Outstanding, simply outstanding work here. Fantastic writing, and wonderful acting (Congratulations Jeff and Alicia, you hit it out of the park), this is the kind of grounded, hard, cold storytelling that needs to be seen more often in the public eye. In less than 40 minutes, you tell a short story of such rich complexity and detail it simply is unbelievable. Keep up the good work, aching for more!
+Briana Cunningham if you listened for nine minutes out of 35 how dumn you sound to give an opinion much less a bad one. I call BS on your opinion your what is known as uninformed like most voters from both parties.
One for sorrow, two for joy, three for a girl, four for a boy. Five for silver, six for gold, seven for a secret that's never been told. (That's the crow rhyme I learned when I was younger.)
Wow, this story was really good. A little slow at the beginning, but there's nothing like thorough explanation and a build-up of tension so it didn't ruin it for me. I liked the rhyme too, I believe there's something similar with magpies (but not as ominous, pfft). Very good story - and excellent narration; my all-time favourite! It was nice to hear a lady too. Brilliant work!
Does kinda make sense though - I think most people are under the impression that nothing is after death. So six = death is where it stops. Makes me wonder where all these spooky stories about ghosts and whatnots come from though, haha.
Jess Danielle Actually the original from 1846 had 10 magpie. And goes as follows: "One for sorrow, Two for luck; (or mirth) Three for a wedding, Four for death; (or birth) Five for silver, Six for gold; Seven for a secret, Not to be told; Eight for Heaven, Nine for Hell And ten for the devil's own sell!"
It seems I started a discussion about magpies. But if that's the original, then holy crap - maybe it's just as ominous as this crows thing, wow. Thank you for enlightening me!
@@yugikitten the number 6 is a symbol of something ominous. For instance, take the number 666. That number means something monstrous,and grossly immoral.
One crow is unlucky. Two crows are lucky. Three are health. Four are wealth. Five are sickness. Six is... well, six ain't good. My workplace happens to be the regular winter roost for anywhere from 20,000 to 60,000 crows. Every night from about November to late February. I suck at math - anybody know what that means? Other than that my car is covered with poop?
The title, presumably, comes from "One for Sorrow," the same nursery rhyme from which the band Counting Crows also takes its name: One for sorrow, Two for joy, Three for a girl, Four for a boy, Five for silver, Six for gold, Seven for a secret Never to be told. But there's a lot of variation, including folk songs and the like that were inspired by versions the composers heard as children. There could very well be a version in which six crows foretell misfortune, but I hadn't heard of it before this story, wherein Marie recites One crow is unlucky Two crows, lucky Three is health Four is wealth Five is sickness Six is death
Jeez was this a well written amazing story. I love it. There's nothing scarier than the silence that happens when you look away from your kid and they wonder off. Its one of those real horrors that happen all the time. Creepy and wonderfully narrated. Great job, all around. Xoxo
That one was actually pretty good. I was going to say something cold about the parents letting their child go off alone in a harsh environment. But i realized that they were doomed from the get go. If their relationship and their marriage wasn't in bad shape, they probably would have been a alot more careful in their poor, poor decisions they were making, but then again the character did state that when out in that heat you can't think rationally, and that's probably what added to their problems.
How did a coyote just up and snatch their little girl,without either parent noticing? Coyotes don't normally behave that way. Not to mention, the girl never screams for help. Then, while their following the blood trail, the mother starts chanting about how” one crow means ...etc, and six crows means death." I agree with the father. I wanted to strangle her too! What mother already assumes her child is dead?! Even if things look grim, a parent still holds out for hope that their child may still be alive especially, without definitive proof that their child is dead. I'm surprised that when they saw the bloody coyote, the mother didn't shout, "a dingo stole (ate) my baby!", like from that movie. I’m joking of course; I know that a dingo is a wild, wolf-like dog and not a coyote.
I was seriously yelling out loud, "God Marie, *shut* *the* *fuck* *up* about your crows!" Like, does she really need to turn it into a 'told you so' moment? Your kid is dead or dying and you need to help her! Be more worried about that part, Marie, gotdam
1 for sorrow, 2 for joy, 3 for a girl, 4 for a boy, 5 for silver, 6 for gold, 7 for a secret never told, 8 for a kiss, 9 for a wish aaand I have no idea what 10 was.That's the Irish version for the magpie rhyme, which has a similar concept to the crow one.
Fantastic story! First and second person narration, descriptive sceneries, complex characters and relationships, horror, mythology, and of course a great voice actor! One of my favorites right now =D
Wow, what shitty parents. Who sends their child alone to the road to flag down cars? And not just in a horror situation, but in HOT mid-west summer and with the all too real danger that a car could come along and kidnap her.
I know this is an old post but I didn't see any comments about it. Crows collect shiny objects and drop walnuts in the road to be cracked by cars. I think they left the piece of metal in the road. At least in my mind they did
Great story! Thanks for posting. Read some of the previous comments about coyotes though. The main character stated that it "looked" like a coyote. But he specifically stated that it was dog like. Probably a chupacabra and we all know, that they'll eat kids.
Man, this was disheartening. And truly did give me the chills. But also despair. I live in a valley where coyotes run freely and in number, but also I have a little girl that I look after. Luckily she is a teenager now, but still, this is still quite nightmarish.
As a limey who has grown up with the rhyme it goes: 1 for sorrow, 2 for joy 3 for a girl, 4 for a boy. 5 for silver, 6 for gold, 7 for a secret never to be told. So yeah, in the version I grew up with, it would be more likely that they would have won the lottery...
Okay the first time I heard this I was in love I really was drawn I thought it really good so then a couple weeks go by and I find myself listening to it again this time I was brought to tears at the ending knowing the ending it was amazing
I'm English and i'm pretty sure it's Magpies, not crows. It goes: One for sorrow, two for joy, three for a girl, four for a boy. Five for silver, six for gold and seven for a secret that's never been told. There might have been more than that, but I don't remember the rest. Cool story, anyway.
Hi again sorry to bug you. But did you remove the video about numbers on the radio? It has the same voice actor from your videos Frost and The Contractor. Something about numbers on the radio I can't seem to find it.
+Anime Psycho 1. Apparently, she was killed by the coyote 2. the first time, it was out of rage that his daughter is dead, and the second time is from him losing any hope 3. the mom was left stranded with the dad
A murder of crows. Crows love shiny objects, and have symbiotic relationships with bears, wolves etc. They let predators know if there's easy prey, injured or weak by cawing. Then they feast on the remains.
Omg...im calling CPS for this one...but seriously, this was a great story with a fantastic narration. As mom of two young kids, i felt that that this was both the characters bad judgement leading to said missing/possibly dead child.
(spoiler!!) That gave me chills, I love that it wasn't a monster or anything supernatural that killed the little girl, makes it that much more terrifying
I would have hunt down that coyote, caught it away from its pack, and crushed its skull. Ugh, I can't even begin to imagine the grief he must've felt as a father. My family owns 80 acres of land in Oklahoma. Lots of coyotes. I've heard them howl in the distance but I've never come across a pack. I think they like to keep their distance from humans. I guess that one coyote saw that little girl as easy prey, which is why he went after her alone. You two sound great together btw! Loved the story! Alicia has such a pretty voice! Loved it!
I would have laughed so hard if the deep voiced narrator said, "Six Crows. Written by... six crows." And the rest of the story was sounds of crows squawking, pecking, and flapping wings.
I really wonder why was rick shouting in the end? Was it because he failed to fight with the beast or was it his wife murdered him? Thanks in advance for anyone who will enlighten me. ;)
got to say this was my first disappointing one I have heard on this channel. If the parents are school teachers they should know better then to send a young child off on her own. That just left me saying there and then well there's a dead kid so no I was not shocked in any way when at the end oh wow she's dead... also found it very drawn out omg could the guy whine any more?? Wish the damn crows had taken the whinny ass with them hell feed him to the jackals send the wife as well she was not any better
Trying to make sense of this...did they find their daughter's body? And at the end, when he saw the crows lined up, does that mean they were going to die too?
One crow for the morning, one for the night, one for mourning yet out of sight. One for its saying, the caw of its call. The fifth in the number that brings us the fall and led by the sixth that ends us all.
sounds lower right? I do know that in many editing softwares, you're able to lower the pitch of the audio. Maybe that's what they did here to better fit the character of Rick.
The only poem I know involving crows and numbers, has six as a good thing. 'One for sorrow, Two for joy, Three for a girl, Four for a boy, Five for silver, Six for gold, Seven for a secret, Never to be told.'
I understand the logic in putting the girl at the top of the hill if the husband slips you wouldn’t want the girl at the bottom and if she’s in the car it just adds more weight for the husband to push I don’t think they were being negligent but then again I’m only halfway through
I wish this one had a more supernatural twist to it, but that's just my preference, the "realistic" horror stories don't get to me quite as much. My preference aside, I actually did enjoy this one, this was a actually a really good story, I'd listen to more by this author.
Meh...it was pretty predictable and not really creepy, but I guess it was well written at least. That, or I've just become desensitized to horror stories. I can't find any that really send chills down my spine or make me think, like a good horror mystery.
I'm only at like 2mins at the moment and gonna continue but I already have a problem.. I'm fairly sure I know which 'English rhyme' they're talking about and 6 crows is for gold :/ lol..
marriage is a test of manhood and ladyness. things get hard but thats when real adults say you know what my child is not gonna grow up in a failed home nor will it be disfunctional. hard times don't last childhood memories do.
oh coyotes, people think wolves are bad but coyotes...they eat their own. Yep, I have a fear of coyotes...was almost snatched by one in AZ during a family picnic.
I feel like a lot of this could have been easily avoided. I knew that when he told his kid to look for "a bus full of cheerleaders" it was a set up for her to get lost while they corrected the car. The rest just felt forced and way too long. They tried to go for suspense and to build the scene and history but it just felt like filler. I saw where the story was headed the moment he swerved and crashed into a ditch in the middle of nowhere. Not really creepy... just tedious and predictable. But that's just my opinion.
coyotes are able to smell dead things really well but they will not hesitate to eat things like cats or gophers, in packs I know they have eaten a calf who strayed a bit to far so a small child they wouldn't hesitate if they were hungry
I grew up in Surrey BC in the early/mid 90's during a time of massive deforestation to make way for suburban housing and strip malls. There were homeless coyotes living in ditches, and even displaced cougars in densely populated areas. There was a series of children who were attacked by coyotes around that time. Actually a quick search shows that attacks on dogs by coyotes is ongoing and an attack on a toddler took place in the area only 3 years ago. I later moved to a woodsy, mountainous area in BC. The coyotes favourite game was to 'besiege' our house at night. We have several large dogs, only one of whom lives outside. Each night you can hear the coyotes howl out front of the house. Next you hear them howl behind. Then they howl on the other side (we have woods on 3 sides of our house). The next time you howl, they are closer. They keep this up almost all night, every night. They haven't done anything but cull a couple cats in the last 10 years however.
Outstanding, simply outstanding work here. Fantastic writing, and wonderful acting (Congratulations Jeff and Alicia, you hit it out of the park), this is the kind of grounded, hard, cold storytelling that needs to be seen more often in the public eye. In less than 40 minutes, you tell a short story of such rich complexity and detail it simply is unbelievable. Keep up the good work, aching for more!
Thanks so much Spider1775
***** I agree there was no hook for me at all to keep listening and actually stopped at 9min to read comments cause I was so bored.
+Briana Cunningham
if you listened for nine minutes out of 35 how dumn you sound to give an opinion much less a bad one.
I call BS on your opinion your what is known as uninformed like most voters from both parties.
At first I didn't get what was scary but then I figured it out. The stupidity of the parents is downright frightening.
ya know i feel as if this is probably the most realistic creepy pasta ever...
@@wyhiobcarlile4879 Yeah damn right, and they didn't need to put it directly that she was 💀
One for sorrow, two for joy, three for a girl, four for a boy.
Five for silver, six for gold, seven for a secret that's never been told.
(That's the crow rhyme I learned when I was younger.)
I learned this one.
One for sorrow,
Two for mirth
Three for a funeral,
Four for birth
Five for heaven
Six for hell
Seven for the devil, his own self
Precisely as I learned the rhyme. Six crows are lucky.
Wow, this story was really good. A little slow at the beginning, but there's nothing like thorough explanation and a build-up of tension so it didn't ruin it for me. I liked the rhyme too, I believe there's something similar with magpies (but not as ominous, pfft).
Very good story - and excellent narration; my all-time favourite! It was nice to hear a lady too. Brilliant work!
Thanks Jess Danielle. Really glad you enjoyed it.
^ Yeah, that's the one - like I said, it's not as ominous, the numbers - and the fact that they're both birds - just reminded me of it, haha.
Does kinda make sense though - I think most people are under the impression that nothing is after death. So six = death is where it stops.
Makes me wonder where all these spooky stories about ghosts and whatnots come from though, haha.
Jess Danielle
Actually the original from 1846 had 10 magpie. And goes as follows:
"One for sorrow,
Two for luck; (or mirth)
Three for a wedding,
Four for death; (or birth)
Five for silver,
Six for gold;
Seven for a secret,
Not to be told;
Eight for Heaven,
Nine for Hell
And ten for the devil's own sell!"
It seems I started a discussion about magpies.
But if that's the original, then holy crap - maybe it's just as ominous as this crows thing, wow. Thank you for enlightening me!
Do you know why six crows means death? Because a group of crows is called a murder.
Clever
I never thought of that.
@@yugikitten the number 6 is a symbol of something ominous. For instance, take the number 666. That number means something monstrous,and grossly immoral.
@@yugikitten we're speaking about crows.
Too, the number 6 denotes death.
One crow is unlucky. Two crows are lucky. Three are health. Four are wealth. Five are sickness. Six is... well, six ain't good.
My workplace happens to be the regular winter roost for anywhere from 20,000 to 60,000 crows. Every night from about November to late February. I suck at math - anybody know what that means? Other than that my car is covered with poop?
DustWarden I think it's a division thing at that point.
60,000 crows is ominous... for worms.
The title, presumably, comes from "One for Sorrow," the same nursery rhyme from which the band Counting Crows also takes its name:
One for sorrow,
Two for joy,
Three for a girl,
Four for a boy,
Five for silver,
Six for gold,
Seven for a secret
Never to be told.
But there's a lot of variation, including folk songs and the like that were inspired by versions the composers heard as children. There could very well be a version in which six crows foretell misfortune, but I hadn't heard of it before this story, wherein Marie recites
One crow is unlucky
Two crows, lucky
Three is health
Four is wealth
Five is sickness
Six is death
Bret Gammons what about 8 crows.???
Jeez was this a well written amazing story. I love it. There's nothing scarier than the silence that happens when you look away from your kid and they wonder off. Its one of those real horrors that happen all the time. Creepy and wonderfully narrated. Great job, all around. Xoxo
That one was actually pretty good. I was going to say something cold about the parents letting their child go off alone in a harsh environment.
But i realized that they were doomed from the get go. If their relationship and their marriage wasn't in bad shape, they probably would have been a alot more careful in their poor, poor decisions they were making, but then again the character did state that when out in that heat you can't think rationally, and that's probably what added to their problems.
Thanks for the like.
That's why she said on the way, there were six crows on a telephone wire.
How did a coyote just up and snatch their little girl,without either parent noticing? Coyotes don't normally behave that way. Not to mention, the girl never screams for help. Then, while their following the blood trail, the mother starts chanting about how” one crow means ...etc, and six crows means death." I agree with the father. I wanted to strangle her too! What mother already assumes her child is dead?! Even if things look grim, a parent still holds out for hope that their child may still be alive especially, without definitive proof that their child is dead. I'm surprised that when they saw the bloody coyote, the mother didn't shout, "a dingo stole (ate) my baby!", like from that movie. I’m joking of course; I know that a dingo is a wild, wolf-like dog and not a coyote.
SPNchick44 I’ve never heard it in a movie, the dingo saying was from Seinfeld 😆 I love that episode haha
I was seriously yelling out loud, "God Marie, *shut* *the* *fuck* *up* about your crows!" Like, does she really need to turn it into a 'told you so' moment? Your kid is dead or dying and you need to help her! Be more worried about that part, Marie, gotdam
Lmao this part irritated me. It was a great story… but the person who wrote this clearly doesn’t understand coyotes or their nature.
I think i prefer longer stories as apposed to short ones
Yes! I like long stories because it actually builds up and creates images in my mind.
I'm a sucker for a good slow burn. I like my scares in intrigue at the end.
I agree. I like to load up a big fat playlist of long, juicy stories, then kick back for hours.
I think that the perfect length is around 15-25 minutes, the longer ones are good too though.
Same here! You should check out "The Nosleep Podcast.com". Each episode is several stories and about 2 hours long and it's creepy as hell!
You won a new subscribers....The Nosleep podcast brought me here.
Awesome. We're good friends with David, so it's always nice to see his fans. Welcome to Chilling Tales!
1 for sorrow, 2 for joy, 3 for a girl, 4 for a boy, 5 for silver, 6 for gold, 7 for a secret never told, 8 for a kiss, 9 for a wish aaand I have no idea what 10 was.That's the Irish version for the magpie rhyme, which has a similar concept to the crow one.
10 a surprise you should be careful not to miss
11 for health
12 for wealth
13 beware it’s the devil himself
Fantastic story! First and second person narration, descriptive sceneries, complex characters and relationships, horror, mythology, and of course a great voice actor! One of my favorites right now =D
Great story. Great narration. Thank you for this moment of escape.
Glad you enjoyed it!
Wow, what shitty parents. Who sends their child alone to the road to flag down cars? And not just in a horror situation, but in HOT mid-west summer and with the all too real danger that a car could come along and kidnap her.
I know this is an old post but I didn't see any comments about it. Crows collect shiny objects and drop walnuts in the road to be cracked by cars. I think they left the piece of metal in the road. At least in my mind they did
Jeff you are so good at your job...could you do a reading of Poe's Tell-tale Heart
WTF Rick? Bad parenting 101 - Lessons 1-99: Be Rick. Class dismissed, have a nice summer.
Rannar Gusto And risk ending up in Silent Hill?
***** Who's rick... who's rick?
Rick is the father in the story! Have you been paying any attention at all?
He shoulda been Rick Grimes from the walking dead...not this Rick.
Is it really Rick's fault, or the writer? 🤔
Jeff Clement has a fantastic voice.
Thank you very much GrrDOOM
Aural Stimulation we should meet up bro
I liked the female narraters voice
Alicia Pavlis. I always love working with her; she's awesome.
One for sorrow, two for mirth
three for wedding, four for birth
five for silver, six for gold
seven's no secret, they're both a-holes.
amazing story, fantastic reading from the guy and the girl. This one was just, really good.
Great story! Thanks for posting. Read some of the previous comments about coyotes though. The main character stated that it "looked" like a coyote. But he specifically stated that it was dog like. Probably a chupacabra and we all know, that they'll eat kids.
Very well written and very well narrated.
Brilliant, chilling story, excellent reading!
One of the best story ever told
I love Alicia Pavlis's voice. I could listen to her all day.
Wow, very well-written (and well-narrated) story. I really enjoyed this one.
This was excellent. I listened to this on my lunch break
You are a really good narrator Jeff
You guys owned it. Shivers ran down my spine at the end.
I will NEVER get tired of that intro
See that the reason why i don't do out of state road trips no thanks. Road trips are bad em-kay
wooow!!! the devils in the descriptive details. very good.
+Lavica Wiggins Thanks for listening!
Man, this was disheartening. And truly did give me the chills. But also despair.
I live in a valley where coyotes run freely and in number, but also I have a little girl that I look after. Luckily she is a teenager now, but still, this is still quite nightmarish.
As a limey who has grown up with the rhyme it goes: 1 for sorrow, 2 for joy 3 for a girl, 4 for a boy. 5 for silver, 6 for gold, 7 for a secret never to be told.
So yeah, in the version I grew up with, it would be more likely that they would have won the lottery...
Okay the first time I heard this I was in love I really was drawn I thought it really good so then a couple weeks go by and I find myself listening to it again this time I was brought to tears at the ending knowing the ending it was amazing
Great story as always
Amazing!!!!!
I'm listening at CTFDN when I go to sleep, am I normal?
MRmoutoto No. Don't ever change.
Chilling Tales For Dark Nights
:D Well I just listened to "you face Jaraxxus" for more than 1 hour straigth, I don't think I'm normal.
MRmoutoto r u dum?
Yourmomma Son
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MRmoutoto XD That was funny right?
Poor Jeff! Sounds like he came down with a horrible case of bronchitis!
Disturbing but gripping. :÷)
Wow this was a good one. morbid and a good touch of real life scare
I'm English and i'm pretty sure it's Magpies, not crows.
It goes:
One for sorrow, two for joy, three for a girl, four for a boy.
Five for silver, six for gold and seven for a secret that's never been told.
There might have been more than that, but I don't remember the rest. Cool story, anyway.
They could try again for another baby. Hopefully, they take better care of that one.
i love this channel keep them coming
Hi again sorry to bug you. But did you remove the video about numbers on the radio? It has the same voice actor from your videos Frost and The Contractor. Something about numbers on the radio I can't seem to find it.
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If this was a really short story, it would be bad and cliche, but this just proves that anything well written can be amazing, I loved it
I only got three questions
1. What happened to the daughter?
2. Why did Rick scream?
And
3. What happened to the mom?
+Anime Psycho
1. Apparently, she was killed by the coyote
2. the first time, it was out of rage that his daughter is dead, and the second time is from him losing any hope
3. the mom was left stranded with the dad
Austin Ames Oh OK thank
A murder of crows. Crows love shiny objects, and have symbiotic relationships with bears, wolves etc. They let predators know if there's easy prey, injured or weak by cawing. Then they feast on the remains.
now thats one good story mate ! (y)
"There's got to be a farmhouse near here..." Ummm..No, Bitch. That's how horror movies start.
Omg...im calling CPS for this one...but seriously, this was a great story with a fantastic narration. As mom of two young kids, i felt that that this was both the characters bad judgement leading to said missing/possibly dead child.
(spoiler!!) That gave me chills, I love that it wasn't a monster or anything supernatural that killed the little girl, makes it that much more terrifying
I would have hunt down that coyote, caught it away from its pack, and crushed its skull. Ugh, I can't even begin to imagine the grief he must've felt as a father. My family owns 80 acres of land in Oklahoma. Lots of coyotes. I've heard them howl in the distance but I've never come across a pack. I think they like to keep their distance from humans. I guess that one coyote saw that little girl as easy prey, which is why he went after her alone. You two sound great together btw! Loved the story! Alicia has such a pretty voice! Loved it!
Thanks Joel Lewis. We love Alicia!
I would have laughed so hard if the deep voiced narrator said, "Six Crows. Written by... six crows." And the rest of the story was sounds of crows squawking, pecking, and flapping wings.
15 minutes into this story and the wife is annoying me.
Smooth Operator Welcome to marriage. 😏
I really enjoyed this one. and i laughing end my i monster?
god that was bruuutaaaaaal.. that was as real as it gets.. no fartin around, no nothing... just plain reality--the brutality of life/nature itself.
I really wonder why was rick shouting in the end? Was it because he failed to fight with the beast or was it his wife murdered him? Thanks in advance for anyone who will enlighten me. ;)
got to say this was my first disappointing one I have heard on this channel. If the parents are school teachers they should know better then to send a young child off on her own. That just left me saying there and then well there's a dead kid so no I was not shocked in any way when at the end oh wow she's dead... also found it very drawn out omg could the guy whine any more?? Wish the damn crows had taken the whinny ass with them hell feed him to the jackals send the wife as well she was not any better
its magpies not crows I'm sure
It seems to differ depending on your locale. At least, that's what I've gathered from other comments
Trying to make sense of this...did they find their daughter's body? And at the end, when he saw the crows lined up, does that mean they were going to die too?
I am pretty sure any parent would feel that way even if not their fault.
One crow for the morning, one for the night, one for mourning yet out of sight. One for its saying, the caw of its call. The fifth in the number that brings us the fall and led by the sixth that ends us all.
is that crackling on the video or my speakers?
I don't hear anything
It's not staticy crackling...it's some sort of background noise...almost like the faint crackling of a fire
Did Jeff's voice break or something?
sounds lower right? I do know that in many editing softwares, you're able to lower the pitch of the audio. Maybe that's what they did here to better fit the character of Rick.
Six crow can only lead you to one road pain and suffering
Chelseas don't seem to do very well in these stories. I listened to the story "To Be Human" yesterday, and that Chelsea also had a bad time.
The only poem I know involving crows and numbers, has six as a good thing.
'One for sorrow,
Two for joy,
Three for a girl,
Four for a boy,
Five for silver,
Six for gold,
Seven for a secret,
Never to be told.'
I am never leaving my son/daughter/wife to wander off even for a second after this one.
Only problem i have is who lets their child go off like that!!!!!
personally think the female character needed more emotion in her voice at parts
I understand the logic in putting the girl at the top of the hill if the husband slips you wouldn’t want the girl at the bottom and if she’s in the car it just adds more weight for the husband to push I don’t think they were being negligent but then again I’m only halfway through
This should've been a Stephen King horror movie.
Stephen King never writes anything this good.
Would a coyote really eat a person like that? I feel like, once the daughter started to struggle, the coyote would run off. idk maybe that's just me
I wish this one had a more supernatural twist to it, but that's just my preference, the "realistic" horror stories don't get to me quite as much. My preference aside, I actually did enjoy this one, this was a actually a really good story, I'd listen to more by this author.
Meh...it was pretty predictable and not really creepy, but I guess it was well written at least. That, or I've just become desensitized to horror stories. I can't find any that really send chills down my spine or make me think, like a good horror mystery.
Very glad we don’t have crows in NZ.
Coyote? It couldn't have been at least the ghost of a coyote? The author is definitely very talented but a coyote?
I'm only at like 2mins at the moment and gonna continue but I already have a problem.. I'm fairly
sure I know which 'English rhyme' they're talking about and 6 crows is for gold :/ lol..
If this about the rhyme I think it is, then six would be for gold, therefore lucky.
I may be mistaken though.
This was more depressing and sad than scary or creepy :/
So why didnt they just let the child stay in the care. The moment they sent her by the road alone i onow that was a bad idea smh
Thank you for flying Raven airlines
Wait this was in the day.....he said it was late and they had to take turns with the wheel
Marriages spoil fast if you marry with in 2 years a tip for all couples wait a few more years before it helps
marriage is a test of manhood and ladyness.
things get hard but thats when real adults say
you know what my child is not gonna grow up in a failed
home nor will it be disfunctional. hard times don't last childhood memories do.
Can someone plz tell me what each number means?
oh coyotes, people think wolves are bad but coyotes...they eat their own.
Yep, I have a fear of coyotes...was almost snatched by one in AZ during a family picnic.
I feel like a lot of this could have been easily avoided. I knew that when he told his kid to look for "a bus full of cheerleaders" it was a set up for her to get lost while they corrected the car. The rest just felt forced and way too long. They tried to go for suspense and to build the scene and history but it just felt like filler. I saw where the story was headed the moment he swerved and crashed into a ditch in the middle of nowhere. Not really creepy... just tedious and predictable. But that's just my opinion.
And that's the story of why I hate crows.
I was the 66th like. xD oh boy.
666 crows is VERY bad luck.
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I guess the marriage is over for good now?
They should've just left her safely in the car
where does this superstition come from? From what i read 6 crows means gold?
Wait...I thought coyotes ate dead things? A mountain lion is more believable.
Theyre in a field with small hills, not ideal for mountain lions :-)
Coyotes have been known to attack humans while in packs so I assume they would not hesitate to attack a small child.
coyotes are able to smell dead things really well but they will not hesitate to eat things like cats or gophers, in packs I know they have eaten a calf who strayed a bit to far so a small child they wouldn't hesitate if they were hungry
I grew up in Surrey BC in the early/mid 90's during a time of massive deforestation to make way for suburban housing and strip malls. There were homeless coyotes living in ditches, and even displaced cougars in densely populated areas. There was a series of children who were attacked by coyotes around that time.
Actually a quick search shows that attacks on dogs by coyotes is ongoing and an attack on a toddler took place in the area only 3 years ago.
I later moved to a woodsy, mountainous area in BC. The coyotes favourite game was to 'besiege' our house at night. We have several large dogs, only one of whom lives outside. Each night you can hear the coyotes howl out front of the house. Next you hear them howl behind. Then they howl on the other side (we have woods on 3 sides of our house).
The next time you howl, they are closer. They keep this up almost all night, every night. They haven't done anything but cull a couple cats in the last 10 years however.
Why didn't Rick just hit the brakes?
ok so what happened to the daughter?