I guess it does depend on the story, but after years of cultivating creepypasta reading taste, I think I’ve come to prefer rain. It feels more like a friend telling you about their spooky experience in the middle of a rainy night instead of a production. It’s more immersive that way, I think.
the rain helps keep focus on the story, it might be a personal thing but any kind of music is distracting when im trying to take in a new story or get into the atmosphere. the rain's at a perfect amount and at perfect volume 👍
"Mr. Widemouth" is a creepypasta I remember actually being good. It was about a little creature that may or may not have just been a feverdream of a child. It keeps trying to trick the kid into hurting themselves. The story is short and has a pretty good stinger.
I think there is a creepypasta called funnymouth which idk if it’s related but it’s quite the coincidence that they both have a word ending with mouth 😊
@@PineFSunshine Yeah, he originally released a version with a bunch of stuff that was “inspired by” (read: plagiarized from) a few other sources, including Alantutorial, then got called out for it; and demanded every narration of the story that contained the “contested” parts be deleted. Hence why pretty much every original recording got purged, and only exists in reupload form.
@@SuicideSeason4545 It sucks too, because the dude’s an incredibly talented author. Ironically, the parts he plagiarized were the least interesting parts of the story.
Yeah, he tried to screw over a bunch of youtubers like someordinarygamers and creepsmcpasta. When he got called out for abusing the system, he just said "ITS MY COPYRIGHT I DO WHAT I WANT REEEEEEE-" Or something like that. He gave different excuses but that was his main one basically. He was such a bellend.
Damm, I did not knew this Creepypasta was THIS LARGE. The version I read ended in the "hut" with the policeman coming out of it and talking to his father.
I could have sworn I read this story when I was younger, but I remember it being way, way shorter. Like, it ended shortly after the childhood visit to Mr. Bear’s house.
The writing near the end also irked me as well, more so where he’s going off about how horrible and traumatizing seeing the video is then when he’s asked abt uploading it it’s not “no why the fuck would I do that it’s horrible” but “idk how” like?? Found that very odd??
Something I found pretty funny is: The main character studied (and presumably completed) a Computer Engineering degree - yet he doesn't know how to digitize a VHS
One of my favorite Creepypastas was one about a clown TV show thing. I only remember about the red room, a kid vomiting, and the main character's sibling being seen lured away in real time on the TV.
I literally just listened to CreepyPod’s narration of this story the other day. Guess I’m listening to it again! Seriously though, this story, despite the drama with the author, is a certified classic, and I’m glad to see people still covering it. Edit: The Hatred gameplay is oddly fitting lmao
I can hear the ghost of mutahar’s voice and the royalty free creepy music in the background no matter what, but I do like the rain noise especially for this one.
Classic creepypastas I suppose were the best since creepypastas were new. New creepypastas are like those 4chan green text stories that go on for hours and hours, and usually have the premise or entire plot synopsis explained in the title. It will be nice listening to this, thanks for adding the rain :3
Most of those creepypastas have the plot in the title because theyre posted on nosleep, where you're supposed to treat the story as real, and like you're asking for help or something
@@CasualLogThat’s been a relatively recent shift (like in the last couple of years), they weren’t always like that. Like, you’d still see those, but they’d be less intrusive and they’d be mixed in with titles like “A Shattered Life” or “Pig Iron.” It’s slowly gotten worse over time, and the titles get longer and more specific.
Personally I would've enjoyed a bit more details on the episodes, more info on how they would slowly got more darker and deranged, maybe show Mr. Bear treating the kids worser and worser every episode showing Mr. Bear becoming more twisted and whatnot. The whole satanist pit thing was just kinda unwarranted and as you said not that scary, maybe actually have Mr. Bear just snap one day and do the whole pit thing, rather then whatever stupid satanist thing that ended up happening, maybe have more of a back and forth dynamic between Mr. Bear and Elliot he could be more obsessed with him as "the one that got away" like have Mr. Bear trying to track him down. Also yeah the ending was horrible maybe actually have Mr. Bear take on the whole blog thing for a little while maybe try to use it to try to lure more people in to save Elliot or something.
i remember watching muta read this in like 2013 in creepy/strange gaming and i lived in the outskirts of brampton at the time, a short drive away from middle of nowhere caledon and it freaked me out so hard, revisting this now im laughing because I was born in August 1999 so could picture in my head was "died in august 1999, born in august 1999, welcome back random kid that was burnt alive"
this is easily one of the best creepypasta stories ever. way better than any of the brand character ones like mario or sonic or the dreaded tails doll curse
Well for the most part the brand character ones have migrated onto to analogue and digital horror. Creepypasta these days is in the format of Reddit stories and are usually uploaded to Reddit lol.
This is a true story. I lived in Bolton for 30 years, in the township of Caledon. I went to Holy Family elementary school and went to Robert F Hall Highschool. This took place on what's now know as Downey's Farm. I remember when this happened. Btw Mr. Bear is in currently is prison in California serving a 30 year prison sentence, he was arrest in Georgia for trying to kidnap a girl. He moved to Mississauga, after all this, he was married and had 5 daughters. His first name is Brian. I did meet him before I found out who he really was, I'll say this don't trust anyone who never blinks. Ask me anything about that area or about this fucked up story I can tell you anything you want to know.
This is a good creepypasta, i dont have as much criticism being someone not fromaround the area its set. It was the first in a while to make me scared to leave my room to go down the hallway
As someone who grew up in the Greater Toronto Area, the local touches more than make up for the minor slip ups in the narrative/prose. Especially that comment about Brampton drivers lol Btw I thought “Bramalea” is pronounced “Brah-muh-lee” (with the “Brah” having a “a” sound like “apple”)
There's one scary story I read, it was technically an r/nosleep post, but here's a rough synopsis: Two men are experimenting something (a machine?) I forgot what it was for, but maybe like, trying to solve world hunger or stop diseases or something. Anyway, the main character guy was sort of a co-worker to the other man. They ended up replicating skin? But it was like a living organism and tried to latch onto the men and try to like attack them or eat them? It ended with the men surviving and the protagonist running and getting in his car and leaving. It had narration saying like "skin is always around me" or something some weird shit like that. I have been unable to find it. If anyone knows what it was titled or who posted it, PLEASE let me know.
I’m not even kidding when you got to “and then it just ends” I literally felt like ಠ_ಠ and heard the SpongeBob *whomp* sound in my head. It kinda felt like the author just got bored and a little annoyed with the whole thing by the end. It was a genuinely good set up but I think it wouldn’t be a bad idea for the author to revamp this even if it ruins immersion. There’s a few major things I would recommend changing: • the motivation, I initially thought this was gonna have some supernatural element and that’s what was compelling him to visit so much (which I actually prefer it wasn’t, I’ve just heard a lot of SCP stories recently so that’s where my mind was) but then he just kept going “that could’ve been ME BOO HOO” like my guy there were kids who actually GOT murdered whose families are probably broken now and your dad drove you to the damn house, you probably weren’t gonna get got but yeah watching those kids burn was definitely for closure and not macabre interest 🫤. It made the character so unlikeable since he mentions this so often right after mentioning actual awful things the kids went through and there’s no reason for him to watch the children’s d*ath tape. I would have preferred survivor’s guilt, which he throws in at the end, being the driving force, like he wants to find Mr. Bear himself or make sure he’s dead. He could have even had the kid he showed the show to be one of the kids who is k*lled to really solidify the guilt and give him an ACTUAL direct tangible motivation. • Don’t have the cop friend show the children’s d*ath tape. When the officer friend kept pushing to involve the main character more and more I legitimately thought he was going to turn out to be Mr. Bear as a twist until they made it clear other cops knew he was showing Elliot the tape. When he initially went in to watch the tape they found, I thought it would be a new tape from Mr. Bear involving the kids Elliot ran into in the woods. It would make more sense that he’d be shown that to see if he knew something, maybe it shows Elliot secretly being recorded during his confrontation with the kids in the woods before showing Mr. bear approaching the kids to do whatever spooky thing they wanna do to add a sense of actual active danger and add to the survivor’s guilt motivation. Having him choose to watch the d*ath tape just made him more unlikeable, there was absolutely nothing about it he needed to see and it makes the police so unrealistic, like the police friend went from “I’m helping you find closure” to “I’m trying to traumatize you” so quickly. If they really wanted to have Elliot see the tape it would have been way better if he didn’t know what was on it before watching it and maybe having him find it or have it left/delivered on his property, then it would at least feel more like it was being inflicted on him non-consensually as opposed to wanting to see some kids burned alive and would add to the sense of danger closing in. •The protagonist should know Mr. Bear is alive and an imminent threat at some point. There is never a point where Elliot believes Mr. Bear is alive and aware of him, he even acts like Mr. Bear couldn’t possibly know anything about him even though he has a whole ass public blog that he puts a bunch of somewhat personal info in. I don’t get why he doesn’t react to the hacked message including the distinctive letters that he sees in the video that no one else knows about until he mentions them. There’s just never a “click” moment for him. I get that the author got tired of the story so it’s incomplete, but honestly that moment should have happened quite a bit before they even got to that point in the story. •Have an ending. I mean yeah, that’s the big one. I was really expecting an escalation right before you said it was over. Even just like finishing the last blog post he’s working on with a “I’ll update you guys later, sounds like my dad came home early,” just a lil something to suggest something has happened to him. Sorry that’s so long, I was just so thrown by how it just sort of fizzles out so quickly and wanted to talk out my thoughts. I got the vibe Elliot was a bit of a self insert and all the stuff he was dealing with like driving and uni were actually happening to the author and that’s why motivation and posting started to really get messed up, probably threw in the d*ath tape to try and add some spice that had been missed but realized it didn’t really add anything, didn’t know what to do, and was just over the whole thing. If the story had had an ending I probably wouldn’t have said anything lmao but this story has some good bones and a really good ominous beginning. Thanks for shredding your voice for us ❤️
I tried something new with using ran sounds instead of music. Thoughts? Should I use the rain more, or less?
It was the perfect amount
Personally I prefer the music but the rain works too!
I guess it does depend on the story, but after years of cultivating creepypasta reading taste, I think I’ve come to prefer rain. It feels more like a friend telling you about their spooky experience in the middle of a rainy night instead of a production. It’s more immersive that way, I think.
You can change it up with music but the rain is nice too
the rain helps keep focus on the story, it might be a personal thing but any kind of music is distracting when im trying to take in a new story or get into the atmosphere. the rain's at a perfect amount and at perfect volume 👍
"Mr. Widemouth" is a creepypasta I remember actually being good. It was about a little creature that may or may not have just been a feverdream of a child. It keeps trying to trick the kid into hurting themselves. The story is short and has a pretty good stinger.
I remember that being one of my introductions into the world of creepypastas. A pretty good way to start out.
the shorter ones are always the best.
I think there is a creepypasta called funnymouth which idk if it’s related but it’s quite the coincidence that they both have a word ending with mouth 😊
The stinger is pulsating...
@@gregssoft2008 huh??
One of my favorite creepypastas, shame the author had a streak of copyrighting UA-camrs who read the story
Yeah like, wasn't this story caught copying from other stories? Like lifting stuff from Alantutorials?
@@PineFSunshine Yeah, he originally released a version with a bunch of stuff that was “inspired by” (read: plagiarized from) a few other sources, including Alantutorial, then got called out for it; and demanded every narration of the story that contained the “contested” parts be deleted. Hence why pretty much every original recording got purged, and only exists in reupload form.
@@Acheron93 there was definitely better way to handle that situation for sure. Kind of sad that being nice is harder than being mean it seems like.
@@SuicideSeason4545 It sucks too, because the dude’s an incredibly talented author. Ironically, the parts he plagiarized were the least interesting parts of the story.
Yeah, he tried to screw over a bunch of youtubers like someordinarygamers and creepsmcpasta. When he got called out for abusing the system, he just said "ITS MY COPYRIGHT I DO WHAT I WANT REEEEEEE-" Or something like that. He gave different excuses but that was his main one basically. He was such a bellend.
Damm, I did not knew this Creepypasta was THIS LARGE.
The version I read ended in the "hut" with the policeman coming out of it and talking to his father.
I could have sworn I read this story when I was younger, but I remember it being way, way shorter. Like, it ended shortly after the childhood visit to Mr. Bear’s house.
Oh hey same feeling of deja-vu here!
This is because it wasn't originally a creepypasta, but a text-based web series. So when you read it, it probably wasn't finished yet.
The writing near the end also irked me as well, more so where he’s going off about how horrible and traumatizing seeing the video is then when he’s asked abt uploading it it’s not “no why the fuck would I do that it’s horrible” but “idk how” like?? Found that very odd??
Something I found pretty funny is: The main character studied (and presumably completed) a Computer Engineering degree - yet he doesn't know how to digitize a VHS
Bro my grandma know how to do that and she's as old as DISNEY LAND
It's been years since I heard this one. Thanks for reminding me of it
One of my favorite Creepypastas was one about a clown TV show thing. I only remember about the red room, a kid vomiting, and the main character's sibling being seen lured away in real time on the TV.
I literally just listened to CreepyPod’s narration of this story the other day. Guess I’m listening to it again! Seriously though, this story, despite the drama with the author, is a certified classic, and I’m glad to see people still covering it.
Edit: The Hatred gameplay is oddly fitting lmao
Your my favourite person right now, thank you so much for doing this! Needed this nostalgia boost ❤😊
I can hear the ghost of mutahar’s voice and the royalty free creepy music in the background no matter what, but I do like the rain noise especially for this one.
Hey Peter, your channel is really great. Your videos are some of my favorites to listen too right now!
Classic creepypastas I suppose were the best since creepypastas were new. New creepypastas are like those 4chan green text stories that go on for hours and hours, and usually have the premise or entire plot synopsis explained in the title.
It will be nice listening to this, thanks for adding the rain :3
Most of those creepypastas have the plot in the title because theyre posted on nosleep, where you're supposed to treat the story as real, and like you're asking for help or something
@@CasualLogboring!
@@MobyTheLion okay dude
@@CasualLogThat’s been a relatively recent shift (like in the last couple of years), they weren’t always like that. Like, you’d still see those, but they’d be less intrusive and they’d be mixed in with titles like “A Shattered Life” or “Pig Iron.” It’s slowly gotten worse over time, and the titles get longer and more specific.
I hereby dub it Light Novel-ification
LOL the Hatred gameplay
I cracked up immediately when I saw it. Definitely not the typical “white noise” background footage
Nothing like watching the Wacky Adventures of Not Important the edgy boy as you relax.
holy shit.. hearing this story brings me back to 2014-15. listening to my SOG playlist
Personally I would've enjoyed a bit more details on the episodes, more info on how they would slowly got more darker and deranged, maybe show Mr. Bear treating the kids worser and worser every episode showing Mr. Bear becoming more twisted and whatnot. The whole satanist pit thing was just kinda unwarranted and as you said not that scary, maybe actually have Mr. Bear just snap one day and do the whole pit thing, rather then whatever stupid satanist thing that ended up happening, maybe have more of a back and forth dynamic between Mr. Bear and Elliot he could be more obsessed with him as "the one that got away" like have Mr. Bear trying to track him down. Also yeah the ending was horrible maybe actually have Mr. Bear take on the whole blog thing for a little while maybe try to use it to try to lure more people in to save Elliot or something.
i remember watching muta read this in like 2013 in creepy/strange gaming and i lived in the outskirts of brampton at the time, a short drive away from middle of nowhere caledon and it freaked me out so hard, revisting this now im laughing because I was born in August 1999 so could picture in my head was "died in august 1999, born in august 1999, welcome back random kid that was burnt alive"
Yo? This is long. I can tell this is going to be a good one.
this is easily one of the best creepypasta stories ever. way better than any of the brand character ones like mario or sonic or the dreaded tails doll curse
Well for the most part the brand character ones have migrated onto to analogue and digital horror. Creepypasta these days is in the format of Reddit stories and are usually uploaded to Reddit lol.
@@SuicideSeason4545 TRUE :D
I mean yeah, if that's the standards you're going by lol
For some reason my mind wants the cop dude to have secretly been mr bear...
My personal take is that the guy behind Mr Bear and Caledon Local 21 was a cannibal. Something along the lines of Ed Gein and Elizabeth Bathory.
It's a good day when Peter uploads
This is a true story.
I lived in Bolton for 30 years, in the township of Caledon.
I went to Holy Family elementary school and went to Robert F Hall Highschool.
This took place on what's now know as Downey's Farm.
I remember when this happened.
Btw Mr. Bear is in currently is prison in California serving a 30 year prison sentence, he was arrest in Georgia for trying to kidnap a girl.
He moved to Mississauga, after all this, he was married and had 5 daughters.
His first name is Brian.
I did meet him before I found out who he really was, I'll say this don't trust anyone who never blinks.
Ask me anything about that area or about this fucked up story I can tell you anything you want to know.
One of my favorite haunted gaming readings along with funny mouth and xorax. You should do funny mouth next.
I hate that there’s no good visual accompaniment to this story
Agreed. I personally despise the game hatred, it’s basically a mass shooting simulator.
@@SuicideSeason4545not to mention, its a wannabe postal clone lmao
Cry more definitely one of those losers that believe video games cause violence. Please stop going on UA-cam. Delete it @SuicideSeason006
@@gupster24postal being a cringe shooter simulator like hatred:
Bookmarks:
30:37
what about 2000 cutepizza
Okay, between this and Ao Oni you’ve convinced me to subscribe, lol. 👻
I took the sandstone pill
I took the Flintstones pill
Lactaid
Cobble stone pill
As did I
What did Jschlatt do this time…
take a shot every time he says "could've been me" or something similar
This is a good creepypasta, i dont have as much criticism being someone not fromaround the area its set. It was the first in a while to make me scared to leave my room to go down the hallway
The only thing creepy about 1999 is that is the year i was born
Horrifying!
yoo 1999
should've called your channel Hey Peak with this classic
So I went to your page to put on more of your videos and I see you have Joey Diaz from Spiderman as your banner? Tremendous.
New upload? Don't mind if I do
(also I love your content pls keep posting I will microwave my eardrums if you don't :P)
It’s really weird because I remember coming across this creepypasta 9 years ago and thinking it was a little creepy, but perhaps not that memorable.
The mr bear story is definitely a classic
As someone who grew up in the Greater Toronto Area, the local touches more than make up for the minor slip ups in the narrative/prose. Especially that comment about Brampton drivers lol
Btw I thought “Bramalea” is pronounced “Brah-muh-lee” (with the “Brah” having a “a” sound like “apple”)
This did give a true detective vibe
hey Hey Peter, consider taking a look at the creepypasta 'I Found a Digital Camera In The Woods'
Close enough. Welcome back Haunted Gaming. Please don't turn into a critikal clone
There's one scary story I read, it was technically an r/nosleep post, but here's a rough synopsis: Two men are experimenting something (a machine?) I forgot what it was for, but maybe like, trying to solve world hunger or stop diseases or something.
Anyway, the main character guy was sort of a co-worker to the other man. They ended up replicating skin? But it was like a living organism and tried to latch onto the men and try to like attack them or eat them?
It ended with the men surviving and the protagonist running and getting in his car and leaving. It had narration saying like "skin is always around me" or something some weird shit like that.
I have been unable to find it. If anyone knows what it was titled or who posted it, PLEASE let me know.
I’m not even kidding when you got to “and then it just ends” I literally felt like ಠ_ಠ and heard the SpongeBob *whomp* sound in my head. It kinda felt like the author just got bored and a little annoyed with the whole thing by the end.
It was a genuinely good set up but I think it wouldn’t be a bad idea for the author to revamp this even if it ruins immersion. There’s a few major things I would recommend changing:
• the motivation, I initially thought this was gonna have some supernatural element and that’s what was compelling him to visit so much (which I actually prefer it wasn’t, I’ve just heard a lot of SCP stories recently so that’s where my mind was) but then he just kept going “that could’ve been ME BOO HOO” like my guy there were kids who actually GOT murdered whose families are probably broken now and your dad drove you to the damn house, you probably weren’t gonna get got but yeah watching those kids burn was definitely for closure and not macabre interest 🫤. It made the character so unlikeable since he mentions this so often right after mentioning actual awful things the kids went through and there’s no reason for him to watch the children’s d*ath tape. I would have preferred survivor’s guilt, which he throws in at the end, being the driving force, like he wants to find Mr. Bear himself or make sure he’s dead. He could have even had the kid he showed the show to be one of the kids who is k*lled to really solidify the guilt and give him an ACTUAL direct tangible motivation.
• Don’t have the cop friend show the children’s d*ath tape. When the officer friend kept pushing to involve the main character more and more I legitimately thought he was going to turn out to be Mr. Bear as a twist until they made it clear other cops knew he was showing Elliot the tape. When he initially went in to watch the tape they found, I thought it would be a new tape from Mr. Bear involving the kids Elliot ran into in the woods. It would make more sense that he’d be shown that to see if he knew something, maybe it shows Elliot secretly being recorded during his confrontation with the kids in the woods before showing Mr. bear approaching the kids to do whatever spooky thing they wanna do to add a sense of actual active danger and add to the survivor’s guilt motivation. Having him choose to watch the d*ath tape just made him more unlikeable, there was absolutely nothing about it he needed to see and it makes the police so unrealistic, like the police friend went from “I’m helping you find closure” to “I’m trying to traumatize you” so quickly. If they really wanted to have Elliot see the tape it would have been way better if he didn’t know what was on it before watching it and maybe having him find it or have it left/delivered on his property, then it would at least feel more like it was being inflicted on him non-consensually as opposed to wanting to see some kids burned alive and would add to the sense of danger closing in.
•The protagonist should know Mr. Bear is alive and an imminent threat at some point. There is never a point where Elliot believes Mr. Bear is alive and aware of him, he even acts like Mr. Bear couldn’t possibly know anything about him even though he has a whole ass public blog that he puts a bunch of somewhat personal info in. I don’t get why he doesn’t react to the hacked message including the distinctive letters that he sees in the video that no one else knows about until he mentions them. There’s just never a “click” moment for him. I get that the author got tired of the story so it’s incomplete, but honestly that moment should have happened quite a bit before they even got to that point in the story.
•Have an ending. I mean yeah, that’s the big one. I was really expecting an escalation right before you said it was over. Even just like finishing the last blog post he’s working on with a “I’ll update you guys later, sounds like my dad came home early,” just a lil something to suggest something has happened to him.
Sorry that’s so long, I was just so thrown by how it just sort of fizzles out so quickly and wanted to talk out my thoughts. I got the vibe Elliot was a bit of a self insert and all the stuff he was dealing with like driving and uni were actually happening to the author and that’s why motivation and posting started to really get messed up, probably threw in the d*ath tape to try and add some spice that had been missed but realized it didn’t really add anything, didn’t know what to do, and was just over the whole thing. If the story had had an ending I probably wouldn’t have said anything lmao but this story has some good bones and a really good ominous beginning.
Thanks for shredding your voice for us ❤️
Decent story but also very unfocused lol
it's true.
Fr it feels like it drones on and keeps getting muddled up, maybe it was better when not read in one sitting and read as the pieces came out
A classic.
Wait this isn’t Prince
Oh yeah, this story had a little fuss around it and some segments about a hand character called Booby were cut from it.
Go figure.
It’s ok but the amount of plotholes, repetition and long time skips was a bit irritating
He doesn't have this full real story.
I ain't watching a video wirh Hatred gameplay LMAO
Then shut the hell up LMAO
33:35 The fuck?
Mutahar 😍
Fnaf story.
It’s been years