Ah, I see. I tried improving and adding dialogue to my videos, so my videos are very different from one another. Thank you for the feedback, my next video will have plenty of dialogue. ❤
So a few things, first off would highly recommend color coding your text with the person talking, just makes it a bit easier to tell whos talking at a glance, secondly you appear to have this bad habit of underestimating facial reactions, where despite seeing something shocking or wierd they either just move the mouth a little or raise an eyebrow. I would also highly recommend shortening the amount of times you have everyone say the same times as much as you can, for everyone to say the same thing at once really takes away from the scene as a whole and just feels lazy, unless its a slow build where everyone notices something different until they all suddenly realize it at the same time. Finally you tend to dead fish their reactions a lot, where they sorta just sit there, no dialogue between the characters at what they're seeing or if it does happen it doesnt have the same flare the characters normally have. Bakugou doesn't have that hyper energy, feeling more tame and while he uses harsh language the model doesn't reflect that. Uraraka doesn't have that stuttery nervous energy thats characteristic of her and Midoriya doesnt speak much at all so he doesnt have that analytic mind that makes him a good character to watch in these sorts of videos. And to list a good thing before I say my final thoughts, you keep good continuity with your series, referencing things from past videos which a lot of people forget to do. All in all I personally have to give this a 3/10, but I will be watching closely as I believe you have good talent.
Thanks you for the advice, I honestly didn't really know what to change. I'll keep that in mind as I make more videos. Honestly, I don't really feel satisfied with any of the videos, but I just don't have the energy to remake them. I will, but later when I'm actually better at making this type of content. Thanks for watching!
@@depressedreader I'm super excited to see how you advance this! And if possible you can always show an early version of the video to those around you and ask if anything looks off! Also on the energy thing, it may be best to either take a break or simply watch your video again to see if there's anything missing, I also find that watching media involving the characters in question helps hype me up to do stuff involving them, so would highly recommend that! Aside from that I'm super excited to see your next videos!
Thank you, although I was in the progress of making the Arlecchino video, I decided to remake the entire thing as I've seen a lot of flaws in it. Your advice helped me a lot, I appreciate it (≡^∇^≡)
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Excited for Arlecchino‘s and dottore‘s parts in the future ^^
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Love the Sunday pfp btw ^^
Ty! (*ˊᗜˋ*)ᵗᑋᵃᐢᵏ ᵞᵒᵘ
Dottore is gonna speedrun Most Vile person in existence for them
It's amazing! Loved it , i hope you keep these masterpieces coming :)
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Watching this rn. Into this the first min, and I alr love it ❤❤❤❤❤
Omg my man😍😍😍hope he come home when his banner come back 😘
Good luck on your pulls! I hope you get him ᐠ( ᐛ )ᐟ
This was so good! Keep up the good work
I know it’s difficult but maybe more dialogue would be nice? There’s so much they could say
Anyways good luck!
Ah, I see. I tried improving and adding dialogue to my videos, so my videos are very different from one another. Thank you for the feedback, my next video will have plenty of dialogue. ❤
@@depressedreader Nice! I believe that you will do a great job! ❤️
i cant believe bakugo didnt say "HE'S CRAZY" one
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AHHHHH THIS IS UNDERRATED AHHHAHAHSEVAJJRBEB❤❤❤❤❤
Thank you ヾ(〃^∇^)ﾉ
So a few things, first off would highly recommend color coding your text with the person talking, just makes it a bit easier to tell whos talking at a glance, secondly you appear to have this bad habit of underestimating facial reactions, where despite seeing something shocking or wierd they either just move the mouth a little or raise an eyebrow.
I would also highly recommend shortening the amount of times you have everyone say the same times as much as you can, for everyone to say the same thing at once really takes away from the scene as a whole and just feels lazy, unless its a slow build where everyone notices something different until they all suddenly realize it at the same time.
Finally you tend to dead fish their reactions a lot, where they sorta just sit there, no dialogue between the characters at what they're seeing or if it does happen it doesnt have the same flare the characters normally have.
Bakugou doesn't have that hyper energy, feeling more tame and while he uses harsh language the model doesn't reflect that. Uraraka doesn't have that stuttery nervous energy thats characteristic of her and Midoriya doesnt speak much at all so he doesnt have that analytic mind that makes him a good character to watch in these sorts of videos.
And to list a good thing before I say my final thoughts, you keep good continuity with your series, referencing things from past videos which a lot of people forget to do.
All in all I personally have to give this a 3/10, but I will be watching closely as I believe you have good talent.
Thanks you for the advice, I honestly didn't really know what to change. I'll keep that in mind as I make more videos. Honestly, I don't really feel satisfied with any of the videos, but I just don't have the energy to remake them. I will, but later when I'm actually better at making this type of content. Thanks for watching!
@@depressedreader I'm super excited to see how you advance this! And if possible you can always show an early version of the video to those around you and ask if anything looks off! Also on the energy thing, it may be best to either take a break or simply watch your video again to see if there's anything missing, I also find that watching media involving the characters in question helps hype me up to do stuff involving them, so would highly recommend that!
Aside from that I'm super excited to see your next videos!
Thank you, although I was in the progress of making the Arlecchino video, I decided to remake the entire thing as I've seen a lot of flaws in it. Your advice helped me a lot, I appreciate it (≡^∇^≡)
@@depressedreader awesome! Can't wait to see it!
@@depressedreaderkeep going Queen your the best l love your edits are amzing and sweet your the best❤
Hi! (first btw)
Hello, dear sister. How was your day? (*^▽^*)
Y did you skip the part where Miku's idle ate the bird? 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Oh yeah, sorry about that. I just didn't want to put it in 😭