How to Use Examples Correctly in IELTS Writing Task 2

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  • Опубліковано 2 лип 2024
  • Do you know how to write examples correctly in your IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay? Watch this video to find out how to write higher scoring examples in your IELTS Writing Task 2 essay.
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    Introduction 00:00
    Question Prompt 00:41
    Common Ways Students Give Examples 01:26
    Don't do this! 03:32
    How to Provide Examples from Knowledge & Experience 04:33
    Use Examples to Extend Ideas! 06:30
    Good Example 07:10
    Short Examples to Illustrate Ideas 07:41
    Good Example VS Bad Example 09:01
    More Ways to Extend Ideas 09:59
    Conclusion 10:19
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  • @E2IELTS
    @E2IELTS  2 роки тому +33

    Thanks for watching! 🙂
    Watch Mark Explain Effect in IELTS Writing in this Video: ua-cam.com/video/UWdXEoM-l5U/v-deo.html
    Get IELTS Writing Feedback HERE:
    IELTS Academic: www.e2language.com/SpeakingWriting/IELTS/Academic
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    Introduction 00:00
    Question Prompt 00:41
    Common Ways Students Give Examples 01:26
    Don't do this! 03:32
    How to Provide Examples from Knowledge & Experience 04:33
    Use Examples to Extend Ideas! 06:30
    Good Example 07:10
    Short Examples to Illustrate Ideas 07:41
    Good Example VS Bad Example 09:01
    More Ways to Extend Ideas 09:59
    Conclusion 10:19

    • @IELTSExpert1
      @IELTSExpert1 2 роки тому +1

      I love your video a lot

    • @ahmetcevik5479
      @ahmetcevik5479 2 роки тому

      Do you give special courses for personal via online? thank you.

    • @gaganrudhka1176
      @gaganrudhka1176 2 роки тому

      Can we add an interrogative sentence in IELTS essay?

  • @divyang089
    @divyang089 2 роки тому +4

    I must say you have in-depth knowledge of writing skills. It helps to grow professionally too.

  • @parvezakhtar7776
    @parvezakhtar7776 2 роки тому +6

    You guys are doing great job. The best IELTS learning platform i have ever seen.

  • @krychaaa111
    @krychaaa111 2 роки тому +34

    The new videos that you guys have uploaded (about reading part and writing- how to extend ideas etc) are really useful ! after one year and 5 attemps :D :D I finally have my dream score of 7.0 and 7.5 in writing and reading (respectively :D) I was crying a lot when I saw my results and still can't believe it !!

  • @zklukas
    @zklukas 2 роки тому +1

    Thank you for your Videos E2LANGUAGE.Without this channel,I wouldn't have scored a a triple 7 with 8 in speaking.Thank you Mark,Jay and Alex!

  • @commandersummers8189
    @commandersummers8189 2 роки тому +9

    Thanks you guys. I regularly watched and practiced using your videos and E2 Ielts platform which helped me a lot. I got my results today and overall my score was 8. :)

  • @anigerianabroad6952
    @anigerianabroad6952 2 роки тому +7

    Just got my ielts result yesterday although I didn’t practice much I used everything I learnt here and it was super helpful 8.5 in speaking 7.0 listening 6.5 in both writing and reading. thank you guys especially Jay. my speaking was on a business that employed people in your neighborhood and that morning I watched jays video I was laughing when I read the question😏😏 🎊

  • @meghanadarla9304
    @meghanadarla9304 Рік тому +3

    This channel is legit awesome, and so are Jay, Mark and Alex. Came back to express my gratitude to these wonderful people. Can't thank you enough for these videos which provided a lot of tips and tricks helping me ace my test.❤ I highly recommend test takers to follow their tips and tricks.

  • @keilanluke
    @keilanluke 2 роки тому +1

    Fantastic writing tips!! Thank you mark!

  • @maryliyabrigit9757
    @maryliyabrigit9757 2 роки тому +3

    Hey Jay and Mark...you guys are doing a fantastic job...I'm really thankful to u as ur tips really worked for me and I was able to attain an overall score 8 in my IELTS exam...Thanks a ton guys...keep going..and all the best wishes to all aspirants out there..u guys are gonna rock..just keep working hard....❤️❤️❤️

  • @shashaskylar5050
    @shashaskylar5050 2 роки тому

    Hi Mark,this is my first time of watching your video and I can't wait for more videos.Am a beginner and this is going to help me slot.Thanks

  • @jorumnyemba2016
    @jorumnyemba2016 2 роки тому

    I like this man's teaching abilities. Keep up the good work Mark. Jorum in Southern Africa

  • @kasumimisty8354
    @kasumimisty8354 Рік тому

    A lot of thanks to Mark, Jay and Alex! I watched all the videos of Jay & Mark and Alex's videos of R & L. Don't miss any video, i watched at 2x speed to save time😅 The structure of essays given by Jay is very helpful. I got L9, R8.5, W7, S7 (exam date 5 & 10 June).
    I had some 18-19 days for preparation and there were days in which i could not study at all. But the week before exam i was practicing 5-6 hours daily. The only regret i have is that i couldn't manage my time to revise my essay & letter. Keep practicing!

  • @fadbukky2246
    @fadbukky2246 2 роки тому

    Thanks Mark for more enlightment.

  • @noobgamerbtw2701
    @noobgamerbtw2701 Рік тому

    Thank you so much for this brief but informative video :)

  • @marysh3840
    @marysh3840 2 роки тому

    Thank you all. I always learn new and great points here.

  • @thepoorballer8521
    @thepoorballer8521 2 роки тому

    really helpful stuff thank you

  • @sevinch2826
    @sevinch2826 2 роки тому

    Thanks for sharing such a useful video

  • @MohammadAli-jw4fz
    @MohammadAli-jw4fz 2 роки тому +1

    Great ideas, thanks alote

  • @ranaardesh8320
    @ranaardesh8320 Рік тому

    Thanks alot your videos are so helpful

  • @GhadaAlhassan55
    @GhadaAlhassan55 2 місяці тому

    Great video ❤

  • @dreadenise7692
    @dreadenise7692 2 роки тому +12

    Thank you for your IELTS youtube videos! My results came out three days ago and I went from a band 7 to a band of 8.5 (9 Speaking, 8.5 Reading, 8 Writing, 8.5 Listening) in just two and a half weeks.

  • @nanagasimova9546
    @nanagasimova9546 8 місяців тому

    Thank you very much! It was a very useful video. Greetings from Azerbaijan🇦🇿

  • @irenechiperesa4752
    @irenechiperesa4752 2 роки тому

    Thanks so much.

  • @charityncube9768
    @charityncube9768 Рік тому

    Thank u Mark passed my IELTS with band 8.5

  • @amitpaulmritunjoy1564
    @amitpaulmritunjoy1564 2 роки тому

    wow just awesome 🖤🖤🖤💯

  • @janineyasovant6025
    @janineyasovant6025 2 роки тому

    Thank you :)

  • @arshpreetsinghsidhupanjab
    @arshpreetsinghsidhupanjab 2 роки тому

    Thank You Sir

  • @sattikheri
    @sattikheri Рік тому

    Thank you❤ sir 🔥

  • @navpreetgill5397
    @navpreetgill5397 2 роки тому +14

    Hiii Jay Sir n Alex Ma'am,, yesterday I got my Ielts(academic) results n achieved overall 7.5 bands with listening and speaking-8.0, reading-7.0 n writing-6.5. A big thanks to you guys, your videos helped me a lot to get this score, the way you teach like adding natural fillers, stress-free tone n free to speak in speaking part, actually did wonders in my exam. I'm grateful for your help!🙌🏻🙏🏻♥️

    • @amrinderrsingh6986
      @amrinderrsingh6986 Рік тому

      Hlo ji . 🙏
      Give me tips to improve my Reading 🙏

    • @amrinderrsingh6986
      @amrinderrsingh6986 Рік тому

      Which youtube channel is best to improve reading 🙏

    • @navpreetgill5397
      @navpreetgill5397 Рік тому +1

      @@amrinderrsingh6986 the one I’m thankful to!

    • @navpreetgill5397
      @navpreetgill5397 Рік тому +2

      @@amrinderrsingh6986 practice and clear your doubts for each type! Don’t do every type in one go! Make sure you’ve enough confidence in one type then jump to next, this is the key. You can practice for each type as well, but first make sure you’ve fully understood it with zero doubts.

  • @rumanadeemkhan
    @rumanadeemkhan 11 місяців тому

    awsm tnX

  • @bekhal9827
    @bekhal9827 Рік тому

    Hi E2. You’re doing great work. Thanks a lot.
    I have a question 🙋‍♀️
    -Would misspelling People’s names (when mentioned as an example) be a problem in Writing, Task 2 ?

  • @kerrygee591
    @kerrygee591 2 роки тому

    Thanks, Mark. It was a very informative video with so much useful content.

  • @rosechatterlyretuyan733
    @rosechatterlyretuyan733 2 роки тому

    Im taking my ielts exam tom. im still watching your tips😊

  • @drukyesheywangdi5453
    @drukyesheywangdi5453 Рік тому

    Thank you 🫶🙏❤️

  • @r.ar.6972
    @r.ar.6972 2 роки тому +8

    Hope this will help me for my ielts writing test this coming 2nd week of November. Thank you!

  • @taragopinath16
    @taragopinath16 2 роки тому +4

    Thank You Mark! I followed your videos and lessons carefully and was able to score 7.5 in Writing
    E2 Language - Alex, Jay and Mark - My overall Band is 8 - Very Good User. L-8.5, R - 7.5, W- 7.5 and S-8
    I appeared for paper based ielts on 18th Dec 2021. I cannot thank you enough for my wonderful results.
    Wishing E2 Language a very happy new year 2022 in advance 😊

    • @mengemulu99
      @mengemulu99 2 роки тому

      Give me your best advice please.
      I need to score 7.

    • @taragopinath16
      @taragopinath16 2 роки тому +2

      @@mengemulu99 Practice, Practice and Practice. I gave the exam after 1 whole month's preparation, devoting for about 2 hrs a day. Overall band 7 is not too hard to achieve. Pay attention to writing section, lot of people get stuck with 6.5 and 7. Watch all the videos on writing tips by e2 language. And start writing. If you can avail paid tutorials then great if not follow the tips and practice.
      Listening requires keen attention and presence of mind and Practice. Lot of practice exercises for reading and speaking is available for free as well. So all you need to do is get started... wishing you all the best and don't be in a rush to give the exam, give yourself ample time to prepare before your attempt your exam.
      Also, ensure you time yourself and attempt few mock exams before you appear for the actual exam.
      Hope this helps!

  • @anchaleeponhuangsorn8630
    @anchaleeponhuangsorn8630 Місяць тому

    thankyou

  • @hiren0519
    @hiren0519 2 роки тому

    E2 do one thing make a playlist of only tips and tricks for all module. If is possible.

  • @mohammadabdullahalfaisal523
    @mohammadabdullahalfaisal523 2 роки тому +1

    Can I use historical events as an example? Your response will be highly appreciated.

  • @abrorkhudayberdiev6786
    @abrorkhudayberdiev6786 Рік тому

    Thanks guys

  • @joelee1230
    @joelee1230 Рік тому

    Thanks for the video. I wonder if it is appropriate to mention a specific country when I give an example in writing task 2. e.g. I mentioned North Korea as an example to discuss agriculture and starvation in IELT 13 Writing Task 2 in Test 4. I'm not sure if it is right.

  • @pouyas2774
    @pouyas2774 2 роки тому

    10:09 Good, but wouldn't it be better to use a semicolon instead of comma? (before "For example")

  • @hamnahafeez3423
    @hamnahafeez3423 Рік тому +1

    Hi Mark,
    Thank you so much for this exquisite explanation. I have certainly improved my writing from 6 to 7, leading to an overall 8 bands. I wouldn't have achieved this if it wasn't for you guys.

  • @DeadlyHaunter
    @DeadlyHaunter 2 роки тому +8

    Saw your videos 2 days before my exam. Your tips were really helpful. Managed to get band 8 with 3 days of preparation.
    Thank you

  • @ashrafmasoud4308
    @ashrafmasoud4308 2 роки тому +122

    My exam is after tomorrow wish me luck 🤞

    • @E2IELTS
      @E2IELTS  2 роки тому +11

      Good luck 🤞

    • @gurjotgill5325
      @gurjotgill5325 2 роки тому +3

      Yeah bro you will definitely get good score ☺️

    • @psrsasalehi3390
      @psrsasalehi3390 2 роки тому +4

      I'm late but I wish best for you

    • @motivator7401
      @motivator7401 2 роки тому +2

      How is your Result now

    • @LovepreetSingh-en8ul
      @LovepreetSingh-en8ul 2 роки тому +3

      Please correct your sentence because you have to write day after tomorrow
      👍🙏❤

  • @PhysicsbyPK777
    @PhysicsbyPK777 2 роки тому

    @E2 IELTS Can you please discuss something about vipassna meditation and from where to learn and practice this meditation.

  • @shubhampuri0099
    @shubhampuri0099 2 роки тому +11

    Got my score yesterday and i got an 8 overall. Thanks a lot for all of your videos, they really helped me out.

    • @satpalpoonia9804
      @satpalpoonia9804 2 роки тому

      hello bro give some tips , which book did you follow for writing module?

    • @shubhampuri0099
      @shubhampuri0099 2 роки тому +1

      @@satpalpoonia9804 Tbh i didnt not practiced the wiriting part 2 once, i only did the 1st part couple of times but the 2nd part i just read a lot of different essay answers from a lot of sources and learned from that.

    • @satpalpoonia9203
      @satpalpoonia9203 2 роки тому

      @@shubhampuri0099 which sources plz recommend any book

  • @doesntmatter6449
    @doesntmatter6449 2 роки тому

    Hey!
    Which type of essay should be in 3 body paragraphs or 2 ?

  • @johil_sehgal
    @johil_sehgal 2 роки тому +2

    Hye Mr.Mark.
    Can i write only one main idea in 1st BP and 2nd main idea in 2nd BP with full explanation as well as example ? or is it compulsory to write atleast 2-3 ideas in a single BP ?

  • @jaismeenjaismeenk5003
    @jaismeenjaismeenk5003 2 роки тому

    Sir, how to use question type sentence in writing task 2 correctly?
    Please make video on it 🙏🏻, it helps me alot

  • @youaremyjam
    @youaremyjam 2 роки тому

    As a university student, I have to read tons of research articles which lead to knowledge regarding a variety of topics, including ones i have no experiences in. If I shouldn’t reference those studies, I really have nothing to write about then 😂

  • @sukhwindervaid
    @sukhwindervaid 2 роки тому +1

    Hi Mark
    I've been seeing your phenomenal work of writing module, since first day of your video. When you had not that much beard on your face. Step by step little information you are being revealed really ineffable, i admire Jay for Reading and Listening, also, he is given advise on Writing and Speaking which is no doubt a awesome work of him.
    But the way you everytime pick a little information of Task 2, and discuss it in sophisticated way by opening it, illustrating it flake by flake.
    Still i have a little request to you sir. You have never been revealed Task 1 like Task 2, so my humble request to make a video on Task 1, how to make intro and best overall and data comparison etc.
    I hope you would look into this request sir
    Your Student
    -Sukh

  • @user-gj3pq
    @user-gj3pq 2 роки тому +5

    My exam is on 30th October and i hope i will achieve 7+ with your help 😀

    • @monamina20
      @monamina20 2 роки тому

      Mine is on 23rd of October

    • @naomimumba5743
      @naomimumba5743 2 роки тому

      Same here,30th oct

    • @mellisandlovu7026
      @mellisandlovu7026 2 роки тому

      Mine too is on the 30th of October😂

    • @suninahamsa
      @suninahamsa 2 роки тому

      @@monamina20 what the questions you got for writing task 2

  • @sonalibansal7351
    @sonalibansal7351 2 роки тому +1

    hi mark, thank you for your kind advice my exam is on 24th oct i hope this tip helps me get 8

  • @saimahuma9864
    @saimahuma9864 Рік тому

    Hi Mark, do you still offer coaching? I'm looking for an instructor, if yes pls reply.

  • @parashsaha761
    @parashsaha761 2 роки тому

    Do you provide online class ?

  • @dilraborajabboyeva3317
    @dilraborajabboyeva3317 Рік тому

    Mee tooo

  • @monoarul_islam_3
    @monoarul_islam_3 2 роки тому +1

    i forgot to include conclusion phrase like to conclude or like in conclusion in my task2. will that effect my task achievement band? but i wrote a conclusion

  • @yuri8914
    @yuri8914 Місяць тому

    how to conclude each body paragraph?

  • @mickymichellebeauty2332
    @mickymichellebeauty2332 2 роки тому

    How soon is feedback given when you choose the package?

  • @sherryrajpoot710
    @sherryrajpoot710 2 роки тому

    waiting

  • @pawankaur4640
    @pawankaur4640 Рік тому

    Sir can we add conditional examples?

  • @Aseesmyjaan
    @Aseesmyjaan Рік тому +1

    Please make videos on task 1 I need because my exam on 8 oct

  • @sivarasasangeetha6239
    @sivarasasangeetha6239 2 роки тому +3

    Hello Mr. Mark i have been watching your channel since last month. It is very useful to me. I have a doubt. Could you please give me a suggestion? Is this good to write participle clause sentences in writing Task 2 essay for Academic module?. Thank you ❤️ from Sri Lanka

    • @E2IELTS
      @E2IELTS  2 роки тому +1

      If they make sense. Never force sentences.

    • @sivarasasangeetha6239
      @sivarasasangeetha6239 2 роки тому

      @@E2IELTS thank you for your response ❤️

  • @Sukhjindergill_
    @Sukhjindergill_ 2 роки тому +2

    Tomorrow is my exam ☺️ wish me luck 🤞

  • @gagandeep8931
    @gagandeep8931 2 роки тому

    Can we give personal examples?

  • @listenenglishamericantv1008
    @listenenglishamericantv1008 2 роки тому

    ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

  • @o3gamingzone
    @o3gamingzone Рік тому

    What If you dont know any example can you make up any evidence on your own?

  • @bamchanamon
    @bamchanamon 5 місяців тому +1

    Tomorrow is my first time IELTS exam, I am so weak in writing😢 Hope I'll pass

    • @E2IELTS
      @E2IELTS  5 місяців тому

      @bamchanamon Good luck!

  • @dhananjayzala6031
    @dhananjayzala6031 Рік тому

    we should not use any kind of survey from any organization as an example…??

  • @jaspreetanttal8032
    @jaspreetanttal8032 Рік тому

    I'm still facing problem as regarding giving an example in task how pls help me ❤️

  • @rajanpandey7205
    @rajanpandey7205 2 роки тому

    My exam is on the day after tomorrow...Wish me to luck everyone..Hope I will get at least 6 band score in writing :-D💙

  • @khushiarora5163
    @khushiarora5163 2 роки тому +2

    Hello sir I want to ask something
    I usually write an example related to survey and research. Is this wrong?

    • @olgaladan7941
      @olgaladan7941 2 роки тому

      I'd like to get to know that as well. Thanks 😊

  • @kerokiro7765
    @kerokiro7765 2 роки тому

    Im a Ginger as well

  • @gaganrudhka1176
    @gaganrudhka1176 2 роки тому

    Can we write an interrogative sentence I IELTS essay

  • @mahtab4127
    @mahtab4127 2 роки тому

    We need a video on conclusion

    • @E2IELTS
      @E2IELTS  2 роки тому

      All videos are on E2 😎

  • @icheema2921
    @icheema2921 2 роки тому

    Trustworthy stuff

  • @aslpolatturgunpolatov7962
    @aslpolatturgunpolatov7962 Рік тому

    My exam end of the week wish me luck guys 😊🎉

  • @NebulaNotesyt
    @NebulaNotesyt 2 роки тому

    Excellent sir, can we put passive in essay, pls must answered 🙏

    • @dia6976
      @dia6976 2 роки тому +1

      Yes

    • @E2IELTS
      @E2IELTS  2 роки тому

      Sure, if it works and makes sense.

    • @NebulaNotesyt
      @NebulaNotesyt 2 роки тому

      @@E2IELTS thanks a lot , God bless you

  • @sabazia8316
    @sabazia8316 2 роки тому

    In which essays we can support our idea through research example

    • @E2IELTS
      @E2IELTS  2 роки тому

      Try to avoid bogus examples.

  • @eyeteeee9507
    @eyeteeee9507 9 місяців тому

    What is Akeladd is wabbling about

  • @howto.5496
    @howto.5496 2 роки тому

    In writing task 1 , can I write conclusion ? How ? 🤔

  • @BhupinderSingh-np7sz
    @BhupinderSingh-np7sz 2 роки тому +1

    🍻

  • @ree-tu3976
    @ree-tu3976 2 роки тому

    I recently booked my date for April 30
    And I'm not confident enough as I'm not doing well in writing and reading 🥺
    Please pray for me😭🙏

  • @hieuluong8329
    @hieuluong8329 Рік тому

    Excuse me, is it okay not to include any example in an Ielts test?

  • @heenasachdeva6906
    @heenasachdeva6906 2 роки тому

    If the essay has the word phone used repeatedly in different paras without using appropriate synonyms like cell phone, cellular device mobile, will it effect the band score badly?

    • @E2IELTS
      @E2IELTS  2 роки тому

      No... some words don't have appropriate synonyms, so repeating the word is fine.

  • @gagan_babbar
    @gagan_babbar Рік тому

    I have my exam on 19th of November 2022

  • @tamannaverma2135
    @tamannaverma2135 Рік тому

    Hello sir
    Can we use personal pronoun
    In writing

  • @Srunsi
    @Srunsi Рік тому

    My IELTS exam is tomorrow. Wish me luck 🤞

  • @jainebrakshad
    @jainebrakshad 2 роки тому

    Hlo could you please tell..... Can i use Interrogative sentence in task 2 bp...

    • @jainebrakshad
      @jainebrakshad 2 роки тому

      Please reply....... I have an exam today

  • @makeitupyourself1047
    @makeitupyourself1047 Рік тому +1

    Can I add personal example?

  • @allaboutagriculture9759
    @allaboutagriculture9759 2 роки тому +1

    Know about agriculture here

  • @easywayfordealing
    @easywayfordealing Рік тому

    My exam is tomorrow wish me luck 🤞

  • @tgfansclub4871
    @tgfansclub4871 2 роки тому

    Tomorrow my IELTS exam

  • @Fiedly7091
    @Fiedly7091 Рік тому

    my guy looks different in every video!

  • @prathanatrivedi8750
    @prathanatrivedi8750 2 роки тому

    My exam is on 19th march and I'm not getting good bands in writing 😩

  • @clashking8099
    @clashking8099 Рік тому

    Me exam on 26 wish me a luck
    Confidence dipped😢

  • @ahmedkarrar25
    @ahmedkarrar25 Рік тому

    My exam will be the day after tomorrow, wish me luck guys.❤️

  • @ryaanrexx
    @ryaanrexx 2 роки тому

    My exam is tomorrow wish me luck guys🙂