+Janice Sung Nope! This is the first in a series. One of the most direct sequels, A Figure in the Fog, is actually the pasta of the month over on the creepypasta wiki.
Story seemed a bit disjointed, particularly toward the end. I can't find any sort of logical sequence of events for the climax. Wicker returns from his trip, finds that his "wife" (not sure what exactly she was since she apparently lived in a room with no furniture and demonic drawings) is gone. He's upset by this and wanders down to the bar and does his crazy drinking. He returns home and either murders the servants, or maybe watches his demon wife kill them. Then he locks himself in the attic until the police find him, leading him to leap out the window...And then for some reason the missing wife returns and starts kidnapping children. No idea what that's about. And the story leaves on an abrupt cliffhanger, because that's the cool thing to do.
Firestar1992 the reason the wife left was because she wanted kids and her husband was never around to help her with that so she started kidnapping children
"I open the door". After saying those words, the man was never seen or heard from again. Although, they say that sometimes, when you pass by the infamous Wicker's house, you can faintly hear the sound of a man being frustrated that he forgot to turn the over off before he went off to search a house.
I think Tomas Wicker was the one being enslaved by his wife, who was in reality a malevolent entity that followed him back from wherever he got those sinister mementos.
The Wicker House would be perfect as a creepy abandoned house location in The Creepypasta Series that Jeff Smile Jane and their friends explore and accidentally get trapped inside and have to figure out a way to get out.
+Adam Thornton What were you expecting? 80's stereotypes spewing from his mouth? It is an official investigation of missing children, not just the dude chilling out in his house.
+JCArules13 I would expect him not to be speaking in a stereotypical 1920s/30s dialect. It's hard to imagine anybody after WWII saying "As a man of science, I knew any truths to be found in these outlandish stories were likely embellished to points unrecognizable. Nothing was first hand; all experiences were from a friend who knew a fellow who may have seen something. It is the provincial mind which transforms wild dogs into wolves that walk like men and interprets astronomical phenomena as harbingers of certain doom." or "The servants themselves shed no light upon the subject. The man hailed from a remote part of the Dark Continent and the woman appeared to be a mixed-breed, vaguely of the Orient. Wicker had acquired the service of each while abroad for business dealings and neither spoke a word of English." or pretty much any sentence from this story.
True, but I assumed he was just paraphrasing the story and that the story he was reading was written like this. As far as the first sentence, I figured, he's telling a story and trying to sound better than he would with everyday speech.
It's a great story and as much as I would love to hear more of it, that is how great creepy pasta ends, it leaves you speculating what comes next and wanting more of the story! My only critique, which is very minor, is that the pronunciation of Samhain is saʊ.wɛn(sow-wen). That's all! again, wonderful story! Keep it up!
Perhaps Lady Wicker was already a ghost that followed Me. Wicker because he killed her because she could not give him children.. which is why he moved to that quiet town despite having enough money to move anywhere.. he never spoke of her because she didn't exist anymore.. although he never spoke of the townspeople could see her because her could too. They were never seen together..
"..and with The suspect, too dead to proclaim his innocence...." Yeah dead is pretty much as bad as it gets. If I could sum it up in one word it would be, "CADAVER-IFIC"
Sorry I'm late to this but what happens next does he disappear does he truly see the lady wicker? And for those of you here who think the wicker house is not real your gravely mistaken it's an actual house located in Toronto California
was the author the man from the story? maybe he and his wife had children. Both his wife and children died leaving him alone and sad. Next he gets murdered. He opens the door and gets greeted by his wife and children.
Awesome narration, tho the story didn't appeal to me too terribly much since it seemed like a lot of it was already used to describe the LaLorie house in New Orleans...
Great reading but Im sorry to say that the story sucked. The ending!!! Aaaaggghhh!!! Im so tired of these damn noncommital endings to these damn creepypastas. Great beginning, great middle, and then TOTAL CRAP!! Can I please just get one with a halfway decent ending?
Dude, they have to be written this way more often than not because on r/nosleep the rules dictate that every story is true, must be written as such, and discussed as such. If every single one of them had a resolute ending, they would be less believable. Real life, paranormal or otherwise, rarely offers a definitive answer to your questions. That being said, a lot of them also have continuations, and CreepyPastaJr here rarely adapts them on his channel. In Layman's terms... You're gonna have to look up the original story to see if the writer continued it or not. I can almost guarantee this story has at least one other part, because the "story" literally wasn't over. If the guy died, how did he write it?
+Farkys Grey It was a stylistic choice. This was originally intended as a shoutout to Lovecraft (most of my other stories aren't written in that old-timey prose). Sorry you didn't care for it!
Ohh I see, it makes perfect sense now! Sorry, I really should have picked up on that. Now it all makes sense and I like it a whole lot more!! Thanks for clarifying! :)
Man, I love your channel! You inspire me so much, definitely you deserve more subscribers!
Beautiful. Whenever I need a good scare your channel never dissapoints.
Getting some mad The Shadow Over Innsmouth vibes from this
Nice! Does anyone else feel like this had a vaguely Lovecraftian feel to it?
That was intentional!
In that case, you succeeded quite nicely. Well done! :)
The maid being described as a "half breed" kinda gives away that garbage lineage for this story
Lovecraft and Lemony Snicket
@@Jetsetlemming lol
please let there be a good continuation of this.
Author person get on it asap!!
I agree with you
The story so far: creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User:Shadowswimmer77
Pretty sure that's it. Its just the origin story of a haunted house.
+Janice Sung Nope! This is the first in a series. One of the most direct sequels, A Figure in the Fog, is actually the pasta of the month over on the creepypasta wiki.
Shadow Swimmer Oh neat. I'll have to check it out.
Excellent work! For the first few minutes after autoplay I thought this was Lovecraft!
The title of this story would be a cool horror movie title. ❤
Story seemed a bit disjointed, particularly toward the end. I can't find any sort of logical sequence of events for the climax. Wicker returns from his trip, finds that his "wife" (not sure what exactly she was since she apparently lived in a room with no furniture and demonic drawings) is gone. He's upset by this and wanders down to the bar and does his crazy drinking. He returns home and either murders the servants, or maybe watches his demon wife kill them. Then he locks himself in the attic until the police find him, leading him to leap out the window...And then for some reason the missing wife returns and starts kidnapping children. No idea what that's about. And the story leaves on an abrupt cliffhanger, because that's the cool thing to do.
+Firestar1992 Eat my Sugar Bombs! WOOOOO FALLOUT 4 (b^o^)b
Firestar1992 the reason the wife left was because she wanted kids and her husband was never around to help her with that so she started kidnapping children
Firestar1992 I believe the wife is some sort of creature who possessed him.
I wonder if Nicolas Cage ever encountered the Wicker House just like how he encountered the Wicker Man.
AlphaThunderWolf 👍
Nicholas cage :
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UGH! Don't even mention that movie! I fell asleep watching it. IN THE THEATER!
ITS FOR HONEY!
THE BEES!
@@NeonStreaks
I would love to see The Wicker House with Nicholas Cage.
Excellent take, excellently told. Great job. Side note: I adore the long pauses for effect. Very well done.
One of the better written pastas, nice recording!
Good audio,story and sound effects man ! Amazing 👍
"I open the door". After saying those words, the man was never seen or heard from again. Although, they say that sometimes, when you pass by the infamous Wicker's house, you can faintly hear the sound of a man being frustrated that he forgot to turn the over off before he went off to search a house.
I think Tomas Wicker was the one being enslaved by his wife, who was in reality a malevolent entity that followed him back from wherever he got those sinister mementos.
Throw in some long, evocative descriptions of gloomy architecture and I could legitimately mistake this for an actual Lovecraft piece.
Ofc
The Wicker House would be perfect as a creepy abandoned house location in The Creepypasta Series that Jeff Smile Jane and their friends explore and accidentally get trapped inside and have to figure out a way to get out.
What is this creeypasta series
Almost sounds like a Lovecraft story
Thanks again, phone notification.
Can someone help me I don't get it
BNF knights and dragons Usually while I'm working, my phone notifies me of new UA-cam subscription uploads.
No what happens in the video
+qwyzl did you click the button that allows you to always get notifications cause if not then that's why
No i don't get what happen in the story
How can that be it? Ugh whoever wrote this needs to finish it it was soooooooooo good!
man I don't know what I have been doing lately that caused me to not watch CPjr but it feels good to be back
"The pattern of disappearances continued for more than 60 years", so the investigator was writing in the '80s. He doesn't sound like it.
+Adam Thornton What were you expecting? 80's stereotypes spewing from his mouth? It is an official investigation of missing children, not just the dude chilling out in his house.
+JCArules13 I would expect him not to be speaking in a stereotypical 1920s/30s dialect. It's hard to imagine anybody after WWII saying "As a man of science, I knew any truths to be found in these outlandish stories were likely embellished to points unrecognizable. Nothing was first hand; all experiences were from a friend who knew a fellow who may have seen something. It is the provincial mind which transforms wild dogs into wolves that walk like men and interprets astronomical phenomena as harbingers of certain doom." or "The servants themselves shed no light upon the subject. The man hailed from a remote part of the Dark Continent and the woman appeared to be a mixed-breed, vaguely of the Orient. Wicker had acquired the service of each while abroad for business dealings and neither spoke a word of English." or pretty much any sentence from this story.
True, but I assumed he was just paraphrasing the story and that the story he was reading was written like this. As far as the first sentence, I figured, he's telling a story and trying to sound better than he would with everyday speech.
Kinda reminds me of American horror story
Kacee franchow This would be a good episode of American Horror Story. I would so watch it.
Theyd probably have Evan Peters as Mr. Wicker. Season 1 was my favorite, I adored Evan as Tate.
Lovecraft
It's a great story and as much as I would love to hear more of it, that is how great creepy pasta ends, it leaves you speculating what comes next and wanting more of the story! My only critique, which is very minor, is that the pronunciation of Samhain is saʊ.wɛn(sow-wen). That's all! again, wonderful story! Keep it up!
Best one I have heard yet. In the style of le Fanu,And DE La Mere, so we'll written,and descriptive.A true art.
Herselfjeannemac Mccarthy Thank you so much!
good story as always keep up the good work thumbs up for sure
What a movie!
Yuup
Perhaps Lady Wicker was already a ghost that followed Me. Wicker because he killed her because she could not give him children.. which is why he moved to that quiet town despite having enough money to move anywhere.. he never spoke of her because she didn't exist anymore.. although he never spoke of the townspeople could see her because her could too. They were never seen together..
In the house in a heartbeat.
Great choice
whats the song near the end? the piano one. its sounds so familiar but I can't remember from where lol
Sorry I'm late, the one that starts at 18:38 is something from silent hill I believe.
Sounds like something Edward Alan Po would write, still a good story.
Excellent production and narrating...
THIS WAS FANTASTIC!
I enjoy this story. Please let there be a part 2.
At the start of 13:24 what song is it?
What à story. It's scary To think Something like this could happen. But There's à thin Line between sane and insane.
Awesome voice and style. 10/10
Did anyone else yell FATILITY when Whicker hit the spikes?
FATALITY creepypastajr wins
You had to leave us hanging at the end, didn't you. Wanting to know what happens next.
Tom Jeffries creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:Shadowswimmer77/Wicker_Saga_Chronological_Order
Where or what is the ost at 18:56?
J.K. It reminds me Angela's Hell ( I think that's the title) from Silent Hill 2
This guy writes just like Lovecraft does
Brilliantly written
I'm sitting here hoping for a good listen while eating... none of these EVER scare me though... disgust, definitely, scare, never.
The house never leaves a trace
Wonderful narrator!!
where u the one hating on mr.nightmare?if not then both of u should collab (it was a good story)
"..and with The suspect, too dead to proclaim his innocence...."
Yeah dead is pretty much as bad as it gets. If I could sum it up in one word it would be,
"CADAVER-IFIC"
Amazing author!!
So the first piano track is by Myuu? Which one? I cant seem to find it, digging through channel :)
Sorry I'm late to this but what happens next does he disappear does he truly see the lady wicker? And for those of you here who think the wicker house is not real your gravely mistaken it's an actual house located in Toronto California
What's the name of the song that starts up when he says "the patrol man stared terrified..."
did you ever find out?
good story, great narration.
thank you
did you know the house in you're cover screen is called Franklin's Castle
I don't think I have came across a creepy pasta that I haven't liked
How'd it get burned?
a cool spook with a cool narration
Often the best stories have, little-to-no explanation choosing to leave much to the imagination...
Boy, ya sure like to use big words sir!
What movie is the other score part of? It's driving me insane!
did you ever find out?
was the author the man from the story? maybe he and his wife had children. Both his wife and children died leaving him alone and sad. Next he gets murdered. He opens the door and gets greeted by his wife and children.
Welcome to the family son
It sounds like Robin Atkin Downes a little bit to me lol
samhain is also known as Halloween
A very good story indeed
Firstly: maybe she was a ghost even before the whole event.
Secondly: any notice junior somehow sounded sexier narrating this story?
He is always very sexy when he reads these stories, heck all the creepy pasta narrators sound sexy :P
Duece Venue MCP gives an impression of not sounding to creepy which gives off the element of surprise, but junior and creeps sound very sexy
This would make a great movie.
Diontae Daughtry
I agree especially if it's got Nicholas Cage.
NOT THE BEES! AAAAAH
There is a spin off in Sarah's Story but does this continue?
Mental Chrysalis Not directly yet. There are a bunch of stories I've written in the 'Wicker Saga' but none directly pick up from this one as of yet.
whats the song?
+R&N 28 days later theme song
+R&N In The House In A Heartbeat
gonna count how many times yall use words like 'haphazardly' and "effervescent" in all your uploads for a laugh
very spoopy
whoever wore this is a Lovecraft fan
You ever just close your closet?
Samhain is pronounced sow-in or soween. Just a bit of insight for you to aid the narration. Love this channel and ur narration. Thank you
HOW DOES IT END
Can someone explain this to me?
WHAT! You can't just end it like that!!! :(
Bermuda A.K.A. Glitch The rest of the story (so far) can be found here: creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User:Shadowswimmer77
Reminds me of the girl on Emerald Ranch in RDRD2!
301 Amazing People To 0 Assholes that's a rare statistic for UA-cam......
Awesome narration, tho the story didn't appeal to me too terribly much since it seemed like a lot of it was already used to describe the LaLorie house in New Orleans...
Great reading but Im sorry to say that the story sucked. The ending!!! Aaaaggghhh!!! Im so tired of these damn noncommital endings to these damn creepypastas. Great beginning, great middle, and then TOTAL CRAP!! Can I please just get one with a halfway decent ending?
Dude, they have to be written this way more often than not because on r/nosleep the rules dictate that every story is true, must be written as such, and discussed as such. If every single one of them had a resolute ending, they would be less believable. Real life, paranormal or otherwise, rarely offers a definitive answer to your questions. That being said, a lot of them also have continuations, and CreepyPastaJr here rarely adapts them on his channel. In Layman's terms... You're gonna have to look up the original story to see if the writer continued it or not.
I can almost guarantee this story has at least one other part, because the "story" literally wasn't over. If the guy died, how did he write it?
You were an ass 5 years ago when you typed this.
I think he was a Werewolf and She killed every one and kidnapp children and she was a Witch or Zombie.
28 days later them I think
"NOT THE BEES"
“The BeeeeeeeeEEEES”
Yasssss
This is some good shit.
This would have been better if it was left with a possible 2nd story to it.
Funny you should mention that, it's the first in a loosely connected series. creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User:Shadowswimmer77
samhain is pronounced saw-when
OH NO MY EYES
(Like if you get the reference!)
how sick am i, i fell sleep turing those horrors
nah not sick at all.
+Beanie Wolf I do it all the time. At least with ones I've already heard, new ones I just want to stay awake to hear the ending.
+Beanie Wolf If I can't fall asleep, turning on a good horror game usually does the trick.
sameeee
JCArules13 i do that too
Dead man walking!
very lovecraftian
Ty babe I love falling asleep to you xoxox
The story is good but some of the grammar/pauses are a bit odd? Sorry
any one notice the eren titen scream? no just me ¶-¶
Blair witch but south africa 19th century
gotta know what happens next 0_0 :)
Was it you????
I feel like the writing in this one is kind of pretentious, and it's driving me mad... Beautifully read though, as usual, CreepyPastaJr! :)
+Farkys Grey It was a stylistic choice. This was originally intended as a shoutout to Lovecraft (most of my other stories aren't written in that old-timey prose). Sorry you didn't care for it!
Ohh I see, it makes perfect sense now! Sorry, I really should have picked up on that. Now it all makes sense and I like it a whole lot more!! Thanks for clarifying! :)
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well whats the end lol
wicker is a shitty building material