I just realised ranger parallels junkil in the way that ranger is desperately trying to be a villain while junkil is desperately trying to be a hero, which falls in line with the weird amount of spamton and berdly parallels (And obviously the arenas go without saying)
@TrixterTheFemboy I'm thinking... Both were frozen in the weird route. Both ended up with wires controlling their actions, and require the party's help to be freed in the normal route, and seem very insecure due to nobody liking them. Spamton's desperate to get back the power and influence he once had, while Berdly is trying to appear the smartest to get attention. Their fights are also weirdly similar, with both taking place on roller coasters. Also, they at various points worked for Queen.
@@Decimal_86 also both spamton and berdly are prideful [as seen in both of their dialog] but needed the help of someone else to bring them up [for spamton it was the person on the phone and for berdly it was Noelle] so perhaps spamton is berdlys bad qualitys at its worse
Hell, there's an unused Spamton Neo sparing mechanic that functions near identical to the controlled Berdly one. Granted it's unused but on top of everything else it's interesting
Qing's chair is such a downgrade from Queen's chair when you really think about it. Take the following instances for example: 1) The chain holding up the chair could eventually snap. 2) The chair could tilt over a bit from him moving the wrong way and dump him into the fan holding up the arena. 3) A stray recycling bin could hit the chair and knock Qing off into the fan again. 4) A single hit to the chain would easily destroy it and leave the chair dangling. 5) One technical error while dropping the chair down could result in Qing falling (Chain getting stuck, Chair falling too fast, etc.). 6) His cigar could light part of the chair on fire if he drops it, lighting him on fire in the process. TLDR: This thing is a fucking hazard.
idk if this contradicts anything but like what if you attack the chains in a fight against him like how you attack the shield in queens original fight iirc (wait i think the person above this reply literally said the same thing but clearer.... oh well-)
Love the new Qing content, makes him feel more likeable and his laugh actually sounds really good now! Keep it up rewriters! (also I like that is facial expressions are a combination of king's goofier faces and queens in-general faces)
YOOOOO I LOVE THAT YOU UPDATED THE CUTSCENE The original just felt like something was missing, and this remake actually filled that missing spot with something of value As for what that something is I don’t know.
Qing has honestly got to be one of my favourites jn this au so far. He just seems so original, but unoriginal enough to fit in a role swap au. And I love his attitude as well, seems a very entertaining character all round.
Wow, Ranger’s basically just Bowser Jr now, bandanna and all. I also like how Qing’s…uh…visor..I guess says “1983” when he says “back in my day”, he truly is a millennial (or Gen X idk) Facebook user.
just curious, what's the name Charkis for? I get that it's Chara and they're the Rewritten version of Ralsei, but 'Ralsei' is an anagram of 'Asriel'. is 'Charkis' an anagram or portmanteau of something I'm missing?
Well, it's nice to see that Ranger's sprite looks better now, even if it's the same design, (although I still don't like it that much, especially that bandana on his mouth, it stands out badly in my opinion) I also don't like that Quig's portraits (although I must admit he has better expressions and more details) and Ranger have a small forehead, it makes them look kind of weird. Beyond my complaints, I notice an improvement in general, everything feels more dynamic and detailed, which is really good.
its a redesign. Ranger was changed to a hampster instead of a racoon to be a reference to the king hamster cage, and the bandana wont always be on his face its only up for the battle. for his forehead its shrouded in darkness.
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I just realised ranger parallels junkil in the way that ranger is desperately trying to be a villain while junkil is desperately trying to be a hero, which falls in line with the weird amount of spamton and berdly parallels
(And obviously the arenas go without saying)
...what Spamton and Berdly parallels am I missing because I feel like they have so few
@TrixterTheFemboy I'm thinking... Both were frozen in the weird route. Both ended up with wires controlling their actions, and require the party's help to be freed in the normal route, and seem very insecure due to nobody liking them. Spamton's desperate to get back the power and influence he once had, while Berdly is trying to appear the smartest to get attention. Their fights are also weirdly similar, with both taking place on roller coasters. Also, they at various points worked for Queen.
@@Decimal_86 also both spamton and berdly are prideful [as seen in both of their dialog] but needed the help of someone else to bring them up [for spamton it was the person on the phone and for berdly it was Noelle] so perhaps spamton is berdlys bad qualitys at its worse
Hell, there's an unused Spamton Neo sparing mechanic that functions near identical to the controlled Berdly one. Granted it's unused but on top of everything else it's interesting
@@Decimal_86Thanks, neat
Wow, this is so cool, I bet the guy who made the Ranger bike animation is super handsome and cool
Nah I bet he's a fetus
@neon8590 At least he's not a fossil
Is it you?
@CrackerNDaisyAnimationsThis guy's name is notlancer and he has a mustache, he's definitely not the lancer that lightners has as a friend
wait you’re part of the team??
"Sneaqing as usual I see"
sneaQING AS usual i see.
QUINGAS!
@@FoxNamedLukeWe love mr. Quingas.
Homestuck ah typing quirk
quingas
Qing's chair is such a downgrade from Queen's chair when you really think about it. Take the following instances for example: 1) The chain holding up the chair could eventually snap. 2) The chair could tilt over a bit from him moving the wrong way and dump him into the fan holding up the arena. 3) A stray recycling bin could hit the chair and knock Qing off into the fan again. 4) A single hit to the chain would easily destroy it and leave the chair dangling. 5) One technical error while dropping the chair down could result in Qing falling (Chain getting stuck, Chair falling too fast, etc.). 6) His cigar could light part of the chair on fire if he drops it, lighting him on fire in the process.
TLDR: This thing is a fucking hazard.
It's not a chain, it's like doc ock's arms
Although if in a different cutscene the chain thing snaps it would be funny
you could basically beat him like spamton neo, Charkis: ASRIEL! CUT THE LARGE, UH... ummm...
Qing: Chains, Idiot.
idk if this contradicts anything but like what if you attack the chains in a fight against him like how you attack the shield in queens original fight iirc
(wait i think the person above this reply literally said the same thing but clearer.... oh well-)
The chain also seems to be loose, so a large enough breeze could make Qing start swinging and eventually fall.
"can't you just leave us alone?"
" *nah* "
Qing is so ''how ya do fellow kids''/Facebook boomer coded.
Love how all the dialouge sounds are new for this au *except* Susie
I kinda wish they kept the Deltarune voices
@@josephisherelol5302yes, i really liked the voice for noelle
thats because when i realized i needed one i didnt feel like delaying the video a week just to get it
Love the new Qing content, makes him feel more likeable and his laugh actually sounds really good now! Keep it up rewriters!
(also I like that is facial expressions are a combination of king's goofier faces and queens in-general faces)
1:11 thank tou for keeping the "I AM NOT A DORK I AM AN INTELLECTUAL" Dialogue
YOOOOO I LOVE THAT YOU UPDATED THE CUTSCENE
The original just felt like something was missing, and this remake actually filled that missing spot with something of value
As for what that something is
I don’t know.
Maybe its Dark fountain on the background?
He says TWO favorite clowns. He is completely ignoring chark's exsistence. Funny
it lines up with how ralsei kind of gets ignored by queen
@zeeoh5466 ralsei also gets ignored by betdly
he hasnt met charkis
I cannot believe the Qing Dynasty is a major boss
Wow smart
I like the redefinement of qing’s speech here, it sounds a lot better than the older version
Qing has honestly got to be one of my favourites jn this au so far. He just seems so original, but unoriginal enough to fit in a role swap au. And I love his attitude as well, seems a very entertaining character all round.
Wow, Ranger’s basically just Bowser Jr now, bandanna and all. I also like how Qing’s…uh…visor..I guess says “1983” when he says “back in my day”, he truly is a millennial (or Gen X idk) Facebook user.
We finally got to see what Susie's sprite looked like.
Buddy, I think you didnt check past vids-
@@lucaslol11 But the previous one she was in has her sprite silhouetted!
@@andrewanderson1512They're referring to the old version of this video
@@lasagna3289 ...Damn it.
the dark fountain in the background is such a nice touch
hampter edition
I like the fact that Qing in riding an amusement park ride instead of a throne 😂
An how Qing is smoking rather than drinking
P.S: might be a old Mac computer 😂
"Sorry all caps was on" 😭 that is peak Toby Fox humour i already love this character so much
is he using tone indicators on the visor
0:08 Repainted moment
This is really nice! Love how the battle scene looks, keep up the good work!
Kris is smilling and talking.
That perspective of someone far more...Souless
That's Charkis
This is WAYYYYY better, you guys are the best!!!!
hehehe, this remaster is just as hilarious as the previous version,
although, it seems everything's getting remastered, is there a new direction?
GOD ALMIGHTY, You Guys Actually Going really good At This!
I really like how it was reworked
"Back in my day..." (1983)
Bro really be pursuiting
He’s got the Bowser Jr. bandanna!
Really glad you kept Lancers song the same, its sounds wonderful
just curious, what's the name Charkis for? I get that it's Chara and they're the Rewritten version of Ralsei, but 'Ralsei' is an anagram of 'Asriel'. is 'Charkis' an anagram or portmanteau of something I'm missing?
its both a combo os chara and kris/frisk and the vessel heard them being called a carcasses so they went with it
@ ah gotcha
I love the animation remake ! It is more good than the first
King went full Dr Robotnik
Yes
ranger my tolerated
qing:
But with me you can't do anything. I can't you can't we can't do anything
I like the new details
SORRY FOR ALL CAPS
im so happy that qing tallks like qing now
Such a great AU!
Ahh, asriel and noelle, sneaQING AS usual, i see
Somehow he’s still perfectly in character
Brutal
Well, it's nice to see that Ranger's sprite looks better now, even if it's the same design, (although I still don't like it that much, especially that bandana on his mouth, it stands out badly in my opinion) I also don't like that Quig's portraits (although I must admit he has better expressions and more details) and Ranger have a small forehead, it makes them look kind of weird.
Beyond my complaints, I notice an improvement in general, everything feels more dynamic and detailed, which is really good.
Yeah I bet the guy who made that bike animation is super handsome
It's just a le epic Bowser Jr reference
@ Probably
its a redesign. Ranger was changed to a hampster instead of a racoon to be a reference to the king hamster cage, and the bandana wont always be on his face its only up for the battle. for his forehead its shrouded in darkness.
So cool maaaan
Why Noelle's HP is gray though? It looked fine as yellow, now it's kinda dull.
"I AM NOT A DORK I AM AN INTELLECTUAL"
QINGAS is my fave
The Ranger/Lancer bandana is very similar to the bowser.JR bandana!
hopefully there's just a random gauge called "qqdsident's nond gauge" in one of the chapters
J'adore l'animation de noelle sur moto
Me when the prankster pursuits:
God
2:26 charkis doenst have an punctuation mark at the end of this dialogue
its not supposed to (comedic effect)
@justyourfellowfrog ah
guess i need to remake hte cutscene and reupload
You gotta love a everyman reference
…
я может быть ОООООЧЕНЬ сильно туплю…
но что поменялось?
Да. Спрайты персонажей
Катсцена была воссоздана заново из тех же асетов, но были полностью обновленны диалоговые спрайты Царя и все спрайты Рейнджера, ввиду его редизайна
@@viput69 ну... либо так
p.s спасибо
@@viput69
ну если диалоговые спрайты…
то да, раньше они были стремными
Также чуть переписан диалог и добавлен фонтан на фоне
Is this an actual fangame or is this another type of project im very confused
Anyone wanna talk about how they have the Bowser Jr. Mask?
sneaqing. that’s genius
Will this be an actual fangame at some point?
PINGAS REFERENCE LET'S GO
When will chapter rewritten become a full game it’s epic!!!
I have a theory that they are making,because there is no more animations,just "game play footage"like why you would put the battle hud then
@sansioalgecirastale9475ok I’ll take note of that
In 10 years
@sansioalgecirastale9475 the animations try to emulate the style of deltarune, so the purpose of the hud elements would be to enhance that
@@zeeoh5466 its not animated other than the sprites, its coded in the kristal engine but we are not making a game anytime soon
A rework ehahahahaha [good] [ great] [amazing]
0:08 sewnpuard joke but actually done better ithink good job.
we did it first guys...
😳👌
This boss music remembers me a other music from bad piggies
so wait who is susie replacing? Is she like the lancer of this universe?
She replaces Noelle
@NotLancer2018 OHH, SUSIE IS GONNA SNOWGRAVE LANCER
@@phnxtv I mean it kind of parallels how she almost killed Lancer in OG Deltarune, so it makes sense
@CrackerNDaisyAnimations oh yeah and nelle almost snowgrave nerdly in the chapter 1
А чего от енота превратился в хомяка?
Why did you turn from a raccoon into a hamster?
Makes more sense I think
Новый дизайн, для соответствия его милости как в ориг дельте
@@SereskaI997 ну ... это имеет смысл?
It’s a reference to kings hamster cage in ch2 of deltarune
Qing is a redditor.
Wow tjis is so cool but there's way too kany mov8ng parts it's a bit dizzying actually
qingas
1:19 🤨
They got rid of the barney joke 😭
And unfortunate price to pay,
But I’m sure they’ll bring it back at some point.
@CrackerNDaisyAnimations Nope, if we do it'll be a parody name too meta
@ yeah fair enough
Damn
So, King is Lancer, and Lancer is Queen?
No lmfao
King and Queen swap
Lancer and Berdly swap
Noelle and Susie swap
Etc
How did you even get that lmao
Only one complaint: His first line should have had /ref on his face rather than /j
Why does Charkis have more health than Asriel? Surely it should be the other way around
the party dynamic was switched around making charkis the tank
asriel can talk?
At least there's another dimension of the Deltarune world where I can give Noelle some respect, but not here, sorry No sorry NOELLE 🙄
SNEAKING AS USUAL, I SEE.
sneaqing
sneacing
QINGAS
qingas
Remade the only good cr animation with the terrible noelle sound blips 💔
How is it the only good one, the others are great
@NotLancer2018 bad writing horrific voice acting medicore music
@@term1nal4 damn man thats... rude. as the writer
@@term1nal4 at least give some proper criticism, edgelord
is there an actual game being made or just a bunch of cutscenes?
Buncha cutscenes
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