MASTER ENGLISH WRITING: How to Correct Thesis Statement Problems

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  • @LearnAcademicEnglish
    @LearnAcademicEnglish  Рік тому +2

    😀Hi everyone! Thanks for watching!
    ✍ QUESTIONS TO PRACTICE:
    Can you fix these thesis statements?
    Three ways in which Brazil and the U.S. are similar are diverse, population size, and natural beauty. (Use P\parallel forms)
    This essay is going to discuss the four main causes of homelessness in the United States. (Don't make an announcement)
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  • @aravindanmuthuvote221
    @aravindanmuthuvote221 24 дні тому +1

    Explained superbly.

  • @nickbrooks7171
    @nickbrooks7171 Рік тому +3

    Teacher can I ask you a question. what is the most general essay/common essay that teachers start teaching. I mean, they obviously teach about introduction/thesis statement , body and conclusion. But what is the name of the most common essay that they start teaching ? Thanks .

    • @LearnAcademicEnglish
      @LearnAcademicEnglish  Рік тому +3

      We usually just refer to it as the 5-paragraph essay. We usually start with how to write a good paragraph with 3 supporting reasons and then show them that they can change that paragraph into a whole essay by taking those 3 reasons and creating a body paragraph for each one. When we first introduce this type of essay, we start with an easy prompt like Do you prefer to live in a big city or small town? Why? We usually start with a narrative essay or cause/effect (discussing reasons).

  • @OTIFRANCIS-wf6tt
    @OTIFRANCIS-wf6tt 6 місяців тому +1

    How can l start writing my thesis topic? What are the basic requirement for a great sermon.

    • @LearnAcademicEnglish
      @LearnAcademicEnglish  6 місяців тому

      Thanks for your question. You need to make sure you brainstorm ideas, outline, and then write your thesis. Here's a video to show you how to write a thesis statement: ua-cam.com/video/-u5X_k04BeA/v-deo.html
      And the basics of how to write an essay: ua-cam.com/video/uFyuuSZYkY8/v-deo.htmlsi=Gr46cRFTwSxq-oOf
      And sometimes it's helpful to know how to start the writing process with a good question. ua-cam.com/video/yxCd8WmUPvg/v-deo.html

  • @humbled9948
    @humbled9948 Рік тому +2

    Even as a native speaker, I'm learning from your videos.
    I'm planning on going back to college after years out of school, so these videos help.
    Thank you very much. God bless you.

  • @AtikaSaif
    @AtikaSaif 6 місяців тому +1

    Can I write about causes and solutions of depression in the same eassy ..or it is going to be confusing

    • @AtikaSaif
      @AtikaSaif 6 місяців тому +1

      Please I need the answer... can I write about both ..causes and solutions or should I choose one?

    • @LearnAcademicEnglish
      @LearnAcademicEnglish  6 місяців тому

      Yes you can write about both

  • @RichardJones-xx3vi
    @RichardJones-xx3vi 4 місяці тому

    practice
    “Three ways in which Brazil and the U.S. are similar are diverse, population size, and natural beauty.”
    Correction: The US and Brazil are similar countries due to their population size, diverse cultures, and their beautiful landscape.

    “This essay is going to discuss the four main causes of homelessness in the United States.”
    Correction: There are four main causes of homelessness in the United States.
    Are these good thesis statements?

  • @V4MP_4EVA
    @V4MP_4EVA 7 місяців тому +1

    I'm learning from this topic. Thank you

  • @williamsdonkor7753
    @williamsdonkor7753 Рік тому +1

    Wow, you have enlightened me with this useful information. Thanks so much

  • @ramayuni4681
    @ramayuni4681 4 місяці тому

    Ms, i wanna ask you about one of example in this video. does the "Permanent housing should be provided to the homeless for the following reasons: to reduce long-term costs, clean up city centers, and encourage rehabilitation and emplyment" is tobe the tittle of our thesis?

    • @LearnAcademicEnglish
      @LearnAcademicEnglish  4 місяці тому

      That is the thesis. The title and the thesis are different. The thesis tells a sentence that tells the main idea of the essay.

    • @ramayuni4681
      @ramayuni4681 4 місяці тому

      i have an assignment the topic is "stigma behind the mental health and access to treatment in developing countries". so this topic is tobe the tittle of my assignment or i can make a new tittle may be more narrow?. i still confuse

    • @LearnAcademicEnglish
      @LearnAcademicEnglish  4 місяці тому

      @@ramayuni4681 It is too long, so I would make a new title. I have a video all about how to write a title.

  • @DANIELKENNETHKENNYPOWERCOMMUNI
    @DANIELKENNETHKENNYPOWERCOMMUNI 11 місяців тому +1

    Thank so much am enlighten from your lectures

  • @anv.4614
    @anv.4614 Рік тому +1

    Dear Tutor, well appreciated. thank you.

  • @samialqasmee6123
    @samialqasmee6123 2 місяці тому

    You are really so unique and you have chosen very useful subjects and to be honest you have made relentless efforts and you are amazing

  • @nazeerKakar4896.
    @nazeerKakar4896. 6 місяців тому

    Please make a vedio on paragraph as well

    • @LearnAcademicEnglish
      @LearnAcademicEnglish  6 місяців тому

      Check my playlist and watch my video about how to write an essay. There is a handout, too. It shows paragraph structure.

    • @nazeerKakar4896.
      @nazeerKakar4896. 6 місяців тому +1

      @@LearnAcademicEnglish okay plethora of thanks for the guidance dear mam

  • @fagrkamareya8195
    @fagrkamareya8195 Рік тому +1

    Amazing!👌👌👌❤

    • @LearnAcademicEnglish
      @LearnAcademicEnglish  Рік тому

      So glad you found it helpful! And thanks for joining as a member. Please let me know what type of information you are most interested in, and I will keep that in mind when I make member videos. :)

  • @marysabelbeck2772
    @marysabelbeck2772 Рік тому

    Hello, Please I need you help with the thesis statement and with English, I need to learn well. I am new fallow you

    • @LearnAcademicEnglish
      @LearnAcademicEnglish  Рік тому

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  • @sharifullahjan7556
    @sharifullahjan7556 Рік тому

    Hello madam,
    I hope you are doing well.
    I have a question. Do all essays have hook statement, background, thesis thesis statement, supporting and conclusion? Kindly reply. Thank you.

    • @LearnAcademicEnglish
      @LearnAcademicEnglish  Рік тому

      Great question. Most essays have that structure:
      Introduction paragraph w/ hook, background, and thesis statement
      Body paragraphs that support the thesis statement
      Conclusion paragraph
      There are a few exceptions. For example, right now I am teaching my students how to write a summary & response essay, which is a bit different, but that is like an exception. Almost all essays follow the structure you mentioned.

    • @sharifullahjan7556
      @sharifullahjan7556 Рік тому +1

      Thank you ❤️

  • @AkeliaDelpesche
    @AkeliaDelpesche 5 місяців тому

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  • @englishlanguage7153
    @englishlanguage7153 Рік тому

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  • @KarubeSimon
    @KarubeSimon 8 місяців тому

    I like your explanation

  • @abdoel-masry223
    @abdoel-masry223 Рік тому

    I wish I had watched your videos earlier.

  • @mahbobehmaleki2910
    @mahbobehmaleki2910 6 місяців тому

    Thank you!!💕🌸🌸

  • @mahmoudurrahman6742
    @mahmoudurrahman6742 8 місяців тому

    Thanks

  • @CatherineCudjoe
    @CatherineCudjoe 7 місяців тому

    helpful

  • @fabiolatorres6740
    @fabiolatorres6740 8 місяців тому

    Thank you!!!

  • @jonathanhuerta5460
    @jonathanhuerta5460 Рік тому

    I love writing

    • @LearnAcademicEnglish
      @LearnAcademicEnglish  Рік тому

      That's great! Having a positive attitude about it makes a huge difference. :)

    • @jonathanhuerta5460
      @jonathanhuerta5460 Рік тому +1

      @@LearnAcademicEnglish I always like to think of writing as creativity because you get to make your own story