What NOT to do on your EXTENDED ESSAY | my EE mistakes and advice!

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  • @cleohlee1420
    @cleohlee1420 4 роки тому +435

    1. Don't pick a topic out of your wheelhouse
    - NO interdisciplinary research question!
    - You don't have to reinvent the wheel--just a bit of nuance, but there should be research available.
    2. Don't start before you know exactly what you'll write
    -Need a short, concise table of contents!
    -Ensure you know how exactly you'll answer your research question; take the rq as guidance for your essay.
    -You need to know how each of your paragraphs contributes to your overall argument.
    3. Don't start too early and don't start editing far after you started writing.
    -The day after you wrote out your first draft, take to someone else and walk them through your arguments without looking at that essay.
    -Don't put your first draft on the backburner--there's a chance you don't know what you meant.
    4. Don't overlook the importance of good grammar.
    -bad grammar doesn't equal a bad argument.
    -you'll feel better about your paper with good writing. you might be frustrated with the writing itself rather than the content.
    5. Don't overthink the EE!
    -It's just a stepping stone in getting your diploma.
    -Practice, yes, but it won't make or break you.

    • @EMMASAUDIOS
      @EMMASAUDIOS 4 роки тому +6

      hi!! I'm just starting my EE and I'm really scared about it lol, I found this comment super helpful, but I've got one question... what do you mean when you say "take the rq as guidance for your essay"?

    • @cleohlee1420
      @cleohlee1420 4 роки тому +3

      @@EMMASAUDIOS So sorry for the late reply! I took it as once you have a rq (aka research question), find information that answers it instead of finding information and then formulating a rq/changing the rq to fit your research. Also, all I did was copy down what she said in the video.

    • @daxtaylor9514
      @daxtaylor9514 3 роки тому

      Sorry to be off topic but does any of you know of a method to log back into an instagram account??
      I was stupid forgot the login password. I love any help you can offer me.

    • @louiscollin5773
      @louiscollin5773 3 роки тому

      @Dax Taylor Instablaster :)

    • @daxtaylor9514
      @daxtaylor9514 3 роки тому

      @Louis Collin I really appreciate your reply. I got to the site on google and I'm in the hacking process now.
      Seems to take quite some time so I will get back to you later with my results.

  • @aleksanderpyka6126
    @aleksanderpyka6126 4 роки тому +215

    Whining time! I am writing an EE in psychology and turned in my draft in December. One week later my teacher told me that it was absolutely excellent and only minor changes needed to be made. I was over the moon. Cue a psychology class two weeks ago - my supervisor has just come back from a conference and said that she has bad news for all eight people who wrote a psych EE. She revealed that she did not know the subject specific criteria and only read them at the conference and therefore our essays were all shit. She advised that I write my essay again, completely from scratch. The deadline is two days from now and I’m still not finished even though I devote every bit of my time to writing. I really want to cry.

    • @sta5348
      @sta5348 4 роки тому +41

      ohhh lord I hope it goes well! I haven't even started the essay due to health problems and I'm really worried. I changed my topic halfway because I didn't have enough to talk about to support the question. I'm worried. I'm sure you'll do fine however since you've done research and everything and at least started it.

    • @um9348
      @um9348 3 роки тому +13

      Are you okay? Can I have an update?

    • @Kitten_Puff
      @Kitten_Puff 2 роки тому +4

      Just wanted to ask, when do everyone start EEs? Cause I am starting it actually pretty late and seeing these really freak me out, also I am known for doing things in last minute....so ya my EE doesn't look good at all so far 🥲

    • @lenny3394
      @lenny3394 2 роки тому

      @@Kitten_Puff I'm guessing your in ib2 rn?

    • @noonie-i2g
      @noonie-i2g 2 роки тому +12

      That is your teachers fault

  • @elenas7158
    @elenas7158 6 років тому +184

    Lol I'm writing my EE now and having someone else say "your first draft doesn't have to be perfect" makes the realization actually settle in. Love the video and thanks for the advice :)

  • @theglitterqueen6447
    @theglitterqueen6447 6 років тому +329

    your intro is amazing!

    • @IvyLilia
      @IvyLilia  6 років тому +9

      Thank you!!

    • @2222ben
      @2222ben 6 років тому +1

      Its awesome!

  • @Bxkatoowavy
    @Bxkatoowavy 5 років тому +321

    my final draft is due tomorrow and I haven't even finished my first draft :(

    • @RenaudAlly
      @RenaudAlly 5 років тому +71

      how was it? why did you do this to yourself? i dont get it

    • @BigBoatSwim
      @BigBoatSwim 4 роки тому +70

      Then why are you watching this and not typing

    • @obeeno4568
      @obeeno4568 4 роки тому +52

      he died

    • @m0narkh
      @m0narkh 4 роки тому +24

      @@obeeno4568 he probably did

    • @almendraman
      @almendraman 4 роки тому +42

      This comment is a gravesite.

  • @heartoftarde
    @heartoftarde 6 років тому +47

    you just described exactly where I am with my EE! I am way over word limit, started writing much too early (without an outline), and am still trying to fit my question to my essay! It sucks because I spent so much energy on it when I could have just gone for a straightforward question from the beginning :(

  • @clairechan1355
    @clairechan1355 2 роки тому +9

    Thank you so much😭I'm so frustrated about my future and I've been crying for so many nights, seeing someone that has gone through all of this and in a better place made me feel so much better

  • @berenice1097
    @berenice1097 6 років тому +21

    This was super super super helpful! I'm currently having to complete my EE in less than 3 weeks and this video really helped me stress less about it :)

  • @savedaccount5614
    @savedaccount5614 6 років тому +15

    I'm in the final editing process and I really loved this!

  • @j.p.caruso6660
    @j.p.caruso6660 5 років тому +5

    Excellent advice! I hope ALL who watch this take your suggestions to heart. It will save them tremendous grief.

  • @alyr228
    @alyr228 5 років тому +16

    ahh I've just started my EE - this has helped so much!!

  • @faradaycool4058
    @faradaycool4058 2 роки тому +4

    Thank you for being so honest and not being snob, unlike most IB YT advice

  • @nightcorelover9677
    @nightcorelover9677 6 років тому +32

    You're so underrated! You're awesome

  • @niki9086
    @niki9086 5 років тому +48

    can you plz make a video about how you managed your time preparing for SAT and doing IB

  • @irlandamartinez8267
    @irlandamartinez8267 6 років тому +28

    hehe, yea... my essay is due tomorrow, wish me luck!

  • @engels_diary
    @engels_diary 6 років тому +80

    i am 14 years old in my first IB year. This 3 first months of school have been hell for me. Tmr i have to give my EE topic and i haven't thought of it yet.
    I hate the amount of pressure i am feeling at this age.

  • @yukolin1824
    @yukolin1824 Рік тому +1

    Thank you for being so nice and comforting , I'm entering grade 10 and transferring to a ib international school ( even though I studied in a Chinese school for 10 years) . I was really frustrated with my future in high School because I thing my English isn't good and I'm scared of ib . But your video really comfort me a lot. TY:)

  • @diegoavila3088
    @diegoavila3088 Рік тому +6

    Lilia, I will begin doing IB here in Switzerland for the next two years.
    My subjects:
    -Physics SL
    -English A (Lit&Perf) SL
    -French B SL
    -Math AI HL
    -History HL
    -Geography HL
    I just expect to get this.
    I do care about all that, and I actually think it is good to get out of the comfort zone.
    I possibly do my EE on History.

  • @nataszam3044
    @nataszam3044 4 роки тому +1

    I'm so happy I watched this now and not a day later. Thank you for this video :)

  • @draco_explosionsinc9250
    @draco_explosionsinc9250 5 років тому +12

    This helped me destress so much.

  • @AJD22
    @AJD22 5 років тому +3

    UR THE BEST! thank you, I'm doing my IB now, and I think I'm over thinking about ee. As if IB as all about the ee!

  • @caroamatt
    @caroamatt 3 роки тому +2

    im a pre-IB student and im just freaking out but you transmit such a peaceful vibe im not that afraid anymore lol

    • @selbbbb5837
      @selbbbb5837 2 роки тому +1

      Don’t be so sure 😬 I’m in my 4th month of IB and well.. it feels like hell. Still don’t make this stop you from choosing IB cause it’s a fact that it’s challenging.

  • @May-bt7dw
    @May-bt7dw 6 років тому +7

    Thank you so much for your tips!! I am a huge mess in this whole IB thing :c but you helped me

  • @novoti43
    @novoti43 4 роки тому +4

    I am going to write my Extended Essay. The truth is that I do not overthink about it, but it is impossible do not worry a little bit...
    I want to congratulate you for the video :-) It was funny and interesting.

  • @wizdum4247
    @wizdum4247 3 роки тому +1

    I am dreading the essay right now. thanks for the help.

  • @tianyeG
    @tianyeG 4 роки тому +4

    Thank you so much! I'm working on my first draft and your tips are very helpful. I even feel less overwhelmed just by watching ur video ahaha

  • @youtubefan6158
    @youtubefan6158 5 років тому +4

    Im now on the "outline" stage and already have some worries if my topic is ok... gonna read the guide 😅 wish me good luck!
    GOOD LUCK GUYS!

  • @honganhnguyen2056
    @honganhnguyen2056 6 років тому +6

    Thank you for all the helpful videos on the IB:D

  • @rozai6838
    @rozai6838 4 роки тому +1

    i love your intro it's so creative and cool!

  • @zenahlarge788
    @zenahlarge788 5 років тому +51

    But the EE does kinda make or break you diploma. If you get an E on it or on your TOK then you don’t get the diploma

    • @s.c.8383
      @s.c.8383 3 роки тому +6

      i think she meant that all you need to get on the EE is a passing grade. turning in a perfect essay vs a mediocre one does not really change the fact that you are graduating.

  • @pro.laps.gaming
    @pro.laps.gaming 5 років тому +16

    Currently writing my paper that’s due tomorrow night :P wish me luck bros

    • @yigite
      @yigite 4 роки тому +3

      how did it go

  • @mustafakarakose1122
    @mustafakarakose1122 3 роки тому +2

    Thanks Ivy. It is really useful. Nowadays, I am searching IB for my son, he is gonna start grade 9 if he gets acceptance from IB School. For sure, I will let you know if I need a support. 😊

  • @pa_u_los
    @pa_u_los 5 років тому +11

    It's funny bc i saw this video before sending my first draft to my supervisor. Guess what happens? I had to repeat it again entirely. I could stay with the topic. Now i'm finishing the second draft trying to know where i have to put the recommendations.
    PD: Do your EE in 1. Sth you like. 2. If you don't like any subject pick a Group 1 (bc is where most A's are) and know if your supervisor is going to be good.
    I'm doing it in a group 3 subject (._:) and with a supervisor that sucks. ;)

    • @et8387
      @et8387 5 років тому

      What do you mean by Group 1 or 3 subjects?

    • @danielhu5139
      @danielhu5139 4 роки тому +1

      @@et8387 Group 1 is a literature and language EE. Group 3 is a social science essay. Kinda like English Vs. Econ/History kinda thing

    • @et8387
      @et8387 4 роки тому

      Well I‘m one year into the course now and should have known this because I‘m now doing my EE in a group 3 and kind of regret it (especially since I can’t actually carry out my experiments because of Covid 19)

    • @danielhu5139
      @danielhu5139 4 роки тому

      @@et8387 ah ic ic, that's unfortunate. I'm also doing an EE in group 3, if u need any help, feel free to msg me

  • @s.s3906
    @s.s3906 5 років тому +6

    I couldn't write my essay on my best-interest subject because of the limited amount of students per supervisor. I just can't get any motivation to start it. Half of my summer vacation is gone, but I have only written 1000 words. And the IAs, college applications... It's just a mess

    • @ee7692
      @ee7692 3 роки тому +1

      dude sameeee school starts in two weeks for me and I haven't started my maths IA or wrote one single word on my EE... guess who's getting zero sleep

    • @r0saa13
      @r0saa13 3 роки тому

      @@ee7692 im in the same exact position as you🥲 my first draft is due on the first and i only have written like 200 words

  • @FriendOfMara
    @FriendOfMara 4 роки тому +1

    I wish I had watched this sooner. I have to submit my first draft of my cybersecurity World Studies EE using Global Politics and Computer Science in a couple days. I definitely picked a topic way to far out of my wheelhouse....

  • @AP-se2zs
    @AP-se2zs 5 років тому +9

    You have a really creative intro!

  • @sohamsali5473
    @sohamsali5473 4 роки тому

    I am going to start ib this year loved your advice

  • @karinazhang8292
    @karinazhang8292 5 років тому +1

    OMG This video is soooooo helpful!!! Thank you sooooo much!!!!

  • @hujan5005
    @hujan5005 4 роки тому +6

    Just a quick question. How much does university look at you EE?
    I plan to major science (perhaps biochemistry), but our school is not well equipped and even teachers are recommending against it.

    • @Owandle
      @Owandle Рік тому +1

      its been 3 years, in the end did you choose a science?

    • @laraasmr7996
      @laraasmr7996 Рік тому

      @@Owandle i wanna know too!!

  • @kamom302
    @kamom302 5 років тому +44

    Holyshit you just calmed me down.

    • @sandro574
      @sandro574 5 років тому +1

      kam O. Bruh I’m currently panicking cause my EE is fully inspired from internet😂fuck me

  • @ivankas52
    @ivankas52 5 років тому +2

    I feel you bro. 💕✨

  • @theo3400o1
    @theo3400o1 5 місяців тому

    I am actually writting my EE intro, but i am so stressed because my teacher tell me that its not an intro. and I need to send my first draft in September.
    Thank you so much for yours advise !

  • @minamigutierrezsato534
    @minamigutierrezsato534 4 роки тому +2

    Haven’t decided my research questions and I’m in 2nd year ib.

  • @Nosoyyo7
    @Nosoyyo7 3 роки тому +1

    Well, I guess I´ll just go on with my essay... English is not my mother tongue, but I decided to make my EE in this language. I don´t wanna die yet, but I´m really tired.

  • @weronikaryfka3088
    @weronikaryfka3088 3 роки тому +1

    Great video! I'm starting in 3 weeks :0

  • @Mc-fj2ev
    @Mc-fj2ev 5 років тому +2

    I have to submit my ee in one month and just did my introoo :’)

  • @micaeladelgadobriones7836
    @micaeladelgadobriones7836 5 років тому +24

    How much did you get on your EE?

  • @utopiasekei6859
    @utopiasekei6859 6 років тому +5

    That ending never fails to make me laugh 😂 😂 😂 I even tried to imitate it 😝 And as always, love the video!! ✨

  • @carolinabeck6033
    @carolinabeck6033 3 роки тому +1

    I don´t know how to make a detailed structure of the Extended essay in English category 2b

    • @gointoorbit
      @gointoorbit Рік тому

      it's been 2 years, how did it go?

  • @poe8770
    @poe8770 4 роки тому +67

    is it me or does she have a phat piece of steak in the background

    • @wafabhayani7815
      @wafabhayani7815 4 роки тому +8

      ah the classic steak in a bottle

    • @raxacorico
      @raxacorico 4 роки тому +6

      Thats a salt light 😂😂😂

  • @mariaswiatek807
    @mariaswiatek807 6 років тому +1

    Wow, this video was fab!

  • @aashnashah3045
    @aashnashah3045 4 роки тому +2

    Hi, I have a question, so I will be studying in an ib school this year and I am actually confused as to which laptop will be apt for the programme. It will be great if you could help me out in order to select a windows laptop or a Mac. My subjects are-- HL business, HL visual arts HL Hindi(I'm from india) SL English , SL math and SL computer science.

    • @aryankakru3335
      @aryankakru3335 4 роки тому

      Whichever one you feel more comfortable working with, it doesnt really matter

  • @stefanom.7939
    @stefanom.7939 5 років тому

    Thanks so much for the video, extremely helpful!

  • @danielgarciacalle475
    @danielgarciacalle475 3 роки тому +1

    Your intro is awesome;!!

  • @shihyonseo7314
    @shihyonseo7314 5 років тому

    Such a nice video! Helped alot :D

  • @Marinameyers05
    @Marinameyers05 Рік тому +1

    only a week and something, and i barely have half an essay

  • @Hanin5002
    @Hanin5002 3 роки тому

    Great , we had a week to write an outline and guess what I did instead ! I studied math Hl and now I'm here , hours before:)

  • @sta5348
    @sta5348 4 роки тому +1

    My final draft is due tomorrow and I haven't even started the essay wtf idk how to tell my supervisor abt this (I was in the hospital for a month sooo) I don't think I can finish it on time tbh

  • @shadangbasedarteducationex190
    @shadangbasedarteducationex190 4 роки тому +2

    How does ib curriculum test creativity?. Especially visual arts

    • @line9083
      @line9083 4 роки тому

      I dont think you need to worry too much about being "creative"... sometimes you end up with a topic interesting but with no sources/evidence to back you up... try and look online for EE art exemplars for ideas (but don't copy!)... you can also be "creative" by picking a topic like architecture, dance, etc, instead of artists like Picasso... in terms of how IB tests creativity it might not entirely depend on your research question but also on your methodology: what sources you are using (eg. interviews) or how insightful your analysis is... in general I feel like usually an art EE is "creative" in itself so dw

  • @enriquecarrera8404
    @enriquecarrera8404 6 років тому +1

    dam video is fire,,, u was crying over an essay tho!!! man i am not ready for dis

  • @accretionescapee
    @accretionescapee 4 роки тому

    I’m planning on doing Biology HL, Chemistry HL, English Language and Literature HL, Mathematics SL, German SL and Economics SL. Can you really do anything with Extended Essay, for example Mythology, or a particular part of the brain, or does it have to be History, Psychology or another school subject?

  • @ivna134
    @ivna134 5 років тому +1

    do you have to come up with your own research question for the ee or are you given options that you can choose from?

    • @IvyLilia
      @IvyLilia  5 років тому +1

      You have to come up with your own, but there are tons of examples out there to help guide you!

    • @ivna134
      @ivna134 5 років тому

      Ivy Lilia thanks!

  • @heathc148
    @heathc148 2 роки тому

    Good vid, thanks for the help

  • @BiHWolf-lo6ts
    @BiHWolf-lo6ts 3 роки тому

    I haven’t even started and it’s due in 20 days 😭😭😭

  • @2222ben
    @2222ben 6 років тому

    So helpful thank you!!

  • @kofitelli6923
    @kofitelli6923 4 роки тому

    What is your ideal EE outline. (In general)

  • @puffoffluffedair543
    @puffoffluffedair543 5 років тому +2

    my propsal is due tmr I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT MY RQ IS.

    • @jewish_misteak3880
      @jewish_misteak3880 5 років тому

      How'd it go?

    • @ellan1664
      @ellan1664 5 років тому

      Juliet Colletta ahahah thing just happened to me this week

  • @alyaaj6438
    @alyaaj6438 2 роки тому

    Ultimately

  • @hajerraisi8380
    @hajerraisi8380 6 років тому +1

    Thank you so much, this helped a lot!!!

  • @sifsif2725
    @sifsif2725 4 роки тому

    I picked a 2nd year college level topic for my Math AA HL EE...

  • @luchitaf4640
    @luchitaf4640 4 роки тому

    thanks for this!

  • @zainaaa9335
    @zainaaa9335 4 місяці тому

    As someone who's starting my first year in IB in september, i'm really nervous. Can someone give me examples of research questions on anything art related or design related as that's going to be my main field of choice. perhaps i'll right an essay on that. it'd be helpful thank you ❤😭

  • @theglitterqueen6447
    @theglitterqueen6447 6 років тому +4

    your remind me of lili Reinhart!!

  • @thirishinnthant4660
    @thirishinnthant4660 2 роки тому

    May I know what was the essay topic?

  • @Jaya-ru7ky
    @Jaya-ru7ky 3 роки тому

    Our first 4 pages are due in a few days and idek how to structure it lmaooooo

  • @youngmaster861
    @youngmaster861 2 роки тому

    thank youuuuu😊😊😊

  • @scarletforce3142
    @scarletforce3142 Місяць тому

    Economics EE advice pls im like 2 RQs away from jumping off my schools roof

  • @breeie9900
    @breeie9900 2 роки тому

    Very positive :)

  • @Felix-zo1ui
    @Felix-zo1ui Рік тому +1

    Thanks for that. And beautiful eyes x

  • @snaderiits
    @snaderiits 2 роки тому

    THATS THE COOLEST INTRO EVER

  • @freeibear8923
    @freeibear8923 4 роки тому +2

    My first draft is day after tomorrow, and I haven't started

  • @Abdurrahman1-i4y
    @Abdurrahman1-i4y 3 роки тому

    Thank you

  • @ricardochevez1235
    @ricardochevez1235 6 років тому +5

    this was helpful but i'm still scared :(

  • @siarawong9552
    @siarawong9552 5 років тому

    I love the intro

  • @fraukevinetabulow4064
    @fraukevinetabulow4064 4 роки тому

    Where ist TOK in times of Covid-19????

  • @slayygela
    @slayygela 5 років тому +1

    my first draft is due tomorrow and i have only like 700 words SOMEBODY KILL ME PLS (anyway thanks for help Ivy Lilia!! 💓)

    • @elizabethkiryanova7920
      @elizabethkiryanova7920 4 роки тому +1

      I hope everything turned out okay for you! I started with ~600 words at 10pm and by 6am the next day I had 3100, which was enough for my first draft :)

    • @slayygela
      @slayygela 4 роки тому +1

      elizabeth baunok I managed to write everything and submitted it on time so I guess it didn’t end up as badly as I thought!! Also IB cancelled the exams so our written assignments are super important:((((

  • @artloverrarts
    @artloverrarts 2 роки тому

    tysmm

  • @Joy-lk9qd
    @Joy-lk9qd 5 років тому

    thank u 🤍🤍

  • @fake9810
    @fake9810 2 роки тому

    My ee supervisor gave no Feedback, RIP me

  • @pedrocampolina4980
    @pedrocampolina4980 4 роки тому

    Please, let us see your EE as an inspiration! 🙏🏻🙏🏻

  • @nicoleblackmon5239
    @nicoleblackmon5239 4 роки тому

    great advice!

  • @lorenzocavalleris2255
    @lorenzocavalleris2255 2 роки тому

    what did you get in your ee out of curiousity (grade)?

  • @isaacdestura7495
    @isaacdestura7495 4 роки тому

    *writes essay in one sitting*
    me: NANI???

  • @johnbenedictdivinagracia4866
    @johnbenedictdivinagracia4866 5 років тому +1

    stop at 4:11

  • @AbdulrahmanAlidroos
    @AbdulrahmanAlidroos 4 роки тому +1

    jesus if only my teacher was as good as you.

  • @Wcrqdrift
    @Wcrqdrift 7 місяців тому

    Doing mine on a videogame🗿

  • @joshie8696
    @joshie8696 5 років тому

    i have 24 hours left and im only at a shitty 1100 words lol

  • @vstman1430
    @vstman1430 5 років тому +2

    I've got an "A" :))

  • @shaheenhayyat
    @shaheenhayyat 5 років тому

    The intro 😂😂😂😂

  • @gtx499youtube9
    @gtx499youtube9 5 років тому

    *i was jebaited*