ROTTEN CORE [ Kagamine Rin ] [Original Song]
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- Опубліковано 1 жов 2024
- Hello everyone! Here is a song I've had in the works for a while now! I'm pretty happy with it and I finally finished making all the art for the video~! I hope you like it! Everything you see/hear in the video is made by me! Enjoy!
Edit: I am going to add the lyrics here as well! I'll try and do this here for all my new songs in the future too! (keep in mind these are the grammatically corrected lyrics from the version of the song uploaded to soundcloud and soon spotify)
蚯蚓は垢からきました。Mimizu wa aka kara kimashita
A worm came from the dirt.
下に埋もれている。種子だ- Shita ni umorete iru. shushi da.
buried underneath, it’s a seed
成長している。新規人格,－Seichō shite iru. Jinkaku
growing, A personality,
少しの新芽。何になりますか？Sukoshi no shinme. Nani ni narimasu ka
Little sprout, what will you become?
風が果樹園を吹き抜ける- Kaze ga kajuen o fukinukeru
A wind blows through the orchard
春はリンゴがうまれます。生う 生う - Haru wa ringo ga umaremasu. Nama u
In spring apples are born, grow and live
夏はリンゴが勤めり。 幸せかな Natsu wa ringo ga tsutomeri. Shiawase kana
In summer apples work hard, are you happy?
秋はリンゴが古いになります Aki wa ringo ga furui ni narimasu
In the fall apples become old
冬はすべて死んでる。 リンゴもかな - Fuyu wa subete shinderu. Ringo mo kana
(back up vocals)
in winter everything dies, maybe apples too
芯が腐った. 僕も腐った. 地核くさった。‐ Shin ga kusatta. Boku mo kusatta. Chikaku kusatta
The core is rotten, and so am I, The earth’s core has rotted too
井いの中なかの蛙かわず大たい海かいを知しらず - i no naka naka no kaeru kawazu dai tai umi kai o chi shirazu
The frog in the well knows nothing about the great ocean.
作物がダメになってしまいます。葉が剪定します。- Sakumotsu ga dame ni natte shimaimasu. Ha ga sentei shimasu
The crops are ruined. Prune the leaves
あなたにあんなことをいわなければよかった。Anata ni anna koto o iwanakereba yokatta
I shouldn’t have said that to you
小さな新芽。木になった - Chīsana shinme. Ki ni natta
Little sprout, became a tree
春はリンゴがうまれます。生う 生う - Haru wa ringo ga umaremasu. Nama u
In spring apples are born, grow and live
夏はリンゴが勤めります。 幸せかな Natsu wa ringo ga tsutomeri. Shiawase kana
In summer apples work hard, are you happy?
秋はリンゴが古いになります Aki wa ringo ga furui ni narimasu
In the fall apples become old
冬はすべて死んでる。 リンゴもかな Fuyu wa subete shinderu. Ringo mo kana
- in winter everything dies, maybe apples too
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HOW DO YOU DRAW SO WELL?? It looks absolutely stunning 😭😭Japanese grammar time! Be careful! Some words are the same but can be used as an adjective OR a verb depending on the placement. The 「腐った」could be an adjective or verb, and 「芯」is the subject.「芯を腐った」May sound right, (Translates to "The core is rotten"), but instead of using「を」, you should use 「が」which corrects it. (芯が腐った) (Sadly, there are more detailed rules when using letters that connect words.) However, if you want to say "Rotten Core" like the title, you would change it to 「腐った芯」which changes 「腐った」into a adjective, and it is describing the 「芯」. (Cont.)
Same rule of using「が」applies at 1:00, 「春はりんごが生まれます。」(Instead of 生まれます(Born) I feel like it would be 咲きます(Bloom) but whatever fits your song lol) And also at 2:17, good thing to change it to「葉が剪定します。」I was really impressed by the level of vocabulary AND grammar, and the theme of this song is really nice! Again, LOVE the art!! :D Thanks for making such amazing songs, and you got this!! ♥
Im having a stroke reading this
@@xixslunce Understandable, Japanese has a LOT of rules... 😅
I think the core is rotten still works no?
@@rasberrymilk4753no because を implies the subject is being acted upon so it’s more like “i rotted the core” which..isn’t really grammatically correct
THIS IS HUGE the vibes are exactly like those miku songs that were popular over a decade ago. we are so back
specifically the mixing with distant vocals. so awesome
The way the melody emulates traditional music and those religious sutra chants enchant me for some reason
Love it
"i shouldn't have said this to you" - this song has such strong vibes of someone both wanting to share the truth about the world and also wishing to shield their friend/loved one from it. such a tasty song, both filled with regret and longing!🍎
Truly, a rotten apple
Yo, it's been a while since a VOCALOID song has captivated me like this. I love the sombre, almost medieval vibes. I don't think I fully understand it yet, but I got my pencils out, and I think I'll listen to this a few more times. Thank you for your beautiful music.
I think the song is made in beepbox (that's the program I use and the instrument definitely sound like they're from beepbox.)
@@SixpenceSnailpence Oh interesting! I'm brand new to music making and just got started in Beepbox, but I hear the guitar sample now.
I actually don't know any music theory
Woah, you have such an original style! Not only is the art stunning, but the melody and the tuning are absolutely amazing! Immediate follow, can't wait to check all your other work. This is so refreshing for the vocaloid community!
Vega-Pさん、初めまして。伝統的チャイナ音楽の昔話ムードの幻想的な歌です。
Oh, I adore the sound of this so much... The instrumentation with Rin's gentle vocals is so perfect. It sounds wonderfully fairytale, like something that would fit with the era of stories of things like The Last Unicorn (the book, not the movie.) Stellar!
UNDERRATED PRODUCER SPOTTED!! the vibes on this song are immaculate, it sounds like a track for an obscure ps1 game or smth
Interesting fact apples are cold season fruits so in winter they would grow and in the summer they would rot
Чертовски красиво! И песня и иллюстрации. Всего пару дней назад случайно наткнулся на это видео и этот канал. Надеюсь, автор получит признание, которого заслуживает, желаю ему дальнейшего роста и развития.
Сейм ситуация и мысли!! Песни удивительные, влюбилась в их исполнение и визуал с первого взгляда
this came out so beautifully
reminiscent of classic vocaloid but also hold up to the arts/variation of newer tracks
i actually love this song so much
amazing job c:
into the vent playlist this goes 🕺
jokes aside this song feels like growing up,but feeling like you grew up into someone you do not like and the cycle of self hatred that comes with that,at least that's my theory about the meaning
im currently going through that. I'm still young,yet I think I'm not good enough ,like a rotten apple,and this helps me feel better,having something to relate to. your songs are amazing and this is my favorite so far! keep at it,and sorry for getting so sappy lmao
i gotta say i ABSOLUTELY LOVE the art style, and the vibe of the song reminds me of early 2010s/late 2000s vocaloid songs?? not sure if i got the time right but the melody is very nostalgic for me for some reason. i hope you and all your songs blow up soon, you have sm talent! ^_^
I just keep coming back to this song. I don't have anything new I can add or say something someone hasn't said but I'll leave a comment for the algorithm.
the atmosphere is amazing, I feel really understood, and the art is so beautiful and adds so much to an already beautiful song. the melody is haunting, and i love how rin blends in with the music, that's something that is always a favourite in vocaloid songs, it's really special, that way her voice is an instrument to the highest degree. the lyrics are simple but extremely effective. those empty eyes and neutral expression are chilling and familiar. much love, thank you for the song!
曲と映像の他、リンちゃんを使っていることで好きになり、貴方の曲を全て聴きました。
日本語の文法はとても難しいですよね。
聞いていて意味が読み取れない部分もありますが、英訳がついているので、ある程度は内容を理解できます。
(逆に私は英語がほとんどできません…。)
博識な皆さんの文法に関するコメント、日本人の立場からも、読んでいて参考になりました。
今後も、より良い曲を作ってくださることを期待しています！
日本語を使ってくださりありがとう🩷
THIS IS SO COOLLL THE MV IS AMAZING AND THE SONG KINDA REMINDS ME OF DUNGEON SYNTH
曲も心地いいし、コメント欄は日本語を読み解こうとする海外の方々で溢れていて、応援したくなりました！日本人が聴いても素敵だなと感じます。頑張ってくださいᵔᢦᵔ
idk if someone has pointed this out already, but「少しの新芽」would translate to "a small quantity of sprouts" rather than "little sprout". You use「小さな新芽」 (which is correct for "little sprout") in another line later on, so idk why you switched them
i can't believe you only have 2k subscribers
the song and your art are mesmerizing
I searched up "apple song kagamine rin" to fine this song. this song is epic
this is the most beautiful song with rin i've listened to in awhile!! The music, the tuning, the art, it all comes together so nicely!! Love this a lot!
this touched me on a spiritual level that I can’t explain
this is so good!! i love it! 😭🙏
not only is the art stunning BUT THIS SONG IS SO GOOD!! whats this genre called?? like english folk song turned vocaloid?(im terrible at genres i might be so off lol)
It's not often that I hear people using beepbox for vocalsynth instrumentals. Great work!
OH MY GOD IT *WAS* BEEPBOX!!!! I THOUGHT SO
all your songs are SO incredibly beautiful and calming, like studio ghibli's "princess kaguya"
you have an incredibly unique vocaloid style i love it so much!! never stop making music like this ❤❤ :DD
also the art is GORGEOUS the color schemes are stunning to look at especially in the seasons part
do you have an art account anywhere?
Esta canción se siente como algo que escucharía en un festival de las cosechas :3
Genuinely very obsessed with this, have you ever considered putting yo ur music up on other platforms?
THIS SO WELL DONE?! From the art to the music and almost haunting singing? I adore this so so much. Do you have any plans to upload this to other platforms like spotify? Either way this is AMAZING and thank you for making it!
i don't know why, but your style reminds me of the golden era of vocaloid. somehow nostalgic. i love it!
Please make an instrumental, I really want to see other people make vocaloids too
1) this song feels like there's the singer in the front an a HUGE DRUM ENSAMBLE.
2) the title i kinda read as "rotten core!!!! 🥺🥺" because I'm SO SILLY
overall good song, great vibes
10/10
edit - holy shit i forgot to mention HOW GOOD THE ARTWORK IS. IM EATING IT RN 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 YUM YUM 😍😍😍
Good to know rin is still a fan of gardening.
The comments of japanese people are so cute, they are very sweet understanding some grammatical errors and cheering wanting to see improvement and more songs! 🫂✨
God this is so underappreciated!!!!
I absolutely adore the vibe of this track, and the art is so goooood. The colors!!!!! The line art!!!!! Hhsjdhsjf
Can't wait to see your creations take off some day!
Your art is gorgeous and this song is so oddly captivating. You did phenomenal work and I can't wait to see what else you do!
Dont mind me spamming a little bit, i just want this to get shot right into the algorythm
can u post the lyrics somewhere? i wanna add the song on vocaloid wiki :D
I went ahead and added the lyrics to the video description! Thank you so much for your interest, I would be so honored to be on the vocaloid wiki TT^TT
this is so amazing! e music on its own is so emotional and the lyrics are really beautiful, not to mention the gorgeous art accompanying everything! i dont really know how else to put it other than just... this is beautiful. its a very beautiful piece of art that im really happy i saw today
the sound to this is so beautiful, sad but enchanting. Kind of reminds me of old folklore about spirits, in a really lovely way.
Omg!! This song and the art + animation is absolutely beautiful im so mesmerized!!!!!
I’m so happy to discover you, I can’t wait to see your songs getting more popular omg 😭😭🫶🫶💖❤️
I'm back here.
I kinda liked the song the first time I listened to it but when it reappeared in my head I became obsessed holy shit
love this color of music!
So happy this got some traction! Can't wait to see more of your future works!
My favorite Elden ring fan song/j
For real tho, I love this song so much.
i better see this is pjsk REAL quick
This sounds amazing, really unique vibe !
Is your music on spotify? I really like your work :D
This is beautiful. I haven’t seen such a wonderfully artistic Rin song in ages!
Is this beepbox? Insanity
This is!! so pretty!!! Both the song and pv, great work
Yes! I use Beepbox to plan out the songs and then sometimes I switch out the instrumentals/add more in my DAW but I really owe it to Beepbox it's been helping me visualize the songs as I make them and is the reason I tried to make music again (it's wild to me that people recognize it because I didn't realize that it was so well known since I found it randomly a few months ago). Thank you for the compliment! Everyone should support Beepbox and give it a try!
@@Vega-Pmusic It is great, but i find its hard to make a full song in it haha however you did a great job! looking forward to any future music, this is lovely
very nice song i would like too support as much as i can :] but btw there is something i don't like in this song it's a only one thing so don't worry :3 i dunno is it bc my ears are bad there is a lack of balance of vocal and instrumental the vocals is volume is very low i can't hear much what rin say so i have complain ab the volume balance of vocals and instrument. and btw i hope u can do much better with synth software and very nice illusion and art work!
Edit: but the vocal got clearer when I use headphones and idk why
This song is so calming to hear i love it so much, i could fall asleep to it but in a good way
Love this , my favorite of the whole is the art with the birds and the little worm- so good!
was the instrumental made on beepbox
this song is sooooo beautiful oh my god, i have an interpretation that isn't super unique but i would love to know if i'm close at all to the intention!! the apple and the growth of the apple tree represents how a relationship and the people within it, respectively, grow as time passes. but the singer tells the audience that apple is sure to wither and die as the seasons change from spring to winter, literally describing how the "spring" of love is destined to fade away with time.
and then there is the part about the "rotten" core of the fruit, which i think can be taken in three ways: the first is that it's the rot that directly leads to the fruit of the relationship dying away, the second is that the rot is completely separate from the cycle of love and is simply a fact that exists alongside it, and the third is that the rot is CAUSED by the relationship dying as time passes, which does make sense since fruit rots and then falls from the trees before winter officially hits. in general, i believe the rot is referring to a hidden resentment--since it's "the core" specifically that's rotten--that a lover feels towards their partner/object of affection, likely because they are in the late autumn of thhearteir relationship and they can see that the end of it is very near
i also love the subtle religious themes as well, though that might be more my own interpretation, but if it WAS intentional on your part then i can also see how the idea of a serpent tempting a human with "forbidden fruit" (the apple of knowledge, the apple representing relationship experiences) could add a whole new layer to the idea of hidden rot and corruption!
all in all, LOVE the music it really makes me think
💘
Whoa!! I just came across this and I am blown away by how amazing the production is. I'm taking notes and I just subscribed! I can't wait to see what else is in store for you!💙
Beautiful!Sorry to bother youWould you allow me repost your videos to Bilibili?l promise note the original address and author, and i guarantee that there will be no revenue and no changes to your video.
Sure! That is fine with me, I give you permission. Thank you for enjoying my music!
@@Vega-Pmusic Awwwww,thank you for your permission and your music！
Серьезно, мне понравилось. Какая необычная музыка, да и рисовка (в хорошем смысле). Надеюсь Вы станете популярнее!
beautiful artwork! feels really nostalgic
The apples remind me from Hansel and Gretel in moonlit bear. When Eve took the apples from the bear, she brought home and realized what she had done
Будет ли интструментал на эту песню?
the mv is gorgeous
HELLLLLLO UNDERRATED? THIS IS SO GOOD THE ART THE MELODY AND THE TUNING IMA CRY
This is so good! Have been listening to it on repeat! Your art and music is really inspiring!
Im glad i found your channel, cant wait for what you release next!
another banger from vega-p, i love it! ❤️
Honestly this is a great song and would really shine with some mixing to demuddy the vocals from the music.
so sad that this isnt on spotify
Визуал выглядит очень профессионально🥰
Музыка не в моём вкусе, но картинки просто великолепнейшие!
Wow this absolutely has to be my favourite vocaloid AMV/video I have seen! Your style is beautiful and the symbolism/framing of the art here is gorgeous.
I love the sound you have here too, I find I'm not usually a fan of Rin and Len due to the staccato way their voices usually tune, but you really made it work here and the whole song has a lovely ambient sound to it! The droning of the background mixed with soft vocals and melody is very relaxing.
This is the first song of yours I've heard but I'm definitely going to be checking out your other music!
THE ART? AND THE SONG? I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BEAUTIFUL
I just discovered you recently and I've been coming back to your songs constantly! Beautiful work, both visual wise and music wise 💖💐
I love the art so much, it's so captivating. It looks like illustrations for a book I would probably love to read, if it makes any sense
This is very nice and sombre..
It kinda gives me folk vibes, which I adore, but its very clearly not? In a really captivating way.
i finally realized what the instrumentals made me think of! its like if the warriors untold tales music was mixed in with traditional jp instrumentals.
WOAH the colors of your art are gorgeous!! I was stunned by the seasons changing!
this is incredible! I can't wait to see your channel grow!
Oh my gosh this is so beautiful. Your art style makes this feel so unreal, I love the instruments and everything
❤
I feel like I recognize some of the instruments, did you use beepboxfor the instrumental?
BRO MY HXH BRAINROTTED ASS THOUGHT SHE WAS KURAPIKA 😭
Isso é simplesmente un descanso e motivação ao mesmo tempo, valeu aí por essa obra de arte, está realmente lindo!
wow i love this. love the art and the music-alike sound of Rin's voice. its almost etheric. wow❤
ONE OF UA-camS BEAT RECOMMENDATIONS THIS SONG IS SUCH A BOP BRO 🗣️😭
Will this be on any music platform other than youtube?
Тот самый русский комментарий (надеюсь кто-нибудь объяснит мне смысл песни)
OMGG UNDERRATED this is so pretty
is this song related to the 2012 song soleil by any chance?
THIS IS SO SICK OMGGGGGGG
THANK U FOR THIS BANGER
*gets apple*
*opens youtube*
Is this a warning?
this reminds me a lot of the older vocaloid songs! this is such a unique style and i can tell i'm going to be obsessing over this song for a long time. if i could make one criticism, it's that the vocals are a tad bit quiet and it's kind of hard to make out the lyrics. great work though!!
This is incredible! The instrumentation and tuning makes me so nostalgic for the earlier days of vocaloid in the best of ways - I can't wait to see more from you!
sorry gonna ruin ur 666 subscriber count
Helloooo~ I really love this song and therefore I wanted to ask if you're okay with vocal covers, because as soon as I heard it I wanted to add it to my cover list-
AMAZING!! It's incredible how do you even made all the art! I really liked it, all of it.
Good job! I don't know much about music but since the last song I think that the music sound really well (srry for my poor english).
I am going to take a strong guess...but was the music made in beepbox by any chance? The sounds are very distinct 🤭
great job on the song btw!!
It deserves much more attention!
Such a beautiful work
absolutely stunning, such a moody and atmospheric music!
It looks and sounds like for game, woah.