Something Sweet to Bite - Part 2 [MLP Fanfic Reading] (Grimdark)

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  • @scottmaurning9591
    @scottmaurning9591 9 років тому +695

    nightmare night
    what a fright
    give me something
    sweet to bite!
    if you're salty
    i won't care
    you'll never escape
    the candy mare!!

    • @charlieeiler1245
      @charlieeiler1245 8 років тому +12

      You got skillz

    • @scottmaurning9591
      @scottmaurning9591 8 років тому +8

      Charlie Eiler thanks

    • @robertkunz7097
      @robertkunz7097 8 років тому

      +Yanne Mounier did you hear that its the sound of your fat ass body btw I aint no brony everyone who watches this is probably not a brony because they want to watch violence oh I 9 I am not scared of a lot of things but oh god the deep sea creatures and clowns that's probably on my scary list

    • @scottmaurning9591
      @scottmaurning9591 8 років тому +27

      Robert Kunz first: not every one on youtube is fat.
      second: I don't care what you are or what you fear, but I don't like that people like you go up to a random person and call them fat.
      last: who cares why people watch youtube, what's important is that you enjoy the stuff people make for other people.
      and if you can't be nice to other people I think you won't get any friends any time soon.

    • @scottmaurning9591
      @scottmaurning9591 8 років тому +13

      Robert Kunz I'm an atheist.
      and next time you make a joke like that, consider it that it isn't funny.

  • @CharliMorganMusic
    @CharliMorganMusic 10 років тому +428

    "Subject's parental unit..." oh my god gross. This is gross. Like my stomach hurts. This is so disgusting.
    Five stars

  • @envynoson
    @envynoson 9 років тому +523

    That mlg survival skills Fluttershy has.

    • @scottmaurning9591
      @scottmaurning9591 9 років тому +57

      She's the only one who follows the survival rules

    • @zgirl8572
      @zgirl8572 9 років тому +32

      +Envy Noson She the only one that followed the bucking rules

    • @glaxir7906
      @glaxir7906 8 років тому +33

      +Envy Noson I can't belive Survival Shy isn't a meme yet!

    • @thunderhorse9974
      @thunderhorse9974 8 років тому +9

      Yep

    • @sournote8610
      @sournote8610 8 років тому +28

      Fluttershy is the true survivor. Nothing can destroy her.

  • @SmegEgg
    @SmegEgg 9 років тому +457

    Okay am I the only one who imagined this
    girl: WHY WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS?!? YOU'RE A MONSTER!
    Doc: Frankly my dear, I don't give a damn.

    • @mmocashout1843
      @mmocashout1843 9 років тому +17

      That, would be, fucking, amazing.

    • @zgirl8572
      @zgirl8572 9 років тому +8

      +Eva19 EWF Sweet celestia that would be SO.BUCKING.AWESOME. an the fact that it would be in a British accent would make it even more BUCKING AWESOME!!!!

    • @robertkunz7097
      @robertkunz7097 8 років тому +4

      +Eva19 EWF damn boy where u find this its ade out of candy but mostly weed WEED WEED WEED

    • @mmocashout1843
      @mmocashout1843 8 років тому +3

      It would sound like the doctor from doctor who

    • @robertkunz7097
      @robertkunz7097 8 років тому +3

      lol

  • @lulualma4139
    @lulualma4139 8 років тому +347

    Damn fluttershy. I always knew you were a survivalist.
    But Daaaaamn.

    • @coyotealienss
      @coyotealienss 8 років тому +33

      She learned all of her skills from the woodland animals she lives with

    • @Bimbows07
      @Bimbows07 8 років тому +7

      If it were BO3 Based, she would be Nomad

    • @meekaleebz3487
      @meekaleebz3487 5 років тому +4

      I know right

    • @davidradcliffe955
      @davidradcliffe955 5 років тому +2

      You didn't read the second story did you

    • @foxoftheshadows9272
      @foxoftheshadows9272 5 років тому +2

      Nah mate.
      She ate the piece of the candy-pony's nose she had bitten off. That was pretty stupid.

  • @Flutter_Aeina
    @Flutter_Aeina 7 років тому +224

    When the little filly started screaming and crying after being forced to eat her father's flesh, my heart almost felt like it was being ripped out of my chest.

    • @somedudewhodraws9377
      @somedudewhodraws9377 2 роки тому +9

      Knackermann knows how to make us cry and feel bad for Pumpkin Patch AKA Candymare.

    • @Epic11705
      @Epic11705 2 роки тому +6

      Poor little pumpkin
      31:49

    • @aurorynfrost9817
      @aurorynfrost9817 Рік тому +5

      You think your heart was being ripped out then you should listen to home sweet home when she finds her mom again

    • @savannahhague4989
      @savannahhague4989 4 місяці тому

      i would like a what if fanfic where the little filly’s conscience didn’t become warped as what it became and chose to be a good candy making pony.

  • @samueltrusik3251
    @samueltrusik3251 2 роки тому +144

    The fact that Fluttershy out of all people managed to not only survive, but fight through this mess is oddly nice.

    • @Twinklethefox9022
      @Twinklethefox9022 2 роки тому +13

      Wait, she lives?

    • @Enter_the_Toshiverse_1996
      @Enter_the_Toshiverse_1996 Рік тому +25

      @@Twinklethefox9022 Yes, so does Rainbow Dash but only because she was out of town when this all happened.

    • @pissapocalypse
      @pissapocalypse 9 місяців тому +2

      I don't think she survived because she took a bite out of one of the candy ponies

    • @sherrymiller4069
      @sherrymiller4069 8 місяців тому

      But she didn't eat it

    • @hypedragon2197
      @hypedragon2197 17 днів тому +1

      No she doesn’t, if u listen carefully she ate a piece of one of those monsters, so it can be concluded that she turned as well, it’s like a reverse zombie, if u bite them u get infected

  • @TheNervousMedic
    @TheNervousMedic 7 років тому +300

    "So please...do shut up."
    I shouldn't laugh..... BUT OH MY GOD THAT WAS FUNNY AF XD

    • @shawneeetherington5479
      @shawneeetherington5479 4 роки тому +5

      The candy mare wants to know your location 😂

    • @gloriabertram4776
      @gloriabertram4776 3 роки тому

      Why so you can kill me already over My Dead body

    • @gloriabertram4776
      @gloriabertram4776 3 роки тому

      You're not knowing my location don't ever take me alive okay you can scare me or you want but I'm sitting here so you know that's not just what you're saying before

    • @wh1tevo1d90
      @wh1tevo1d90 3 роки тому +1

      @@gloriabertram4776 miss girl it was a joke

    • @gloriabertram4776
      @gloriabertram4776 2 роки тому +1

      @@wh1tevo1d90 But I'm a boy

  • @thedarklrd6714
    @thedarklrd6714 7 років тому +311

    Why am I watching this at night? Because:
    *_CHALLENGE ACCEPTED_*

    • @archeishere1
      @archeishere1 4 роки тому +7

      Come At Me You Creeps I Accept Your Challenge

    • @Charlie19508
      @Charlie19508 4 роки тому +2

      Me too

    • @undeadban8692
      @undeadban8692 3 роки тому +1

      Same it’s 12:00 pm where I am at and I am a little unsettled my this story

    • @PeachTeaDragons
      @PeachTeaDragons 2 роки тому

      @@undeadban8692 its 02:51 AM but i have my dog next to me (GAMEPASS: 1¢)

    • @Cart00nist101
      @Cart00nist101 2 роки тому

      For me it is actually day but I think I'll still have a nightmare maybe cause truth be told am a total Fluttershy except without her survival skills!

  • @rei-sb5mn
    @rei-sb5mn 8 років тому +318

    *ruNS DOWNSTAIRS
    *GRABS DOG
    *RUNS BACK TO BED
    iMGoINgtOBEoKAy

    • @berryfizz7195
      @berryfizz7195 8 років тому +12

      Here have some soup 🍜 and a hug 🤗
      Better?

    • @mmdxfnaf7885
      @mmdxfnaf7885 7 років тому +2

      Chihiro Fujisaki LOL

    • @kyoukomomo4953
      @kyoukomomo4953 7 років тому +3

      Josef Mengele AKA Todensengel I will grab my dog and keep hiding in my bed

    • @berryfizz7195
      @berryfizz7195 7 років тому +12

      Josef Mengele AKA Todensengel *throws candy into the fireplace* no candy allowed. This is a no Candy Mare zone, aka the comment section

    • @_silent_memory_2252
      @_silent_memory_2252 5 років тому +2

      What? Please translate this...

  • @GLMELEE13
    @GLMELEE13 9 років тому +160

    I was in shock and grasped in fear's vice grip until the very last line spoken, " ... So please, do shut up." Then I couldn't stop myself from spreading a grin across my face and chuckling to myself. Just the way it was said was perfect.

    • @Wuten
      @Wuten 9 років тому +7

      GLMELEE13 Delivery is key~

    • @GLMELEE13
      @GLMELEE13 9 років тому +3

      Wuten AiE Indeed it is, good sir

    • @alcoholanon
      @alcoholanon 7 років тому

      GLMELEE13 when was that? I never heard that ._.

  • @mythmask7864
    @mythmask7864 9 років тому +136

    This is so cool...
    WHY IS THAT LITTLE KID BEING HURT? IN EVERY STORY, WHAT HAPPENS TO HER IS SEEN IN THE-
    Oh fudge. I knew it.
    She's the reason for Nightmare Night.
    She is what is killing ponies.

    • @unknownunknownfreak3209
      @unknownunknownfreak3209 5 років тому +5

      Her soul goes and slaps the demon awake

    • @BlackArcherGaming
      @BlackArcherGaming 5 років тому +2

      WHO IS SHE

    • @ladyren1575
      @ladyren1575 4 роки тому +5

      @@BlackArcherGaming she's the Candymare

    • @shaunyjimenez9637
      @shaunyjimenez9637 3 роки тому

      BRO SPOILERS

    • @Adahy_Bullet
      @Adahy_Bullet 3 роки тому +4

      Pumpkin Patch = Candy Mare. In theory. Or is current reincarnation. Idk which precisely tbh. If ya watch Home Sweet Home by Scribbler, it goes more into the backstory a bit. If currently has 2 parts

  • @dylandavies4379
    @dylandavies4379 9 років тому +393

    Am I the only one who loves the candymare as a character

  • @charlieeiler1245
    @charlieeiler1245 8 років тому +47

    I do love the way the filly got excited about Lemon Drops opening the door with magic, it was pure adorableness.

  • @TheSwordofFlames
    @TheSwordofFlames 10 років тому +312

    Oh my God, this fic is so FUCKED.
    I love it.

  • @baldpai1047
    @baldpai1047 8 років тому +115

    Dr. Pony: Do shut up. |My reaction: Can I give you to Pinkamena?

    • @kawiicookie6057
      @kawiicookie6057 6 років тому +6

      More like "let me introduce you to my dear friend pinkamiena"

    • @revaslatts8011
      @revaslatts8011 6 років тому +3

      Clever, but isn't that a bit rash? 😕

    • @Partyboxd
      @Partyboxd 4 роки тому +1

      @@revaslatts8011 no

    • @chloenieuwsma4846
      @chloenieuwsma4846 4 роки тому +1

      @@revaslatts8011 not at all trust me. i have her contact info should i call her?

    • @OceaSpray
      @OceaSpray 3 роки тому +1

      @@revaslatts8011 Nope.

  • @beesfiles1460
    @beesfiles1460 8 років тому +205

    I didn't notice how scary this story was until I was laying in my bed, alone, in the darkness.. Guess I'm sleeping with a locked bedroom door and lights on tonight..

    • @mephistoknackerman1406
      @mephistoknackerman1406 8 років тому +8

      Just don't eat any sweets before bed. That's how she gets you! (Unless you share.)

    • @Blueklima9708
      @Blueklima9708 8 років тому +2

      +Mephisto Knackerman
      Shit

    • @auradraconis1901
      @auradraconis1901 8 років тому +1

      +UA-camWolf 3045 Don't worry. A door wouldn't keep her out anyway ;)

    • @mephistoknackerman1406
      @mephistoknackerman1406 8 років тому

      Aura Draconis XD It's true!

    • @auradraconis1901
      @auradraconis1901 8 років тому

      +Mephisto Knackerman I'm probably a complete idiot for asking, but you're the Knackerman that wrote this? Just wanting to make sure if I can freak out now 😅

  • @vengeance4927
    @vengeance4927 7 років тому +32

    "So please, do shut up." Wow. The rudest remark in the most polite of ways.

  • @vengeance4927
    @vengeance4927 4 роки тому +35

    "Your mouth is for eating, not for crying. So please, do shut up."
    Sorry, this is my favorite line so far. I hate and love this guy.

  • @OblivionFalls
    @OblivionFalls 10 років тому +126

    At first I had a heart attack from that adorable Sweetie Belle, then I had an actual heart attack 'cause this is some scary shit. I love it ~
    10/10

  • @arnoldmws6330
    @arnoldmws6330 2 роки тому +61

    I can't hate Pumpkin Patch. All the awful things she did should make me, but knowing why and how she turned into the candy mare breaks my heart so badly...I just can't hate her...

  • @sammiepatty4863
    @sammiepatty4863 Рік тому +19

    I used to feel bad about Flutters at 1st, but looking back at it years later I realized she was actually spared the worst of it all.
    Thinking about it: living the closest to the forest, you would think she'd be attacked 1st, but it was Applebloom instead. 🤔
    And to top it off: the bite she took wasn’t even big enough to cause anything; nither did she swallow anything. So she and Granny Smith were possibly the only two in ponyvile to have survived.

    • @janesullivan1969
      @janesullivan1969 2 дні тому

      I think based on the scene with Apple Blooms head she went for the Apple Family first because of a combination of the barn being a good place to hide from the sun (which weakens her) during the day and her being attracted by the Caramel Apples they were making.

  • @emilyendergirl4732
    @emilyendergirl4732 8 років тому +57

    Poor fluttershy..and aj and applebloom

  • @austinteiflingman1345
    @austinteiflingman1345 5 років тому +35

    I can see this as a sort of really creepy urban legend that ponies could tell to each other every Nightmare Night, as a bit of a gruesome tale teenagers could tell each other. I dunno

    • @austinteiflingman1345
      @austinteiflingman1345 5 років тому +4

      And the "Please do shut up moment": you lost me there, but boy I love it

  • @themadhatter6519
    @themadhatter6519 8 років тому +15

    "Please do shut up." -_-
    Dat line delivery doe XD

  • @Tbsav.J
    @Tbsav.J 4 роки тому +10

    “you mouth is for eating, not crying. so please... do shut up” bro i could not stop laughing 😂😂😂

  • @gallifreyangirl9232
    @gallifreyangirl9232 9 років тому +17

    I LOVE the voice for Lemon Drops :D I love characters that sound nice but they're sick, evil villains.

  • @science8847
    @science8847 9 років тому +21

    This is so sick, terrifying, and dark but I just love it for some odd reason...

  • @willphully
    @willphully 8 років тому +16

    I wish I had found this before Halloween, that laughter... chilling.

  • @draxxlie8311
    @draxxlie8311 8 років тому +12

    I love how his voice is so emotionless and matter-of-fact

  • @mephistoknackerman1406
    @mephistoknackerman1406 10 років тому +22

    So I was really looking forward to Lemon Drop. Kudos to Wuten AIE on his work, those scenes would've just fallen completely apart if he hadn't done such a good job! The whole things was great of course, and still really loving the SFX. Can;t wait for next Friday!

    • @holyalexander1737
      @holyalexander1737 10 років тому

      so the first chapter got me really good this one not so much. after all I can still eat candy unlike taffy apples, I don't think i'll be eating any of those till next year. Happy you didn't kill Fluttershy right away, though I see where this is going for her, looking forward to next week to see how this continues.

    • @mephistoknackerman1406
      @mephistoknackerman1406 10 років тому +1

      Holy Alexander
      Actually, sad to say that if you want to find out what happens to Fluttershy you'll need to read the sequel. Good news is I posted that up yesterday.
      www.fimfiction.net/story/61205/something-sweet-to-bite-too

    • @holyalexander1737
      @holyalexander1737 10 років тому

      Maybe. I will at least have to wait until this is done, spoilers and what not.

    • @mac2272
      @mac2272 9 років тому

      who is lemondrop

  • @SuperStar-ij9sm
    @SuperStar-ij9sm 8 років тому +8

    "So please, do shut up." Best line in the whole part XD

  • @wafflethespottedkittykat8567
    @wafflethespottedkittykat8567 7 років тому +25

    This should totally be a book, I would pay $30 for it!:)

  • @videowatcher3458
    @videowatcher3458 9 років тому +30

    I'm glad she survived

  • @alphonselover825
    @alphonselover825 9 років тому +40

    Oh god... please don't tell me that's Blueblood!

    • @monkeybusinessinc.9950
      @monkeybusinessinc.9950 9 років тому +2

      +Crystal Bloodsucker oh no...

    • @thunderhorse9974
      @thunderhorse9974 8 років тому +1

      It is good that he is dead

    • @darklight5562
      @darklight5562 6 років тому +1

      At first, I was like „Who is BlueBlood?” and then I was like „Oh! That brother of Princess Celestia!” XD

    • @revaslatts8011
      @revaslatts8011 4 роки тому

      No, it doesn't sound like him.
      The voice, I mean.

  • @3Mewthree
    @3Mewthree 10 років тому +18

    That was an interesting choice of the author to move back and fourth in different parts of the story. It keeps us in mystery and is pretty well done. :)

    • @shanlevine
      @shanlevine 9 років тому

      +Autumn Heart I love your OC

    • @3Mewthree
      @3Mewthree 9 років тому

      shannon levine Thanks :D

  • @confusingzeus8921
    @confusingzeus8921 8 років тому +6

    I like how this story gives you multiple ponies perspectives of this terrible night

  • @arse7296
    @arse7296 9 років тому +58

    i was freaking EATING at the puking part :L

  • @M.W.K6996
    @M.W.K6996 8 років тому +129

    This is without a doubt, one of the most terrifying fanfics in the MLP universe. Though there are other fanfics we'd like you to try: "Cupcakes", "Sweet Apple Massacre", "The Experiments of Twilight Sparkle", "Rocket To Insanity" & "Lil Miss Rarity". 0:09

    • @wowisntitanamazinglyamazin9550
      @wowisntitanamazinglyamazin9550 8 років тому +22

      Rocket to insanity wasn't too scary but please don't mention sweet apple massacre. that aside this one is my favorite one by far

    • @wowisntitanamazinglyamazin9550
      @wowisntitanamazinglyamazin9550 8 років тому +14

      or a puppet to her fame

    • @dp2989
      @dp2989 7 років тому +8

      M .W. K And Rainbow Factory

    • @kawiicookie6057
      @kawiicookie6057 5 років тому +17

      You can't forget " An apple sleep experiment", " The Trees are Screaming", "Never Open the Door", "Grogar", "It Moves Below, "The Friendship Text", " Let Her In", and " My Little Amnesia"

    • @camillahearsch4807
      @camillahearsch4807 4 роки тому +1

      @@kawiicookie6057 yus

  • @VanillaHetalianOwl
    @VanillaHetalianOwl 9 років тому +11

    This is so much more interesting than I had originally thought it would be. Am I am so happy we didn't have to know how Fluttershy dies! T^T

  • @tiredashell7205
    @tiredashell7205 5 років тому +14

    Moral of this episode: Be a coward and don't go outside if you hear *any* bone-chilling screams

  • @woodkiller4496
    @woodkiller4496 8 років тому +33

    poor flutter shy she was brave

    • @emilyendergirl4732
      @emilyendergirl4732 8 років тому +1

      yeah and scared to death at the same time

    • @woodkiller4496
      @woodkiller4496 6 місяців тому

      ​@emilyendergirl4732 right hopefully fluttershy is safe

  • @taylormullins6204
    @taylormullins6204 7 років тому +38

    Honestly, I truly love how this story and the sequel were written. though.. I didn't agree with how the sequel ended I still loved the story itself. which makes me kinda sad that emogak hasn't read the sequel yet :(

    • @taylormullins6204
      @taylormullins6204 7 років тому +1

      and I would love to make my own short side story to this but I'm not much of a writer :p

    • @darkdance0
      @darkdance0 2 роки тому +2

      There was a sequel?

    • @darkdance0
      @darkdance0 2 роки тому +2

      Also, I just realized this was 5yrs ago 🙂

    • @SomeAutomaton
      @SomeAutomaton Рік тому +1

      @@darkdance0 I knew there was a Prequel, but I’m sorry a SEQUEL!?

  • @pacakemaster29
    @pacakemaster29 10 років тому +15

    A think a phrase to describe this story so far would be "fucked up"
    A story hasn't made me want to vommit in my life, I LOVE IT THANK YOU FOR POSTING THIS AND THANK YOU DUDE WHO WROTE IT!!!

    • @mephistoknackerman1406
      @mephistoknackerman1406 10 років тому +3

      You're welcome! I find mostly it just makes me hungry. So very hungry.

    • @vinegardoppio8637
      @vinegardoppio8637 10 років тому +1

      Mephisto Knackerman
      mephisto...knackerman?
      mephisto akerman?
      blue exorcist and attack on titan?
      i see what you did there >:)

  • @doodlewing6840
    @doodlewing6840 10 років тому +15

    The song in the beginning is this is Halloween is the beginning song in the nightmare before Christmas. Good fanfic two I love the first part in the beginning.

  • @dp2989
    @dp2989 7 років тому +14

    Plot twist:
    IT'S JUST A PRANK, BRO.

    • @mephistoknackerman1406
      @mephistoknackerman1406 7 років тому +2

      Nah, that's Hasbro's official version of this story. Only they used cookies instead of candy.

  • @epicsyincs7261
    @epicsyincs7261 9 років тому +73

    the candy mare looks exactly like pinky pie!

    • @cadlovestlb
      @cadlovestlb 9 років тому +6

      Ya I know that's what I thought

    • @coyotealienss
      @coyotealienss 8 років тому +19

      Yeah but covered in candy and on steroids and a canibal monster

    • @blueberrysans2640
      @blueberrysans2640 8 років тому +18

      looks more like the cupcakes Pinkamena, on steroids, went through a month of torture by butchershy, and doused in a candy dream/nightmare

    • @chinasenpai8869
      @chinasenpai8869 6 років тому +4

      I know, maybe it's her crazy ancestor XD

    • @MisterDread
      @MisterDread 5 років тому +3

      U wot

  • @sullivinfox6878
    @sullivinfox6878 9 років тому +13

    this is so dark,mean,crazy,insane,disgusting,and a lot of weird stuff............................................................. I love it !!!!

  • @adorablecenturion8436
    @adorablecenturion8436 8 років тому +9

    I cant stop laughing at how many clash of clans notifications im getting saying "Your village is being raided by (insert name here)!" Every 20 seconds..

  • @momoplays9669
    @momoplays9669 8 років тому +74

    I'm gonna tell this story at my school now...😈)My school allows us to tell spooky stories or make a play out of it!)Can you guess which one I'm doing...?😈😈😈🔪🔪🔪

    • @mephistoknackerman1406
      @mephistoknackerman1406 8 років тому +8

      If your friends like it, tell them to check out the video.
      If they don;t like it, tell them the Candy Mare is coming for them! XD

    • @skittlestinav4534
      @skittlestinav4534 8 років тому +4

      Mephisto Knackerman XD

    • @lucystewart29
      @lucystewart29 8 років тому +2

      Mephisto Knackerman won't they call Bull$#it on the Candy Mare's existence?

    • @mephistoknackerman1406
      @mephistoknackerman1406 8 років тому +5

      Jessica, Emily & RachelTV The power of suggestion is a funny thing. Yes, they will know she isn't a real threat. But it's funny because subconsciously they may still feel threatened regardless. This is how children end up being afraid of the 'boogieman' in general.

    • @mmdxfnaf7885
      @mmdxfnaf7885 7 років тому

      Mephisto Knackerman MEH I don't care

  • @iwasneverhere8902
    @iwasneverhere8902 8 років тому +14

    "we have many other tests to do today, so please, do shut up" -Mysterious evil person 2016

  • @cemetare
    @cemetare 3 роки тому +12

    nightmare night ..
    what a fright ..
    give me something sweet to bite ..
    once it’s dark ..
    you will hear ..
    the giggles ...
    until you scream .

  • @eggsandwitch679
    @eggsandwitch679 7 років тому +13

    >:0 WUTTTTTTT!
    Also 35:51 "so please do shut up" :)

  • @777Rowen
    @777Rowen 5 років тому +7

    Also Fluttershy is such a badass here! Holy crap.
    This is so messed up! I feel so bad for the little filly being tortured by the evil unicorn stallion. :(

  • @ki77ymid
    @ki77ymid 8 років тому +73

    WHY DID I WATCH THIS???? ITS ALMOST HALLOWEEN ;-;

    • @deuceofdiamonds
      @deuceofdiamonds 8 років тому +1

      Yeah, I'm watching it even closer. Hah. Hah. Hah. HELP ME.

    • @lpsparadise9874
      @lpsparadise9874 8 років тому +1

      Crystal Midnight to late-,-

    • @saverkittylovelypunch1730
      @saverkittylovelypunch1730 8 років тому

      +DavidT2002 well im whoch it on Halloween and after!

    • @dosbrosgaming2309
      @dosbrosgaming2309 7 років тому

      Crystal Midnight I watched dis shit around chrismas

    • @mmdxfnaf7885
      @mmdxfnaf7885 7 років тому

      DosBrosGaming me too! im watchin it now at 8:27 freakin pm

  • @mariag.5422
    @mariag.5422 8 років тому +7

    "So please shut up" ...I laughed...I am a cruel cruel person lol 😂

  • @NitroShard
    @NitroShard 8 років тому +79

    Am I the only one that thinks Grimdarks are the best. xD

  • @jaiden5941
    @jaiden5941 6 років тому +8

    Never eat the corrupted candy of the Candy Mare and her puppets.
    The corruption of the cursed candies, they spread like a disease and destroy one while robbing them of their lives.

  • @RedWolf777SG
    @RedWolf777SG 10 років тому +15

    O_O; Oh, Damn...That scene near the end.......that's really fucked up. Lemon Drop is a sick, sick bastard of a stallion.
    Q~Q And that poor, poor filly.

    • @mephistoknackerman1406
      @mephistoknackerman1406 10 років тому +1

      Lemon Drop was a hard character to write. The detachment came naturally, but it was difficult to tell if he was a little too over the top. I'm glad you like him. >D

    • @RedWolf777SG
      @RedWolf777SG 10 років тому +3

      Well, you did a pretty damn good job in writing his character. I mean what he was doing to that filly was fucking twisted, mate. And the voice acting really sells him. =3
      So good job, keep up the good work. I'm really looking forward to next Friday's installment of this story. it's really hard not to just go ahead of read the actually fanfic to see what happens next. ^_^;

    • @mac2272
      @mac2272 9 років тому +3

      oh!is he that dude who is candy testing the little girl?

    • @mac2272
      @mac2272 9 років тому

      +Orianna Beesinger so mean

  • @revaslatts8011
    @revaslatts8011 3 роки тому +8

    Good thing Fluttershy didn't eate the candy.
    Yeah, she actually bite the nose off.
    But I doubt she ate it in her struggle.
    That means she's the only survivor.

  • @alexlovesfellsans5621
    @alexlovesfellsans5621 7 років тому +17

    * everyone else is so scared while this ten year old sits here unfazed by the video. Actually enjoying it *
    Me : Yay!
    someone : AHH * grabs dog *
    Dog: really?

    • @_-NatureMations-_
      @_-NatureMations-_ 9 місяців тому

      If you're seeing this message somehow, please wake up. You've been in a coma for 6 years. This message may appear in a billboard, a Toktik comment, or even on the ground. Your family is waiting for you.

    • @hellooooothereeee
      @hellooooothereeee 6 місяців тому

      WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP. WAKE UP.

  • @DSR_AA-12
    @DSR_AA-12 7 років тому +16

    For me this one takes the cake for the creepiest MLP fanfic. Far more nightmare fuel than Cupcakes or Rainbow factory or Sweet apple massacre.

    • @skullofrome
      @skullofrome 10 місяців тому

      SAM was just disgusting, this story is legit scary

  • @shaunyjimenez9637
    @shaunyjimenez9637 3 роки тому +4

    This book captivates the terror so well that it's bright sunlight in the middle of the day rn and i am terrified

  • @winniejohnson2944
    @winniejohnson2944 7 років тому +12

    This is...just scaring. I've never thought mlp could have gone so grim...I like it😈!

  • @nathanalcantara7892
    @nathanalcantara7892 8 років тому +60

    The distorted ponies part...did anyone detect Laughing Jack reference?

  • @storm_xo07
    @storm_xo07 5 років тому +5

    Candymare: Trick or treat human!
    Me: *gives her an apple*
    Candymare: :0 *dies*
    Me: Diabetes cravings was never kind to you.

  • @katt-nokjoke3688
    @katt-nokjoke3688 7 років тому +50

    Welp merry Christmas XD

    • @myrtlejones28
      @myrtlejones28 6 років тому

      That One Orange Katt I think the candymare's real name should be Lily Rose when she was still alive.

  • @markfreeman1155
    @markfreeman1155 8 років тому +11

    random person "would you watch this in the dark" me "nope nope nope nope nope nope nope nope nope nope nope nope so much nope"

  • @chaselayman6815
    @chaselayman6815 4 роки тому +7

    Shy DOES have decent survival skills tho, you gotta give her that.

  • @tobytwistedd69420
    @tobytwistedd69420 7 років тому +23

    Me to I thought Apple Bloom was dead at the first part 😬

    • @daanimegrlderp3910
      @daanimegrlderp3910 7 років тому +6

      Sophia Gallag But was she? Could this all be a flash back in little Appleblooms mind? Before she died in the caramel pot?
      So IDKKKK

    • @daanimegrlderp3910
      @daanimegrlderp3910 7 років тому

      Tick tock Labs hmmmmmm....... at the end I think it wasn't

    • @chouxi
      @chouxi 7 років тому +14

      Guys, If you pay attention the decorating is a week BEFORE nightmare night.

    • @MartianMoth2302
      @MartianMoth2302 4 роки тому

      This was a flashback. The caramel pot was a day before, this part was a week.

  • @Draconea77717
    @Draconea77717 7 років тому +6

    I want... No I need to cosplay the candy mare now... Must make candy mare cosplay.... Nightmare night... What a fright... Give me something sweet to BITE!

  • @typicalgway
    @typicalgway 9 років тому +9

    Oh, poor fluttershy and the mysteriously family child! I wonder what family that is?

  • @artemiscole8903
    @artemiscole8903 7 років тому +7

    Just, what is happening to the candy mare?
    It feels like she is being forced different experimented candys and then they feed her her fathers flesh? Thats something

  • @mmocashout1843
    @mmocashout1843 9 років тому +7

    “Your mouth is for eating, not crying. So please, do shut up."

  • @mitskifanboy15
    @mitskifanboy15 3 роки тому +5

    “your mouth is for eating, not crying” is genuinely scary

  • @kimdemersseman
    @kimdemersseman 7 років тому +19

    32:00 i think candymare is picking the mane 6 off one by one

  • @jewelmine442
    @jewelmine442 7 років тому +5

    "so pls shut up" Me," FEELS GOOD TO BE A GANGSTA"

  • @Thedragonlover95
    @Thedragonlover95 8 років тому +4

    fluttershy really is knowing the ways of the survival skills

  • @harrypotter2700
    @harrypotter2700 8 років тому +6

    "Front or back makes no difference to our business,muppet." That's what she said

  • @myrtlejones28
    @myrtlejones28 6 років тому +4

    Aw Fluttershy sounds so cute in this video!

  • @rubriccube9164
    @rubriccube9164 3 роки тому +7

    Everyone talking about fluttershy but can we talk about how the mysterious pony killed candymare dad?
    Wait,was the little pony candymare?!

  • @emeraldmaster2599
    @emeraldmaster2599 7 років тому +11

    24:45 WHERE IS HER DAMN BEAR WHEN SHE NEEDS HIM!?!

  • @dementedinsanity6666
    @dementedinsanity6666 6 років тому +8

    I listened to this just now in my bed at 11 pm. I'm going to regret my decision in my dreams, aren't i?

  • @Phoenixtear101
    @Phoenixtear101 8 років тому +16

    Wow, that pony is the polite killer/scientist, like Hannibal. :D

  • @404delusions9
    @404delusions9 7 років тому +10

    Why am I watching this whilst I'm alone downstairs at 10pm

  • @sullivinfox6878
    @sullivinfox6878 9 років тому +2

    i liked the end."your mouth is for eating, not crying. so please, do shutup." lol

  • @ThatGeorgeMoment
    @ThatGeorgeMoment 8 років тому +24

    the sound effects....

  • @tobytwistedd69420
    @tobytwistedd69420 7 років тому +20

    * runs to a safe place *

  • @DarkGhirahim
    @DarkGhirahim 7 років тому +5

    "So please, do shut up" wow XD

  • @Latoos976
    @Latoos976 4 роки тому +8

    Literally any child would be delighted to get fed a lot of candy in am experiment lol

  • @tailornicole3272
    @tailornicole3272 8 років тому +8

    I couldn't even understand the Candymares' dad. xD

  • @solidmario64
    @solidmario64 10 років тому +5

    Actually almost game me night terrors, but I don't scare easily so I slept fine... and can still eat candy. Still scary though. Especially the SFX in the first one that sounded like it hurt.

  • @LambOfRegress
    @LambOfRegress 7 років тому +10

    i never look at my friend who has British accent the same again

  • @LanceTheAutobot
    @LanceTheAutobot 10 років тому +2

    I usually don't post before the end of the video but before the grim dark aspect of this fic gets to me I have to say that sweetie bell picture at the beginning gave me diabetes

  • @MischiefHowlVA
    @MischiefHowlVA 10 років тому +6

    Creepy and a great listen with some sadness. Loving it!

  • @lolipopgamer4811
    @lolipopgamer4811 9 років тому +2

    HUUUH THE FOAL FROM THE INTRO IS THE CANDY MARE 😱

  • @Ize_OnThePrize
    @Ize_OnThePrize 4 роки тому +7

    SweetieBelle is staring into my soul.

  • @catgirl2363
    @catgirl2363 8 місяців тому +2

    Wait if the recipes that Lemon Drop made are forbidden then why present them in the book??? 😭
    That's just ASKING for somepony to cook them!

  • @leef2305
    @leef2305 7 років тому +7

    soooo....
    zombie....
    ponies.....
    HELLS YEEEAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!!!

  • @LittleWerewolfPlushie
    @LittleWerewolfPlushie 8 років тому +2

    The more i listen the more the story grows. Very interesting.