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This essay is really useful for me because I learn many new words Nd new technique of writing a essay 😊thank you very much sir please make more videos on all modules....God bless you sir
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task 2- some people believe that modern individuals are becoming dependent on each other and some believe that they are becoming more independent. discuss both views and give ur opinion.
A beautiful essay, but it seems that position is not clear through out the progression.In First para you are one side while changed to other side in next.
Good flow, best structure and academic language. Drawback is the language you used for explanation. Since i don't know Hindi, I didnt understand anything you explained. This ia a humble request. Explain in English. This is an English test and talking in Hindi to make people understand serves no purpose because one must think talk and understand in English only. If you are concerned for every follower, please make an English video of this and other essays :) thank you
Sir ik swaal a jinve extend wali type hundi aa to what extend do you agree... For example tourism is not benefical.to what extent do u agree . Hun ehh good v aa badd. V...means teacher kehnde aa ja tan agree horya kro uaa disgree....means eh essay hi edda da me fully agree ja disgree ni ho sakdaa... Same case- libraries are not essential bcoz of internet edda da kuch.. fr extent agree disagree Means edda de essay jidde ch appa fully agree ho hi ni sakde naa hi disgree appaa nu likhna hi painda dono sides.. In conclusio menu extend walla eassy likhna structure te vedio bnado
thnku so much for this vedio plz sir give solution to me for getting my desire band frst tym i m not get good scre Lis_5.5 Reading_4.5 writing-5.5 speaking_6 plz sir mnu dasdio mn kivy vdia score get kra
Sir i just start your video , jidda tusi kihya general statement da benefit ni but i e2language channel a jay sir ne oss te ohna according general statement benefit a , so please thoda hor dassu ess bare ch please v kis case ch benefit hai ja kis ch ni
I'll present two observations. 1. A band 9 Essay can be written without a general statement. [IELTS Simon, ex-examiner, does this all the time] 2. Many beginner to intermediate students struggle with thinking up an appropriate general statement and then transitioning smoothly on to the topic, losing marks unnecessarily. Conclusion: Don't write general statements. I hope this will help you make your mind.
task2 all fathers should be entitled to the time off from work when their children are born.what is your opinion?sir pls me answere written commemnts box g plsg
Sir bathinda kithe center thora?Sir plz mere reply Krdiya kro i really need ur help just give me advice which one is best bc or idp.i already give 2 test in idp general +acadmic
This essay is really useful for me because I learn many new words Nd new technique of writing a essay 😊thank you very much sir please make more videos on all modules....God bless you sir
Online lessons Bare K thought a Sir ????? You can Run online classes as well Fro long distance students Like me I shall be thankful To you And many more students 😊😊😊
Gurwinder Singh, I agree with ur idea.. it will be very helpful for those students who r an employee and specially for girls who cannot attend evening batch because of long distance and timings.
Very nice way of explaining but i have a doubt. Can u plz tell me isn't this kind of essay require 2 bodies for advantages? Becoz m little bit confused ,hope u will clear my doubt.thanx in advance
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This essay is really useful for me because I learn many new words Nd new technique of writing a essay 😊thank you very much sir please make more videos on all modules....God bless you sir
Can "for one" replace firstly etc ??
Sir ,your way of explaining is too much excellent .
Many many thanks .
it is really helpful and
thankyou so much
Good method and very nice
This precious gem is really going unrecognised, I am gonna share it on all my social platforms. Folks watch learn n share these valuable videos more n more, so that uploader can keep doing the good work. God bless you Sir.
Thanks for the words of appreciation, sukhmander.
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It is so complicated and it is just a book essay may be it would be much better to write in own opinions
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Hats off for ur hardwork .pls upload many more such vdios of writing task.humble request.
Sure I will
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thank u sir pls make more videos like this, as both of views, agree disagree pls sir next month is my exam pls help me to improve my writing
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Thank u so much Sir.. plz environment nl related v koi task 2 samjha do sir
sir plz when you creat any line explain profoundly.so that easy to understand for us.
Plz write on
People these days spend more money on the wants than needs
What is your idea
Videos are quite beneficial.
Can u provide online clases ?
task 2- some people believe that modern individuals are becoming dependent on each other and some believe that they are becoming more independent. discuss both views and give ur opinion.
A beautiful essay, but it seems that position is not clear through out the progression.In First para you are one side while changed to other side in next.
thank u sir
Tusi kise video ch ni dassia merits n demerits nu why avoid karna Or I missed something 🤔
Sir make video on what u extend agree or disagree
Sir, please hor videos banao task 2 te
Sir writing task 2 di video bna deo kidda explain krde aa
Good flow, best structure and academic language.
Drawback is the language you used for explanation. Since i don't know Hindi, I didnt understand anything you explained.
This ia a humble request. Explain in English.
This is an English test and talking in Hindi to make people understand serves no purpose because one must think talk and understand in English only.
If you are concerned for every follower, please make an English video of this and other essays :) thank you
Sir ik swaal a jinve extend wali type hundi aa to what extend do you agree...
For example tourism is not benefical.to what extent do u agree .
Hun ehh good v aa badd. V...means teacher kehnde aa ja tan agree horya kro uaa disgree....means eh essay hi edda da me fully agree ja disgree ni ho sakdaa...
Same case- libraries are not essential bcoz of internet edda da kuch.. fr extent agree disagree
Means edda de essay jidde ch appa fully agree ho hi ni sakde naa hi disgree appaa nu likhna hi painda dono sides..
In conclusio menu extend walla eassy likhna structure te vedio bnado
do you agree and disagree te writing essay te video bnao
partially disagree or agree te v video bna do
sir plz Mainu grammer bare dso kida use krna words writting speaking vich bhut pro a rhi a ..... line formation pro a rhi
Sir give some suggestions about connectors for task 2
Sir ...isn't the thesis statement more like a conclusion ..as we already summed it up ..
Hv problem in writing task only
Sir very nice sir could you help me please..
I'm from Amritsar where r you sir?
thnku so much for this vedio plz sir give solution to me for getting my desire band frst tym i m not get good scre
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writing-5.5
speaking_6
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Sir i just start your video , jidda tusi kihya general statement da benefit ni but i e2language channel a jay sir ne oss te ohna according general statement benefit a , so please thoda hor dassu ess bare ch please v kis case ch benefit hai ja kis ch ni
I'll present two observations.
1. A band 9 Essay can be written without a general statement. [IELTS Simon, ex-examiner, does this all the time]
2. Many beginner to intermediate students struggle with thinking up an appropriate general statement and then transitioning smoothly on to the topic, losing marks unnecessarily.
Conclusion: Don't write general statements.
I hope this will help you make your mind.
@@hardevsinghsra thank you for instant reply
task2 all fathers should be entitled to the time off from work when their children are born.what is your opinion?sir pls me answere written commemnts box g plsg
Sir I wrote in that kind of essay with my opinion it's will be right or wrong for thesis like.. I believe.. Reply pls
Where I can find other video of writing task 2
Plz mnu v dsdo Kithe hone giyaa ehna diyaa hor vedioss
Can we use pros and cons too ?
Sir how can i get more videos ?
Sir meri writing and reading improve i hundi please help me
Sir bathinda kithe center thora?Sir plz mere reply Krdiya kro i really need ur help just give me advice which one is best bc or idp.i already give 2 test in idp general +acadmic
sir ur writing is blurr
sir g ur writing not show up properly
I think you may need to up the video quality. Its displaying well at anything over 240p.
Great sir
This essay is really useful for me because I learn many new words Nd new technique of writing a essay 😊thank you very much sir please make more videos on all modules....God bless you sir
Thanks sir
Sir tuci example ni ditta kise v paragraph ch?
Example ditta hai. Its just not starting with 'for example'. Can you guess where it is?
Thnk u sir for helping but want to know we need to write alwys equal points on both side adv. And disadv. Side or these vary??
They can vary. The length of the paragraphs should not vary by more than 20 words.
Thankyou sir
Online lessons Bare K thought a Sir ????? You can Run online classes as well Fro long distance students Like me I shall be thankful To you And many more students 😊😊😊
Sounds like a good idea. But I'm not quite sure where to start.
Gurwinder Singh, I agree with ur idea.. it will be very helpful for those students who r an employee and specially for girls who cannot attend evening batch because of long distance and timings.
may be skype lessions and essay checking services over the email?
Waheguru ji ka khalsa waheguru ji ke fateh
Sir isme apna opinion nhi dena ???? means l,me word use ni karna kya
Sir plz describe all types of agree or disagree eassy . Especially task response of them.
Sir please make videos in English its helpful for everyone.
Sir cause and solution ta bna sari types he kra do
sir ehdae ch extra opinion related advantages likhde kinne band cutt dea aa
Sir eh task mainu Aya c paper Ch January Ch
Sir each other word is wrong.
One another is right.
Each other only use like made for each other
Well done,sir. It will be more beneficial if u give a little bit more elaboration of idioms and difficult words with some sentences.
Please make some videos on every type of academic task 1
Sir , writing di hor videos bnao
Very nice way of explaining but i have a doubt. Can u plz tell me isn't this kind of essay require 2 bodies for advantages? Becoz m little bit confused ,hope u will clear my doubt.thanx in advance
You will lost marks for doing that. You will get only Band 6 in Task Response criteria. Never do that.
@@hardevsinghsra thank u sir
Thank you sir ji.
Sorry plz tell me why disadvantages in first bp (not advantage )
Mainu lgda q k apa advantage di side a so conclusion naal link krna
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Main reply krke check kita......congratulations
excellent sir👍
Thnq sir
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Varinder Kaur yeah
2nd sentence in introduction - ".....with this trend, BUT the upside in this....". BUT is missed or it wasn't necessary ?
You don't use But when the sentence starts with Although. It's a common mistake.
@@hardevsinghsra Thank you, Sir for clearing my doubt.