Transformers Prime Rewritten: Darkmount to Deadlock
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- Опубліковано 11 січ 2024
- If a story disappoints you, make it better. In this video, that is what I attempt to do with the rushed final season of Transformers Prime. From expanding on the consequences of the Season 2 finale, to giving the Predacons a greater role in the story, and finally to the bittersweet climax of Deadlock, join me in this first foray into rewriting media that personally disappointed me.
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I like the the fact that you made the entirety of beast hunter into two seasons. When in fact the creators where planning a fourth season that would include elements such as a human organization by the name M.A.S.K and maximals which makes me thankful they didn't that. Aside from all that I think transformers prime in my opinion was the best transformers show season one was a great introduction to the series that set so many things in the future, season may have been them just collecting relics but it built upon what the first season established, beast hunters had it's merits and alot questionable decisions. The choice you made where alot better in someway like actually giving the humans development, making it where the entire storyline of darkmount has actually made the decepticons a threat to not just the autobots but humanity as a whole. Optimus keeping the that bloodlust he had for Megatron and actually made it to where the monster is met something worse also the scenes of Optimus contemplating his legacy and giving it to smokescreen where really cool they should have had more build up. Megatron's death in the final moments prime saw his muse and his friend was kinda saddening but necessary much like Bumblebee staying dead instead of coming back to life with his voice. It was also right for prime to kill Megatron and not Bumblebee. Predacons rising was a whole mixed bag like where's is Arachnid, what happened to Shockwave and all the other questions rid didn't answer us. The predacons being their own thing even when leader is loyal and wants to be seen as their leader has brethren that are not.Hope you write more I'm also a big fan of it myself I liked what you did.
I would love to see your rewrite on predacons rising
I find it odd that both Megatron and Starscream were inside the Autobot base and yet they don’t seem to realize that they both are inside a giant rock formation
I would definitely love to see that finale rewrite!
Other than the fact that Megatron getting scared about Optimus‘ Energonlust for Megatron and Bumblebee NOT coming back with his voice, this was a good rewrite. Tbh I think Bumblebee deserved to kill Megatron more than Optimus, Megatron had wronged Bee in several ways that were different than any other Autobot, Cybertronian, or Human. Megatron had taken Bumblebee’s friends, his voice, and now even his life, and was now even threatening the life of Bee‘s best friend, Optimus. Maybe I’ll do a little rewrite of THIS rewrite of this Season changing what I see are flaws in the writing. Still, you did a good job notheless The Knight‘s Relm, it’s interesting to see something like this from you especially since I’m also a creative mind as well! Well, I can’t come up with a better closing to this comment than this lol!
I love Transformers
Personally, I think season three should have introduced, or rather, given that they were introduced in Fall of Cybertron, reintroduced the Dinobots. Grimlock, Swoop, Slug, Snarl, and Sludge (I think Sludge died in the FoC game, yet the comics changed that, much to my annoyance. Not that I have anything against him.) Given that season three has Shockwave the guy who conducted horrific experiments on four of them, sans Sludge (who died in the attack that Shockwave planned to capture the 5 of them). The Predakcons, like Predaking are practically the Dinobots mirrors! With Predaking being Grimlock’s mirror in particular. Speaking of the Dinobot king:
Grimlock could be kinda like a metaphorical deamon on Prime’s shoulder, encouraging prime’s bloodlust, encouraging prime’s rage. Like a dark mirror: A mirror made of pure rage. A beckon of vengeance, although he calls it justice. Unstoppable, borderline unreasonable to everyone but the other Dinobots, a being of rage and hatred who inspires terror in Shockwave, a being who seems emotionless to others. Dispite his many, *many* flaws though, Grimlock does try to protect the innocent, the one thing, he and prime agree on.
I did want to introduce the Dinobots, as well as to resolve Airachnid's plotline, but I didn't really see where to slot it.
I do plan to pursue both of those in my RiD Rewrite, though. But I've got to get through Bayverse and Predacons Rising first, so that's going to be a bit.
@@KnightsRealm98 I’m looking forward to seeing what you have to say!
I’m *really* not a fan of RiD2015, mostly because it’s not actually a sequel, sure, they say it is, but it just doesn’t work whatsoever. Way too tonally jarring. The so called “Grimlock” is the bane of my existence, so disrespectful to the characters who actually have that name… okay, if I keep thinking about the show (mainly that character), I’m gonna get angry, and I don’t want to be mad.
But yeah! Go nuts! I’ll watch it when you do!
@@andreagarton5535That was Steelwall he renamed himself Grimlock
I have an idea for you, since bee is dead you could have smokescreen as the leader in r.i.d. 2015! which also works quite well as you could have smokescreen"s arc be developed even further as he climbs up the ranks up to lieutenant maybe keep steeljaw and have those two develop a rivalry, but that"s just a thought. Love the rewrites!
I've got plans for Smokey, as well as a certain other plucky young Autobot who does exist in the Aligned Continuity. He's just been kinda shafted
@@KnightsRealm98 that's nice to hear, I'm glad that my boi smokescreen has things to do
Great job. I can barely wait to see your rewrite of predicons rising, and this definitely would have fixed a good few issues with this season
Great rewrite! Hope you made something like this once again.
Just top quality content
Really well done rewrite
The inclusion of Predacons was a let down
Predacons Rising: first of all, Prime should have kept his original design. Moving on.
Instead of absorbing the allspark and dieing at the end, he absorbs Unicron, sending him on a dark, ugly trip where he's strong enough to stay himself, but haunted, and tempted by a demon he can't let out. He may hide his new demon from the other autobots for a while, but eventually exiles himself. He becomes vengeful, and hunts Megatron with little success. He may hunt others as well - likely doing things he'll regret. He returns to Earth alone, and slowly convinces Unicron to accept humans as his progeny. He eventually comes to trust Unicron and becomes a friend. Unicron convinces him to return his soul to Earth's core. The story ends with Prime making peace between Unicron and Primus. When his job is finally done, Prime gets to just watch from the highways and ridge lines as the cybertronian race rebuilds and dukes it out amongst themselves.
I would just add more cons and have them transport some autobot pows
Are there any plans to rewrite Transformers robots in disguise
Potentially, but that's a herculean task
Personally if I were to do this my way I would have had the third season be Predacons Rising with the Decepticons taking the backseat after Megatron's death at the end of the Darkmount Arc which would be possibly a movie or a three part premiere and Shockwave would have unleashed the Predacons and they would take over Darkmount and then in Season 4 it would be the Star Seeker Arc and Megatron would return as Galvatron and there would be more of his backstory and that would involve Unicron and The Fallen and in Season 5 which would be the Quintesson Arc Megatron would become something of Garmadon type of character going forward with Nightbird being the first way of redemption although this would last until the final season of the show which would be Season 6 and would have The Fallen and Unicron as the villains and would be called Ultimate Annihilation
Miko wasn't irritating piried. Having her become a Wrecker was AWESOME!^^ That Tokio idea is a good one though.