Learn from the Blender Community: Rating your Artworks!
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- Опубліковано 13 лип 2024
- Let's review your Blender Artworks!
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You all submitted some crazy cool stuff and in this video we'll go over a couple of them and see what can be improved and changes. Oh and I'll also rate them! Let me know if you want me to make more of these videos. Thank you @Noggi_3D for being a part of this vid!
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Robo in Glass - Abobla
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Fjords - Science Labrador
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Perricone Cosmetics - Ahmudul Hossain
/ ahmudz213
Body Sculpt - Anonemus
www.artstation.com/anonemus
Sweden Landscape - Reinspieler
www.artstation.com/reinspieler
LEGO Sandbox - Mount Myriad
@MountMyriad
P.T. Remastered - Alexandros Darky
@alexandrosdarky
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Chapters:
00:00 Intro
00:40 Artwork #1 - Robo in Glass
02:46 Artwork #2 - Fjords
05:49 Artwork #3 - Perricone Cosmetics
07:06 Artwork #4 - Body Sculpt
09:03 Artwork #5 - Sweden Landscape
11:12 Artwork #6 - LEGO Sandbox
14:19 Artwork #7 - P.T. Remastered
15:48 Outro
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Thanks for reviewing my artwork!, It's the first one, I'll keep the scale in mind next time lol.
It was a nice artwork! Thanks for submitting it 🙌🏻
It was really well done! I liked it very much. (he mentioned the scale of the objects already) The thing he didn't mention that I missed was a slight focused shadow from the glass, and caustics of course. If you turn a glass like that one upside down on any surface like that it will have 1mm of gap between the surface and the glass, in fact, under any object you set upon a surface there will be a slight gap/shadow line. This is something I've learned over the years is a tiny detail that makes a big difference. But otherwise excellent render/concept!
I don't understand how a plate glass and cutlery can at all be judged by scale, there are many variations all around the world, the more I think about this being a critique the more it bothers me that they were docked points because of it, ok then how big is a plate ? Definitively can't have small plates I guess they don't exsist ? very confusing to me, I'd argue it's even more clever on the artists part choosing everything in the image has no defined scale irl, that is clever to me.
@@soulplayrt463 yes lol, I just realised a few days ago that it might be a saucer
@@Ab_obla I was thinking that it was a plate and cutlery that the robot would use. I've got no clue why but that was the first thing I thought of..
Robo in glass definitely deserves more than 2.5/5! It's got great mood and story telling and the robot's quite charming. With that said, the utensils' scale is a bit weird and the levitating spoon on the right bothers me and the glass material is a bit too perfect, but cmon, that's at least 3.5/5.
Fair enough! I did really like it. The thing is though with a 0-5 scale things tend to fall on the lower end quicker, as the top notch pieces usualyl only get 4ish out of 5! But you're feedback is noted and I think the creator is happy to hear you like the work! :-D
Thank you
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@@polardyth8300 the nerd emoji isnt something trendy on the internet its used for comments who takes it too seriously but this guy is fine with the score and the robo glass mood
@@DeletedDevilDeletedAngel it is what i want it to be 🤓
Bro when you said "Scale" I heard "Skill" 💀 I was listening to this like a podcast so I didn't see the text and I thought "Damn, man ended his career." 😭
Lol, sorry English isn't my first language, but I guess you figured that already!
On the first one , the artist missed the opportunity to use Caustics with the glass. Instead it was flat shadows.
Oh good one yeah they could've done that for sure!
Thanks for the feedback 👍
I just want to say what you made is absolutely incredible. Great job and I hope to be this good someday.
New video
AND
Hotly anticipated collab?!
I must be dreaming
Great tips in here Kaizen!
Hahah yeah props to Noggi for doing this! Thanks again mr. Smeaf 💪
This is a great way for viewers to see what other people are doing & compare their own work . I think sometimes the average blender user might get a bit disheartened that that their work isn't as good as the pro's. These videos show us tips & remedies from art work sent in by the average Joe.
Great video 👍🏼🦘🐨
Completely agree and this was exactly the point! Showing artworks from all ranges of artists so people can learn and see what others make.
Wow, that Lego animation is neat 👌
It really is amazing!
I love the format! Please do more of these
at the sand video. the slightly moving camera is also very very good way to trick the eye. good old tricks still do the job.
with the horror light stuff i agree. the anamorphic lens flares are also got rules to when and where to apply.
Das was du machst ist super. Ich finde es super wichtig uns kleineren Künstlern Feedback zugeben.. Wir haben fast keine Chance echtes Feedback von Leuten mit Fachkompetenz zuerhalten, was aber entscheident ist. Super vielen Dank das du mir geholfen hast! Und mach weiter so!
What you are doing is great. I think it's super important to give feedback to us smaller artists.... We have almost no chance to get real feedback from people with expertise, which is crucial. Thank you so much for helping me! And keep up the good work!
Danke schön und gern geschehen. Es macht mir froh das zu hören! Dein Artwork war gut und mit ein paar Anpassungen noch viel besser.
I have to disagree about the fog. It's an absolute staple of Swedish landscape photography. However, the lighting through the fog is wrong which makes it feel flat and composited rather 3-dimensional. EDIT: You did mention the flatness.
Haha ok well I guess it could very well be! Yeah it can probably use a lot more lighting and contrast in this case, or even just upping the anisotropy on the volume might help!
Wow! You discovered our LEGO 3D Blender Mecabricks Niche!
Haha I love LEGO and in 3D it's equally cool!
Love the editing on this one!
Thank you! Appreciate that 😊👌🏻
I love that Fjord render so much. Also love the video as usual
It's so good! And thanks, appreciate it.
That’s great! Keep it up ❤
Thank you! Will do!
Well, about the swedish landscape one, I believe the fog is very much representing the way swedens climate is, depending on time of day, this looks like a relatively early morning render, meaning the fog makes sense, it very much brings it to life, and makes it just feel right.
Thanks for your feedback! I agre that fog can be accurate. I think though in this case it's not pairing up nicely with the scenery. Maybe it needs less blue sky to work? Less saturation even overall? Not sure, but to me ti doesn't feel entirely correct in the way it's presented now!
you are so underated, this video is so interesting and captivating. Everything you pointed out I went, "Ooh.. I didn't think of that," but it all makes sense.
Thanks a lot, very kind of you! Glad you liked the video.
Cool!
Thanks!
I couldn’t believe the Lego one was made in Blender, and who guessed, it wasn’t. (I am talking about the sand simulation)
Haha yeah that's true, but it's practically impossible to do in Blender properly. So I get the choice for Houdini. The rest was all done in Blender though and it looks astonishing!
15:10 Me, with astigmatism, hearing "Lens flares are not happening without lenses"
Uhhh 😅 well on one hand that sucks, but lens flares are pretty cool most of the time
@@KaizenTutorials Nights looked like a movie. Don't have them when wearing glasses, but they can get REALLY intense, especially after a long day.
your videos are getting better and better. Just wanted to give you this feedback! love this video
Thanks a lot! I really try to grow at editing, storytelling, presentation and overall video quality. So it means a lot to get this feedback!
@@KaizenTutorials I know that feeling, I also appreciate feedback so much - people arent aware of how much it means to creators :D Do you have IG ?
I do and yeah you’re right! 🤗 Same name on IG!
@@KaizenTutorials followed you there 💪 You also speak german right?
"However, a lensflare is someting that occurs when using a camera, and not necessary when looking at somehting through your own eyes."
Me and all the people that have astigmatisme but don't know it yet: "Are you sure about that?"
Woops sorry :-( time to go see an eye doctor I guess
looks dope
Yeah amazing artworks were submitted!
For the first animation it was a saucer with tea utensils
It might be, but then still the scale is off in general on the scene I think.
👏👏👏 This makes me realize how bad I am at blender
Nah, see it as inspiration! Anyone can get to these levels. Keep on trying, learning and growing and one day you'll get there!
Imagine he went the whole video not noticing the lense cap was on
Haha I’ve been there before.. wasted a lot of time. Also recorded a lot without turning my mic on 😂
Hi, this is really cool ? will you do another one in the future ? how do we submit our renders ?
Maybe, it depends on how the vid performs and how much people like it! But if I do, I'll probably do something like a dedicated e-mail adress for it!
The mountain picture is a Norwegian mountain in a famous place called the trolltounge/trolltunga.
Aah cool, didn't know that. Thanks!
Your Squarespace ad 😆
Hahaha yeah I really tried to make it entertaining, so I hope that worked :-D
"This is one of the best projects I've seen: 2.5 cubes"
Hahaha whelp, yeah the 1-5 scale can be a bit confusing!
these are really really good tips!!!!
EDIT:(at least for me)
This is a great comment! Atleast for me ;-)
Comparing a tuned up (literally faked colors) picture without fog to a render where someone clearly wanted fog in it makes no sense at all :/
I get what you mean, but I think they didn’t necessarily want fog. I think they thought it belonged in the scene! But I might be wrong. They did say they didn’t like the flat colors because of the fog in their submission though. Either way in my opinion it doesn’t need to be there.
@@KaizenTutorialshhh yeah. The biggest sin of my work is what you mentioned. I wanted to add depth to the image and make the trees border blend better but i couldnt get the volume to be how i wanted. I really picked my most rushed render, but that was I think part of the concept. Thank You so much for giving me such valuable feedback. Grüße aus Berlin ;)
12:59 Bro?! WHAT IS THAT SIGN ON THAT STONE AT THE END OF THE PATH?! 🤨🤨🤨💀💀
What sign, what stone, what path?!
@@KaizenTutorials ok you maybe can see it better at 12:58 you have to zoom in on that shrine at the end of that "stoneway" (in the middle between the houses)
And if you dont know what i mean... there is a "hitler sign" 😬
1:56 what are u talking about man, the silverware looks absolutely tiny compared to the cup. The plate and silverware aren’t even close in size, I’d actually say the plate sizing could work in some scenarios. Only the plate
Could be either. Something is off that's for sure!
the sand looks like fuzz not sand. Like almost a lint. Just has the material of sand scattered
Hmm I don't really see that. Looks like pretty solid sand to me as far as 3D sand goes!
@@KaizenTutorials especially when the Lego man holds his hands up. It looks like little ball particles string together by little strands which makes it look kinda like lint.
Nice video. Where did people submit their artworks?
I created a Google form for this, which is now closed! However if I do more of these vids I'll probably setup a dedicated email for it.
@@KaizenTutorials thanks. Have you ever thought of creating a discord? It might help quite alot.
Issue with #1: no glass caustic onto the table. And I'm not sure how there is lighting on the robots head that's so bright relative to his body and scene.
Thanks for the feedback! Always good for anyone to improve their work.
Do more!
Maybe I will, thanks!
My god you are looking way to much into the first one, it’s fine and a great picture.
I get the nature of the video but wow.
Thanks for the feedback. Maybe I was yeah, but like you said that was part of the video premise.
What if it's just tiny cutlery and a tiny plate, those do exsist and the question how big is a fish somewhat applies here, how big is a knife fork spoon plate or glass, well that doesn't really have an answer does it ?
I guess that could be it.
The sand looks more like dust
Hmm I don't really see it, but ok!
Will your also review the other artworks?
Maybe in a future video, if this one is received well! But even then I won't review all of them, as there are too many and I have to make a selection to keep the video somewhat short.
epic video so much to learn btw where can i submit mine work :)
Thanks! Currently nowhere. But if this video goes well I'll do more of those and create some way for you guys to start submitting work again!
Why do i feel like, you watch blender guru, and benny productions? :D
I have noooooo idea 😜
Funny that there's no info about that Lego sequence anywhere online. Just seemed to be a casual hobby project for the guy.
Yep it is! Just passion fueled art 💪
@@KaizenTutorials Where did you find the video originally?
@@trevc it was submitted to me when I asked everyone to send in artworks for me to rate and review
TEH GLASS HAS A SHADOW 0_)
Well glasses tend to have some shadowing?
I cannot believe the first submition was rated 2.5... in my humble opinion (very very humble since I don't know shit) I think it deserves 3.5... as for the scaling issue maybe it's not a glass maybe it's a bowl
I hear ya and I can agree aswell. It was moreso rated vs. the other submissions for the vid. It was a solid piece! And yeah maybe it is a bowl, haha.
Great video kaizen 💯
,,how do i participate in future submissions ?
Thank you! There's currently no way to aprticipate. If I'll do another one of these I'll post a community post with a link to a submission form. So make sure to subscribe and keep your eyes peeled!
There are tiny plates, i have some at my home
Its about 10 cm in diameter
haha true! But then still the glass is huge?
If it takes you that much time to point out and explain then it certainly should not be considered an "obvious" flaw. And it was an awesome creation, way better than 2.5
Great to hear you like the piece, I do agree it's well done! I have to rate it based on the other pieces as well, so that why I gave a 2,5 star rating. However me taking time to explain doesn't dismiss the point in my opinion.
@@KaizenTutorials fair enough response. Though, in comparison, 2.5 is still considerably low, particularly since it was compared to video examples with audio.
As a suggestion, perhaps keep the comparisons on the same level. Normally I wouldn't engage this much on someone's opinion but since it relates to other people's work, I advise more caution and consideration with public ratings. At least keep it fair
8:19 does noggi have a sk e-sports chair?
I asked him and yes, he does!
@@KaizenTutorials oh cool thanks!
why all elements' shadow not interacting with light? Time stamp 6:58 @KaizenTutorials
Not sure what you mean? It seems to interact just fine to me?
i can't even curve a 3d shape lmfao
Haha keep at it and one day you'll be amazing!
1:30 isnt the glass alot closer?
Don't think so, but maybe!
I am Participating in the endless engine challenge by pwnisher but before submitting to him, I would like your feedback on my render. where should I send my render?
The submissions for this video have been closed! But if the reception is any good I’ll probably do another in the future. But that will be after the pwnisher challemge is over!
@@KaizenTutorials okay
@@mdoz - He put a link to his discord server in the pinned comment. You could join and look for the appropriate channel. I'm certain you could get plenty of feedback there. 👍
I have joined the discord server. Thank you for suggesting.
like for the gobo
Haha yeah they're cool!
my renders are nothing in front of these renders😅....fr these renders are lit🔥.
Everyone needs and deserves feedback. So IF I do another one of these vids, don't hesitate to submit your work!
@@KaizenTutorialsohk bro i wont hesitate to submit my renders ....thx for motivating me 😀.
this video gets 2 cubes
Not your cup of tea? 😅
dude it's supposed to be small,it's plate for coffee and the spoon is for sugar like lol
I get what you mean, but then still the glass is pretty huge. I spoke to the original creator and they mentioned that they indeed forgot to check the scale!
The body sculpt is $4 🙃
What do you mean?
@@KaizenTutorials a typo in the chapter names... Instead of #4, it's written $4 🙃
Got another issue, your ranking the animations higher then the images, now I can understand the quality of the animations meaning they get a high rank, however where that becomes an issue is the teachers apple parodox, if multiple students all make great looking class projects, but one student did even more with it, you have to judge the quality, not the apple your also given, it's fine to rank effort so long as anything which is lesser isn't ranked as lessor, because at that point you have the paradox, because there was more submitted, should not automatically mean the others submitted without apples or had less, are worse in ranking, quality is what matters not oh it's animated so anything not animated is half as worse. I'm not saying you are doing this, however I am picking up on the fact there is no real way that I can see your not doing that. Why you are not pausing the initial first image of the animation and also ranking that beside the others, or why animation isn't its own category I honestly don't understand.
Hmm good insights, and maybe it is unfair to judge animation vs. stills. I'd say you can put in more effort and get a better look for a signle frame though. So comparing the 2 is fair because you can get the still to always look better than the animation. But thanks for the feedback!
size
medium or large?
remove the fog? why? it’s foggy.
Well it's obviously a matter of opinion. But I feel it's out of place and in this case limits the potential of the image.
triggered by preview, but sand made with houdini, this is cheating
Well doing it in Blender is near impossible, so I guess it's the only way for now. The rest is all done in Blender though, animation, rendering etc!
i think you could be more transparent about your biases. It is clear you dislike dark, desaturated and 'moody' renders (and as you could have guessed, i am the opposite), and on both landscape renders you criticized them on what made them great, which is the moodyness, the fog and the lack of vibrant, happy colors. That is not to say, of course, that you are wrong in your tips but it was clear to me that some of these got harsher judgement for their different style, which again is not necessairly wrong, just sad. even though, great video.
Thanks for your feedback. I honestly don't like dark and moody at all. Better yet, I actually prefer it. The thing with dark and moody is that it needs to be done well for it to work and the setting it's in should work for the vibe. Using a blue, clear sky and going for moody just dont work together. So I'm not looking at this from any type of prejudiced manner, I just look at this from a 'realism' standpoint. But to be fair I could've specified my feedback to be more geared towards the image provided and instead of leaning on one side (a blue sky) lean on having to change the sky to keep e.g. the fog in.
@@KaizenTutorials oh that makes sense i think
Talk about nitpicking.
Well yeah that's kinda the idea here. Showcasing what to improve, how to add additional realism and taking artworks that might be a 9/10 to a 10/10!
02:41 Nope. It's because Benny Productions uses Pixels. And cubes are the most creative thing you could come up with.
Ngl I took inspiration from him for sure! But just using stars seemed a bit bland and rating a number out of 10 didn't feel right!
@@KaizenTutorials You don't have to justify your decision to a troll. I think using cubes to rate blender renders is a cool idea
Not necessarily justifying, more so explaining haha! In the end I mostly still do what I want anyways 😝 but thanks, glad you like it!
12:58 for a second i thought there was some nazi shit there
Haha well yeah it looks very similar. It's almost always inverted though and it's a very common symbol in many asian countries as it belongs in buddhism and hinduism religion.
I disagree, normalize smaller plate sizes. smaller plates exist. 🤣
Haha yeah they do. But should they be paired with GIANT glasses then? ;-)
Do something with Ai ;
Maybe I will, thanks for the suggestion!
Bro can not pronounce Scale to save his life 💀
Whoops, English is not my 1st language. But I guess you figured that out.
@@KaizenTutorials neither is mine but its cool, it makes it more fun to listen to