"The Sealed Building" by Michael Whitehouse
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- Опубліковано 10 лют 2025
- Apologies for not uploading as much, I am currently traveling so my narrations are slightly limited. However I managed another Michael Whitehouse original. He is truly a gifted author.
Anyways I hope you enjoy! I know I did! :3
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I'm probably just the only one but does anyone else get uneasy whenever there's extra time at the end of the video after the story has finished? Like it's going to be one of those joke videos you see where they have you lured into focusing before some scary picture shows up on the screen accompanied by loud screaming.
Amen brother
Amen
They're called "screamers". Fortunately, there are ways to avoid them. The number of dislikes will be higher than the likes and you can pause to read the comments. If comments and rating are disabled but I'm not sure, I add the video to "watch later" and play it while I'm doing something away from the computer (cleaning or something) because it's a little easier to handle if it's just a sudden noise and you're not directly looking at the screen.
I like hoovering my mouse over the entire video time so than you can tell if there is a physical screamer because you will see it in the preview thing
IRBFGW I've started to do that :) thanks for the tip
yes,but don't you feel that you must watch till it ends? If not...who has?
So, a girl dies and they shut the whole restroom off? That seems impractical, at my middle school, a long time ago when it was still the high school, a janitor fell from the catwalk above the auditorium stage. It was during spring break so no one found the body until the next week. They still use the catwalk, but no one wants to go up there alone. It creeps people out, and sometimes the lights flash, but they still use it. Hardcore!
Giovanni Lindsay Yep, the body was decomposing something awful. It was found by teachers, last I heard of it.
Really? That's just creepy. I think I would have just refused to go in there again after knowing something like that happened. o.o What school was that? Are there any news articles or anything?
secretagentcandy Lol. Funny thing (okay not so funny) the park Schools & Park District where I lived when I was younger, all had tragic events attached to them in some way.
I only know most things that happened in the town because the it was being built up when my Grandparents bought their house. Also when both my mom & her brother went off to school, so di my Grandmother. For the 1st couple years my Grams stayed home well my Gramps went to work, as it mostly was.
The town had enough Children in 3 K-8 schools, they decided it was time for a High school, Grams got a job in the Principals office of. As it was the perfect times for her to work.
Over the years I've seen things torn down, & new built. My Grandparents saw open land in some of these places!
Many closed of Park equipment that once had mouse holes, pathways now sealed. All things are new now, but even as I waa growing up, horrible things happened on outdated equipment in the park & schools.
A kid got hurt, disappeared, other issues. Things were closed off, taken off or removed after.
1 happened to me, my lip was ripped open on a teeter totter. Story is longer than this.
The actual teeter totter were removed tge bar that they teetered over mocked me the whole time I went there.
A year prior I'd seen a lid get his foot caught in the rubber mat under a merry go round, I was younger so I'd say his knee was fine, could have been harmed in the injury, though his lower leg the bone had broke & was sticking out of his skin!
That ride was gone except for the mat that had caught his leg.
A coach left the school long after everyone had left, it was still threatening to storm in the area. He was struck by lightning and passed away while heading to his car. They didn't find him until the next day or following.
Ye but its just a story it dont mean to be realistic
It astounds me hearing your voice from 2013 and 2019. I did not realize how long you’ve been sharing scary tales, but thank you all the same.
When I was little I found that I could easily climb up many things, tree's, cabinets, basket ball hoops, sheds, playground equipment, small buildings, cars, you name it; I LOVED (and still love) to climb up things.
the only problem I have is getting back down....
I'm in that club bro
I can climb down stuff but I fall going up.
Me too LOL
Same
I used to be terrified of heights as a kid, but only if i was on a tall building, but not anywhere else. I spent half my summer up in apple trees without any problems but i was afraid of going out on balconies or on roofs (I grew up on construction sites since most of my family are in construction). Oddly enough I got over my fear of heights after falling off a 15 foot high "cliff" and broke my ankle.
Thanks again CPJR. I love that you did this one as it's more of an older style of ghost story than some of my others. I remember the school well, the sealed building, and trying to climb it. In reality when I looked inside I only saw a light come on, but the fact that no one could be in there scared me enough, and still plays on my mind. As always you did a fantastic job, and I'm really lucky that you've taken the time to do these :)
A lot of people are saying that this story was terrible but I thought it was pretty good. Well spoken and far more interesting than some of the other short, scary stories I've heard.
Bruh this 30 minutes long u call this short
A few years before I had entered high school there was a murder that took place under the bleachers next to the football field. A few kids got in a argument and one pulled out a knife. Of course it was during a game so nobody could hear as the kid screamed in pain. Afterward he was found and so was his killer. He got charged with murder with an illegal weapon, as he was using a switchblade, which is illegal here in Arizona. As far as I know the guy still rots in jail.
Yup.
i like that, you can get an arsenal of guns and it's ok but if you buy a knife you're taking the piss, the us government is backwards on that
waretiger I think they have since made switchblades legal, along with gravity knives.
DAMN! That's freaky!
"Strangely shaped wood"
-I think you need to see a doctor.
Janine Hosë XD
+Janine Hosë XD XD XDX XD XD XD XDX XDX
I had a friend growing up who's penis bent at almost a 45 degree angle :P
Everyone has their own cup-o-tea ;3
Are you ever coming back??
Oh man, I just realized this was the same Mike W, that wrote the Bedtime series. Christ, I've read and listened to a lot of these creepypastas and I admit its greatly desensitized me. It's hard for these stories to really get under my skin anymore. But between 'The Sealed Building' and the Bedtime series... I haven't been genuinely unnerved in a long time. What a fantastic writer. That isn't to say that you don't do his writing plenty of justice, though, CPJ :)
mister mcay?
mister mackey hmkay
Right when it gets scary....
🕐 Buffering Buffering
🕣Buffering Buffering
That's the scariest part. ;w;
funny, my youtube never did this to me, not even 4 years ago.... i think my internet was always too good LOL
Phone... 4G. Almost never have this problem, but that would SUCK!
Aaaaaaand.... this was 4 years ago so I'm a dummy, and forgetting that not ALL places had 4G yet.
Better than the ads that ppopup, more points for ads covering events from last year like the music choice awards for 2020 (im somehow still getting these)
I don't have a fear of heights, or even falling. But impact? Sure, I'll shit myself over that
Mr. Mmkay Kids Now Drugs Are Bad Mmkay
I wonder how much time it would've shaved off if the lad hadn't been flaunting his vocabulary.
It would have taken thank you time, apparently
10-15 minutes probably
Marcus Dranz 15 minutes
Your readings of these stories, are very well. Unlike mr creepypasta and creepsmcpasta you actually make the story feel like a mystery
This gave me loose stool.
Bahahaha... loose stool. I SHAT!
Freaky things happen here in Arizona>.< I have endless creepy stories that happened in Arizona it's crazy.
Please tell.. if you do Your awesome ;) wait... u allready are lols
A lot of things go down in Arizona ... a lot of things.
Ohio is that way too!
Ah, do tell
This guy Mike W. is a great writer. I always really enjoy hearing you read his stories.
Lol the school principle was named Mr Mkay.Lol the author is one clever son of a bitch.
Good story 9/10
in other words this story was m'kay?
ThAt-NeOn-BaWs
Have you seen the tv show "south park"?
Well if not the school counselor's name in that show is Mr Mackey he is against smoking,and his favorite term to say is "mkay".
Well anyways since this creepy pasta involved smoking in it and not only that but also a principle that is named Mr Mkay just reminds me of south park for some reason.
ah yeah i watch it all the time, an yes it was a mr.mackey pun.
+SnapLock XD Your avatar picture is awesome!!!!
Jake Sanderson Thanks Jake XD
He saw that it was moaning Myrtle haunting in that bathroom. Lol!
Ah, reminds me of Myrtle, that ghost girl from Harry Potter. But yeh the story was too long but the ending was pretty cool.
MYRTLE
shadow XIII You mean in the Potter Universe? Well, J.K. Rowling's perspective on the afterlife is not really described, since she focuses more on Classical literature in the myths and spells used in her books. ('Remus' Lupin,Centaurs, Fenrir, the spells being in Latin,etc). If you want to know about what her personal ideas are, read the final book, near the end, and you'll get some sense about it.
Not all movies with ghosts need to talk about traditional ideas of the afterlife, or heaven. Not everyone believes in a soul, after all. Though I think J.K Rowling is a Christian. :3
***** I loved that part in the final book! It was done in such an amazing and respecting manner, hard for anyone, either religious or otherwise, not to love it
solidsnakegirl Definitely! :3
THIS one got me. I thought I had become immune to creepy pastas but no, this was the pasta to prove that wrong. I went from listening and drawing on my tablet to setting the stylus down and gripping my earbuds in case I had to rip them from my ears in shock/terror.
And that choking noise.
Damn.
Someone took a dump soo bad that the smell turned into a ghost.
jurpker It was legendary💩!!
Another great story by Mike W... and of course amazing narration man, good job!!
The only scary thing that has ever happened in my life is just sitting down at 1 in the morning playing Xbox, when suddenly, the door to the laundry room opens. It was closed. Yeah, it creeped me out.
do you have xbox ive
Creepiest thing that ever happened to me Was me playing on my computer at 2 in the morning and the front door Flung open and a ton of leaves blew straight in
Ricky TheNoob That coulve been strong wind.
Jared Page Thats what i thought to
lol
Omg I love Mike's stories! So glad he has more
This one. Omg. I was on the edge of my seat, feeling overheated and on the verge of sweating from suspense. Well told, well told.
Damn this came out when I was 18/19 now I’m almost 30
Lot's of schools have buildings like this off to the side, they are bathrooms for public use during little league events where the school has to stay locked.
this is the most longwinded thing ive ever suffered through JUST CLIMB THE DANG ROOF ALREADY i cant even bother to wait for the spooks
wow this sounds like my old school
this is one of the stories that gave me chills and tears streaming down my face I was so scared bravo. its the subtlety that's scary.
I am terrified of heights and can't even go on to my house roof but plan on going bungee jumping, sky diving, etc. to face my fears.
I was deathly afraid of deep water for years. 2nd year of college I took a SCUBA class and got my certification 40ft deep in the Pacific Ocean. Now it doesn't bother me so much. Exposure therapy works.
my worst fear is dying of lack of oxygen so I usually panic when diving straight down into a deep pool or into the ocean.
................."smoking in the boys room"
Hi Nik. I can understand what you're saying. It's an old story but some seem to love it, others feel that there should be a more frightening payoff. In my defence I would say that the story is more about the memories of my old school as a child, rather than an overt scare. Some of my stories are about explicit shocks, but here it's more about that feeling of being a kid in school and trying to fit in. The ghost story element is secondary, more of a light chill than an arctic blast.
As I get older, I find it’s the more realistic things that give me the creeps.
The whole time I thought he was going to fall throught the roof!
No... Mike W. is "GhastlyTales" aka Author of Bedtime. I am CreepyPastaJr. who just so happens to really enjoy Mike W.'s stories. :3
Dude I'm SO scared of heights. That couldn't have been me. Lol that was the scariest part of the story!! But this was a good story!! I liked the suspense.
Kinda wishing I could get that half hour back
You clicked the video your fault for not just closing it and doing something else nobody forced you to watch the fully out
🕋
''some privacy please?''
sounds like an English school, I went to a school with this exact description.
i love this story I couldn't remember the name for the longest time
Thank you,You don't know how happy I was to see you uploaded you made my day from shitty to amazing.
Holy shit. 4 AM here, and at about 4:49 in the story, where he says "His ghost obviously still haunts the place", the word obviously was cut out for me, and a white fade took the screen. I replayed it but it didn't happen. Scary as hell.
Mike W. always scares the crap out of me
I love Whitehouse’ work. Superb.
Holy crap, this pasta is ridiculous. It's just like someone's real experience coupled with some personal phobias, my god this pasta is wonderful
I like the longer stories bc I like to listen to them when im beading late at night ;) when tv isn't great lol
We just get most of our music from Myuuji, he's pretty much the sound of CreepyPasta, yet its the narrators discretion on which tracks should be used and where they should go in the story. I'm a Resident Evil fan, though not a big gamer, and I think the others are more of Silent Hill fans.
As a solution, my mom wouldve told me to pray and/or leave a candle or flowers so tht the spirit can finally go in peace.
I love all your creepy pasta storys
This had absolutely no reason to be so long
Yeah fuck narrative. I'm going to re-write this story with out all that length. Ready?
It was a ghost.
Are you scares yet?
ReikaHisui Much more effective.
That's over 30 minutes you just saved me. thanks.
ReikaHisui Jokes on you. I didn't want to sleep tonight anyway...
Jo Petrucelli The implication is supposed to be that it wasn't.
I'm using my tablet with my earbuds in and your comment makes me scarred to finish this pasta.
A screamer and a flash of a dead girl at the end would of spiced it up a bit!
I don't think it's a good idea ,listening to this at 12;10AM
So im not the only one that did that
Worse when your dogs clawing at the door
At 1:00 AM
lol
Rat Concepts lol'd
Keiran Gammon ahhh creepy
Mike W. never disappoints
the choking sounds are hilarious lmao
The end was nerve chilling
It would be nice if there was some gameplay in the background so I could listen and watch
I've been working on a story since FOREVER, because every time I think it could be half as good as Mike W. I HEAR THIS!!!! And in CPJ's silky smooth voice of all things! D:<
You make it hard for a girl to keep up Mike, you really do... big fan...hate you, but big fan. lol
I love listening to these while I'm going to sleep. I can close my eyes and just listen and drift. Thanks creepy!
cigarettes are bad m'kay
I hate cigs too but why point it out ? Lol
***** You obviously missed the joke
m'kay
:o You're back!! :3
A pop up at the end would've been awesome!
For some reason mike w makes the best creepy pastas especially his series bedtime
Wow, you were a smarter 8 year old then I was, if someone had told me all those stories when i was 8 it would have scared the crap outta me.
I was afraid of heights. So, I sky dived. My fear is gone
I wasn't paying attention to the entire story, but I thought you would heavily imply that maybe the headmaster had something to do with the death of that young girl.
this was truly chilling
"When I was a child, the school which I......................................................................................................................................................................................When I was a child..."
My father.....
Creepy ambience is awesome
4th story in a row from the creepypasta app on my phone... just be a really really good app! :) I DO love Michael Whitehouse stories!
Though I REALLY do wish you'd narrate the other parts to "bedtime", since the are 5 (I think). At least 4 parts for sure.
My old Elementary school Summer Grove had an Old pointless building in the back of the playground where it met the fence that separated the field and the ground. I think it was originally painted blue but I can't remember. No one ever talked about it, it never came up in conversations. It was boarded up and overgrown with tall weeds. Quite unimpressive but something always struck me as weird and out of kilter about it.
Such a good story and video. But quite the old one also. Not all good things, are new. Some of the best things, are old.
GOOD STORYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
Behind me is a wall and the rest of my room is in peripheral vision, so I don't even have to look up, I see it all!
fighting with people you hate is something I admire in people. expressing your hatred is most important to those on the edge and questioning their sanity. To others they despise this but...the world is consumed by hatred so why not? the world is corrupted by many which are still guilty but cruelty serves justice in it's own way. human intake on it's history supports me.
thanks for the heads up :I
*turns down volume and backs chair up slightly*
That was a good one.
i was really exspecinting a popup in that vid lol good job! for me didnt really get scary till near the end, thought it was a little long.
Man don't you just love creepypastas
Sorry...had to scrub through it. I'm just not going to stare at a line of old restroom sinks and floor for thirty-one minutes.
*turns the lights back off*
NOW YOU'RE READY!
So the thing that exited the stall door was the undead zombie of the bullied girl?
Awesome story! I really enjoyed it! ;D
This one of my absolute favorite! :)
This sorta reminds me of a dream I have occasionally. Less creepy stuff and more orange libraries, though.
WHO THE HELL WOULD LEAVE SOMEONE HAVING A SEIZURE IN A FUCKING BATHROOM?!
Well, it's official;
Smoking has a 0.00001% chance of turning you into ZOMBIE GHOSTS :D
Sorry D: I find Mike W.'s literary works genius, so I often lean on him when I need quick, brilliant stories. I plan on doing a good portion of his works in the future. D:
good to hear you doing another mike.w creepypasta
Really well written and read
Omg im not the only one who uses this guy and many other creepypasta people to sleep
and two is right out unless directly proceeded by 3
Speaking of comments...
Save your fellow man, post this everywhere.
A WARNING TO ALL THOSE BRAVE OR STUPID ENOUGH TO VISIT THE COMMENT SECTION: Whenever you see somebody post a link, do not click it. However, it is human nature that our curiosity often overwhelms our instincts, so here's some steps to take in case you absolutely must know what the link leads to.
1) Turn your speakers/headphones off. Shit's most likely going to get loud, inappropriate, or both.
2) DO NOT just click the link. Right click it and hit "Open Link in New Tab." This will give you a chance to read the page title and see if your still curious.
3) If the tab you opened says "Go To Sleep!" Close it WITHOUT LOOKING AT IT and thank god you didn't have to hire a therapist.
4) If it says anything other than that, be wary. Seriously, brace yourself because it's probably some other scary shit or the grossest most fucked up kind of porn imaginable.
Note: If whatever you clicked on turns out to just be spam, thank god because it could be so, SSOOOO much worse.
I will never understand how so many dickless little shits love nothing more than linking screamer pages.
ha ha
What comments? What links?
If you were talking about that Jeff the killer screamer with the "Go to sleep!" thing, it isn't scary, at all, unless you're 6.
www.gitrekt.com
I'm been writing a creepypasta for a while now. I'm doing it in parts. It's about Majora's Mask 3D. It's called "Majora's Curse" and it is not about the game itself, but the events surrounding it.
This is the scariest one I've heard ever
You sir are a genius.
Are you my telekinetic brother?! Cue serious squirrel.