how to write a *detailed* example in ielts writing task 2

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  • @quanphumau198
    @quanphumau198 Рік тому +24

    Just got a band 6.5 in writing. Shout out to LILIE whose videos on task 1 writing helped me a lot 🤩🤩

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +5

      Wooow, congratulations and thank you so much for sharing your score here! Wish you a bright future ahead!

  • @윈드포스원
    @윈드포스원 11 місяців тому +4

    I dare say that lilie's teaching is the most professional.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  11 місяців тому +2

      감사합니다😊

  • @sanjeevk.c.7200
    @sanjeevk.c.7200 Рік тому +18

    I got 6.5 band in writting , (overall 7) just watching all your playlist of writting , one day before exam
    Thank you very much❤
    Lots of love from Nepal🇳🇵

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +4

      One day before the exam, that's impressive! Thank you so much for sharing your experience here and wish u a bright future ahead!

    • @MohammedAbbasPLUS
      @MohammedAbbasPLUS 6 місяців тому

      😢 thats my dream

  • @leerapreethi1493
    @leerapreethi1493 Рік тому +15

    I love your teaching Lilie I scored 7 in writing.god bless your wonderful work of sharing knowledge❤

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +3

      Woow, that's amazing and congratulations! What are your scores on the other sections?

    • @leerapreethi1493
      @leerapreethi1493 Рік тому +2

      L8, R7,W7,S7

  • @noilamahmatkulova5465
    @noilamahmatkulova5465 Рік тому +9

    I hated writing section seemed always daunting to me .started watching your video lessons since last year and now writing is one of my favorite especially task 1 .thank you for effort wish u prosperous

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +2

      Glad that my videos have added value to you.😊

    • @patelheet4380
      @patelheet4380 Рік тому +1

      Yes, u have significant numbers of fans.. 😊

  • @kieuminh3106
    @kieuminh3106 Рік тому +3

    Great videos tbh, you’re the best Lilie. I’m so nervous because my ielts exam will be next month and my writing skill is terrible. Luckily, i found your channel in the suggestion videos and got amazed by how your strategies helped me to score impressive points in other skills 🎉

  • @hilolajabborova6793
    @hilolajabborova6793 8 місяців тому +1

    Your videos are super helpful! ❤thank you for superb content!

  • @ManuelD-6ws
    @ManuelD-6ws Рік тому +3

    It's been a while ,I love your simplitude in writing

  • @gentlewmaddie
    @gentlewmaddie Рік тому +2

    i love your videos lilie, it helped me alot in writing and many other skills!

  • @Elizabeth.Opoku_17
    @Elizabeth.Opoku_17 Рік тому +7

    Hi.... I got an overall score of 8 with L-8.5, R-8.5, W- 6.5 and S-7.5 I want to say thank you 😊

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Congratulations and thank you so much for sharing your scores here.😊

    • @alphaassyl3349
      @alphaassyl3349 4 місяці тому

      This is kinda crazy how I got L-9 R-8.5 W-7 and S-8 and still got the same band as you. No offense but it’s a bit crazy that 3 out of 4 sections were higher lol.

  • @starleythomas4849
    @starleythomas4849 Рік тому +5

    Your video is really great help for me thank you for sharing ur knowledge with us also plz make videos on reading parts too 🙏🏼

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +2

      Many viewers have requested a reading video, I'll definitely make one. The next video will be a table video though.😊

  • @yeshapatel4946
    @yeshapatel4946 Рік тому +2

    You are too good. Make videos on how to generate ideas and elaborate them

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      I have one on that topic: ua-cam.com/video/FAUbhn5N0SI/v-deo.html

  • @faranmalhotra5112
    @faranmalhotra5112 Рік тому

    You are one of the best youtuber for ielts prep....keep it up

  • @faizaa4859
    @faizaa4859 Рік тому +1

    Tysm for the video Lilie !❤

  • @lolka160
    @lolka160 7 днів тому

    Hello, where I can get band "list description" which is shown at 4:47. Could you please share it with us?

  • @dushyantnagan2477
    @dushyantnagan2477 Рік тому +2

    Thank you so much for your kindness. Words are jst not enough to say how great you are. I jst got overall 7.5 🎉. May God bless you Lillie.. i have a name for you as well " THE PUZZLE SOLVER " 💯
    I'm so happy today , you helped me to step up on my goal . Thank you Angel. 🙏🏻

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Thank u so much for sharing this amazing news here. Congratulations and wish you a bright future ahead!♥

    • @dushyantnagan2477
      @dushyantnagan2477 Рік тому

      Thank you. Hope I ll find a way to pay back one day. Have a good future ahead too ❤

  • @yoursiren
    @yoursiren Рік тому +1

    Im gonna take IELTS exam test in the next two days. Thank u so muchhh!!

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Best of luck and don't forget to come back and share your test result here.✊

  • @noahguinto6960
    @noahguinto6960 Рік тому

    I love your teaching Ms. lilie

  • @ahsanahmed5724
    @ahsanahmed5724 11 місяців тому

    Thank you teacher 🖤🖤🖤 for sharing tasks with us the way you explain is really amazing

  • @patelheet4380
    @patelheet4380 Рік тому

    lilie, nice to see u again, u really gave great ideas with good smile😊

  • @rakibhasan4328
    @rakibhasan4328 Рік тому +1

    i have to admit that learning many things from u 🖤

  • @saifdosa9020
    @saifdosa9020 6 місяців тому

    Her videos are really very very informative and beneficial ❤

  • @Easylearning828
    @Easylearning828 10 днів тому

    Thanks dear🥀❤️

  • @Parveen.kaur.
    @Parveen.kaur. Рік тому

    Thank u so much 🙏🏻🙏🏻I always watch your videos it’s really helpful for me

  • @Jamessbx
    @Jamessbx Рік тому

    Idk i just came here just to hear your voice omg i cant its so soothing😊

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Glad that my voice can calm you down.😊

  • @BRIJESHPATEL-wq6gk
    @BRIJESHPATEL-wq6gk Рік тому

    Nicely explained

  • @mohammedfathihassabo8268
    @mohammedfathihassabo8268 Рік тому +2

    Thanks so much for this lesson.
    Please could you ab example for ( table ).
    I wish you luck.

    • @mohammedfathihassabo8268
      @mohammedfathihassabo8268 Рік тому

      In fact, I've meant. Could you make an example about table graph.
      Thanks.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Yes, I could but you probably need to wait a while because I've already planned out the next two videos. You can watch this table video if you haven't already: ua-cam.com/video/95kMPpp3muY/v-deo.html
      You can also read table essays on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/category/writing-task-1/table/

    • @mohammedfathihassabo8268
      @mohammedfathihassabo8268 Рік тому

      I've already watched.
      However I'll wait for that one.

  • @IpVp4Fun_
    @IpVp4Fun_ Рік тому

    Awesome, Thank you.

  • @haroon__007
    @haroon__007 Рік тому

    Great Lesson☝🏻

  • @abishekneupane6215
    @abishekneupane6215 Рік тому

    Now you look just magnificent and big thanks for teaching us ❤️

  • @Lynn-uh4ul
    @Lynn-uh4ul Рік тому +1

    But in Road to IELTS, it is being taught that unnecessary examples should be left out. How can we distinguish between needed and not needed information?

  • @bthiban
    @bthiban Рік тому +4

    From the earlier videos, I was thinking it is a robotic voice, NO it is human's one :D

  • @JoanVegas_
    @JoanVegas_ Рік тому

    Thank you so much... This was really helpful ✌️💃

  • @jatin4058
    @jatin4058 Рік тому

    Wonderful...pls make more videos on task 2

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Will definitely do that but the next one will be about task 1.

  • @kinleyphurba5075
    @kinleyphurba5075 Рік тому

    Always well explain ❤

  • @A9_0076
    @A9_0076 Рік тому

    Very very effect I need you as a techer you are brilliant

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      thanks for the kind words!☺

  • @HQhander
    @HQhander 9 місяців тому

    Very nice

  • @hemantshahi1100
    @hemantshahi1100 6 місяців тому

    i love it teaching way
    writing task.

  • @bill-kissabdul-razaq621
    @bill-kissabdul-razaq621 Рік тому +1

    You the best Lillie darling ❤

  • @eminem4076
    @eminem4076 Рік тому +1

    Love from UZB

  • @mia66
    @mia66 Рік тому

    This is Amazin!!!!

  • @Panor-cu3iq
    @Panor-cu3iq Рік тому

    Can you make a video about complex sentences

  • @doitandmakemoney7039
    @doitandmakemoney7039 Рік тому

    ❤❤ thanks dear

  • @SalamaAhmed-pj3jv
    @SalamaAhmed-pj3jv Рік тому +1

    As you are an expert in IELTS, do you know essays templates? I just was wondering if I can get a band 6 using a good template. And 6 is all what I need, so do you think I can?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      I believe you can get a 6 by using a template but I don't have one, sorry.

    • @SalamaAhmed-pj3jv
      @SalamaAhmed-pj3jv Рік тому

      @@LilieIELTS thank you, you have lots of beneficial videos

    • @nsb961
      @nsb961 Рік тому

      ​@@SalamaAhmed-pj3jvHello dear, can you share it?

  • @amansandhu1934
    @amansandhu1934 Рік тому

    Thank you

  • @AnushkaSharma-g6v
    @AnushkaSharma-g6v Рік тому

    please provide more videos about task 2

  • @theweeknd8087
    @theweeknd8087 Рік тому

    hey lilie, ı want to thank you. just thanks to your techniques ı took 6.5 in writing part. thnx a lot

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      That's great, congratulations! And wish you a bright future ahead!😊

  • @imalomgirhussan
    @imalomgirhussan Рік тому

    I've already scored a 6 in writing(AC). from now on, if I implement your writing approaches while practising every question for 1.5 months on a daily basis, will it be enough to obtain a 7?

  • @gorkhalegendsyt8714
    @gorkhalegendsyt8714 Рік тому

    love from Nepal ✌️

  • @biplopgaming1869
    @biplopgaming1869 Рік тому

    Love from Nepal mam ❤

  • @Fatima3f
    @Fatima3f Рік тому

    I understood the idea one day and forget everything the next day. 😢 I have exam in 2 days , what to do

  • @patelheet4380
    @patelheet4380 Рік тому

    Hello! Lilie..
    Can u make videos on other modules (LRS) of ielts because u really have a great knowledge about ielts writing, so i hope😢 you can make exceptional videos on other modules to teach others.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +3

      I've already planed out the next few videos. I'll try other modules when I run out of writing ideas.😊

    • @patelheet4380
      @patelheet4380 Рік тому +1

      Ys its true, it requires more free time. 😬

  • @yeshapatel4946
    @yeshapatel4946 Рік тому

    Please, Make more videos for agree or disagree type task 2

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      You probably need to wait a while.😊

  • @stevecharles9059
    @stevecharles9059 Рік тому

    听我说,谢谢你,因为有你。。。

  • @azmiresultana5825
    @azmiresultana5825 Рік тому

    Mam, I am big fan of yours..ever since I have started watching your videos, I have applied all of the tips and strategies you have suggested... needless to say that my writing has improved a lot...but mam I find one particular type of writing task 2 question really hard to answer...which is " To what extent do you agree or disagree" ..could you pls make at least one more video regarding this matter.I have searched this question type on your website too.....my xm is on 16 th May...I will be eagerly waiting for your response...thanks a million in advance

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Thanks for the kind words, Azmire! What problems exactly do you have with agree-or-disagree essays?

    • @azmiresultana5825
      @azmiresultana5825 Рік тому

      Mam , I have heard that We should not fully agree or disagree with the statement if they ask in the question "To what extent do you agree or disagree?" ..but I find this puzzling..pls help me how to address this type of question and specifically how to and what to write in the introduction?

    • @azmiresultana5825
      @azmiresultana5825 Рік тому

      And If I write " I agree / disagree to some extent to the statement" will it be correct? If yes then how I can develop body paragraphs keeping that in mind...

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      @@azmiresultana5825 To answer "to what extent", you just need to use words like "completely" or "totally", like "I completely agree with this statement".

    • @azmiresultana5825
      @azmiresultana5825 Рік тому

      @@LilieIELTS thank you so much

  • @momotaro0410
    @momotaro0410 Рік тому

    May I know what kind of reading materials that you use to acquire these knowledge? I tried to read news and magazine but can't remember what I have read and I couldn't think of anything when I need to write an essay. 😅please help

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      I consumed news too but instead of reading it, I listened to it. I used to listen to news podcasts EVERY DAY, not just once. I recommend WSJ tech news briefing.

    • @momotaro0410
      @momotaro0410 Рік тому

      @@LilieIELTS thank you for the recommendation and quick reply.

  • @shiranieperera4704
    @shiranieperera4704 Рік тому

    Hi,I just want to know if a candidate gives his opinion, a discuss both views essay, will it be penalised or get a lower band. Please confirm.
    .

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      We definitely need to give our opinion in a discuss-both-views essay.

  • @sajanramgarhia7111
    @sajanramgarhia7111 Рік тому

    Mam, from where you got the detailed writing band descriptor, could you please provide us ?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      It's a pdf they attached in my test result.

    • @sajanramgarhia7111
      @sajanramgarhia7111 Рік тому +1

      @@LilieIELTS I'm very lucky that i got response, can you please somehow provide me that pdf because i really want to read the whole pdf

  • @Fatima3f
    @Fatima3f Рік тому

    why men and women are deciding to have children later on in their life, what are the main reason for this .and then explain how this can impacts those families and society.
    I had exam, today's IELTS academic exam topic. Task 2

  • @bill-kissabdul-razaq621
    @bill-kissabdul-razaq621 Рік тому +1

    Wow first to comment ❤

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Thanks for your support!😊

  • @darshangurung1892
    @darshangurung1892 Рік тому

    I scored 7 mam ❤ Thankyou

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +2

      You scored a 7 on the writing test? What about the other sections?

    • @darshangurung1892
      @darshangurung1892 Рік тому

      My instructor was a lazy; he barely taught us two days of speaking courses and two days of writing classes. He didn't show up to revise after arranging an IELTS date. I was able to smoothly pass the IELTS test thanks to you on UA-cam. Thank you so much, ma'am.
      writing 7
      Speaking 6
      Reading 6.5
      Listening 7.5

  • @travelvlogz8050
    @travelvlogz8050 Рік тому

    what is rehabilitation??

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/rehabilitation

  • @fidanfazilova3542
    @fidanfazilova3542 Рік тому

    what was your overall Lilie?

  • @Panor-cu3iq
    @Panor-cu3iq Рік тому

    Hi Lille! I have my exam in oct7 and I feel like I’m lacking a lot in writing and reading. Please help

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      I'll be holding a 3-day task 2 challenge soon. Hope to see you there!

    • @Panor-cu3iq
      @Panor-cu3iq Рік тому

      @@LilieIELTS I hope it will be before oct 7

    • @juniorff1829
      @juniorff1829 2 місяці тому

      Result ??​@@Panor-cu3iq

  • @drfrankenstein5414
    @drfrankenstein5414 Рік тому

    I doubt about if we should say at Starbucks or in Starbucks. are you sure about that?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Hi, I'm pretty sure that it should be "at Starbucks".

  • @Preeti-sr4yj
    @Preeti-sr4yj Рік тому

    Could you please make one more video on examples ma'am... it's really helpful

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      What challenges do you encounter when writing examples?

    • @Preeti-sr4yj
      @Preeti-sr4yj Рік тому

      I usually write examples about survey or articles which are not accurate at all ... I kind of feel lack of ideas

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      @@Preeti-sr4yj listending to news podcasts may help.

    • @Preeti-sr4yj
      @Preeti-sr4yj Рік тому

      @@LilieIELTS thanks for suggestion ma'am ... I will listen podcast. 🥰

  • @Habib-pn4qk
    @Habib-pn4qk Рік тому

    I already watched your all writing task but I straggle

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Why?

    • @Habib-pn4qk
      @Habib-pn4qk Рік тому

      @@LilieIELTS lack of confidence during my writing, time is main factor. and your explain is the best as compared to others

  • @nabinadhakal2003
    @nabinadhakal2003 Рік тому

    I have my ielts exam today.. I Hope it goes well😣

    • @dikshyaparajuli7129
      @dikshyaparajuli7129 Рік тому

      Mine too.. From where you're giving your Exam?

    • @nabinadhakal2003
      @nabinadhakal2003 Рік тому

      @@dikshyaparajuli7129 Birtamode and you?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Best of luck and don't forget to come back and share your test result here.✊

    • @nabinadhakal2003
      @nabinadhakal2003 Рік тому

      @@LilieIELTS i got band 6.Only 3 days of watching your videos ..All thanks to you🤗

  • @noilamahmatkulova5465
    @noilamahmatkulova5465 Рік тому

  • @RominaMayeli
    @RominaMayeli 3 місяці тому

    👏👏👏👏👏👏❤❤❤❤❤❤

  • @NazmushSakibAuntoo
    @NazmushSakibAuntoo Рік тому

    LILLE what is your writing score?

  • @virajpanchal
    @virajpanchal Рік тому

    I really enjoy your face cam video , actually I see first time your face cam video.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому +1

      Will show my face more often.😊

  • @farhanayasmine7764
    @farhanayasmine7764 Рік тому

    Wow sis..... You r so beautiful ❤❤❤
    Beautiful mam. I love you

  • @midoahmed2725
    @midoahmed2725 Рік тому

    You are magnificent.

  • @sekhonjatt324
    @sekhonjatt324 Рік тому

    U r very beautiful 💕

  • @pratikkorat790
    @pratikkorat790 Рік тому

    I found you very cute ☺️

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Рік тому

      Oh thank you

    • @pratikkorat790
      @pratikkorat790 Рік тому

      @@LilieIELTS I have my IELTS exam on next Friday. Please pray for me ☺️

  • @BigBros123
    @BigBros123 Рік тому

    are u in a relationship btw??

  • @kylam9262
    @kylam9262 7 місяців тому