How to write an AMAZING Space Opera! (NOT CLICKBAIT!)

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  • @basedtvrk9125
    @basedtvrk9125 2 роки тому +309

    this feels more like an episode of terrible writing advice

    • @viridityone3106
      @viridityone3106 2 роки тому +6

      I know right

    • @marocat4749
      @marocat4749 2 роки тому +3

      Notice him sempai.

    • @SimonClarkstone
      @SimonClarkstone 2 роки тому +22

      TWA would never go more than 1 minute without talking about himself.

    • @juicebox9465
      @juicebox9465 2 роки тому +18

      We went for 5 minutes without mentioning the love triangle!

    • @morri254
      @morri254 2 роки тому

      i feel like james has had a few episodes that did.. but i am loving the affect

  • @samuelbarber6177
    @samuelbarber6177 2 роки тому +168

    Also, make it a trilogy. The first part will seem somewhat self contained, but the next two will only make sense if viewed or read together.

    • @TAP7a
      @TAP7a 2 роки тому +10

      Exactly, make sure the way in which your stories were funded is blatantly obvious in your narrative structure
      Otherwise it’s obviously not a real space opera

    • @blupdaboloh
      @blupdaboloh 2 роки тому +4

      Ouch.
      I'm writing my own novel and feel called out.

    • @DeltafangEX
      @DeltafangEX 2 роки тому +2

      @@blupdaboloh Seconding this. I am working on an tertiary plot that carries forward throughout more than one book, but otherwise I hope to make each novel somewhat self-contained. 🖊

  • @mclovinjr9086
    @mclovinjr9086 2 роки тому +208

    Long hair James is making me feel a certain type of way.

    • @user-ny1wo1vp9r
      @user-ny1wo1vp9r 2 роки тому +10

      Can relate

    • @tieler151
      @tieler151 2 роки тому +23

      Long hair looks good on u bro keep at that length. Keep up the good content dawg.

    • @mollof7893
      @mollof7893 2 роки тому +3

      _( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)_

    • @PlatinumAltaria
      @PlatinumAltaria 2 роки тому +49

      That type of way had better be a profound Christian reverence for the glory of God.

    • @AzraelAngel945
      @AzraelAngel945 2 роки тому +2

      I know, right?

  • @abcdef27669
    @abcdef27669 2 роки тому +133

    Extra Rule: Put some german military songs on UA-cam when you writing battle scenes. And sex scenes.

    • @a.morphous66
      @a.morphous66 2 роки тому +15

      “Oh yeah baby, GOTT MIT UNS!”
      “What the fuck.”
      “Sorry, being horny makes me patriotic.”

    • @johannageisel5390
      @johannageisel5390 2 роки тому +3

      My favourite: ua-cam.com/video/HYJmGaBMQJ8/v-deo.html

    • @truegemuese
      @truegemuese 2 роки тому +5

      @@johannageisel5390 Ernst Busch geht immer.

  • @rifatmeer1975
    @rifatmeer1975 2 роки тому +55

    Funny how Dune checks out nearly all of these and the first book at least is good.

  • @miliczhasthoughts
    @miliczhasthoughts 2 роки тому +27

    Thank you James for validating me. I might be slightly biased, but I would say that my space opera is the esact opposite of what you just said. And as someone who strugles with imposter syndrome, I actully feel more confident about it now. Thank you. :)

  • @austenbin4068
    @austenbin4068 2 роки тому +28

    "The future of humanity must be steak!"
    Me: I couldn't agree more.

    • @johannageisel5390
      @johannageisel5390 2 роки тому +3

      Aliens, who want to eat humans: "Thank you for agreeing with us."

    • @mattd5240
      @mattd5240 2 роки тому

      Steak liara, think about so much steak

    • @Casedilla73
      @Casedilla73 Рік тому

      Except it tastes like chicken

  • @gingerkatherina
    @gingerkatherina 2 роки тому +17

    Oh, it's (NOT CLICKBAIT!) my favorite kind of clickbait ❤️

  • @mollof7893
    @mollof7893 2 роки тому +101

    No girlz??? Who will make a love tetrahedragon with my male characters?!? :(( :(( :((

    • @JamesTullos
      @JamesTullos  2 роки тому +115

      The other male characters, duh. Nothing gay about kissing your bros.

    • @mollof7893
      @mollof7893 2 роки тому +13

      @@JamesTullos #nohomo tho *kisses*

    • @daniel6678
      @daniel6678 2 роки тому +7

      GAYS… IN SPACE

    • @limedaleks2851
      @limedaleks2851 2 роки тому

      Kiss your bros no homo

    • @DavidBarkland
      @DavidBarkland 2 роки тому +1

      @@mollof7893 me who's writing a straight up BL mil-SF story:

  • @camelopardalis84
    @camelopardalis84 2 роки тому +28

    Step 1: Don't become addicted to "Decapathon".
    If step 1 doesn't work: Don't befriend a depressed horse.

  • @juia7336
    @juia7336 2 роки тому +5

    This was one of the funniest things I've ever seen, and I loved the character development of the guy over the video... his reading and enunciation got so much better beginning to end! Go him!

  • @youtuber8527
    @youtuber8527 2 роки тому +3

    intergalactic war and alien women….the perfect mixture to create a space opera !

  • @eugenebebs7767
    @eugenebebs7767 2 роки тому +7

    Amazinc dilevery.

  • @Echowhiskeyone
    @Echowhiskeyone 2 роки тому +14

    Use heavy metal and rock'n'roll albums and songs and groups for names of whatever. Cartoons work too.
    Imagine using the Orgasmatron onboard the Blue Falcon from station Hotel California.

  • @dinisnascimento4929
    @dinisnascimento4929 2 роки тому +7

    Thanks James! I will start writing my best seller right now!

  • @alextheghost8211
    @alextheghost8211 2 роки тому +15

    the way hes talking just gives me anxiety

    • @alextheghost8211
      @alextheghost8211 2 роки тому +1

      like he sounds like he drunk and also really really nervous

    • @alextheghost8211
      @alextheghost8211 2 роки тому +4

      @Er-Teeus yeah i kinda forgot about that and i thought it was just part of the character he was doing but that makes sense

  • @therealsugarbitzskelly9780
    @therealsugarbitzskelly9780 2 роки тому +4

    Thank you! I'll take all this super awesome, amazing, brilliant, outstanding, perfect advice to heart

  • @lost_ronzo
    @lost_ronzo 2 роки тому +25

    Just rip off star wars, lawsuit is just a word

    • @darkleome5409
      @darkleome5409 2 роки тому +2

      I'll just rip off Spaceballs

    • @cam4636
      @cam4636 2 роки тому

      @@darkleome5409 Galaxy-brained from a galaxy far far away

  • @pinkgiraffe1718
    @pinkgiraffe1718 2 роки тому +1

    This video is a literal masterpiece, James you have truly outdone yourself

  • @eros6644
    @eros6644 2 роки тому +2

    YOO THE HAIR IS LOOKIN GOOD MY MAN

  • @MarilynRoxie
    @MarilynRoxie 2 роки тому +2

    Grateful to...of being...support patron...space opera...! James Tullos...good job. 🌌

  • @CZsWorld
    @CZsWorld 10 місяців тому +1

    Did anyone write a space opera using this advice? Because I would like to see it.

  • @KamiRecca
    @KamiRecca 2 роки тому +2

    but but but.... I photosynthesis there! Come on dudes!

  • @jestersudz6085
    @jestersudz6085 2 роки тому +3

    bro making me feel bad about my story idea 😭
    (all my characters have regular jobs but its set in the future lol) ig i should do more worldbuilding

  • @jestersudz6085
    @jestersudz6085 2 роки тому

    also im glad ur surgery went well!!! welcome back :0)

  • @taiel5142
    @taiel5142 2 роки тому +4

    James, you ok?

  • @enbylucca541
    @enbylucca541 2 роки тому +4

    i'm guessing the Foundation series is one of the first space operas?

  • @shinaxia7474
    @shinaxia7474 Рік тому

    Thanks, it's been a long time since I've had as much fun as I had on this video 😂

  • @eliasbischoff176
    @eliasbischoff176 2 роки тому +2

    James is wearing a shirt of my favorite cosmere character. I feel seen.

  • @scottmoore7539
    @scottmoore7539 2 роки тому

    New James video let's gooo

  • @FIT2BREAD
    @FIT2BREAD 2 роки тому

    Great video.

  • @secondengineer9814
    @secondengineer9814 2 роки тому +1

    Those patreon requests really got to you, James.

  • @darkkothor
    @darkkothor 2 роки тому +4

    The few who owns the means of... Creating value...
    Yeeeah, I see what you did there XD

    • @oddjam
      @oddjam 2 роки тому +1

      I literally loled when I heard it

  • @secondengineer9814
    @secondengineer9814 2 роки тому +1

    I am a space opera... But you could be part of the cosmere!!!

  • @DominikZezula
    @DominikZezula 2 роки тому +2

    eighteen bamilion dollars

  • @larrackell
    @larrackell 2 роки тому

    I kept wanting to go like this video. I lost count of how many times I tried to like this video in the first six minutes, only to find out I already did.

  • @oddjam
    @oddjam 2 роки тому +1

    This is a pretty phenomenal video. Also congrats on the jaw surgery. You sound fine tbh.

  • @mekingtiger9095
    @mekingtiger9095 Рік тому +1

    2:14 To be fair, even though quantum physics has quite a solid definition and does, indeed, have real applications on real physics, it's very fundamental nature is not nearly as well understood as you seem to imply over here.

  • @moviefiendz
    @moviefiendz 2 роки тому

    Cordelia's Honor

  • @enriquegd2977
    @enriquegd2977 2 роки тому +2

    a bit off-topic: you said in older videos that ancient nation cannot supply large armies, but in the manga kingdom they mention very large armies, and i believe that is historically accurate

    • @henryneubert7798
      @henryneubert7798 2 роки тому +1

      battles in ancient times were really large. In medieval times, armies were small. It's because of the government systems. Ancient societies were united nations, but medieval kingdoms were much more devided into duchies etc. If you are a count, you can supply lets say 5000 men. Your feudal contract says that you have to give 20% of your men to your king which goes for any other count. therefore the king has only 20% of the real military power in the kingdom + his own military from his domain. that's why battles between kingdoms were much smaller than battles between ancient civilizations. There are other factors, but this one is really important.

  • @ianholcombe18
    @ianholcombe18 2 роки тому

    Love that shirt

  • @orionh5535
    @orionh5535 2 роки тому +2

    How to write the perfect clickbait title(Not clickbait!)

  • @BushBumperBaker
    @BushBumperBaker 2 роки тому

    This has big "Film And You: An Instructional Video" vibes by JonCJG lmfao

  • @TAP7a
    @TAP7a 2 роки тому +1

    iNtErPeRsOnaL ReLaTiOnShiPs

  • @koalasandwich567
    @koalasandwich567 2 роки тому +2

    A bit late for April Fools, but nice to see your verified.

  • @cherryjuice9705
    @cherryjuice9705 2 роки тому

    Me who never touched a space novel: I N T E R E S T I N G

  • @milestrombley1466
    @milestrombley1466 2 роки тому +3

    Only hot girls are allowed. 😁

  • @adrikstepanov5307
    @adrikstepanov5307 2 роки тому +10

    Oh, I see, this is a "reversal" type of satire. Do the exact opposite of what is said and you will write a perfect Space Opera. So it should go something like this:
    1. Don't explain the technology.
    2. Don't include magic.
    3. Focus on characters over plot
    4. Exclude white people, don't write in English
    5. Fate of humanity can't be at stake
    6. Don't include male characters
    7. All work needs to be performed by robots.
    8. Spacebattles can't happen.
    So, the only thing that prevents a slice of life anime about the Japanese schoolgirls learning to learn how to play guitar from being the best space opera ever written is ... the absence of robots.

    • @oddjam
      @oddjam 2 роки тому +5

      'This is the future the left wants'

  • @hellocanyouhearme
    @hellocanyouhearme 2 роки тому

    My sister my writer is my favorite space opera

  • @Black_pearl_adrift
    @Black_pearl_adrift 2 роки тому

    I love the shirt

  • @HeortirtheWoodwarden
    @HeortirtheWoodwarden 2 роки тому +1

    He's speaking in a quite Jenny Nicholson-ish style

  • @Arcsin27
    @Arcsin27 Рік тому

    so... is it a problem if i do have some of this stuff? i know its ironic so if its mentioned its probably bad, but a lot of my story hinges on a certain alien species having magic powers...

  • @finalechance7756
    @finalechance7756 2 роки тому

    "Number four *does a Jojo pose* everyone is white and speaks English"

  • @grimreads
    @grimreads 2 роки тому

    Wow, a parody video that is also great advice.

  • @FotakaTefa
    @FotakaTefa 2 роки тому

    Did you do this to fantasy already? Gotta check

  • @alejandrodeugarriza7690
    @alejandrodeugarriza7690 2 роки тому

    The fact that I can't like this twice is utterly unfair.

  • @morethanjustasloth5528
    @morethanjustasloth5528 2 роки тому

    There's no space opera without hot blue alien space women.

    • @rommdan2716
      @rommdan2716 2 роки тому

      And hot gray alien men too :(

  • @heroofthewinds7765
    @heroofthewinds7765 2 роки тому +2

    James sounds pained throughout this entire video(or it could be him adjusting to his jaw surgery)

  • @shiranuiprestonsaga8867
    @shiranuiprestonsaga8867 2 роки тому +1

    Let's go satire

  • @eliananoei652
    @eliananoei652 2 роки тому +1

    I'm getting a slight whiff of irony from this video...

  • @Erika-gn1tv
    @Erika-gn1tv 2 роки тому +1

    What a coincidence. I was just playing Mass Effect. It's... kinda janky.

  • @anthonydavolio981
    @anthonydavolio981 9 місяців тому

    cool guy

  • @milooooooooooooooooooooo
    @milooooooooooooooooooooo 2 роки тому

    this reminds me of bojack horseman is that intended

  • @osrodd2154
    @osrodd2154 Рік тому

    Hey james
    Have you watched logh?

  • @franxz4401
    @franxz4401 2 роки тому

    This video makes me uncomfortable, but I still like you.

  • @kousetsuhana
    @kousetsuhana 2 роки тому

    this is off topic but did you film this after the surgery? your jaw looks so different you look like your own brother instead of yourself o.O

  • @svensonsen1572
    @svensonsen1572 2 роки тому +2

    I'm confused

  • @ShRkDa
    @ShRkDa 2 роки тому

    what is this man talking about? Sexy Alien are what Sci-Fi should be about

  • @Mercenary0712
    @Mercenary0712 2 роки тому

    Am a man from the Balkans, can confirm we are nice, cuddly and never get into any trouble with other Balkan people ever.

  • @gregrobinette8620
    @gregrobinette8620 Рік тому

    0 to 1:25 thats accurate af. LMAO

  • @RSEFX
    @RSEFX 7 місяців тому

    CLICKBAIT OPERA. PEW PEW PEW! ;-7

  • @choaticsmith8065
    @choaticsmith8065 2 роки тому +1

    Just a curious opinion, What’s your opinion on WarHammer 40K? I find it kinda of interesting so, just want an opinion.

  • @samuelbarber6177
    @samuelbarber6177 2 роки тому +1

    Well… On Hitler… If you believe Tarantino then yes, you’re right.

    • @Mario_Angel_Medina
      @Mario_Angel_Medina 2 роки тому

      If watching History Channel teached me something, is that Reality really dropped the ball when the Allies defeated Gernany's crazy superweapons with clever strategies and an smarter use of resources instead of bouilding even bigger and crazier superweapons...
      ... I wonder how many of those "historians" play Warhammer 40k regularly?

  • @PsicoPato-
    @PsicoPato- 2 роки тому

    Is it a reupload ?

  • @soulpsychic2858
    @soulpsychic2858 2 роки тому +3

    Don’t take this the wrong way because you’re awesome and your voice does sound fine, but the slight lisp really adds to this video

  • @nyanrxenawang
    @nyanrxenawang 2 роки тому +1

    Is James actually JP?

    • @TAP7a
      @TAP7a 2 роки тому +2

      Nah he communicates too clearly and commits to stances too honestly to be JP

  • @danielkert-dev
    @danielkert-dev 2 роки тому

    Hate space; but good vid in general. 7.321/10

  • @JohnDoe-ns5su
    @JohnDoe-ns5su 2 роки тому +1

    Are you ok? Something about this video feels off…

    • @kousetsuhana
      @kousetsuhana 2 роки тому

      assuming you don't know, he had jaw surgery. to me, he looks incredibly different in this and it's a tad jarring. Like a multiverse Tullos!

  • @Preda.Y
    @Preda.Y 2 роки тому +6

    James I usually like your videos but honestly, this isn't very good. Terrible Writing Advice has been doing this style of video for years and even they get annoying fast.
    It would have been more interesting if you'd honestly talked about space opera you liked directly

    • @jestersudz6085
      @jestersudz6085 2 роки тому

      i hope he does!

    • @Preda.Y
      @Preda.Y 2 роки тому

      @Babba Yaaga he made at least one more of these about fantasy

  • @AndyAxolotlIRL
    @AndyAxolotlIRL 2 роки тому +4

    Wait no James I actually have a space opera I'm workshopping. Please actually make a real video on writing one; sarcasm just doesn't do it for me.

    • @jestersudz6085
      @jestersudz6085 2 роки тому

      yea 😭 i dont rlly know what a space opera is but i want to write a sci-fi story

    • @ChanyeolsHaneul
      @ChanyeolsHaneul 2 роки тому +1

      @@jestersudz6085 star trek is a good space opera.

    • @jestersudz6085
      @jestersudz6085 2 роки тому

      @@ChanyeolsHaneul ohhh thank you!!

  • @yungorange209
    @yungorange209 10 місяців тому

    999 like

  • @hiteshasvagupta5417
    @hiteshasvagupta5417 2 роки тому

    At least iron the t-shirt ╥﹏╥

  • @zealousboar1442
    @zealousboar1442 2 роки тому

    so just copy star wars and space battleship yamato and screw logic

  • @telepathicfish1489
    @telepathicfish1489 2 роки тому

    Or you can explain absolutely nothing and stick all the information right at the back of the book.

  • @camelopardalis84
    @camelopardalis84 2 роки тому +2

    Sorry, I have to stop watching for now, less than two minutes into the video. A premiere of another video starts now. I'll attempt to find out what this shtick is about later.

  • @joey199412
    @joey199412 2 роки тому

    Get a hair cut, it's starting to look bad.

    • @black1blade74
      @black1blade74 2 роки тому +1

      Or don't get a haircut and it goes past that awk midlength phase.

    • @oddjam
      @oddjam 2 роки тому +2

      Idk I kinda like it