Building a TV Series Episode 1: Writing a Pilot

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  • Опубліковано 13 тра 2024
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    This is the first episode in a series covering how you should write a series for television. Today I'm looking at the Breaking Bad pilot to explain how a strong pilot should be written.
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    #Screenwriting #BreakingBad #TVPilot
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  • @TylerMowery
    @TylerMowery  3 роки тому +57

    Get Practical Tools to Write Your Great Screenplay: www.practicalscreenwriting.com

    • @soothingmind868
      @soothingmind868 2 роки тому +1

      Hi Tyler, how much to charge as a writer's fee for. Three minute-long pilot?

    • @soothingmind868
      @soothingmind868 2 роки тому +1

      For a show like Family Guy?

    • @baltrus5915
      @baltrus5915 Рік тому

      Tyler Durden loves this ua-cam.com/video/1IF6eZtHuxA/v-deo.html

    • @Aditya.sajjai
      @Aditya.sajjai 11 місяців тому +1

      you nicely explained the core ideas of the pilot very easy as far i think it is a pilot is like the first act of a movie that lasts for 20 minutes

  • @OutstandingScreenplays
    @OutstandingScreenplays 3 роки тому +508

    Breaking Bad is the best pilot ever made! It builds masterfully on the likability of Walter White. So that when later in the series Walter White does incredibly disgusting things, we still don't stop watching the series, because our likeability for him is locked in since the pilot.

    • @shanielswaby3591
      @shanielswaby3591 3 роки тому +6

      YESSS

    • @LuisMiguelMarado
      @LuisMiguelMarado 3 роки тому +25

      I get why you say that, but I did hate WW after a while. I kept watching because I'm incredibly loyal to a good show with good writing. However, I stopped relating to WW very soon in the series.

    • @ruly8153
      @ruly8153 3 роки тому +15

      @@LuisMiguelMarado
      It’s It really about relating or likening
      It’s about empathy

    • @adrithmanvik1853
      @adrithmanvik1853 3 роки тому +8

      Imo attack on titan is the best pilot episode regardless of medium but Ik ppl are gonna disagree so come at me.

    • @mariana-ni9wl
      @mariana-ni9wl 3 роки тому +8

      For me Mr. Robot pilot it’s the best!

  • @ChillSensesASMR
    @ChillSensesASMR 2 роки тому +6

    They did an interview with the creator of breaking bad and he said that had he known about this other show called Weeds which is a similar premise, he wouldn’t have pitched his series.

  • @darwinwinchester4621
    @darwinwinchester4621 3 роки тому +122

    Oh God just as I was struggling with how to write my TV series you come from heaven with godly timing to the rescue. Thank you!!! I'm eager to watch the next episodes of this series.

    • @EthanWingroveTV
      @EthanWingroveTV 3 роки тому

      I made a TV Pilot inspired by this👇
      ua-cam.com/video/dHTTps4s5bw/v-deo.html
      Lmk what u think🥷🏿

    • @baltrus5915
      @baltrus5915 Рік тому

      Tyler Durden loves this ua-cam.com/video/1IF6eZtHuxA/v-deo.html

    • @judichristopher4604
      @judichristopher4604 9 місяців тому +2

      Right!!!
      I feel the same way.

    • @23StudiosSports
      @23StudiosSports 2 місяці тому +1

      How’s the progress?

  • @falconawesomeness1141
    @falconawesomeness1141 3 роки тому +41

    Dang. My mentor just told me that I need a pilot in my portfolio. This is dope timing.

    • @baltrus5915
      @baltrus5915 Рік тому

      Tyler Durden loves this ua-cam.com/video/1IF6eZtHuxA/v-deo.html

  • @AndrewSego
    @AndrewSego 3 роки тому +21

    I just started writing a pilot! Very convenient that this graced my feed.

  • @estebansgiron
    @estebansgiron 3 роки тому +182

    This video was uploaded just at the right moment. I was just about to start writing a pilot. Thanks Tyler! Your videos are always helpful! :)

    • @ruizma9826
      @ruizma9826 3 роки тому +6

      Bruh me too!

    • @riiddisbuk2496
      @riiddisbuk2496 3 роки тому +2

      @@ruizma9826 Both of you, underrated comments :P

    • @riiddisbuk2496
      @riiddisbuk2496 3 роки тому +4

      @@ruizma9826 I was thinking of writing a comic series. I felt like this video is something to take note of.

    • @ruizma9826
      @ruizma9826 3 роки тому +3

      @@riiddisbuk2496 Bruh same here 😁

    • @riiddisbuk2496
      @riiddisbuk2496 3 роки тому +3

      @@ruizma9826 👍

  • @Claustrofobi4
    @Claustrofobi4 3 роки тому +7

    Plenty of my script and TV professors set this show as an example of good directing, witting, audiovisual language, and everything that involves a well done work.

  • @logicfrogmedia
    @logicfrogmedia 3 роки тому +36

    PERFECT TIMING I literally was just looking for a vid like this

  • @Ousvec
    @Ousvec 3 роки тому +1

    Great, this is exactly that I was praying for to be done on your channel! Thank you!

  • @coolestreviews5315
    @coolestreviews5315 3 роки тому +3

    I've watched all your videos so far. Each one is very helpful, and I can't wait to see more of them. Thank You, Tyler!

  • @alanhaldane4114
    @alanhaldane4114 3 роки тому +10

    I am considering writing my first TV series and started the research into what this will entail. This was most helpful Tyler; excellent clarity in a nice easy style. Many thanks!

  • @benjaminread5287
    @benjaminread5287 3 роки тому +2

    Yes finally! The videos on series! Thank You!!!

  • @emreemre96
    @emreemre96 3 роки тому +6

    Excellent work as always! As a mere movie enthusiast, who has no intention for writing/directing, these kind of videos are really interesting to watch, makes me appreciate what goes on behind the scenes etc. Thank you!

  • @harmonicafruitbananatoonie3261
    @harmonicafruitbananatoonie3261 3 роки тому +1

    OH MY GOD THANK YOU! I've been trying to write a story for a television show for a while now, but never found many good videos, and they were usually only on the pilot. You're a lifesaver

  • @Ousvec
    @Ousvec 3 роки тому +46

    Is there also a chance that you can go further into different types of shows? For example difference of seasonal or episodical writing? And different running time? Differences between writing of 20 to 50 minutes per episode, like different number of acts? Thanks!

  • @EzzyFrames
    @EzzyFrames 3 роки тому +1

    Finally!!! your making a guide for series

  • @michaelbrianrawlinsactor
    @michaelbrianrawlinsactor 3 роки тому

    Always exciting when you upload a new video!

  • @miracassidy4802
    @miracassidy4802 2 роки тому +1

    Thank you thank you!!! your videos are so great Tyler

  • @m.mishra9133
    @m.mishra9133 3 роки тому +2

    I was just about to start a pilot. This was an amazing guide. Thanks bruh.

  • @hasratramazanov6092
    @hasratramazanov6092 3 роки тому +8

    You are a lifesaver. you released this at the right moment that i needed

    • @EthanWingroveTV
      @EthanWingroveTV 3 роки тому

      I made a TV Pilot inspired by this👇
      ua-cam.com/video/dHTTps4s5bw/v-deo.html
      Lmk what u think🥷🏿

  • @virgilmontana4208
    @virgilmontana4208 3 роки тому +1

    been waiting for this

  • @dburnsauthor
    @dburnsauthor 3 роки тому

    Thank you so much Tyler for this!!! I just finished writing the pilot and trying to figure out the logline.

  • @sd8229
    @sd8229 3 роки тому

    I'm so glad you put this out ✨🤗✨

  • @KMoore-xl8mn
    @KMoore-xl8mn 3 роки тому

    I just finished the first draft of my pilot. This really helps a lot. Thanks Tyler.

  • @oscarrojasjr9984
    @oscarrojasjr9984 3 роки тому +2

    I NEEDED THIS RIGHT NOW THANK YOU TYLER

    • @EthanWingroveTV
      @EthanWingroveTV 3 роки тому

      I made a TV Pilot inspired by this👇
      ua-cam.com/video/dHTTps4s5bw/v-deo.html
      Lmk what u think🥷🏿

  • @chriswest8389
    @chriswest8389 11 місяців тому +1

    Just what l need. Won't happen but I'm working on a t.v. concept. Im trying to map out the entire series.this way I can plan ahead of time without the clock ticking,the series finale and make it better. The concept dovetails perfectly with a philosophical premise. Freewill vs determinism, what it means to be a human being- the law of personal identity. The law OF identity etc.

  • @GARBImusic
    @GARBImusic 3 роки тому +6

    Tyler, I've been watching your videos for a while now, and I'd like to tell you how much you help me with my writing! I subscribed to your second channel now and I'm hoping to learn more about how I can create consistently. Thank you so much, I'm going to watch all your videos! Love from brazil :)

  • @Dealio09
    @Dealio09 3 роки тому +1

    Thanks Tyler!

  • @zacvillanueva3804
    @zacvillanueva3804 3 роки тому +1

    Hey Tyler. Great video! Can you make a video explaining how to tackle the second draft of a completed feature length script? Love your videos

  • @emmanuelsekyere8792
    @emmanuelsekyere8792 3 роки тому +1

    Thank God!!! You finally ventured TV script!!!!!

  • @Janizzary
    @Janizzary 3 роки тому +25

    I'd love to see a break down of the Stranger Things pilot. It has more of an ensemble with Joyce, Hopper, the boys: Mike, Lucas & Justin, Eleven, etc. I'm still unsure of who's the main protagonist.

    • @TomEyeTheSFMguy
      @TomEyeTheSFMguy 2 роки тому +4

      I feel the 3 boys are the main protagonists.

    • @AdamDj-ic3kr
      @AdamDj-ic3kr 4 місяці тому

      ​@@TomEyeTheSFMguyonly in season one,in season two it's eleven and hopper,and in the other seasons the protagonist is as hard to decipher as who's the protagonist of rvb

  • @kennedycole
    @kennedycole 19 днів тому

    Screenwriting made so easy, thanks brodie!💯

  • @CreativeShubham
    @CreativeShubham 2 роки тому +2

    The way you explain is really appreciating. Love from India Brother

  • @coolestreviews5315
    @coolestreviews5315 3 роки тому +5

    THANK YOU, TYLER! I was a good writer before, with your knowledge, I know in my heart I will be a great writer. Thank YOU!

    • @EthanWingroveTV
      @EthanWingroveTV 3 роки тому +1

      I made a TV Pilot inspired by this👇
      ua-cam.com/video/dHTTps4s5bw/v-deo.html
      Lmk what u think🥷🏿

  • @shanielswaby3591
    @shanielswaby3591 3 роки тому +1

    Thank you so very much for also teaching us TV writing! I am more of a TV writer than a movie one

  • @owenbunny4023
    @owenbunny4023 3 роки тому +2

    Awesome, pilot is always the most exciting episode

  • @TheCoward383
    @TheCoward383 3 роки тому

    Yoooooo the timing for the video was perfect. Yesterday I rewatched another channel's video about breaking bad having the perfect pilot 😂

  • @bluefire640
    @bluefire640 Рік тому

    Thanks man i learn a lot from this great video

  • @erinrobles5704
    @erinrobles5704 3 роки тому +1

    wow I just got assigned to write a pilot for class and this pops up.. a gift

  • @TheLight965
    @TheLight965 3 роки тому +3

    I finished my first draft of my second screenplay and could use a few videos for tips on rewrites/second drafts!

  • @Kidhollywood
    @Kidhollywood 3 роки тому +1

    So hyped for this series!!! Thank you. Do you have discord channel?

  • @bleh6339
    @bleh6339 3 роки тому

    And here I was thinking you'd forgotten. This will be so helpful, thanks!

  • @line4169
    @line4169 Рік тому +3

    I suggest you to study plot of attack on titan, it's some of the most innovative & groundbreaking storytelling in current TV shows.

  • @calebim-th2iq
    @calebim-th2iq 3 роки тому +12

    can you also make a video on season finales?

  • @salimramadhan4531
    @salimramadhan4531 Рік тому

    Hey i love your work it's very direct and precise. Can you do a review of the arrow tv series, from it's pilot to the character's growth throughout the season.

  • @younggodicarus
    @younggodicarus 3 роки тому +1

    Thank you

  • @harleymackenzie2631
    @harleymackenzie2631 3 роки тому

    Brilliant video.

  • @shawanashahtaj4328
    @shawanashahtaj4328 2 роки тому +3

    Thanks for this, I’m making a tv series with google assistants and it’s called google mean girls! Because I wanted it to be more original and more of a comedy and dramatic show mixed together.

  • @msblackbarbie1885
    @msblackbarbie1885 3 роки тому +1

    This was very good

  • @alexjwebabou
    @alexjwebabou 3 роки тому +1

    Tyler! your timing a g a i n !

  • @PatriceDEvans
    @PatriceDEvans 2 роки тому +1

    Thanks

  • @cyrismaez3401
    @cyrismaez3401 2 роки тому

    great video!

  • @SONICADVENTURES11
    @SONICADVENTURES11 3 роки тому +1

    Awesome. My next project was to start writing a com drama.

  • @randomrey6568
    @randomrey6568 3 роки тому +5

    Hey Tyler, Is it okay if you can make a video on how to Subvert Expectations? Thank You🙏🏿

  • @zahuruddinsheikh2814
    @zahuruddinsheikh2814 3 роки тому

    finally you kept your word!
    I would want your opinion interms of comparison with movies and tv series. For example how harmon story circle gets used in here and ion movies. etc.

  • @Lctv182
    @Lctv182 Місяць тому

    I think I'd be great to this

  • @hiimasonicfan1139
    @hiimasonicfan1139 Рік тому

    Thank you now I know how to write a sonic show in the future😊

  • @nullinvoid1415
    @nullinvoid1415 3 роки тому +1

    I have an idea for a tv show.
    I'm not being smug but i really feel like this would be a great series. I need to write this even if it doesn't make money. I just wanna get this idea out.

  • @judichristopher4604
    @judichristopher4604 9 місяців тому

    EXCELLENT Video
    Question: I have heard the that Final Cut Pro is the best format to use...
    Is this still true?

  • @ScoobyandShaggy5554
    @ScoobyandShaggy5554 3 роки тому

    Thank you for this I’m writing a tv pilot currently

  • @hauslab8479
    @hauslab8479 3 роки тому

    Cool!. 🤟🏼

  • @crisfilms8165
    @crisfilms8165 3 роки тому

    You should do a mini-series related video in the future

  • @mansion101
    @mansion101 3 роки тому +1

    Where is the link you mention to where one can write 5, 10, 15 pages a day consistently...? Thanks... great channel... subbed and sharing wildly...

  • @alghanekar313
    @alghanekar313 11 місяців тому

    Great information. The Breaking Bad Universe could teach a university Master Class on screenwriting.

  • @jvstvorothii
    @jvstvorothii 2 роки тому +1

    thank you so much!!! i was struggling to make a script of a first episode of my gacha series, this helped a lot! you’re a godsend!

  • @EricHowl
    @EricHowl 6 місяців тому +1

    Beyond screenwriting, your youtube videos should be used as a framework blueprint to teach other youtubers how to make enjoyable, powerful, succinct "How To" craft vids

  • @larrylennedy4591
    @larrylennedy4591 2 роки тому +2

    I’m writing a comedy show called, “Bexley Kids” and this really helped.

  • @davoa4665
    @davoa4665 3 роки тому +1

    Yes😊😊😊

  • @LFDLittlefluffydino
    @LFDLittlefluffydino 20 днів тому +3

    I just need someone to explain this to me as if I'm 4 years old

  • @tshabalala-the-goat
    @tshabalala-the-goat 4 місяці тому

    Is there any videos on how to layout a pilots teaser or how to make an effective teaser?

  • @thamer8426
    @thamer8426 3 роки тому +2

    Think you I need like those vedeos

  • @blaircolquhoun7780
    @blaircolquhoun7780 Рік тому

    The best pilots were for the original Star Trek. The first one was unaired except in the two-part clip episode The Court-Martial. The second, Where No Man Has Gone Before, aired as the third episode of the original Star Trek.

  • @writerinn4251
    @writerinn4251 3 роки тому +1

    Great content and I really have followed you for my entire road to success.
    Hiba Khan - Content specialist at Writer Inn

  • @melodid5023
    @melodid5023 2 роки тому +1

    Hmmm.. I wonder if this rules don't also apply to the first chapter of a book. Like.. how is a show different? Viewing the first chapter as a pilot and forcing yourself to bring visual details into it will bring your "show don't tell" to the next level. It literaly forces you to fokus on the most important details and visuals and symbolism and information without to much exposition and it will condence the material. And then we also have the internal dialogue in the book which will strongen the chatakters even more. What do you think?

  • @mikedegrassetyson8807
    @mikedegrassetyson8807 3 роки тому +3

    Hey man I like your videos but have you written a screenplay that has been adapted and made a successful show or movie? Im not trying to be a bummer but if you aren't a successful writer how can you be so confident about things in videos like this?

  • @windsonma8209
    @windsonma8209 3 роки тому

    I don’t know if you takes requests. But if you do. Could You Please Upload a Video Talking about ‘How To Make A Proper Final Season’ for this series of yours, I know you probably are but just in case.

  • @silase.quester3519
    @silase.quester3519 Рік тому

    I realize this video was released over a year ago, but I have a question. I have an idea/concept for a tv series, but the idea extends from beginning to end. You mention that normally writing a tv series is done by multiple people, so would it be best in my case to change the idea from say an 8 episode series, to a screenplay for a movie?

  • @Imbobbya
    @Imbobbya 3 роки тому +1

    Can you write a script like you did in the video from 1 year ago?

  • @EB_TaylorSwiftFan
    @EB_TaylorSwiftFan Рік тому

    If I want to make an animation TV show, can I write it and plan the characters and chose the animation style but send it to Netflix (for example) to make it into an actual tv show because that’s what I’m thinking of doing.

  • @Almanzar_
    @Almanzar_ 3 роки тому +2

    Anyone who wants to see one of the best pilots in the history of TV and analyze it, can see Twin Peaks.

  • @katelynncarter6856
    @katelynncarter6856 3 роки тому +1

    Does this formatting work with a procedural script/story?

  • @Tutorial7a
    @Tutorial7a 3 роки тому +2

    Easy: make the character fly an airplane.

  • @chinmay2230
    @chinmay2230 Рік тому

    He sounds exactly like dirty medicine page’s guy
    He too explains medical things in a crisp well structured manner with the exact same voice

  • @squbbydoo
    @squbbydoo 3 роки тому +1

    I watch all ur videos and u definitely know what ur talking about and are very informative. But i have a question and I don’t mean to be disrespectful at all. Have you had any scripts bought or made? If all this stuff is true what have you written? Why should we listen? Just curious i know u kno ur stuff and i mean do disrespect just curious.

  • @Nowherebuteverywere333
    @Nowherebuteverywere333 Рік тому

    Am I the only one watching this and for a skit based on the flash and ngl I wasn't expecting to see it here

  • @renotoad
    @renotoad Рік тому +1

    Man why am I watching this, it's late and im not even an adult yet

  • @mfcjazz4220
    @mfcjazz4220 Рік тому

    finna make a story

  • @hrhmadhuri
    @hrhmadhuri Рік тому

    What about writing a comedy? Do the same rules apply or is it different for drama?

  • @johnnytyler1
    @johnnytyler1 3 роки тому +12

    Using the "The Office" as an example of a not interesting concept isn't accurate. The video doesn't point out that it's about the day-to-day lives of office workers -- as a mockumentary. The faux-documentary aspect is the hook. So using this to illustrate this point doesn't actually work.

    • @River_Frost
      @River_Frost 3 роки тому +4

      Even then, I still had no idea what all they hype is about. I remember telling a girl I didn't like the office and she looked at me like I was crazy.

    • @wilmer016
      @wilmer016 3 роки тому +1

      Answering a little late here but i think that was his point, the ''what it is about'' can be a simple thing but the hook is what elevates the story

    • @johnnytyler1
      @johnnytyler1 3 роки тому

      @@wilmer016 no argument there. But he used it has a counter example. Not arguing the thesis. Only the accuracy of counter example.

  • @corpsecount5061
    @corpsecount5061 2 роки тому +1

    would if your making a animated show?

  • @timy9197
    @timy9197 3 роки тому

    I was literally thinking about breaking bad today

  • @VF_Studios
    @VF_Studios 3 роки тому +1

    Breaking Bad!!!! :D

  • @gesselmerle1657
    @gesselmerle1657 Рік тому

    what are the ACTS in an episode?

  • @m.mishra9133
    @m.mishra9133 3 роки тому +1

    I sometimes get confused about how long could one section of the story circle be? Like how long can i make the "Adapts to the unfamiliar situation" in the story before it gets too much.

    • @erik-sr9bj
      @erik-sr9bj 3 роки тому

      As long as needed, but also as short as possible.

  • @tobytacos7983
    @tobytacos7983 Рік тому

    i have a question, do you have to be over 18 to do the call?

  • @briansimerl4014
    @briansimerl4014 3 роки тому +1

    Using Breaking Bad and The Godfather as examples are TOO EASY as they are too specific. I prefer pattern analysis as a result.

  • @TheGamerProBeardBro
    @TheGamerProBeardBro 3 роки тому +1

    An idea can’t be good or bad. It’s based off of other subjective views and how each individual person thinks about the idea. Storytelling is subjective since every single opinion is different

    • @jakehopkins6989
      @jakehopkins6989 2 роки тому

      Yeah, but that doesn't mean there aren't any objective qualities.

  • @fogartyfox592
    @fogartyfox592 10 місяців тому

    Alan Dupree anyone? Who has read the breaking bad pilot episode script for their homework?

  • @ladonnatutt8929
    @ladonnatutt8929 3 роки тому +3

    Well I’ll be darn. I wrote an entire 12 episode tv series in 2 months. Who knew I only needed to write the pilot? Tyler did!

    • @whitewolfaudios
      @whitewolfaudios 2 роки тому +1

      I can barely write one. Can I borrow your talent!?