Part 2 will be out next month, glad you guys have enjoyed this one! I won’t give away anything besides these two tidbits: 1) It’s not Resurrection F 2) The next part is called The Hellbreak Saga See you again soon :]
I guess the Hellbreak saga will be super android 17 saga from gt, but re-imagined since some characters are missing anyway, and also it was a bit badly written in gt anyway
Beerus could also work as an audience surrogate in this rewrite, he can be confused on things that happened in Z and ask questions, helping to explain it for people who haven’t seen Z
It’s been so long since I promised this, but it’s finally here! Thanks for supporting the channel for the past 3 years, here’s to another 3 and many more 🗿 (Hopefully part 2 will have less of a wait time)
Hey can you please continue “What If Ginyu Force turned good” and if you don’t want to please make a “What If Granolah and Goku were raised together” and remember Granolah can obtain 2 of his races eyes.
Off the bat I immediately love the idea of the universe being in disarray because of Beerus being sealed away, not because he just sucks at his job. Already this is gonna be a hype story EDIT: I also like that SSG is just called Saiyan God now, I'm probably not the only one who feels like that would've made more sense. Then if they get blue down the line THAT can be called Super Saiyan God, since then it's Saiyan God + Super Saiyan!
Makes you think only one person was thinking about it originally and didn't bounce ideas off anyone. Because 2 minds definitely would make the decision of Saiyan God
God form Vegeta in his Buu saga clothes remind me of all the old fanart of Vegeta getting God when Battle of Gods was a new thing Also great Video as always
I also loved how you made Beerus a competent, responsible, and most importantly REASONABLE! I never got over the fact, that most of the gods act like children. 1. Consider, having a Demon Arc. Because Debura's potential was as bland as Beerus's character. (In the original not this) 2. Please make it so that Champa was searching for the Super Dragon Balls for Millions of years to find his brother. 3. Have Cooler go to Universe 6 take their Dragon Balls, since Champa left it unsupervised. And revive his family during their training, to save some time. 4. You could make the Shadow Dragon Arc from GT, into a Multiversel Quest. Either for world-building or an endgame. 5. Make Baby a collective Hive Mind of the Tuffles, protecting training and nurturing the last of their kind Granola. Give him fatherly instincts to add more to his character. 6. Janemba, or Morro, are solid suspects responsible for Beerus's imprisonment. 7. Acknowledge that works like these take time, make sure to have patience whether you're a fan of What Ifs, The Author, or DragonBall. 8. Look out for yourself, stay safe.
Unsure about Janemba, but Morro be the one who seal Old Kai actually make the most sense, since the had both the power and right motive to do so (as Morro probably wanted to neutralize Beerus as he was likely the greatest threat to his ambitions, while he would had be able to deal with the Supreme Kais alone), other that it would make sense chronologically speaking (since Morro defeat and Old Kai sealing did happen millions of years ago in the original story).
Morro is more fitting also because of the fact the galactic patrol wanted to use buu magic capabilities in order to defeat him, so morro wanted to eliminate one of his biggest threats
I was so happy when you called Super Saiyan God as “Saiyan God” because I’ve wanted it to be renamed to it that for so long keep up the great work Salad
This is such a cool idea! Beerus actually caring about making his universe a better place, Super Saiyan god being just Saiyan god (Finally-) and Buu being involved in godly training! It's a really interesting and enjoyable rewrite so far. I also think Frieza's revival can be so much more interesting, with Goku and/or Vegeta going Super Saiyan God (Or Super Saiyan Blue) because of them being on the back foot, or because of some tragedy. Super Saiyan Blue has the potential to be so much more interesting in this rewrite and I hope to see it cleverly used, cause as a concept, it's fantastic, it's introduction and execution though, aren't the best thing ever- It would also be a clever and fun callback to the Namek Saga, with Goku's friends losing their lives, and Goku going Super Saiyan in a different way this time, to defeat the same Emperor, in the same fasion. It's great that Salad has opened up such an interesting scenario, which he has so much room with to make a great story! I hope to see this turn into a long running series, as it has a lot of potential to make a better story that DBS. (Not that DBS was necessarily bad- Just saying this can be a lot better, in my opinion)
The idea that in this story that Beerus isn’t some lazy god who allows whatever cause he’s too lazy but rather couldn’t do anything due to him being sealed!!! Your an amazing story teller salad sayian!!!!
I like how you put Saiyan God in for the name, it makes more sense. Also, I am curious since Goku and Vegeta are relearning Super Saiyan and more will that mean they just simply turn into Blue instead since the God Ki is within their base now. I think that would be great so that the likes of Goten and Trunks can be the ones who show further improvement to Super Saiyan 2 and more. Can’t wait to see what happens next for Part 2
I do like the plot of this rewrite / series or however to call it thus far. I think it's very nice how you're glueing together all the info we have and make the story overall much more coherent with it. What I think you could improve on is making this story feel more alive by including more dialogue between the characters, sort of how Masako tends to do it with his voice acting and everything. I think that way it's much easier and nicer to be immersed in the story. You don't necessarily have to do voice acting, I'm sure there's other ways you could present dialogue, possibly even just by editing in speech bubbles in the video footage to show what the characters are saying. Just examples, keep it up.
@@couldbetrento5850 Not really. That's equivalent to saying an author is the same as another, simply based on the depth or breath of the content they make. I'm pretty sure Salad Saiyan will use his own unique way of telling a story, if this ever happens.
this story is fan freakin' tastic. I feel like Beerus is also training these guys to help him with the "Universe Custodial" role that he has as a destroyer since they took down numerous troublemakers in his absence.
I love this. I love how much has been set up in just this video. Beerus having to relearn everything about the universe and in general being far more competent and caring about his job while not changing his character too much. Speaking of which, since he's been gone for so many years i'm intrigued to see what interactions he might have with other G.O.D. with maybe some he's unfamiliar with since they could have changed in the time he was sealed. Also love the idea of what you did with SSG. Using the idea of the god form being infused into their base from the movie more literally and having it potentially be their literal new base forms with SSGSS maybe having levels like regular super saiyan. Overall I think this is an amazing start and can't wait to see what you have in store for it
I like the rewrite you've done so far. The Saiyan God Prophecy, a responsible God of Destruction, and an upgrade to many of the characters personal growth. There are many things I'm looking forward to seeing how you rewrite the story in your future videos -Perhaps uncover Tiens hidden potential, Toriyama said that due to being raised by the evil Master Shen, Tien lost the ability to use his myriad powers for good purposes. -An update to Launch and some of the side characters although she's probably useless in your plot, fun moments for them would be appreciated by long time dragon ball fans. -I would also like to see your story of what happened to the Planet Trade Organization prior to Frieza, King Cold, Ginyu Force's death. -You should add redesigns to the Universe 6 saiyans, in terms of appearance, origins, and personality, not many people liked Cabbas design, find Kale and Caulifla annoying, but question why they haven't the saiyans discovered the yellow haired transformation after decades or centuries of advancing their civilization. -If you plan on bringing back the Future Trunks timeline, you should expand on what happened to the characters around him, like Master Roshi, Mr. Popo, and King Kai. What's Roshis secret training after the Z fighters died? (If you plan on having it implemented in your story) -An arc for the demon realm for sure. Toriyama did say something that there exists beyond the King of the Demon Realm. Like the makaioshins and Demon gods of destruction. I'm interested to see what inspiration you take from them in terms of appearance, like Toriyama designing Beerus from Anubis. -You could make the around time Super is about the end (if you plan on ending it there) it stops at the 5th year where many of the characters don't see each other in a while, like what Bulma said to Goku at the end of Z. -If you write the tournament of power, I'd like to see many of the fighters of their universe given their time to shine (along with Z fighters) with less power boosts and more hax abilities shown, similar to Buu, Hit, and Aniraza. Lots of possibilities, can't wait for the next parts to come.
This is shaping up to be a great story already! Best part though: renaming "Super Saiyan God" to just Saiyan God. Like, I get that they probably didn't even have the idea for Super Saiyan Blue when the god form was created but man the name Super Saiyan God Super Saiyan was just such a stupid idea
I think you should make more of your own original arcs and villains in this series and you should have the Humans, Goten, Trunks, and Piccolo train with Beerus and Whis as well
@@jote6082 indeed the only time i see the humans actually requiring godly training would be once they hit a wall to be honest the most fitting training would be having their potential further unlocked
I think that with Elder Kai being sealed, Beerus should've fallen into the deep slumber, having a dream about a Saiyan God, instead of learning about him
Damn Daniel, that is absolutely great! It feels so much more connected, and now all of it makes sense! Best of all, Goku and Vegeta are finally just like they are after the Buu Saga, so big dub!
I'm kinda interested to see how the series goes. One thing i hope is that if there's a chance for it, all the destruction caused in U7 fixes, even the saiyan planets and such
Splendiferous. Absolutely amazing work. I’m very impressed to see the quality of your videos increasing so rapidly and dramatically. You’re by far my favorite what if UA-camr on the platform. Keep doing what you do. You deserve every subscriber you have and I can’t wait to see where this story goes.
I think this could be a very nice project of yours. I just have some adjustments for the super-saiyan-loss thing you have created: It would be good if you tell it like "Goku and Vegeta got so powerful in their base because of immersing into the god form so they need to learn to control this new power and again get a hold of super saiyan" (wich should be easy because they already have the experience) But I think this series is going to be pretty fun in the future.
the fact gohan has some god ki is already an upgrade. always thought he sould've gotten ritual done just to increase his base form... thus increasing his ultimate form's power even more.
Whoot it's here! 😃 So the idea of the next generation moving forward continues nice. So Krillin and Tien will get stronger together cool I would give them both King Kai training. I'm curious on how Piccolo will get stronger here I thinking either: The Ultimate Form, but earlier or the Namekian God Forms. Hm? 🤔 Who sealed Beerus and Elder Kai here, but I like this idea instead of Shin been incompetent like canon. So Gohan will join in training with Goku and Vegeta on Beerus' Planet when he can nice, but I'm hoping it leads to Gohan training with the Supreme Kais more like Goku is training with Whis more and Vegeta training with Beerus more. Anyways another really good start to this rewrite series, and looking forward to the next part soon.
I had the same idea of Gohan having a bit of god ki because of Elder Kai’s ritual for a little while of time now, I’m so glad someone else had that idea.
Really liking this scenario so far with Beerus being a more competent god and hope this continues. As for ideas/suggestions: 1) Maybe make an arc out of the events of Wrath of the Dragon. It’s easy to place after Z, gives Trunks some development (could also fit in an alternate start to him meeting kid Mai) and Hirudegarn and Hoi might be of interest to Beerus. 2) If you’re going to make the make the human characters stronger please include Videl as she’s pretty neglected as a character post Buu even in fan works. You could have it that the events of the Buu saga and Beerus’ arrival inspires her to get stronger alongside Gohan.
@@mohammedyounus23 yeah but imo I think at this point it’s too late, she is out of her prime and would grow very slowly, as far as we know due to lack of training she essentially became a normal woman again (jesus christ I didn’t notice how rude this sounds)
@@TheBrimmyRat na. Cause Krillin and Tien older than her and they were utilized in the tournament of power. She could be given spotlight too. Even master roshi shined too. He the oldest
@@mohammedyounus23 That’s actually a good point. I guess I just thought because she looked older she was outta the fighting scene. But no, she could fight. But she would have to train with goten or something.
Yo Salad I forgot to say this 10 days ago but the concept of them not being able to go SSJ any more because of God is fucking incredible man. Like I have legit have never even considered the thought of that idea but it makes so much sense and is so fucking badass.
First of all, thanks! I'm really enjoying this as an awesome start to what I'm sure will be a great series! Good first step. As for suggestions? I have a few, just incase. Make the humans relevant! Whether you give them something like android tech, or Ultimate form, or whatever... Don't forget about them. Bring back Oozaru! All of the Saiyans that got Godly ki wake up one day with their tails back... At first they're confused, and worried, but Beerus tells them this is a good thing, and they need to learn to control themselves in that form... Or even learn how to access that power in their base... OC Villains! Don't just rehash things like Zamasu, Hit, Jiren, Morro, Baby, etc. Maybe add a new "Demon world" kinda like "otherworld, and the sacred world of the Kai's, but in the Demon Realm, where people like Dabura, and Garlic Jr. are from. Feel free to get inspiration from the movies, but don't just throw movies in. Regardless of the source, Definitely needs some new unique villains that never really existed in the series originally. Feel free to add things like the Metamo-Rings and X-Fusion, or the 5-man fusion that the Ginyu orce developed... If you find it difficult to make the humans relevant. New Plot-Hooks, and Maguffins! Other new sets of Dragonballs, new alien races, New magics, technologies, new fighters... New Tournaments! Not just the ToP! (Or Universe 6 Tournament) (Take inspiration from the Mortal Kombat, with the demons wanting to take over the "regular" world, But they need to win the tournament to do so, and the Gods can't interfere!)
@@ProjektTaku Yup, that's ONE good option, but I aso think that things like Kaioken, Android tech, and "Spirit Control" would be other really GREAT options to keep them relevant too! (Or all of the above, lol!)
@@ArthurEKing8472 I think android tech would kinda take away from them being humans, but the rest sound good. I could easily see someone like piccolo, who can regenerate and mediates a lot, learning kaioken and spirit control with yardratz would fit him very well. I also could see tien learning kaioken and spirit fission, since he already has a technique where he splits into 2 or 4 people. But ultimate I feel is the most realistic and best power up for them, since all it would take is a day or 2, which is nothing if they're using the room of spirit and time. I would love to see ultimate tien.
@@ProjektTaku Well it kinda depends on the way they use the android tech honestly (In My Opinion). In my own What If's I often include Android Tech as a human-upgrade, BUT not really the same as the android tech from 17/18. Instead, it's android tech that does things like making their bodies more resilient, so that kaioken is easier to deal with, or a form of "Computer-Controlled perfected Kaio-Ken" where instead of their entire bodies activating the same level of kaio-ken simultaneously, ONLY those parts that NEED to have kaioken active, activate it, and they ONLY activate it to the lowest level needed... Thereby lessening the total energy-loss, and stamina-drain, while keeping the total power the same, or possibly even allowing them to achieve higher levels of kaio-ken. Another methodology I use, is to combine Master Roshi's "Max Power" form, with the Spirit Control Techniques of Gigantification, and miniaturization... Because the Max Power form could make your body physically strong enough to handle higher levels of Kaio-ken, and increase your over-all power, BUT it's big bulky muscles, would make fighting hard, (like Ultra Super Saiyan, or Grade 3 SSJ). However, if they can use Spirit-control techniques to morph their bodies AFTERWARDS to be sleeker, and more evenly proportioned... You could make an exceedingly powerful option for the humans, that makes them all able to fight at MUCH higher levels over-all... And make people like Chaiotzu (who's body is so physically diminutive, that he can't really "fight" in the traditional sense) an actual physical powerhouse, or threat. Also there were other Red Ribbon Army tech that were used to "activate" people's ESP abilities (Like General Blue) and those same kinds of technologies could be used to activate hidden abilities of the humans too. Or even using the Ultra Divine Water. Fighting with psychic powers AND Ki could be a potent combination! Or in any story that includes Turles, the Fruit from the Tree of Might. Or using Baba-Di's Magic... There are SO many options that the humans could have potentially used (and abused) to make up the difference between themselves and the Saiyans... And these just scratch the surface!
@@ArthurEKing8472 I think android tech for humans (which I still don't want) should be an infinite energy engine like android 17 and 18, so they can fight continuously and use kaioken at higher levels, along with training harder. But I really think ultimate is the way to go for humans, along with kaioken. But the tree of might fruit could also work, along with the babidi majin boost.
It would be amazing seeing this in drawn form, as an actual manga. a story in another timeline/dimension or whatever. I like the changes alot, makes the story a bit more intricate and really more natural in a way. awesome man! I do have an incling that Moro would fit so much more into this story for some reason.. cant wait too see what changes you do to the story arcs, or if you'll remove them entirely!
I too have been dabbling in rewriting Dragon Ball as of late. The idea of taking everything DB already has and reworking it to make things just a bit different is always fun.
I actually really like the idea of them losing access to their Super Saiyan forms after gaining god ki. Since the Super Saiyan forms require anger and releasing tons of ki at once it makes sense that they couldn't do that since they use god ki now, which is the antithesis of that. Also Super Saiyan God being called Saiyan God is a nice change, I can only assume that Super Saiyan Blue will be called Super Saiyan God now which makes way more sense.
already 5 minutes into the video, and i love the involvement of the new generation. introducing goten, trunks, gotenks, and gohan/gohan’s incredible potential, then focusing entirely on goku? it was one of the things i wanted to see changed in dragon ball. also, beerus’ incompetence? yeah its comedic, later on, but it doesn’t make sense. i love the rewrite!
Yeah I'm really enjoying this story can't wait to see where you're going with this. I like beers being a more active and attentive deity actually there both helping and working with The Mortals of his universe as opposed to how he used to be
Something I’ve always wanted from Super was an evil Grand Priest arc where the Tournament of Power was a multiversal conspiracy. This was shown in Canon where the Grand Priest and the Angle smiled when the first Universe got erased.
Personally I feel more hyped for the next part of this than I did watching DBS itself, but maybe that comes from the fact that I got into DBS after the ToP had already ended.
I love that you're doing this and I'm here for the ride. If there's a chance you don't have the entire series planned out yet and you're looking to take ideas, I always wondered how it would be if super reworked the concept of the shadow dragons or properly introduced an antagonist group of demons from the demon realm that dabura is king of into an actual mini war arc. Oh and also this is just me and of course this is your rewrite, but personally I think the goku black arc would have been more impacting if it was future gohan or goten black
Part 2 will be out next month, glad you guys have enjoyed this one! I won’t give away anything besides these two tidbits:
1) It’s not Resurrection F
2) The next part is called The Hellbreak Saga
See you again soon :]
Dare I hope we see a reimagining of Janemba?
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please if the humans and picclo arent in the story im sad kaioken, god ki, potential unleashed yamcha i need it
I guess the Hellbreak saga will be super android 17 saga from gt, but re-imagined since some characters are missing anyway, and also it was a bit badly written in gt anyway
Hmm! 🤔
Beerus could also work as an audience surrogate in this rewrite, he can be confused on things that happened in Z and ask questions, helping to explain it for people who haven’t seen Z
Teh gad sagwr
Wow, the literal God Of Desteuction as an audience Surrogate. I feel like there's a toxic community joke there-
@@nightlypiano41 Goddamn your profile pic brings me back
@@nightlypiano41 Nah, not as toxic as in canon with Zenō LOL
That's genius!
It’s been so long since I promised this, but it’s finally here! Thanks for supporting the channel for the past 3 years, here’s to another 3 and many more 🗿
(Hopefully part 2 will have less of a wait time)
I can't wait for part 2, and if you want to then can you rewrite GT?
Hey can you please continue “What If Ginyu Force turned good” and if you don’t want to please make a “What If Granolah and Goku were raised together” and remember Granolah can obtain 2 of his races eyes.
@@ginyuraiyuden1104 YES THANK YOU SOMEONE FINALLY SAID IT
WHAT IF THE GINYU FORCE TURNED GOOD P4
WHAT IF THE GINYU FORCE TURNED GOOD P4
Off the bat I immediately love the idea of the universe being in disarray because of Beerus being sealed away, not because he just sucks at his job. Already this is gonna be a hype story
EDIT: I also like that SSG is just called Saiyan God now, I'm probably not the only one who feels like that would've made more sense. Then if they get blue down the line THAT can be called Super Saiyan God, since then it's Saiyan God + Super Saiyan!
All of the yes!
Thanks to broku72 for the idea of saiyan god instead of super saiyan god
Finally people who agree that SSG should have been Sayian God, and SSB should be Super Sayian God
Makes you think only one person was thinking about it originally and didn't bounce ideas off anyone. Because 2 minds definitely would make the decision of Saiyan God
so should he call super saiyan blue, saiyan blue?
God form Vegeta in his Buu saga clothes remind me of all the old fanart of Vegeta getting God when Battle of Gods was a new thing
Also great Video as always
I also loved how you made Beerus a competent, responsible, and most importantly REASONABLE! I never got over the fact, that most of the gods act like children.
1. Consider, having a Demon Arc. Because Debura's potential was as bland as Beerus's character. (In the original not this)
2. Please make it so that Champa was searching for the Super Dragon Balls for Millions of years to find his brother.
3. Have Cooler go to Universe 6 take their Dragon Balls, since Champa left it unsupervised. And revive his family during their training, to save some time.
4. You could make the Shadow Dragon Arc from GT, into a Multiversel Quest. Either for world-building or an endgame.
5. Make Baby a collective Hive Mind of the Tuffles, protecting training and nurturing the last of their kind Granola. Give him fatherly instincts to add more to his character.
6. Janemba, or Morro, are solid suspects responsible for Beerus's imprisonment.
7. Acknowledge that works like these take time, make sure to have patience whether you're a fan of What Ifs, The Author, or DragonBall.
8. Look out for yourself, stay safe.
Unsure about Janemba, but Morro be the one who seal Old Kai actually make the most sense, since the had both the power and right motive to do so (as Morro probably wanted to neutralize Beerus as he was likely the greatest threat to his ambitions, while he would had be able to deal with the Supreme Kais alone), other that it would make sense chronologically speaking (since Morro defeat and Old Kai sealing did happen millions of years ago in the original story).
Morro is more fitting also because of the fact the galactic patrol wanted to use buu magic capabilities in order to defeat him, so morro wanted to eliminate one of his biggest threats
By the way your idea of merging Baby and Granola's Arcs into one should really interesting.
I like the champa and baby/granola parts
That second idea is actually pretty good
This rewrite is quite interesting,it makes the Gods seem like better characters
I was so happy when you called Super Saiyan God as “Saiyan God” because I’ve wanted it to be renamed to it that for so long keep up the great work Salad
I prefer super saiyan god
@@bullymaguire632 Yeah the original is and sounds more better tbh.
@@bullymaguire632 ye but its preferable considering ssjb is super sayian super sayian god
@@jayxcv5409 I understand that but it doesn’t make sense to me especially given that Super Saiyan God has base form hair
@@zenix6467 That's what makes it unique.
Super Saiyan God is an amazing form.
This is such a cool idea! Beerus actually caring about making his universe a better place, Super Saiyan god being just Saiyan god (Finally-) and Buu being involved in godly training! It's a really interesting and enjoyable rewrite so far.
I also think Frieza's revival can be so much more interesting, with Goku and/or Vegeta going Super Saiyan God (Or Super Saiyan Blue) because of them being on the back foot, or because of some tragedy.
Super Saiyan Blue has the potential to be so much more interesting in this rewrite and I hope to see it cleverly used, cause as a concept, it's fantastic, it's introduction and execution though, aren't the best thing ever-
It would also be a clever and fun callback to the Namek Saga, with Goku's friends losing their lives, and Goku going Super Saiyan in a different way this time, to defeat the same Emperor, in the same fasion.
It's great that Salad has opened up such an interesting scenario, which he has so much room with to make a great story! I hope to see this turn into a long running series, as it has a lot of potential to make a better story that DBS. (Not that DBS was necessarily bad- Just saying this can be a lot better, in my opinion)
I think having vegeta obtain super saiyan god (ssjb) before goku would be a fun twist and having him finish frieza would be so good.
The idea that in this story that Beerus isn’t some lazy god who allows whatever cause he’s too lazy but rather couldn’t do anything due to him being sealed!!! Your an amazing story teller salad sayian!!!!
I can’t believe you’re rewriting Dbs this is huge!
I like how you put Saiyan God in for the name, it makes more sense.
Also, I am curious since Goku and Vegeta are relearning Super Saiyan and more will that mean they just simply turn into Blue instead since the God Ki is within their base now. I think that would be great so that the likes of Goten and Trunks can be the ones who show further improvement to Super Saiyan 2 and more.
Can’t wait to see what happens next for Part 2
I think it would be the case, and SSjB will also be the one called Super Saiyan God.
I have all ways thought that just calling it saiyan god made more sense and was better
Mama
Indeed.
Same here
@@kittykatgod8891 Right! My friend says it's stupid And I'm like it makes more sense than what we have
I must admit, I was hesitant with this scenario. But I thoroughly enjoyed it. Can't wait for part 2. Great job! 👍🏽
I do like the plot of this rewrite / series or however to call it thus far. I think it's very nice how you're glueing together all the info we have and make the story overall much more coherent with it.
What I think you could improve on is making this story feel more alive by including more dialogue between the characters, sort of how Masako tends to do it with his voice acting and everything. I think that way it's much easier and nicer to be immersed in the story. You don't necessarily have to do voice acting, I'm sure there's other ways you could present dialogue, possibly even just by editing in speech bubbles in the video footage to show what the characters are saying.
Just examples, keep it up.
Then he would be just copying masako. Which is more unique to him
@@couldbetrento5850 thats such a weak mindset
@@couldbetrento5850 Not really. That's equivalent to saying an author is the same as another, simply based on the depth or breath of the content they make. I'm pretty sure Salad Saiyan will use his own unique way of telling a story, if this ever happens.
Another thing is captions or subtitles
@@fwby77 its a weak mindset not wanting to copy others?
this story is fan freakin' tastic.
I feel like Beerus is also training these guys to help him with the "Universe Custodial" role that he has as a destroyer since they took down numerous troublemakers in his absence.
I love this. I love how much has been set up in just this video. Beerus having to relearn everything about the universe and in general being far more competent and caring about his job while not changing his character too much. Speaking of which, since he's been gone for so many years i'm intrigued to see what interactions he might have with other G.O.D. with maybe some he's unfamiliar with since they could have changed in the time he was sealed. Also love the idea of what you did with SSG. Using the idea of the god form being infused into their base from the movie more literally and having it potentially be their literal new base forms with SSGSS maybe having levels like regular super saiyan. Overall I think this is an amazing start and can't wait to see what you have in store for it
This rewrite is gonna be a staple on your channel and I hope it does very well salad. Can’t wait for the next part!
I'm really glad you gave Krillin and Tien roles early on. I hate how they have no role until the TOP in super
2:12 Goten grew up real quick this time
I like the rewrite you've done so far. The Saiyan God Prophecy, a responsible God of Destruction, and an upgrade to many of the characters personal growth. There are many things I'm looking forward to seeing how you rewrite the story in your future videos
-Perhaps uncover Tiens hidden potential, Toriyama said that due to being raised by the evil Master Shen, Tien lost the ability to use his myriad powers for good purposes.
-An update to Launch and some of the side characters although she's probably useless in your plot, fun moments for them would be appreciated by long time dragon ball fans.
-I would also like to see your story of what happened to the Planet Trade Organization prior to Frieza, King Cold, Ginyu Force's death.
-You should add redesigns to the Universe 6 saiyans, in terms of appearance, origins, and personality, not many people liked Cabbas design, find Kale and Caulifla annoying, but question why they haven't the saiyans discovered the yellow haired transformation after decades or centuries of advancing their civilization.
-If you plan on bringing back the Future Trunks timeline, you should expand on what happened to the characters around him, like Master Roshi, Mr. Popo, and King Kai. What's Roshis secret training after the Z fighters died? (If you plan on having it implemented in your story)
-An arc for the demon realm for sure. Toriyama did say something that there exists beyond the King of the Demon Realm. Like the makaioshins and Demon gods of destruction. I'm interested to see what inspiration you take from them in terms of appearance, like Toriyama designing Beerus from Anubis.
-You could make the around time Super is about the end (if you plan on ending it there) it stops at the 5th year where many of the characters don't see each other in a while, like what Bulma said to Goku at the end of Z.
-If you write the tournament of power, I'd like to see many of the fighters of their universe given their time to shine (along with Z fighters) with less power boosts and more hax abilities shown, similar to Buu, Hit, and Aniraza.
Lots of possibilities, can't wait for the next parts to come.
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I also remember when Goten turns into a literal carbon copy of Gohan
This was really amazing! Yessir! Definitely excited for part 2.
Rewrites are very interested to me because it shows what could’ve been if the story hadn’t turned out how it did
The long-awaited Super Rewrite. Man am I Hyped!
It was a big wait definitely but i already can't wait to see how your version of DBS goes
I absolutely love this. Beerus is an actual character now besides some big lazy strong guy. The wait was definitely worth it
This is shaping up to be a great story already! Best part though: renaming "Super Saiyan God" to just Saiyan God. Like, I get that they probably didn't even have the idea for Super Saiyan Blue when the god form was created but man the name Super Saiyan God Super Saiyan was just such a stupid idea
*Salad I swear your contents are getting so AWESOME these days that I can't take my eyes off!!!*
A rewrite i didn't knew i needed
I think you should make more of your own original arcs and villains in this series and you should have the Humans, Goten, Trunks, and Piccolo train with Beerus and Whis as well
It would be awesome but i think the humans should train in their own different ways that could benefit them more
@@jote6082 indeed the only time i see the humans actually requiring godly training would be once they hit a wall to be honest the most fitting training would be having their potential further unlocked
@@jote6082 If not Beerus & Whis why not the kais
I think the humans should obtain ultimate to power themselves up. And goten and trunks should obtain ssj2 and 3.
Good work Salad! Looking forward to the next part
I think that with Elder Kai being sealed, Beerus should've fallen into the deep slumber, having a dream about a Saiyan God, instead of learning about him
Keep up the vids salad I was really excited for this one!
This is one of the best rewrites I’ve ever seen! Keep up the good work Salad! 👍👍
Damn Daniel, that is absolutely great! It feels so much more connected, and now all of it makes sense! Best of all, Goku and Vegeta are finally just like they are after the Buu Saga, so big dub!
DB Rewrite is finally here. LET'SA F**KING GOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
I'm kinda interested to see how the series goes. One thing i hope is that if there's a chance for it, all the destruction caused in U7 fixes, even the saiyan planets and such
This is so good!! Cannot wait to see Part 2!! Amazing!!🙌🙌🔥🔥
Splendiferous. Absolutely amazing work. I’m very impressed to see the quality of your videos increasing so rapidly and dramatically. You’re by far my favorite what if UA-camr on the platform. Keep doing what you do. You deserve every subscriber you have and I can’t wait to see where this story goes.
This makes supers writing look like literal child's play
This is getting really interesting, having god be a trade off is very unique, can't wait to see what you do for blue, ui, and ue
I'm already loving this rewrite. Toriyama should hire you!!!
Also, make sure Trunks & Goten look their age.
If this is only a year after Buu, it makes sense for the kids to look the same.
@@williamchuba9397 true.
hyperbolic time chamber draogn balls old kai hmmmmm@@williamchuba9397
I really can't wait to see some of the other unique sagas in the future
I think this could be a very nice project of yours. I just have some adjustments for the super-saiyan-loss thing you have created: It would be good if you tell it like "Goku and Vegeta got so powerful in their base because of immersing into the god form so they need to learn to control this new power and again get a hold of super saiyan" (wich should be easy because they already have the experience) But I think this series is going to be pretty fun in the future.
Renaming super saiyan god to saiyan god is the best decision ever made
the fact gohan has some god ki is already an upgrade. always thought he sould've gotten ritual done just to increase his base form... thus increasing his ultimate form's power even more.
Really glad I am subbed, this rewrite was pretty entertaining and intriguing, can't wait for part 2 - Good job, bro!
holy shit, this is a really good rewrite. please continue on in this story!
I've been waiting for this forever so when I got the notification you already know I dropped everything!
I’m excited that Trunks and Goten are being used and aren’t gonna rely on fusion 24/7
Whoot it's here! 😃 So the idea of the next generation moving forward continues nice. So Krillin and Tien will get stronger together cool I would give them both King Kai training. I'm curious on how Piccolo will get stronger here I thinking either: The Ultimate Form, but earlier or the Namekian God Forms. Hm? 🤔 Who sealed Beerus and Elder Kai here, but I like this idea instead of Shin been incompetent like canon. So Gohan will join in training with Goku and Vegeta on Beerus' Planet when he can nice, but I'm hoping it leads to Gohan training with the Supreme Kais more like Goku is training with Whis more and Vegeta training with Beerus more. Anyways another really good start to this rewrite series, and looking forward to the next part soon.
I think tien and krillin should be given ultimate. Also, kaioken would fit piccolo since he can regenerate.
I had the same idea of Gohan having a bit of god ki because of Elder Kai’s ritual for a little while of time now, I’m so glad someone else had that idea.
Really liking this scenario so far with Beerus being a more competent god and hope this continues. As for ideas/suggestions:
1) Maybe make an arc out of the events of Wrath of the Dragon. It’s easy to place after Z, gives Trunks some development (could also fit in an alternate start to him meeting kid Mai) and Hirudegarn and Hoi might be of interest to Beerus.
2) If you’re going to make the make the human characters stronger please include Videl as she’s pretty neglected as a character post Buu even in fan works. You could have it that the events of the Buu saga and Beerus’ arrival inspires her to get stronger alongside Gohan.
Chichi got neglected too after Dragonball
you could give the humans ulimates to power them up.
@@mohammedyounus23 yeah but imo I think at this point it’s too late, she is out of her prime and would grow very slowly, as far as we know due to lack of training she essentially became a normal woman again (jesus christ I didn’t notice how rude this sounds)
@@TheBrimmyRat na. Cause Krillin and Tien older than her and they were utilized in the tournament of power. She could be given spotlight too. Even master roshi shined too. He the oldest
@@mohammedyounus23 That’s actually a good point.
I guess I just thought because she looked older she was outta the fighting scene.
But no, she could fight.
But she would have to train with goten or something.
5 minutes in and 39 comments. Love your work man it's been awesome seeing you grow.
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Yo Salad I forgot to say this 10 days ago but the concept of them not being able to go SSJ any more because of God is fucking incredible man. Like I have legit have never even considered the thought of that idea but it makes so much sense and is so fucking badass.
First of all, thanks! I'm really enjoying this as an awesome start to what I'm sure will be a great series! Good first step.
As for suggestions? I have a few, just incase.
Make the humans relevant! Whether you give them something like android tech, or Ultimate form, or whatever... Don't forget about them.
Bring back Oozaru! All of the Saiyans that got Godly ki wake up one day with their tails back... At first they're confused, and worried, but Beerus tells them this is a good thing, and they need to learn to control themselves in that form... Or even learn how to access that power in their base...
OC Villains! Don't just rehash things like Zamasu, Hit, Jiren, Morro, Baby, etc. Maybe add a new "Demon world" kinda like "otherworld, and the sacred world of the Kai's, but in the Demon Realm, where people like Dabura, and Garlic Jr. are from. Feel free to get inspiration from the movies, but don't just throw movies in. Regardless of the source, Definitely needs some new unique villains that never really existed in the series originally.
Feel free to add things like the Metamo-Rings and X-Fusion, or the 5-man fusion that the Ginyu orce developed... If you find it difficult to make the humans relevant.
New Plot-Hooks, and Maguffins! Other new sets of Dragonballs, new alien races, New magics, technologies, new fighters...
New Tournaments! Not just the ToP! (Or Universe 6 Tournament) (Take inspiration from the Mortal Kombat, with the demons wanting to take over the "regular" world, But they need to win the tournament to do so, and the Gods can't interfere!)
I think the humans should just be given ultimate.
@@ProjektTaku Yup, that's ONE good option, but I aso think that things like Kaioken, Android tech, and "Spirit Control" would be other really GREAT options to keep them relevant too! (Or all of the above, lol!)
@@ArthurEKing8472 I think android tech would kinda take away from them being humans, but the rest sound good. I could easily see someone like piccolo, who can regenerate and mediates a lot, learning kaioken and spirit control with yardratz would fit him very well. I also could see tien learning kaioken and spirit fission, since he already has a technique where he splits into 2 or 4 people. But ultimate I feel is the most realistic and best power up for them, since all it would take is a day or 2, which is nothing if they're using the room of spirit and time. I would love to see ultimate tien.
@@ProjektTaku Well it kinda depends on the way they use the android tech honestly (In My Opinion). In my own What If's I often include Android Tech as a human-upgrade, BUT not really the same as the android tech from 17/18. Instead, it's android tech that does things like making their bodies more resilient, so that kaioken is easier to deal with, or a form of "Computer-Controlled perfected Kaio-Ken" where instead of their entire bodies activating the same level of kaio-ken simultaneously, ONLY those parts that NEED to have kaioken active, activate it, and they ONLY activate it to the lowest level needed... Thereby lessening the total energy-loss, and stamina-drain, while keeping the total power the same, or possibly even allowing them to achieve higher levels of kaio-ken.
Another methodology I use, is to combine Master Roshi's "Max Power" form, with the Spirit Control Techniques of Gigantification, and miniaturization... Because the Max Power form could make your body physically strong enough to handle higher levels of Kaio-ken, and increase your over-all power, BUT it's big bulky muscles, would make fighting hard, (like Ultra Super Saiyan, or Grade 3 SSJ). However, if they can use Spirit-control techniques to morph their bodies AFTERWARDS to be sleeker, and more evenly proportioned... You could make an exceedingly powerful option for the humans, that makes them all able to fight at MUCH higher levels over-all... And make people like Chaiotzu (who's body is so physically diminutive, that he can't really "fight" in the traditional sense) an actual physical powerhouse, or threat.
Also there were other Red Ribbon Army tech that were used to "activate" people's ESP abilities (Like General Blue) and those same kinds of technologies could be used to activate hidden abilities of the humans too. Or even using the Ultra Divine Water. Fighting with psychic powers AND Ki could be a potent combination!
Or in any story that includes Turles, the Fruit from the Tree of Might.
Or using Baba-Di's Magic...
There are SO many options that the humans could have potentially used (and abused) to make up the difference between themselves and the Saiyans... And these just scratch the surface!
@@ArthurEKing8472 I think android tech for humans (which I still don't want) should be an infinite energy engine like android 17 and 18, so they can fight continuously and use kaioken at higher levels, along with training harder. But I really think ultimate is the way to go for humans, along with kaioken. But the tree of might fruit could also work, along with the babidi majin boost.
YES ITS FINALLY HERE I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR SO LONG, I ALREADY KNOW I WILL LOVE THIS
Man that was good, I can't wait for the next part of this rewrite.
This is great, just like all your videos. Can't wait to see more of this!
It would be amazing seeing this in drawn form, as an actual manga. a story in another timeline/dimension or whatever. I like the changes alot, makes the story a bit more intricate and really more natural in a way. awesome man!
I do have an incling that Moro would fit so much more into this story for some reason.. cant wait too see what changes you do to the story arcs, or if you'll remove them entirely!
This was a pretty good rewrite good job.
Yeesss it’s finally here!!!!!!
This was fantastic. I can not wait for the next part.
I too have been dabbling in rewriting Dragon Ball as of late. The idea of taking everything DB already has and reworking it to make things just a bit different is always fun.
Long time coming but I'm here for it all 👌
Bro you legit just saved my day
Very excited to see where this goes. Can't wait for the next one!
One of the best videos i have ever seen. This rewrite is amazing.
Can't wait to see this continue, as this is a cool premise!
It's magnificent dude, love this story already.
I can already tell this is going to be one hell of a series
This is amazing
PLEASE CONTINUE IT
I am so excited for the next part this is ez one of the best what if idk thing I ever heard and I seen what if for 4 years
i think the storytelling is very interesting.and i cant wait to see where you go with this rewrite.
That was...beautiful. Man, now I REALLY wish this was how Super...well, started at the very least
I’ve been looking forward to this!
Love your content, keep up the good work.
I actually really like the idea of them losing access to their Super Saiyan forms after gaining god ki. Since the Super Saiyan forms require anger and releasing tons of ki at once it makes sense that they couldn't do that since they use god ki now, which is the antithesis of that. Also Super Saiyan God being called Saiyan God is a nice change, I can only assume that Super Saiyan Blue will be called Super Saiyan God now which makes way more sense.
It's incredible bro, bring the next part ASAP
already 5 minutes into the video, and i love the involvement of the new generation. introducing goten, trunks, gotenks, and gohan/gohan’s incredible potential, then focusing entirely on goku? it was one of the things i wanted to see changed in dragon ball. also, beerus’ incompetence? yeah its comedic, later on, but it doesn’t make sense. i love the rewrite!
This was sooooo good I need another part asap please
Loving this already!!
Yeah I'm really enjoying this story can't wait to see where you're going with this. I like beers being a more active and attentive deity actually there both helping and working with The Mortals of his universe as opposed to how he used to be
"I had to plan ahead"
Akira Toriyama is amazed. He didn't know this was possible
Something I’ve always wanted from Super was an evil Grand Priest arc where the Tournament of Power was a multiversal conspiracy. This was shown in Canon where the Grand Priest and the Angle smiled when the first Universe got erased.
Not gonna lie this is really good! I can’t wait to see more!
THIS... IS... BANGING!!! I LOVE IT!!! There's hope for Super yet.
I absolutely adore it! It’s amazing and I can’t wait for more 👍🏻
Personally I feel more hyped for the next part of this than I did watching DBS itself, but maybe that comes from the fact that I got into DBS after the ToP had already ended.
You think if beerus was so scared of dying he'd have the kais live with him
Very good job! The re-write is good!
Super Saiyan God? More like Super Saiyan Gone !
I really like the changes, hyped for next part!
FINALLY ITS HERE
This is gonna be awesome I can tell already
Love the concepts brooooo
Already loving this rewrite, I always disliked how Vegeta went back to wanting to surpass Goku in Super
I'm generally very excited for this dudeee
Salad Saiyan in the future I want to be as famous as you
Thank you salad I wanted this for a week thanks
@Salad Saiyan I JUST CAME TO WATCH THIS VIDEO FROM YOUR WHAT IF SALAD WAS IN DB. THAT WHAT IF WAS FUCKING FIRE!!!
I love that you're doing this and I'm here for the ride. If there's a chance you don't have the entire series planned out yet and you're looking to take ideas, I always wondered how it would be if super reworked the concept of the shadow dragons or properly introduced an antagonist group of demons from the demon realm that dabura is king of into an actual mini war arc. Oh and also this is just me and of course this is your rewrite, but personally I think the goku black arc would have been more impacting if it was future gohan or goten black