykatsparrow9272
    @kittykatsparrow9272 8 років тому +2

    THIS IS A GOD DAMN FEELSPASTA 😭 not creepypasta...

  • @petschproductions9418
    @petschproductions9418 3 місяці тому

    What's the sad music playing in the background?