the personal statement that GOT ME INTO OXFORD

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  • today i’m sharing how i wrote a personal statement for oxford. i've broken it down into a simple, 5-paragraph structure for writing your personal statement - and you can use it for any UK university!
    remember that everything will work out fine - just put your best writing into it, and remember to ask someone to read it over with you!
    with love,
    kwok
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  • @kwok
    @kwok  3 роки тому +62

    remember that this really shouldn't be a stressful experience - give it your best shot, and make sure you take a look a the samples i shared with you. i hope they're helpful, & best of luck!
    with love,
    kwok

  • @chq2252
    @chq2252 11 місяців тому +41

    You write so elegantly and formally! Thank you for the tips! I need to revise my personal statement haha

  • @harryburns8304
    @harryburns8304 3 роки тому +15

    Honestly your videos are sosos helpful. Writing a personal statement was always such a daunting thing but this makes it seem so much more accessible and simple. Thank you for helping future uni students out!

  • @aadilahkhan9166
    @aadilahkhan9166 3 роки тому +4

    yes, you're back !!!!

  • @user-xb6pb1jt3k
    @user-xb6pb1jt3k 5 місяців тому +2

    You are so well-spoken and have great and straightforward tips! Thank you!

  • @charie2973
    @charie2973 3 роки тому +5

    Thank you for sharing your wisdom in this video. I am not writing a personal statement but your structure is helping me to shape my answers better! - for the questions i got asked in my job application. Love your vibe and your content ;)

  • @gretatachirai391
    @gretatachirai391 2 роки тому +2

    I just wanted to say that i considered a lot of ps videos in order to write a perfect ps and this was by far the best ur tips and structure was very helpful and allowed me to write an interesting cv!!! THANK YOU SO MUCHHHH

  • @Yoongles732
    @Yoongles732 8 місяців тому +13

    Omg this has been the most informative personal statement video ive seen yet! Very detailed and yet so quick to understand! Thank you!

  • @rotemalm2002
    @rotemalm2002 7 місяців тому +4

    Thank you so so much! I was so lost and I used your tips ans structure and it helped me and calmed me dow so much and now I have something great to work with!! I'm pretty proud of what I have so far and the credit totally goes to you!! will come back to update if I got in!

  • @emilkrastev3208
    @emilkrastev3208 3 роки тому +5

    Congratulations on reaching 2(.39)K subscribers!:) Hope to see this channel grow because your content is amazing :)

  • @romanstaszak244
    @romanstaszak244 11 місяців тому +2

    Fantastic video 😀👍 Straight to the points in very short and informative way. I like very much its simplicity. I am going to use your hints and tips for my personal statement. Once again thank
    you very much Kwok 😀👍

  • @edithc5243
    @edithc5243 3 роки тому

    Thank you, kwok! for all of your videos and sharing. ❤️🎈

  • @lensofdidion
    @lensofdidion 6 місяців тому

    The amount of time I have watched this video. THANK U THANK U THANK U. Wishing you the best

  • @maazhmd_
    @maazhmd_ 3 роки тому +10

    Thank you Kwok for helping me out with my personal statement.I'm currently a final year student at high school from India and I intend to apply to the reputed colleges in the UK for my undergraduate study in law.Giving us all a glimpse of your own personal statement was really thoughtful of you and gave me an idea as to how should I structure my personal statement.Thanks once again😊

  • @amandadean2620
    @amandadean2620 5 місяців тому

    Thank you so much for sharing your actual statements ❤

  • @butterflyeatsgrapes
    @butterflyeatsgrapes 25 днів тому

    This is the best video I've ever watched! Made my day so much 🌻🔆😭

  • @milktpapiv-3815
    @milktpapiv-3815 3 роки тому +2

    Why do I love your vibe already

    • @kwok
      @kwok  3 роки тому +1

      & i love your comment

  • @chiazammbadugha8567
    @chiazammbadugha8567 3 роки тому +1

    this was so helpful!!!! Thank youuuuuu

  • @CarmenLopez-hk3ri
    @CarmenLopez-hk3ri 3 роки тому

    This video was very helpful! thank you!❤️

  • @nobody-mm7pi
    @nobody-mm7pi 12 днів тому

    This is soo sooo helpful, thank you very much..

  • @sagewydleshire2037
    @sagewydleshire2037 3 роки тому +5

    😄This is so kind of you Kwok;😊 You’re actually almost writing the personal statement for us viewers.😄 I am so grateful that I found you. Although it was not a long video,😸 this was a really rich,❄️ plentiful content that you created.⛄️ With those tips that you gave us, our personal statements would be verisimilar.😃🌟 thank you very much.💥 May God bless you, amazing person✨. Also may you find all your desires in front of your eyes soon.💫

  • @maxied2549
    @maxied2549 3 роки тому +40

    The first paragraph of your law personal statement is so sad to read in light of what's happening now😢

  • @Jamie-nt3eh
    @Jamie-nt3eh 8 місяців тому

    You are obviously very intelligent which helps allot!

  • @selene._.2235
    @selene._.2235 3 роки тому

    Hello kwok, a lil fan of yours from Hong Kong! I’m inspired by you around a year ago and since then aspired to be an oxford law student too! Would you please make a video on LNAT as well? I would be really grateful to know more about what is happening on the day of the test beforehand since LNAT is really stressful to me(and some of my friends)!

  • @Julia-ku5vy
    @Julia-ku5vy 3 роки тому +3

    Thank you so so so much for this video!

    • @kwok
      @kwok  3 роки тому

      you're so welcome!!!!

  • @lamlamco275
    @lamlamco275 3 роки тому +1

    Thank you so much!!!

  • @kaelynng2549
    @kaelynng2549 3 роки тому +1

    I LOVE UR VIDEOSS! As a year 1 law student, I'm curious to know how u study law i.e. notes/reading skills! Can u share about them? Thank you ;)

  • @Ilya_012
    @Ilya_012 6 місяців тому

    Thank you ❤

  • @Void-fc6jn
    @Void-fc6jn 8 місяців тому +4

    If you don't mind me asking, what was your score on the LNAT? Awesome vido!!! Definitely alleviated some of my stress about applying to uni.

  • @brandonl0504
    @brandonl0504 3 роки тому +1

    Hii, can u make a video on LNAT? Thanks!

  • @nicole1789
    @nicole1789 3 роки тому +3

    Oof that first paragraph hits different rn..

  • @hambun367
    @hambun367 3 роки тому +1

    I prefer oxford then Harvard. I think if I get into oxford {hopefully a scholarship} I’ll pick medical school 🦋 this really helped me improve on my studying to make my parents proud

  • @sudecapoglu584
    @sudecapoglu584 2 роки тому

    Thank you for the absolutely amazing content and video. I was wondering whether you, or someone you kindly direct to, would be able to review a personal statement. Thanks so much again. Greetings🌸

  • @zahra-kz1dj
    @zahra-kz1dj 2 роки тому

    is it okay if i dont put line breaks? bc my line exceeds the 47 limit :(

  • @Elvis-guy1973
    @Elvis-guy1973 5 місяців тому

    "Going beyond the books", paragraph 3 got me stuck. Iv'e had no work experience in my chosen course(Social Policy & Social Change) how should I write this?

  • @afrazahmed6437
    @afrazahmed6437 6 місяців тому

    HI, I am applying soon enough and plz need someone to tell me how my personal statement looks. Someone who is experienced . Plz if someone can help me

  • @valentineparlhomenko-shevc4561
    @valentineparlhomenko-shevc4561 Місяць тому

    im cryin what am i supposted to write if my english is awful and i havent read any smart books😭😭

  • @Elvis-guy1973
    @Elvis-guy1973 5 місяців тому

    Paragraph 4 is really easy?🤔I didnt do particularly well at school. I'm attempting to be a mature student. So what should I put here?

  • @thegirlnamedashmita1969
    @thegirlnamedashmita1969 3 роки тому

    Hi! Thanks for this amazing video. Can I send my written personal statement to you for reading and checking what's wrong in it. It shall help me a lot. Please le me know how can I give you?

  • @phasc5605
    @phasc5605 Рік тому

    did you apply for 2 courses?

  • @user-km5ms7kk9h
    @user-km5ms7kk9h 3 місяці тому

    Can you kindly help me polish up my ps 😢

  • @eirena831
    @eirena831 2 роки тому

    struggling with my final version of law PS, i should watched this helpful video earlier...

  • @negaraaa
    @negaraaa Рік тому +1

    where do i find this pre-university books to read that you mentioned?

    • @kwok
      @kwok  Рік тому

      here's a useful one, it includes many subjects' suggested readings :)
      www.ox.ac.uk/admissions/undergraduate/courses/suggested-subject-resources

  • @chq2252
    @chq2252 8 місяців тому

    😮‍💨 my personal statement is full of I and Me. It sounds like a 5yr old wrote it 😭

  • @adams2735
    @adams2735 3 роки тому

    The banana break! XD

    • @adams2735
      @adams2735 3 роки тому +1

      omg there's a second one

  • @zainabasli2308
    @zainabasli2308 3 роки тому

    I am sorry but would you mind check mine, if you have time ofc