Great short story, Barb. Life long Bonanza fan here, Adam being my favorite ( see my avatar ?! LOL) , and I write Bonanza fiction, too, and post it online. My 'writing rule' - far as dialogue goes - if I can't literally hear the character's voice saying it, in my head, they likely wouldn't ! I could 'hear' EVERY word of your story, in my head - well done :)
Oh my goodness Barbo, I just loved this. It would have been absolutely perfect if we could have actually witnessed this heartwarming scenario on the actual show between Adam and little Joe while the Cartwrights characters were still alive. As you were reading your beautiful story I within my mind was actually picturing everything that was being said between them, I was totally engulfed as I mindfully envisioned everything, yes my imagination was truly a Godsend blessing to and for me. Thanks dear heart for all that you are and for all that you do. You are truly a most beautiful Godsend blessing from Heaven for each and every last one of us Bonanza family fans. Blessings to you always. Bravo Barbo Bravo👍💯❤️🤗💐
Great Story. I thoroughly enjoyed listening. So real.
Thanks so much for sharing .
Thank you so much ❤
I love this so much! Made me tear up 🥹 thank you for sharing!
Great short story, Barb. Life long Bonanza fan here, Adam being my favorite ( see my
avatar ?! LOL) , and I write Bonanza fiction, too, and post it online. My 'writing rule' - far as dialogue goes - if I can't literally hear the character's voice saying it, in my head, they likely wouldn't ! I could 'hear' EVERY word of your story, in my head - well done :)
Thanks for sharing, enjoyed the story
Thank you..loved the story!
Thank you! More Adam, more Adam! He left way too soon.
Oh my goodness Barbo, I just loved this. It would have been absolutely perfect if we could have actually witnessed this heartwarming scenario on the actual show between Adam and little Joe while the Cartwrights characters were still alive. As you were reading your beautiful story I within my mind was actually picturing everything that was being said between them, I was totally engulfed as I mindfully envisioned everything, yes my imagination was truly a Godsend blessing to and for me. Thanks dear heart for all that you are and for all that you do. You are truly a most beautiful Godsend blessing from Heaven for each and every last one of us Bonanza family fans. Blessings to you always. Bravo Barbo Bravo👍💯❤️🤗💐
Very well said, Vera.
@@sharonenos1370 thank you so very much 💯🤗👍
Interesting story. It could have been an actual episode!