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  • Опубліковано 5 кві 2023
  • “I’m not the monster you’ve pegged me for, Burch. I’m the monster you send after that monster.”
    Written toward the topic: "Small Modular Reactors"
    Video: • Nuclear Power: Small M...
    As always, thanks to Isaac Arthur and the SFIA team for another great topic!
    Also, check out these related stories if you'd like to explore these characters and themes further:
    The Misfits: • The Misfits | Sci-fi S...
    The First Man: • The First Man | Sci-fi...
    Garbage Rock: • Garbage Rock | Sci-fi ...
    If you prefer to read rather than listen or would like to read along, full text of this and all my Sci-Fi Weeklies are available though my Substack: perowe.substack.com
    perowe.substack.com/p/wizard-...
    Now on Twitter: / perowe4
    Support (greatly appreciated): www.rowelit.com/support
    Sci-Fi Collections: www.rowelit.com/collections-s...
    More on this story: www.rowelit.com/wizard-of-athos
    More on this project: www.rowelit.com/sci-fi-weeklies
    For the serious writers out there: Mechanics of Fiction Writing Series
    / @mechanicsoffiction
    About Rowe Writes: • Introducing: Rowe Writ...
    About this project: I am writing a weekly sci-fi story to the theme of Isaac Arthur’s SFIA videos. It’s a crazy challenging timeframe to create a good short story in, and to do so publicly is even more daunting. I’m just hoping some good stories come out of this, I have fun writing them, and most importantly, the audience enjoys!
    Thanks for stopping by!
    (Neither this channel nor this video are affiliated with or endorsed by Isaac Arthur or SFIA; the author’s just a big fan)

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  • @RoweLit
    @RoweLit  Рік тому +9

    This story is Episode 3 in "The Misfits" series. If you are enjoying, the entire series can be accessed here: ua-cam.com/play/PLWl-Jc_I2wPAsngY7MCID9sS_98Y2siT5.html

  • @escapefelicity2913
    @escapefelicity2913 Рік тому +14

    P.E. Rowe is three-time winner of the coveted First Annual Marvin R. Schpitzenschparken Award for Excellence in Astro-physical Imagineering.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +7

      Honored to be so awarded and humbly accept on the condition that the prize for such a prestigious accolade is a full night's sleep 😄

    • @Inamon8
      @Inamon8 Рік тому +5

      Okay, I live in Europe (Portugal but I was born in the Netherlands) so I don't know the award (not that geography has anything to do with it I guess. But still! 😊 P. E. Rowe became a winner when I first stumbled upon Preservation Falls. I told the story in a nutshell at work at the office and blew my teammates' minds! The company I work for is San Francisco-based BTW. Let us spread the word about P. E. Rowe's Kappaverse!

    • @lynngrant1318
      @lynngrant1318 Рік тому +4

      Congratulations!! We’ll done, keep it up!!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +3

      @@lynngrant1318 Already working on the next one!

  • @RoweLit
    @RoweLit  Рік тому +13

    Be sure to stop back again soon for more from this series! There's much more to come 😊

  • @TicTocRobotSnot
    @TicTocRobotSnot Рік тому +11

    I’m digging this crew. The way you read them allows their distinct characters to shine through.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +2

      Thanks, Robot! Glad it came through for you.

    • @snail6queen6hammy
      @snail6queen6hammy Рік тому +1

      I agree. Getting to be like old friends.

  • @warhawk4494
    @warhawk4494 Рік тому +6

    Very cool. Glad your channel pop up in my feed

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +2

      Thanks, War Hawk. Glad you stopped by too!

    • @user-et4fb7yu9e
      @user-et4fb7yu9e 3 місяці тому

      Mark CEN CA All the girls sound the same 😂

    • @user-et4fb7yu9e
      @user-et4fb7yu9e 3 місяці тому

      Mark CEN CA transom dislike him with a passion he said all he needed was a ride then he dragged them into a situation

  • @Patolomy
    @Patolomy Рік тому +19

    You should be more popular. Your writing style is great, not to mention the voiceover. Quality stuff :)

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +2

      Thanks, Patrick! Glad you're enjoying!

  • @dobbinthe
    @dobbinthe Рік тому +8

    Another great story..👍

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +2

      Thanks, Frank. Glad you enjoyed!

  • @bewarethegreyghost
    @bewarethegreyghost Рік тому +5

    Riveting. Good stuff.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +3

      Thanks, grey ghost! 😄

  • @deant6361
    @deant6361 2 місяці тому +1

    This is a great story the Misfits second time even more enjoyable. Thanks for sharing P.E Rowe.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  2 місяці тому +1

      Cheers, Dean!

  • @iancho3823
    @iancho3823 Рік тому +10

    I’m truely shocked you have so few subscribers for such great work. I have become far more invested in the world you’ve built than I expected. Do you have plans to write a full length novel incorporating a version of the world building you’ve done in these short stories?

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +4

      Thanks, ian. Short answer is yes. In fact, I have one in the works right now. As far as subscribers go, we're working on it. Still pretty new here and growing. Really gratifying to hear you're enjoying the stories! That makes the work worthwhile!

    • @iancho3823
      @iancho3823 Рік тому +3

      @@RoweLit I eagerly await it!

  • @MartinGugino
    @MartinGugino 6 місяців тому

    The interrogation by Transom of the guy in the exit is excellent.
    Learned helplessness at its perfection.
    Enjoyable and instructive as fiction.
    You rock.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  6 місяців тому

      Thanks, Martin! Writing Transom is certainly interesting 😂

  • @Inamon8
    @Inamon8 Рік тому +5

    I sometimes forget liking your stories after listening to them because I listen to when I wanna 'tune out' and leave my device on my night stand. I'm liking this one before listening cause I was eagerly waiting for your latest upload. So, I know I've listened to almost -if not all- of your uploads; but I loved the First Man(the hardcore war story) and I think it's an early upload of yours. So, what is your 'Verse gonna be called? My first week within getting to know your expanding Cosmos I thought of Kappaverse. Because that's the story and the 'way' I got into the the Battery. Much like the characters. 😊
    ❤ Loving it! Now on to your new story. Thanx P. E.!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +4

      How about the Transomverse? Since you were already on that wavelength before even listening 🤣So funny you were thinking about The First Man, and who should appear today!
      The next playlist will be the other assorted stories from the Greater Battery, so maybe that's a good starting point, but it's entirely possible the answer to your Kappaverse question will present itself in an upcoming story. Hope you enjoy this one, Holzman! Thanks for lsitening!

  • @flyingfoamtv2169
    @flyingfoamtv2169 Рік тому +5

    cool story

  • @axelhoogland9442
    @axelhoogland9442 Рік тому +1

    Nice story. Like that the 2 groups met, misfits and transom.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +2

      Thanks, axel! I was excited about bringing a few different characters together too. Glad you enjoyed!

  • @jasonstuddy2840
    @jasonstuddy2840 Рік тому +2

    You've gained almost 400 new subs in a week! Let's GOOO! I've been pushing your channel on my eve echo's and elite dangerous discords. Keep up the good work! I love the Misfits series

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +2

      Thank you, Jason! That's so cool! I really appreciate the help a ton. More Misfits is coming up soon! Maybe even a cameo or two when it's least expected 🤔
      It's so cool to hear other people are enjoying their adventures in the same way I am!

  • @escapefelicity2913
    @escapefelicity2913 Рік тому +3

    cool story & nice pic

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +2

      Thanks Felicity!

  • @veganmade
    @veganmade Рік тому +5

    👏👏👏 Bravo...want more of Birch!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +2

      Me too, vg! Not sure when the next Misfits episode is coming, but it won't be that far off 😃

    • @veganmade
      @veganmade Рік тому +2

      @P.E. Rowe that is great news, love the Misfits! And have listened to the entire catalog now on UA-cam, twice through on most and so impressed👏

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +2

      @@veganmade whoa! That's so cool to hear. I guess there's only one thing for me to do--keep writing more! 😁

    • @veganmade
      @veganmade Рік тому +2

      @P.E. Rowe please do! Anyway I could donate to the cause? Feel awful enjoying your impressively hard work nightly for free😑

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +2

      @@veganmade I would be grateful, vg. My support page is linked in the description of each video with multiple options; however, feeling awful about not donating is not one of the options! It's nice when people do support, but I publish the stories here to be enjoyed, so I definitely don't want people to feel pressured. Thanks so much for the support! 😀

  • @snail6queen6hammy
    @snail6queen6hammy Рік тому +3

    I love these. It should all end up being a tv series. So well written that I’m actually there. I listen to each one twice in case I missed something. And ….. cussing up a storm is not something I’ve heard before. 🤣🤣❤️loving all your stories. Thank you.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      Thanks, Peg! Glad you're enjoying them! I am definitely having a blast writing them, so I guess that's a good barometer 😃 Much more to come!

    • @snail6queen6hammy
      @snail6queen6hammy Рік тому +2

      @@RoweLit that’s great. I love how you don’t faff around with extra unnecessary words. It’s all beautifully done. I can see the characters in my mind. I’m 72 now and read a lot of books. Now that I’m done with Vonnegut these are excellent.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      @@snail6queen6hammy I could take credit for that, I suppose, but it would be just as true to say I don't have much time for extra words on a weekly schedule 😂

  • @solosailorsv8065
    @solosailorsv8065 11 місяців тому +1

    Awesome! The Misfits Series !
    The nautical names, Transom, Ship, Keel, Capt Birch(bark canoe?) are well appreciated! LoL

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  11 місяців тому

      😃They are a bunch of space pirates in a way! Glad you're enjoying, Sailor!

  • @benjaminhayward5921
    @benjaminhayward5921 Рік тому +2

    Dude, this is good sh*t! Subbed!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      Thanks, Benjamin! Glad you liked it and welcome!

  • @IndicaBeast
    @IndicaBeast 3 місяці тому

    Started listening cause I recognized the ship from the thumbnail. Now I have a whole series to go back and listen to

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  3 місяці тому

      Thanks, Beast 😃🙏 Whoa! The Yankee-Chaos is getting out there 🚀

    • @IndicaBeast
      @IndicaBeast 2 місяці тому

      Made it back and am not disappointed. Pic fits the motif. Spaceship Warlock ❤

  • @jeremydyar7566
    @jeremydyar7566 Рік тому +3

    Well done

  • @stevesyncox9893
    @stevesyncox9893 9 місяців тому

    Thanks P.E., your narration does the story such justice. Peace.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  9 місяців тому

      Thank you, Steve! Been working hard on narration this year. Glad to hear it's working for you on this one!

  • @karlgru3n654
    @karlgru3n654 7 місяців тому

    I am loving the characters, story and delivery. Binging... ❤

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  7 місяців тому

      Thanks, Karl! Glad to hear you're enjoying them! 😃🙏

  • @davidrains3918
    @davidrains3918 14 днів тому

    I’m enjoying every book in this series, thanks!

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  10 днів тому

      Cheers, David 😃

  • @deant6361
    @deant6361 11 місяців тому

    Excellent story really getting into these crew members. The misfits are really my favourites.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  11 місяців тому

      Thanks, dean! They're fun to write for sure 😃

    • @deant6361
      @deant6361 11 місяців тому

      @@RoweLit you have a wonderful talent I wish I could do something like that. I have imagination I think but could never put it down like you do. Thanks

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  11 місяців тому

      @@deant6361 Thanks, Dean! 🙏I've spent many years working on the skills of fiction writing. Still working every day. It's gratifying to hear that the work is translating to other people's enjoyment 😃The best feeling.

  • @darnellarford2439
    @darnellarford2439 10 місяців тому

    Loving your channel. Great writing.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  10 місяців тому

      Thanks, Darnell! So glad to hear it.

  • @alfredsutton4412
    @alfredsutton4412 11 місяців тому +1

    Great stories, well read.
    Thank you.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  11 місяців тому

      Cheers, Alfred!

  • @leonbeausoleil2204
    @leonbeausoleil2204 Рік тому +1

    Good story and well told

  • @EZurg
    @EZurg Рік тому +1

    Awesome! Thanks!

  • @KeithCarmichaelInFL
    @KeithCarmichaelInFL 9 місяців тому

    Really enjoying this storyline.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  9 місяців тому

      🙏 😃

  • @exilefaxen4860
    @exilefaxen4860 8 місяців тому

    Dang how is it possible that you have so few viewer and subscriber. Your content is amazing.
    Greetings from germany.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  8 місяців тому

      Thanks, Exile! I'm working on that each week and have plans to keep growing, the most important of which is more stories! Greetings back from the US!

  • @dtl2081
    @dtl2081 2 місяці тому

    Excellent

  • @alantaylor353
    @alantaylor353 10 місяців тому

    THANK YOU SO MUCH.!! 👍 👍 👍

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  10 місяців тому

      Cheers, Alan! 😃🙏😃

  • @Pettstarable
    @Pettstarable Рік тому +1

    Wow, this might be the best one yet! I'm loving how all these characters from your other stories are showing up and yet it doesnt feel cheap or forced at all. It all fits so naturally. I'm currently going through the 'West battery' playlist. Would you say that's the ideal way of listening?

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +2

      Cheers, Adam! Glad you're enjoying 😃 The playlists are definitely a good way to go through the catalogue, though I don't think there's a right or wrong way. They are in chronological order (or I do my very best to keep them that way anyway). So it helps to keep from getting too lost in the galaxy, which is also not such a bad thing 😂

    • @Pettstarable
      @Pettstarable Рік тому +1

      @@RoweLit yeah I get the feeling you could pretty much listen to any story almost at random and come away happy with what you have heard. Ther first story I listened to was Garbage Rock so and that's the first time I heard of Clem.
      Also bit of a change of subject but do you primarily write Sci-fi? Or do you do other genres also? You seem to have good knowledge of the science behind in your stories. I mainly read fantasy books, Lord of the rings, Wheel of time, the cosmere etc. I'm just wondering if you'd ever venture that way. Or if you have done anything like that before?
      Anyway thanks for the reply and keep up the good work. I'm genuinely amazed that you dont have more subscribers. I believe your stores are some of the best I've listened to.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +2

      @@Pettstarable Thanks, Adam. I started writing literary fiction, wrote a little sci-fi, and then went and studied fiction writing which more or less required that I write literary fiction exclusively for a while. I got back into sci-fi a few years ago and have been writing it almost exclusively since. I've never gotten much into fantasy, though I do love mythology. I'll be working to grow one story at a time, and if they're good, I have faith that the channel will grow. One thing being a writer teaches you is patience, whether you want to learn it or not 😂

  • @mc9950
    @mc9950 Рік тому +1

    I liked

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +1

      I like that your liked, MC! 😄

  • @barrydysert2974
    @barrydysert2974 4 місяці тому

    Intuition tells me that we haven't seen the last of the Transom !:-)

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  4 місяці тому +1

      He's not going away easily 😃

  • @tarajoyce3598
    @tarajoyce3598 Рік тому +1

    👏

  • @godsfilmmaker8863
    @godsfilmmaker8863 10 місяців тому

    That was a really good one! New listener/subscriber, loving your content!
    Is there a recommended listening order? So far I’ve heard all of Misfit Origins and I’m working through the Misfits

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  10 місяців тому

      Thanks, GF! Glad to hear it! The playlists are always a good bet, as they're in a chronological and/or thematic order. The West Battery War playlist surrounds the Misfits era, while the Greater Battery playlist offers a much wider view.

  • @MartinGugino
    @MartinGugino Місяць тому

    @2:10
    There's two
    Vs
    Because there're two types of operators.
    All day long.

    • @MartinGugino
      @MartinGugino Місяць тому

      Pronounced they're(??)

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Місяць тому

      Idiolect of the narrator, Martin. All day long 😀

  • @seeingthepattern
    @seeingthepattern 10 місяців тому +1

    Another great story - is there a correct order in which to read the ones with common characters?

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  10 місяців тому

      Thanks, G! The Misfits playlist linked in the pinned comment has the whole series arranged in chronological order. The "Misfits Origins" playlist has many of the common characters, and those stories take place before the series. Glad you're enjoying!

    • @seeingthepattern
      @seeingthepattern 10 місяців тому

      @@RoweLit Thjank you

  • @MartinGugino
    @MartinGugino 6 місяців тому

    Probably?
    Yea, probably.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  6 місяців тому

      😂 Yup. Probably.

  • @klappstock943
    @klappstock943 7 місяців тому

    For the Algorithm the story and the voice 🎉

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  7 місяців тому

      Cheers, Klapp! I feel like that's a pretty great battle cry!

  • @MartinGugino
    @MartinGugino 6 місяців тому

    A small black hole that you can pick up and move is not happening. Most other unlikely objects or events are well prepared for.
    I expect you know that. It could have been an anti matter battery.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  6 місяців тому +1

      With the trickster Clem Aballi, it could have been anything in that box 🤔😃

    • @MartinGugino
      @MartinGugino 6 місяців тому

      There's 2 is more properly although less commonly there're 2.

  • @user-et4fb7yu9e
    @user-et4fb7yu9e 4 місяці тому +1

    Mark CEN CA am I missing something is this your full canon if not I need to find them I'm not the sharpest inthe shed i don't own 1 app seriously

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  4 місяці тому

      Hi, Mark. In addition to the stories here on UA-cam, which is all my audiobooks so far, I also have 3 novels published that are not in audiobook. You can find all those through my bookstore: www.amazon.com/author/p.e.rowe
      Is that what you were asking?

    • @user-et4fb7yu9e
      @user-et4fb7yu9e 4 місяці тому +1

      @@RoweLit Mark CEN CA thanks PE I live on a fixed income but I will check them out 😃

    • @user-et4fb7yu9e
      @user-et4fb7yu9e 2 місяці тому

      Mark CEN CA here I go back to it 😮 to can't believe that I was so taken by transom he is a big POS

  • @Bbergster
    @Bbergster Рік тому +2

    Are these your writings?

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  Рік тому +2

      They are indeed, Brandon. Original works, weekly.

  • @user-et4fb7yu9e
    @user-et4fb7yu9e 5 місяців тому

    Not backing transom aint right lleta this leta that birch let him hang 😮

  • @user-et4fb7yu9e
    @user-et4fb7yu9e 5 місяців тому

    Mark cc here. Again

  • @MartinGugino
    @MartinGugino 9 місяців тому

    There's two
    Vs
    There're two
    ??

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  9 місяців тому

      There're characters who talk and narrate according to grammatical conventions. Then there's characters like Burch, who narrate how they talk, not always perfect.

    • @MartinGugino
      @MartinGugino 9 місяців тому

      Yes, and "there's" is so so common. And in general, agreement with singular/plural is widely ignored and even the object of a proposition being the nominative in compound objects. Nothing to be done.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  9 місяців тому

      I love that there are still some people out there who know what the nominative case even is, Martin.

  • @xelasomar4614
    @xelasomar4614 8 місяців тому

    Is that Woody Harrelson reading?

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  8 місяців тому

      Ha! Xela, I wish I could afford him, but, no, that's me 😃

  • @chrisfarmer1141
    @chrisfarmer1141 9 місяців тому

    I find the narration a little too fast. Also, it's difficult to differentiate the characters as the voice is rather monosyllabic. Still, beggars can't be choosers. So they say.

    • @chrisfarmer1141
      @chrisfarmer1141 9 місяців тому

      I should have said monotonous.

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  9 місяців тому

      Thanks, Chris! Appreciate the feedback. I do my best as a writer to try to be the best narrator I can be and am always working to improve! Hope you enjoyed the story 😃

  • @user-et4fb7yu9e
    @user-et4fb7yu9e 6 місяців тому

    Turned your back on transom weak

    • @RoweLit
      @RoweLit  6 місяців тому

      😃Sosh agrees.

  • @karlgru3n654
    @karlgru3n654 7 місяців тому

    OH NO! Not Transom...

  • @stevenk-brooks6852
    @stevenk-brooks6852 Рік тому

    Too much narrative. Advice for good writing is, "don't tell: show!" The challenge for a good writer who needs to convey a lot of details to the reader is to find a more enticing method other than a data dump. Once in a while Rowe writes well, but mostly subjects us to a massive data-dump, like the beginning of this story.

    • @VickiNikolaidis
      @VickiNikolaidis Рік тому +2

      If you don't like it, move on. The rest of us are here because Rowe's storytelling is entertaining for us.

    • @snail6queen6hammy
      @snail6queen6hammy Рік тому +1

      @@VickiNikolaidisI like the data dumps. Whatever they are. I’m a committed fan of Rowe.

  • @dtl2081
    @dtl2081 2 місяці тому

    Excellent