The conundrum experienced with Wyatt's saga is that as soon as a new chapter is released, and we feel so much joy...we immediately start looking forward to the next one 😀 Thank you to the brilliant author, our fantastic narrator and the algorithm entity 💐⭐
He’ll proceed to casually be the most goat pilot ever and pull all the space princesses. This dude is the ultimate Mary sue. Just goated out of nowhere. The Everyman goat.
@@galacticalliance4801 It is, good enough I was motivated to drop a tip for the author. I like that this channel puts all sorts of links for the author and are respectful and give credit where it is due.
Yes......The Black Ship! I have been waiting for this Chapter/Part. You guys got me hook, line, and sinker on your short stories. Reminds me of when I was a kid listening to The Shadow on AM Rado at midnight. Keep up with the Great Stories!
There's also a good relationship with Wyatt and Cynthia, what I'm not sure of is if Cynthia is pushing Wyatt to excel at Claras request or because she genuinely likes him and can see he is going to be getting in a lot more trouble if he cannot take care of himself out of the cockpit
@@davidorf3921 . Don't forget , where Clara goes Cynthia goes . Basically The Princess' Bodyguard . So Wyatt save HER Life too . I think Clara and Redford BOTH wanted Wyatt taught Hand to Hand , for the Reasons you said , and Cynthia was the obvious choice .
I do love how confused Wyatt is going on at the beginning on the chapter until Clara and Cynthia claired whats going on. I do like how both explain why they were cloak and dagger, that there's a tratior in the loyalist fleet using a quantum entanglement communication device. The person is probably on the flagship. I would not be surprised if one of the most vocal opponents of Wyatt on the flagship is the traitor. Why, because it would be in the traitor's interest to prevent the Prince from having such a great pilot. It's hilarious 😂 how Cynthia's inflexible with criminal this chapter. Consider space station they are going to is den of scum, villiany and people mostly don't give a damm about society norms. 🤣 So Cynthia has to be bitting her lip much in this chapter and next one. I do like how in this chapter both Wyatt and Clara get to see the true person behind each other's public masks and truely start to bond as true friends! I do love the cute scene where Wyatt discovered Clara has a hobby about piloting. I do like how well Wyatt is a good instructor for Clara on how to pilot the shuttle.
I love this series, I can tell both the original and new authors of this story loved it with the amount of time and effort that they put into it. I do love how both Wyatt and Cynthia have a shared hobby in knitting. I can't wait to see a scene where both Wyatt and Cynthia while off duty, decideding to do some knitting together.
I look forward to chapter 12 when it comes out . For me it seemed far too long a wait to hear chapter 11 . It felt like an eternity for 11 , but I guess it takes time to come out with the next chapter . Good story look forward for the next one . Sam
The author apparently had some personal issues, but has said they are already working on the next chapter, also this was posted originally as a two part chapter so it's longer than some, chapter 12 is also likely to be longer apparently
I just want to say, the concept of a quantum entanglement communicator is so underused. I love the concept but many writers don’t seem to understand the possibilities!
Great episode! I really like this series. It's almost a "coming of age" story, but I have a feeling its a "commoner rises to noble" story! But there may yet be good and bad "twists". Looking forward to more episodes.
i am inclined to agree, though possibly with a touch of proof reading before publishing. Although there a number of good scifi stories, this imho is well up near the top of the list of online ones I've read & listened to so far there's a decent plotline some intrigue, space battles Wyatt the plucky and clever underdog and we get a good dose of fantasy as well as science fiction with Princesses, nobles and knights thrown in. What's not to like
@@ekhidna4Oh absolutely, hiring a proofreader would definitely be a must, but the setting is interesting enough, the plot, while not exactly revolutionary does have a pretty unique spin, and the characters are definitely relatable. It really reminds me of Vorkosiganverse but from less privileged POW.
ARGHH!!! Just when it was getting good! Not that it was bad before, but it was like a seasons end cliff hanger!! And the Author quit all net presence? I hope he was able to score a writing career!
I have been chuckling while listening to this all along. Wyatt doesn't know it but those girls got plans for our humble knight. A realistic human space royalty tale that sounds plausible and its as entertaining as this is hard to come by. Love it.
To be fair he's not a knight yet... There was an interesting comment in a previous episode where Cynthia's older sister says she was thinking of offering Wyatt a position as one of her household knights, but it was delivered as if that wasn't going to happen and made me think that perhaps the prince or his sister had already decided to keep Wyatt on their own retinue effectively preventing Cynthia's sister offering that knighthood. I've mentioned before there is an old title of Knight Banneret, it can only be awarded by royalty and it effectively raises someone from a commoner to just above the rank of knight, traditionally a knight fights under the banner of their lord, but a Banneret knight is awarded their own banner and the title is hereditary, Only able to be awarded by royalty and only usually awarded when the insane act of bravery is witnessed by the royal person or their immediate advisor. If that were the royal plan it might explain why Cynthia has been trying to get Wyatt competent with dueling
@@davidorf3921 Yup all you say is true from a historical point, except instead of horses and swords they got starfighters and laser cannons or whatever they shoot, not exactly 100% anachronistic on this story. They just mentioned in this chapter that someone can even buy the rank of Knight, or be given one for acts of valor. Like saving the princess, which is a very common trope in stories. Just saying he is their knight, maybe not yet in any official capacity, but he has been behaving like one and I was being facetious about what they got in mind for him... Prince Consort Wyatt might be the way all this goes, and he will not have a say in any of it. LOL.
@@stratometal I'm not sure about prince consort, if I remember correctly that only happens if maybe Clara ends up in charge of the principality, I suspect right now there's almost as much chance that he will end up with 'Cynthia. Traditionally younger princesses especially pretty ones get into the trap of marriages of allegiance to ensure stability, unless of course Wyatt gets awarded a significant title and territory perhaps taken from one of the traitorous lords, I love that there could be such possibilities in this storyline, it's one of those stories which could run on for a very long time, I mean we are only up to chapter 11 and something like less than a week has passed
@@davidorf3921 I look at this more from the story of a commoner or lowly warrior getting that reward by whoever is king at the time, more than the traditional historical context, its the future after all. These are not your traditional Princesses and Ladies, but more like the Leia Organa type. So woe to whomever gets in her way if she decides Wyatt is hers. Yes possible he ends up with Cynthia, same deal. Eitherway its gonna be funny when whichever one decides to say "mine" and someone tries to stop em. All I am saying, Wyatt stands zero chance of getting away, he is a foal in the eyes of these pantheresess, LOL. As for him getting land and title from someone he defeats, heck yeah. All of what you say sounds awesome and possible. I love the the whole bunch of possibilities too and I hope it runs for a long time too. Nice chatting with you!
I wonder why the author didn’t think to have the officers or Wayett ask about option 3 for how they were set up, there’s a stealth ship stalking the Prince’s flotilla.
Not sure how difficult it would be, but I have some recommendations: 1.) Give the main characters and the narrator their own colors for the captions. 2.) If possible, stop the AI from pitching up the voices for male characters or pitching down female voices. It does this intermittently and can cause brief confusion as to which character is speaking. 3.) If you can get two AI's to cooperate, use a female voiced AI for female characters and a male voiced AI for male characters. Then pick a neutral authoritative voiced AI for the general narration.
I've done this on other stories (e.g: check "the last humans" part 30 onwards), but it makes completing a chapter 4 times longer to produce, and I just don't have that amount of spare time.
Theres like a small squad or whatever of marines on that shuttle right so where tf is the HOLD ON TO SOMETHING THE PRINCESS IS GONNA FLY FOR A BIT sure videos and such may be good way to train but for one that has likely never been in a sim let alone actual training marines very much need a heads up that some one with likely no experince flying is gonna fly for a bit
The conundrum experienced with Wyatt's saga is that as soon as a new chapter is released, and we feel so much joy...we immediately start looking forward to the next one 😀 Thank you to the brilliant author, our fantastic narrator and the algorithm entity 💐⭐
Thank you!
Thank you for another exciting chapter. It’s a delightful highlight of my week get to to hear what Wyatt experiences for us.
More is to come!
Love listening to chapter 6 while waiting for the next chapters 😅
Wyat is the kind of dude that doenst want anything but gets everything just by doing his job lol
Right place, right time, right skills and most importantly right attitude.
He’ll proceed to casually be the most goat pilot ever and pull all the space princesses. This dude is the ultimate Mary sue. Just goated out of nowhere. The Everyman goat.
Am SOOO happy with this new chapter!! And, not to sound ungrateful but, I can't WAIT for your next masterpiece!!
no one blames you, its just that good a story
@@galacticalliance4801 It is, good enough I was motivated to drop a tip for the author. I like that this channel puts all sorts of links for the author and are respectful and give credit where it is due.
Thanks! Working on chapter 12!
Yes......The Black Ship! I have been waiting for this Chapter/Part. You guys got me hook, line, and sinker on your short stories. Reminds me of when I was a kid listening to The Shadow on AM Rado at midnight. Keep up with the Great Stories!
Thanks, mate!
Yay!!! So happy this story is back!!!!
Its finally here!
Nice! Has the makings of a good book all in itself at this rate, or even a series of books.
You flatter me~
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This chapter did not disappoint. Thank you!
Definitely my favorite story here so far
You're too kind, mate.
This is a Truly fabulous tale . A minor Masterwork .
And Wyatt and Clara's Budding romance develops a bit further . They interact so CUTELY .
There's also a good relationship with Wyatt and Cynthia, what I'm not sure of is if Cynthia is pushing Wyatt to excel at Claras request or because she genuinely likes him and can see he is going to be getting in a lot more trouble if he cannot take care of himself out of the cockpit
@@davidorf3921 . Don't forget , where Clara goes Cynthia goes . Basically The Princess' Bodyguard . So Wyatt save HER Life too .
I think Clara and Redford BOTH wanted Wyatt taught Hand to Hand , for the Reasons you said , and Cynthia was the obvious choice .
Thank you!
I really like this story. Thank you very much.
Thank you!
Looking forward to part 12
I do love how confused Wyatt is going on at the beginning on the chapter until Clara and Cynthia claired whats going on. I do like how both explain why they were cloak and dagger, that there's a tratior in the loyalist fleet using a quantum entanglement communication device.
The person is probably on the flagship. I would not be surprised if one of the most vocal opponents of Wyatt on the flagship is the traitor. Why, because it would be in the traitor's interest to prevent the Prince from having such a great pilot.
It's hilarious 😂 how Cynthia's inflexible with criminal this chapter. Consider space station they are going to is den of scum, villiany and people mostly don't give a damm about society norms. 🤣 So Cynthia has to be bitting her lip much in this chapter and next one.
I do like how in this chapter both Wyatt and Clara get to see the true person behind each other's public masks and truely start to bond as true friends! I do love the cute scene where Wyatt discovered Clara has a hobby about piloting. I do like how well Wyatt is a good instructor for Clara on how to pilot the shuttle.
Glad that you're enjoying it so much!
I love this series, I can tell both the original and new authors of this story loved it with the amount of time and effort that they put into it.
I do love how both Wyatt and Cynthia have a shared hobby in knitting. I can't wait to see a scene where both Wyatt and Cynthia while off duty, decideding to do some knitting together.
Best Chapter so Far to Date
MORE! This is among the best i have ever heard!
More is coming!
@@ekhidna4Your work is amazing! Look forward to teh relationship building between a commoner and the nobles! They could learn a lot from each other.
thanks worth the wait really enjoy the story 😊
I look forward to chapter 12 when it comes out . For me it seemed far too long a wait to hear chapter 11 . It felt like an eternity for 11 , but I guess it takes time to come out with the next chapter . Good story look forward for the next one . Sam
The author apparently had some personal issues, but has said they are already working on the next chapter, also this was posted originally as a two part chapter so it's longer than some, chapter 12 is also likely to be longer apparently
Thank you, mate. Chapter 12 is almost done.
I just want to say, the concept of a quantum entanglement communicator is so underused. I love the concept but many writers don’t seem to understand the possibilities!
Great episode! I really like this series. It's almost a "coming of age" story, but I have a feeling its a "commoner rises to noble" story! But there may yet be good and bad "twists". Looking forward to more episodes.
I'd be satisfied just to see the space battles and dogfights animated.
I appreciated the nod to Mos Eisley in the the description of Woodshaft station.
Looking in from the outside; Wyatt is just sooo playing hard to get! LOL!
I'm really enjoying this, thank you.
thanks worth waiting for. 👏👏👏👏
Eagerly waiting for the new chapter. I listened to this story all at once until this point lol
In early this time. BTW, i don't say this often, but this has the makings of a book.
i am inclined to agree, though possibly with a touch of proof reading before publishing. Although there a number of good scifi stories, this imho is well up near the top of the list of online ones I've read & listened to so far there's a decent plotline some intrigue, space battles Wyatt the plucky and clever underdog and we get a good dose of fantasy as well as science fiction with Princesses, nobles and knights thrown in. What's not to like
Perhaps in the future, with proofreading, editing, and a few other touches. For now, though, thank you for watching/reading!
@@ekhidna4Oh absolutely, hiring a proofreader would definitely be a must, but the setting is interesting enough, the plot, while not exactly revolutionary does have a pretty unique spin, and the characters are definitely relatable. It really reminds me of Vorkosiganverse but from less privileged POW.
I friggin' love this reading😂😂🍻🍻🍻👊👊👊
Very good story.
ARGHH!!!
Just when it was getting good! Not that it was bad before, but it was like a seasons end cliff hanger!!
And the Author quit all net presence? I hope he was able to score a writing career!
The original author only wrote Chapter 1. I took up the mantle and have been expanding it ever since.
@@ekhidna4 Sir, you are doing one hell of a job! You have some great writing skills.
@@ekhidna4 You have done an excellent job! I am hooked, and want more, please!
the best just got a new entry
Lady Cynthia and Wyatt need to get a room 😂😂😂😂
If she is Lady Cynthia they would be Royal Marines surely
It would be great if a situation came up where Clara had to fly. Imagine the look on the Prince,and the other noblity faces.
I have been chuckling while listening to this all along. Wyatt doesn't know it but those girls got plans for our humble knight. A realistic human space royalty tale that sounds plausible and its as entertaining as this is hard to come by. Love it.
To be fair he's not a knight yet... There was an interesting comment in a previous episode where Cynthia's older sister says she was thinking of offering Wyatt a position as one of her household knights, but it was delivered as if that wasn't going to happen and made me think that perhaps the prince or his sister had already decided to keep Wyatt on their own retinue effectively preventing Cynthia's sister offering that knighthood. I've mentioned before there is an old title of Knight Banneret, it can only be awarded by royalty and it effectively raises someone from a commoner to just above the rank of knight, traditionally a knight fights under the banner of their lord, but a Banneret knight is awarded their own banner and the title is hereditary, Only able to be awarded by royalty and only usually awarded when the insane act of bravery is witnessed by the royal person or their immediate advisor. If that were the royal plan it might explain why Cynthia has been trying to get Wyatt competent with dueling
@@davidorf3921
Yup all you say is true from a historical point, except instead of horses and swords they got starfighters and laser cannons or whatever they shoot, not exactly 100% anachronistic on this story.
They just mentioned in this chapter that someone can even buy the rank of Knight, or be given one for acts of valor. Like saving the princess, which is a very common trope in stories. Just saying he is their knight, maybe not yet in any official capacity, but he has been behaving like one and I was being facetious about what they got in mind for him... Prince Consort Wyatt might be the way all this goes, and he will not have a say in any of it. LOL.
@@stratometal I'm not sure about prince consort, if I remember correctly that only happens if maybe Clara ends up in charge of the principality, I suspect right now there's almost as much chance that he will end up with 'Cynthia. Traditionally younger princesses especially pretty ones get into the trap of marriages of allegiance to ensure stability, unless of course Wyatt gets awarded a significant title and territory perhaps taken from one of the traitorous lords, I love that there could be such possibilities in this storyline, it's one of those stories which could run on for a very long time, I mean we are only up to chapter 11 and something like less than a week has passed
@@davidorf3921 I look at this more from the story of a commoner or lowly warrior getting that reward by whoever is king at the time, more than the traditional historical context, its the future after all.
These are not your traditional Princesses and Ladies, but more like the Leia Organa type. So woe to whomever gets in her way if she decides Wyatt is hers. Yes possible he ends up with Cynthia, same deal. Eitherway its gonna be funny when whichever one decides to say "mine" and someone tries to stop em. All I am saying, Wyatt stands zero chance of getting away, he is a foal in the eyes of these pantheresess, LOL.
As for him getting land and title from someone he defeats, heck yeah. All of what you say sounds awesome and possible. I love the the whole bunch of possibilities too and I hope it runs for a long time too. Nice chatting with you!
I wonder why the author didn’t think to have the officers or Wayett ask about option 3 for how they were set up, there’s a stealth ship stalking the Prince’s flotilla.
Minor spoiler alert, that's something that comes into play in chapter 12.
Not sure how difficult it would be, but I have some recommendations:
1.) Give the main characters and the narrator their own colors for the captions.
2.) If possible, stop the AI from pitching up the voices for male characters or pitching down female voices. It does this intermittently and can cause brief confusion as to which character is speaking.
3.) If you can get two AI's to cooperate, use a female voiced AI for female characters and a male voiced AI for male characters. Then pick a neutral authoritative voiced AI for the general narration.
I've done this on other stories (e.g: check "the last humans" part 30 onwards), but it makes completing a chapter 4 times longer to produce, and I just don't have that amount of spare time.
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does this have a regular release date? i can see one is waiting.
i'm thoroughly enjoying the series
Trying to set a regular release date, mate!
@@ekhidna4 understood but creativity isn't likely to follow a schedule
FUCKING MOOOOAAAARRRRR!!
Moar is coming!
@@ekhidna4 geewd geewwwddd. Excellent. ^_^
@25 minutes in the audio dies for me. CC continues. Just for me? 26 minute it came back. I tracked back, still dead audio.
I think that's only for you, mate. Close Chrome and maybe restart your PC. That should fix it.
I had no problems with the audio with this video on the UA-cam app on my smartphone.
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God protect all children from the sex slave trade
Theres like a small squad or whatever of marines on that shuttle right so where tf is the HOLD ON TO SOMETHING THE PRINCESS IS GONNA FLY FOR A BIT sure videos and such may be good way to train but for one that has likely never been in a sim let alone actual training marines very much need a heads up that some one with likely no experince flying is gonna fly for a bit