There is something quite strange coming from the DS in your pocket. Do you: A) Ignore. B) Remove DS from pocket. C) Remove pants from legs. D) Shoot thigh with gun.
I have to admit, this is incredibly unnerving. Especially considering that not only was it a nightmare, but that you give it more depth than any other person would with your voice. You explicitly show the anger, sorrow and pain in your voice. Hell, not even Mutahar [SomeOrdinaryGamer] has done that in a CreepyPasta reading, but yours feels more realistic due to the enunciation in your voice, toning it to sound as if it were happening right now. And the sound effects. I know this must be excessively unsettling to you, Logan, but you managed to weave together something not only amazing and devastatingly cold, but managed to instill fear into the viewer without the use of cliches. And the ending is especially brutal. Shooting yourself in the head and snapping your neck without feeling so much as a god damned ounce of pain due to your newfound self, it make one truly scared for what happened to you.
That form of L had nothing to do with Luigi, the green man who revived red stache. It had no right to be removed. Luigi is the tomato of hero on the burger of conquest. Not needed.
I realize that this recital’s descriptive nature not only sells the story, is part of its charm, and makes the audience feel for Logan a lot more, but I will pay someone, ANYONE, to animate all three parts. It honestly deserves it. The retelling of this dream is by far one of my if not definitely my favorite creepypastas.
See... dreams are an interesting journey into the psyche. The dream world in your subconscious is a true way to understand your true mind. The body dreams to simulate events in life for practice for things in life. This dream could be your brain, trying to, interpret something. It's possibly, see, the only one I can think of is, your brain is accepting Fawful's presence in your life, it's been growing for years, like Fawful's journey through the series, someone who stood up at first, like how excited Fawful was to jump out and have a bit of fun in the first game, like you were years ago, followed by a time of anguish, hiding, doing nothing. Collecting, getting ready, for something. With the climax of Bowser's Inside Story being Fawful's darkest moment, his attempt at his greatest act, falling to a dark, corrupted, pitch black form. A true, corrupted form. The darkest life, his greatest failure, his anguish of his failure. He wanted to get the Plumbers, but he couldn't. He killed himself... turning himself into a dark version of himself, he could never be what he was, and he became what he thought could win, but failed anyways... falling, falling... falling to the Plumbers. Loosing. I think this dream was a retelling of Fawful's journey, except, your retelling of him. Your subconscious journey with him. This is Fawful coming to you. Your subconcious started to be one with him for years... but this dream, was the Climax. You have become dark, crazy. This is the highest climax of your journey with him. I understand what happened. A character you love so much, has become what you are. Who you are. What is you. You have become Fawful. Loving a character so much does a lot to a subconscious in your brain. Believe it, even though your wakened state might not understand it, or even being able to grasp it... your brain has it in your head. Deep in your brain, beyond what your wakened state can understand, a belief towards something can manifest in such a way in your brain can suddenly, explode outwards with it in dramatic fashion. Fawful has manifested in your brain, and over time, your brain has become, almost... I don't know how to say it. Your brain has... become Fawful. You idolize Fawful so much, that his story has subconsciously... become yours. This dream shows... well... Fawful came back. This dream likely takes place an equal time from Partners In Time to Bowser's Inside Story. Your dream was... well... you wanted Fawful back in Dream Team, but... you were sad he didn't... and he was sad he didn't too, and in the anguish of his failure in Inside Story... he... came back to you. Fawful's last second in Inside Story, was his explosion inside Bowser. His darkness dispersed though, and later... came back together. And he came back to someone he know loved him... you. In the dream, when it said, "A(ll) you need is you." followed by, "and Fawful." All you need is you, and Fawful. Fawful wanted to get the Plumbers, and he took your love for him... used that opportunity to kill the brothers, eliminate your worries... and... being reborn. This is why your blood was black, the grass was grey, and the posters were grey and black. Fawful's dark form in the game, was pure black. Darkness, darkness that overwhelmed you. "You make Fawful happy... does Fawful make YOU happy?" See... your brain here... is thinking what I think. Fawful reformed after Inside Story, and came to who knew him, someone, who loved him. Fawful makes you happy, Fawful came to be with who he makes someone happy, and Fawful came, to reform with, that, person. "Alone, are you...? That is such badness! All you need is you...and Fawful!" You... and Fawful. You became Fawful. You and Fawful is your brain becoming so overwhelmed and joyous over something, that, it became who you are. And the... our part. The final part of the story, you merging with Fawful, his form, exploding out from your DSi. Taking you over. Your brain was happy to see Fawful, you had such fun with him in the games? Didn't you? Well Fawful is back, happy to see you, happy to be reborn. AND HAPPY TO BE YOU. You aren't crazy, you just love someone who is... inevitable insanity. Fawful started as a lone bean servant of an army, to a sewer rat... and growing into a massive threat that, charged with insanity, wanted to destroy the world, but with the Plumber's digression, became one lone form left, dispersed, ready to jump out again. Jump out, come up with a plan to reform, because he always does. Your brain just thought that he wanted his biggest fan, you.
I now understand why the Pistol and Steel bat were in the dream. They are both default weapons TF2's Scout uses before getting any other weapon. Considering that's his favorite tf2 character, it's no coincidence it would manifest into his dreams.
God Logan reading the story was creepy enough but hearing it through your own voice is just plain terrifying. This is how a modern horror game should be like instead of just cheesy jumpscares. I don't even want to see how it would look like if it was acted out like an actually movie
This is the greatest creepypasta I've ever seen/heard. It somehow combines the "haunted" cliché of most creepypastas with an amazing, almost heartfelt story. I already know this will pretty much be my favourite creepypasta forever. The fact that it's based on a dream is astounding. How is your subconscious so good at writing things like this?
A_though... _ogan, was it actua__y a dream? I have my doubts... It fee_s _ike it's _ess than a dream, and at the same time it's so much more... It fee_s _ike it's not just a dream, but it's... a_most everything... not a_most, it IS everything...
That is one fucked up nightmare. I've had my shares of terrifying nightmares but yours wins hands down. You also know how to add depth to make your nightmare into people's greatest fears come to life. It was perfect.
Dude! You had a dream THAT vivid and detailed and long?! And you remember THIS much of it?! I'm lucky to even to remember part of a dream let alone all of it. Nice job man. Nice.
Logan. You have our support man. Nightmares can take a heavy toll on our hearts and souls. You have gone through a troubling experience. And don't feel ashamed to speak to friends, family, and loved ones. Sometimes the best remedies are to talk about what ails you. I hope you feel better soon.
The first two parts were typical creepypasta fare for me, even despising the horror genre like I do. But this part? Freaked me out much more than I expected. The parts with the Fawful voices were particularly terrifying. Now knowing to a certain extent how you felt, hopefully this cures you in a way. I know talking about nightmares definitely tends to cure them. At least a lot more people can empathize with you now. I wish you all of the best dreams, hopefully I have some too.
I think your subconscious is trying to tell you something very important but I can't seem to understand what although it clearly has to do with fawful and you being his number 1 fan.
Wow, just wow Logan, this.... This is just shocking as hell. The fact that something this creepy and terrifying , came from a guy that is mostly there to make you laugh and feel happy is just all the more mind blowing. Not to mention how well written this is for a creepy pasta. Great job!
Gotta say, I haven't been so interested on a Creepypasta for a really long time! And the way you narrate it makes it even better. This was an amazing story for sure.
Dreams and Nightmares have meanings. I think this one reflects how much you love Fawful. If it was a dream, it could just have been you and Fawful playing Mario Kart or something! But because you still understand that this guy is pure evil (and that you're not), it had to be a nightmare.
Justplay1611 - Démon aprentis People are already making jokes at how this is from me having a "Fawful fetish". *Riiight.*...when in essense, it's perfectly obvious that Fawful here symbolizes an inevitable insanity. Something I fear very much...but something you cannot fight once you fall prey to it. It's horrifying, frankly.
Reading this months ago on deviant art, it's was pretty spooky to read and I thought it was cool to read. Read. By was I wrong, excited to listen to this in a video. With Logan's realistic speech, unsettling music and malicious sound effects... I'm frightened.
I'm not gonna lie, I was watching this right before midnight with my lights off, and I was on the edge of my seat, afraid to look behind me...but then my fear started fading once Fawful actually came into the story; I just can't see him as scary, he's too goofy to be scary lol. Still, serious props for this story!
ok ive come here from zerty tv's retake of this i thought the retake had the whole story. so when the hammer scene came up. i was surprised when mario didnt kick the bucket. then the rest of part 3 happened. good. lord. i was not at all prepared for the damage. nor the madness of fawful entering and basiclly making you unable to HARM yourself, that was just BRUTAL. gotta say. got a whole new fear for the smol bean man now. whewwww boy- wait- WHY AINT I SUBSCRIBED TO YOU?! *GET DIS SHHS ON DANG IT-*
In the beginning he should've just destroyed the DS or something. But this story was very well made and very creative, I give you a 9/10 because of how creative this was and how this was a real dream that you had.
I was wearing my Luigi hat while I was listening and reading the story. The story was creepy as all hell, I felt quite sad about the part where you found out your parents died in the nightmare, almost made me wanna tear up a bit. And near the ending, you "merged" with Fawful and your voice changed. The laugh creeped me out as it sounded just like Fawful. Overall, though it was very interesting, creepy, spooky and a tad of disturbance, it was kinda sad... Don't know WHY I felt sad, I just did. That must've been one hell of a nightmare for you, Logan.
We__ done, friend! So we fina__y got the story from the horse's mouth. I great_y appreciate having had the honor to do a reading of this for you beforehand; however, there's no competing with the master's interpretation of his *own writing*. Overa__, I found your voicing effective. It was much faster in pace than my own reading. You have a nice, steady beat to your reading, a_most as though you take the _ines in chunks, which is an effective method for audio reading. I _iked the chi__ing background track; did you compose the ambiance yourse_f? As for specific things I'd _ ike to point out, your specia_ effects were great! Gruesome shots, distorted voices, and echoes! It's obvious you took this very serious_y. I a_so _oved the _augh you did in Part 1! I'm not usua__y disturbed by the readings I've _istened to, but that _augh was quite unsett_ing to me! So, to conc_ude, I'm impressed with your hand_ing of the text you wrote. If this is your first CreepyPasta reading, I certain_y hope it's not your _ ast! I'm sti__ pretty proud of my version, but, when my friend, the same who had origina__y informed me of your writing and suggested I do a reading of it, to_d me you had done this reading yourse_f, I was prepared to be b_own away. No doubt, you're a man for many seasons, Fawful's Minion.
Hears weird sound in pocket, shoots thigh. After talking to the thing he shot twice and hugging it, shoots his hand. Turns into a video game character, shoots his brain out. GOOD JOB, BRAINIAC! BRAIN USAGE CURRENTLY AT 110%, but no srsly awesome creepypasta, one of the best i heard out of like 300 at least
I'm being perfectly honest right now... This story frightened me so much, it brought me to tears by the end, and the narration you provided only made it even more frightening. I realize that what I'm getting frightened over would actually be kind of stupid to most of the other people I know, but if this is your only creepypasta, I'm glad you wrote it.
Damn. Just. DAMN. I can't even believe the human mind could create such a dream! I'm normally not one for creepy stuff in general, but this one kept me rapt with intrigue and the idea that one of the most off-the-wall, batty, and entertainingly amusing people I watch on UA-cam who almost always seems to be in a good mood could have such a dark, haunting, terrifying nightmare! I couldn't even hope to put myself in your shoes and understand what you felt during and after that dream. Just. WOW. 10/10.
Holy crap! You had this dream not just once but.. TWICE!? Dude that sucks!! Now I have to watch the videos again to get the same sense of fear you did just... AHHH IT'S SO COOL THOUGH! Great story I'm definitely sharing it with my friends to see their reactions
You know what? I like it. I keep having a dream about a game character that's always in different situations but I always want to be his friend. Being around him makes me happy and I feel like I could spend the rest of my life with him and not have to worry about anything because he makes me feel safe. The last dream I had I was hugging him, and surprisingly enough he's smaller than a human. But I don't care. He's adorable when he's small and I love it
Damn fawful, this was really good and i really hope it didn't affected you on loving fawful so much and even thought the story had a bit of clichès it was really good and it took me a while to figure out the saying "a_one, are you?" but overrall if you have time since it's the summer time you may write another creepypasta since you have the potential to write one ;P and hope ya don't get anyone of thoses dreams ESPECIALLY it effecting your favourite characters.
This was utterly amazing.. Whatever possessed you in your sleep to give this type of experience, I hope it doesn't come to you again, I normally don't care for scary stories but what drew me to yours was that it was a dream you had, dreams can be many things for many of us, sometimes even windows of other dimensions or past selfies. I'm not really sure what to call what this nightmare that you had was possibly inner frustrations taking the form of deeper things that you yourself may not be aware of. but I'm just speculating, like example for me, FNAF when I'm awake I'm fine with it, but in my sleep, my subconscious is scared to death of it. thank your sharing this tale and I prey this nightmare that attacked once, does not come again. - -
I read a comment here that explained the full creepypasta in detail and I realized that creepypastas like this are awesome and well written. Unlike what people try their hardest to conjure up themselves, your brain has rhyme and reason for everything and can spook the hell out of you. Whatever you saw is a decent story as you didn't try to make up anything but your brain did. The comment analyzed how the brain works and it was very intriguing and clever. I love stories like this. Oh yeah and I also like characters just succumbing to the threat at the end lol But yeah the human brain is such an interesting thing. It can write a decent story for you.
I read it myself when you put it out 1 year ago. I found it creepy. Now I'm in bed covered in a blanket listening to the audio which is creeper than ever. Nice job FAWfAl. THEREALCRAZYFRI approves of this story and disaproves of FAWfAl worshiping.
The start of this creepy pasta sounded legibly scary, until the end. It sounds like you would find something in a video game, or a movie. Good creepy pasta in general though!
Nice creepypasta! Pretty scary, not to many cliche's, overal 8/10 _I hope that you can do more of these soon, even though this was just your dream... right?_
Even though I’ve listened to other creepypastas that were scarier than this, I still love your first creepypasta which would make me want to make one on my own. 9/10 it uses a few cliches but that’s every gaming creepypasta now. It was shocking 😧😧😧 and it was all dream that you must have remembered twice to make this creepypasta.
So basically this whole story is about how Logan turned into Fawful. Seriously, this was literally the scariest and greatest story I have ever heard! 10/10 without question!
Part 1: Pretty good Part 2: Pretty meh Part 3: Quite inventive, despite some cliches Overall, 7.1/10, Shows potential and a damn good first creepypasta
Good lord... Usually I'm just "meh" about creepypastas.... But this is the first time I was creeped out at something that's not just a cheap jumpscare... I guess the human subconscious is the greatest horror author of all time.
This probably the best creepypasta I have ever heard And it's about am dream too now, perfect I felt chills and imagining it so greatly what it would be like in your dream I sMILed to myself with this true but pleasuring story ^-^ I hope you have another one someday because it was surprisingly good
This story was the most cliché creepy pasta I had ever heard until the end. Possession is probably my greatest fear, so I was terrified at the end. At the end my face was, •_•
Sooooo, you're favorite game gave you a nightmare that was so deep, you could actually feel things? I bet THAT turned you off from Mario games for a while...
I was scared through all kinds of hell, then we got to about 1/4 through part 3 and then It just got a little stupid. But hey, If you are telling the truth and that was actual a nightmare you had, there's no one to blame. Also Love ya man and I can't wait for that count down, still calling that escorts are on there.
The end...I felt like I got trolled. I can't lie though, the moment you/he shot your/himself in the wrist actually creeped my soul out of my body for a second. This is going to be a long night of not sleeping.
Adrenaline Rush i'd say the same thing, but the hocotation body type makes us sleep at will, but then again, i'ma be contemplating this shit until 3:00 A.M. so yea
Fawful,I don't know what to say,this creepypasta,was just,perfect,its spooky and interesting at the same time,I have to tell SOG(SomeOrdinaryGamers)to check this creepypasta out,its perfect
i very much enjoyed this. i only have 1 question. if Fawful killing Luigi made it so there were no more "L"s then wouldn't Fawful's name come up as Fawfu?
I remember reading it not long after you actually wrote it on deviant art. A creepy story with a great build up as the chills build up. I know how it is to have the same dream twice... Ive had one too, though mine wasn't a nightmare and only a few weeks apart compared to yours 1 year. I don't think it is something to worry about.
You know, this experience happens to everyone sometimes right? The one where you are creeped out by a robotic voice so you shoot yourself four time and gladly accept her... beautiful dark tendrils. GlaD to know we're on the same page.
I think this is the only good creepypasta I have ever heard. But seriously, what was going through your mind in that dream. I have crazy dreams, but holy crap!
Dude...this has to be the greatest creepypasta I've ever heard! this was a__ a dream you had? Bravo! I'm adding a__ 3 parts to my _iked videos p_ay_ist!
We , this is quite... interesting... There was a ot to enjoy in that story ine. Kept me on edge the whole time. That was a rather chi ing description of a corruption caused by that one you ca your master.
To explain what happened at the end basically the Dark Star Core (final boss of the game) became self-aware and started breaking the boundaries of the game. It started by messing up the game it was in such as brutally ripping apart Luigi off screen but then the hauntings got more severe as time went on such as sending the player disturbing notes, tearing apart his games, and just laughing at him but not being able to be seen. Eventually the core entered Logan's body by acting "All nice and soothing" lulling him into a trance and he eventually lost grip of who he was. Logan is no more. It is now Fawful. Yeah the black "blood" is actually Dark Star matter. The same stuff the final boss is composed of. Overall I like this a lot.
A strange event indeed... I feel the need to make an "illuminati confirmed" joke with those coincidences, but I feel that if you could remember the exact date you first got this dream, it might just be a coincidence you got it again and nothing else. Now I feel the need to make fan art of this type of Fawful.
Well that was mega spoopy. The nightmares I remember having are always about the most ridiculous of things, like Squidward from that one episode of Spongebob when he tries to apologize. I had a nightmare about that. Not even Tats TopVideos' creepypasta videos were able to do that. Well I was 4 or something when I had the Squidward dream so
There is something quite strange coming from the DS in your pocket. Do you:
A) Ignore.
B) Remove DS from pocket.
C) Remove pants from legs.
D) Shoot thigh with gun.
Ray Pisphony A
E, or fuse with Fawful, and HAVE FURY
remove pants from legs ;)
Ray Pisphony D
THis is the best comment i have ever seen on anything
I have to admit, this is incredibly unnerving. Especially considering that not only was it a nightmare, but that you give it more depth than any other person would with your voice. You explicitly show the anger, sorrow and pain in your voice. Hell, not even Mutahar [SomeOrdinaryGamer] has done that in a CreepyPasta reading, but yours feels more realistic due to the enunciation in your voice, toning it to sound as if it were happening right now. And the sound effects. I know this must be excessively unsettling to you, Logan, but you managed to weave together something not only amazing and devastatingly cold, but managed to instill fear into the viewer without the use of cliches. And the ending is especially brutal. Shooting yourself in the head and snapping your neck without feeling so much as a god damned ounce of pain due to your newfound self, it make one truly scared for what happened to you.
I agree with all of this
"And Fawful."
Oh.
So he can use the letter L but no one else can? Hypocrite.
That form of L had nothing to do with Luigi, the green man who revived red stache. It had no right to be removed. Luigi is the tomato of hero on the burger of conquest. Not needed.
Fawful was still colored, even his green face, on the DSI
Simonsaysgaming well, Fawful was present at Luigi's 'death'
He took the letter L and the color green.
Something tells me "And Fawfoo" would be less intimidating.
I realize that this recital’s descriptive nature not only sells the story, is part of its charm, and makes the audience feel for Logan a lot more, but I will pay someone, ANYONE, to animate all three parts. It honestly deserves it. The retelling of this dream is by far one of my if not definitely my favorite creepypastas.
Oh boy do I have good news for you.
So that's why you're called Fawful's Minion...
oH SNAP!
Christopher Cox it all makes sense now...
+Christopher Cox That makes no sense. Don't leave me in the dark! Tell me, what do you mean?!
Helios Turmoil Fawful posessed him,that's what.
Holy Sh**t! Just like my dream!
...So...we have EITHER
A. Mr. Minion has gone insane
or
B. Mr. Minion has fused together with Fawful...
Whichever it was...that is really scary...
***** You mean to say "God he_p _ogan if this was a dream of his."
I'm going with the latter
Idc... _ogan's perfect now...
May fawfu_ he_p him
Hehe, fawful feels fury...
Fawful is referred to as “master” by Logan.
Logan is the minion.
_Fawful’s minion._
See... dreams are an interesting journey into the psyche. The dream world in your subconscious is a true way to understand your true mind. The body dreams to simulate events in life for practice for things in life. This dream could be your brain, trying to, interpret something.
It's possibly, see, the only one I can think of is, your brain is accepting Fawful's presence in your life, it's been growing for years, like Fawful's journey through the series, someone who stood up at first, like how excited Fawful was to jump out and have a bit of fun in the first game, like you were years ago, followed by a time of anguish, hiding, doing nothing. Collecting, getting ready, for something. With the climax of Bowser's Inside Story being Fawful's darkest moment, his attempt at his greatest act, falling to a dark, corrupted, pitch black form. A true, corrupted form. The darkest life, his greatest failure, his anguish of his failure. He wanted to get the Plumbers, but he couldn't. He killed himself... turning himself into a dark version of himself, he could never be what he was, and he became what he thought could win, but failed anyways... falling, falling... falling to the Plumbers. Loosing.
I think this dream was a retelling of Fawful's journey, except, your retelling of him. Your subconscious journey with him. This is Fawful coming to you. Your subconcious started to be one with him for years... but this dream, was the Climax. You have become dark, crazy. This is the highest climax of your journey with him.
I understand what happened. A character you love so much, has become what you are. Who you are. What is you. You have become Fawful. Loving a character so much does a lot to a subconscious in your brain. Believe it, even though your wakened state might not understand it, or even being able to grasp it... your brain has it in your head. Deep in your brain, beyond what your wakened state can understand, a belief towards something can manifest in such a way in your brain can suddenly, explode outwards with it in dramatic fashion.
Fawful has manifested in your brain, and over time, your brain has become, almost... I don't know how to say it. Your brain has... become Fawful. You idolize Fawful so much, that his story has subconsciously... become yours. This dream shows... well... Fawful came back. This dream likely takes place an equal time from Partners In Time to Bowser's Inside Story. Your dream was... well... you wanted Fawful back in Dream Team, but... you were sad he didn't... and he was sad he didn't too, and in the anguish of his failure in Inside Story... he... came back to you.
Fawful's last second in Inside Story, was his explosion inside Bowser. His darkness dispersed though, and later... came back together. And he came back to someone he know loved him... you.
In the dream, when it said, "A(ll) you need is you." followed by, "and Fawful." All you need is you, and Fawful. Fawful wanted to get the Plumbers, and he took your love for him... used that opportunity to kill the brothers, eliminate your worries... and... being reborn. This is why your blood was black, the grass was grey, and the posters were grey and black. Fawful's dark form in the game, was pure black. Darkness, darkness that overwhelmed you.
"You make Fawful happy... does Fawful make YOU happy?" See... your brain here... is thinking what I think. Fawful reformed after Inside Story, and came to who knew him, someone, who loved him. Fawful makes you happy, Fawful came to be with who he makes someone happy, and Fawful came, to reform with, that, person.
"Alone, are you...? That is such badness! All you need is you...and Fawful!" You... and Fawful. You became Fawful. You and Fawful is your brain becoming so overwhelmed and joyous over something, that, it became who you are.
And the... our part. The final part of the story, you merging with Fawful, his form, exploding out from your DSi. Taking you over. Your brain was happy to see Fawful, you had such fun with him in the games? Didn't you? Well Fawful is back, happy to see you, happy to be reborn.
AND HAPPY TO BE YOU.
You aren't crazy, you just love someone who is... inevitable insanity. Fawful started as a lone bean servant of an army, to a sewer rat... and growing into a massive threat that, charged with insanity, wanted to destroy the world, but with the Plumber's digression, became one lone form left, dispersed, ready to jump out again. Jump out, come up with a plan to reform, because he always does.
Your brain just thought that he wanted his biggest fan, you.
that is a VERY good theory!
sarah knight I wrote that a year ago? Heck, I thought I was way dumber back then.
oh, but still, I think that was a VERY good theory
Not bad.
Literally fawful's minion. "Too much fawful, 7.8/10" -IGN
I now understand why the Pistol and Steel bat were in the dream. They are both default weapons TF2's Scout uses before getting any other weapon. Considering that's his favorite tf2 character, it's no coincidence it would manifest into his dreams.
God Logan reading the story was creepy enough but hearing it through your own voice is just plain terrifying. This is how a modern horror game should be like instead of just cheesy jumpscares. I don't even want to see how it would look like if it was acted out like an actually movie
Part 1: this sounds...interesting
Part 2: okay, now it sounds freaky
Part 3:.................I'm not going to sleep well tonight O_O
Simo962a I know how you feel buddy
S-same...
Fawful is now my favorite character ever....
*being controlled by Fawful*
I just watched it. Now I can't help but think that Fawful is behind me all the time.
Sleep? Who needs that?
This is the greatest creepypasta I've ever seen/heard. It somehow combines the "haunted" cliché of most creepypastas with an amazing, almost heartfelt story. I already know this will pretty much be my favourite creepypasta forever. The fact that it's based on a dream is astounding. How is your subconscious so good at writing things like this?
A_though... _ogan, was it actua__y a dream? I have my doubts... It fee_s _ike it's _ess than a dream, and at the same time it's so much more... It fee_s _ike it's not just a dream, but it's... a_most everything... not a_most, it IS everything...
Hey, why is your avatar grey all of a sudden? Wait a minute, I see what you did there...
Puts in Gravity Falls clip of Soos saying:
"Ha ha, Good luck sleeping tonight dude."
That is one fucked up nightmare. I've had my shares of terrifying nightmares but yours wins hands down. You also know how to add depth to make your nightmare into people's greatest fears come to life. It was perfect.
Dude! You had a dream THAT vivid and detailed and long?! And you remember THIS much of it?! I'm lucky to even to remember part of a dream let alone all of it. Nice job man. Nice.
he did a dream journal, and posted it on deviantart.
Logan. You have our support man. Nightmares can take a heavy toll on our hearts and souls. You have gone through a troubling experience. And don't feel ashamed to speak to friends, family, and loved ones. Sometimes the best remedies are to talk about what ails you. I hope you feel better soon.
The first two parts were typical creepypasta fare for me, even despising the horror genre like I do.
But this part? Freaked me out much more than I expected. The parts with the Fawful voices were particularly terrifying.
Now knowing to a certain extent how you felt, hopefully this cures you in a way. I know talking about nightmares definitely tends to cure them. At least a lot more people can empathize with you now.
I wish you all of the best dreams, hopefully I have some too.
Okay, I'm starting to regret watching this set of videos at 2 in the morning
This is a bad time to be subscribed to Fawfuls Minion.
Why do you say that? My comment was because this was very f*cking creepy and I'm supposed to be asleep right now
Because NOW I gonna dream of me being Fawful's vessel. In other words, I'm gonna dream of Fawful possessing me.
*stares*
Same
I think your subconscious is trying to tell you something very important but I can't seem to understand what although it clearly has to do with fawful and you being his number 1 fan.
Wow, just wow Logan, this.... This is just shocking as hell. The fact that something this creepy and terrifying , came from a guy that is mostly there to make you laugh and feel happy is just all the more mind blowing. Not to mention how well written this is for a creepy pasta. Great job!
Ricardo Jirau AND it came from a DREAM. A ******* DREAM!!
William Parkman I know right!?
Yeah!
Gotta say, I haven't been so interested on a Creepypasta for a really long time! And the way you narrate it makes it even better. This was an amazing story for sure.
You ACTUALLY managed to SCARE me with this story.I am impressed,Minion.
Dreams and Nightmares have meanings. I think this one reflects how much you love Fawful. If it was a dream, it could just have been you and Fawful playing Mario Kart or something! But because you still understand that this guy is pure evil (and that you're not), it had to be a nightmare.
Justplay1611 - Démon aprentis People are already making jokes at how this is from me having a "Fawful fetish". *Riiight.*...when in essense, it's perfectly obvious that Fawful here symbolizes an inevitable insanity. Something I fear very much...but something you cannot fight once you fall prey to it. It's horrifying, frankly.
***** That makes sense too, since if I asked you to give me a character that is insane, your first choice will be Fawful.
Fawfuls remains explodes, correct? And you said he's still out there. Oh god.
Oh trust me Minion I know that fear. So I understand completely
"A_one, are you?"
~Greatest Autobiography 2069, would shit my pants again.
Reading this months ago on deviant art, it's was pretty spooky to read and I thought it was cool to read.
Read.
By was I wrong, excited to listen to this in a video.
With Logan's realistic speech, unsettling music and malicious sound effects...
I'm frightened.
I'm not gonna lie, I was watching this right before midnight with my lights off, and I was on the edge of my seat, afraid to look behind me...but then my fear started fading once Fawful actually came into the story; I just can't see him as scary, he's too goofy to be scary lol. Still, serious props for this story!
ok ive come here from zerty tv's retake of this
i thought the retake had the whole story. so when the hammer scene came up. i was surprised when mario didnt kick the bucket.
then the rest of part 3 happened. good. lord.
i was not at all prepared for the damage. nor the madness of fawful entering and basiclly making you unable to HARM yourself, that was just BRUTAL. gotta say. got a whole new fear for the smol bean man now. whewwww boy-
wait-
WHY AINT I SUBSCRIBED TO YOU?!
*GET DIS SHHS ON DANG IT-*
This probably would have traumatized me if I'd dreamed it up. Amazing though, it was chilling from start to finish.
I will never be able to watch any of your count-downs the same way again...
In the beginning he should've just destroyed the DS or something. But this story was very well made and very creative, I give you a 9/10 because of how creative this was and how this was a real dream that you had.
I was wearing my Luigi hat while I was listening and reading the story.
The story was creepy as all hell, I felt quite sad about the part where you found out your parents died in the nightmare, almost made me wanna tear up a bit.
And near the ending, you "merged" with Fawful and your voice changed. The laugh creeped me out as it sounded just like Fawful.
Overall, though it was very interesting, creepy, spooky and a tad of disturbance, it was kinda sad... Don't know WHY I felt sad, I just did.
That must've been one hell of a nightmare for you, Logan.
You're a great story teller dude. Haven't enjoy listening to something like this so much since goji73's godzilla nes creepypasta read.
We__ done, friend! So we fina__y got the story from the horse's mouth. I great_y appreciate having had the honor to do a reading of this for you beforehand; however, there's no competing with the master's interpretation of his *own writing*.
Overa__, I found your voicing effective. It was much faster in pace than my own reading. You have a nice, steady beat to your reading, a_most as though you take the _ines in chunks, which is an effective method for audio reading. I _iked the chi__ing background track; did you compose the ambiance yourse_f?
As for specific things I'd _ ike to point out, your specia_ effects were great! Gruesome shots, distorted voices, and echoes! It's obvious you took this very serious_y. I a_so _oved the _augh you did in Part 1! I'm not usua__y disturbed by the readings I've _istened to, but that _augh was quite unsett_ing to me!
So, to conc_ude, I'm impressed with your hand_ing of the text you wrote. If this is your first CreepyPasta reading, I certain_y hope it's not your _ ast! I'm sti__ pretty proud of my version, but, when my friend, the same who had origina__y informed me of your writing and suggested I do a reading of it, to_d me you had done this reading yourse_f, I was prepared to be b_own away. No doubt, you're a man for many seasons, Fawful's Minion.
CreepyPastaSalad Thanks, man. ^^
You're very welcome, sir.
CreepyPastaSalad
CreepyPastaSalad, you need to replace all of L's in that message with underscores. DO IT FOR ZA PASTA! :D
Chris Mason Done. I hope you intend to bring that water to a boi_ before you go cooking pasta in it, Mr. Mason.
CreepyPastaSalad Don't you mean, "You're we_come"?
Hears weird sound in pocket, shoots thigh. After talking to the thing he shot twice and hugging it, shoots his hand. Turns into a video game character, shoots his brain out. GOOD JOB, BRAINIAC! BRAIN USAGE CURRENTLY AT 110%, but no srsly awesome creepypasta, one of the best i heard out of like 300 at least
I'm being perfectly honest right now... This story frightened me so much, it brought me to tears by the end, and the narration you provided only made it even more frightening. I realize that what I'm getting frightened over would actually be kind of stupid to most of the other people I know, but if this is your only creepypasta, I'm glad you wrote it.
Welcome to the Under 301 club. How tough a-
*WHACK*
WE''RE LISTENING TO THIS, AREN'T WE?!?!
Damn. Just. DAMN. I can't even believe the human mind could create such a dream! I'm normally not one for creepy stuff in general, but this one kept me rapt with intrigue and the idea that one of the most off-the-wall, batty, and entertainingly amusing people I watch on UA-cam who almost always seems to be in a good mood could have such a dark, haunting, terrifying nightmare! I couldn't even hope to put myself in your shoes and understand what you felt during and after that dream. Just. WOW. 10/10.
Holy crap! You had this dream not just once but.. TWICE!? Dude that sucks!! Now I have to watch the videos again to get the same sense of fear you did just... AHHH IT'S SO COOL THOUGH! Great story I'm definitely sharing it with my friends to see their reactions
You know what? I like it. I keep having a dream about a game character that's always in different situations but I always want to be his friend. Being around him makes me happy and I feel like I could spend the rest of my life with him and not have to worry about anything because he makes me feel safe. The last dream I had I was hugging him, and surprisingly enough he's smaller than a human. But I don't care. He's adorable when he's small and I love it
Damn fawful, this was really good and i really hope it didn't affected you on loving fawful so much and even thought the story had a bit of clichès it was really good and it took me a while to figure out the saying "a_one, are you?" but overrall if you have time since it's the summer time you may write another creepypasta since you have the potential to write one ;P and hope ya don't get anyone of thoses dreams ESPECIALLY it effecting your favourite characters.
This was utterly amazing.. Whatever possessed you in your sleep to give this type of experience, I hope it doesn't come to you again, I normally don't care for scary stories but what drew me to yours was that it was a dream you had, dreams can be many things for many of us, sometimes even windows of other dimensions or past selfies.
I'm not really sure what to call what this nightmare that you had was possibly inner frustrations taking the form of deeper things that you yourself may not be aware of. but I'm just speculating, like example for me, FNAF when I'm awake I'm fine with it, but in my sleep, my subconscious is scared to death of it. thank your sharing this tale and I prey this nightmare that attacked once, does not come again. - -
6:00
"I was officially feeling spooked"
ARE YA SURE THAT'S ALL YOU WERE FEELING?
NOOOO, I AM HAVING THE CHORTLES AS WELL!
Meh that's every Tuesday for me(jokes are fun)
Are you fee_ing it now, Mr. Minion? Are you fee_ing it?
how about some _emonaide?
+lh0000
* __emonade
I read a comment here that explained the full creepypasta in detail and I realized that creepypastas like this are awesome and well written.
Unlike what people try their hardest to conjure up themselves, your brain has rhyme and reason for everything and can spook the hell out of you. Whatever you saw is a decent story as you didn't try to make up anything but your brain did.
The comment analyzed how the brain works and it was very intriguing and clever. I love stories like this.
Oh yeah and I also like characters just succumbing to the threat at the end lol
But yeah the human brain is such an interesting thing. It can write a decent story for you.
I read it myself when you put it out 1 year ago. I found it creepy. Now I'm in bed covered in a blanket listening to the audio which is creeper than ever. Nice job FAWfAl.
THEREALCRAZYFRI approves of this story and disaproves of FAWfAl worshiping.
The start of this creepy pasta sounded legibly scary, until the end. It sounds like you would find something in a video game, or a movie.
Good creepy pasta in general though!
Nice creepypasta! Pretty scary, not to many cliche's, overal 8/10 _I hope that you can do more of these soon, even though this was just your dream... right?_
Don't you mean 7.8 because too much fawful?
Nah, I like Fawful
I don't get it, does 7.8 or 78 have something to do with Fawful?
Well, Robin Hood thinks that my 8.0/10 should be a 7.8 /10 because this creepypasta was too much about Fawful, which I think doesn't matter.
Di Luigi Both of you are kinda wrong. It's just a shot at IGN who reviewed Pokemon ORAS and gave it a 7.8/10 because it had too much water.
Holy crap! I can't imagine how treble of an experience this… thing must have been. On the bright side it sure did make for a great story.
Even though I’ve listened to other creepypastas that were scarier than this, I still love your first creepypasta which would make me want to make one on my own. 9/10 it uses a few cliches but that’s every gaming creepypasta now. It was shocking 😧😧😧 and it was all dream that you must have remembered twice to make this creepypasta.
So basically this whole story is about how Logan turned into Fawful. Seriously, this was literally the scariest and greatest story I have ever heard! 10/10 without question!
Part 1: Pretty good
Part 2: Pretty meh
Part 3: Quite inventive, despite some cliches
Overall, 7.1/10, Shows potential and a damn good first creepypasta
***** It was based on a dream so it's hard to judge the plot.
Skyward Sean Still holds up
***** Yeah, in fact the plot is better than most creepypastas, I'm just saying it's hard to judge it like you were.
Don't you mean 7.8: too much fawful
Robin Hood Nope
Good lord... Usually I'm just "meh" about creepypastas.... But this is the first time I was creeped out at something that's not just a cheap jumpscare...
I guess the human subconscious is the greatest horror author of all time.
At the bottom of the note...it said "PS it's just a prank bro"
You let loose all the insane in this one! My hand was shaking uncontrollably while writing this comment! I love it!
So it's really "Alone, are you?" But it follows how the letter L is missing
This probably the best creepypasta I have ever heard
And it's about am dream too now, perfect
I felt chills and imagining it so greatly what it would be like in your dream
I sMILed to myself with this true but pleasuring story ^-^
I hope you have another one someday because it was surprisingly good
Dude. This is actully better then usual creepypastas!
This story was the most cliché creepy pasta I had ever heard until the end. Possession is probably my greatest fear, so I was terrified at the end. At the end my face was, •_•
Sooooo, you're favorite game gave you a nightmare that was so deep, you could actually feel things? I bet THAT turned you off from Mario games for a while...
I would have yelled, "Why are you allowed an L? Huh, fawful?"
On my SSB4 player list, Fawful was one of my top picks.
Let's just say this Creepypasta made him higher on my list.
Also, 7.8/10 on this Creepypasta. Too much water;)
JK, 10/10
Do you plan on making more Creepypastas and or reading other Creepypastas? Because you are very good at both.
If you're having this nightmare again you should visit a doctor.
Given what we’ve seen when creepypastas are remastered into analog horror, this would be phenomenal for an analog horror video or series
I was scared through all kinds of hell, then we got to about 1/4 through part 3 and then It just got a little stupid. But hey, If you are telling the truth and that was actual a nightmare you had, there's no one to blame. Also Love ya man and I can't wait for that count down, still calling that escorts are on there.
Who knew a Mario Bros. themed CreepyPasta could actually be somewhat creepy?
The end...I felt like I got trolled.
I can't lie though, the moment you/he shot your/himself in the wrist actually creeped my soul out of my body for a second.
This is going to be a long night of not sleeping.
Adrenaline Rush i'd say the same thing, but the hocotation body type makes us sleep at will, but then again, i'ma be contemplating this shit until 3:00 A.M. so yea
Fawful,I don't know what to say,this creepypasta,was just,perfect,its spooky and interesting at the same time,I have to tell SOG(SomeOrdinaryGamers)to check this creepypasta out,its perfect
Jesus, that Fawfu_ impression is just amazing! Keep up the fantastica_ work, whoever your rea_ name is!
i very much enjoyed this. i only have 1 question. if Fawful killing Luigi made it so there were no more "L"s then wouldn't Fawful's name come up as Fawfu?
I remember reading it not long after you actually wrote it on deviant art. A creepy story with a great build up as the chills build up. I know how it is to have the same dream twice... Ive had one too, though mine wasn't a nightmare and only a few weeks apart compared to yours 1 year. I don't think it is something to worry about.
When you love such a sick and twisted villain as Fawful its only a matter of time he shares its gift with you
Some of the details say that luigi was replaced by blood and the letters where written in blood
You know, this experience happens to everyone sometimes right? The one where you are creeped out by a robotic voice so you shoot yourself four time and gladly accept her... beautiful dark tendrils. GlaD to know we're on the same page.
I think this is the only good creepypasta I have ever heard. But seriously, what was going through your mind in that dream. I have crazy dreams, but holy crap!
Dude...this has to be the greatest creepypasta I've ever heard! this was a__ a dream you had? Bravo! I'm adding a__ 3 parts to my _iked videos p_ay_ist!
Fawful merge with Him like Venom from Spider-Man. “We are Fawful,”
We , this is quite... interesting... There was a ot to enjoy in that story ine. Kept me on edge the whole time. That was a rather chi ing description of a corruption caused by that one you ca your master.
me at 3am: Lol, why not?
Very...VERY interesting....
Well that was a yeehaw and a half... Such an interesting nightmare
DAAAAAAAAYUM.......... that was some story... it was fun to listen through the whole thing, good job ^^
Wow this is actually really good! Really creeped me out a couple times! Good job!
The post DOESN'T even run on Sundays!
To explain what happened at the end basically the Dark Star Core (final boss of the game) became self-aware and started breaking the boundaries of the game. It started by messing up the game it was in such as brutally ripping apart Luigi off screen but then the hauntings got more severe as time went on such as sending the player disturbing notes, tearing apart his games, and just laughing at him but not being able to be seen. Eventually the core entered Logan's body by acting "All nice and soothing" lulling him into a trance and he eventually lost grip of who he was. Logan is no more. It is now Fawful. Yeah the black "blood" is actually Dark Star matter. The same stuff the final boss is composed of. Overall I like this a lot.
I like that theory, even if it was made a year ago
Dammit why didn't you take out the DSI in the first place
The huge irony is that I was JUST about to go and defeat the final boss in M.A.L.B.I.S. I think I'll just put that off like forever
So that's who was ye__ing at 3 AM
Oh boy, 3 AM!
A strange event indeed... I feel the need to make an "illuminati confirmed" joke with those coincidences, but I feel that if you could remember the exact date you first got this dream, it might just be a coincidence you got it again and nothing else. Now I feel the need to make fan art of this type of Fawful.
this is gonna give me nightmares for days
Well that was mega spoopy.
The nightmares I remember having are always about the most ridiculous of things, like Squidward from that one episode of Spongebob when he tries to apologize. I had a nightmare about that. Not even Tats TopVideos' creepypasta videos were able to do that.
Well I was 4 or something when I had the Squidward dream so
Listening to this while playing Dream Team... never again *closes my 3DS and puts it in a drawer for the rest of the day*
Hah! Really liked it! I can't belive people actually thought it was real! But I still think's fake.
I'm about to barf on my phone because of the ending
I never felt anger and fear at the same time
This is legit your epic origin story.
R u okay 😢 try to drink tea before bed, it gives good dreams
holy shit you're the master of nightmares m8
that was epic!
Listen to " Traveling on a journey of memories " if this happens again on your PHONE.
instead of useing a 1-up you shod of used a retry clock
They are rare. Perhaps Logan failed to pick up one.