Holy cow, this was INCREDIBLE! I love how the Observer at certain points FEELS like they are being spoken through, while still having their own distinct personality!
Proper enjoyed it. Thank you. Sinuous imagery; early on the mice motif is fantastic. Some constructive criticism: a slower spoken delivery would help us absorb the tenor of the piece. The prose is thick and slick so it takes time to absorb. You're on the right track for sure. Well done.
@@HoundsongGames I'm a singer so I really do get being self conscious about your voice but dude you have a an amazing voice for story telling! It's deep and smooth which makes it easy on the ears and your tone and ability to project makes the action sound intense and interesting to listen to. You really have a gift man and it's one you should totally capitalize on!
That was such an amazing and great story! The imagery and description of each line was quite vivid and wild, especially with your voice! ^^ That was quite fun to listen
Wow this was incredible! I am becoming obsessed with Crusade and this was perfect. The description of the observer was wild, i loved it please please please keep this going!! Just got a new subscriber and will be looking to support your work!! Thanks again for the time you put into this
I've read your novel "Tattered Pawns" last year. I had no idea you had a UA-cam channel, that's amazing. And you're into Trench Crusade. That's so cool.
Once we're through my current book's backerkit my schedule opens up for funsies fanfics again :) www.backerkit.com/c/projects/storytellers-forge-studios/black-ballad-chronicles-of-the-crossing?ref=bk-social-project
Holy cow, this was INCREDIBLE! I love how the Observer at certain points FEELS like they are being spoken through, while still having their own distinct personality!
Gonna keep coming back to listen to this alot till more stories come out
Proper enjoyed it. Thank you. Sinuous imagery; early on the mice motif is fantastic. Some constructive criticism: a slower spoken delivery would help us absorb the tenor of the piece. The prose is thick and slick so it takes time to absorb. You're on the right track for sure. Well done.
Great voice acting tbh. Very exciting to hear more Trench Crusade lore and stories.
We need a part two or at the very least another story, had to go back and listen to this twice because I enjoyed it so much
Working on it! Been tied up with novel and game stuff but planning to circle back for sure 😊
Amazing and brutal story. Really great reading and love your voice :D
Wow, thanks so much! I'm pretty self conscious about it haha
@@HoundsongGames I'm a singer so I really do get being self conscious about your voice but dude you have a an amazing voice for story telling! It's deep and smooth which makes it easy on the ears and your tone and ability to project makes the action sound intense and interesting to listen to. You really have a gift man and it's one you should totally capitalize on!
That was such an amazing and great story! The imagery and description of each line was quite vivid and wild, especially with your voice! ^^
That was quite fun to listen
This was... really good
Really good! Was thirsting for TC content and had no idea what I was in for with this and was totally blown away with the quality.
Excellent work! I’m psyched about trench crusade and this nails the vibe and spirit
Loved it, thank you, we need more storys enumerating and elaborating the setting. Keep em coming
I Absolutely hyped at the idea of more!
cant wait to hear more!
Dang this was awesome
Subscribed!!!! What an amazing narration. I felt so immersed listening
We need so much fiction for Trench Crusade. I've already gone through all the lore available. 😭
I hear ya. Been lobbying the devs to give me a commission, but no luck yet!
Dude that was dope, when's the next one coming?
Buddy, THIS is what we crave. More stories to spread, more love to the trenches.
Great story
Great reading
Thanks from Ireland!
That was excellent! Especially well done with the depiction of the Observer
Thank you very much!
Amazing 😊 well written and creepy as appropriate
Wow this was incredible! I am becoming obsessed with Crusade and this was perfect. The description of the observer was wild, i loved it please please please keep this going!! Just got a new subscriber and will be looking to support your work!! Thanks again for the time you put into this
Thank you! Part 2 is coming once I get out from under my "real work" backlog :)
I've read your novel "Tattered Pawns" last year. I had no idea you had a UA-cam channel, that's amazing. And you're into Trench Crusade. That's so cool.
Ah! Thank you so much 😁
More always coming! And the Pawns sequel is in the works too 🤫
Just got into during some battles in the game. But, dude you got a good voice for telling story’s. For the all mighty!
Thank you so much! Glad I could add a little drama to the carnage 😄
Man I would like to hear more stories about trench crusade
I've been lobbying their discord to commission me when they get around to doing novels but they haven't returned my calls xD
@HoundsongGames 🥲
Well done!!
Epic!
Dang! Great story!
this was awesome
Hope you do the other parts, i want to know if he makes it.
Once we're through my current book's backerkit my schedule opens up for funsies fanfics again :)
www.backerkit.com/c/projects/storytellers-forge-studios/black-ballad-chronicles-of-the-crossing?ref=bk-social-project
7.5 out of 10, you should go to the trench crusade creators and ask if you can make novels for them.