how to write a *detailed* example in ielts writing task 2
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- Опубліковано 1 сер 2024
- 🟢 3-day writing task 2 challenge: www.skool.com/3-day-challenge...
In this video, I share with you guys one simple tip for transforming an abstract example into a detailed one.
Here are the four essay questions used in this video.
1. The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?
Source: ielts 14 general training test 1 writing task 2
Full essay: www.ieltsessaybank.com/the-gr...
2. Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Source: ielts 17 academic test 4 writing task 2
Full essay: www.ieltsessaybank.com/nowada...
3. Some ex-prisoners commit crimes after being released from prison. What do you think is the cause? How can it be solved?
Source: reported
Full essay: www.ieltsessaybank.com/some-e...
4. It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Source: ielts 17 test 1 writing task 2
Full essay: www.ieltsessaybank.com/it-is-...
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0:00 example 1
05:04 example 2
07:58 example 3
10:19 example 4
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Just got a band 6.5 in writing. Shout out to LILIE whose videos on task 1 writing helped me a lot 🤩🤩
Wooow, congratulations and thank you so much for sharing your score here! Wish you a bright future ahead!
I love your teaching Lilie I scored 7 in writing.god bless your wonderful work of sharing knowledge❤
Woow, that's amazing and congratulations! What are your scores on the other sections?
L8, R7,W7,S7
I got 6.5 band in writting , (overall 7) just watching all your playlist of writting , one day before exam
Thank you very much❤
Lots of love from Nepal🇳🇵
One day before the exam, that's impressive! Thank you so much for sharing your experience here and wish u a bright future ahead!
😢 thats my dream
Your videos are super helpful! ❤thank you for superb content!
i love your videos lilie, it helped me alot in writing and many other skills!
I'm so glad!😊
I hated writing section seemed always daunting to me .started watching your video lessons since last year and now writing is one of my favorite especially task 1 .thank you for effort wish u prosperous
Glad that my videos have added value to you.😊
Yes, u have significant numbers of fans.. 😊
It's been a while ,I love your simplitude in writing
thanks for waiting.😊
Tysm for the video Lilie !❤
Great videos tbh, you’re the best Lilie. I’m so nervous because my ielts exam will be next month and my writing skill is terrible. Luckily, i found your channel in the suggestion videos and got amazed by how your strategies helped me to score impressive points in other skills 🎉
It's okay to be nervous😊
You are one of the best youtuber for ielts prep....keep it up
So nice of you😊
Thank you teacher 🖤🖤🖤 for sharing tasks with us the way you explain is really amazing
Thank you! 😃
Great Lesson☝🏻
lilie, nice to see u again, u really gave great ideas with good smile😊
Thank you! 😊
Thank u so much 🙏🏻🙏🏻I always watch your videos it’s really helpful for me
Really glad to hear that😊
I dare say that lilie's teaching is the most professional.
감사합니다😊
Awesome, Thank you.
i have to admit that learning many things from u 🖤
Appreciate that😊
Her videos are really very very informative and beneficial ❤
Glad you like them!
Idk i just came here just to hear your voice omg i cant its so soothing😊
Glad that my voice can calm you down.😊
This is Amazin!!!!
You are too good. Make videos on how to generate ideas and elaborate them
I have one on that topic: ua-cam.com/video/FAUbhn5N0SI/v-deo.html
Nicely explained
Your video is really great help for me thank you for sharing ur knowledge with us also plz make videos on reading parts too 🙏🏼
Many viewers have requested a reading video, I'll definitely make one. The next video will be a table video though.😊
Now you look just magnificent and big thanks for teaching us ❤️
My pleasure 😊
I love your teaching Ms. lilie
I'm so glad!😊
Thank you so much for your kindness. Words are jst not enough to say how great you are. I jst got overall 7.5 🎉. May God bless you Lillie.. i have a name for you as well " THE PUZZLE SOLVER " 💯
I'm so happy today , you helped me to step up on my goal . Thank you Angel. 🙏🏻
Thank u so much for sharing this amazing news here. Congratulations and wish you a bright future ahead!♥
Thank you. Hope I ll find a way to pay back one day. Have a good future ahead too ❤
i love it teaching way
writing task.
thank U🙂
Im gonna take IELTS exam test in the next two days. Thank u so muchhh!!
Best of luck and don't forget to come back and share your test result here.✊
I've already scored a 6 in writing(AC). from now on, if I implement your writing approaches while practising every question for 1.5 months on a daily basis, will it be enough to obtain a 7?
Always well explain ❤
😊Thank you
Thank you
You the best Lillie darling ❤
But in Road to IELTS, it is being taught that unnecessary examples should be left out. How can we distinguish between needed and not needed information?
❤❤ thanks dear
Thank you so much... This was really helpful ✌️💃
So glad!😊
Very very effect I need you as a techer you are brilliant
thanks for the kind words!☺
Love from Nepal mam ❤
Very nice
I understood the idea one day and forget everything the next day. 😢 I have exam in 2 days , what to do
Hi.... I got an overall score of 8 with L-8.5, R-8.5, W- 6.5 and S-7.5 I want to say thank you 😊
Congratulations and thank you so much for sharing your scores here.😊
This is kinda crazy how I got L-9 R-8.5 W-7 and S-8 and still got the same band as you. No offense but it’s a bit crazy that 3 out of 4 sections were higher lol.
Can you make a video about complex sentences
❤
love from Nepal ✌️
From the earlier videos, I was thinking it is a robotic voice, NO it is human's one :D
Haha, I surprised you.😊
😂😂😂
Love from UZB
听我说，谢谢你，因为有你。。。
Wonderful...pls make more videos on task 2
Will definitely do that but the next one will be about task 1.
Hi,I just want to know if a candidate gives his opinion, a discuss both views essay, will it be penalised or get a lower band. Please confirm.
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We definitely need to give our opinion in a discuss-both-views essay.
As you are an expert in IELTS, do you know essays templates? I just was wondering if I can get a band 6 using a good template. And 6 is all what I need, so do you think I can?
I believe you can get a 6 by using a template but I don't have one, sorry.
@@LilieIELTS thank you, you have lots of beneficial videos
@@SalamaAhmed-pj3jvHello dear, can you share it?
Mam, from where you got the detailed writing band descriptor, could you please provide us ?
It's a pdf they attached in my test result.
@@LilieIELTS I'm very lucky that i got response, can you please somehow provide me that pdf because i really want to read the whole pdf
May I know what kind of reading materials that you use to acquire these knowledge? I tried to read news and magazine but can't remember what I have read and I couldn't think of anything when I need to write an essay. 😅please help
I consumed news too but instead of reading it, I listened to it. I used to listen to news podcasts EVERY DAY, not just once. I recommend WSJ tech news briefing.
@@LilieIELTS thank you for the recommendation and quick reply.
Hello! Lilie..
Can u make videos on other modules (LRS) of ielts because u really have a great knowledge about ielts writing, so i hope😢 you can make exceptional videos on other modules to teach others.
I've already planed out the next few videos. I'll try other modules when I run out of writing ideas.😊
Ys its true, it requires more free time. 😬
Thanks so much for this lesson.
Please could you ab example for ( table ).
I wish you luck.
In fact, I've meant. Could you make an example about table graph.
Thanks.
Yes, I could but you probably need to wait a while because I've already planned out the next two videos. You can watch this table video if you haven't already: ua-cam.com/video/95kMPpp3muY/v-deo.html
You can also read table essays on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/category/writing-task-1/table/
I've already watched.
However I'll wait for that one.
hey lilie, ı want to thank you. just thanks to your techniques ı took 6.5 in writing part. thnx a lot
That's great, congratulations! And wish you a bright future ahead!😊
Wow first to comment ❤
Thanks for your support!😊
Please, Make more videos for agree or disagree type task 2
You probably need to wait a while.😊
what is rehabilitation??
dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/rehabilitation
please provide more videos about task 2
Sure thing!😊
Hi Lille! I have my exam in oct7 and I feel like I’m lacking a lot in writing and reading. Please help
I'll be holding a 3-day task 2 challenge soon. Hope to see you there!
@@LilieIELTS I hope it will be before oct 7
Mam, I am big fan of yours..ever since I have started watching your videos, I have applied all of the tips and strategies you have suggested... needless to say that my writing has improved a lot...but mam I find one particular type of writing task 2 question really hard to answer...which is " To what extent do you agree or disagree" ..could you pls make at least one more video regarding this matter.I have searched this question type on your website too.....my xm is on 16 th May...I will be eagerly waiting for your response...thanks a million in advance
Thanks for the kind words, Azmire! What problems exactly do you have with agree-or-disagree essays?
Mam , I have heard that We should not fully agree or disagree with the statement if they ask in the question "To what extent do you agree or disagree?" ..but I find this puzzling..pls help me how to address this type of question and specifically how to and what to write in the introduction?
And If I write " I agree / disagree to some extent to the statement" will it be correct? If yes then how I can develop body paragraphs keeping that in mind...
@@azmiresultana5825 To answer "to what extent", you just need to use words like "completely" or "totally", like "I completely agree with this statement".
@@LilieIELTS thank you so much
what was your overall Lilie?
8
@@LilieIELTS congrats!!🌸
I really enjoy your face cam video , actually I see first time your face cam video.
Will show my face more often.😊
I doubt about if we should say at Starbucks or in Starbucks. are you sure about that?
Hi, I'm pretty sure that it should be "at Starbucks".
I scored 7 mam ❤ Thankyou
You scored a 7 on the writing test? What about the other sections?
My instructor was a lazy; he barely taught us two days of speaking courses and two days of writing classes. He didn't show up to revise after arranging an IELTS date. I was able to smoothly pass the IELTS test thanks to you on UA-cam. Thank you so much, ma'am.
writing 7
Speaking 6
Reading 6.5
Listening 7.5
why men and women are deciding to have children later on in their life, what are the main reason for this .and then explain how this can impacts those families and society.
I had exam, today's IELTS academic exam topic. Task 2
thanks for sharing
You are magnificent.
I already watched your all writing task but I straggle
Why?
@@LilieIELTS lack of confidence during my writing, time is main factor. and your explain is the best as compared to others
I have my ielts exam today.. I Hope it goes well😣
Mine too.. From where you're giving your Exam?
@@dikshyaparajuli7129 Birtamode and you?
Best of luck and don't forget to come back and share your test result here.✊
@@LilieIELTS i got band 6.Only 3 days of watching your videos ..All thanks to you🤗
LILLE what is your writing score?
7
Could you please make one more video on examples ma'am... it's really helpful
What challenges do you encounter when writing examples?
I usually write examples about survey or articles which are not accurate at all ... I kind of feel lack of ideas
@@Preeti-sr4yj listending to news podcasts may help.
@@LilieIELTS thanks for suggestion ma'am ... I will listen podcast. 🥰
Wow sis..... You r so beautiful ❤❤❤
Beautiful mam. I love you
So nice💜😊
U r very beautiful 💕
are u in a relationship btw??
I found you very cute ☺️
Oh thank you
@@LilieIELTS I have my IELTS exam on next Friday. Please pray for me ☺️
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