Not bad. First, capture the ambient sound so you can eliminate it in post for a cleaner final. Having no dialogue might even be fine so it can just be silent with added sounds later. Second: end it right after the spook, cut the squishy noises and distorted vocal fry sounds. You had it and went too far. Simplicity is the key to a good short horror experience.
Never stay those extra hours after work 😄 Nice film 👍😊
i suggest not to become brave in such situation.he should just go out of the shop and call the police rather than searching for the person
True point
I'm glad he has the box cutter,but he should dial 911 as well.:-)
good idea.
always enjoy your short films!
damn that was scary! I'll just stop working lol
same
Take heed of a customer.
Well done 👏
@@Jay3R142 you're very welcome 😀
oh thanku,i thought so but was,nt really sure. hope you do some more!
A good scary and suspenseful short film.
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love the film,great atmosphere,but i,am not sure what happened at the end? just some wierd sounds,what were they?
The entity got him :0
Very creppy and very good
givin mimic
I think I'm dumb I know it definitely dumb asking this but how customer get in
why didn't the guy just clock out and go home instead of staying and searching
Nice Short film
Why doesn't anybody turn on a light!
What the hell was that ending???
Bro got got.
😍😍
Not bad. First, capture the ambient sound so you can eliminate it in post for a cleaner final. Having no dialogue might even be fine so it can just be silent with added sounds later.
Second: end it right after the spook, cut the squishy noises and distorted vocal fry sounds. You had it and went too far. Simplicity is the key to a good short horror experience.
Appreciate it.
Sence you are still learning something based on Hansel and Gretel may be out of the question?
Can you do something where someone is on a table.
If u were trying to scare us u succeeded
This film needs more work, first of all you lock the doors before you count the money plus the acting job and camera angles were bad.
i deeply appreciate you saying this in my comment section, this is going to improve my craft very much jaqurlinrloprz9220
way too much back drama noise killed the movie sad
real