Something Sweet to Bite - Part 1 [MLP Fanfic Reading] (Grimdark)

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  • @thelostnarrator
    @thelostnarrator 10 років тому +609

    The SFX of AJ... that whole scene... it's so odd to hear that considering I voiced her! I think this might be my first time voicing something like this. XD Or at least to this level. OTHER VAs DO THAT FOR ME!

    • @TsuriaDragon
      @TsuriaDragon 10 років тому +21

      You gave true depth to the meaning of horror in this fic wow I thought my iPhone was glitching out but no it was just candymare freaking me out D=

    • @nukoidrawz2868
      @nukoidrawz2868 6 років тому +5

      TheLostNarrator hoii

    • @knov8361
      @knov8361 6 років тому +3

      @@nukoidrawz2868 your adorable

    • @nukoidrawz2868
      @nukoidrawz2868 6 років тому +3

      @@knov8361 heheh tank u uwu

    • @somerandomyoutubeaccount5895
      @somerandomyoutubeaccount5895 6 років тому +2

      69 likes

  • @ChaoChao0071
    @ChaoChao0071 8 років тому +837

    I remember listening to this last year while eating my Halloween candy.
    Doing it again right now.

  • @ChaoChao0071
    @ChaoChao0071 6 років тому +337

    I remember listening to this last year, the year before, and the year before that while eating my Halloween candy.
    And yes, I'm doing it again.

  • @ChaoChao0071
    @ChaoChao0071 4 роки тому +388

    I listen to this while eating my Halloween candy.
    This is the sixth year.

    • @nightowlanticsvods7061
      @nightowlanticsvods7061 3 роки тому +6

      Mad Lad

    • @pinkiepie8244
      @pinkiepie8244 3 роки тому +4

      >:)

    • @gloriabertram4776
      @gloriabertram4776 3 роки тому +2

      I see what face you're making that tells me what you think that makes me thinking that you're going to scare me again in Halloween when I want to trick or treating nothing scared me this is thinking that's just what I was thinking now

    • @kenp1298
      @kenp1298 3 роки тому +9

      I SEE YOUR COMMENT EVERY TIME I WATCH THIS VIDEO AND IT GIVES ME SO MUCH NOSTALGIA THANK YOU🥺🙏

    • @kellyhernandez8696
      @kellyhernandez8696 3 роки тому +1

      LMAOO bruh that's cool, cool flex

  • @dylandavies4379
    @dylandavies4379 9 років тому +674

    cupcakes has got nothin' on this gore

  • @Justinsayshi
    @Justinsayshi 5 років тому +186

    My favourite part of this fan-fiction is that aside from the Gruesome gore and horror it's actually written like an actual Episode.

    • @cyx6ix
      @cyx6ix 5 років тому +5

      Same

    • @sidvicious7477
      @sidvicious7477 4 роки тому +16

      It makes it a lot creepier that the story is almost as if the characters were real in the universe and our childhood becoming a blood curdling nightmare

    • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
      @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 2 роки тому +3

      @@cyx6ix
      I would've enjoyed an origin story about Nightmare Night we have one about Hearth's Warming Eve and Hearts and Hooves Day but not Nightmare Night.

    • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
      @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 Рік тому +4

      @@cyx6ix
      The Candy Mare even sounds like Pinkamena.

    • @thedarklrd6714
      @thedarklrd6714 Рік тому +3

      The author's pretty good at keeping people in character.

  • @jesterjacks3933
    @jesterjacks3933 8 років тому +183

    Me: I'm a brave boy.
    *Sees Candymare*
    Me: Not a brave enough boy for this!

  • @ChaoChao0071
    @ChaoChao0071 3 роки тому +269

    Here I am again! Seventh year. I have my candy.

  • @ChaoChao0071
    @ChaoChao0071 5 років тому +278

    I listen to this while eating my Halloween candy.
    This is the fifth year.

    • @natalollipop_art
      @natalollipop_art 4 роки тому +5

      You gonna do it this year too? My friend has the same tradition.

    • @ChaoChao0071
      @ChaoChao0071 4 роки тому +7

      @@natalollipop_art Yes, except I may be buying my own candy this time.

    • @pinkiepie8244
      @pinkiepie8244 3 роки тому

      >:)

    • @gloriabertram4776
      @gloriabertram4776 3 роки тому +1

      @@pinkiepie8244 it's kind of interesting

    • @kirbo222top
      @kirbo222top 2 роки тому +1

      Still a fu king legend

  • @fluttershy8273
    @fluttershy8273 8 років тому +760

    anyone else think the Candymare's giggling / laughing sound almost like , Pinkamena ( from Cupcakes ; another MLP creepypasta )

  • @oldbonniebunny8478
    @oldbonniebunny8478 7 років тому +221

    is it just me or does the candymare look like a stiched together pinkie pie and fluttershy

    • @cherryberrybeatz5606
      @cherryberrybeatz5606 7 років тому +9

      Old Bonnie bunny kinda

    • @krampus7520
      @krampus7520 4 роки тому +16

      I thought it was pinkie pie but half of her flesh was peeled off.

    • @Charlie19508
      @Charlie19508 4 роки тому +3

      Just you but defined to be pinkie pie

    • @shaunyjimenez9637
      @shaunyjimenez9637 3 роки тому +1

      @@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 hahahahahhahahahaha no

    • @justin2308
      @justin2308 3 роки тому +5

      Not gonna lie, before I decided to listen to the Hearthswarming Story dub that Scribbler’s crew did, I honestly thought it WAS supposed to be a fusion of Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy

  • @kittycakes4166
    @kittycakes4166 7 років тому +295

    Is it just me or... does anyone else love the voice actor and all the blood and gory? :P

    • @alexlovesfellsans5621
      @alexlovesfellsans5621 7 років тому +1

      Kitty Cakes me to

    • @rat9178
      @rat9178 7 років тому +1

      Kitty Cakes yep btw u have the same profile pic as my instagram lol

    • @hodielol9453
      @hodielol9453 7 років тому

      Kitty Cakes just you

    • @VS-mp5ou
      @VS-mp5ou 6 років тому +1

      Kitty Cakes I do

    • @Dayday-6297
      @Dayday-6297 5 років тому +1

      Me, I think the gore sounds are oddly satisfying to listen to

  • @lindsayshanks7555
    @lindsayshanks7555 8 років тому +212

    Does anyone else get really annoyed when they hear Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon's voices? Jeez...

    • @mephistoknackerman1406
      @mephistoknackerman1406 8 років тому +16

      I think that may be how you're meant to feel.

    • @skyefell5450
      @skyefell5450 8 років тому +4

      yep they are mini brats

    • @funky_frogies
      @funky_frogies 8 років тому +4

      Yup

    • @emilyendergirl4732
      @emilyendergirl4732 8 років тому +7

      But they became nice :)

    • @lindsayshanks7555
      @lindsayshanks7555 8 років тому +5

      +emily endergirl
      really? I haven't been keeping up with the series
      stopped sometime after Shining Armour and Cadence's wedding

  • @ChaoChao0071
    @ChaoChao0071 7 років тому +288

    I remember listening to this last year and the year before while eating my Halloween candy.
    Doing it yet again right now.

  • @Wispii
    @Wispii 3 роки тому +176

    Fun fact: Due to the nature of it being really damn sticky and the heat needed to cook sugar at the temperature, Hot Caramel is basically the sweet equivilant of Napalm. So basically, Applejack and Applebloom were basically experiencing what many vietnamese civilians had to experience during the Vietnam war.
    Think about that the next time you eat caramel.

  • @mr.memesanddreams5870
    @mr.memesanddreams5870 8 років тому +248

    ....11:02, well, time to sacrifice some candy to Candymare.
    🍫🍬🍭🍬🍫🍭🍬🍫🍰🎂🍧🍨🍦🍮🍩🍫🍩🍩🍮🍫🍫🎂🍧🍦🍦🍭🍬🍦🍨🍭🍬🍨🍧🍬🍨🍧🍬🍦🍧🍰🍫🍮🍰🍩🍰🍪🍨🍭🍬🍭🍦🍪🍦🍰🍧🍮🍧🍩🍩🍧🍫🍭🍫🍭🍬🍪🍨🍪🍦🍦🍪🍪🎂🍪🍪🍰🍫🍰🍮🍮🍪🍮🍩🍩🍪🎂🍧🍨🍬🍭🍭🍦🍨🍭🍬🍬🍨🍭🍬🍭🍭🍦🍬🍭🍬🍬🍨🍭🍬🍨🍧🍰🍪🍮🍩🍪🍫🍮🍪🍫🍮🍩🍰🍰🎂🍧🍨🍦🍬🍭🍨🍬🍬🍭🍨🍦🍬🍭🍭🍨🍧🍧🎂🍰🍪🍪🍫🍫🍮🍮🍩🍩🍮🍮🍫🍪🍩🍮🍫🍪🍮🍮🍫🍪🍰🍰🎂🎂🍨🍦🍬🍭🍭🍨🍦🍬🍭🍭🍨🍦🍬🍭🍨🍦🍬🍭🍨🍧🎂🎂🍰🍰🍰🍪🍫🍮🍩🍪🍮🍩🍪🍫🍮🍩🍪🍫🍮🍩🍪🍰🍰🎂🍧🍨🍨🍦🍬🍬🍭🍨🍨🍦🍬🍬🍧🍧🍨🍭🍭🍬🍦🍨🍪🍫🍰🍧🍦🍬🍬🍭🍮🍩🍫🍪🍰🎂🍧🍨🍦🍬🍭🍬🍭🍦🍨🍧🎂🍰🍪🍫🍮🍩🍭🍬🍫🍪🍮🍩🍬🍭🍪🎂
    🍩🍮🍦🍨🎂🎂🍰🍫🍬🍭🍬🍦🍨🍧🎂🍰🍬🍨🍧🍭🍦🍨🎂🍰🍭🍬
    and finally, a caramelized applejack.
    🐎
    and don't anyone touch it!
    or else... you know what.

    • @katt-nokjoke3688
      @katt-nokjoke3688 7 років тому +13

      Mr. Memes And Dreams Kislan 🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍦🍦🍦🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯

    • @sylveonlover6685
      @sylveonlover6685 7 років тому +6

      Mr. Memes And Dreams Kislan 🍦🍭🍰🍫🎂🍡🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍩🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍦🍦🍦🍦🍡🍡🍡🍡🍡🍡🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍭🍭🍭🍭🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🍯🍰🍦🍭🍫🎂🍮🍩🍪🍮🍮🍬🍬🍬🍬🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍥🍥🍥🍥🍥🍥🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯🍯

    • @lpsmusicvidslps4life758
      @lpsmusicvidslps4life758 7 років тому +3

      Mr. Memes And Dreams Kislan lol nice

    • @apothecaryofthedamned1529
      @apothecaryofthedamned1529 7 років тому +8

      🍥🍡🍧🍬🍮🎂🍰🍦🍭🍫🍨🍥🍡🍧🍬🍮🎂🍰🍦🍭🍫🍨🍥🍥🍥🍥🍥🍥🍥🍡🍡🍡🍡🍡🍡🍡🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍧🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍬🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🍮🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🎂🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍰🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍦🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫🍫

    • @lockedupgaming6831
      @lockedupgaming6831 7 років тому +9

      🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭

  • @Magpiepony
    @Magpiepony 10 років тому +584

    It's great!! You did a fantastic job!

  • @xxwolfielovexx5571
    @xxwolfielovexx5571 7 років тому +217

    Apple jacks death made me feel a bit sick

  • @thecrazygecko4783
    @thecrazygecko4783 8 років тому +503

    Am I weird or does anyone else not get scared at any creepypastas or get nightmare from them?

    • @iminlovewithmyownsinsnottr2685
      @iminlovewithmyownsinsnottr2685 8 років тому +7

      Obviously not.

    • @momoplays9669
      @momoplays9669 8 років тому +21

      Well I think of them as sad stories sometimes.)Because I get very emotional in sadish ones.))

    • @henryb8513
      @henryb8513 8 років тому +10

      i listened to sweet apple massacre, I had a dream with pony's in it, but not a nightmare like I expected

    • @callmecookies8299
      @callmecookies8299 8 років тому +4

      I'm never scared!

    • @ellacraver5505
      @ellacraver5505 8 років тому +4

      shadow bunny's the queen of gaming! this story scared the shit out of me, what are you talking about?!

  • @epicsyincs7261
    @epicsyincs7261 5 років тому +79

    Not a brony, but I love listening to these horror stories based on certain universes. Just turning something innocent, into a gruesome reality gives me the love for these stories.

    • @samueltrusik3251
      @samueltrusik3251 2 роки тому +10

      While most are mediocre, there are a few MLP stories that are... well... EXCEPTIONALLY well written. "Diary of a time looper" was my first MLP story that actually scared me.

    • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
      @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 2 роки тому +7

      @@samueltrusik3251
      My favorite ones are this one Ghost Stories Grimdark Stories and Creepypasta ones.

    • @FirestormDDash
      @FirestormDDash Рік тому +3

      @@samueltrusik3251 Another tuber read a fic called Dont open the Door, and that one actually had me sit up for most of it.
      Some of it is the story, but some in part to how well the reader sells the sfx and words too.
      ua-cam.com/video/pO9GcxZnL3Q/v-deo.html

  • @narclump6143
    @narclump6143 9 років тому +368

    Well I guess you could call her a (puts on shades) "caramel apple" yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

  • @mephistoknackerman1406
    @mephistoknackerman1406 10 років тому +166

    This turned out so very good! I can't thank you enough for picking my humble little horror story for this. Big thanks to the entire cast! I can't wait for the rest!

    • @amber2080
      @amber2080 8 років тому +15

      Whoah wait u wrote this this is quite famous now also I'm way to young for this why am I even here..... I'm creeped out
      Nice story though
      Those popping sounds
      👀😭😰

    • @mephistoknackerman1406
      @mephistoknackerman1406 7 років тому +10

      I'm not sure what you're asking. (mainly because you said 'our' and I think you meant 'your'.)
      If you are asking if I am sure that I wrote this... yes. Very sure. Same with the sequels and prequels. I distinctly recall sitting down, delirious from pain killers and putrefying wounds, and writing this story.

    • @chlz6442
      @chlz6442 7 років тому +1

      Mephisto Knackerman I doubt u wrote it, but if u did great job..

    • @mephistoknackerman1406
      @mephistoknackerman1406 7 років тому +13

      Why do you doubt? :P I am Knackerman. You can ask on me on my tumblr, on my deviantart, or on fimfiction or reddit and I'll let you know, yes, I wrote Something Sweet to Bite.
      Or do you doubt I'm the real Knackerman?

    • @uhno7496
      @uhno7496 6 років тому +2

      Mephisto Knackerman teach me how to write horror please-

  • @GabiShy
    @GabiShy 3 роки тому +42

    I miss Emogak, just something about his narration is just unique and relaxing. Yes I referred to Emogak as a He/Him since he came out of Transgender which I’m so fucking proud of him for transitioning!!!

  • @krystachan7690
    @krystachan7690 5 років тому +26

    I like how the narrator includes little details and trivial things, instead of just, "AppleBloom got tossed into a cauldron! AppleJack died! These two are having a fight about sweets!" I feel like most things in the stories I've heard or read have been to-the-point. Nice refresher!

  • @notcopyright3404
    @notcopyright3404 5 років тому +44

    Me:*love eating candy*
    Candymare: *Exist*
    Me: Ooo candy!
    Candymare: Oh this is not good!!

  • @Moon666RPG
    @Moon666RPG 9 років тому +111

    Ugghhhh... Those snapping and sopping sounds... >.

    • @rottengrapes8605
      @rottengrapes8605 9 років тому +2

      I agree. The first time I listened to this, I had to pause it quite a few times because I felt nauseous. THAT IS HOW AWESOME AND SCARY IT IS

    • @callformybones9232
      @callformybones9232 9 років тому

      +Bonnie Da Bunny Are you okay?

    • @quirkymischief03
      @quirkymischief03 9 років тому

      hi ^-^

    • @ashbear234
      @ashbear234 9 років тому +1

      Holy crap. Those gore noises. I actually felt bile rising in my throat.

    • @galaxystarex4776
      @galaxystarex4776 9 років тому

      Ticci Toby what are u doing watching mlp

  • @knightjade9126
    @knightjade9126 7 років тому +72

    the candymare is very creepy I mean just looking at her gives me the chills,and if I had a poster of her in my room I would not sleep for a month cause she is creepy as hack. Don't get me wrong but u have to admit she is creepy. I'll jump out of my fur if she was real

    • @pinkamenalovessans9948
      @pinkamenalovessans9948 5 років тому +1

      i think she isnt but ok

    • @lazycookies
      @lazycookies 4 роки тому +1

      She’s not THAT creepy. Like she’s scary I guess- but when you read as many fire and horror stories as me it’s all just the same thing lol

    • @kumo8370
      @kumo8370 4 роки тому

      I think she looks kinda cool but I have a feeling that fluttetshy has a right to be afraid of nightmare night lol.

    • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
      @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 Рік тому

      ​@@kumo8370
      Yeah Candy Mare is likely why and those splinters are going to hurt Candy Mare's mouth if she doesn't remove the wood pieces.

  • @harrypotter2700
    @harrypotter2700 8 років тому +57

    "The taste of death and candy"
    Death is sweet

  • @mcchicken2392
    @mcchicken2392 8 років тому +26

    Oml when it was happy I didn't expect it to go scary so fast. Also I got scared straight to hell when you did the flashes of the candy pony thing

  • @theunknownfurry4728
    @theunknownfurry4728 8 років тому +53

    12:59 ... WORST IDEA EVER! I closed my eyes for a moment, and put the screen close to my face, so i could hear, and opened my eyes... I nearly threw my tablet XD anyways, its cool, and I liked that gore XD.. do I need help?

    • @mushu1105
      @mushu1105 5 років тому +3

      When seeing that CandyMare’s face up close like that... at 12:59
      *NANI!?*

  • @MinersLoveGames
    @MinersLoveGames 9 років тому +108

    Oh God... I just finished reading this! And now I'm listening to the reading!
    Why do I do this to myself!?

    • @mephistoknackerman1406
      @mephistoknackerman1406 9 років тому +9

      MinersLoveGames Cause it's fuuuuuun? *grin*

    • @scientificallyfailed8371
      @scientificallyfailed8371 9 років тому +7

      +Mephisto Knackerman CANDY MARE!!!! How ya doin? Hangin around with the creepypastas? I think Pinkemena has made some Cadance flavored cupcakes..... I was one of the first to try one, and it's DELICIOUS!! Anyway, gotta run! ( flys away to Rainbow Factory)

    • @buffmaeda4553
      @buffmaeda4553 9 років тому +2

      +Bonnie Da Bunny Hi, Bonnie! My names BonBon, ya' know, toy bonnie?
      Wait, don't leave! *flies off to catch up to Bonnie*

  • @davidradcliffe955
    @davidradcliffe955 9 років тому +80

    I'm so playing this during my Halloween party all the guest are bronies

  • @idkanymore1410
    @idkanymore1410 8 років тому +175

    someone needs to make an animation of this

  • @poptartcartoons4272
    @poptartcartoons4272 4 роки тому +29

    Your blood is red,
    And all over the room,
    You liked to eat candy,
    Now it likes to eat you.

  • @crescentmaroon9715
    @crescentmaroon9715 8 років тому +135

    this should be a game anyone agree?

    • @mephistoknackerman1406
      @mephistoknackerman1406 8 років тому +6

      +Nancy Constancia But from the Candy Mare's perspective or the pony's?

    • @amber2080
      @amber2080 8 років тому +8

      +Mephisto Knackerman
      Both two different modes
      But if I had to pick one it would be candy mares

    • @lesasynoground3410
      @lesasynoground3410 8 років тому +1

      Yeah

    • @iquittedajpwsorry4849
      @iquittedajpwsorry4849 8 років тому +5

      They should name a horror mlp game it's and it will be called candy mare . Exe game

    • @iseestars5144
      @iseestars5144 7 років тому +5

      Crescent Maroon I agree

  • @RedWolf777SG
    @RedWolf777SG 10 років тому +38

    Now this is a Halloween/Nightmare Night story, I just loved the suspense I've actually on the edge of my sit here! And The Lost Narrator as voice actress for Applejack is fantastic, I mean she's sounds exactly like she did in the show! X3

  • @RegenWasTaken
    @RegenWasTaken 8 років тому +47

    Luigi's Mansion? AW YEAH BOIIIII! You just earned yourself a fan! Your talent and good taste made me a fan.

  • @lunasocarina1364
    @lunasocarina1364 9 років тому +59

    Watching at 3:00am not a good idea,home alone and a storm.......why did I watch this,but it's AMAZING so it ok!😋

    • @br7078
      @br7078 9 років тому

      +Luna's Ocarina 2spoopy4me

    • @mwillowv
      @mwillowv 9 років тому

      I'm watching it in pitch black darkness with ear buds and I'm hearing noises I'm getting paranoid😅

    • @walkingonmusic6580
      @walkingonmusic6580 9 років тому

      +Color Crush7892 Same except I'm wearing headphones😅

    • @ianheroarceo9154
      @ianheroarceo9154 8 років тому +2

      +Color Crush7892 me too

    • @hodielol9453
      @hodielol9453 7 років тому

      Luna's Ocarina Y would you do that

  • @haydengibson1996
    @haydengibson1996 8 років тому +157

    Those sound affects though... Ew!!!!

  • @bleakautomaton4808
    @bleakautomaton4808 2 роки тому +19

    If Candymare had been a character in the show, I could imagine a Nightmare Night episode where they'd stumble on her and befriend her a little (with a cutesy moment of having Candymare scare the bullies and such).

  • @realmjumper7221
    @realmjumper7221 9 років тому +30

    Sweet Celestia! I thought I was tough, but this....this is dark....And yet, I listen, and can't leave the story.

    • @francescaprice2999
      @francescaprice2999 9 років тому +1

      Im reading this when Im about to go to bed in about 40 minutes. :(

    • @inactive666.
      @inactive666. 6 років тому

      Pun intended with the ‘SWEET Celestia!’?

  • @ditzyderpy7500
    @ditzyderpy7500 8 років тому +23

    Watched MLP creepypastas for over 5 hours straight and this is the only one that gave me haunting images. 20/10 stars

    • @rae-rae8005
      @rae-rae8005 2 роки тому +1

      same- gross... horrifyingly haunted images

  • @lesasynoground3410
    @lesasynoground3410 8 років тому +169

    Did anybody else see that candy mare picture for a sec

  • @CharybdisM0ns
    @CharybdisM0ns 22 дні тому +2

    Ten years later and still can't get enough of this fanfic reading.

  • @theastokeley454
    @theastokeley454 7 років тому +28

    Me: I've watched cupcakes, sweet apple massacre, the rainbow factory and lots more so I'll be fine *10 minuets later* Me: Scratch that, I'm outta here!!

  • @CyrilSmithVA
    @CyrilSmithVA 8 років тому +98

    I'm going to make this a series on UA-cam soon so look out for it

    • @baldpai1047
      @baldpai1047 8 років тому +2

      I'll subscribe to look out for it =3

    • @emilyendergirl4732
      @emilyendergirl4732 8 років тому +2

      +Baldpai omg baldpai!

    • @baldpai1047
      @baldpai1047 8 років тому +4

      emily endergirl You have been noticed

    • @littlepip4014
      @littlepip4014 6 років тому +2

      i will subscribe if you do something sweet to bite too, it is so much scarier than the first and this one is pretty bad

    • @lennidoll2721
      @lennidoll2721 5 років тому

      LIES!!

  • @eternalcomrade8144
    @eternalcomrade8144 7 років тому +63

    I am going to regret listening to this, aren't I...

  • @AppleDash19
    @AppleDash19 7 років тому +25

    The sound effects used in all five parts of this story are amazing, even the chewing sound effect sounded real.

  • @kimberlyvoss9032
    @kimberlyvoss9032 7 років тому +92

    14:38 GIRL YOU DONT NEED HELP. YOU NEED JESUS.

  • @JinxsPlace
    @JinxsPlace Рік тому +10

    Its become a tradition for me to listen to "Something sweet to bite" every time Halloween is on its way.

  • @TheNachoKat
    @TheNachoKat 9 років тому +45

    I've been avoiding listening to this because I assumed it would be another psycho killer Pinkie Pie story, and maybe it'll turn out to be just that. Either way, It's more interesting than I though it would be. :)
    Dear GOD Diamond Tiara's voice is irritating! D'X> I wonder what the actual voice of the person who did Diamond sounds like. Apple Bloom sounds great though.
    *Spoilers*
    I know this may be horrible, but in the beginning, the description of Apple Blooms body reminded me of warm salted caramel! So delicious, it made me crave some!

    • @mephistoknackerman1406
      @mephistoknackerman1406 9 років тому +3

      Delicious sweet, salty caramel. All warm and gooey. I admit, that's pretty hard to resist, even with the roasted Applebloom filling.
      I have written psycho killer Pinkie Pie stories. Not much of a spoiler, but this isn't one of them.

    • @TheNachoKat
      @TheNachoKat 9 років тому +6

      Mephisto Knackerman
      Oh yes, I finished listening to the story yesterday, I was pleasantly surprised! I had assumed Pinkie Pie was the pony depicted in the thumbnail, but I'm glad I was wrong. :D

    • @undead4542
      @undead4542 9 років тому +4

      +TheNachoKat OMG! I thought the same thing! I thought the thumbnail was Pinkie Pie

    • @joshuagarcia5804
      @joshuagarcia5804 7 років тому

      Mephisto Knackerman How screwed would the DBZverse be, if Majin Buu consumed The Candy Mare?

  • @lizziebloom1637
    @lizziebloom1637 4 роки тому +9

    Me: Oh, no! Applebloom's my favorite pony! *sad noises*
    Also me: *Sees a picture with Applebloom in it*
    *hold up*

  • @sherlyam
    @sherlyam 8 років тому +19

    Oh man.... I never really read the story on fimfiction, but this is awesome!
    BTW, Lost Narrator is really good at doing an Applejack voice
    14:44 scared me.... Good work

    • @vinyldash2333
      @vinyldash2333 4 роки тому

      This is on fimfiction?!?! Thats my home site! I should find it.

  • @Derpy-tq1qo
    @Derpy-tq1qo Рік тому +3

    I listened to this tale during the summer, and now that it’s October, it’s TRULY an appropriate time to listen to this gruesome tale of pony terror

  • @M.W.K6996
    @M.W.K6996 8 років тому +44

    This is without a doubt, one of the most terrifying fanfics in the MLP universe. Though there are other fanfics we'd like you to try: "Cupcakes", "Sweet Apple Massacre", "The Experiments of Twilight Sparkle", "Rocket To Insanity" & "Lil Miss Rarity". 0:09

  • @ididntgetthejoke5697
    @ididntgetthejoke5697 5 років тому +14

    I GUESS YOU CAN CALL HER... -puts candy glasses on- SWEET

  • @tsunemara
    @tsunemara 6 років тому +5

    It doesn’t matter how many times I listen to this story in its completion I just can’t get enough. You’ve done an amazing job. This is actually the first story I had ever listened and the reason why I subscribed.

  • @dad7790
    @dad7790 9 років тому +12

    Oml . . . That flash of the CandyMare at 4:57 nearly gave me a heart attack.
    Not really. Metaphoricaly speaking.

  • @dawnramos4723
    @dawnramos4723 5 років тому +14

    This should be a game...I'm telling you

  • @blueberrysans2640
    @blueberrysans2640 8 років тому +10

    Nightmare night~
    Such a fright~
    Give us something,
    Sweet to bite~

    • @ladyren1575
      @ladyren1575 6 років тому

      Blueberry Sans nice

    • @vinyldash2333
      @vinyldash2333 4 роки тому

      I will forevermre hatd that damned phrase.

    • @WhiteIndoraptor
      @WhiteIndoraptor Місяць тому

      It goes like this: Nightmare night what a fright give us something sweet to bite🎵 poison,drowning,blood, or knife so many ways to take your life.🎵

  • @zamas_samaz
    @zamas_samaz 2 роки тому +6

    Its been literally 6 years since I'd listened to this, and here I am again, listening to it. Last I heard it I was so young and this story really helped spark my love for Creepypastas. This story is too good, and the reading too. It's so nostalgic listening to this again.

  • @ThatGeorgeMoment
    @ThatGeorgeMoment 8 років тому +78

    i promise I will not show this to any of my scardy friends *crosses fingers*

  • @captainhat760
    @captainhat760 8 років тому +28

    Sweet apple massacre has nothing on this gory story of death

    • @wowisntitanamazinglyamazin9550
      @wowisntitanamazinglyamazin9550 8 років тому +1

      I think sweet apple massacre was worse

    • @nicolethatsme4116
      @nicolethatsme4116 8 років тому +4

      if you think thats bad than you need to see butterflies

    • @wowisntitanamazinglyamazin9550
      @wowisntitanamazinglyamazin9550 8 років тому

      bichon lover I have and sweet apple massacre is worse

    • @nicolethatsme4116
      @nicolethatsme4116 8 років тому

      Ok

    • @weezeryuri
      @weezeryuri 8 років тому +5

      Lemme explain why this story is so much better than SPM.
      (Warning: Paragraphz)
      Sweet Apple Massacre was obviously made to be not serious, I believe the creator of the story said that. It's just a series of non-stop gore and rape.
      SPM is a story you can read with a friend as a challenge, being able to laugh at every shocking sentence.
      Now this, this story actually had heart to it, the gore is realistic and detailed. The bloody parts don't overstay their welcome, and the whole story isn't just made to shock. The gore has a better hit to it and has you on the edge of your seat.
      Butterflies is great too.

  • @tomjack8582
    @tomjack8582 9 років тому +14

    I absolutely love grim-dark and gore fics but the noises are just nasty..... love it!!

  • @katnotcattt
    @katnotcattt Рік тому +2

    Very rarely do these stories I listened to when I was little disturb me so deeply when I rediscover them. Such an excellent piece of fanfiction, and an EXCELLENT narration!

  • @sokesamurai
    @sokesamurai 10 років тому +4

    Superb job. The story itself is fairly frightening but what you did with the sounds truly gave me some heavy willies. I only JUST got around to downloading it to listen to on the go. Can't wait to be utterly terrified with the rest.

  • @emmigummi2895
    @emmigummi2895 9 років тому +9

    Well, I feel like Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara are going to eat their words soon.

  • @maya-wr4yr
    @maya-wr4yr 9 років тому +47

    I watched this in the dark with head phones on high volume

    • @charlieeiler1245
      @charlieeiler1245 8 років тому +2

      Honestly, that is REALLY stupid.

    • @mcchicken2392
      @mcchicken2392 8 років тому +1

      +Charlie Eiler shut up charlie!

    • @coyotealienss
      @coyotealienss 8 років тому

      Same :)

    • @2brn4you
      @2brn4you 8 років тому +6

      Me too in the dark at night I swore I saw something.......my sister she scared the crap outta me
      From Madeline

    • @midnightsparkle2725
      @midnightsparkle2725 8 років тому +3

      me too I watch this in the dark...

  • @fuzzybuzzy3159
    @fuzzybuzzy3159 7 років тому +16

    Pinkie's mic quality is keeping me from being immersed.

  • @GreysonAuctor
    @GreysonAuctor Рік тому +1

    This was the first Grimdark fic that legit scared me. Coming back 5 years later I understand why! Its so well written, voiced, and produced.

  • @skrall107
    @skrall107 4 роки тому +5

    I love how well this video uses bits of Batman: Arkham City's soundtrack. It's not something most people associate with the horror genre, despite working so well in that context.

  • @ozzyneedshelp9167
    @ozzyneedshelp9167 7 років тому +3

    welp, don’t forget to sacrifice the candy! :)
    🍬🍫🎂🍩🍪🎂🍬🍫🍬🍬🍫🍰🥛🍰🍬🍫🍫🍬🍫🍬🍫🍫🍬🍫🍰🍬🍫🍰🎂🎂🍭🍮🍪🍪🍩🍩🍫🍫🍦🍮🍭🍪🍫🍬🍦🎂🍭🍭🍪🍿🍬🍦🍮🍪🍪🍫🍬🎂🍩🍪🍰🎂🍭🍰🍦🍿🍭🍪🍿🍬🍰🍭🍿🍬🍿🍪🎂🍦🍮🍩🍰🍦🍮🍪🍿🍦🍮🍪🍩🍫🍦🍮🍩🍿🍦🎂🍪🍿🍫🍩🍿🍬🎂🍪🍰🍪🍰🍪🍰🍫🍫🍩🍪🍭🎂🍦🍦🍬🍿🍩🍪🍭🍮🎂🍰🍦🍬🍫🍩🍩🍪🍭🍮🎂🍦🍬🍬🍫🍿🍩🍩🍪🍭🍮🍰🍰🍬🍫🍩🍪🍪🍭🍮🎂🎂🍦🍦🍬🍫🍿🍩🍪🍭🍮🎂🍰🍦🍬🍬🍿🍩🍪🍪🍭🎂🍰🍦🍬🍿🍩🍪🍪🍭🍮🎂🍰🍦🍬🍫🍿🍩🍪🍭🍭🍮🎂🍰🍦🍬🍬🍿🍿🍩🍪🍭🍮🎂🍰🍦🍬🍬🍿🍿🍪🍪🍭🍮🎂🍰🍦🍬🍬🍫🍿🍩🍩🍪🍭🍮🍰🍦🍬🍬🍫🍩🍩🍪🍪🍮🍮🎂🍰🏈🍬🍫🍿🍩🍪🍭🍮🍰🍦🍬🍬🍿🍪🍪🍭🎂🍰🍫🍪🍪🎂🍩🍿🎂🎂🍭🍰🍫🍦🍬🍿🍪🎂🍦🍩🍫🍩🍩🍦🍪🍫🍪🎂🍩🍩🍩🍪🍿🍿🍪🍰🍩🍰🍪🍰🍩🍫🍩🍫🎂🍿🍿🍿🍫🍿

  • @aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa800
    @aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa800 6 років тому +19

    Let me tell you "a great idea"
    Watch this at night way past your bedtime, when you're only 11 and there's a storm that has winds that make creepy noises,
    Yep the smallest idea ever is this, yep not the dumbest thing ever, yep
    Edit: why do I say yep a lot?

  • @fishstx5897
    @fishstx5897 5 років тому +8

    I'm actually shaking
    I've seen some gore in my time but this is something else
    This needs a lot more attention

  • @blueclawoflunarclan4479
    @blueclawoflunarclan4479 6 років тому +4

    I've listened to this story about four times now. It never gets old.

  • @dreamqueengalaxyj5069
    @dreamqueengalaxyj5069 9 років тому +9

    Me:*Randomly seeing a video because of its cover and notices it's boring and skips it,I stop and hear the good part and then a creepy face pops out and falls from chair.* XD

  • @existfutile
    @existfutile 7 років тому +13

    Bruh this went to a corpse party type of story real quick.

    • @xlisha1997x
      @xlisha1997x 5 років тому +2

      CORPSE PARTY!!!!!!!!!! :D

  • @TheEnterShepman
    @TheEnterShepman 10 років тому +15

    0.o .... Awesome! well done! gave me the chills

  • @MareCat31
    @MareCat31 8 років тому +2

    truely perfect for the month of oct,i ate a lot of candy yesterday and its really a nice palette cleanser of a story...i really have a feeling that eating too much candy can make you have some weird or even scary lucid dreams.

  • @Minto8384
    @Minto8384 7 років тому +5

    You have a great voice! I love how you capture every bit, EVERY. BIT. Of the terror and trauma.

  • @chaselayman6815
    @chaselayman6815 4 роки тому +3

    Bruh, this truly needs to be animated. All o f the parts do. I really wanna see that.

  • @olive7900
    @olive7900 6 років тому +11

    Idk y but I enjoy things like this
    Especially mlp grimdark stories
    I dont get scared with these or grossed out
    I smile and laugh when I hear someone in pain or screaming
    I know....im weird

    • @demongrinder8515
      @demongrinder8515 4 роки тому +1

      Same lol. I know it's not real and it's very interesting.

  • @kiarrabazan6306
    @kiarrabazan6306 7 років тому +5

    I'm so excited to listen to this all over again

  • @liiivi3432
    @liiivi3432 8 років тому +3

    When the sound effects make you throw up,you know it's good.

  • @Bunny_BoxEXE
    @Bunny_BoxEXE 3 роки тому +2

    I never thought to leave a comment here before, but listening to this is one of the most important Halloween traditions I have! I loved listening to this story while I work on my costumes, or walk about at school ^^ I've kept this tradition for about 6 years since I was in middle school and am so thankful for this masterpiece! I love My Little Pony and the amazing fanmade content that stemmed from it. I hope these videos never get taken down!

  • @artgurusauce
    @artgurusauce 9 років тому +5

    bruh, listening to this late at night during a thunderstorm makes it so much more scary.

  • @blueclawoflunarclan4479
    @blueclawoflunarclan4479 9 років тому +10

    this is beyond cupcakes

  • @bonniefredrick656
    @bonniefredrick656 8 років тому +3

    That was the best MPP creepypasta I've ever heard besides Twilights dollhouse

  • @JustAShyGhost
    @JustAShyGhost Рік тому +2

    I remember listening to this years ago, glad i found it again

  • @MysticWolfy7
    @MysticWolfy7 8 років тому +2

    I listen to this as a bedtime story and the warning at the beginning always makes me smile. :)

  • @AngelWolfArt
    @AngelWolfArt 8 років тому +3

    "Apple Bloom, you in here?" Ooooh yeah, she's in there all right, but not what you think Aj

  • @aridatina
    @aridatina 8 років тому +9

    Fucking hell, the flashes of the candy mare scared me shitless.

    • @Boba_loving_freak
      @Boba_loving_freak 8 років тому

      yeah

    • @tahumasteroffire886
      @tahumasteroffire886 8 років тому

      It's okay, but the Candy Mare sounds like a Sci Fi horror movie for myself

    • @darkenfell39
      @darkenfell39 8 років тому +1

      The first time I saw her, I thought I was imagining things.

    • @ameliarosettarose8740
      @ameliarosettarose8740 8 років тому

      +Darkenfell Stormfire I also thought so but now I'm terrified

    • @2brn4you
      @2brn4you 8 років тому

      She kinda looks like pinky pie
      From Madeline
      P.s they scared me too

  • @Molly_Mauk
    @Molly_Mauk 3 роки тому +3

    I come here for the from dark stories and I stay for the top tier sound effects, keep up the good work

  • @addisonchase4146
    @addisonchase4146 6 років тому +2

    Oh my God the sounds of Applejack being torn apart really got me 😱😱😱😱

  • @maximillian1109
    @maximillian1109 4 роки тому +2

    Every damn October I return to this story. Thats how much of a icon it has become in my life.XD

  • @blixblox-left
    @blixblox-left 7 років тому +30

    Oh god the snapping and crackling is terrible inna puke 🤢
    Why don't I listen to the warning?!??!?!!

  • @micahbowers2562
    @micahbowers2562 5 років тому +6

    This is my first time listening to this and the beginning scared me shitless. Apple Jack why😭😭😭

  • @jessrose1384
    @jessrose1384 9 років тому +4

    Huehuehue dark room headphones full volume bone snapping blood curdling screams muffled groans bloody piercing sounds ugh I WANT MORE!!!!

  • @discontinuedchannel2392
    @discontinuedchannel2392 7 років тому +16

    It's not like I was going to sleep tonight anyways.

  • @sonofcthulu8772
    @sonofcthulu8772 6 років тому +3

    *STOP YOUR DIDDLY DADLLING*
    Also as soon as i heard the laughing i would just be like wildcat
    GONNA GO HOME GO TO BED